General
This mapset isn't really that bad for a beginner. However, the last two difficulties are overmapped. Too many streams and jumps. You should also work on using less slider points when making sliders. Good luck
- Tags should be separated with spacebar. You should also remove the source and the artist's name from the tags
- 00:04:705 (2,3) - You should move those sliders so they won't overlap
- 00:10:419 (1,1,1,2,1,2,1) - More overlapping sliders
- 00:21:848 (1) - 00:26:134 (2) - 00:30:419 (1) - Those sliders don't look good. You should use fewer slider points when making sliders
- 00:40:419 (3,1) - Overlapping sliders
- 00:44:705 (1) - This slider also doesn't look good
- 00:51:134 (1,1,1) - 00:53:991 (1,1,1) - Remove new combo
- 01:17:562 (1) - This also doesn't look good
- 01:17:562 (1,1) - Overlapping sliders
- 01:23:634 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This might be too hard for beginners. Those circles shouldn't be stacked
- 00:06:134 (3,4) - 00:14:705 (3) - 00:30:419 (1,2) - Those don't look too good
- 00:51:134 (1,1,1) - 00:53:991 (1,1,1) - Remove new combo
- 00:58:991 (9) - Add new combo
- 01:16:134 (4) - That slider is not very good
- 01:17:562 (1,2,3,4) - You should improve that stack
- This difficulty contains a ton of unnecessary jumps. They really don't fit very well. Jumps should be used only during more intense parts of the song.
- 01:02:562 (1) - This spinner should start a bit earlier
- This difficulty also contains unneeded jumps.
- 00:12:562 (4,1,2,3) - This stack can be improved
- 00:21:848 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - This part is incredibly hard to read
- 00:27:562 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - Same
- 00:38:991 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - Same
This mapset isn't really that bad for a beginner. However, the last two difficulties are overmapped. Too many streams and jumps. You should also work on using less slider points when making sliders. Good luck