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Alex3i2

Joined January 2016

Alex3i2 2017-01-17T06:00:52+00:00

Hello . No kudosu if not helpful
Matsu

00:34:667 (1) - adjust a bit slider for better blanket http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7079745
00:35:354 (2) - a bit more curved , looks nice with 1 too https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7079748
00:39:018 (2,3,4) - maybe same distance . I will do something like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7079762
01:00:544 (2) - strong note on white tick . 2 circles maybe instead slider maybe? 01:01:690 (4) - Here you have a strong note on the beggining of slider.
01:38:560 (1) - blanket is a bit off
01:40:621 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - maybe 3x8 combo and at sliders nc http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7079810 same like last stream
Nice slider at the end ! Looks lovely

-Kiai time not added for gaia hard and solar fox insane

Sidetail

1,268 posts

Joined October 2012

Topic Starter

Sidetail 2017-01-17T09:20:44+00:00

TwillghtSparkle wrote:
Hello . No kudosu if not helpful
Matsu

00:34:667 (1) - adjust a bit slider for better blanket http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7079745 Fixed.
00:35:354 (2) - a bit more curved , looks nice with 1 too https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7079748 Fixed.
00:39:018 (2,3,4) - maybe same distance . I will do something like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7079762 Fixed.
01:00:544 (2) - strong note on white tick . 2 circles maybe instead slider maybe? 01:01:690 (4) - Here you have a strong note on the beggining of slider. Thanks, should be better now
01:38:560 (1) - blanket is a bit off Fixed.
01:40:621 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - maybe 3x8 combo and at sliders nc http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7079810 same like last stream I really want to stay with downbeats with NCs :\
Nice slider at the end ! Looks lovely Thank you!

-Kiai time not added for gaia hard and solar fox insane I believe they didn`t add it on purpose. It is rankable without it

Thank you for modding!!

Reillia

1,162 posts

Joined August 2014

Reillia 2017-01-19T18:13:03+00:00

[ez]
i recommend change nc period to 1 downbeat.

00:10:850 (1,2) - avoid overlap? but nvm it's not big issue
01:00:315 - this background sound is too big for slider tail. how about change note?
01:28:712 (3) - touching hp bar!! plz move down
01:35:125 (1) - ^

[normal]
00:16:346 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - this train pattern is too long. change some 1/1 slider to 2 notes

[hard]
01:50:468 (5) - how about add some curve?

[matsu]
00:21:384 (4) - how about place on (263 345)? 00:20:697 (2,3,4) - for better shape
01:38:560 (1) - how about ctrl + g?

Sidetail

1,268 posts

Joined October 2012

Topic Starter

Sidetail 2017-01-20T08:37:36+00:00

[C u r i] wrote:
[ez]
i recommend change nc period to 1 downbeat.

00:10:850 (1,2) - avoid overlap? but nvm it's not big issue Fixed
01:00:315 - this background sound is too big for slider tail. how about change note? Made into slider and circle
01:28:712 (3) - touching hp bar!! plz move down Fixed
01:35:125 (1) - ^ Fixed

[normal]
00:16:346 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - this train pattern is too long. change some 1/1 slider to 2 notes Changed some slider to shorter ones

[matsu]
00:21:384 (4) - how about place on (263 345)? 00:20:697 (2,3,4) - for better shape Done.
01:38:560 (1) - how about ctrl + g? Re-positioned old one cuz I like the older flow better

Thank you [C u r i] !!

Chatree

56 posts

Joined May 2013

Chatree 2017-01-20T14:09:04+00:00

From your req ( ^ = same as above, Imo = In my opinion)

SolarFox's Light Insane

00:18:636 (2,3) - move these circles like this to make good flow (below) No problem if you disagree

click!
00:45:201 (1) - remove NC Imo
00:56:193 (4,5) - Ctrl+G, cross jump would be great
01:03:522 (3) - move slider like this (below) No problem if you disagree

click!
01:33:522 (2,3) - Ctrl+G, cross jump would be great too
01:35:125 (1) - change to slider here and make like this (below) No problem if you disagree

click!
01:58:254 (5,6) - Ctrl+G, cross jump would be great one

Matsu

01:31:460 (1,2) - Ctrl+G, cross jump would be nice
02:09:476 (6,7) - ^ Imo

P.S Those 3 lower diff are fine

, I Hope this ranked soon
WITH LOVE

Sidetail

1,268 posts

Joined October 2012

Topic Starter

Sidetail 2017-01-20T19:48:31+00:00

KrastrovLap wrote:
From your req ( ^ = same as above, Imo = In my opinion)

Matsu

01:31:460 (1,2) - Ctrl+G, cross jump would be nice I tried that and I kind of like old one better. I changed a bit though.
02:09:476 (6,7) - ^ Imo Want to keep current shape for those 6 circles :l

P.S Those 3 lower diff are fine , I Hope this ranked soon
WITH LOVE

Thanks a lot!

SolarFox

366 posts

Joined February 2012

SolarFox 2017-01-21T02:17:01+00:00

KrastrovLap wrote:
From your req ( ^ = same as above, Imo = In my opinion)

SolarFox's Light Insane

00:18:636 (2,3) - move these circles like this to make good flow (below) No problem if you disagree changed c:

click!
00:45:201 (1) - remove NC Imo ok
00:56:193 (4,5) - Ctrl+G, cross jump would be great ok
01:03:522 (3) - move slider like this (below) No problem if you disagree I think i'm keeping it for now. looks more aesthetically pleasing

click!
01:33:522 (2,3) - Ctrl+G, cross jump would be great too all right
01:35:125 (1) - change to slider here and make like this (below) No problem if you disagree I like it this way

click!
01:58:254 (5,6) - Ctrl+G, cross jump would be great one keeping it. the slightly weird flow would emphasize 01:58:712 (7,1) -

P.S Those 3 lower diff are fine , I Hope this ranked soon
WITH LOVE

Thanks a lot!

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Trynna

714 posts

Joined May 2013

Trynna 2017-01-21T05:21:18+00:00

from #arnbition
modreqs i mean, but mainly from arnbition req

Matsu

00:01:231 - well you mapped that "scream" part other times like 00:04:896 (4,4) -, so looks like you're missing something here. But it's acceptable to skip since well it would cause NC trouble, so it's up to you
00:09:934 (3,4) - makes no sense to you to map here like this, there's no sound as basis, should be better to follow the background sound from 00:10:850 - (when it gets stronger). I'd recommend you to put an 1/1 slider and a circle, as you did 00:09:018 (1,2) -, it fits the vocal and create some emphasis on 00:10:850 (1,2,3,4) - !
00:12:682 (1,2,3) - ^ highly recommend to do the same idea here
00:17:033 (2) - i really think you should switch the objects position, the slider tail is stronger than the slider head, and it happens a lot of times as 00:18:865 (2,3) -, 00:20:697 (2,3) -, etc
00:28:025 (2) - ^ same as above, slider tail stronger than head, put it on white tick and a circle on the red one, and it will destroy your pattern here 00:28:483 (3,4) -, but that's ok since you gave some pointless emphasis that you didn't here 01:55:277 (1,2) - for example
00:32:377 (4) - flows weird, for real, visually and also in-game
01:10:850 (3,4,5,6) - 1/8 sounds, pls, it doesn't even fit a thing!11
01:23:216 (3,1) - your map have no overlaps like this on the editor, maybe you can fix for a better visual, but it's not a must-change imo
01:40:621 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - it's rare to see huge combo numbers on your map, maybe you should split those streams lol (and the other one at the end tho)
01:44:285 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I am not sure about this section, like, here you follow the piano in such a marvelous way 01:44:285 (1,2,3,4,5) - but then you come to background sounds like 01:46:117 (1,2,3) -, things that you shouldn't do if you were following the piano cuz well 01:46:117 (1) - a slider would be needed and c'mon 01:46:575 (3) - the end is way too important. just an example tho, but then you come to piano again, like 01:53:903 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - and with hitsounds support. This section is weird imo, you should follow just one thing and give it some focus.
02:13:598 (1) - is it an important symbol from something related to the song? i really don't know, looks so spiky during a calm part, but it's beautiful tbh, nice

SolarFox

00:19:552 (5,1) - hm, looks weird, the player won't really go till the slider tail and come back to 00:20:010 (1) -, it would be more effective if you ctrl g 00:20:010 (1) - cuz well it'll give some emphasis like you did 00:23:216 (5,1,4,1) - and bonus for the reverse rotation on a strong sound
00:25:964 - missing note? lol (refer to 00:18:636 (2) -)
00:30:544 (4) - as 00:30:086 (3) - is originally 1/8 and you did 1/4 it would be nice to make it 1/2 (2 circles)!
00:32:377 (4,1) - well i think that's ok but well same as i said before
00:51:613 (2) - put it a bit up?
01:00:315 (1,2,3,4) - weird curve, maybe something like this could help aesthetically
01:28:941 (6,8) - ctrl g would feel a lot better imo, actually 01:29:170 (7,8,1) - is painfull

beautiful diff, nothing must-change to say, nice

Gaia

01:13:827 (1) - hm i'm not sure about this slider end, it isn't getting the vocal at 01:14:743 - and there's no sound basis tho?!

There are some spacing errors on your normal, check aimod properly
on easy this is the only one 00:15:888 (2,1) -

great work, cute song

Sidetail

1,268 posts

Joined October 2012

Topic Starter

Sidetail 2017-01-21T07:17:23+00:00

Trynna wrote:
from #arnbition
modreqs i mean, but mainly from arnbition req

Matsu

00:01:231 - well you mapped that "scream" part other times like 00:04:896 (4,4) -, so looks like you're missing something here. But it's acceptable to skip since well it would cause NC trouble, so it's up to you I didn't want to map that part, but had to for second part since I need to have beats going. Leaving 00:04:896 (4) - this out would very weird and I didn't like it when I used circle there.
00:09:934 (3,4) - makes no sense to you to map here like this, there's no sound as basis, should be better to follow the background sound from 00:10:850 - (when it gets stronger). I'd recommend you to put an 1/1 slider and a circle, as you did 00:09:018 (1,2) -, it fits the vocal and create some emphasis on 00:10:850 (1,2,3,4) - ! I strive to make it as consistent as possible, so I used sets of objects to balance awkwardness and to deliever smoother play experience (i.e.: circle stacks to suddenly jumps wouldn't be pleasant experience, so circles -> sliders -> jumps as for moment wise) I already used circle emphasis 00:03:064 (3,1,2,3) - and 00:06:728 (3,1,2,3) - . So two sets of circles. This should be enough for first part and I moved on to sets of sliders (00:10:850 (1,2,3,4) - and 00:14:056 (3,1,2) - ) to have more movement. Trying to have variety and consistency simultaneously is pretty demanding to compensate for everyone's perspective. From my point of view, this is adequate.
00:12:682 (1,2,3) - ^ highly recommend to do the same idea here ^
00:17:033 (2) - i really think you should switch the objects position, the slider tail is stronger than the slider head, and it happens a lot of times as 00:18:865 (2,3) -, 00:20:697 (2,3) -, etc That's what I aimed for. You might implement this part differently, but I really like current movement.
00:28:025 (2) - ^ same as above, slider tail stronger than head, put it on white tick and a circle on the red one, and it will destroy your pattern here 00:28:483 (3,4) -, but that's ok since you gave some pointless emphasis that you didn't here 01:55:277 (1,2) - for example lmao how is that a pointless emphasis? They are two distinctive sounding parts. Also not sure what you meant by destroying my pattern, so there arent any abomination going on from what I see.
00:32:377 (4) - flows weird, for real, visually and also in-game Fixed!
01:10:850 (3,4,5,6) - 1/8 sounds, pls, it doesn't even fit a thing!11 Fixed!
01:23:216 (3,1) - your map have no overlaps like this on the editor, maybe you can fix for a better visual, but it's not a must-change imo Fixed!
01:40:621 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - it's rare to see huge combo numbers on your map, maybe you should split those streams lol (and the other one at the end tho) A lot of people from previous mod said the samething, so probably now good time to fix NCs for both streams.
01:44:285 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I am not sure about this section, like, here you follow the piano in such a marvelous way 01:44:285 (1,2,3,4,5) - but then you come to background sounds like 01:46:117 (1,2,3) -, things that you shouldn't do if you were following the piano cuz well 01:46:117 (1) - a slider would be needed and c'mon 01:46:575 (3) - the end is way too important. just an example tho, but then you come to piano again, like 01:53:903 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - and with hitsounds support. This section is weird imo, you should follow just one thing and give it some focus. I am mostly following drums after that stream. To be honest there aren't much active instrument that stands out. Even if i followed piano, it is mostly covered by electric guitar that is mostly used as chorus style. As for priority, it is mainly (Splash > Snare), so if there is splash/crash cymbals are available, I use those for slider, and other than that, snare drums are followed by sliders instead. Rest are kicks and they are emphasized by circles. However, I found it was really inconsistent throughout last part and I remapped it.
02:13:598 (1) - is it an important symbol from something related to the song? i really don't know, looks so spiky during a calm part, but it's beautiful tbh, nice Would be pretty impossible to make it look nice without anchor points (thus pointy red points) I would have gone with other shape if i could find one that satisfies 2 conditions: 1) Not too much SV change 2) Cool looking and easily readable at the same time.
great work, cute song

There are some spacing errors on your normal, check aimod properly ~~I would've fixed it much before if AIMod is consistent. My side, osu doesnt show the spacing error. https://puu.sh/tu27w/37d2b8785d.jpg~~ Modder reached up to me to clear this up!

on easy this is the only one 00:15:888 (2,1) - This too. Mine does not show that for some reason... Hopefully I fixed it now and AIMod is happy on your side.

Thanks so much for in-depth, serious mod. I really needed one and haven't had this kind of mod for while. I appreciate it.

SolarFox

366 posts

Joined February 2012

SolarFox 2017-01-21T10:50:23+00:00

Trynna wrote:
from #arnbition
modreqs i mean, but mainly from arnbition req

SolarFox

00:19:552 (5,1) - hm, looks weird, the player won't really go till the slider tail and come back to 00:20:010 (1) -, it would be more effective if you ctrl g 00:20:010 (1) - cuz well it'll give some emphasis like you did 00:23:216 (5,1,4,1) - and bonus for the reverse rotation on a strong sound okay
00:25:964 - missing note? lol (refer to 00:18:636 (2) -) i think the slight pause suits fine tho..will get more opinion on this later c:
00:30:544 (4) - as 00:30:086 (3) - is originally 1/8 and you did 1/4 it would be nice to make it 1/2 (2 circles)! good idea!
00:32:377 (4,1) - well i think that's ok but well same as i said before I'll keep for now
00:51:613 (2) - put it a bit up? all right
01:00:315 (1,2,3,4) - weird curve, maybe something like this could help aesthetically nice skin
01:28:941 (6,8) - ctrl g would feel a lot better imo, actually 01:29:170 (7,8,1) - is painfull no >:)
beautiful diff, nothing must-change to say, nice I am honored

great work, cute song

thanks a bunch!

dont even bother about my colour codes lmao im too lazy to keep it consistent

dotto ossu

osu file format v14

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 74514
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
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LetterboxInBreaks: 0
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[Editor]
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DistanceSpacing: 1.5
BeatDivisor: 4
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[Metadata]
Title:Vidro Moyou
TitleUnicode:ビードロ模様
Artist:yanaginagi
ArtistUnicode:やなぎなぎ
Creator:BetaStar
Version:SolarFox's Light Insane
Source:Ano Natsu de Matteru
Tags:waiting in the summer ending short ver. SolarFox Gaia
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Trynna

714 posts

Joined May 2013

Trynna 2017-01-21T10:57:20+00:00

BetaStar wrote:
Trynna wrote:
00:28:025 (2) - ^ same as above, slider tail stronger than head, put it on white tick and a circle on the red one, and it will destroy your pattern here 00:28:483 (3,4) -, but that's ok since you gave some pointless emphasis that you didn't here 01:55:277 (1,2) - for example lmao how is that a pointless emphasis? They are two distinctive sounding parts. Also not sure what you meant by destroying my pattern, so there arent any abomination going on from what I see.

ok, since you don't get it i'm trying to explain once more (not expecting a change or something tho, just to tell you what i thought)
the sound that you're putting some emphasis here 00:28:483 (3,4) - (00:28:483 -, 00:28:712 -) is exactly the same as 01:55:506 - 01:55:735 -, different sections, also different intensities ofc! but i thought "what's the real point on making it 00:28:483 (3,4) - a thing and bypass the piano while 01:55:277 (1,2) - doesn't? it actually fits the piano as 01:55:277 (1) - and the secondary sound is represented by the slider tail and the circle!

so what i tried to tell you?
while something like this is possible (refer to 00:28:025 (2,3,4) -), doing something like this would fit the piano in a better way and fit the weird emphasis you did as a mention to 01:55:277 (1,2) - making your mapping more consistent. Also, if fixing it is a thing, you would also need to put something to fit 00:28:941 - (such an important sound imo)

note: on weird emphasis i mean not only following a background sound instead of piano but also making it a bit overmap 00:28:598 -

Posting for discussion purposes

Sidetail

1,268 posts

Joined October 2012

Topic Starter

Sidetail 2017-01-21T22:11:27+00:00

Trynna wrote:
BetaStar wrote:
00:28:025 (2) - ^ same as above, slider tail stronger than head, put it on white tick and a circle on the red one, and it will destroy your pattern here 00:28:483 (3,4) -, but that's ok since you gave some pointless emphasis that you didn't here 01:55:277 (1,2) - for example lmao how is that a pointless emphasis? They are two distinctive sounding parts. Also not sure what you meant by destroying my pattern, so there arent any abomination going on from what I see.
ok, since you don't get it i'm trying to explain once more (not expecting a change or something tho, just to tell you what i thought)
the sound that you're putting some emphasis here 00:28:483 (3,4) - (00:28:483 -, 00:28:712 -) is exactly the same as 01:55:506 - 01:55:735 -, different sections, also different intensities ofc! but i thought "what's the real point on making it 00:28:483 (3,4) - a thing and bypass the piano while 01:55:277 (1,2) - doesn't? it actually fits the piano as 01:55:277 (1) - and the secondary sound is represented by the slider tail and the circle! The reason why both are different is due to BOTH drum and piano. Of course, I am hitsounding piano, but I want to map for drum as well. Second one does not have much apparent drum since it is located near dénouement.

so what i tried to tell you?
while something like this is possible (refer to 00:28:025 (2,3,4) -), doing something like this would fit the piano in a better way and fit the weird emphasis you did as a mention to 01:55:277 (1,2) - making your mapping more consistent. Also, if fixing it is a thing, you would also need to put something to fit 00:28:941 - (such an important sound imo) All right, modified the part you suggested, however 00:28:941 - would not be changing as I like it empty there.

note: on weird emphasis i mean not only following a background sound instead of piano but also making it a bit overmap 00:28:598 -

Posting for discussion purposes

I'll have a look soon! and thanks for star!

Cirno no Baka

130 posts

Joined May 2016

Cirno no Baka 2017-01-22T16:58:04+00:00

Hi from my queue!!

[General]

Click!

1. that all your difficulties end in the same point and that they have the same dain time.
2. beware of the semi blanket, which at first glance by the publisher are not seen.

Map drain times:
Easy: Index: 00:01:690 -  Final: 02:13:598 - 
Normal: Index: 00:01:690 -  Final: 02:13:598 - 
Gaia: Index: 00:01:690 -  Final: 02:22:758 - 
SolarFox:  Index: 00:16:346 -  Final: 02:13:598 -

[Easy]

Click!

01:43:598 - an important sound, you should not pass this on
00:12:224 (2) - should make a perfect blanket with 00:12:682 (1) - it would look much better

[Normal]

Click!

00:28:941 - you feel the emptiness of space although the sound of the previous piano does not cover it at all
Good Diff

[Gaia]

Click!

Gaia i'm your fan >w<!!!

00:17:720 - here's an important sound that ending in a reverse, like it does not go well with the rhythm you had before ... if you did a correction more or less like this: http://puu.sh/tvVYe/c9c41894af.png would look and listen better: D just like you did at 00:24:590 (3,4,5) -
00:16:346 (1) - add a sound to the end of that slider, you'd better = w = b
00:20:926 (3,4,5) - there is not much consistency with 00:17:262 (3,4,5,6) - and in 00:28:254 (3,4) -
01:58:025 (9) - NC

[SolarFox]

Click!

01:00:773 (3,4) - blanket
01:01:002 (4,5) - the distance is too much between sounds and notes.
01:15:430 (2) - Ctrl + G
01:25:048 (1,2) - try that 2 moves more than 1 to fence with the rhythm and distance snap.
01:29:399 (8) - NC

[Musou]

Click!

01:07:644 (1) - it would look better if you moved this one is not above the slider start of 01:07:873 (2) -
01:52:987 (5) - above 01:52:300 (2) -
02:08:102 (1) - set this slider to be compatible with 02:07:644 (5) - and make it perfect blanket

So GOOOD map and hitsounds, GL >w< /

Sidetail

1,268 posts

Joined October 2012

Topic Starter

Sidetail 2017-01-23T19:19:05+00:00

-Sakurasaki wrote:
Hi from my queue!!

[General]
Click!
1. that all your difficulties end in the same point and that they have the same dain time. Should be fine regardless of gd or not for starting point and ending point being different.
2. beware of the semi blanket, which at first glance by the publisher are not seen.okay
Map drain times:
Easy: Index: 00:01:690 -  Final: 02:13:598 - 
Normal: Index: 00:01:690 -  Final: 02:13:598 - 
Gaia: Index: 00:01:690 -  Final: 02:22:758 - 
SolarFox:  Index: 00:16:346 -  Final: 02:13:598 -  
[Easy]
Click!
01:43:598 - an important sound, you should not pass this on Actually, I fixed sound slightly after that! I emphasized tail of 01:44:056 (1) - more. Putting object there for easy would be bit weird due to rhythm and sounding overall x)
00:12:224 (2) - should make a perfect blanket with 00:12:682 (1) - it would look much better Good idea for aesthetics, but I would choose flow over aesthetics for easy ;w;
[Normal]
Click!
00:28:941 - you feel the emptiness of space although the sound of the previous piano does not cover it at all There was no substantial tone or important sound here, so i would leave it blank here
Good Diff[/box]
[Musou]
Click!
01:07:644 (1) - it would look better if you moved this one is not above the slider start of 01:07:873 (2) - moved slightly up
01:52:987 (5) - above 01:52:300 (2) - but that would ruin blanket with 01:53:445 (1) - ;w; Good idea though!
02:08:102 (1) - set this slider to be compatible with 02:07:644 (5) - and make it perfect blanket Ruins the shape of last jump! Ahh

So GOOOD map and hitsounds, GL >w< /

Thank you! ~~Ill check over soon!~~ Finally applied. Thanks again~

SolarFox

366 posts

Joined February 2012

SolarFox 2017-01-27T10:14:09+00:00

-Sakurasaki wrote:
Hi from my queue!!

[SolarFox]

Click!
01:00:773 (3,4) - blanket ok
01:01:002 (4,5) - the distance is too much between sounds and notes. it's hard to change it without hurting the pattern..i did..something?
01:15:430 (2) - Ctrl + G kk
01:25:048 (1,2) - try that 2 moves more than 1 to fence with the rhythm and distance snap. i changed the pattern.. hope it works

01:29:399 (8) - NC why

So GOOOD map and hitsounds, GL >w< /

thank you!

LOL i forgot about this

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Gaia

2,808 posts

Joined May 2013

Gaia 2017-01-29T05:41:47+00:00

(C u r i)

[C u r i] wrote:
[hard]
01:50:468 (5) - how about add some curve? i like it stright

Trynna

Trynna wrote:
Gaia

01:13:827 (1) - hm i'm not sure about this slider end, it isn't getting the vocal at 01:14:743 - and there's no sound basis tho?! it's mapped to the guitar so skipping the vocal is totally fine

great work, cute song

-Sakurasaki

-Sakurasaki wrote:
Hi from my queue!!

[Gaia]
Gaia i'm your fan >w<!!! thanks w

00:17:720 - here's an important sound that ending in a reverse, like it does not go well with the rhythm you had before ... if you did a correction more or less like this: http://puu.sh/tvVYe/c9c41894af.png would look and listen better: D just like you did at 00:24:590 (3,4,5) - i think the reverse is fine, i did change some rhythms around though
00:16:346 (1) - add a sound to the end of that slider, you'd better = w = b what do you mean? i dont think im lacking any hitsounds
00:20:926 (3,4,5) - there is not much consistency with 00:17:262 (3,4,5,6) - and in 00:28:254 (3,4) - did something
01:58:025 (9) - NC for consistency i'd like to keep this

So GOOOD map and hitsounds, GL >w< /

thanks for your mods everyone!

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Hokichi

825 posts

Joined June 2015

Hokichi 2017-02-03T08:49:46+00:00

Hi, mod as I promised

[General]
Difficulties Spread:

You need to raise the SR of Normal difficulty to about 1.92* for a better spread. You can increase the DS of the map

Hitsound:

I don't get the point of using both thump sound and skin's default sound. IMO, you should use the thump sound throughout the map.
Please do keysounding for the GDs. You can use hitsound copier
00:01:690 - Since you use skin's soft finish hitsound here, you can just star the drum set there, then add an additional soft finish sound to it.
In the Easy diff, you can use soft-hitclap50.wav as soft-slidertick50.wav too. Since you did use drum.hitnormal50.wav as a slider tick sound, you should do this too

[Easy]
00:02:148 - You should put the slider tick sound here
00:17:720 (2) - I don't think 1/2 sliders are allowed in an Easy diff
00:18:178 - 00:21:842 - 00:25:506 - You missed a sound here. This sound is pretty dominant, and missing this also make the part inconsistent. Do it like 00:27:338 (1,2) -
00:45:659 (1) - Add a finish hitsound here?
00:59:399 (1) - Shorten this to a 1 beat slider, then add a circle at the big white tick
01:23:216 (1) - Rotate this by 25 degree, then move it up a bit for a better flow
01:33:293 (1) - What's the point of adding a finish hitsound at the end of this slider?
01:44:056 (1) - Remove this, the place a circle at the big white tick please
01:44:743 - You should add slider tick sound here, like you did at 00:03:522 - Add claps too
02:09:476 (2,1) - Don't overlap these

[Normal]
01:07:186 (3) - This may confused new players
01:19:323 (2) - Extend this to the next white tick, remove 01:20:010 (3) - , then add a circle at the red tick to emphasize the vocal
01:36:728 (1) - Turn this into a circle and a 1/2 slider
01:38:560 (1) - Same

[Gaia's Hard]
CS is a bit too small. Use 3.5 then?
No kiai?
-------------------------------
00:16:231 - Do we need a clap sound here?
00:28:712 (4) - I don't think you should end a slider on the big white tick like this.
00:49:323 (1,2) - Add a blanket here?
01:02:148 (4,5) - Bad overlap imo uwu
01:17:491 (6,7) - Blanket?
01:07:186 (6) - Can you add a cirlce at the red tick and remove the reverse?
01:28:941 (9,1) - Stack these perharps?
01:58:025 (9,10,11,12,13) - Make these symmetric please

[SolarFox's Light Insane]
Kiai?
-------------------------------
00:45:201 (6) - NC for SV change
01:28:941 (6,8) - Switch the places of these for a better flow
01:44:285 - Add a circle here please, thanks

[Matsu]
01:10:850 (3) - Just... use drum normal sound and soft additional clap sound
01:36:842 (7,3) - Mirror these
02:13:598 (1) - Holy...

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That's all from me. GL everyone. Nice set

Sidetail

1,268 posts

Joined October 2012

Topic Starter

Sidetail 2017-02-03T20:30:47+00:00

Hokichi wrote:
Hi, mod as I promised

[General]
Difficulties Spread:
You need to raise the SR of Normal difficulty to about 1.92* for a better spread. You can increase the DS of the map
Hitsound:
I don't get the point of using both thump sound and skin's default sound. IMO, you should use the thump sound throughout the map. I like the clap from skin default and i dont think i really needed to deplicate .wav files. So i get went back and forth. I also controlled the vol to make sure it sounds right
Please do keysounding for the GDs. You can use hitsound copier it's upto my GDers. Tho their hitsound is good enough
00:01:690 - Since you use skin's soft finish hitsound here, you can just star the drum set there, then add an additional soft finish sound to it. There was unrankable issue there (unneeded greenline over redline which can be solved by just using red, fixed.
In the Easy diff, you can use soft-hitclap50.wav as soft-slidertick50.wav too. Since you did use drum.hitnormal50.wav as a slider tick sound, you should do this too ? I am using soft-slidertick2 for slider kicks
[Easy]
00:02:148 - You should put the slider tick sound here oops, thanks
00:17:720 (2) - I don't think 1/2 sliders are allowed in an Easy diff its allowed. depending on how it fits with song and clarity.
00:18:178 - 00:21:842 - 00:25:506 - You missed a sound here. This sound is pretty dominant, and missing this also make the part inconsistent. Do it like 00:27:338 (1,2) - I was planning to remove the keysounding all together for easy diff, but I'll see about that later
00:45:659 (1) - Add a finish hitsound here? Added
00:59:399 (1) - Shorten this to a 1 beat slider, then add a circle at the big white tick Fixed
01:23:216 (1) - Rotate this by 25 degree, then move it up a bit for a better flow Fixed
01:33:293 (1) - What's the point of adding a finish hitsound at the end of this slider? There is a finish just after that slider, but there is no note. So I put the finish there instead of compensate for late finish
01:44:056 (1) - Remove this, the place a circle at the big white tick please Fixed
01:44:743 - You should add slider tick sound here, like you did at 00:03:522 - Add claps too Current one seems to follow more to song. Beginning part was only kicks and later part is both kicks and snare. Also laer part's kick is less pronounced.
02:09:476 (2,1) - Don't overlap these I dont think that ever mattered.. but okay fixed

[Normal]
01:07:186 (3) - This may confused new players it's fine
01:19:323 (2) - Extend this to the next white tick, remove 01:20:010 (3) - , then add a circle at the red tick to emphasize the vocal want snare to be clickable there.
01:36:728 (1) - Turn this into a circle and a 1/2 slider Makes rhythm more complex than it already is
01:38:560 (1) - Same

[Matsu]
01:10:850 (3) - Just... use drum normal sound and soft additional clap sound I prefer current one more :l
01:36:842 (7,3) - Mirror these Okay
02:13:598 (1) - Holy... B)

That's all from me. GL everyone. Nice set

Thanks~

SolarFox

366 posts

Joined February 2012

SolarFox 2017-02-04T09:55:20+00:00

Hokichi wrote:
Hi, mod as I promised

[SolarFox's Light Insane]
Kiai? is not compulsory
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00:45:201 (6) - NC for SV change another mod pointed out to un-NC this some weeks ago, im not sure to re-NC it back tbh..I'll leave it for now
01:28:941 (6,8) - Switch the places of these for a better flow did something else
01:44:285 - Add a circle here please, thanks noooooooooooooooooooooooooo

[]

That's all from me. GL everyone. Nice set

Thanks for the mod!

code

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Title:Vidro Moyou
TitleUnicode:ビードロ模様
Artist:yanaginagi
ArtistUnicode:やなぎなぎ
Creator:BetaStar
Version:SolarFox's Light Insane
Source:Ano Natsu de Matteru
Tags:waiting in the summer ending short ver. SolarFox Gaia
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Gaia

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Joined May 2013

Gaia 2017-02-05T17:38:36+00:00

Hokichi

Hokichi wrote:
Hi, mod as I promised

[General]
Difficulties Spread:
You need to raise the SR of Normal difficulty to about 1.92* for a better spread. You can increase the DS of the map you can't judge spread based on SR, the normal is hard enough and should be toned down if anything lol

[Gaia's Hard]
CS is a bit too small. Use 3.5 then? cs 4 is very standard for hard cs..
No kiai? nah not for calm songs like these
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00:16:231 - Do we need a clap sound here? yeah i hear it
00:28:712 (4) - I don't think you should end a slider on the big white tick like this. that upbeat barely emphasized anything so it's fine
00:49:323 (1,2) - Add a blanket here? nah doesnt fit imo
01:02:148 (4,5) - Bad overlap imo uwu i like this though
01:17:491 (6,7) - Blanket?
01:07:186 (6) - Can you add a cirlce at the red tick and remove the reverse? why? it just makes it play poorly
01:28:941 (9,1) - Stack these perharps? offset for readability
01:58:025 (9,10,11,12,13) - Make these symmetric please

[]

That's all from me. GL everyone. Nice set

ty 4 mod, no reply are fixed
also made few changes on my own

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Chirony

390 posts

Joined June 2012

Chirony 2017-02-08T15:04:15+00:00

Hi~, sorry for late.....

[Matsu]

00:28:941 - add circle? Since patterns are made with the piano sounds so far, you should do that in here too. Same sound as 00:27:109 -
00:38:102 (6) - how about this? move to x:296 y:276 Could be better pattern parallel with 00:37:415 (3,4) than a lozenge.
01:44:285 (1,2) - These distances are close. Because of that AIM speed may suddenly slow down.
00:28:254 (3) - It have sliderslide. Do you intend?
01:01:919 - use D:C50 sound?
01:17:720 - , 01:38:789 - Why not use tick sound?
01:27:109 (6) - add clap and move green line of on 01:27:338 to here, 01:27:338 (7) - remove clap
02:13:598 (1) - add finish sound?

[Hard]

01:00:773 (2,3) - , 01:04:438 (2,3) - How is this pattern?
SPOILER
01:07:415 - Hmm.. I think not need finish.
01:13:827 (1) - I felt tail of a slider is incongruous. You should be have to match vocal, so I recommend in 01:14:743
01:33:293 (1) - How about changing the reverse slider?

[Normal]

00:29:170 (1) - move to 00:28:941 - The piano and drum sound is confused so it becomes the source of confusion.

Other diffs looks fine!
good luck!

blobdash

912 posts

Joined April 2016

blobdash 2017-02-08T17:51:47+00:00

Hey
From my modding queue.
IMO = In my opinion
I'm not going to mod your map, i'm just gonna give some feedback since I think it would say it all.

readme plz

Hitsounds from notes and sliders must be audible. These provide feedback for the player, and having them silent in a rhythm game doesn't make much sense. If you don't like the default sounds, then find replacements rather than silencing notes. You can use hitsounds from the Custom Hitsound Library or easily find others online. Lowering the volume of a few notes to provide a dampened effect is usually fine, but complete silence is always unacceptable.
Source : https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Ranking_Criteria#Timing

You're using the hitsound to add sounds to the music. It's not how you're supposed to map.
Sometimes, you add circles that follow the rythm BUT doesn't follow the music. Since you're based on the music to play, for example on Hidden mod, how can you play?
Right now i'm talking about BetaStar's diff'. I'll mod Gaia's and SolarFox's diff after this.
Also, the custom hitsounds are unplayable, they're just covering the music. The voice is too low compared to the rest, so when you need to click with the voice rythm it's clearly impossible if you don't know the song. It's weird because :
- You use the SAME sounds as in the original music
- You use weird ways to change hitsound sets. So weird that it seems random when you first play the song.

Anyway...
I don't say that you need to remap everything, but just try something : Backup the map, try to hear without the custom hitsounding. You'll see it fits, but sometimes there's NO sound but you get a hitsound.

Back to modding Gaia's and SolarFox's diff.
Gaia's Hard :
- 2,6* seems a little bit low IMO
02:13:598 (3) - Would be better to finish with the spinner instead, there's not really a end sound except for the reversed uplifter.
00:29:399 (5,6) - Since we're not in the kiai i don't think this needs to be here.

SolarFox's Light Insane :
- The diff starts way further than the others. If it's WIP ok but if it's not consider mapping the start, like the other diffs.
01:14:056 (2) - Do like at 01:40:621 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - , it's what I would expect from this part
- AR seems a little bit low for a Light Insane, i would put it to 7,5 IMO

I know mapping is really hard, and hitsounding is a pain in the *** but really this is unplayable when you first play the song.
Hope it helped.

Sidetail

1,268 posts

Joined October 2012

Topic Starter

Sidetail 2017-02-08T18:53:57+00:00

FruityEnLoops wrote:
Hey
From my modding queue.
IMO = In my opinion
I'm not going to mod your map, i'm just gonna give some feedback since I think it would say it all.
readme plz
Hitsounds from notes and sliders must be audible. These provide feedback for the player, and having them silent in a rhythm game doesn't make much sense. If you don't like the default sounds, then find replacements rather than silencing notes. You can use hitsounds from the Custom Hitsound Library or easily find others online. Lowering the volume of a few notes to provide a dampened effect is usually fine, but complete silence is always unacceptable . unacceptable when both sliderticks and sliderslide is both silent. all of head/tail of object is making a sound :d
Source : https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Ranking_Criteria#Timing
You're using the hitsound to add sounds to the music. keysounding? It's not how you're supposed to map. why are you dissing maps that arent ideal for you?
Sometimes, you add circles that follow the rythm BUT doesn't follow the music. why dont you provide example timestamps to show validity of your claim? Since you're based on the music to play, for example on Hidden mod, how can you play? what does thgat even mean lmao
Right now i'm talking about BetaStar's diff'. I'll mod Gaia's and SolarFox's diff after this.
Also, the custom hitsounds are unplayable, they're just covering the music. The voice is too low compared to the rest, so when you need to click with the voice rythm it's clearly impossible if you don't know the song. It's weird because :
- You use the SAME sounds as in the original music

- You use weird ways to change hitsound sets. So weird that it seems random when you first play the song.

why is that a problem since i am making a piano from music more pronounced

Anyway...
I don't say that you need to remap everything, but just try something : Backup the map, try to hear without the custom hitsounding. You'll see it fits, but sometimes there's NO sound but you get a hitsound. pretty cool eh? :3

I know mapping is really hard, and hitsounding is a pain in the *** but really this is unplayable when you first play the song.
Hope it helped.

Thanks, but you should go through osu forums about hitsounding/keysounding and feel free to come back to me with more mod

note: i only keysounded set of ~7 notes for few parts. so ya. that shouldnt be a problem since i didnt keysoud entire thing

-----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

Chirony wrote:
Hi~, sorry for late.....

[Matsu]
00:28:941 - add circle? Since patterns are made with the piano sounds so far, you should do that in here too. Same sound as 00:27:109 - Fixed
00:38:102 (6) - how about this? move to x:296 y:276 Could be better pattern parallel with 00:37:415 (3,4) than a lozenge. moved to (275,275) instead
01:44:285 (1,2) - These distances are close. Because of that AIM speed may suddenly slow down. err fixed slighly.
00:28:254 (3) - It have sliderslide. Do you intend? yeah, i dont want to make all the keysound hitsound sets to have muted slider since that just seems slightly unnecessary
01:01:919 - use D:C50 sound? ohhh nice catch!
01:17:720 - , 01:38:789 - Why not use tick sound? changed slidertick50 sound so should be ok now
01:27:109 (6) - add clap and move green line of on 01:27:338 to here, 01:27:338 (7) - remove clap fixed.
02:13:598 (1) - add finish sound?
[Normal]
00:29:170 (1) - move to 00:28:941 - The piano and drum sound is confused so it becomes the source of confusion. err fixed?
Other diffs looks fine!
good luck!

SolarFox

366 posts

Joined February 2012

SolarFox 2017-02-14T07:39:10+00:00

FruityEnLoops wrote:
Hey
From my modding queue.

SolarFox's Light Insane :
- The diff starts way further than the others. If it's WIP ok but if it's not consider mapping the start, like the other diffs. will think about it
01:14:056 (2) - Do like at 01:40:621 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - , it's what I would expect from this part doesnt seem to fit imo
- AR seems a little bit low for a Light Insane, i would put it to 7,5 IMO ok

Hope it helped.

thanksssssssssssssss

txet despalloc

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Catt

69 posts

Joined August 2015

Catt 2017-04-03T22:56:50+00:00

From Q. Modding because why not?

Matsu

00:05:354 (1) - The blanket is off
00:06:041 (2) - Same^
00:09:018 (1) - The could be moved forwards to blanket in order to enhance aesthetics
00:23:674 (1) - The Slider before should flow into the head of this slider imo. I think this would improve flow
00:24:361 (2) - The previous should flow into this as well.
00:27:338 (1,2,3) - Why the big change of spacing?
01:55:277 (1) - I think this should be moved to increase flow of the jumps
02:13:598 (1) - That's a damn cool slider

Easy

00:17:720 (2) - I don't think new players will be able to play this properly. Maybe change to a full beat slider?
00:21:384 (2) - Same^
00:25:048 (2) - Same^
01:07:644 (1) - Perhaps have the slider before flow into this?
01:44:056 (1) - Same as before
02:09:934 (1) - Maybe change the shape of the slider? It's not the nicest looking ever

Sidetail

1,268 posts

Joined October 2012

Topic Starter

Sidetail 2017-04-04T01:15:08+00:00

HM02CauseImFly wrote:
From Q. Modding because why not?
Matsu
00:05:354 (1) - The blanket is off fixed!
00:06:041 (2) - Same^ fixed!
00:09:018 (1) - The could be moved forwards to blanket in order to enhance aesthetics fixed!
00:23:674 (1) - The Slider before should flow into the head of this slider imo. I think this would improve flow ?
00:24:361 (2) - The previous should flow into this as well.?
00:27:338 (1,2,3) - Why the big change of spacing? fixed!
01:55:277 (1) - I think this should be moved to increase flow of the jumps current one seems okay!
02:13:598 (1) - That's a damn cool slider thanks ^^!

Easy
00:17:720 (2) - I don't think new players will be able to play this properly. Maybe change to a full beat slider? should be fine since is simple enough to be hit with ease and there is plenty of time between next note.
00:21:384 (2) - Same^
00:25:048 (2) - Same^
01:07:644 (1) - Perhaps have the slider before flow into this? i would but it will make it more complex for easy diff haha
01:44:056 (1) - Same as before fixed
02:09:934 (1) - Maybe change the shape of the slider? It's not the nicest looking ever tbh, I would've used the slider from insane but that would be too confusing for easy diff players, so i stuck with simple shape. I'll polly change it to something that looks nice if it bothers me later one xD

Thanks for mod!

oop not sure why it easy dif mod reply is in green colour, hopefully you can use highlight!

Boruma

90 posts

Joined August 2014

Boruma 2017-04-08T00:38:36+00:00

Easy

Length of beatmap is 4 seconds less than your other difficulties.

Normal

Your normal difficulty appears rather particularly cluttered with close notes.
Maybe increase the distance spacing to 1.0x?
It gets rather repetitive fast with all the close notes and it appears you're just going in very wide circles in the beginning part of 00:12:682 (1) - 00:31:002 (1) .
I recommend at least making paths in which differ in course from the original circle motions ie. sliders that are perpendicular to the previous slider.
It's not particularly fun to play in my opinion compared to your easy difficulty.
Other than that, no real problems.
It's more so an optional suggestion.

Gaia's Hard

There seems to be a spinner that extends the beatmap far further than your other difficulties.
Maybe remove it, so it can match all your other difficulties' lengths.

Ohwow

1,193 posts

Joined July 2013

Ohwow 2017-04-08T01:09:04+00:00

m4m from roastin q

[Easy]
00:12:682 (1,1) - The first slider is a bit curved wider (less curved) than the 2nd one. Minor aesthetic, but it would be better if u copy pasta and rotated/flip to make it look more even.
00:17:720 (2) - Try to avoid 1/2 sliders on easies, especial when the difficulty is only 1.2ish. You maybe be trying to map to that loud piano sound, but mapping to the beat is a lot more simple for beginners to play. The piano melody in this case adds quite a bit of complexity to the rhythm (which is why we wouldn't want to continue mapping to the piano at 00:18:865 - ). That also means that that 1/2 slider is the only one that's mapped to the piano while the rest of the pianos are ignored. which makes it kinda weird. Applies to other occurrences as well.
00:17:720 (2,1,2) - Not a big fan of 3/2 rhythms and missing big white ticks on easies. They are sometimes okay if the music have obvious distinct sounds that support it, but imo, that's not the case with this portion of the song. possibly make the rhythm simple like this (Applies to other occurrences): https://i.gyazo.com/545243037bea856c7d9 ... 9d5136.jpg
00:25:964 (1) - slider doesn't look too good imo. If you want to make a curvy slider like that, try to make it as symmetrical as possible. And even if you make it symmetrical, you should keep it horizontal or vertical instead of trying to angle it, cause imo if you angle it, it would lose it's symmetrical look. https://i.gyazo.com/b47f90ea72bca459bc9 ... 85a49b.jpg
00:57:796 (2) - not sure if this slider is ok on easy. I haven't come across an easy with 1/2 repeating slider. might wanna check on that.
01:01:002 (2,1) - copy (2) and paste + rotate 180 degrees (and then make it repeat). Just more symmetrical patterns that could help on the aesthetics
01:26:422 (1) - delete NC
01:51:613 (1,1) - same, althought not really noticeable, it's a good habit to make these perfectly symmetrical by copy pasting and rotating.
01:55:277 (1) - Might want to curve this side of the pentagon to make all the sides curved (and minor blanket to that next slider): https://i.gyazo.com/5234c5e5ff56870a6fa ... 568ae8.jpg

[Normal]
00:09:934 (2) - random red anchored slider. Should just be curve like the rest.
I think the map could use some more 2/1 breaks, so it's not a long chain of overlapping objects.
i suk at mapping and modding normals sowwy

[Hard]
00:09:705 (2) - Could move to x216 y174 so that both the sliderhead and the sliderend and the sliderend of 00:09:018 (1) - make a equaliteral triangle. If you think the spacing is too big, you could move it closer to maybe like x218 y191 so it's at least an isosceles triangle.
00:33:522 (6,7) - Possible way to improve this aestheitcally: https://i.gyazo.com/1b44747535e784dfea4 ... ea156d.jpg The red lines indicate that they should be equal spaced and the green lines indicate that they should be parallel.
01:00:315 - not too big of a problem, but the slowdown of the SV felt kinda too much at first look. Maybe up the SV just a bit.
01:11:308 (1,2,3) - fix spacing, should be equal (at 1.3x)
01:57:567 (8,9,10,11,12) - the angles between the notes are kinda inconsistent. it would look nicer if the angles are consistent
02:12:682 (1,2) - Kinda weird to how there are 1/2 drum beats on this section and its mapped to 1/2 sliders, while 02:09:934 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - are repeating sliders, yet they are only 1/1 drum beats on that section. Just something to point out cause i thought that was weird. I know the repeating sliders are mapped to those 1/4 clap sounds, but it just felt underwhelming for 02:12:682 (1,2) - to be sliders. Maybe make them circles to emphasize the drums rather than the claps.

[SolarFox's Light Insane]
Light Insane is only 3.34*

Why not map starting 00:01:690 - ? Even though it's a GD, even the easy difficulty starts at this part, so I don't think it would be a problem mapping starting from the very beginning.
00:26:422 (3,4) - make it symmetrical. copy+paste+rotate180
00:26:880 (4,1) - bad flow, even though there's a loud sound. Combined with 00:26:422 (3) - , the player has to move back and forth a lot which is very uncomfortable to play.
00:40:163 (1,2) - could make symmetrical
00:48:407 (4,5) - slightly off from being symmetrical, although unnoticeable during gameplay. This is happening in some other similar patterns, idk if it's intentional.
01:06:499 (2,3) - too big spacing, and 01:07:186 (3,1) - should be bigger spacing to emphasize the loud sound there

[Matsu]
00:36:041 (3,1,2) - looks like a pattern, but I don't think (3) should be included with (1) and (2) in a pattern since they are in different combos.
00:17:491 (3,4,1) - could make into a equilateral triangle
00:18:865 (2,3) - I feel like it should be circle slider, not slider circle. The white ticks just feels stronger there so it should be clickable. Applies to all instances.
01:21:384 (3,4,5) - ^
01:47:033 (4,5,6,7) - Could make a cleaner shape pattern (parallelogram or rhombus)
02:13:598 (1) - :O
dun see too many problems here.

gl

Sidetail

1,268 posts

Joined October 2012

Topic Starter

Sidetail 2017-04-08T02:03:55+00:00

Boruma wrote:
Easy
Length of beatmap is 4 seconds less than your other difficulties. thats fine

Normal
Your normal difficulty appears rather particularly cluttered with close notes.
Maybe increase the distance spacing to 1.0x?
It gets rather repetitive fast with all the close notes and it appears you're just going in very wide circles in the beginning part of 00:12:682 (1) - 00:31:002 (1) .
I recommend at least making paths in which differ in course from the original circle motions ie. sliders that are perpendicular to the previous slider.
It's not particularly fun to play in my opinion compared to your easy difficulty.
Other than that, no real problems.
It's more so an optional suggestion. I have been thinking to get a GD to do normal for this map. So yeah thanks for having a look regardless

Ohwow wrote:
m4m from roastin q

[Easy]
00:12:682 (1,1) - The first slider is a bit curved wider (less curved) than the 2nd one. Minor aesthetic, but it would be better if u copy pasta and rotated/flip to make it look more even. err ok
00:17:720 (2) - Try to avoid 1/2 sliders on easies, especial when the difficulty is only 1.2ish. You maybe be trying to map to that loud piano sound, but mapping to the beat is a lot more simple for beginners to play. The piano melody in this case adds quite a bit of complexity to the rhythm (which is why we wouldn't want to continue mapping to the piano at 00:18:865 - ). That also means that that 1/2 slider is the only one that's mapped to the piano while the rest of the pianos are ignored. which makes it kinda weird. Applies to other occurrences as well. remapped that part. Easy used to have piano keysounding that is why it has those short sliders.
00:17:720 (2,1,2) - Not a big fan of 3/2 rhythms and missing big white ticks on easies. They are sometimes okay if the music have obvious distinct sounds that support it, but imo, that's not the case with this portion of the song. possibly make the rhythm simple like this (Applies to other occurrences): https://i.gyazo.com/545243037bea856c7d9 ... 9d5136.jpg ^
00:25:964 (1) - slider doesn't look too good imo. If you want to make a curvy slider like that, try to make it as symmetrical as possible. And even if you make it symmetrical, you should keep it horizontal or vertical instead of trying to angle it, cause imo if you angle it, it would lose it's symmetrical look. https://i.gyazo.com/b47f90ea72bca459bc9 ... 85a49b.jpg errr ok
00:57:796 (2) - not sure if this slider is ok on easy. I haven't come across an easy with 1/2 repeating slider. might wanna check on that. ill leave it for now and polly ask someone later on
01:01:002 (2,1) - copy (2) and paste + rotate 180 degrees (and then make it repeat). Just more symmetrical patterns that could help on the aesthetics err ok
01:26:422 (1) - delete NC that is following nc pattern. NCing every object that hits major downbeat.
01:51:613 (1,1) - same, althought not really noticeable, it's a good habit to make these perfectly symmetrical by copy pasting and rotating. its really really negligible...
01:55:277 (1) - Might want to curve this side of the pentagon to make all the sides curved (and minor blanket to that next slider): https://i.gyazo.com/5234c5e5ff56870a6fa ... 568ae8.jpg er ok

[Normal]
00:09:934 (2) - random red anchored slider. Should just be curve like the rest.
I think the map could use some more 2/1 breaks, so it's not a long chain of overlapping objects.
i suk at mapping and modding normals sowwy
its fine since remap coming.

[Matsu]
00:36:041 (3,1,2) - looks like a pattern, but I don't think (3) should be included with (1) and (2) in a pattern since they are in different combos. its fine
00:17:491 (3,4,1) - could make into a equilateral triangle all right
00:18:865 (2,3) - I feel like it should be circle slider, not slider circle. The white ticks just feels stronger there so it should be clickable. Applies to all instances. fixed
01:21:384 (3,4,5) - ^ current is ok
01:47:033 (4,5,6,7) - Could make a cleaner shape pattern (parallelogram or rhombus) fxied
02:13:598 (1) - :O :O
dun see too many problems here. Thanks for mod!

gl

SolarFox

366 posts

Joined February 2012

SolarFox 2017-04-08T16:58:14+00:00

Ohwow wrote:
m4m from roastin q

[SolarFox's Light Insane]
Light Insane is only 3.34* :(
Why not map starting 00:01:690 - ? Even though it's a GD, even the easy difficulty starts at this part, so I don't think it would be a problem mapping starting from the very beginning. alright, mapped!
00:26:422 (3,4) - make it symmetrical. copy+paste+rotate180 sure
00:26:880 (4,1) - bad flow, even though there's a loud sound. Combined with 00:26:422 (3) - , the player has to move back and forth a lot which is very uncomfortable to play. mm i did something
00:40:163 (1,2) - could make symmetrical k
00:48:407 (4,5) - slightly off from being symmetrical, although unnoticeable during gameplay. This is happening in some other similar patterns, idk if it's intentional. lol im just lazy
01:06:499 (2,3) - too big spacing, and 01:07:186 (3,1) - should be bigger spacing to emphasize the loud sound there kk

gl

thank you for modding! I'll consider buffing if I ever need to.

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Hectic

511 posts

Joined August 2015

Hectic 2017-04-13T19:14:54+00:00

Hello there. From queue

Matsu

00:03:064 (3) - would put nc here, not next circle (00:06:728 (3) - same)
00:26:193 (2,1) - stack maybe? If no, then why 00:26:193 (2,1) - are stacked?
00:50:697 (3) - making this bent would be nicer
00:51:155 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - messy
02:00:773 (1,2,3) - this pattern doesn't look nice
02:08:560 (2,3,4,5,6) - make this accurate

Rhythm seems fine, hitsounds are great, but object placement feels awkward sometimes. Also check blankets, some of them are not perfect

SolarFox's Light Insane

00:05:354 (1,2) - hnnnnnng (blanket)
00:15:659 - maybe make snare sound clickable?
00:30:086 (3,4) - move them closer to each other (you did so there 00:45:201 (6,1) - )
01:57:109 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - flow there can be improved

Hope that you'll find something useful. Good luck!

Sidetail

1,268 posts

Joined October 2012

Topic Starter

Sidetail 2017-04-14T11:33:36+00:00

Metadata check - done.

IamKwaN wrote:
looks cool to me

References:
+ http://yanaginagi.net/disco/?paged=5
+ http://yanaginagi.net/profile/
+ http://www.ichika-ichika.com/goods.html
+ http://media.vgm.io/albums/00/30300/303 ... 730373.jpg
+ http://media.vgm.io/albums/00/30300/303 ... 730034.jpg
+ https://pt.wikipedia.org/wiki/Vidro

good luck!

SolarFox

366 posts

Joined February 2012

SolarFox 2017-04-15T07:29:12+00:00

h4d0uk3n1 wrote:
Hello there. From queue
SolarFox's Light Insane
00:05:354 (1,2) - hnnnnnng (blanket) barely noticeable lol, fixed slightly idk if its good
00:15:659 - maybe make snare sound clickable? sure
00:30:086 (3,4) - move them closer to each other (you did so there 00:45:201 (6,1) - ) kk
01:57:109 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - flow there can be improved stacked (3) on (1), I want to keep 01:58:712 (7,1) -
Hope that you'll find something useful. Good luck!

thanksss

code

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Version:SolarFox's Light Insane
Source:Ano Natsu de Matteru
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Sidetail 2017-04-15T08:58:15+00:00

h4d0uk3n1 wrote:
Hello there. From queue

Matsu
00:03:064 (3) - would put nc here, not next circle (00:06:728 (3) - same) Strictly following NC pattern B(
00:26:193 (2,1) - stack maybe? If no, then why 00:26:193 (2,1) - are stacked? fixed to your suggestion but these are the problems that will probably go forever like 00:27:338 (1,5) - after applying your fix xD
00:50:697 (3) - making this bent would be nicer okay fixed.
00:51:155 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - messy Those are okay :l
02:00:773 (1,2,3) - this pattern doesn't look nice fixed.
02:08:560 (2,3,4,5,6) - make this accurate ?? if you're talking about shape. i think you missed out on shape:
02:08:560 (2,3,4) - triangle, 02:09:247 (5,6,7) - another triangle

Rhythm seems fine, hitsounds are great, but object placement feels awkward sometimes. Also check blankets, some of them are not perfect xD Thanks!
Hope that you'll find something useful. Good luck!

DeletedUser_423548

DeletedUser_423548 2017-04-26T13:40:47+00:00

M4M

[Easy]

CS2.5 is better
I am using too much NC
00:03:522 (1,1,1,1,1) - remove NC
00:18:636 (2) - Ctrl+J is better
00:20:010 (4) - Add NC 00:21:384 (1) - remove NC
00:25:048 (1) - remove NC
00:43:827 (1) - It is up to you to fix it
suggesthttp://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7925745 Distance is no problem
00:52:987 (1) - ^
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7925752
00:57:796 (2) - Let's refrain from 1/2 in Easy
00:58:483 - Will you pick up the sound?
01:26:422 (1) - remove NC
01:31:460 (1) -
02:03:980 (2) - bad flow
X:312 Y:196 is better
02:06:270 (1) - stack X:312 Y:196
02:09:476 (2,1) - overlap

[Matsu]

00:10:277 - You can add a circle here
00:15:659 (4,5) - Ctrl+G is better
00:18:865 (2) - Bad position
suggest X:128 Y:276
01:29:628 (1,3) - symmetrical is better
01:33:293 (1,2) - ^
01:47:949 (1) - Ctrl+G is better
01:57:796 (3,5) - Add NC
02:13:598 (1) - Good!

Good luck

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Sidetail 2017-04-26T23:38:46+00:00

Yasaija 714 wrote:
M4M

[Easy]
CS2.5 is better Current is fine
I am using too much NC
00:03:522 (1,1,1,1,1) - remove NC I redone entire NC
00:18:636 (2) - Ctrl+J is better ok
00:20:010 (4) - Add NC 00:21:384 (1) - remove NC
00:25:048 (1) - remove NC
00:43:827 (1) - It is up to you to fix it I like current one
suggesthttp://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7925745 Distance is no problem
00:52:987 (1) - ^ fixed.
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7925752
00:57:796 (2) - Let's refrain from 1/2 in Easy fixed
00:58:483 - Will you pick up the sound? I like current version
01:26:422 (1) - remove NC
01:31:460 (1) -
02:03:980 (2) - bad flowfixed but i didnt use that
X:312 Y:196 is better
02:06:270 (1) - stack X:312 Y:196i wouldnt overlap anything in easy even though it is allowed
02:09:476 (2,1) - overlap fixed

[Matsu]
00:10:277 - You can add a circle here I want to keep it simple :l
00:15:659 (4,5) - Ctrl+G is better i like current
00:18:865 (2) - Bad position
suggest X:128 Y:276 i like current
01:29:628 (1,3) - symmetrical is better fixed
01:33:293 (1,2) - ^ fixed
01:47:949 (1) - Ctrl+G is better if I do that, next set of notes dont follow very well
01:57:796 (3,5) - Add NC keeping NC pattern
02:13:598 (1) - Good! Thanks xD
Good luck

thanks a lot!

elena2705

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elena2705 2017-04-29T19:03:57+00:00

Hi~
I asked me to do mod for you)
So i do

I notice some things that is too prominent.

Easy

01:40:621 (1) - if u do such slider than do it symmetrically;
01:55:277 (3) - here also;
01:44:285 (2) - new combo;
01:46:117 (1) - continue combo;
01:47:949 (1) - new combo;
01:49:781 (1) - continue combo;
01:51:613 (4) - new combo;
01:53:445 (1) - continue combo.

Akitoshi's Normal

01:27:567 (4) - add circle with clap.

Gaia's Hard

Why is there no kiai?
00:19:552 (8,1) - do this sliders parallel to each other;
01:13:827 (1,2,1) - i think it would be better

SolarFox's Light Insane

Why there is also no kiai?
Good diff!
I can't notice something wrong)

Matsu

00:34:667 (1) - correct this slider, a little move dot, so that it will be ideal)

00:43:369 (4,1) - the same;
01:19:323 (2,3) - the same;
01:20:468 (1,2,3) - the same;
01:24:132 (1,2) - the same;
01:47:949 (1,2) - the same;
01:51:613 (1,2) - the same;
02:13:598 (1) - this slider is so awesome!!!

Good luck to rank it!

Mun

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Mun 2017-04-30T01:18:33+00:00

here we go

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Sidetail 2017-04-30T23:13:48+00:00

Mun-key Business

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Sidetail 2017-04-30T23:14:37+00:00

elena2705 wrote:
Easy

01:40:621 (1) - if u do such slider than do it symmetrically; fixed
01:55:277 (3) - here also; looks ok
01:44:285 (2) - new combo; for NC things, i usually strongly stick with nc rhythm unless reading is hard (then I would break the rhythm)
01:46:117 (1) - continue combo;
01:47:949 (1) - new combo;
01:49:781 (1) - continue combo;
01:51:613 (4) - new combo;
01:53:445 (1) - continue combo.

Matsu

00:34:667 (1) - correct this slider, a little move dot, so that it will be ideal) thanks i'll fix some sliders that doesnt look nice.

00:43:369 (4,1) - the same;
01:19:323 (2,3) - the same;
01:20:468 (1,2,3) - the same;
01:24:132 (1,2) - the same;
01:47:949 (1,2) - the same;
01:51:613 (1,2) - the same;
02:13:598 (1) - this slider is so awesome!!! thanks~

Good luck to rank it!

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