Dreamtwolf wrote:

Please credit the artist of the background

• Teardrop by NanoMortis

SPOILER

"YOU CAN USE MY ART FOR:wallpaper/facebook/tumblr/pinterest /...wherever the heck you want....

I really don't mind as long as you link back here."

Source of Background: http://nanomortis.deviantart.com/art/Teardrop-480623104

I'm going to warn people at least for this.

credited in desc, thank you very much

Now checking my mod looks like I was pretty tired or something it looks...interesting at parts. Gotta also love how I wasted like half of the space making comments about triples I would map while knowing you probably mapped vocals or something else lol. Anyways I'm gonna try to catch you in-game for the parts you didn't understand later. Might be hard cuz of time differences tho.

i pmed u ingame just so u know who it is

00:41:497 (2) - i feel this and 00:41:926 (4) - and 00:42:354 (1) - are a little too close to the previous slider, the jumps before it were big and its still the same section of the song basically so it would make sense if these were similar distances apart

00:47:497 (6) - this stream is like in the hp drain bar idk if thats ok

01:04:641 (2) - think this stream beginning is too close to the previous slider, maybe move the whole stream to the left and rotate it slightly counterclockwise so it doesnt go off the map

01:31:497 (5) - snap this slider end to the next blue tick before the white tick like this
it goes with the vocals more which i think thats what u were goin for

01:45:783 (1) - id make this repeat slider until the next stream starts

01:51:069 (2) - maybe put a note somewhere on the white tick after this so it doesnt just stop the flow of movement in the middle of the music section

02:00:354 (2) - from here to the end of this slider 02:02:354 (7) - move them a little to the right, since the beginning note (the 2) is a little too close to the previous slider

02:02:926 (1) - start a new combo here making this 02:04:497 (6) - the last note of the combo

02:12:354 (1) - id have this end on the white tick right before the spinner, having it where u stopped it it kinda awkward

02:49:783 (1) - put a slider after this maybe under the end of it and pointing it towards the next slider, it feels awkward just stopping there

03:18:354 (1) - new combo, 03:18:783 (1) - new combo, 03:19:211 (1) - new combo, and maybe add some notes after it so it doesnt stop there just because the vocals stop

04:32:273 (1) - id make this the start for the next combo after it so that 04:33:416 (9) - ends on a 9 and this combo ends here 04:32:131 (7)

05:10:130 (9) - have this end with a 9 and the new combo start on the slider

05:10:416 (1) - and with the next combo have it end on this 05:11:844 (8) - then make it so these 6 notes 05:12:130 (1) - are a NC

05:28:987 (1) - NC

05:37:273 (1) - no NC here

05:41:273 (2) - it shouldnt just stop here like that after the slider somehow keep the rhythm going here

05:52:702 (2) - same here but this could easily be fixed by just putting a cirlce on the white tick after it

06:00:987 (4) - put a circle instead of a slider and move the spinner to the blue tick before the white tick it was previously on and extend it to the red tick it ended on previously

06:10:129 (8) - starting from here and maybe on the stream before it, the new combos start at weird spots so go back and mess around with a few of them so the new combos go with the rhythm

06:28:416 (1) - have a NC here and 06:29:559 (1) - here

ill go ahead and shoot ur map a kudosu since i rly like it so i hope at least some of this stuff wasnt too picky and helped u ;;

Hi hi~

Hey!
Here's my little mod from #modreqs





Alright that's it. I hope that will help you improve your map (which is already really good imo).
Good luck and have a nice day(or night)

uhh not sure what u were talkin bout with the NCs but fixed a few things, thanks for the hp bar issue didnt c that at all

TheKingHenry wrote:

Now checking my mod looks like I was pretty tired or something it looks...interesting at parts. Gotta also love how I wasted like half of the space making comments about triples I would map while knowing you probably mapped vocals or something else lol. Anyways I'm gonna try to catch you in-game for the parts you didn't understand later. Might be hard cuz of time differences tho.

sweet yeah see if you can pm me anytime

Rabbit Urabe

thanks! in a lot of your mod im actually choosing to emphasize parts in different ways but i did fix one triple issue!

Catshy



Alright that's it. I hope that will help you improve your map (which is already really good imo).
Good luck and have a nice day(or night)
Thanks! it helped a bunch! I appreciate it dude, have a good one. Fixed almost everything on your mod, not sure if I want to map the bridge at 3:34, thats the only thing i left open from it. great mod bro :')

edit: forgot to fix a few blankets ill just fix em after the next modder

edit2: fixed

Hey for M4M from #modreqs

[General]

1. Check AIMod, some kiai ends aren't snapped
2. Combo colors look perfect
3. Your set is barely above 10MB, I'd suggest getting a version of the mp3 >128 kbps, though not needed
4. BG size is good

[Mapping]

1. Your slider design is somewhat sloppy. Sliders like 00:45:497 (7) - and 00:53:926 (3) - are really good and should be used more often whereas your longer ones like 01:25:783 (1) - don't look good at all (imo). You should polish these shapes, make them look aesthetically pleasing (it's mainly this one that looks odd, most of the rest are ok). But even those that are aesthetically pleasing don't really fit with each other. You should on similar parts have similar slider design philosophies.
2. You're missing a lot of blankets in the map. Many of your sliders look like they should blanket, but they don't, gonna list a few here: sliders like 02:40:354 (2,3) - , others like 03:17:211 (5,1) - , and mostly 03:54:238 (6,7) - these
3. A few of your deathstream sections could have a bit more variety. Take 03:06:926 - this part. You really should try making it so that there's a kickslider every time the vocals come up, so you both stream and play the vocals at once. On the first part of that stream you could have a kickslider on 03:06:926 - 03:07:354 - and 03:07:783 - and streams in between, it'd play nicely, make the aiming of that stream more challenging and both fit the deathstream criteria and follow the vocals. Also it'd lead in well to the repeat sliders, indicating at what rhythm they should be played.
4. 05:12:987 - Not sure this part is in 1/3, idk why you mapped repeat sliders or streams there either this part should really just be long sliders and low SV
5. You don't use spinners correctly imo, mainly towards the end. On sections like 06:05:630 (1) - you should map stuff still as the intensity is way too high to disregard it. But I know you're following the vocals and that's why you did it, so what I suggest is just putting less clickable objects, more sliders so it feels less highlighted than the vocal parts. But definitely don't ignore these by putting spinners, spinners are for long drawn out sounds or rising sounds that can't be mapped with jumps or streams.
6. 06:30:130 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - I know it's a 7* but this is a tac bit over the top I think :^) looks good tho

[Combo Patterns]

1. Mostly perfect, but sometimes you end a stream but don't NC the last note, sometimes you do, compare 01:41:211 (9) - and 01:12:068 (1) - I suggest putting an NC on every last note of a stream personally
2. You NC spammed a few times when you had a few repeat sliders in a row like 03:08:069 (1,1,1) - the NC is not needed I don't think

[Hitsounds]

1. I like the choice of the hs a lot All along the song the hs fit

I like the map a lot, even though there's a lot of polish needed I feel ^^ Good luck continuing this

pls stop abuse nanomortis

I like the map a lot, even though there's a lot of polish needed I feel ^^ Good luck continuing this thank you!!it may seem like there's a lot of red in my reply but I did go through and change quite a bit bc of your mod, especially the part at 5:12 which I entirely remapped, thanks! i didnt think itd take this long to reply but ill probably end up modding you soon, about to go on a hike but when i get back ye

Shiirn wrote:

pls stop abuse nanomortis

background is so good tho : ^ )

pls stop nanomortis abuse, nanomortis belongs on wubby stuff

hi i am modding for modding (tthank)

FuruSatori wrote:

hi i am modding for modding (tthank)

mod

00:00:783 (3,4,5) the angle that 3 and 4 transition into 5 is kinda odd looking, tilting them upward to the left would make it look cleaner
00:12:497 (7,8,1) same here as above (i might be dumb and this is an aesthetic thing ur tryna do but i only see it show up twice in this section so idk) yeah, its intentional here
00:20:354 (2) move it a little down and to the left to get a nicer looking blanket fixd
00:46:926 (2,3,4,5) this pattern feels awkward to snap to, 90 degree angles are hard to use in sections like this no change for now. all testplayers hit this pretty fine
00:57:211 (1) this is the only note in the first minute of the song with a finish? added a few more
from 01:24:069 to 01:30:211 the spacing between single taps varies a lot with no real reason which can make it hard to snap to and flow with no changes, they represent vocal pitch
02:28:926 (3,4,5,6,7) these straight line bursts dont look well with the rest of this section, and they feel weird playing since they kind of ruin flow
(there are more examples of those ^) i dont think they ruin flow at all here actually
02:34:640 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) the songs intensity on all 3 of these bursts is mostly equal imo but the latter 2 bursts have much higher spacing than the first, maybe lower the last 2/raise the first to better portray the music i see where ur comin at here actually and i agree, but im not exactly sure how I would go about changing it here ngl.. so maybe you'll see a change coming here maybe not. i have it the way it is as sort of a transitional stream to go into the next section
04:38:130 empty space feels weird, u could prob put a note right here done
04:59:844 (1,2) wow spacing plz but his voice is decreasing in pitch/volume its cool this way

overall

pretty good map. those were the biggest issues i saw.
work on consistency in patterns and spacing tho, and maybe rethink some of those anti-jumps, like 05:00:844 (8,1,2,3) honestly im trying my best at this part to represent the change in his vocals and I think these "anti jumps" represent it best
and keep aesthetics in mind as much as you can, this feels like the successor to Uta so it should be equally as beautiful i try heh
good luck ranking, and srry for bad mod ;;

thank 4 mod

seems like a pretty good copy from uta xd

lego

[Hymn]

• super passionate about this band, so heres some metadata fix
  
  Title: 劇愛の呼声が溺哀の叫声を喰らう
  Romanised Title: Gekiai no Yobigoe ga Dekiai no Kyougoe wo Kurau
  Source: 狂おしく咲いた凄惨な骸は奏で、愛おしく裂いた少女は聖餐の詞を謳う。
  
  link to their store, 2nd track in the album
  
  the source here is basically the album name, but i'm not sure if you want to include this because i'm sure the title will go off the screen lol
  
  would suggest you use some other edgier diff name, like Uta's Himei (悲鳴, which translates to scream) or the other DoKito set's Kyouaku (凶悪, atrocity)
  
  
  im p sure the offset is changed in some places

1. 01:24:069 - add red line here of same bpm (pls adjust the new combos accordingly)
2. 03:24:237 - add red line here, bpm should be 160, i dont think 79.975 quite works
3. 03:34:924 - add red line here, bpm should be 160 (same as before)
4. 03:46:738 (1) - this note wont be necessary
5. 04:54:702 - red line here of same bpm
   
   actual mod now sry
   
   there are just major overarching issue with your map that i'd just like to point out, most of the things arent exactly specific (other than rhythm section)
   
   
   something along the lines of inconsistency with intensity and jumps. understandably you want to have some distance variation, but at times it gets to a point where it de-intensifies your map where the hitcircles are not placed far enough to still retain its intensity. here are some examples:
   
6. 00:02:069 (5,6,1,2) - compare 5,6 and 1,2, both are of similar intensity and yet 5,6 are way bigger jumps
7. 00:04:354 (1,2,1,2) -
8. 00:13:211 (6,7,1,2) -
9. 03:15:497 (1,2,3,4) -
   
   the timeskip was huge, i might've missed out a few along the way but do do a recheck for your whole map on this
   
   
   the other bulk issue is rhythm choices, but these i will go in depth
   
   
10. 00:18:354 (1,2,1) - genuinely dont hear a triplet here
11. 00:24:069 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - any reason for the inconsistent rhythm compared to 00:28:640 (1,2,3) - ?
12. 00:35:497 (1) - any reason for skipping out important drum beats? 00:35:640 - 00:35:783 -
13. 00:49:926 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - imo too many skipped beats here, it plays rather uncomfortably
14. 01:00:640 (1,2,3) - feels like you can incorporate a lot more beats here
15. 01:02:926 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2) - similarly^
16. 01:08:926 (2,5) - would suggest making these 2 1/2 sliders each instead, because both their slidertails contain an important beat which i feel should be clickable
17. 01:10:497 (7) - ^
18. 01:10:497 (7,2,5,7) - similarly^
19. 01:17:783 (1,2,3) - any reason for the inconsistency with 01:18:926 (1,2,3) - ? they sound similar imo
20. 01:21:497 (2) - it feels like this reverse slider doesnt really do the intensity of the song justice
21. 01:22:354 (1) - ee the spinner really kills the intensity of this part as well
22. 01:25:783 (1) - 01:28:069 (1) - personally feel like this is covering too many drums, though its still fine as it is so its up to you
23. 01:30:926 (4) - similarly^
24. 01:31:926 (8) - you should make both head and tail clickable imo, both have important vocals
25. 01:46:926 (1,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - transitions from drum to vocal here is very choppy imo, especially when they're basically of similar musical structure compared to 01:42:354 (1) - onwards. sidenote though, i really liked the reverse slider approach to mapping vocal
26. 01:51:354 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1) - similarly^
27. 01:54:926 (6) - ^
28. 01:58:354 (2,3,4,1) - missing on drum beats imo
29. 02:03:211 (1,2,3,4,1,1) - massive decrease in note density is quite disconcerting, would prefer it to be denser and harder
30. 02:07:640 (7,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,1) - too many long notes here that miss drums as well
31. 02:14:354 (1) - i think this spinner is placed very well, though its just kinda missing on a lot of beats that i would've preferred mapped instead, though you can still keep this
32. 02:16:640 (1) - guitars here are all in 1/3, while drums from here 02:18:926 (1) - are 1/4 sooo thats quite the issue. although i can see that you're mapping drums mostly in the kiai, i would love for the spotlight to be given to guitars here with the unique 1/3 rhythm and the occasional 1/4 slur, but that might require a lot of listening to the song at 25%, so i leave it to you. though the first stream technically still maps to nothing.
33. 02:45:211 (3,1,2,3) - missing drums
34. 02:49:783 (3,1,2,1) - ^
35. 02:58:069 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^
36. 03:02:640 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^
37. 03:13:211 (1) - ^
38. 03:46:924 (1) - if u were to follow my timing some of these have notes from here on are emphasised wrongly
39. 04:10:130 (2) - intensity of this stream way lower than 04:20:987 (1) - , because there are reverse sliders, would prefer if the second part had broken streams
40. 04:39:273 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - missing drums
41. 04:43:844 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^
42. 04:53:059 (1) - i'd say this is bad placement for a spinner because you're missing important vocal and drums
43. 05:02:130 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - missing drums
44. 05:05:559 (1) - ^
45. 05:08:416 (5,6,7,8,9) - any reason for inconsistency with 01:37:783 (1,2) - ?
46. 05:12:987 (1) - i dont really hear a reason for reverse, why not just slider for vocal coverage?
47. 05:21:273 (4,5,6) - dont hear a reason for these either, would prefer if 05:20:987 (3) - was just a slider/only hitcircle for vocal
48. 05:38:130 (1,2,3) - missing drum
49. 05:40:844 (3,4,5,6) - greatly decreased note density, quite disconcerting comparing with the intensity prior to this
50. 06:01:273 (1) - might as well start it here instead 06:00:987 - , i also think the ending of the spinner does flow well into the rhythm choice of 06:02:702 (1) - , would prefer if you just mapped the spinner section instead
51. 06:03:844 (7,1,2) - missing drum
52. 06:05:630 (1,1,2) - ^, seems like you're just too lazy at this point xd
53. 06:08:986 (1,2,3) - ^
54. 06:21:844 (3,4) - i could be missing out a lot of potential triplets within this section, so you can check them to have more rhythmic variability instead of just jumps
    
    
    then theres the aesthetics thing which you can comply closer to Uta, i can point out some examples of stuff i might find ugly (completely subjective)
    
    
55. 00:28:640 (1) - these type sliders i dont really like because the end node is too short or too squashed up
56. 00:29:497 (3) - its clearer why i dont really like it here^ (multiple instances)
57. 00:31:069 (2,3) - dont really like how this flows (multiple instances)
58. 00:32:069 (1,2,3,4) - similarly^
59. 00:49:926 (1,2,3,4) - ^
60. 00:56:497 (3,4,1,2) - ^
61. 01:09:783 (5) - would be prettier if it looked more like this, dont really like it when its too squashed up, especially the first node:
    
    img

    
62. 01:17:783 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - dont like the flow
63. 01:25:783 (1) - dont like the shape tbh
64. 01:34:926 (1) - looks a little wonky compared to 01:33:211 (2) -
65. 01:46:926 (1,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - the flow of sliders here i'd say is generally messier than what i'd normally see in your whole diff
66. 01:53:069 (1) - this slider is faulty pls remake xd
67. 01:59:497 (1) - dont really like this
68. 02:04:640 (1,1) - just want to say the rhythm doesnt really permit the length, but the shapes are really pretty
69. 02:10:926 (1) - dont like this
70. 02:12:354 (1) - ^
71. 05:03:844 (2,1) - blanket fix?
72. 05:11:273 (1,2) - dont like the flow
73. 05:40:130 (5,1,2,3,4) - ^
74. 05:46:130 (1) - this section is passable but there are some parts that can do with a little more reworking
75. also would just like to point out that i really liked your stream shapes, they were all really comfortable to track (i can't tap at this speed tho xd)
    
    
    lastly i'd say another issue is with the polygonal-linear jumps or the non-sharp angle hitcircles, i would say they're super anti-flow and slightly hard to play, but thats more of a personal preference i guess
    
    
76. its stuff like 01:24:069 (1,2,3,4,1) - comfortable, 01:24:783 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - really uncomfortable type of transition that i dont really like
77. 01:26:354 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - comfortable
78. 01:28:640 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - , 02:39:354 (4,5,6) - mildly uncomfortable
79. 02:51:783 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - , 05:06:130 (2,3,4,5) - really uncomfortable - i can be on-board with most things here, just feels uncomfortable for me to be playing it

thats it i guess, huuuuge mod gl

(long song name is long)

drum-hitfinish.wav is an unused hitsound. remove it.

06:28:426 unsnapped timing line. fix this

Hymn

with 210 bpm i dont recommend such big 1/4 jumps 00:26:783 (4,5,6) - 00:37:497 (13,14) - 00:37:783 (1,2) - they will be very painful to play but do as you must. though i strongly recommend having the jump on first beats of a bar 00:37:711 (15,1) - as it will be much easier to discern when the jump has to be played

01:01:497 (3,1) - 01:01:783 (1,2) - avoid similar visual spacing for 1/4 and 1/2, it is highly confusing. reduce / increase spacing respectively.

01:04:069 (1,2) - 01:10:497 (7,1) - 01:15:068 (7,1) - etc ^ and thats a whole beat difference. avoid this. makes it even harder due to the fact that the whole map consists of jumps. this kind of placement / spacing makes flow break very easily. stack them or fix the spacing up for smoother gameplay and better readability. ( 01:19:497 (3,4,1) - is okay but 4 to 1 could still do with a bit more spacing) same 01:59:354 (4,1) - 01:59:497 (1,2) - 02:02:354 (1,2) - (could be stacked again) / 02:03:211 (1,2) - and 02:04:354 (3,4,1) -

^ 01:21:211 (1,2) - definitely stack those

01:56:926 (2,3,4,1) - http://puu.sh/t0UtM/db6d208ad1.jpg drums are still very much present at this point that should be mapped imo

02:12:354 (1) - a spinner at this point instead of where the spinner is now would represent the music better. instead, 02:14:354 - the spinner part has many more guitar sounds to map than the slider so the spinner should be mapped instead.

03:47:300 (4,5,6) - when looking at the rest of that sections, which is consistently spaced mapped, the jumps here dont make much sense. even more since this section is calm and doesnt provide any sound differences to support jumps or inconsistent spacing apart from the first bar of each measure.

03:54:238 (6) - nc

04:32:273 (1) - remove nc place here instead 04:32:416 (1) -

04:36:987 - would reflect the intense scream.. a lot http://puu.sh/t0UVQ/b67cae90be.jpg

tried to go through all of it but thats as far as i got. top players will enjoy this diff for sure

thanks for the mods guys! out of town, so ill reply to em as soon as I get the chance to give em my full attention, I have a feeling ill be changing a bit hahah, I kds'd you guys for now, cheers and merry christmas

fixed a lot and toiled with intensity and flow. map should feel better now, playability, and visibility wise in a lot of areas. i'd love to hear your input if you give it another try. thanks so much for all this modding help, the map feels a lot better in my opinion now. <3



thank you guys so much.

to future modders: pls look for any small hitsounding errors if you find them because i did have to remap a bit, and also, im open to suggestion for the repeating patterns found at 01:08:640 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1) - and onward, etc.

i rly appreciate it!

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TheKingHenry wrote:

Album title isn't supposed to be as the source

Source: Where this song originate from. This field should generally only be included for Anime or Video Game songs, and occasionally for Novelty (Movies, TV, or Internet) songs. If the song is from an anime or video game, or is famous for its use as a TV or movie theme, the title of that source goes here. Rock and Pop songs should generally leave the field blank. This is not to be used for things like album titles.

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ah thanks. did not know this for some reason, anyways now i have an overload of tags lmfao

Heya~!

[Hakai]
You might want to decrease stack leniency (song setup->advanced), since a lot of overlaps look a bit weird with stacking enabled!

1. 00:04:640 (1,2,3) - With stacking enabled this spacing looks pretty weird, the 1 is almost touching the 3. Might wanna make 1-2-3 a constant spaced triangle.
2. 00:06:497 (6,7,8,1) - Reallyy awkward flow from 7-8-1. Might wanna change this up a bit.
3. 00:10:783 (4,6,7,1) - Overlap is really off when stacking is enabled.
4. 00:21:211 (4,5) - Almost looks like a 1/4 gap instead of a 1/2 gap. They're really close while the music is quite strong. Might want to increase spacing! For example look at 00:25:211 (1,2), it's higher spacing but a 1/4 jump instead!
5. 00:29:497 (3) - This small bend looks really weird, might want to make that left part a bit bigger.
6. 00:46:069 (3,4,5,6,7) - 4-5 has a sudden increase in spacing at quite an awkward angle.
7. 01:37:354 (6,7,8) - Almost linear flow with high DS, even though the previous jumps were almost back and forths. Feel like this is too difficult to aim right now.
8. 01:46:283 - There is a not here, you should start the stream here instead.
9. 01:51:211 - Note heree, really shouldn't skip this!
10. 02:02:783 - ^^
11. 02:02:926 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - This part is actually really undermapped. I think you should add some 1/2 jumps instead. You're not capturing the strong guitar in the background.
12. 02:08:354 (4,1) - Could make these 2 parallel too each other.
13. 02:09:640 (4) - Weird overlap as well.
14. 02:14:140 (1) - Spinneeer feels so undermapped.
15. 03:19:640 - 03:19:926 I noticed that you're mapping to the vocals, but you really can't skip these strong instruments right here. Makes your map feel so much weaker!
16. 03:51:237 (1) - This slider ends on a really strong sound, might want to move it to 03:51:424 instead and put a circle at 03:51:237
17. 03:57:986 (5) - Think this slider should be at 03:57:799 (4) instead.
18. 04:20:273 (6,7,8) - The song is sooo intensive and then you have this so close to the 5! Might want to move it a bit to the bottom left (x:304, y:350)
19. 06:01:273 (1) - This really ruins the hypee you had going. You have so many strong instruments going on! Why would you map a spinner here?!
20. 06:05:630 (1) - ^
21. 06:10:272 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Also long vocals, but you map jumps here instead. Way better imo!
22. 06:29:273 (13,14,15) - Feels awkward, might want to increase the spacing between 13-14.

There are a lot of suggestions in here (and they're not really about unrankable things), so feel free to deny anything.
GL with rank!

GenDoNL wrote:

Heya~!

[Hakai]
You might want to decrease stack leniency (song setup->advanced), since a lot of overlaps look a bit weird with stacking enabled!

1. 00:04:640 (1,2,3) - With stacking enabled this spacing looks pretty weird, the 1 is almost touching the 3. Might wanna make 1-2-3 a constant spaced triangle. i like stacking enabled, and this pattern clearly doesnt touch, i think the emphasis is good and the appearance is tolerable here so no change
2. 00:06:497 (6,7,8,1) - Reallyy awkward flow from 7-8-1. Might wanna change this up a bit. intentional for NC emphasis heh, nobody who has testplayed seems to have trouble here
3. 00:10:783 (4,6,7,1) - Overlap is really off when stacking is enabled. im not going to change my leniency for this one pattern, i do see how this one could be an issue though.. no change for now but ill leave it open
4. 00:21:211 (4,5) - Almost looks like a 1/4 gap instead of a 1/2 gap. They're really close while the music is quite strong. Might want to increase spacing! For example look at 00:25:211 (1,2), it's higher spacing but a 1/4 jump instead! in all honesty, I like how it is right now, its kind of an unexpected explosion of tensity because of how close it is, and a player who is just trying it won't expect it coming, i think it fits well and emphasizes the explosion well enough
5. 00:29:497 (3) - This small bend looks really weird, might want to make that left part a bit bigger. ahh but i like it
6. 00:46:069 (3,4,5,6,7) - 4-5 has a sudden increase in spacing at quite an awkward angle. its intentional antiflow here, i think thhe song warrants it because its a rhythm unseen anywhere else and its very obviously distinct (and kind of ugly, which is why its antiflow)
7. 01:37:354 (6,7,8) - Almost linear flow with high DS, even though the previous jumps were almost back and forths. Feel like this is too difficult to aim right now. eh, anyone who I've had testplay it here has hit it fairly well, the whole section is filled with linear to angled or angled to linear switches, so players should be able to adjust to this type of aim
8. 01:46:283 - There is a not here, you should start the stream here instead. its a blue tick so starting the stream there would be very unfavorable unfortunately
9. 01:51:211 - Note heree, really shouldn't skip this! switching up my emphasis here so i think its ok
10. 02:02:783 - ^^
11. 02:02:926 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - This part is actually really undermapped. I think you should add some 1/2 jumps instead. You're not capturing the strong guitar in the background. agreed and fixed
12. 02:08:354 (4,1) - Could make these 2 parallel too each other.fixed ty
13. 02:09:640 (4) - Weird overlap as well. intentional here
14. 02:14:140 (1) - Spinneeer feels so undermapped. agreed fixed
15. 03:19:640 - 03:19:926 I noticed that you're mapping to the vocals, but you really can't skip these strong instruments right here. Makes your map feel so much weaker! disagree vocal emphasis is better here imo; played around and I like it now much better
16. 03:51:237 (1) - This slider ends on a really strong sound, might want to move it to 03:51:424 instead and put a circle at 03:51:237 downbeat does not always mean the strongest sound, though, and the stronger sound is clearly on the red tick there
17. 03:57:986 (5) - Think this slider should be at 03:57:799 (4) instead. good catch ty
18. 04:20:273 (6,7,8) - The song is sooo intensive and then you have this so close to the 5! Might want to move it a bit to the bottom left (x:304, y:350) actually, fixed in a different, way more intense way
19. 06:01:273 (1) - This really ruins the hypee you had going. You have so many strong instruments going on! Why would you map a spinner here?!
20. 06:05:630 (1) - ^ fixed ty
21. 06:10:272 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Also long vocals, but you map jumps here instead. Way better imo! thanks
22. 06:29:273 (13,14,15) - Feels awkward, might want to increase the spacing between 13-14.eh no directional change is difficult enough as is

There are a lot of suggestions in here (and they're not really about unrankable things), so feel free to deny anything.
GL with rank!

thanks dude. changed quite a bit bc of your mod honestly. helped bunch. the end is now the most tense its ever been and the guitar part is consistent with the map mostly

Hey, M4M from your queue.


Good luck, I think it still needs some work (esp on rhythm choice with the triples and stuff), but nevertheless it was enjoyable to play

EDIT: timestamp formatting, bleh.

02:16:640 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - guitar is 1/3, not 1./4.

no kds or anything, just bugged me

FoxyGrandpa wrote:

02:16:640 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - guitar is 1/3, not 1./4.

no kds or anything, just bugged me

u kno when u try to ignore something wrong with a map but then u realize u actually wanna rank it so u gotta fix... :^)

fixed. no kds at req

from q


WHEW.

Frost wrote:

from q

Hakai

• 00:05:354 (5,6) - i don't really like how the ends of these sliders have more emphasis than their start :/ I think the sliders give a good emphasis affect here, though the end notes are more tense than the sliderstarts, I agree, but I like how it plays here
  00:09:497 (2) - i guess it's your choice, but shouldn't this be 2 separate sliders/notes? I like how it is here
  00:14:497 (5,7) - first thing again ye
  00:25:497 (2,3,4,5) - this might just be personal preference, but i like the play more when it goes circle --> slider instead of slider --> circle like it currently is, mainly because the slider puts more emphasis on the second sound, which is what the music suggests here fixed
  00:36:497 (6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - the curve in the stream is kinda awkward because of the note preceeding it, should be more of a circular flow imo (rather than the square-ish shape that it currently forms) to flow better into the stream
  00:37:497 (13,14,15,1) - kicksliders are better when used to add emphasis to the note AFTER them, not the kickslider themselves, which makes this kinda weird. if you moved the kicksliders back two ticks, it would be much better. fixed both here
  00:43:211 (6,7,1) - transition here is kinda weird. it's about a 100 degree angle, which is pretty anti-flow lol theres quite a bit of antiflow in the map
  00:45:069 (4,7) - feels like too much emphasis on the slider ends again here. puting a circle where the slider began and a slider where it ended is better imo im following the "hold" guitar sounds, so I think slider fits here
  00:54:354 (5) - the slider head isn't really following anything in the song :s it is
  01:00:640 (1,2,3) - why is the spacing so low from (1) to (2) and higher from (2) to (3)? xd fixed
  01:08:640 (1,2) - there should be a circle between these to be consistent with 01:09:497 (3,4,5) because it's like the exact same music fixd
  01:13:211 (1,2) - ^ fixd
  01:23:211 (8,9,10,1) - this is a 1/3 stream, not a 1/2 gap to a triple. listen carefully to it on 25% playback fixed
  01:31:926 (5) - the end has so much more emphasis aaa following vocals here
  02:03:211 (1,2) - kinda undermapped lol for guitars, but i added more hitsounds to maybe help it seem more mapped lol
  02:16:640 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - this is 1/3, not 1/4. the streams after it are fine because the drums go at 1/4, but this has no drums fixed in foxy's comment
  02:36:640 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - this should also be 1/3 fixed
  
  Also I had a lot of complaints about spatial emphasis in this section so I just remapped it yolo
  
  02:57:783 (1,2) - this thing again fix
  03:02:354 (1,2) - ^ fix
  03:10:353 (1,2,3,4,5) - kinda sharp for a curve ye xdd
  03:11:211 (5,6,7,1) - there's no pause between these in the music (i think?) correct, but the blue tick sound is so incredibly weak and this helps to emphasize the red and white (vocal) tick much better than they'd be emphasized in a stream, I tried both ways.
  04:10:416 (1) - kickslider thing again (emphasis in music should be the note AFTER the kickslider) its impossible to tell on 25% but if you listen carefully its in this stream of 5 because of the slight "pianoish" sound idk what to even call that
  04:39:273 (1,2) - this again fix
  04:43:844 (1,2) - ^ fixd
  04:48:416 (1,2) - ^ oh god there's more fixd
  05:01:702 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - i don't think (2) and (6) are in the music, should just be a circle --> triple --> slider
  05:02:130 (7) - this should end on the blue tick, not the white. i would recommend deleting the circle after it and making it a repeat slider, that's the best way to go about white tick --> blue tick --> red tick patterns imo fixed in a diff way
  05:10:702 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - there should be 2 notes at 1/4 speed after the first slider and then just a single between that and the next slider fixed
  05:12:987 (1,2,3,1) - the repeat sliders should probably be closer to the notes after them because of the gap between them only being 1/3 eh, i think its fine here
  05:27:559 (2) - the emphasis on the end >: you could shorten it by 1 tick and add a circle where the end was to emphasize it more? sure why not
  05:41:273 (4,5,6) - why the huge gap? plenty to map to there fixd
  05:50:416 (3) - make this a 1/2 slider and then add something (slider/another circle) where the end was i think its fine ive done similar things in this section
  05:52:702 (4) - you know why this triggers me by now lol hey true..
  05:52:702 (4,1,2,1) - the pauses here are pretty weird when they're leading up to a massive stream, the way you mapped it implies that the part before the stream is extremely calm b/c it has no density whatsoever, even though the stream isn't THAT much more intense fixed
  05:59:844 (1,1,2,3) - imo you should just make the first slider a 1/2 and use the same hitsounding scheme to make the part after into jumps i think its fine but fixed unnoticed nc issue lol
  06:04:987 (4) - triggered at the end xd hehe, i didnt change most things like this bc I think they're honestly fine with theh music and specific vocal parts or hold sounds
  06:05:701 (5) - NC here? or at the big white tick if you fix the above thing nc'd there
  06:29:273 (13) - this one was actually used pretty well, no problem here

WHEW.

ok TY fantastic mod I feel like this is getting more and more polished

06:10:272 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - How to make everyone fall asleep.

F1r3tar wrote:

06:10:272 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - How to make everyone fall asleep.

how do change tho, the only real thing I can emphasize in here besides the drums would be the strong orchestral/guitar sounds but they are hold sounds that conflict with the very strong drums

also for anyone interested i added some new combo colors so it should look a lil spiffier up in here

ok I know I actually requested for nm but this is a pretty nice map so I just decided to look at it anyway

1. 00:02:640 (3) - there is no emphasize on this strong drum cause the spacing is the same as the two previously low spaced notes. move it a bit further like this http://puu.sh/tgoDB/e5216d9a84.jpg
   I see this is a reoccuring theme, might still wanna consider that one since there is a noticably stronger drumsound on this
2. 00:20:640 - from this point on your rhythm choices are pretty unclear to me
   
   1. 00:20:926 (1,2,3) - here you follow the drums, but then you go with the same vocalpart here 00:21:211 (4,5) - you ignored with the drums before and after that you go with the guitar ignoring the vocals again, so you try to emphasize like 3 different 'instruments' in such a short amount of time which is not really working out well. 00:21:211 (4,5) - You should reconsider these into emphasizing the guitar instead. The section after this is very good rhythmwise
3. 00:36:640 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - why is this overmapped? it completely takes away emphasize on where the drumroll actually starts at 00:37:211 (9) -
4. 00:44:069 (4,5,6) - you make a triple here where there actually is no sound at the blue tick but then ignore the actual triple a tick later lol
5. 01:53:657 - add circle for better transition into the regular fast paced rhythm again, blanki with the slider will look cool
6. 02:03:211 - I see you wanna emphasize the guitar but imo they suggest 1/2 slider much more than 1/1 and it wouldnt break the pacing so much
7. 03:11:211 (5,6,7,1) - rhythm choice is pretty weird, 03:11:496 (1) - has 0 emphasize because of the triplet even though its the indicator for an entirely new section in the song and stopping the stream here 03:11:211 (5) - neither goes with the vocals since you decided to ignore it 03:10:926 - here nor with the drums, so what I suggest is you stop the stream at 03:10:926 (1) - and make jumps from here on + remove 03:11:426 - cause they go with both the vocals and the ever so slightly changing drum 1/2 pattern noticable here while at the same time providing better emphasize on 03:11:496 (1) - if you increase the spacing between 03:11:354 - and 03:11:496 (1) - in relation to the other jumps
8. 03:19:497 (1) - whoa why the super sudden break here
9. 03:53:862 (5) - triggered is not parallel to 03:53:299 (3) - on the y axis like you did with 03:52:362 (5,1) -
10. 03:54:237 (1,3,1,3) - ^ if you decide to change maybe stay consistent with that on these too
11. 04:20:416 (9) - lol that slider looks pretty wonky maybe clean its shape a bit like so https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7014632
12. 04:20:987 - that stream is a bit boring imo, you could maybe give it some more sharp angles on the NCs
13. 04:41:559 - would be more epic if you emphasize the vocals with the streamshape, just an example: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7014831 same with the rest of those and the one other part before this
14. 04:52:416 (2,3,1) - bruh this needs more spacing I want to fkcn smash those circles with these strong drums and vocals and thats only emphasizable with spacing, blanket 04:52:702 (3) - with 04:51:844 (1) - so it looks like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7014847

Vell wrote:

ok I know I actually requested for nm but this is a pretty nice map so I just decided to look at it anyway hey thanks its appreciated, ill definitely mod u sometime soon(busy school week now though)

1. 00:02:640 (3) - there is no emphasize on this strong drum cause the spacing is the same as the two previously low spaced notes. move it a bit further like this http://puu.sh/tgoDB/e5216d9a84.jpg would be too inconsistent w what i have going
   I see this is a reoccuring theme, might still wanna consider that one since there is a noticably stronger drumsound on this
2. 00:20:640 - from this point on your rhythm choices are pretty unclear to me
   
   1. 00:20:926 (1,2,3) - here you follow the drums, but then you go with the same vocalpart here 00:21:211 (4,5) - you ignored with the drums before and after that you go with the guitar ignoring the vocals again, so you try to emphasize like 3 different 'instruments' in such a short amount of time which is not really working out well. 00:21:211 (4,5) - You should reconsider these into emphasizing the guitar instead. The section after this is very good rhythmwise
   i think fixed
3. 00:36:640 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - why is this overmapped? it completely takes away emphasize on where the drumroll actually starts at 00:37:211 (9) - ?? i hear sounds here
4. 00:44:069 (4,5,6) - you make a triple here where there actually is no sound at the blue tick but then ignore the actual triple a tick later lolfixed
5. 01:53:657 - add circle for better transition into the regular fast paced rhythm again, blanki with the slider will look cool fixed in better way xd
6. 02:03:211 - I see you wanna emphasize the guitar but imo they suggest 1/2 slider much more than 1/1 and it wouldnt break the pacing so much fair, fixed
7. 03:11:211 (5,6,7,1) - rhythm choice is pretty weird, 03:11:496 (1) - has 0 emphasize because of the triplet even though its the indicator for an entirely new section in the song and stopping the stream here 03:11:211 (5) - neither goes with the vocals since you decided to ignore it 03:10:926 - here nor with the drums, so what I suggest is you stop the stream at 03:10:926 (1) - and make jumps from here on + remove 03:11:426 - cause they go with both the vocals and the ever so slightly changing drum 1/2 pattern noticable here while at the same time providing better emphasize on 03:11:496 (1) - if you increase the spacing between 03:11:354 - and 03:11:496 (1) - in relation to the other jumps alright heres something im really on the fence about, I think the way I used anti flow here really helps to emphasize the downbeat and by skipping the blue tick after (5) in the stream it helps to also emphasize the red tick following that, I think my way of emphasize is a hella lot better. it also covers the vocals much better here.
8. 03:19:497 (1) - whoa why the super sudden break here was vocal emphjasis but I previously hadd cleaned up similar sections so might as well clean it up here, fixed
9. 03:53:862 (5) - triggered is not parallel to 03:53:299 (3) - on the y axis like you did with 03:52:362 (5,1) - oh good catch
10. 03:54:237 (1,3,1,3) - ^ if you decide to change maybe stay consistent with that on these too eh here its a different pattern so its not as crucial
11. 04:20:416 (9) - lol that slider looks pretty wonky maybe clean its shape a bit like so https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7014632 hey, why not
12. 04:20:987 - that stream is a bit boring imo, you could maybe give it some more sharp angles on the NCs ehh i like the way it flows here, plus you gotta remember its about 100 notes of 210bpm haha not the easiest thing to do
13. 04:41:559 - would be more epic if you emphasize the vocals with the streamshape, just an example: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7014831 same with the rest of those and the one other part before this eh, I like how it is here tbh, plus I don't really consistently use spacing to emphasize vocals in streams like anywhere else
14. 04:52:416 (2,3,1) - bruh this needs more spacing I want to fkcn smash those circles with these strong drums and vocals and thats only emphasizable with spacing, blanket 04:52:702 (3) - with 04:51:844 (1) - so it looks like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7014847fixd ty

thanks dude I appreciate it, fixed most things

I don't typically mod things that I can't play/that are too hard for me but I'll give it a shot.
00:03:783 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - I don't think that this deserves NC spam for, the music stands out but not that hard or significantly.
00:08:069 (1) - Remove NC
00:59:069 (7) - Does that slider NEED to fold on itself? (Don't change it you don't want to)
01:00:069 (5) - Check DS? Seems weird. (Not an expert don't yell at me)
01:14:925 (7,8) - Shouldn't these be like the triple notes before? It sounds better when I changed it. Move the short slider ahead and add a circle between 7 and 8.
01:18:926 (1,2) - Please don't make these striaght sliders, (I know they're not technicaly straight but move the second anchor points by 1 unit or so, using ctrl 1 preset.
01:28:069 (5) - This slider lasts for too long for the sound that it's representing.
01:56:069 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - Rotate by -4 degrees. From play selection center.
02:10:926 (1,3) - SO GOOD.
04:40:987 (7,8) - 01:14:925 (7,8) - Shouldn't these be like the triple notes before? It sounds better when I changed it. Move the short slider ahead and add a circle between 7 and 8.
04:45:558 (7,8) - ^
04:50:130 (7,8) - ^

I literally couldn't keep up with the map.
M4M: t/536476

06:10:129 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I know someone mentioned it, but it's really repetetive - perhaps you could make one or two of the triples repeaters? Just for variation if nothing else, though it'd also help keep stamina ready for the end stream.
06:29:273 (13) - I realise that this is probably intended, but it looks like it's a bit over the top of a stream jump to me, just my opinion

Really excited to see this song mapped, I can't wait until you get it ranked

Sorry for the late mod, but here it is.

[Hakai]

00:06:069 (3,4,5) - I don't really know how to feel about these triples and the triples at 00:07:211 (3,4,5) - . The others mostly make sense, but these two aren't necessary I think and aren't really mapped to any sound. This isn't anything you gotta change, but I thought I'd mention anyway.
01:02:926 (1,2,3) - Slowing the map down here feels a bit weird to me. Maybe try slider-circle-slider instead. You still emphasise the vocals that way while making the map flow better.
01:10:354 (7,8) - Maybe put 3 circles here instead, same with 01:14:925 (7,8) - to keep things more consistent.
01:27:783 (3) - Blanket
01:31:497 (2) - Blanket
02:28:354 (3,4,5) - Making the angle sharper here makes the movement more comfortable
02:36:354 (6,7,8,9,1) - Considering the snare drums here, I'd space this higher than 02:35:783 (1,2,3,4,5) - and 02:35:211 (1,2,3,4,5) -
02:45:211 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Might wanna lower spacing here a bit, I don't think that that is the biggest jump in the map until then and it's a pretty chill section compared to other sections.
02:59:497 (7,8) - As before, I would put 3 circles here instead, just like here: 03:04:068 (7,8) -
04:11:844 (1) - ur giving me that sick scream here but start the stream with a long repeat slider pls start with circles because I really feel like mashing the shit outta my keyboard at the scream start there
04:20:416 (9) - I would keep SV at 1x here instead of increasing it to 1.5x. The slider being faster is kinda surprising and the jump to 04:20:987 (1) - to start the next stream is a bit too hard as well.
04:40:987 (7,8) - , 04:50:130 (7,8) - and 04:45:558 (7,8) - , as above.

Stacks that are like 1 pixel off that bug me
Nothing really too important in this section, just a few attempted stacks that are like 1 pixel off or a few things that you could stack

00:11:497 (1) - with 00:10:783 (4) -
00:24:069 (1) - with 00:23:211 (2) - (idk if you even wanted to stack this but I'll mention anyway)
00:28:069 (4) - with 00:27:211 (4) -
02:44:926 (7) - with 02:44:354 (3) -
03:18:354 (1) - with 03:17:211 (1) -
03:56:112 (2) - with 03:55:361 (5) -
04:56:416 (5) - with 04:55:702 (8) -
05:03:273 (3) - with 05:02:702 (1) -
05:04:559 (3) - with 05:03:844 (1) -
05:12:273 (3) - with 05:11:844 (1) -
06:00:844 (4) - with 06:00:273 (2) -

Really nice map, I can definitely see some Uta elements but ultimately there are a lot of differences. Good luck!

ViolentBoo wrote:

I don't typically mod things that I can't play/that are too hard for me but I'll give it a shot.
00:03:783 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - I don't think that this deserves NC spam for, the music stands out but not that hard or significantly. its for readability with the stack there but I guess fixed ur right its inconsistent with anything else I've done in the map
00:08:069 (1) - Remove NC fixed in diff way to accentuate the pattern better
00:59:069 (7) - Does that slider NEED to fold on itself? (Don't change it you don't want to) no change I like it
01:00:069 (5) - Check DS? Seems weird. (Not an expert don't yell at me) it is
01:14:925 (7,8) - Shouldn't these be like the triple notes before? It sounds better when I changed it. Move the short slider ahead and add a circle between 7 and 8. fixed
01:18:926 (1,2) - Please don't make these striaght sliders, (I know they're not technicaly straight but move the second anchor points by 1 unit or so, using ctrl 1 preset. confused what you mean here; seems minor so no change
01:28:069 (5) - This slider lasts for too long for the sound that it's representing. vocals.. its fine
01:56:069 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - Rotate by -4 degrees. From play selection center. think its good as is
02:10:926 (1,3) - SO GOOD. aw shucks ty ty
04:40:987 (7,8) - 01:14:925 (7,8) - Shouldn't these be like the triple notes before? It sounds better when I changed it. Move the short slider ahead and add a circle between 7 and 8.
04:45:558 (7,8) - ^
04:50:130 (7,8) - ^ all fixed ty!

I literally couldn't keep up with the map.
M4M: t/536476

ur mod coming soon! fixed my osu!

Pronounta wrote:

Sorry for the late mod, but here it is. no biggie man!

[Hakai]

00:06:069 (3,4,5) - I don't really know how to feel about these triples and the triples at 00:07:211 (3,4,5) - . The others mostly make sense, but these two aren't necessary I think and aren't really mapped to any sound. This isn't anything you gotta change, but I thought I'd mention anyway.
01:02:926 (1,2,3) - Slowing the map down here feels a bit weird to me. Maybe try slider-circle-slider instead. You still emphasise the vocals that way while making the map flow better. eh I think its fine here, trying to slow it down for the first slow part
01:10:354 (7,8) - Maybe put 3 circles here instead, same with 01:14:925 (7,8) - to keep things more consistent. fixed by last modder
01:27:783 (3) - Blanket thats as blanketed as its going to get over there
01:31:497 (2) - Blanket fixed
02:28:354 (3,4,5) - Making the angle sharper here makes the movement more comfortable thats as sharp as its gonna get here tbh
02:36:354 (6,7,8,9,1) - Considering the snare drums here, I'd space this higher than 02:35:783 (1,2,3,4,5) - and 02:35:211 (1,2,3,4,5) - I think its fine as it is, too much tensity here would not play well as it leads into 1/3 and a new section
02:45:211 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Might wanna lower spacing here a bit, I don't think that that is the biggest jump in the map until then and it's a pretty chill section compared to other sections. I think its soo tense here tho lmao help
02:59:497 (7,8) - As before, I would put 3 circles here instead, just like here: 03:04:068 (7,8) - fixd
04:11:844 (1) - ur giving me that sick scream here but start the stream with a long repeat slider pls start with circles because I really feel like mashing the shit outta my keyboard at the scream start there i actually really like this because as a player its like "oh sHIT listen to this scream what could possibly come next?"
04:20:416 (9) - I would keep SV at 1x here instead of increasing it to 1.5x. The slider being faster is kinda surprising and the jump to 04:20:987 (1) - to start the next stream is a bit too hard as well. fixed the jump distance by changing slider shape; no change to SV I think it fits so well with 1.5x
04:40:987 (7,8) - , 04:50:130 (7,8) - and 04:45:558 (7,8) - , as above. fixed

Stacks that are like 1 pixel off that bug me
Nothing really too important in this section, just a few attempted stacks that are like 1 pixel off or a few things that you could stack

00:11:497 (1) - with 00:10:783 (4) - fixed
00:24:069 (1) - with 00:23:211 (2) - (idk if you even wanted to stack this but I'll mention anyway) unintentional but why not. fixed
00:28:069 (4) - with 00:27:211 (4) - fixed ty
02:44:926 (7) - with 02:44:354 (3) - fixed
03:18:354 (1) - with 03:17:211 (1) - fixed
03:56:112 (2) - with 03:55:361 (5) - i think fixed? if not its not a big deal here
04:56:416 (5) - with 04:55:702 (8) - fixed ty
05:03:273 (3) - with 05:02:702 (1) - intentional here actually
05:04:559 (3) - with 05:03:844 (1) - ^
05:12:273 (3) - with 05:11:844 (1) - ^
06:00:844 (4) - with 06:00:273 (2) - fixed

Really nice map, I can definitely see some Uta elements but ultimately there are a lot of differences. Good luck!

Razuh wrote:

06:10:129 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I know someone mentioned it, but it's really repetetive - perhaps you could make one or two of the triples repeaters? Just for variation if nothing else, though it'd also help keep stamina ready for the end stream. oh boy.. im not sure that'd help with the tensity though.. ill seriously think about what I can do here.. thanks for the suggestion ill keep it in mind!
06:29:273 (13) - I realise that this is probably intended, but it looks like it's a bit over the top of a stream jump to me, just my opinion hmm.. no change here for now but I see why playing this stream in particular would be really really hard bc of that last note; its for emphasis bc its just so intense.. but I'll see how more testplayers find it

Really excited to see this song mapped, I can't wait until you get it ranked

ty all for the mods! means a lot Razuh <3

I've actually changed my opinion on that end stream after playtesting the map a couple of times, it's pretty reasonable to me now that I got a chance to warm up before playing it. If I can hit the whole stream multiple times, then so can anyone capable of getting high combos/FCing it. I guess it just looked super awkward at the time.

Razuh wrote:

I've actually changed my opinion on that end stream after playtesting the map a couple of times, it's pretty reasonable to me now that I got a chance to warm up before playing it. If I can hit the whole stream multiple times, then so can anyone capable of getting high combos/FCing it. I guess it just looked super awkward at the time.

ahh thanks! ill add you to the testplayers whenever I end up updating that lmao

appreciate the feedback dude =)

to next modders if any1 has any idea of how i can spice up the 6min mark (or if they think i dont need to) that'd help ty ty

00:04:640 (1,2,3) - This placement could be more structured imo. You can also emphasize 3 for the drums.
00:05:926 (2,4) - Meanwhile this jump from 2>3 is quite large. Theres not a lot of justification for it compared to how you emphasize other notes.
00:24:926 (5,1) - Blanketting 5 with that slider would flow better.
00:37:497 (12,13,14) - Spacing change here isn't appropriate imo. Shift spacing after 00:37:783 (1) - since its a new measure,
01:00:640 (1) - This is quite undermapped honestly. I would do with a 1/1 slider instead of 3/2
01:02:926 (1) - Here too 1/2 slider instead. The song is very dense, don't change your rhythm to be less dense just for some variety. The section right after this is a stream so you need something difficult and dense to build up to it.
01:24:640 (5,6,7,8,1,2,3) - Man, use jumps here, spacing like this is really out of place imo...
01:29:926 (2,3,4,5) - Same as earlier. it makes the jumps here feel really out of place because of how big they become even tho theres no real shift in the music
03:10:353 (1,2,3,4,5) - Your stream shape here just looks rather wonky... it doesn't look smooth like your other streams.
03:20:069 (6,7) - Use 1/2 sliders, don't skimp on note density here
03:22:354 (1,2) - Here im okay with since it's not going into a dense section like streams etc..
04:20:416 (9) - More interesting slider? Like try something wavy maybe, or a spiral or something.
04:36:987 (1) - Position this more to the center/left for better angles. 256||357 is nice.
05:58:130 (9) - You could NC here to qualify the shape change, otherwise it looks a bit off in terms of transition angles.

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Generally, your streams are pretty solid. Jumps could use work, and you can use better patterning in slider/circle sections. More attention to overall structure and spacing would help!

Good luck!

Monstrata wrote:

00:04:640 (1,2,3) - This placement could be more structured imo. You can also emphasize 3 for the drums.

Maybe something like this

made it consistent with vvv
00:05:926 (2,4) - Meanwhile this jump from 2>3 is quite large. Theres not a lot of justification for it compared to how you emphasize other notes.
00:24:926 (5,1) - Blanketting 5 with that slider would flow better. changed in a better way i think

Like this

00:37:497 (12,13,14) - Spacing change here isn't appropriate imo. Shift spacing after 00:37:783 (1) - since its a new measure, fix
01:00:640 (1) - This is quite undermapped honestly. I would do with a 1/1 slider instead of 3/2 vocal is 3/2 thooo
01:02:926 (1) - Here too 1/2 slider instead. The song is very dense, don't change your rhythm to be less dense just for some variety. The section right after this is a stream so you need something difficult and dense to build up to it. i think its fine here, leadin for the slowest part,
01:24:640 (5,6,7,8,1,2,3) - Man, use jumps here, spacing like this is really out of place imo... i actually really think it fits the vocals here
01:29:926 (2,3,4,5) - Same as earlier. it makes the jumps here feel really out of place because of how big they become even tho theres no real shift in the music in vocals theres a ton of pitch changes in this section tho
03:10:353 (1,2,3,4,5) - Your stream shape here just looks rather wonky... it doesn't look smooth like your other streams. fixed i guess. also fixed a emphasis and antiflow issue presented by a lot of modders w this fix
03:20:069 (6,7) - Use 1/2 sliders, don't skimp on note density here fixed
03:22:354 (1,2) - Here im okay with since it's not going into a dense section like streams etc..
04:20:416 (9) - More interesting slider? Like try something wavy maybe, or a spiral or something. i think the way it is reflects the scream well, but I changed it to make it a liil more curvy
04:36:987 (1) - Position this more to the center/left for better angles. 256||357 is nice. Minor thing, I think the way it is now plays consistently with a lot of the other jumps I set up throughout the map
05:58:130 (9) - You could NC here to qualify the shape change, otherwise it looks a bit off in terms of transition angles. fixed yh

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Generally, your streams are pretty solid. Jumps could use work, and you can use better patterning in slider/circle sections. More attention to overall structure and spacing would help!

Good luck!

ok tbh i went through and fixed a few jump patterns and their spacing(namely the wall @ around 3:10) and some stuff around 30-40s so ye.. ty monstrata

I just write something, then go
00:47:997 (13) - lined a little bit to stream
01:07:497 (1) - how you look to set this pattern? you must try to set it there (https://puu.sh/tuhWU.jpg)
02:56:640 (9) - and there (https://puu.sh/tuisa.jpg)
01:12:068 (1) - and there (https://puu.sh/tuAYN.jpg)
01:16:640 (1) - and there (https://puu.sh/tuB3P.jpg)
03:01:211 (1) - and there (https://puu.sh/tuBcs.jpg)
04:42:701 (1) - and there (https://puu.sh/tuBjA.jpg)
04:47:272 (1) - and there (https://puu.sh/tuBsD.jpg)
05:12:987 (1) - (https://puu.sh/tuBz3.png)
05:13:844 (2) - (https://puu.sh/tuBEy.png)
05:20:702 (2) - (https://puu.sh/tuBJ4.png)
05:28:987 (1) - clap+whistle
05:29:415 (3) - clap+whistle
05:29:844 (9) - clap+whistle
05:30:130 (1) - clap+whistle
05:30:487 (6) - clap+whistle
05:30:916 (12) - clap+whistle
05:31:272 (1) - clap+whistle
05:31:630 (6) - clap+whistle
05:32:058 (12) - clap+whistle
05:32:416 (1) - clap+whistle
clap+whistle need for vocal, cause in this ultimate moment there's no one hitsound
05:40:702 (2) - remove clap, cause stands out among other hitsounds
05:55:558 (5) - 05:54:987 (13) - 05:54:415 (5) - remove hitsound, cause that's better for vocal
01:42:354 (1) - set there kiai
01:58:354 (1) - stopped kiai
03:06:926 (1) - set there kiai
03:22:926 (1) - stopped kiai
00:19:426 (2) - delete note, cause does not fit


you to understand what I'm saying I'll put modding-diff here => https://puu.sh/tuCwQ.osu download it, cause I can not fit all ideas here.

SCANDiO wrote:

I just write something, then go
00:47:997 (13) - lined a little bit to stream intentional emphasis here!
01:07:497 (1) - how you look to set this pattern? you must try to set it there (https://puu.sh/tuhWU.jpg)
02:56:640 (9) - and there (https://puu.sh/tuisa.jpg)
01:12:068 (1) - and there (https://puu.sh/tuAYN.jpg)
01:16:640 (1) - and there (https://puu.sh/tuB3P.jpg)
03:01:211 (1) - and there (https://puu.sh/tuBcs.jpg)
04:42:701 (1) - and there (https://puu.sh/tuBjA.jpg)
04:47:272 (1) - and there (https://puu.sh/tuBsD.jpg) ill respond to all of these suggestions right here since they regard a similar set of pattenring; I think the way that I've emphasized it portrays the song in its strongest way right now. I could map to the notes you've suggested, and it would fit and not be overmapped, but I think the breaks help the player discern tensity, as these sections are clearly less tense than other sections with consistent drums and vocal intensity. Also, adding that sort of patterning would make the playability of the map a bit worse since these breaks at these sections also give players some downtime
05:12:987 (1) - (https://puu.sh/tuBz3.png)
05:13:844 (2) - (https://puu.sh/tuBEy.png)
05:20:702 (2) - (https://puu.sh/tuBJ4.png) but my 1/3 sliders : ^ ( may see a change here in the future if its unrankable but i love how they sound/play!
05:28:987 (1) - clap+whistle added finish instead
05:29:415 (3) - clap+whistle
05:29:844 (9) - clap+whistle
05:30:130 (1) - clap+whistle
05:30:487 (6) - clap+whistle
05:30:916 (12) - clap+whistle
05:31:272 (1) - clap+whistle
05:31:630 (6) - clap+whistle
05:32:058 (12) - clap+whistle
05:32:416 (1) - clap+whistle its quiet in this stream intentionally to build momentum when the hitsounds actually begin at 05:33:558 (1), so no changes to all of these, but ty
clap+whistle need for vocal, cause in this ultimate moment there's no one hitsound it is building momentum for what comes next hehe
05:40:702 (2) - remove clap, cause stands out among other hitsounds ok why not
05:55:558 (5) - 05:54:987 (13) - 05:54:415 (5) - remove hitsound, cause that's better for vocal its consistently hitsounded in this stream
01:42:354 (1) - set there kiai
01:58:354 (1) - stopped kiai dont think this part is intense enough for kiai compared to everything else i have as kiai; would be very inconsistent
03:06:926 (1) - set there kiai
03:22:926 (1) - stopped kiai agreed here and also added hitsounds to mirror the repetition of this part at 05:33:558 (1) -
00:19:426 (2) - delete note, cause does not fit ghost noted to emphasize the sliderstart


you to understand what I'm saying I'll put modding-diff here => https://puu.sh/tuCwQ.osu download it, cause I can not fit all ideas here.

looked through your diff and saw a few cool things, so the map changed a lil! thanks for your mod dude!

also tried to update modders/testplayers box! pls let me know if i forgot u!!