forum

Suzuki Konomi - DAYS of DASH (TV Size)

posted
Total Posts
31
Topic Starter
AtoNiik
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Hny
Hard Diff:
00:01:572 (3,4) - I think you could improve beatmap flow (second one leads to next slider) by placing this slider like this:

00:06:822 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - This whole pattern is inconsistent. You make a slider 1/2 then make a full beat one

00:15:822 (1,2,3) - A triple should END with a strong sound (usually), not start with one. When you move it 2 ticks to the left it sounds a lot better (try it).
00:22:009 (1,2,3) - 00:22:759 (1,2,3) - These ones do it correctly ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

All i can see in this diff is inconsistency in patterns
Topic Starter
AtoNiik

H0nney wrote:

Hard Diff:
00:01:572 (3,4) - I think you could improve beatmap flow (second one leads to next slider) by placing this slider like this:
Fixed

00:06:822 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - This whole pattern is inconsistent. You make a slider 1/2 then make a full beat one fixed

00:15:822 (1,2,3) - A triple should END with a strong sound (usually), not start with one. When you move it 2 ticks to the left it sounds a lot better (try it). Fixed and yes it sounds better
00:22:009 (1,2,3) - 00:22:759 (1,2,3) - These ones do it correctly ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

All i can see in this diff is inconsistency in patterns



i change the pattern and try to make it consistent
Thanks for the mod
GenDoNL
From my queue.

Decided to only do the hard diff, since I will give you some extra advice there.

[Hard]
  1. 00:04:384 (3,4) - These 2 should probably not overlap, put the 4 a bit to the right.
  2. First of all, your sliders are really inconsistent. 00:07:009 (2,4,2,3) - They are all different shapes and are at random locations. I'd advice you to watch this video: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FCB5rLXqWKY (And any of pishi's videos really)
  3. 00:10:759 (5) - Move this slider to 00:11:322 (5) and file the gap with 1/2 notes.
  4. 00:19:197 (3) - So many slider points in this slider, what are you trying to do here?
  5. 00:20:697 (8) - This slider feels like it's offbeat.
  6. 00:21:634 (3,3,3) - The first repeat slider is a bit off
  7. 00:23:134 (3,2) - There is an overlap between 1 and 3 for seemingly no reason, try to keep your maps clean!
  8. 00:33:634 (5) - What is this slider mapped to? Should start on the white tick (00:33:822) right there in my opinion. In general try to always start a slider on a strong note and end it on a softer note! Of course there are exceptions, but especially when you just start out it's a really good idea to do just that.
  9. 00:45:634 (1,2,3,1,2) - Fun pattern!
  10. 01:13:197 - There is quite a strong sound here but you completely ignore it. :(
In general I'd say you should work on the rhythm of your maps. It's quite difficult, but try to be consistent and create a stable rhythm.
Try not to create random gaps in your map while there is clearly a sound there, and maybe even listen to the song at 25% speed to find some interesting rhythms to map to!

Secondly try to not randomly place sliders, no shame in copy-pasting a slider and rotating/mirroring!

Don't get discouraged because of what I'm saying, you'll get there!
Topic Starter
AtoNiik

GenDoNL wrote:

From my queue.

Decided to only do the hard diff, since I will give you some extra advice there.

[Hard]
  1. 00:04:384 (3,4) - These 2 should probably not overlap, put the 4 a bit to the right. Fixed
  2. First of all, your sliders are really inconsistent. 00:07:009 (2,4,2,3) - They are all different shapes and are at random locations. I'd advice you to watch this video: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FCB5rLXqWKY (And any of pishi's videos really) I'm going to look his video
  3. 00:10:759 (5) - Move this slider to 00:11:322 (5) and file the gap with 1/2 notes.
  4. 00:19:197 (3) - So many slider points in this slider, what are you trying to do here?
  5. 00:20:697 (8) - This slider feels like it's offbeat.
  6. 00:21:634 (3,3,3) - The first repeat slider is a bit off
  7. 00:23:134 (3,2) - There is an overlap between 1 and 3 for seemingly no reason, try to keep your maps clean!
  8. 00:33:634 (5) - What is this slider mapped to? Should start on the white tick (00:33:822) right there in my opinion. In general try to always start a slider on a strong note and end it on a softer note! Of course there are exceptions, but especially when you just start out it's a really good idea to do just that.
  9. 00:45:634 (1,2,3,1,2) - Fun pattern!
  10. 01:13:197 - There is quite a strong sound here but you completely ignore it. :(
In general I'd say you should work on the rhythm of your maps. It's quite difficult, but try to be consistent and create a stable rhythm.
Try not to create random gaps in your map while there is clearly a sound there, and maybe even listen to the song at 25% speed to find some interesting rhythms to map to!

Secondly try to not randomly place sliders, no shame in copy-pasting a slider and rotating/mirroring!

Don't get discouraged because of what I'm saying, you'll get there!
Thanks for the mod
I'll work harder to increase my mapping skill thanks for ur help, ur advices is helpful.
Wuab
Only modding insane and hard :p

General

Put (kanda sorata shiina mashiro aoyama nanami kamiigusa misaki mitaka jin akasaka ryuunosuke hata aki shirato yuusuke) idk the show or characters these are just tags from ranked map-sets of this map
for all diffs they are in soft sample-set, you could get get custom hit-sounds from here, t/15407/start=45 and use them to help emphasis the kiai during the song.
the volume for all diffs is 100%, reduce these all to 70-80% and have the kiais in all diffs be 90-100%, this would help the kiai be more noticeable and emphasis the chorus.

GameIt's Insane

Placement
00:05:322 (1,2) - space this away from the start of the streams the spacing is uneven
00:44:884 (4,5) - maybe space this further away from 3 makes spacing weird
00:54:634 (9,1,1) - bad spacing here, make spacing between 00:54:822 (1,1) - larger
01:11:509 (2,4) - good blanket :D

Pretty good, Alot of questionable overlap that need cleaning up eg. 00:36:447 (5,6,1) - 5 and 1 have bad overlap.

Hard
Placement
00:50:697 (6) - this slider flows bad, make the tail flow into 7
01:06:634 (8) - same thing, needs to flow to 1

good this diff also has alot of questionable and bad overlap eg. 01:00:634 (5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - lots of overlap that is unclean that should be fixed.


good maps just needs more feedback and cleaning up.

Pm me if you have any questions :D

Gl and have fun mapping!
GameIt
GameIt's Insane

Placement
00:05:322 (1,2) - space this away from the start of the streams the spacing is uneven Changed
00:44:884 (4,5) - maybe space this further away from 3 makes spacing weird Fixed
00:54:634 (9,1,1) - bad spacing here, make spacing between 00:54:822 (1,1) - larger Fixed
01:11:509 (2,4) - good blanket :D Thanks

Pretty good, Alot of questionable overlap that need cleaning up eg. 00:36:447 (5,6,1) - 5 and 1 have bad overlap.
Topic Starter
AtoNiik

Wuab wrote:

Only modding insane and hard :p

General

Put (kanda sorata shiina mashiro aoyama nanami kamiigusa misaki mitaka jin akasaka ryuunosuke hata aki shirato yuusuke) idk the show or characters these are just tags from ranked map-sets of this map Done
for all diffs they are in soft sample-set, you could get get custom hit-sounds from here, t/15407/start=45 and use them to help emphasis the kiai during the song. Actually i work on that not already done
the volume for all diffs is 100%, reduce these all to 70-80% and have the kiais in all diffs be 90-100%, this would help the kiai be more noticeable and emphasis the chorus. Done

Hard
Placement
00:50:697 (6) - this slider flows bad, make the tail flow into 7 Fixed
01:06:634 (8) - same thing, needs to flow to 1 Fixed

good this diff also has alot of questionable and bad overlap eg. 01:00:634 (5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - lots of overlap that is unclean that should be fixed.
Ok, i try to clean to make it better

good maps just needs more feedback and cleaning up.

Pm me if you have any questions :D

Gl and have fun mapping!
Thanks a lot for advice, and for mods.
Waets
Hey~
Great song I love it :D
First mod pls be gentle, also I don't speak english very well I'll try my best !


Sometimes on the map there are some circle or sliders which shouldn't be that far from the next notes, because it's not at equal distance comparate to the timing : https://gyazo.com/69a502d7effb544198ffcec3f9721c61 you can see that the 3 notes has the same time difference, but the distance is not the same, I putted colors so you can see easily. Sometimes it works well cuz of the song tho. Maybe you can make equal divide on theses who doesn't work with the song ? :
Here I saw this problem :
Normal :
00:18:260 (5,1,2)
00:20:697 (5,1)
01:18:822 (1,2)
Advanced :
00:00:822 (1,2) -
00:05:322 (1,2) -
00:09:822 (1,2,3) -
00:22:947 (6,1) -
00:26:134 (1,2) -
00:30:072 (7,1) -
00:45:822 (5,1,2) -
00:47:134 (2,1) -
01:00:447 (10,1) -
Hard :
00:23:697 (1,2) -
00:56:697 (3,1) -

Advanced :
00:03:447 (1,2) - I feel like you can put 3 circle stacked

Gamelt's Insane :
00:06:822 (1,2) - Maybe it's better to put a slider a the end of the stream ?
00:43:572 (3) - maybe put a circle at the end of this slider
00:49:572 (3) - ^


It's pretty cool map, hope I helped you :)
Don't hesitate to pm me if you have questions !
Topic Starter
AtoNiik

Waets wrote:

Hey~
Great song I love it :D Thanks I love it to. I love all song by Suzuki Konomi.
First mod pls be gentle, also I don't speak english very well I'll try my best !


Sometimes on the map there are some circle or sliders which shouldn't be that far from the next notes, because it's not at equal distance comparate to the timing : https://gyazo.com/69a502d7effb544198ffcec3f9721c61 you can see that the 3 notes has the same time difference, but the distance is not the same, I putted colors so you can see easily. Sometimes it works well cuz of the song tho. Maybe you can make equal divide on theses who doesn't work with the song ? :
Here I saw this problem :
Normal :
00:18:260 (5,1,2)
00:20:697 (5,1)
01:18:822 (1,2)
Advanced :
00:00:822 (1,2) -
00:05:322 (1,2) -
00:09:822 (1,2,3) -
00:22:947 (6,1) -
00:26:134 (1,2) -
00:30:072 (7,1) -
00:45:822 (5,1,2) -
00:47:134 (2,1) -
01:00:447 (10,1) -
Hard :
00:23:697 (1,2) -
00:56:697 (3,1) -
All Fixed
Advanced :
00:03:447 (1,2) - I feel like you can put 3 circle stacked J'y ai pas pensé mais c'est vrai que c'est mieux de mon point de vue

Gamelt's Insane :
00:06:822 (1,2) - Maybe it's better to put a slider a the end of the stream ?
00:43:572 (3) - maybe put a circle at the end of this slider
00:49:572 (3) - ^


It's pretty cool map, hope I helped you :)
Don't hesitate to pm me if you have questions !
Merci pour le mod :) :D
GameIt

Waets wrote:

Gamelt's Insane :
00:06:822 (1,2) - Maybe it's better to put a slider a the end of the stream ? yes, thanks
00:43:572 (3) - maybe put a circle at the end of this slider
00:49:572 (3) - ^
fixed both, i guess i just can't hear snares :)

It's pretty cool map, hope I helped you :)
Don't hesitate to pm me if you have questions !
Thanks for the mod!
-NekoNya
Hi! I'm done~

this is a little awkward... well... It's just insane though. Hope it's okay for your taste. If i have an idea i'm gonna update the map/remap it to make it a little harder okay?
these are my hitsounds:
https://www.dropbox.com/s/0lz4y32zh1eqf ... 0.wav?dl=0
https://www.dropbox.com/s/vsi5dwtwzstaj ... 0.wav?dl=0

NekoNya's Insane
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 57072
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.6
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 0.9
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 2

[Metadata]
Title:DAYS of DASH (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:DAYS of DASH (TV Size)
Artist:Suzuki Konomi
ArtistUnicode:鈴木このみ
Creator:AtoNiik
Version:NekoNya's Insane
Source:さくら荘のペットな彼女
Tags:kanda sorata shiina mashiro aoyama nanami kamiigusa misaki mitaka jin akasaka ryuunosuke hata aki shirato yuusuke
BeatmapID:0
BeatmapSetID:-1

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6.6
CircleSize:3.8
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:9
SliderMultiplier:2
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"thumb-1920-735268.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

[TimingPoints]
822,375,4,2,80,70,1,0
822,-111.111111111111,4,2,80,70,0,0
2322,-133.333333333333,4,2,80,70,0,0
3822,-111.111111111111,4,2,80,70,0,0
5322,-100,4,2,80,70,0,0
6822,-90.9090909090909,4,2,80,70,0,0
12822,-133.333333333333,4,2,80,70,0,0
30822,-117.647058823529,4,2,80,70,0,0
42822,-111.111111111111,4,2,80,70,0,0
51072,-100,4,2,80,70,0,0
51822,-117.647058823529,4,2,80,70,0,0
54822,-200,4,2,80,70,0,0
56322,-125,4,2,80,70,0,0
57072,-80,4,2,80,70,0,0
57447,-71.4285714285714,4,2,80,70,0,0
57822,-100,4,2,80,70,0,1
68884,-76.9230769230769,4,2,80,70,0,1
69259,-66.6666666666667,4,2,80,70,0,1
69447,-100,4,2,80,70,0,1
81822,-100,4,2,80,70,0,0


[HitObjects]
108,64,822,6,0,P|80:132|88:176,1,89.9999972534181
124,360,1384,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,280,1572,2,0,P|160:248|100:256,1,89.9999972534181
232,380,1947,2,0,P|282:389|331:354,1,89.9999972534181
376,308,2322,5,0,0:0:0:0:
268,300,2509,1,0,0:0:0:0:
424,56,3447,1,0,0:0:0:0:
392,40,3540,1,0,0:0:0:0:
360,40,3634,1,0,0:0:0:0:
328,52,3728,1,0,0:0:0:0:
300,80,3822,6,0,P|268:124|196:124,1,89.9999972534181
376,216,4384,1,0,0:0:0:0:
376,216,4572,2,0,L|464:288,1,89.9999972534181
312,280,4947,2,0,L|224:352,1,89.9999972534181
388,376,5322,1,0,0:0:0:0:
292,196,5509,6,0,P|212:152|92:176,1,200,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,188,5978,1,0,0:0:0:0:
56,224,6072,1,0,0:0:0:0:
52,264,6165,1,0,0:0:0:0:
60,304,6259,1,0,0:0:0:0:
80,340,6353,1,0,0:0:0:0:
116,356,6447,6,0,L|188:356,3,50,8|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,312,6822,2,0,B|320:284|320:284|392:316,1,110.000003356934,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
436,352,7197,1,8,0:0:0:0:
364,204,7384,1,0,0:0:0:0:
472,280,7572,2,0,P|496:224|480:148,1,110.000003356934,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
444,52,7947,5,8,0:0:0:0:
364,204,8134,1,0,0:0:0:0:
316,44,8322,2,0,B|248:44|248:44|204:80,1,110.000003356934,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,212,8697,2,0,P|68:212|60:152,1,110.000003356934,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,28,9072,5,0,0:0:0:0:
212,168,9259,1,2,0:0:0:0:
132,212,9447,1,8,0:0:0:0:
96,236,9540,1,0,0:0:0:0:
76,276,9634,1,0,0:0:0:0:
76,320,9728,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,360,9822,6,0,B|148:368|148:368|224:356,1,110.000003356934,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,300,10197,2,0,P|328:280|276:356,1,220.000006713867,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,276,10759,2,0,P|232:228|300:200,1,110.000003356934,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,164,11134,2,0,P|404:144|320:76,1,220.000006713867,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,11697,12,0,12447,0:0:0:0:
92,56,12822,6,0,L|104:152,1,75.0000028610231,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,124,13197,2,0,L|180:220,1,75.0000028610231,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,272,13572,1,2,0:0:0:0:
101,130,13759,1,0,0:0:0:0:
168,52,13947,2,0,P|224:28|260:36,1,75.0000028610231,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,80,14322,6,0,P|368:92|396:84,1,75.0000028610231,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
460,36,14697,1,2,0:0:0:0:
356,12,14884,1,0,0:0:0:0:
464,116,15072,2,0,P|476:184|468:228,1,112.500004291535,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
452,268,15447,2,0,L|436:320,3,37.5000014305115,2|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
412,340,15822,6,0,B|368:372|368:372|320:364,1,75.0000028610231,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,276,16197,1,2,0:0:0:0:
356,272,16384,1,0,0:0:0:0:
236,368,16572,2,0,L|140:368,1,75.0000028610231,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,308,16947,2,0,P|144:284|172:284,1,75.0000028610231,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,280,17322,6,0,P|312:236|248:192,1,150.000005722046,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,204,17884,1,0,0:0:0:0:
140,216,17978,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,216,18072,1,2,0:0:0:0:
52,204,18165,1,0,0:0:0:0:
28,168,18259,6,0,L|8:112,3,37.5000014305115,0|0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,60,18634,2,0,L|124:104,1,37.5000014305115
148,128,18822,2,0,B|180:160|180:160|280:84,1,150.000005722046,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,48,19384,1,0,0:0:0:0:
264,16,19572,1,2,0:0:0:0:
340,128,19759,2,0,P|376:176|384:220,1,75.0000028610231,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,252,20134,6,0,P|388:280|452:240,1,150.000005722046
464,156,20697,1,2,0:0:0:0:
380,189,20884,1,0,0:0:0:0:
484,344,21072,1,2,0:0:0:0:
396,360,21259,2,0,P|332:364|296:352,1,75.0000028610231,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,296,21634,6,0,B|228:260|228:260|216:352|192:364,1,150.000005722046
112,376,22197,1,2,0:0:0:0:
152,248,22384,2,0,P|192:192|276:200,1,150.000005722046,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,252,22947,1,8,0:0:0:0:
424,336,23134,6,0,B|460:364|460:364|456:300|492:236,1,150.000005722046,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
504,108,23697,1,8,0:0:0:0:
472,24,23884,2,0,P|408:12|304:32,1,150.000005722046,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,64,24447,1,0,0:0:0:0:
172,116,24634,6,0,P|104:112|136:48,1,150.000005722046,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,0,25197,1,8,0:0:0:0:
232,172,25384,2,0,P|184:208|76:196,1,150.000005722046,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,132,25947,1,8,0:0:0:0:
144,112,26134,1,0,0:0:0:0:
24,268,26322,6,0,P|20:308|32:356,1,75.0000028610231,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,368,26697,1,8,0:0:0:0:
148,284,26884,2,0,B|168:244|168:244|176:292|220:336,1,150.000005722046,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,200,27447,2,0,P|252:256|316:292,1,112.500004291535,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,216,27822,5,2,0:0:0:0:
296,128,28009,1,2,0:0:0:0:
148,208,28197,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,216,28384,2,0,P|372:216|412:200,1,75.0000028610231
472,164,28759,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,136,28947,1,8,0:0:0:0:
476,252,29134,6,0,P|484:304|468:348,2,75.0000028610231,0|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,172,29697,1,8,0:0:0:0:
364,96,29884,2,0,B|328:72|308:40|308:40|296:96|240:88,1,150.000005722046,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,48,30447,1,8,0:0:0:0:
136,40,30540,1,0,0:0:0:0:
100,48,30634,1,0,0:0:0:0:
72,76,30728,1,0,0:0:0:0:
60,116,30822,6,0,P|60:168|72:208,1,85.0000016212464,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,244,31197,2,0,P|160:192|148:152,1,85.0000016212464,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,276,31572,1,2,0:0:0:0:
176,328,31759,1,2,0:0:0:0:
264,276,31947,6,0,P|320:256|372:264,1,85.0000016212464,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,292,32322,1,2,0:0:0:0:
324,360,32509,1,2,0:0:0:0:
416,208,32697,2,0,P|428:152|428:104,1,85.0000016212464,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,28,33072,2,0,P|336:12|348:68,1,127.50000243187
344,96,33447,1,8,0:0:0:0:
336,136,33540,1,0,0:0:0:0:
308,168,33634,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,188,33728,1,0,0:0:0:0:
228,192,33822,6,0,P|168:192|128:176,1,85.0000016212464,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
60,124,34197,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,96,34384,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,200,34572,2,0,P|48:256|60:300,1,85.0000016212464,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,336,34947,6,0,P|156:280|144:236,1,85.0000016212464,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,200,35322,1,2,0:0:0:0:
60,360,35509,1,2,0:0:0:0:
144,172,35697,2,0,P|216:152|264:164,1,85.0000016212464,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,180,36072,2,0,B|368:200|368:200|368:160|392:116,1,127.50000243187
432,96,36447,2,0,L|468:64,1,42.5000008106232,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,168,36634,2,0,L|440:212,1,42.5000008106232
436,248,36822,6,0,P|416:304|416:336,1,85.0000016212464,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,276,37197,2,0,P|280:264|232:272,1,85.0000016212464,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,292,37572,1,2,0:0:0:0:
220,364,37759,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,216,37947,2,0,P|140:208|88:236,1,85.0000016212464,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
44,316,38322,6,0,B|12:356|12:356|8:224,1,170.000003242493,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
12,136,38884,2,0,P|44:80|160:68,1,170.000003242493,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,116,39447,2,8,L|272:108,1,42.5000008106232,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,64,39634,2,0,L|360:108,1,42.5000008106232
372,156,39822,5,2,0:0:0:0:
320,244,40009,1,2,0:0:0:0:
268,156,40197,1,8,0:0:0:0:
416,128,40384,5,2,0:0:0:0:
320,296,40572,1,0,0:0:0:0:
220,128,40759,1,2,0:0:0:0:
408,232,40947,1,8,0:0:0:0:
324,380,41134,6,0,P|248:376|136:344,1,170.000003242493,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
40,228,41697,2,0,B|16:196|16:196|44:192|112:176,1,127.50000243187,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,152,42072,2,0,L|236:136,1,42.5000008106232,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
428,104,42259,2,0,L|368:116,1,42.5000008106232,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,24,42447,2,0,L|296:64,1,42.5000008106232,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,216,42634,2,0,L|320:272,1,42.5000008106232,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,332,42822,5,4,0:0:0:0:
504,224,43009,1,0,0:0:0:0:
328,148,43197,2,0,P|264:148|228:184,1,89.9999972534181,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,260,43572,2,0,B|124:304|124:304|120:248|72:204,1,134.999995880127,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
68,200,43947,5,8,0:0:0:0:
208,328,44134,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,192,44322,2,0,P|200:120|184:84,1,89.9999972534181,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,28,44697,2,0,P|88:100|104:136,1,89.9999972534181,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,20,45072,2,0,P|248:4|352:28,1,134.999995880127,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,40,45447,5,8,0:0:0:0:
440,140,45634,1,0,0:0:0:0:
308,120,45822,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,56,46009,1,2,0:0:0:0:
364,184,46197,5,8,0:0:0:0:
323,13,46384,1,0,0:0:0:0:
468,172,46572,1,2,0:0:0:0:
396,276,46759,2,0,P|332:272|304:252,1,89.9999972534181,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,47040,12,8,48447,0:0:0:0:
96,56,48822,6,0,P|88:116|96:152,1,89.9999972534181,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,268,49197,1,8,0:0:0:0:
184,104,49384,1,0,0:0:0:0:
72,240,49572,1,2,0:0:0:0:
248,192,49759,1,2,0:0:0:0:
68,116,49947,5,8,0:0:0:0:
184,292,50134,1,0,0:0:0:0:
248,192,50322,2,0,P|288:160|368:172,1,134.999995880127,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,240,50697,2,0,B|268:308|268:308|264:364,1,134.999995880127,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,360,51072,6,0,P|288:292|200:324,1,150,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,340,51447,2,0,B|128:360|120:376|120:376|112:328|72:264,1,150,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
28,212,51822,2,0,P|8:132|48:48,1,170.000003242493,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,16,52384,1,0,0:0:0:0:
140,148,52572,1,0,0:0:0:0:
244,60,52759,6,0,P|296:40|336:48,1,85.0000016212464,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
452,92,53134,1,0,0:0:0:0:
356,192,53322,2,0,P|276:212|152:204,1,170.000003242493,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,160,53884,1,0,0:0:0:0:
136,276,54072,6,0,B|160:324|160:376|160:376|200:332|228:336,1,170.000003242493,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,236,54634,1,0,0:0:0:0:
356,176,54822,2,0,B|340:152|308:148|296:148|264:160|264:160|224:112|180:108|120:120|96:168,1,300,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,220,56134,1,0,0:0:0:0:
124,56,56322,6,0,L|64:68,1,40
220,48,56509,2,0,L|276:52,1,40
340,68,56697,1,0,0:0:0:0:
380,76,56790,1,0,0:0:0:0:
412,100,56884,1,0,0:0:0:0:
424,140,56978,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,192,57072,6,0,B|404:256|416:292|416:292|380:248|324:260,1,187.5,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,340,57447,2,0,P|452:364|492:280,1,209.999993591309,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,176,57822,2,0,P|284:164|184:176,1,150,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,192,58197,5,8,0:0:0:0:
256,304,58384,1,0,0:0:0:0:
248,88,58572,2,0,P|184:72|136:88,1,100,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
40,180,58947,2,0,L|20:52,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,192,59322,2,0,L|136:320,1,100,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
12,372,59697,1,8,0:0:0:0:
44,184,59884,1,0,0:0:0:0:
180,252,60072,6,0,P|252:264|300:248,1,100,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,176,60447,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,104,60634,2,0,P|196:132|280:148,1,200,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,60,61197,1,8,0:0:0:0:
460,192,61384,2,0,L|472:312,1,100,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,216,61759,6,0,L|352:96,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
476,32,62134,1,0,0:0:0:0:
460,192,62322,1,2,0:0:0:0:
404,52,62509,2,0,P|340:28|288:60,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,112,62884,6,0,B|144:136|136:156|136:156|136:112|108:64,1,150,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
56,32,63259,2,0,P|44:88|84:144,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,256,63634,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,196,63822,1,2,0:0:0:0:
56,208,64009,1,2,0:0:0:0:
216,280,64197,1,8,0:0:0:0:
132,144,64384,1,0,0:0:0:0:
48,280,64572,6,0,P|48:328|64:376,1,100,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,332,64947,2,0,P|272:316|332:328,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
468,364,65322,1,2,0:0:0:0:
396,220,65509,1,2,0:0:0:0:
384,380,65697,1,8,0:0:0:0:
480,252,65884,6,0,P|488:152|448:80,1,150,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
436,84,66259,2,0,B|384:120|384:120|316:96,1,100,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,48,66634,2,0,P|132:112|188:200,1,200,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,248,67197,5,8,0:0:0:0:
208,124,67384,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,312,67572,1,2,0:0:0:0:
316,112,67759,1,2,0:0:0:0:
174,194,67947,2,0,L|114:222,1,50,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
267,225,68134,2,0,L|339:261,1,50
240,136,68322,6,0,P|208:72|72:48,1,200,12|12,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,204,68884,2,0,P|160:132|80:140,1,194.999991073609,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
56,256,69259,2,0,B|80:308|88:360|88:360|112:304|144:296,1,150.000005722046,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,272,69540,6,0,L|208:236,2,50,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,224,69822,2,0,P|288:192|344:200,1,100,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,264,70197,1,8,0:0:0:0:
312,312,70384,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,188,70572,2,0,P|424:112|424:68,1,100,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,16,70947,5,8,0:0:0:0:
320,172,71134,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,20,71322,1,2,0:0:0:0:
232,108,71509,2,0,P|176:120|96:100,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
44,40,71884,6,0,B|-4:4|-4:4|16:120,1,150,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
20,120,72259,1,2,0:0:0:0:
128,240,72447,1,8,0:0:0:0:
104,104,72634,1,0,0:0:0:0:
40,252,72822,2,0,P|68:312|128:324,1,100,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,316,73197,5,8,0:0:0:0:
148,160,73384,1,0,0:0:0:0:
180,360,73572,1,2,0:0:0:0:
244,212,73759,2,0,B|284:180|312:180|360:188,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
484,248,74134,5,0,0:0:0:0:
316,280,74322,1,2,0:0:0:0:
432,172,74509,2,0,P|420:92|380:56,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,8,74884,1,2,0:0:0:0:
348,144,75072,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,68,75259,1,2,0:0:0:0:
168,56,75353,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,52,75447,6,0,B|84:48|84:48|120:132,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,168,75822,1,2,0:0:0:0:
220,260,76009,1,2,0:0:0:0:
264,148,76197,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,264,76384,5,2,0:0:0:0:
304,224,76572,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,84,76759,1,2,0:0:0:0:
228,284,76947,1,8,0:0:0:0:
280,112,77134,2,0,P|328:80|428:88,1,150,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,216,77509,6,0,P|328:176|400:168,1,150,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,176,77884,1,2,0:0:0:0:
376,332,78072,1,8,0:0:0:0:
252,188,78259,1,2,0:0:0:0:
400,124,78447,1,8,0:0:0:0:
440,100,78540,1,8,0:0:0:0:
464,64,78634,1,2,0:0:0:0:
456,20,78728,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,0,78822,6,0,P|364:-8|304:24,1,100,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,60,79197,1,8,0:0:0:0:
180,116,79384,2,0,P|120:132|160:60,1,150,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,40,79759,2,0,B|200:16|200:16|304:112,1,150,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,120,80134,6,0,P|292:204|240:200,1,150,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,176,80509,1,4,0:0:0:0:
192,264,80697,1,4,0:0:0:0:
264,316,80884,1,4,0:0:0:0:
440,276,81259,5,4,0:0:0:0:
460,188,81447,1,4,0:0:0:0:
424,104,81634,1,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,81822,12,0,82947,0:0:0:0:
WildCry
Hello° NM as request from my modding queue post...

Normal
Fix all distance in this objects.
00:19:572 (3,4) -
00:20:322 (4,5) -
00:21:822 (2,3) -
00:22:572 (3,4) -
00:23:322 (4,5) -
00:23:697 (5,6) -
00:24:447 (6,7) -
00:32:322 (2,3) -
00:33:072 (3,4) -
00:42:072 (7,8) -
01:20:885 (3,4) -



Advanced

00:16:571 (5,7) - Snap the end of this silders
00:26:134 (1,2) - Put this a little more up
Try to be clearn with your distance here, use the distance snap if is posible.


NekoNya's Insane
00:10:197 (2,3) - Improve this blanket
01:04:384 (7) - Put this more down
01:09:540 (1) - Make this a steam

That's all Good Luck!
Agatsu
hey from (´・◡・`) queue

  • waet's extra
  1. the slider velocity is pretty high in this diff, nerf pls
  2. 00:01:852 (2) - there's no sound here so i'd remove it
  3. 00:02:697 (1) - slider should end on 00:03:072 -
  4. 00:03:353 (1) - remove this note because you should focus on the more important sounds like 00:03:446 (2,3,4,5,6) -
  5. 00:03:915 (6) - slider should be on 00:03:822 - instead
  6. 00:07:384 (3) - slider end is unsnapped
  7. 00:10:947 (2) - make this to two circles because 00:11:134 - deserves to be clicked
  8. 00:11:509 - there is a guitar sound here, place a circle here and you can move the spinner after the circle
  9. 00:16:009 (7) - slider should be on 00:15:822 - instead
  10. 00:12:822 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - this section has huge spacing for a calmer section, nerf pls
  11. 00:35:322 (1,2,3) - this should just be a slider instead
  12. 00:57:822 (1) - object isn't snapped!
[]

good luck :P
Waets

Agatsu wrote:

hey from (´・◡・`) queue Hello (´・◡・`)

  • waet's extra
  1. the slider velocity is pretty high in this diff, nerf pls
  2. 00:01:852 (2) - there's no sound here so i'd remove it Fixed
  3. 00:02:697 (1) - slider should end on 00:03:072 - Fixed
  4. 00:03:353 (1) - remove this note because you should focus on the more important sounds like 00:03:446 (2,3,4,5,6) - Fixed
  5. 00:03:915 (6) - slider should be on 00:03:822 - instead Fixed
  6. 00:07:384 (3) - slider end is unsnapped Fixed
  7. 00:10:947 (2) - make this to two circles because 00:11:134 - deserves to be clicked Fixed
  8. 00:11:509 - there is a guitar sound here, place a circle here and you can move the spinner after the circle I put a slider for the guitar sound and removed the spinner
  9. 00:16:009 (7) - slider should be on 00:15:822 - instead Fixed
  10. 00:12:822 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - this section has huge spacing for a calmer section, nerf pls fixed
  11. 00:35:322 (1,2,3) - this should just be a slider instead Fixed
  12. 00:57:822 (1) - object isn't snapped! Uhh Thanks fixed !

[]

good luck :P
Thanks for mod ! Have a good day !
Topic Starter
AtoNiik

WildCry wrote:

Hello° NM as request from my modding queue post...

Normal
Fix all distance in this objects.
00:19:572 (3,4) -
00:20:322 (4,5) -
00:21:822 (2,3) -
00:22:572 (3,4) -
00:23:322 (4,5) -
00:23:697 (5,6) -
00:24:447 (6,7) -
00:32:322 (2,3) -
00:33:072 (3,4) -
00:42:072 (7,8) -
01:20:885 (3,4) -



Advanced

00:16:571 (5,7) - Snap the end of this silders
00:26:134 (1,2) - Put this a little more up
Try to be clearn with your distance here, use the distance snap if is posible.

That's all Good Luck!
All distance snap fixed

Thanks for the mod
-Latias-
hi also from (´・◡・`) modding q

Tags
- Add "ending" and all the people who did gd's, you should also put in tags

Gamelt's Insane
00:00:822 to 00:05:134 - i feel you should have mapped here. try to use mostly sliders here
00:06:822 (1,2) - blanket these ? like this
00:07:384 (3,4) - i don't think the circle (4) is needed here. the slider end does a pretty good job for this part and having that extra circle is awkward to play
00:06:822 (1,3) - intentional overlap ?
00:08:509 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - maybe move all these jumps up so that 00:08:697 (2) can blanket like 00:09:447 (6)
00:10:384 (4,6) - looks ugly, maybe stack these instead
00:12:822 (1,5) - stack 1 on slider 5's end ?
00:13:384 (4,6) - stack 4 on slider 6's start, it would look better and blanket with 00:13:759 (5)
00:14:509 (1,2,3,4,5) - inconsistent spacing with jumps
00:15:822 (1,4) - intentional overlap ? looks ugly with the overlap
00:17:134 (5) - add a hit sound to this note that emphasizes this note
00:17:697 (2) - stack with 00:16:759 (4) ?
00:21:259 (11) - nc here and remove nc at 00:21:822 (1)
00:44:884 (4) - should start at 00:44:697
00:45:259 (5) - should start at 00:45:072 (if you did the past mod and this one, add a slider at 00:45:447 )
00:48:822 (1,5) - please either blanket this or stack on the slider
00:49:947 (4) - throws off rythem. remove this and adjust sliders. also add a slider at 00:51:447 if you do mod
00:55:947 (1,1) - stack these
01:00:634 (7,2) - ^
01:02:884 (3,5) - make these blanket
01:05:322 (1,2,3) - huge spacing for insane. pls nerf this
01:09:634 (8,1) - ^
01:19:384 (3,5) - intentinal overlap ? looks ugly
overall, you should work on using the music to determine distance, as i dint point out all the distance error as there were too much. you should also work on aesthetics, stacking is great for aesthetics.

Hope the mod helps ! :D
Topic Starter
AtoNiik

-Latias- wrote:

hi also from (´・◡・`) modding q

Tags
- Add "ending" and all the people who did gd's, you should also put in tags Added
Thanks for the mod
GameIt

-Latias- wrote:

hi also from (´・◡・`) modding q (´o◡o`)

Tags
- Add "ending" and all the people who did gd's, you should also put in tags

Gamelt's Insane
00:00:822 to 00:05:134 - i feel you should have mapped here. try to use mostly sliders here done
00:06:822 (1,2) - blanket these ? like this done
00:07:384 (3,4) - i don't think the circle (4) is needed here. the slider end does a pretty good job for this part and having that extra circle is awkward to play yep
00:06:822 (1,3) - intentional overlap ? not sure what this was cuz i changed it but its not overlapping anymore
00:08:509 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - maybe move all these jumps up so that 00:08:697 (2) can blanket like 00:09:447 (6) ye
00:10:384 (4,6) - looks ugly, maybe stack these instead ok
00:12:822 (1,5) - stack 1 on slider 5's end ? yes
00:13:384 (4,6) - stack 4 on slider 6's start, it would look better and blanket with 00:13:759 (5) i tried. i think this is what you meant. but it flowed better when i reversed 6 so i did
00:14:509 (1,2,3,4,5) - inconsistent spacing with jumps yeah lol, there's a tool for that just lazy.
00:15:822 (1,4) - intentional overlap ? looks ugly with the overlap no more overlap
00:17:134 (5) - add a hit sound to this note that emphasizes this note will hitsound later, probably with rest of map
00:17:697 (2) - stack with 00:16:759 (4) ? 4 isnt really visible at this point so i dont think its necessary
00:21:259 (11) - nc here and remove nc at 00:21:822 (1) ye
00:44:884 (4) - should start at 00:44:697 i think i did what you meant
00:45:259 (5) - should start at 00:45:072 (if you did the past mod and this one, add a slider at 00:45:447 ) yes
00:48:822 (1,5) - please either blanket this or stack on the slider LOL yeah
00:49:947 (4) - throws off rythem. remove this and adjust sliders. also add a slider at 00:51:447 if you do mod yeah
00:55:947 (1,1) - stack these looks cool now
01:00:634 (7,2) - ^ done
01:02:884 (3,5) - make these blanket yup
01:05:322 (1,2,3) - huge spacing for insane. pls nerf this accidental, fixed
01:09:634 (8,1) - ^ i think its fine :p
01:19:384 (3,5) - intentinal overlap ? looks ugly im bad
overall, you should work on using the music to determine distance, as i dint point out all the distance error as there were too much. you should also work on aesthetics, stacking is great for aesthetics.

Hope the mod helps ! :D
Thanks for the mod!
Plush
From #modreqs

[General]
Claps, finishes, and whistles are special hitsounds, it's not intended to be used to put a part of the map in all-clap or all-whistle mode.
The offset 814 works better than 822.

[Normal]
00:12:822 (2) - what's with this slider? why is there a reverse at blue tick? please shorten it by 1/4
00:15:822 (2) - ^ please remap this section to become something like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6955779
00:17:885 (4,5,1,2) - change this part to become like this. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6955841 also add clap hitsounds to both 4 and 5 in the picture, and you'll see what I mean
00:21:072 - There is nothing to map here, no vocals or anything, I even missed this note on my first test play. Delete the note and add a circle at the end or make it like this. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6955751
00:57:072 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 01:15:822 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - why is this all clap? but all the earlier parts of the maps are not hitsounded?
01:17:134 (2) - this can't end on a blue tick
01:18:836 (1,2,3,4,5) - make hitsounds more silent, it's really calm. with the claps it's very loud
Please avoid mapping blue ticks or putting anything including sliderend/reverses especially on medium diff!

[Advanced]
00:12:626 (1) - the stuff can't start here https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6955954
00:47:782 - please avoid mapping sliders on blue ticks, even reverses
00:56:689 (7) - missed a hitsound?
01:18:814 - this can be blanketed (where you cover a circle / slider start&ends with sliders like covering a circle with a blanket) https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6955935
01:21:064 (6,7,8,9) - please avoid straight patterns https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6955940
This map could use more blanket on both Normal and Advanced diffs

[Hard]
00:30:822 - why only 35% volume?
01:12:626 (3) - this will work better https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6955990
01:19:948 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - the Finish hitsound doesn't fit well

[NekoNya's Insane]
consider AR 8.5-8.8? this is for DTability, since if you make it DTable, there are two target audience for your diff. Also the harder diffs have lower AR.
01:20:509 (2,3,4,1,2,3) - the use of finish here feels weird...
00:47:228 (1) - there's a 'u' in the lyrics here, map this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6956153
other than that this diff is mapped very well, even the hitsounds are nice! best diff on this map.

[GameIt's Insane]
00:20:134 (6) - NC?
01:01:384 (2) - put 2 somewhere else? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6956044 others are fine imo, just this one's hard to see don't really know why xD
other than that this diff is mapped well!

[Waets's Extra]
00:02:697 (10) - please delete this note
00:03:446 (11) - NC...
00:03:822 (5,1) - gap is too small. People won't read it properly. rotate 00:04:384 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) by 180
00:15:822 - please don't use 1.5 sliderspeed multiplier, because you just used 1 not long ago. 1.25 is recommended
00:29:884 (5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - please change the shape
00:32:134 (5,1) - gap is too small ^ 00:32:509 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6956116
00:33:634 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - feels completely copied
00:36:634 (15) - please don't let combo numbers reach very high, try to make it below 10 unless it's covered by streams / circles in triples
00:57:072 (1,1,1) - this slider end is not snapped to any tick, please make the slider bigger / change slider velocity, and please do not use all Finish Clap Whistle here
01:01:947 (3) - you can mute the sliderend actually, press the circle in the timeline https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6956174
01:07:759 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - jumps like this shortly after a spinner ends is a really bad idea
01:21:634 (1) - can't end on a blue tick, modify slider speed
Please don't use far jumps everywhere on the map!

[P.S.]
I may have not pointed all the stuffs I can point out, but I hope this mod can help you! Probably I'll do a second round sometime.
Waets

Garryanderson wrote:

[Waets's Extra]
00:02:697 (10) - please delete this note I feel like this sound need a slider to cover it, maybe longer slider ?
00:03:446 (11) - NC... Fixed
00:03:822 (5,1) - gap is too small. People won't read it properly. Fixed rotate 00:04:384 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) by 180 done
00:15:822 - please don't use 1.5 sliderspeed multiplier, because you just used 1 not long ago. 1.25 is recommended Fixed
00:29:884 (5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - please change the shape Changed, I might change it again tho
00:32:134 (5,1) - gap is too small ^ Fixed
00:32:509 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6956116 Fixed
00:33:634 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - feels completely copied Fixed
00:36:634 (15) - please don't let combo numbers reach very high, try to make it below 10 unless it's covered by streams / circles in triples Fixed
00:57:072 (1,1,1) - this slider end is not snapped to any tick, please make the slider bigger / change slider velocity, and please do not use all Finish Clap Whistle here Fixed and removed the Whistle (´・◡・`)
01:01:947 (3) - you can mute the sliderend actually, press the circle in the timeline https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6956174 Thanks for the tip, fixed all the claps!
01:07:759 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - jumps like this shortly after a spinner ends is a really bad idea changed the gap of first combo
01:21:634 (1) - can't end on a blue tick, modify slider speed Fixed
Please don't use far jumps everywhere on the map!

[P.S.]
I may have not pointed all the stuffs I can point out, but I hope this mod can help you! Probably I'll do a second round sometime.
Thanks a lot for the mod ! :)
show more
Please sign in to reply.

New reply