hikikochan wrote:
hi! from queue[3x’s Kantan]
00:23:051 (36) - change to k? a) the guitar accompaniment and chord progression in general moves up in pitch on this beat, and b) changing this to k would allow 00:23:449 (37,38,39) - to stand out as a pattern mirroring 00:18:681 (28,29,30) <<< is possible ...
00:35:767 (60,61,62) - change this to k k d? it would allow for variety (differing from 00:34:177 (57,58,59) -) and furthermore would better lead into the new phrase starting at 00:36:561 - <<< with a change in 00:34:192- I made possible a more adequate flow with the vocal sound.
00:51:661 (91) - change to k? this would make 00:50:866 (89,90,91,92,93) - better fit the vocal melody <<< possible
01:05:568 (114) - move this to 01:06:363 -? having density at the end of the phrase provides for better buildup, and isolating the d at 01:05:171 (113) - would better emphasize the final chord change before the kiai <<< It would be better if I just added another note in 01:07:570- to compensate this point imo.
Thanks -w-
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