hi, m4m from german circlejerk association inc.
[General]
BG good, audio good, folder clean
Would be chill if you could quickly give a source for the metadata so that we are safe on that front
[Kantan]
00:01:666 - to 00:13:666 - this part is a bit too dense imo, it's even denser than some spots of the kiai so i would suggest adding at least a 2 4/1 breaks or something, my personal suggestions would be deleting 00:06:332 (9) - (i know there is a strong sound and a finisher here, but from a structural point of view it would be a good spot for a break) and 00:11:666 (18) -
00:17:666 (25,26) - maybe add finishers here too since these are also way stronger sounds than the other ones in this part
00:22:999 (31,32) - ^
00:42:332 (3) - maybe delete to give more emphasis on the next note as a start of a new section
01:29:666 - i don't really see anything calling for a 5plet here, maybe make it ddd d or d dkd instead
[Futsuu]
01:30:666 (6) - maybe delete this note, i know there is a strong sound here, but the length of the pattern in general kind of takes away emphasis from the strong sounds and this is the most logical thing to delete imo
[Muzukashii]
To be honest i feel like this diff isn't using long enuogh 1/2 patterns at places, but i guess it works since the oni doesn't really use longer 1/2 chains either.
I'd still suggest taking a look at it and maybe making some of them longer though, if you aren't sure on what to do feel free to hmu and we can irc.
[Oni]
seems good for now tbh
[Inner Oni]
00:13:666 - some of the patterns here aren't following the doublet rythm prompted by the music, but i can kind of see what you are mapping to here and it plays well too, just wanted to point it out though incase you want to consider mapping the 1/2 rythm instead, which would follow the main melody more
rest seems good tbh, i'll recheck this again briefly before i bubble after you apply to see if i missed anything, but this looks pretty much good to go imo