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S.I.D sound - Loop (PV Size)

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xswcdevfr177
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Joined March 2010
xswcdevfr177

Mesme wrote:

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2010年10月13日 at 下午 10:39:26

Artist: Pul Beo Jeon
Title: Loop (PV Size)
Source: Tartaros Online
BPM: 160
Filesize: 13522kb
Play Time: 01:51
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (4.35 stars, 200 notes)
  2. Normal (2.87 stars, 130 notes)
Download: Pul Beo Jeon - Loop (PV Size)
Download: Pul Beo Jeon - Loop (PV Size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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This map is from online game-Tartaros.
Enjoy!



阿思藻藻我愛你
jinxlin
3 posts
Joined December 2008
jinxlin
藻藻超棒！！！（嚼
Charles445
Elite Mapper II: Aspirant / osu! Paragon
2,881 posts
Joined March 2009
Charles445
Mod time

General
Nice skin!
Offset 3,092

Normal
SPOILER
Tickrate 1
00:12:092 New Combo
00:19:592 Remove New Combo
00:21:092 New Combo
00:25:592 Remove New Combo
00:27:092 New Combo
00:48:092 Remove New Combo
01:33:092 New Combo

Hard
SPOILER
00:18:092 New Combo
00:19:592 Remove New Combo
00:24:092 New Combo
00:25:592 Remove New Combo
00:27:092 New Combo
00:28:592 Remove New Combo
00:30:092 New Combo
00:54:842 Move this to 00:54:654 and position it like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/31051
01:01:217 New Combo
01:02:342 Remove New Combo
01:03:092 New Combo
01:04:967 Remove New Combo
01:06:092 New Combo
01:10:592 Remove New Combo

This map is extremely well done and extremely awesome.
Star for you.
Mesme
57 posts
Joined March 2010
Topic Starter
Mesme
Thanks a lot :D
I'll check my map and give kudosu at first but not reply and re-edit map right away.
Last edited by Mesme , edited 2 times in total.
Joon
1,359 posts
Joined June 2009
Joon
hi

my modding


[Normal]
00:06:064 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - change soft sound and add to some of the whistle.
00:27:064 (3) - Start Notes add finish
01:45:064 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - change soft sound and add to some of the whistle.

[Hard]
00:06:064 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - change soft sound and add to some of the whistle.
00:18:814 (8) - remove clap. it awkward
00:21:064 (1) - add finish
00:25:751 (2,3,4) - change finish
00:31:376 (6) - remove clap
00:32:126 (8,9) - change finish
00:46:751 (5) - End Notes add clap
00:49:564 (4) - Middle Notes add clap
00:51:064 (1) - Start Notes add finish
00:55:939 (5) - End Notes add clap
01:45:064 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - change soft sound and add to some of the whistle.

lol TARTAROS online~ 타르타로스 온라인
sos333995566
1 post
Joined December 2008
sos333995566
It's gooooooooood
Mesme
57 posts
Joined March 2010
Topic Starter
Mesme
>>xswcdevfr177、jinxlin
Love you too :lol:

>>sos333995566
Thank you and your star! Hope you like this song :D

>>Charles445
Done.
Thank you for your mod!!!

>>Joon
I guess maybe you know this game? :)
Thanks your sound mod, it better than before!
Verdisphena
4,240 posts
Joined June 2010
Verdisphena
Mai mod:


Only 2 diffs? lazy

Hard :
Plz, fix this
Orz
All of these errors
00:33:092 (1) - Spacing
01:19:592 (6) - ^


Normal :

Fine ~
Kiddo-Kun
1,014 posts
Joined May 2009
Kiddo-Kun
Mod ~ Just liked you asked.

[Normal]
Hp drain +2 or +1?
Same for OD
00:06:092 - Random Inheriting section :S. Delete it. Use the first timing section.
00:08:342 (4) - Move this please. This not being under the 6 properly makes it look ugly and unreadable.
00:25:967 (6) - Move one grid down to align with 5.
00:30:092 (5) - Maybe end this one the red tick (00:31:404)
00:57:092 (1) - Add finish on slider start?

Fine. The overlapping notes piss me off though.

[Hard]
Hp Drain +4!?
Overall difficulty+3!?
00:05:998 - Again with the random section :S.
00:39:092 - Map this!? The break in easy is much better.
01:44:342 - Another useless section.

Nicer diff.

Overall: You shouldn't use Catmull :3 Looks kinda strange. Nice firs map ^^

STAR~
Meiri
233 posts
Joined June 2010
Meiri
Hi Mesme ~
This Is It :D

SPOILER
Normal
00:44:342 (7) - Add Clap ?
00:45:842 (1) - ^ ?
00:46:217 (2) - Remove Clap ?
00:46:592 (3) - ^ ?
00:53:342 (4) - Add Clap ?
00:53:717 (4) - Remove Clap ?
00:54:842 (5) - Add Clap ?
00:55:217 (6) - Remove Clap ?
00:56:342 (7) - Add Clap ?
00:57:842 (1) - ^ ?
00:58:217 (2) - Remove Clap ?
00:59:342 (5) - Add Clap ?
00:59:717 (6) - Remove Clap ?
01:03:842 (1) - Add Clap ?
01:05:342 (4) - ^ ?
01:05:717 (4) - Remove Clap ?
01:06:842 (2) - Add Clap ?
01:07:217 (2) - Remove Clap ?
01:08:342 (5) - Add Clap ?
01:08:904 (6) - Remove Clap ?
01:09:842 (2) - Add Clap ?
01:10:217 (3) - Remove Clap ?
01:10:592 (4) - Add Clap ?
01:12:842 (2) - Add Clap ?
01:13:217 (2) - Remove Clap ?
01:15:842 (2) - Add Clap ?
01:16:217 (3) - Remove Clap ?
01:17:717 (5) - ^ ?
01:18:857 (3) - Add Clap ?
01:19:217 (4) - Remove Clap ?
01:20:342 (5) - Add Clap ?
01:20:717 (6),(7),(1) - Remove Clap ?
01:21:842 (2) - Add Clap ?
01:23:342 (3) - ^ ?
01:24:842 (2) - Add Clap And Remove Clap At The End ?
01:27:842 (2) - Add Clap ?
01:29:342 (5) - Add Clap And Remove Clap At The End ?
01:30:842 (1) - Add Clap ?
01:37:217 (2) - ^ ?

SPOILER
Hard
00:38:717 (6) - Remove Finish & Add Clap ?
00:57:842 (3) - Add Clap ?
00:59:342 (7) - ^ ?
Other Seems Fine ~

Hard Is My Favorite Diff :D
Good HitSound, Skin You Know :D

Okay, I Think That's All . .
Thank You And Hope It'll Usefull For You :D
Disoy
209 posts
Joined February 2010
Disoy
首先你的圖綠線要加在note前 不能加在note 可是這裡有點問題的是
你的圖改過offset? 因為你的綠線沒對到線阿...
還有你的normal的silder curve type是不是調成了S了? 有點不是很好看的說..
做的還不錯 繼續加油^ ^

[Normal]
00:08:342 (4) - 這裡有遮擋阿..建議對Normal來說這裡改給位置
00:23:717 (3) - 加個hitclap?
00:24:092 (4) - 加個hitfinish?
00:25:967 (6) - 往下移一格跟(5)對齊
00:27:092 (1) - 不太明白為啥這裡開始Audio變成Soft了..
00:30:092 (5) - 從這裡之後的Break time有點不太好...建議那邊要做
00:58:217 (2) - 從這裡之後的Circle可以排的整齊點
01:14:342 (4,5) - 建議疊在一起
01:34:592 (3) - 這裡之後的KIAI為啥要去掉? 應該要把後面的spinner的KIAI變到這裡

[Hard]
00:09:654 (3) - circle換到00:09:842這裡?
00:19:217 (3) - 加個new combo
00:20:717 (5) - ^
00:21:092 (1) - 上面new combo加完後這裡的new combo去掉
00:50:717 (5) - 加個note?
01:04:967 (4) - 這裡new combo
01:33:842 (2) - 這裡silder尾巴沒對好
01:34:592 (3) - 這裡同Normal難度一樣
IceBeam
osu! Alumni
1,957 posts
Joined December 2009
IceBeam
[Easy]
I suggest you to fix Offsets on Timing Sections.
00:25:967 (6) - This slider is completely out.Change to reverse-slider with next notes: (00:26:154,00:26:529,00:26:904)
00:50:709 - Remove finish and add to 00:51:092 (1).
01:20:904 (7) - Delete this note,it doesn't really fit,I was confused by it while playing.

[Hard]
00:50:717 - I'd add another note here(probably another repeat to reverse-slider).
01:30:092 (1) - Ah what the..sudden jump? Fairly it doesn't fit,moreover you didn't used jumps through the map,so fix distance.

Nice map,star~
Gonzvlo
osu! Alumni
2,896 posts
Joined January 2010
Gonzvlo
General:
  1. Since you changed your offset, you should move all your timing sections, so those are placed on a white tick.
  2. Draw a little circle on the center of "spinner-circle.png" It looks better while spinning.
  3. Resize "spinner-circle.png" to 666x666.
  4. Try to get a bigger wallpaper (800x600).
  5. You need to add "approachcircle.png" , Even if it's the default one.
  6. Tags "Tartaros" is Ok, But delete "online" because it's too generic.

Normal:
  1. 00:08:342 (4,5,6) - Move (6) at least 6 grids down, so It wont overlap with (4) & (5).
  2. 01:21:092 (1,2) - Move (2) Away.
  3. 00:09:092 (6,7) - This kind of jumps are a nono [Easy]&[Normal] , Fix spacing.
  4. You should work more on your sliders, besides the indicated above, this difficulty is fine.
Hard:
  1. Change tick rate, "1" will work.
  2. 00:21:842 (4,5,6) - Spacing is not constant. Fix it.
  3. 00:34:404 (3) - I can't see this circle while playing, Move it under the end of (2).
I can't say I love the map but you did a good work, I hope to see more from you. Star~
Mesme
57 posts
Joined March 2010
Topic Starter
Mesme
Sorry for the late reply :P

>Verdisphena
Yes I 'm lazy :P
Thanks for your moding!
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>Kiddo-Kun
Done.
HP-Drain and OD are change to more star :D
Thanks a lot!

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>- Peaceful Melody -
Thanks for your sound moding!

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>Disoy
看到中文replay嚇了一跳 :P
嗯Offset再前面被指正過了所以....沒注意到綠線跑掉了.
另外曲線也改回D了,感謝指正 :)
不過Normal的break time的部份我想保留著....目前找不到其他地方放~.~
Anyway, 感謝!

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>IceBeam
All done!
Thanks for your mod!

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>Gonzvlo
Done!
But I'm confused on TAG, I didn't put any word here before so that means remove from the source?
Even though you doesn't like but still thanks for your mod!
Gonzvlo
osu! Alumni
2,896 posts
Joined January 2010
Gonzvlo

Mesme wrote:

>Gonzvlo
Done!
But I'm confused on TAG, I didn't put any word here before so that means remove from the source?
Even though you doesn't like but still thanks for your mod!
Oh Sorry

I misread, Don't delete anything. Oh I do like the map but you still have to work on your sliders (: <3
eveless
2,080 posts
Joined April 2009
eveless
改变音量、切换NS音效的绿线都要提前放..因为有人会打快 然后可能就会出现奇怪的声音..hard好像解决了这问题不过normal还残留着

[Hard]
00:20:904 (2) - 删掉clap
00:25:592 (5) - 换finish
00:31:779 (4,5) - 这两个的音效互相换一下
01:26:529 (3) - 换finish
01:36:092 (1) - 这个的位置不太好 可以关掉DS再移
01:45:092 (1) - 开头加finish
01:45:842 (3) - 加whistle
01:46:404 (5) - ^
01:47:154 (7) - ^
01:48:092 (1,2,3) - 尾巴上加wh...可以让它们的音量越来越弱

[Normal]
00:16:592 (2) - 前后spacing不一致
00:30:092 (5) - 要么往前移到白线 要么往后移到白线...
00:40:217 (2) - 前后spacing不一致
00:41:717 (4) - ^
01:26:154 (5) - spacing
Mesme
57 posts
Joined March 2010
Topic Starter
Mesme
>Gonzvlo
OK, I see :D Thanks!

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>eveless
Normal綠線的部份修改好了，感謝^ ^
spacing也修正完畢

Hard某部份音效我不想改, 個人覺得聽起來有點怪怪的, 不好意思 :?
Mod感謝 :3
kanpakyin
Global Moderator
4,231 posts
Joined June 2010
kanpakyin
Mod....
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Blue=Just suggestion
ReD=I think you should fix this

[Normal]
00:10:552(8)add a whistle?
00:12:152(1)up 2 grid?
01:18:491(2)add a clap?
01:24:836(2)up 2 grid

[Hard]
00:19:155(1.2.3.4)spacing(it's far in hard)
01:29:943(7)remove clap
0.0
nice.star~
Mesme
57 posts
Joined March 2010
Topic Starter
Mesme
>kanpakyin
Well...I think I'll keep those jump of notes in Hard diff. Sorry D:
But still thanks for your mod. ;)
Louis Cyphre
2,684 posts
Joined October 2009
Louis Cyphre
Spinner Circle isn't perfect

[Normal]
00:09:092 - whistle at start
00:15:092 - finish at start
00:24:092 - ^
00:27:092 - ^
00:39:092 - ^
00:45:092 - ^
00:57:092 - ^
01:01:779 - cut this slider and make from 01:01:779 extend 01:01:967, add finish at end and put note at 01:02:342
01:06:092 - finish at start
01:09:092 - ^ ... well, please recheck whole map and add some finish sounds ._.

Take this sections and add finished on [Hard] too.

but anyway nice map and skin ^_~
Sekuyi
181 posts
Joined December 2009
Sekuyi
Hi, normally I only accept requests through pm, but I kinda like this song...

[General]
- Skin is very nice! Think about skinning the scores too.

[Normal]
- 00:06:092 ~ (1,2,3,4) 2 grids to the right
- 00:13:592 ~ new combo
- 00:18:092 ~ (4,5) up 1 grid
- 00:31:779 ~ remove the break and map it?
- 00:44:717 ~ place a circle here?
- 00:49:592 ~ up 1 grid
- 01:02:717 ~ place a circle here?
- 01:02:717 ~ move kiai start to 01:03:092, like it is in [Hard]
- 01:10:592 ~ (4) let the slider break out to the left instead to the right. It doesn't look good with so many notes in one place

[Hard]
Maybe OA Diff+1 or +2? It should be hard, right ;) ?

Have a star ^^ *
Mesme
57 posts
Joined March 2010
Topic Starter
Mesme
:D

>>Louis Cyphre
Well...I try to repair the spinner circle picture, hope it would be better now ^ ^
And some finish sounds are added!
Thanks for your sound hit of mod, All fixed!

>>Sekuyi
Oh, I'm so sorry that didn't noticed your rules, sorry >_<
Some advice are fixed, and the break time in Normal diff .....>_>
Hmm...Is it OK to remove the only break time from Normal diff?
Because some of my friend will complained that they will feel tired when the map doesn't have any break time.
So...I think I will keep this. Sorry D:

Well, Hard diff is add OA diff more than before :)
Finally, Thanks for your mod! :3
Tatsuo
575 posts
Joined January 2009
Tatsuo
Hai, here's my mod~

[Overall]
Make an easy difficulty under three stars good sir.

[Normal]
Fine~

[Hard]
Good.

Just make an easy.
Star.
wmfchris
osu! Alumni
5,072 posts
Joined March 2008
wmfchris
[hard]As you're using 1.0 x throughout the song, try to make it 1.0x also at the beginning?
0:09:654 (3) right 1 grid
0:20:717 (1,2,3)uneven spacing, (4,5,6,7)uneven spacing
0:28:592 (4) down 1 grid
0:32:529 (6) up 1 grid
0:35:154 (5) down 1 grid
0:43:592 (4,5,6,7) form a rhombus / square? Position of (7) is weird.
1:00:654 (4) right 1 grid

[Normal]
fine.

nice BG and song, star
Mesme
57 posts
Joined March 2010
Topic Starter
Mesme
:D

>I_Tatsuo_I
Hmm...I prefer to reduce the difficulty of Normal diff as less 3 star.
I think it quite easily now so... Is it really need a Easy diff?
Thanks for your mod. ;)


>wmfchris
1.0x distance spacing ALL DONE!
Other advices are all done, too.
Thanks for your mod! :D
Hijiri Tezuka
313 posts
Joined March 2010
Hijiri Tezuka
Hello!
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Normal:
00:19:967 - Note here plz
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Hard:
For a hard it has a very low drain rate. Increse a bit plz
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I likied the song and the maps, so have a star and best of luck!
Soaprman
1,392 posts
Joined January 2008
Soaprman
Nothing to complain about here! Good show!
Mesme
57 posts
Joined March 2010
Topic Starter
Mesme
:D

>Hijiri Tezuka
All done, thanks a lot :)

>Soaprman
Wow!thanks!! :D
eldnl
Former osu!catch Champion: 2013
2,930 posts
Joined March 2010
eldnl
[General]

[*] You could make a 5 star difficulty (I do not think is necessary easy difficulty, you have the "normal" and is quite easy.)


[Normal]

Fixed the sliders (as in the example)

HP+1

00:13:592 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) You can redo this combo? (Try to make your song is more attractive :$)
01:45:842 (1) Whistle
01:49:592 (7)^

Example:

SPOILER




[Hard]

Circle size +1

00:07:217 (2) Whistle
00:10:592 (5)^
00:24:467 (2) Clap
00:25:029 Add a note + Clap
00:25:217 (4) Clap the entire slider
00:26:998 (10) Clap
00:32:998 (8)^
00:59:717 (1) Remove new combo
01:00:092 Add new combo here.
01:46:217 (4) Whistle
01:49:404 (4,5) Whistle



It's a good song, take it !

star :)
kino77
909 posts
Joined March 2009
kino77
做的不错耶~

[Normal]
01:43:217 - 消音消的太突然了,做个减弱?
01:03:092 - 感觉这部分没必要加音量

[Hard]
00:41:342 (3,4) - 怎么不跳了这?
00:42:842 (3) - 减少一次重复?
00:50:717 (5) - 放到4的上面去?这个跳有点夸张啦...
01:08:717 (6,7) - 靠近下一个1一些?毕竟是三连
01:27:092 - 感觉这部分没必要加音量
01:43:217 - 消音消的太突然了,做个减弱?

加星咯~~
Mesme
57 posts
Joined March 2010
Topic Starter
Mesme
:D

>eldnl
5 star diff....hmm, I'll take a look it. :D
Normal diff's slider all done, Hard diff's sound-hit all done,too.
Thanks for your mod! It's really good work :D



>kino77
謝謝 :)
normal部份修改好了.
Hard部份：一些跳有修改掉, 那個不跳的我故意想保留著 :D
其他的修改過了~
謝謝你的mod ;)
lepidopodus
3,548 posts
Joined November 2009
lepidopodus
Overall
- Wait, wait. you got a wrong artist name. 'Pul Beo Jeon' means 'Full version' in Korean. Change the artist name to 'S.I.D sound'. (Please ask fellow mappers if you don't know how to do it.)

Normal
00:16:592 (2,3) - How about making these to one slider, like 00:15:092 (1)?
00:48:092 (5) - This slider is somewhat strange. (Look at near the end of the slider carefully.) Please remake the slider.
00:59:717 (6) - How about moving one grid up and one grid left?

Hard
00:22:217 (1,2) - How about a circle in 00:22:217, and a slider in 00:22:404 which ends 00:22:967?
00:31:404 (2~7) - How about stack 3 in the end of the 2, and make jumps (mild or rough, you choose.) between 3~4, 4~5, 5~6, 6~7?
00:42:842 (3) - How about moving this to 00:43:029?
01:17:904 (4) - How about removing clap?
01:32:904 (8) - ^

Ok, star here.
Mesme
57 posts
Joined March 2010
Topic Starter
Mesme
:)

>lepidopodus
Thanks for check the artist's name! :)
I don't understand the Korea language, and I feel so confused but no idea, you really give me a big help of that!

Some suggests you give which is changed, but also some part I use on my thinking.
Finally, thanks for your mod!
James2250
osu! Alumni
4,059 posts
Joined July 2008
James2250
(PV size)?
Include a hitcircle approach circle (from the template skin) in your folder

Normal:
AR - 1 for easiest difficulty?
01:39:092 (1) - sounds odd where to ends I would end it at 01:43:779 and silence it like Hard

Hard:
00:41:904 (5,1) - jump doesn't fit
00:55:029 (3,4,5,6) - keep spacing equal
01:08:904 (7,1) - don't really like jump here
01:32:717 (7,8,1) - keep spacing equal

Nice
*star*
Mesme
57 posts
Joined March 2010
Topic Starter
Mesme

James2250 wrote:

(PV size)?
Because this song have another version (full version), and in this map I choose the PV version that is from official video. :D
So, I think it should be use the title "PV Size" to separated them.

And all fixed there!
Thanks for your mod :)
Sandpig
847 posts
Joined September 2010
Sandpig
hi :D

(>'(oo)')> my mod <('(oo)'<)

sry for modding late...


Hard

00:22:404 (9,1) - 这样的排列给我的感觉是这里要停顿一下的意思……为什么不直接把那一串接到slider上……
01:49:404 (4,5) - 感觉这里的距离和前面保持一致好些



Normal

01:16:592 (4,5) - 好像整张图只有这一个地方stack了?建议还是分开吧
01:47:529 - 唔，这里音量减得太突然了……其实最后这部分音量可以高一点，最后几个note再去做渐变


很好了，去要泡吧 8-)
Mesme
57 posts
Joined March 2010
Topic Starter
Mesme
:D

>shabao_pig
修改好了~~謝謝:3
泡泡我來了 :lol:
deepsea
osu! Alumni
855 posts
Joined April 2008
deepsea
Normal:
I don't like the map that notes crowded all together. If you place notes too crowded that makes map harder to read.
But it isn't problem though and seems 90% of EZ maps are like that hmm...
Hard:
01:49:40(4)(5) I feel this is 1/4 instead of 1/2 when I first play this. Adjust the distance?
Mesme
57 posts
Joined March 2010
Topic Starter
Mesme
Sorry for late.

>deepsea
嗯...我不太確定你說的1/4跟1/2是什麼意思orz 不過變速那邊我還是改掉了
Thanks for your mod. ^^

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And finally I decide to make a diff with 5 star.
Let's move to WIP :3
DJPop
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You should map an easy diff too.

The easiest diff now has 3 star which is too hard for beginner imo.
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