My part of M4M
[ General]
- I'm not sure about diff naming. E icon normal and H icon hard doesn't looks good. Maybe try make custom diff naming like "Relaxing", "Silent" etc.?
- I think you can add kiai to this map to emphasise louder and more important part of music.
- 00:04:765 (2) - I think you can add curve to this slder, because straight slider can't fit music well right here. Rythm is similar with 00:00:029 (1,3) - these rythms. It's understable 00:11:871 (2,1) - here, because you haven't violin sound right there.
- 00:47:397 (1) - Aesthetics between these notes can be better. You should curve this slider less, because it will create better aesthetics with 00:49:765 (2) - this circle. I prefer do it by replacing this slider with 00:21:344 (2) - this slider. I think this is the easiest way.
- 01:21:344 (2) - You can move this slider to up a bit, because you will obtain better flow and I think more smooth transition between 01:18:976 (1,2) - these slider right here. Overall i think it will be more "beginner-friendly".
- 01:45:028 (3) - I think you can remake this sldier to repeat 1/2 slider, because 01:45:818 - this rythm is very important.
[ Normal]
- 01:16:607 (3) - Light proposition here. You can try flip this slider in horizontal line, because I think it will work better with 01:15:818 (2,4) - these circles by making this flow more reasonable.
- 01:28:449 (1) - This slider broke consistancy maked by previous sliders on similar rythms. I think changing rythm at the end of map is not good idea. I prefer make here 1/1 slider + 1/2 slider / 2 circles to obtain better consistancy.
[ Hard]
- 01:05:555 (2) - You can replace this slider to two circles, because you have rythm like 01:06:344 (3,4) - this right here. More emphasised than rythm on first slider. It will can make a good 4 circles pattern and I think this is best you can do here. And one more thing, you place 4 circles pattern 01:19:765 (2,3,4,5) - here, on similar rythm. By doing this what i said you can improve consistancy a bit.
- 01:29:239 (2) - ^ This is hard and I think you can use more circles on this diff.
- 01:40:291 (1) - Here you can place new combo, because this is stronger rythm and I think you should do it to emphasise it. Look, you have new combo 01:47:397 (1) - here, on similar rythm.
That's all.
I know, my mod is not very long, but this mapset doesn't need any big fixes, anyway - good map.
~GL!