Kenterz9 wrote:

Hello, M4M from your queue =D

Normal

Great hitsounds for the kiai time *u* ► Thanks ^^

00:27:823 (7) - NC ? ► Added.
01:51:301 (1) - Why finish hitsound here ? It's not logical with the other "same" parts ► Removed.
02:46:953 (7) - NC ?

► Added.

And Hard seems as good as normal =3 (no, I'm not lazy xD)

Good Luck =D

Asphyxia wrote:

Hi Alarido, a (quick) random mod for you. This is probably the first English song I saw on #modreqs so yeah LOL

General thoughts

1. It'd be cool if you could add the combo colors for the GD easy diff from the hard diff

Hard

1. Your diff contains somewhat random spacing, for example you used pretty much 0.9x spacing, then suddenly 02:10:866 (4,5,6,7,8) - 0.85x spacing and sometimes a bit lower, not really a big deal since it's a hard diff but you might want to consider evening out the spacing on some parts. ► Adjusting...
2. I'd go for a -1 HP actually, the song is quite relaxing so it needs relaxing settings, right? ► Sure c:
3. 00:44:779 (8) - You could consider CTRL + G here, it'd play well and the jump there would fit actually. ► Ok.
4. 00:47:605 (7,8) - You mostly used stacks like these without the small break there, you might want to consider unstacking it because it's pretty inconsistent? ► Fixed this by removing the note 00:47:605 (7) - and added a slider (copied from 00:47:823 (8) -) to 00:47:388 (:
5. 01:52:605 (3,4) - You can see that this stack isn't perfectly stacked, even from in-game, I'd say you perfect it ~ ► Deleted and re-added the note (3).
6. 02:15:866 (2,3,4,5) - I honestly dislike your current placement of these. I don't know why. I'd prefer something like this instead, try it:
   
   Example

   
   This way 2-3 would play a bit better and 4-5 would have a much better curve ► Well, I did something diferent, because (2,3) were starting at red ticks (and possibly felt weird too). Remapped these, making the sliders begin 1/2 later (to make them start on white ticks) and did something more.
7. 02:19:996 (3,4,5,6) - Not sure why these sudden spacing changes. ► There was rhombus jumps here, but adjusted patterns (lowered them, made those rhombus almost perfect and adjusting some notes to improve symmetry).
8. 03:31:083 (7) - The overlap makes it quite bad looking, you should try to abuse the distance snap just a little that it'd play better, like this?
   
   Example

   
   ► ► ► Instead, I'd moved the slidertail a bit and unstacked the notes.
9. Nice job, pretty much perfect.

Normal

1. -1 HP for same reasons as in Hard
2. 00:27:823 (1) - You didn't have this NC'd in your Hard difficulty, you might want to remove the combo for consistency. ► Deleted
3. 01:26:083 (4) - I think moving this slider a bit down (x:414 y:80) would give it a smoother flow? ► Yes. and Redesigned some patterns too.
4. 01:33:040 (4) - ^ but this time up. ► Redesigned patterns.
5. 02:04:344 (5) - Is the whistle on purpose there? I mean on sliders head, if not, remove it because it sounds rather inconsistent to me. ► Removed 1 whistle that was out-of-place (correct whistles added at 1st white and 4th red ticks of each measure on verses.)
6. 02:46:953 (1) - Same reason I stated in my first suggestion for Normal diff. ► Done as there
7. 03:35:649 - You could add a note here and move the slider 1/2 further away, I think that would fit nicely! ► Done !!! (moved the spinner for 1/4 later)
8. Yeaah, nice!

The mapset is pretty much perfect, you really should call a BAT to bubble it! GL with this~

23:14 AW-sama: Jó estét Alarido! Egy IRC mod? : )
23:14 AW-sama: (I'm very beginner modder) ^^;
23:15 *AW-sama is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/315630 Coldplay - Viva la Vida [Normal]]
23:15 Alarido: igen ^.^
23:16 Alarido: (nem beszél magyarul... at the moment I took very few words and phrases from websites)
23:16 Alarido: let'sm go
23:16 Alarido: *let us go
23:20 AW-sama: Only ideas! :
23:21 AW-sama: 01:06:953 (2) - 
23:21 AW-sama: http://puu.sh/7asjH.jpg
23:21 AW-sama: Move the red tick?
23:21 AW-sama: And put a circle here? 01:08:040 (4) - 
23:23 AW-sama: 01:08:475 (5) - 
23:23 AW-sama: Put a circle here ? 01:08:475 (5) - 
23:23 AW-sama: and
23:23 AW-sama: Slider here? 01:08:692 (6) - timeline e.g.:
23:24 AW-sama: http://puu.sh/7asv7.jpg
23:25 Alarido:   sure
23:25 AW-sama: 01:28:692 (3) - Move slider the: x: 476 y: 124 ? (Better blanket
23:25 Alarido: ok
23:26 AW-sama: 01:36:518 (5) - move slider? Better blanket: x: 364, y: 212 ?
23:26 AW-sama: http://puu.sh/7asFB.jpg
23:28 Alarido: ok
23:30 AW-sama: 02:19:996 (3) - Slider center point: x: 268 y: 84? (Better blanket) http://puu.sh/7asTM.JPG
23:31 AW-sama: 02:25:649 (6) - Move note? x: 100, y: 288 ?
23:33 AW-sama: HP Drain: +1 ? Approach Rate: +1 ? Overall difficulty: +1 ?
23:34 Alarido: sure
23:34 AW-sama: AI mod:
23:35 AW-sama: Display epilepsy warning: check
23:35 Alarido: ok
23:36 Alarido: (even the SB is quite slow, but ok)
23:36 AW-sama: :'D
23:36 AW-sama: It's too good normal. D:
23:37 *AW-sama is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/266968 Coldplay - Viva la Vida [Hard]]
23:37 AW-sama: Hard. D:
23:37 Alarido: it received a lot mods
23:37 Alarido: ok
23:39 AW-sama: 01:08:692 (5) - x: 320 y: 172 ? (better blanket)
23:40 AW-sama: yaay
23:41 AW-sama: Very loud hitsound. :O
23:41 AW-sama: 01:34:344 (2) - 
23:42 AW-sama: 01:51:301 (1) - x: 288, y: 196 ? (better blanket)
23:43 AW-sama: 01:58:257 (1) - Slider center point: x: 392, y: 324 ?
23:45 AW-sama: http://puu.sh/7atQ0.jpg = http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1367691 (Better blanket) XD
23:46 AW-sama: 02:02:605 (3) - Move slider: x: 232 y: 84 ?
23:46 AW-sama: Result: http://puu.sh/7au13.jpg
23:50 AW-sama: Ennyi! :'D
23:50 AW-sama: Good job (Y)
23:50 AW-sama: & Good Luck!
23:52 AW-sama: Guest diff: (Easy)----------------------------------------
23:52 AW-sama: 01:56:083 (3) - 
23:53 AW-sama: Center point: x: 112, y: 168 ?
23:54 AW-sama: Slider end point: x: 340 y: 148 ?
23:56 AW-sama: HP, AR, OD: +1 ?

AW-sama wrote:

Waah. Sorry Alarido. My internet is very sh_t. (Internet connection problem. I love you Vodafone Mobile net) n_n

Csak ötletek / Only Ideas!

23:14 AW-sama: Jó estét Alarido! Egy IRC mod? : )
23:14 AW-sama: (I'm very beginner modder) ^^;
23:15 *AW-sama is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/315630 Coldplay - Viva la Vida [Normal]]
23:15 Alarido: igen ^.^
23:16 Alarido: (nem beszél magyarul... at the moment I took very few words and phrases from websites)
23:16 Alarido: let'sm go
23:16 Alarido: *let us go
23:20 AW-sama: Only ideas! :
23:21 AW-sama: 01:06:953 (2) - 
23:21 AW-sama: http://puu.sh/7asjH.jpg
23:21 AW-sama: Move the red tick?
23:21 AW-sama: And put a circle here? 01:08:040 (4) - 
23:23 AW-sama: 01:08:475 (5) - 
23:23 AW-sama: Put a circle here ? 01:08:475 (5) - 
23:23 AW-sama: and
23:23 AW-sama: Slider here? 01:08:692 (6) - timeline e.g.:
23:24 AW-sama: http://puu.sh/7asv7.jpg
23:25 Alarido:   sure
23:25 AW-sama: 01:28:692 (3) - Move slider the: x: 476 y: 124 ? (Better blanket
23:25 Alarido: ok
23:26 AW-sama: 01:36:518 (5) - move slider? Better blanket: x: 364, y: 212 ?
23:26 AW-sama: http://puu.sh/7asFB.jpg
23:28 Alarido: ok
23:30 AW-sama: 02:19:996 (3) - Slider center point: x: 268 y: 84? (Better blanket) http://puu.sh/7asTM.JPG
23:31 AW-sama: 02:25:649 (6) - Move note? x: 100, y: 288 ?
23:33 AW-sama: HP Drain: +1 ? Approach Rate: +1 ? Overall difficulty: +1 ?
23:34 Alarido: sure
23:34 AW-sama: AI mod:
23:35 AW-sama: Display epilepsy warning: check
23:35 Alarido: ok
23:36 Alarido: (even the SB is quite slow, but ok)
23:36 AW-sama: :'D
23:36 AW-sama: It's too good normal. D:
23:37 *AW-sama is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/266968 Coldplay - Viva la Vida [Hard]]
23:37 AW-sama: Hard. D:
23:37 Alarido: it received a lot mods
23:37 Alarido: ok
23:39 AW-sama: 01:08:692 (5) - x: 320 y: 172 ? (better blanket)
23:40 AW-sama: yaay
23:41 AW-sama: Very loud hitsound. :O
23:41 AW-sama: 01:34:344 (2) - 
23:42 AW-sama: 01:51:301 (1) - x: 288, y: 196 ? (better blanket)
23:43 AW-sama: 01:58:257 (1) - Slider center point: x: 392, y: 324 ?
23:45 AW-sama: http://puu.sh/7atQ0.jpg = http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1367691 (Better blanket) XD
23:46 AW-sama: 02:02:605 (3) - Move slider: x: 232 y: 84 ?
23:46 AW-sama: Result: http://puu.sh/7au13.jpg
23:50 AW-sama: Ennyi! :'D
23:50 AW-sama: Good job (Y)
23:50 AW-sama: & Good Luck!
23:52 AW-sama: Guest diff: (Easy)----------------------------------------
23:52 AW-sama: 01:56:083 (3) - 
23:53 AW-sama: Center point: x: 112, y: 168 ?
23:54 AW-sama: Slider end point: x: 340 y: 148 ?
23:56 AW-sama: HP, AR, OD: +1 ?

Kibbleru wrote:

not really a mod here but may i suggest you put in like a drum beat or something like every 2 or 4 downbeats or something
(with hitsounds if that wasn't clear enough xD)

── BATs, come to meeee! ──

1. Your folder's size is 11 mb, try to reduce the size under 10mb. Maybe removing some of your comboburst could be enough. Plus: Are you sure to keep those anime comboburst? I mean, a english song, a real person in the sb, looks kinda weird.
2. I don't get why you need the epilepsy warning when you don't have strobing in your SB, disable it in all diffs.

1. Are you sure with your 07 lyrics shouldn't be Listen instead Listened?
2. The 18 lyric is "Once you'd" or Once you've?
3. Wait, you have same images of lyrics in the folder when you can use the same in multiple parts, like the 19 and 31 or 20 and 31 (in this case are different but the correct is the 31 because have the "but" before the sentence). Please take care about this and delete the repeat lyrics to save space.
4. 03:35:214 - I think you forgot to add one lyric here.

1. Be sure to modify the combo colours like the others diffs.
2. Almost I can't heard the hitsounding here, maybe increase the volume in the chorus/kiai parts and add more claps in the rest of the map like the another diffs. imo this diff need more work with the hitsounding now sounds a bit empty.
3. 00:50:431 (2) - This isn't a big deal but the repeat is covered partially with the previous slider, and the rookie players could have troubles with this, maybe rotate the slider by 90° clockwise and ajust the spacing to make something like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1580934.
4. 01:06:953 (2,3,4) - Move this a bit to the right, now the circle is touching the HP bar. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1580950
5. 02:05:214 (1) - Maybe add finish at the start.
6. 02:46:953 (6) - Same as above, here remove the whistle.
7. Okay, that's all here, add more hisounds please.

1. 01:53:909 (6) - Maybe add whistle at the start.
2. 03:35:649 (1) - To emphasize the end of the song I recommend add a finish here.

1. 00:53:475 (5) - Add nc here, now this combo is a little long in comparison with others. Here 01:07:388 (1) - You did it.
2. 02:03:909 - Maybe add a circle here and remove this one 02:04:127 (6). I mean, you follow the voice with the previous pattern and actually a circle here fits better with it.
3. 02:18:040 - Something similar here, the previous circle don't fits at all with the music, so maybe move 1/2 forwards and stack with 02:18:257 (8). Also remove the clap. I think this way work better.
4. 02:46:953 (5) - Add a finish instead the whistle like the normal diff.
5. 03:35:649 (1) - Same as normal, also i think the nc is needless (you don't add nc in normal diff).

Kenezz wrote:

Random mod is coming.

[General]

1. Your folder's size is 11 mb, try to reduce the size under 10mb. Maybe removing some of your comboburst could be enough. Plus: Are you sure to keep those anime comboburst? I mean, a english song, a real person in the sb, looks kinda weird. ► Removed all combobursts, and reduced the size of the longer .wav files (basicly removing ~90% of their silenced parts).
2. I don't get why you need the epilepsy warning when you don't have strobing in your SB, disable it in all diffs. ► Done.

[StoryBoard]

1. Are you sure with your 07 lyrics shouldn't be Listen instead Listened? ► You've got me! Going to Google for the lyrics, I'd found:
   * Some unofficial sources mention:
   → "Listen" on http://www.vagalume.com.br/coldplay/viv ... ducao.html
   → "Listened" on http://letras.mus.br/coldplay/1253930/
   * The Official Coldplay Site does:
   → "Listened" on http://www.coldplay.com/recordings/viva ... a_la_vida/
   ► So, kept as explained above.
   
2. The 18 lyric is "Once you'd" or Once you've? ► "Once you'd", according to Official Coldplay Site. The other site that mentioned "Listened" also does "Once you'd". ► Kept.
   
3. Wait, you have same images of lyrics in the folder when you can use the same in multiple parts, like the 19 and 31 or 20 and 31 (in this case are different but the correct is the 31 because have the "but" before the sentence). Please take care about this and delete the repeat lyrics to save space.
4. 03:35:214 - I think you forgot to add one lyric here. ► I haven't forgotten: I just left it empty to emphasize the feelings on this ending. Also, the final spinner covers this part.. ► Kept it as is.

[Normal]

1. 01:53:909 (6) - Maybe add whistle at the start. ► Done.
2. 03:35:649 (1) - To emphasize the end of the song I recommend add a finish here. ► Added here and in the Hard diff too.

[Hard]

1. 00:53:475 (5) - Add nc here, now this combo is a little long in comparison with others. Here 01:07:388 (1) - You did it. ► Done.
2. 02:03:909 - Maybe add a circle here and remove this one 02:04:127 (6). I mean, you follow the voice with the previous pattern and actually a circle here fits better with it. ► Sure (: In addition, rearranged the previous pattern.
3. 02:18:040 - Something similar here, the previous circle don't fits at all with the music, so maybe move 1/2 forwards and stack with 02:18:257 (8). Also remove the clap. I think this way work better. ► Done.
4. 02:46:953 (5) - Add a finish instead the whistle like the normal diff. ► Changed.
5. 03:35:649 (1) - Same as normal, also i think the nc is needless (you don't add nc in normal diff). ► Removed NC, and added Finish as did in the Normal diff.

Okay, that's all from me, hope this can help you.
Remove the dust c'mon.

Kenezz wrote:

[AnreFM's Easy]

► For the hitsounding part, I had done: Firstly, I've removed all hitsounds (manually, with all pains), then applied all the placement fixes as below (and, in addition, some Nazi-adjustements). So I'd finally copied all hitsounding from Normal diff (using Hitsounds Copier) and verified basicly all the hitsounding mods given for my diffs. I hope he agree, but if not, I saved the earlier version (with no modifications) in my puush.

Be sure to modify the combo colours like the others diffs. ► Done.
Almost I can't heard the hitsounding here, maybe increase the volume in the chorus/kiai parts and add more claps in the rest of the map like the another diffs. imo this diff need more work with the hitsounding now sounds a bit empty.
00:50:431 (2) - This isn't a big deal but the repeat is covered partially with the previous slider, and the rookie players could have troubles with this, maybe rotate the slider by 90° clockwise and ajust the spacing to make something like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1580934. ► Done.
01:06:953 (2,3,4) - Move this a bit to the right, now the circle is touching the HP bar. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1580950 ► Done.
02:05:214 (1) - Maybe add finish at the start.
02:46:953 (6) - Same as above, here remove the whistle.
Okay, that's all here, add more hisounds please.

1. 01:16:518 (1) - tá muito distante, não? Eu deixaria um pouco mais perto, mesmo sendo um Hard
2. 01:37:170 - add uma nota aqui, acho que fica maneiro. Hard tem que ter mais batidas e menos slides. Eu tinha esse pensamento, mas muita coisa mudou de uns tempos pra cá, kkk
3. 01:56:301 (5,6,7) - Eu trocaria tudo isso, por apenas notas seguindo a letra da musica. Como voce fez em 02:10:866
4. 03:28:629 (6) - Distante demais, nesse caso eu acho que não é rankeável
5. 03:35:649 (9) - new combo?

GbL wrote:

E aê, cara. Belo mapa, adorei.
Vou dar apenas sugestões, faz se te agradar, blz?

[Hard]

1. 01:16:518 (1) - tá muito distante, não? Eu deixaria um pouco mais perto, mesmo sendo um Hard ► Fiz uns experimentos aqui e... botei a bendita nota 01:16:301 (7) - em x:53 y:313, não muito longe nem tão perto (uma distância igual a 1.18x em ambos os lados). Vamos ver o que os outros acham (:
2. 01:37:170 - add uma nota aqui, acho que fica maneiro. Hard tem que ter mais batidas e menos slides. Eu tinha esse pensamento, mas muita coisa mudou de uns tempos pra cá, kkk ► Bem, eu tentei, testei... mas parece que uma nota aqui não se dá bem com a música. Mas.... achei um ponto perfeito, onde botei uma nota: 01:36:301 -
3. 01:56:301 (5,6,7) - Eu trocaria tudo isso, por apenas notas seguindo a letra da musica. Como voce fez em 02:10:866 ► Parei a música, reduzi o volume dos samples (efeitos ou hitsounds) a zero (menu View > Volume) e comparei os dois trechos, vendo que eles são... muito parecidos, porém não exatamente iguais. Contudo, a música me pediu pra botar uma nota em 01:56:953 - e aí botei com um clap. Ficou boa.
4. 03:28:629 (6) - Distante demais, nesse caso eu acho que não é rankeável ► Hm... Mudei a nota 03:28:475 (6) - para x:456 y:248.
5. 03:35:649 (9) - new combo? ► Ok.

Muito obrigado (: ... VALEU!!!!


ONDE EU DOU STAR NESSA MERDA? NAO TO ACHANDO MAIS KKKKKKKKK

1. Do we really need the epilepsy warning? o be honest, it seems a bit unnecessary here, your storyboard is quite calm, y'know.

1. AR feels way too fast for this song and doesn't really fits. Try to reduce AR by one tik, you'll make the diff a bit more relaxing and the whole mapset will be more balanced. (AR:3/5/7 feels much better than 4/5/7, huh? )
   Note: reducing AR requires reducing OD and HP Drain as well, you know, you should do it to keep the spread more balanced and the rhythm of your diff may confuse some beginners, so , lowering diff settings is a good idea, imo!
2. 00:18:257 (2,3) - the transition between these two feels quite unnatural and doesn't really fit with your patterns! Moreover, it can confuse some beginners, so I recommend you to replace this pattern with something more intuitively-playable!
   Note: feeling a bit lost? Here's an example for you! / Alternative
3. 01:11:736 - I would not ignore the bells. THeir sound is quite important and it has its own meaning, ignoring them feels really confusing. Please, try to map them somehow!
   Note: dragging the circles from the downbeats like 01:11:301 - to 01:11:736 - works perfectly fine, try that!
4. 01:17:823 (3) - minor - avoiding overlaps with the skin/ghameplay elements is required, so beginners won't be confused and the map will appear neater. Consider fixing the overlap, please.
5. 01:54:779 (1) - minor - curving the slider in another way would make your flow smoother and more understandable. Here, take a look at my idea!
6. 01:59:996 (2) - apply this one ONLY if you've reduced AR - the slider appears too close to the repeat of (1). So, beginners may get confused, ignor the reverse-arrow and click (2) instantly. Something like this or so to make the pattern a bit more understandable would be great!
   Note: 02:26:953 (2,3) - the same happens here. I see your intention, but I think it is too tricky for the easiest diff!
7. 02:18:257 - mapping the beat here sounds like a good idea to me. You had no similar "mini-breaks" and this one appears quite confusing. It also doesn't really fit with the song and the downbeat gets ignored, which is not good. All in all, I highly suggest you to place a circle at 02:18:257.
8. 03:06:083 (2) - minor - moving this circle up would make your flow MUCH more natural, imo. Normally I don't complain about that stuff, but this pattern seems to be easy-to-fix. Here, look!
   
   Great job with the diff! It's a bit hard, but still awesome, I really liked what you did there! A lot of the sufggestions were minor, so, it probably means that you can work on your flow a bit more, tho.

1. Even though you use polarity most of the time and do it pretty good, the amount of 1/2 beats seems to be really high. Try to reduce OD by one tick, so, your diff will be a bit more playable.
   Note: yeah, it may hurt the balance of the spread, but it feels really necessary to me. What's more there're also some patterns like 01:06:083 (1,2,3,4) - and that is practically the mai reason for OD3
2. 02:25:649 (6,1,2,3) - minor - having 1/1 and 1/2 stacks so close to each other is quie confusing. Once players hit the 1/1 stack, they will expect 02:27:388 (2,3) - to be 1/1 stack as well. that is why this pattern is confusing. Unstacking either of them would be great, but I'd personally try to unstack 02:25:649 (6,1) - since 1/2 stacks are more common for this diff.
3. 03:35:649 (8,1) - since you have no any o!m/taiko specific diffs, your diffs are supposed to be played in all modes. I doubt that this sudden 1/4 pattern in the end would be playable and enjoyable in o!m or taiko, so please, try to remove (8) and start the spinner at 03:35:649
   
   I'm really impressed! Great flow, awesome patterns, outstanding rhythm and brilliant usage of polarity! You did truly amazing job with the Normal!

1. 00:19:996 (6,7,1) - please, use a jump pattern here in order to keep consistency with 00:26:953 (6,7,8). The jump here fits well and I think you'd like to add it!
2. 01:04:127 (5,6) - the transition here feels rather unnatural comparing to the rest of the diff. I really liked what you did with and copying the same pattern would work here! I suck at giving examples
3. 01:16:301 (7) - a circle here feels extra. It breaks your consistent DS and it breaks consistency since the beat at 01:09:344 - was not mapped but sounds practically the same.
   Note: 01:23:040 (9) - for the same reason, I would replace this one with a circle and something like this.
   Note2: 02:25:866 (10) - I guess, you'd better keep ignoring these beats since they are quite out of your rhythm, anyway.
   
   I really did try my best, but the map is already awesome. Great job!

-Bakari- wrote:

I should've modded it earlier.

[General]

1. Do we really need the epilepsy warning? o be honest, it seems a bit unnecessary here, your storyboard is quite calm, y'know. ► Removed form my diffs ...

[Normal]

1. Even though you use polarity most of the time and do it pretty good, the amount of 1/2 beats seems to be really high. Try to reduce OD by one tick, so, your diff will be a bit more playable. ► Changed.
   Note: yeah, it may hurt the balance of the spread, but it feels really necessary to me. What's more there're also some patterns like 01:06:083 (1,2,3,4) - and that is practically the mai reason for OD3
2. 02:25:649 (6,1,2,3) - minor - having 1/1 and 1/2 stacks so close to each other is quie confusing. Once players hit the 1/1 stack, they will expect 02:27:388 (2,3) - to be 1/1 stack as well. that is why this pattern is confusing. Unstacking either of them would be great, but I'd personally try to unstack 02:25:649 (6,1) - since 1/2 stacks are more common for this diff. ► Unstacked (6) from (1) and made a triangle on (5,6,1).
3. 03:35:649 (8,1) - since you have no any o!m/taiko specific diffs, your diffs are supposed to be played in all modes. I doubt that this sudden 1/4 pattern in the end would be playable and enjoyable in o!m or taiko, so please, try to remove (8) and start the spinner at 03:35:649 ► Done.
   
   I'm really impressed! Great flow, awesome patterns, outstanding rhythm and brilliant usage of polarity! You did truly amazing job with the Normal! ♥

[Hard]

1. 00:19:996 (6,7,1) - please, use a jump pattern here in order to keep consistency with 00:26:953 (6,7,8). The jump here fits well and I think you'd like to add it! ► Sure ♥
2. 01:04:127 (5,6) - the transition here feels rather unnatural comparing to the rest of the diff. I really liked what you did with and copying the same pattern would work here! I suck at giving examples ► Hm... Made some changes to improve flow (I'd should noticed this... this map is quite ancient among all my ones).
3. 01:16:301 (7) - a circle here feels extra. It breaks your consistent DS and it breaks consistency since the beat at 01:09:344 - was not mapped but sounds practically the same. ► Removed the note.
   Note: 01:23:040 (9) - for the same reason, I would replace this one with a circle and something like this. ► Done. Really feels better than mine ♥
   Note2: 02:25:866 (10) - I guess, you'd better keep ignoring these beats since they are quite out of your rhythm, anyway. ► Deleted note.
   
   I really did try my best, but the map is already awesome. Great job!

♥

This is truly amazing, one of the bst maps I've ever seen and the song is also brilliant! Let me make your sky a bit brighter! Star! ~

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Best of luck!

AlexaBM wrote:

Thank you, dear <3

-Bakari- wrote:

I should've modded it earlier.

[General]

1. Do we really need the epilepsy warning? o be honest, it seems a bit unnecessary here, your storyboard is quite calm, y'know.

[AnreFM's Easy]

1. AR feels way too fast for this song and doesn't really fits. Try to reduce AR by one tik, you'll make the diff a bit more relaxing and the whole mapset will be more balanced. (AR:3/5/7 feels much better than 4/5/7, huh? )
   Note: reducing AR requires reducing OD and HP Drain as well, you know, you should do it to keep the spread more balanced and the rhythm of your diff may confuse some beginners, so , lowering diff settings is a good idea, imo! yeah, fixed!
2. 00:18:257 (2,3) - the transition between these two feels quite unnatural and doesn't really fit with your patterns! Moreover, it can confuse some beginners, so I recommend you to replace this pattern with something more intuitively-playable! fixed with ur suggestion owo/
   Note: feeling a bit lost? Here's an example for you! / Alternative
3. 01:11:736 - I would not ignore the bells. THeir sound is quite important and it has its own meaning, ignoring them feels really confusing. Please, try to map them somehow!
   Note: dragging the circles from the downbeats like 01:11:301 - to 01:11:736 - works perfectly fine, try that!
4. 01:17:823 (3) - minor - avoiding overlaps with the skin/ghameplay elements is required, so beginners won't be confused and the map will appear neater. Consider fixing the overlap, please.sure
5. 01:54:779 (1) - minor - curving the slider in another way would make your flow smoother and more understandable. Here, take a look at my idea!
6. 01:59:996 (2) - apply this one ONLY if you've reduced AR - the slider appears too close to the repeat of (1). So, beginners may get confused, ignor the reverse-arrow and click (2) instantly. Something like this or so to make the pattern a bit more understandable would be great!
   Note: 02:26:953 (2,3) - the same happens here. I see your intention, but I think it is too tricky for the easiest diff!yeah, also fixed the rest of the part that looked like this!
7. 02:18:257 - mapping the beat here sounds like a good idea to me. You had no similar "mini-breaks" and this one appears quite confusing. It also doesn't really fit with the song and the downbeat gets ignored, which is not good. All in all, I highly suggest you to place a circle at 02:18:257.ya~
8. 03:06:083 (2) - minor - moving this circle up would make your flow MUCH more natural, imo. Normally I don't complain about that stuff, but this pattern seems to be easy-to-fix. Here, look!
   
   Great job with the diff! It's a bit hard, but still awesome, I really liked what you did there! A lot of the sufggestions were minor, so, it probably means that you can work on your flow a bit more, tho.thank you for your mod Bakari! As you can see, I have fixed all from oyur mod, especially that rhythm on the kiai! Thank you very much, I realized this is a bit hard for an Easy, but I hope this will do!

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Best of luck!

Gasgano wrote:

As new and noobish as i am i can't go into detail as much as the others, so i just want to say that i really like the beatmap in both easy and normal difficulty. in easy there were a few spots that caught me by surprise, wasnt on point with my anticipation, that might be me though and i guess you need some learning curve in a map, right?
► Thanks :3 Just noticed that the easy diff is a guest diff made by AnreFM, which he offered to me voluntarily :3 and yes, he's making a lot effort, even though he doesn't have lots of free time due to real life issues.

normal was in my opinion a bit fast, today they implemented the new difficulty system, so again that might be me having trouble with the new ratings. also i felt that your normal mode is very forgiving, what i like very much, i did like 4 errors in a few seconds and was still in the game, thats how it should be on normal, so good job!
► Big Thanks ^-^ Probably this Normal diff may catch up the newbies. At least in osu!genesis, Normal diffs were intended to have the gameplay more adherent to the song without the boredom of Easy diffs nor the harshness of Hard diffs.

i really liked the implemention of the lyrics while playing, but trying to read them failed quite hard for me, maybe someone else is able to do it, and then it should be quite nice for those who dont know the lyrics
► Thanks :3 (even though I feel I need improve something on them)

Personally i feel that the map flows very well and from my (noobish) perspective i see no reason why your map shouldnt be ranked. as a finishing note though, theres already a ranked "viva la vida" as you most likely know already

1. 03:42:605 -Considers end up the spinner at this point like the easy one, imo fits better because with this the spinner follows the track instead the voice and also the track ends here. If you add be sure to modify the spinner on Hard too. Plus: Add finish like the spinner in Easy in both spinners.

1. 02:38:040 (5) - The whistle at the tail sounds off, since all the chorus parts don't have whistles and this is the unique. Maybe remove it.
2. 02:46:953 (5) - Considers add finish instead the clap (just like the others diffs).

Kenezz wrote:

Really sorry for the delayed reply:

[Normal]

1. 03:42:605 -Considers end up the spinner at this point like the easy one, imo fits better because with this the spinner follows the track instead the voice and also the track ends here. If you add be sure to modify the spinner on Hard too. Plus: Add finish like the spinner in Easy in both spinners.

► Fixed, feels good (applied on both diffs)

[Hard]

1. 02:38:040 (5) - The whistle at the tail sounds off, since all the chorus parts don't have whistles and this is the unique. Maybe remove it. ► Ok.
2. 02:46:953 (5) - Considers add finish instead the clap (just like the others diffs). ► Changed.

That's all, pm me when you have applied the changes.

Lissette wrote:

[Timing]
Offset is a bit late, use 13900 (-10ms to your current) ► Fixed. And green lines snapped too.

[Hard]
Make the distance between 03:11:301 (1,2) - the same as 03:12:823 (3,4) - you just need to adjust (2.3) a little bit, that spacing confused me everytime I played it ^^' ► Fixed.

[Normal]
Hitsounds are kinda louder here than on Hard, maybe you'll want to be consistent with timing points volume on your own difficulties? ► My fault >< Fixed, now consistent.

Tell me when is done.

[Luanny] wrote:

1. This song is slow and IT IS suitable for easy. I's actually hard to find a song not suitable for easy and this song is not one of them. No need to make an easy here because the spread is nice, still it would be really welcome.

[Luanny] wrote:

2. What's the purpose of this random anime girl pic on sb? It just doesn't fir with the bg and the singer is a guy. Just just breaks everything in the song. I'd also suggest less colorful lyrics.

[Luanny] wrote:

3. Those bells are quite annoying. They're way too loud. Should be used like a finish SOMETIMES not everytime this way. It hides the song and gives some headaches.