Just look at this. A good song, meaningful lyrics and all packed neatly! Feel free to get back to me when the Easy is finished.
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Best of luck!
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- Add the name of the album to the tags? What I've Become it is. If you want to make sure people find it you might as well add have as a separate tag.
- Try Slider Tick Rate 2 or even 4. I believe that the song is asking for more intense rhythm and the difficulty itself uses both 1/4 and 1/2 beats a lot.
- 00:13:319 (4) - try splitting this slider into a slider and a circle? So, there would be a circle on 00:14:008 - and this would let players have something clickable on a strong beat, making the map feel more accurate. Example // 02:25:733 (1) - and something similar here as well.
Note: 00:31:250 (4) - this requires a 1/2 slider as well. So, the word "You" (which is extremely important here) has a circle and gets emphasized properly. - 00:19:526 (1,2,3) - minor - the transition here feels quite broken. How about a softer movement/flow? example
Note: this will require further readjustments, I'm sorry about that. Perhaps, you can figure something better as well? - 00:56:077 (2,3) - the 3/4 gap feels quite tricky and out of the rhythm you have used previously. Is there any way to avoid that tricky gap? Perhaps like this?
- 01:25:733 (1) - minor - it is placed so low it overlaps with that thing that measures accuracy (whatever its name is). Can you place it a bit higher?
- 01:39:526 (1) - the curve kind of slows down the slider making it feel jumbled and pressed. Try to keep it straight or use a simple arc-shaped slider here. The vocals are intense, slider shoud be long and very clearly visible to match them.
Wonderful. A few minor things herre and there, probably the difficulty could get even better from a couple of mods, but it works really well with the song.
- 00:06:939 (4,7) - minor - they could benefit from being parallel. Looks like you intended to make them this way and then something slipped.
Note: 00:53:319 (3,4) - same here. Perhaps you should check and see if there are more patterns like this. - 00:16:767 (1,3) - the aggressive curves make your flow feel crumpled here, they take the space away from player. It does not feel quite natural provided that the rest of the patterning is quite spacious and soft in terms of flow. Perhaps you could use just plain straight sliders instead of these two?
- 00:52:284 (8,1) - point (8) away as to create a more jumpy pattern? Some extra emphasis on (1) wouldn't hurt. example
- 01:32:629 (5,8) - minor - the overlap is visible for a very few moments. Perhaps, you should move the circle lower to prevent that?
Some more emphasis on minor things like 00:57:284 (8,9,10,11) - the guitar appearing and disappearing here could help. It's good to have consistent drum-based rhythm, bu shifting towards stressing other instruments is quite an interesting option you should try for sure. There were also quite a few minor visual flaws. All these things aside you've done agreat job, though it can get even better!
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Best of luck!