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MoonFragrance

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MoonFragrance 2010-09-25T16:12:52+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2010년 10월 27일 수요일 at 오전 2:26:54

Artist: Makou
Title: Fermion
Source: DJMAX
Tags: CRAZYRED Jin TECHNIKA Portable Black Square Trilogy
BPM: 156
Filesize: 8643kb
Play Time: 01:40
Difficulties Available:

Easy (2.59 stars, 119 notes)
Hard (4.93 stars, 241 notes)
Maximum (5 stars, 442 notes)
Normal (4.13 stars, 156 notes)
Taiko (4.83 stars, 695 notes)

Download: Makou - Fermion
Download: Makou - Fermion (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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My 40th map, Completed.

Psychedelic Trance song in DJMAX BLACK SQUARE, Trilogy and TECHNIKA.

Composed by Makou
Visualized by CRAZYRED & Jin

Last edited by MoonFragrance 2010-10-26T17:27:20+00:00, edited 30 times in total.

[Exit]

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[Exit] 2010-09-25T16:25:45+00:00

Always, any time when play your beatmaps, feel so good.

here is my STAR

XD

bmin11

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bmin11 2010-09-25T19:45:03+00:00

현재까지 나온 문프레맵중 가장 재미있는맵!

[Maximum]
01:15:995 (4,5,6,7,8) - 이부분을 테스트로 한번 보세요. 연타가 4번 슬라이더보다 위에 위치하게 되니 연타를 한타한타를 조금씩만 아래로 옮겨서 겹친것이되 겹친것이 아니게 하는게 어떨까요?

쿠도스 모으는대로 별 쏘겠습니다

subarasikibuta

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subarasikibuta 2010-09-26T01:35:20+00:00

real maxium!~ god map

Last edited by subarasikibuta 2010-09-27T05:18:35+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

DeeN

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DeeN 2010-09-26T02:00:30+00:00

GOD Makou
GOD MoonFragrance

MoonFragrance

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MoonFragrance 2010-09-26T08:37:35+00:00

lol Thanks Exit, bmin, 3kinnagi and DeeN

bmin11

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bmin11 2010-09-26T18:10:41+00:00

모았다긔!

Rex

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Rex 2010-09-27T05:29:19+00:00

Ra-s

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Ra-s 2010-09-28T14:53:48+00:00

dNextGen

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dNextGen 2010-10-01T05:36:44+00:00

MoonFragrance maps always awesome

Lanttu

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Lanttu 2010-10-01T11:26:59+00:00

Awesome. ・u ・

[Shalon]

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[Shalon] 2010-10-01T12:41:47+00:00

00:00:616 (1) - 이 스핀을 00:01:962 여기서 시작하심이?

00:33:885 (9) - 일반노트 3개로 채우는 게 좋을 것 같네요.

01:09:847 (13) - 여기는 노멀 노트로 채워도 될 것 같네요.

[color=#000000]( K KKK K D D K, 첫 노트는 01:09:654 에서 시작으로.)

아니면 01:09:847 - 저 노트를 흰 틱에서 끝내시고 뒤에 짧은 연타를 삭제하고

finish 노트 하나로 채워도 좋을 것 같습니다.01:16:000 (7) - 저거 삭제하고 그 앞에 흰 틱에서부터 해서

일반노트 3개씩 박아도 될 것 같습니다.[/color]

* 모든 모딩사항은 제안입니다. 기술적인 오류가 아니라면, 패턴은 맵퍼의 자유니까요.

green - suggestion

blue - minor issue

red - important, or technicdal error

wmfchris

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wmfchris 2010-10-01T12:47:55+00:00

[taiko]
don't like that very much with some 1/6 overused ._.
anyway it's ok for me

[Max]
1:16:000 (4,5,6,7,8) strange spacing between (4,5)... better even spacing or stack them together?

[hard]
0:05:424 (4) down 1 grid
0:06:962 (3) ^
0:23:885 (2) spacing
0:42:154 (1) considering slider spacing, left 1 grid?

star~

aRiskOfRain

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aRiskOfRain 2010-10-02T00:10:16+00:00

Normal;

00:34:077 - Why do I feel like something should be in this gap

Hard;

00:55:616 (3) - Don't have these sliders ovelap completely kthx

Maximum;

Could you use something a little faster than 0.5 sections?

MoonFragrance

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MoonFragrance 2010-10-02T02:52:02+00:00

fixed :3

Tanmak

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Tanmak 2010-10-02T16:23:03+00:00

Good.
I like this music

Musty

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Musty 2010-10-02T16:27:46+00:00

Huhuhuhu Moon~

I Like the song

[Easy]

~~Re-Name in NM ( Normal? ) That was epic for a Easy xD~~

I think :"Slider Tick Rate : 1"

00:07:347 - Add A circle? :3
00:10:424 - Delete Circle and add Sliders in 1/1

[Normal]

Totally AWESOME!

but it's a little Hard for a Normal : Suggestion : Normal+? :3

[Taiko]

00:19:366 - Add Circle?
00:26:770 (14) - Clap? :3

[Hard]

00:51:193 (1) - Delete Spinner and add likes :

[Maximum

TOTALLY AWESOME

General : AWESOME, but , any littles errors ;3

STAR~~

MoonFragrance

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MoonFragrance 2010-10-02T16:35:23+00:00

Mustaash wrote:
Huhuhuhu Moon~

I Like the song

[Easy]

I think :"Slider Tick Rate : 1"
- i think tick rate should be same with other diffs.

[Normal]

but it's a little Hard for a Normal : Suggestion : Normal+? :3
- i don't like diff naming like that D:

[Taiko]

00:19:366 - Add Circle?
00:26:770 (14) - Clap? :3
- i think they are okay <_<

[Hard]

00:51:193 (1) - Delete Spinner and add likes :
- i don't like slider like that

others all fixed, thanks for modding, Mustaash :3
and thanks for the star, Tanmak >_<

Dangaard

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Dangaard 2010-10-02T20:12:03+00:00

[general]

reconvert the video with disabled audio, and maybe higher quality
I would set the very last timing section as 0% volume. [Maximum] might be a problem, playing a 0% beat just feels weird, so another option is to make the map end at the blue tick right before your current end.

[Easy]

~~00:28:116 - there are 2 time sections overlapping~~ I see, 1ms difference just for the kiai fountain . But then you should fix the sections at 00:58:885 to fit this structure. (Fix this on [Normal] as well)

[Taiko]

I'm not sure about taiko rules, but using more than 3 unique slider speeds is unrankable on osu mode, and an this difficulty got 10 different slider speeds. Though, the slow speed up really looks fun on taiko mode, so I support this slider speed setup.
Why does this difficulty has different kiai settings (=full sections using kiai mode)?

Really awesome map

Zetsubou Sensei

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Zetsubou Sensei 2010-10-02T22:11:45+00:00

Hey. (lol you always return for me to mod something else xD ...Awesome!)

[Easy]
Seems fine.

[Normal]
00:17:731 (3) - move up 1 grid
00:20:808 (3) - move up & left by 1 grid (diagonally left... >.> whatever way you see it =P)
00:23:500 (1,2) - ^ same thing
00:29:077 (2,3) - move 1 gird right
00:32:924 (4,5) - move1 grid up
00:57:577 (2) - move 1 grid left
01:01:692 (1) - move 1 grid left
01:17:173 (3) - move 1 grid up
01:34:654 (5,6,7) - move 1 grid right (for 7 its also 1 up)
01:36:770 (3,4) - move 1 grid left
Adjust anywhere else needed that i missed... =P

[Taiko]
Don't mod teh Taiko's...

[Hard]
Seems fine.

[Maximum]
You and your maximum's lol xD
00:11:289 (2) - on the repeat switch the whistle for a clap (it sounds better to me...Check it and see =P)
Seems fine.

~STAR (GOOD LUCK)

James2250

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James2250 2010-10-02T23:45:31+00:00

-The background would look better if it was a 4:3 ratio, try and resize it
-Include a hitcircle approach circle from the template skin in the folder
-I agree with silencing the end if you are keeping it like that

Easy:
I would say OD + 1, AR -1 for easiest difficulty, but doesn't really matter
00:22:347 (1) - remove new combo to match combo before this

Normal:
~~4,13 star Normal?~~
Slightly high AR for a Normal
00:01:962 - remove break like Easy? (or Add a break in Easy) - I like the spinner on the other difficulties but might be too hard for Normal
00:11:193 (2,3,4) - stuff like this isn't meant to be aligned right?
Don't need to nazi placement really, you can change some of them from post above if you want

Taiko:
What, is that stuff at the end really rankable (2x bpm) I can barely see it
Also idk about 3+ slider thing for taiko either, go bug taiko person

Hard:
looks good

Maximum:
Nice

*star*

Joon

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Joon 2010-10-03T00:39:59+00:00

hi

my modding

[Normal]
00:33:116 (5) - End Notes add clap

I see it. Hit Sound is not the problem.
MoonF fan~ >_<

MoonFragrance

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MoonFragrance 2010-10-03T08:28:59+00:00

Fixed :3
but i tried to slience the MV, but the size of MV was bigger D:

Thanks for modding, all XD

Cyril Scarlet

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Cyril Scarlet 2010-10-03T08:29:20+00:00

(ﾉﾟωﾟ)ﾉ ~~

MoonFragrance

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MoonFragrance 2010-10-03T08:55:40+00:00

>_<

NatsumeRin

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NatsumeRin 2010-10-05T03:04:15+00:00

Red: You must fix this.
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.

[General]
BG is 1024*576... consider to change to a 1024*768/800*600 one. now it has some problems...

[Easy]
01:37:347 (3,4) - maybe don't stack them... change to sth like this?

01:40:424 (1) - finish?

[Normal]
00:29:077 (2,3) - i prefer to make 2 - 1 grid up+ 1 grid right, 3 - grid down, it curves better then.
01:22:924 (4) - remove whistle at the end.
01:23:885 (2) - switch whistle at the reverse and the end.
01:40:424 (1) - finish?

[Hard]
suggest slider tick rate:1 for this diff, since you used many 3/4 sliders.
00:36:692 & 00:37:154 - add notes?
01:40:616 (1) - finish?

[Maximum]
HP-1.
slider tick rate:1
01:04:654 (5) - new combo on this one, since there's a obvious sound change here, maybe it could get better effect?

[Taiko]
very nice. but a bit hard wwww

nice map as always.

Leorda

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Leorda 2010-10-05T12:18:00+00:00

Annyong

[General]
Delete.......OSB.........please.........

[Easy]
00:12:347 (4) - New combo?
00:31:193 (3) - ^
00:37:347 (4) - ^
00:41:577 (3,4) - This is difficult for begginer player
00:44:654 (3,4) - ^
00:47:731 (3,4) - ^
01:33:500 (2,4) - Do not stack these, begginer player will confusing with those stacks

[Normal]
No no no no no, the Approach Rate is too high, maybe decrease it? Only 1 or 2 tick?

[Taiko]
01:11:193 (14) - This short yellow bar are annoying
01:11:770 (1) - Short denden? I think it's teribble for me, I guess~ @_@..... Can you extend it?
01:16:000 (7) - This short yellow bar are annoying

[Hard]
Fine~

[Maximum]
01:04:366 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - This object is LOTS of stacking, spread them (don't stack) please
01:40:423 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - This combo are toooo long, crop it?

Nice song
STAR

L i a

L i a 2010-10-05T13:36:13+00:00

Gonzvlo

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Gonzvlo 2010-10-06T18:27:07+00:00

General

COOL~
Delete "....osb" file and full submit.

Easy

00:31:193 (3) - Use New Combo here or the combo will be too long for an [Easy].
01:38:116 (5) - Place this somewhere else, It might be confusing for beginner players.

Great, Star~

Skyblue_old_1

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Skyblue_old_1 2010-10-11T08:16:44+00:00

랭크 기원합니당

Sure

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Sure 2010-10-19T15:38:31+00:00

Nice map

Go Go MoonFraChan

heintsi

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heintsi 2010-10-19T16:25:24+00:00

Awesome :O

lepidopodus

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lepidopodus 2010-10-19T16:56:14+00:00

Seems some MATs pointed SV changes in Taiko map. Well, that 3 custom SV rule isn't suit well with Taiko only maps so go on.
Random Taiko mod.

Taiko
00:14:270 (1) - Currently discussion about this kind of spinner is on-going. I mean, the spinner which is too close (1/4) to the next note. My personal preference is 'make at least 1/2 apart', though.
00:18:885 (1) - change to normal note? I mean, not big note, as it's not that impressive than 00:15:808 (1) & 00:25:039 (1)?
00:21:962 (1) - ^, then add k in 00:21:866?
00:31:193 (1) - change to normal note, with similar reason with 00:18:885 (1).
00:34:270 (1) - ^
00:40:039 (10,11,12,13,14,15,1) - kkkkkkd?
00:46:193 (19) - k?
01:11:193 (14) - I don't like this slider actually. Maybe ddddk would be better.
01:16:000 (7) - If you want to make it harder, how about adding ddd kkdk in 01:15:808 ~ 01:16:481.
01:41:577 (17,18,19,20,21,22,23) - Maybe kkkk (1/4) would be better. And I think it would be better to place nothing in 01:41:962, even if you didn't change this to 1/4s.

Well, that's all, all suggestions. Those 1/6 parts can be weird but possible interesting patterns so it's up to you. (except 00:40:039, as there are actual 1/6 sound.)

EDIT: Ok, I can fc that end x2 part anyway.

Mukku

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Mukku 2010-10-19T20:02:06+00:00

Funking awesome

Hanyuu

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Hanyuu 2010-10-23T20:47:01+00:00

good job

yeahyeahyeahhh

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