Kamina wrote:

nice,i love this song

_Kiva wrote:

One more question to creator... why do u keep so many map sets in AR10 O_O?

ban22 wrote:

My English sooooooo bad and I'm not very good at mod sorry

[Lover's Insane]
01:09:031 - add a note　OK
01:37:425 - ^　OK
01:38:160 (1) - start at 01:38:216　OK
02:25:219 (1) - start at 02:25:275　OK

ban22 wrote:

My English sooooooo bad and I'm not very good at mod sorry

[-RIKKA- Throat]
01:41:497 (1) - Reduced to 01:41:893　OK
01:50:547 (1) - Reduced to 01:50:886　OK
02:01:293 - you can add a note here not change

Lanturn wrote:

Quick General thing to fix stuff up. Because this could use some work.

[General]
Background: 　OK
Your BG is 1280 x by 720 which is different from the recommended size of blah blah blah 1366x768. Basically your image is just going to be upscaled when its about to be played.. Instead, how about using this picture: http://puu.sh/4s2H4.jpg | I added a white border to the missing pixels, and reduced the file size from 592kb to a mere 176kb.

Artist/Title/Source　OK
Artist: わたあめ (Her blog uses わたあめ, same with her Nico Nico page.)
Romanised Artist: Add capitalization to it? I don't see anything to indicate not using proper capitilation in the Artist name: Wataame
Title:モノクロスロード (official video uses this: http://www.nicovideo.jp/watch/sm15255698 )
Romanised Title: Add capitalization to it? I don't see anything to indicate not using proper capitilation in the Title: Monochrome Throat

Why is this song sped up? >_> It sounds a million times better at its original BPM | http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eyjYpw08res
You may want to add Sped Up Ver. or something similar to the end of the title. or even just Nightcore Mix in this case might work. Try asking other people for ideas.

Tags: Add Bold
アリエP ArieP | Produced the song | http://vocadb.net/Artist/Details/550
Hatsune Miku 初音ミク Original Vocaloid used for the song (optional)
MONO×ROAD | Album Title | http://vocadb.net/Album/Details/3443

At this point, I just opened AIBat

[AIBat]
All Diffs:　　OK
Audio Lead-in:
- [Easy] : 0 | Add 1000 ms to this
Preview Time:
- [Easy] : -1 | Change to 35999
Countdown
- [Easy] : 1 | Turn the countdown off
Tags
Apparently there is inconsistencies in your tags. I personally can't figure out what's wrong, but when you add the new tags I suggested, just copy and paste the whole batch of tags in on each diff.

Sorry i didn't get to any actual modding, I personally don't really like modding high bpm songs. Make sure to remove the ar10 diffs if you ever plan on getting this ranked　　OK

Pagno wrote:

oooh this isn't ranked yet? :о
here!

~ Mod ~

[Lover's Insane]

AR9 please? It's 265BPM and gets really confusing in many parts!　　About it, I think on consultation with -RIKKA- .

00:04:778 (4) - NewCombo here, and remove from 00:05:117 (1)　　OK

00:14:167 (4) - CTRL+G?　　OK

00:39:732 (7,1) - It feels like a note is missing between these two, on the red tick: maybe stack another hitcircle on combo 7　　OK

00:49:744 (6) - Are we sure this is really necessary? x.x　　OK. I decided as a result of having thought once again, to repair it.

01:11:633 (5) - What about removing the last reverse arrow and instead place 2 hitcircles stacked at the head of the next slider?
　　OK

01:21:361 (3) - CTRL+G?　No. When it changes this slider, this is because the distance with the next slider spreads.

01:33:182 (6) - Same as before, are streams necessary in this kind of maps?　　OK

01:36:746 (1) - Make it nearer to the next slider, it doesn't look like its distance is 1/4 beat　　OK

01:42:176 (2,1,2) - This part here, make it into something like this:　　OK


01:45:796 (2) - Stack this on the next slider, it's hard to tell that its distance is ½ beat　　OK. I moved the position of the circle.

01:48:737 (1,1,1) - Sliderbreak a lot! I got 2 suggestions: you can shorten them all by 1/4 beat, or else you can make them nearer to each other so that it's easier to not slidebreak　　OK

02:20:241 (2) - I'll let you keep this one, easy enough since it's preceded by some sliders which let you recover　　OK

02:28:216 (1,1) - Place those further from 02:27:877 (4) - it's hard to get its timing if it's so near　　OK

Does it finish like that?
Maybe map until the end or at least until 02:31:723!　There is a reason not to make to here.However, I add it when it is pointed out once again.　

I was planning on modding -RIKKA- Throat difficulty, but it seemed very alright to me! I love this map!
I really hope to see this ranked someday, both song and map are very nice!

wonders wrote:

orz

lover's Insane is a interesting diff, but i can not play with ar8

Lolicore_Komari wrote:

こんにちは! From M4M lol

[Easy]
Distanse snapに 正確に合わせてください　I fixed ~0.95x & 1.06x~.

Sorry for poor Japanese because I used google translate

Lolicore_Komari wrote:

こんにちは! From M4M lol

[Lover 's Insane]
00:09:642 (1,1) - テンポが変です　　 OK
00:34:302 (2,1) - "　　 OK

Sorry for poor Japanese because I used google translate

1. BG must use pixel 1024x768

1. bpm this map is high should used distance a little far have a little hard
2. 00:07:379 (4) - this can hard play for newbie, try as
   
   IMG

   
3. 01:19:778 (1,2,3) - model so bad
   
   IMG

   
4. 01:37:877 (1) - start here better 01:37:877 (1) -
5. 02:24:936 (1) - same as ^

1. slider velocity is 0.70 as easy is not good @@!
2. used distance indiscriminate, don't fixed
3. overlap, hard play
4. plz use slider tick rate 1
5. 00:01:949 (1) - NC, because changer rhythm
6. 00:16:429 (1) - can make it better : example
   
   
7. 00:34:529 (4) - plz move it to x344 y276
8. 00:34:981 (1) - and move to another place : example x488 y224
   
   IMG

   
9. 00:49:762 (2) - what this ??? plz move time to this 00:49:800 (2) -
   
   IMG

   
   and i like model as this
   
   IMG

   
10. 01:40:140 - this is better
    
    
11. 01:47:719 - delete point
12. 02:07:741 (3) - NC
13. 02:18:601 (3) - same as ^
14. 02:28:556 (1,2) - bad model, plz make other

1. too many slider stream not needed. example : 00:20:954 (1,2,3,4) - plz fixx it
2. 00:37:130 (7) - Ctrl + G better
3. 01:20:569 (7) - same as ^
   nice diff
   

1. in map don't file WAV other, should you just need put soft or normal timing is custom is ok
2. 00:36:339 - timing point put is soft
   I Like This

• you need review about NC
  example : 00:29:099 (1) - or 00:34:529 (3,4,5,6) -

Zejky wrote:

from M4M

[Lover's Insane]

• you need review about NC
  example : 00:29:099 (1) - or 00:34:529 (3,4,5,6) - 　　OK

that's all for me, i really fatigue
XD

Zejky wrote:

from M4M
[Garenal]

1. BG must use pixel 1024x768 OK

[Easy]

1. bpm this map is high should used distance a little far have a little hard
2. 00:07:379 (4) - this can hard play for newbie, try as OK
   
   IMG

   
3. 01:19:778 (1,2,3) - model so bad change model
   
   IMG

   
4. 01:37:877 (1) - start here better 01:37:877 (1) - OK
5. 02:24:936 (1) - same as ^ OK

[-RIKKA- Throat]

1. too many slider stream not needed. example : 00:20:954 (1,2,3,4) - plz fixx it only 4 slider stream fixed
2. 00:37:130 (7) - Ctrl + G better OK
3. 01:20:569 (7) - same as ^ OK
   nice diff
   

that's all for me, i really fatigue
XD

Innocent Steps wrote:

i hope this map got ranked
really good job, nice mapping and beauti song

112,80,140,2,0,P|41:192|112:304,1,280,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,304,1949,2,0,P|471:192|400:80,1,280,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

368,96,14619,6,0,P|256:25|144:96,1,280,2|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

vahn10 wrote:

[Easy]
00:00:140 (1,2) - these sliders can be more symmetrical with this code OK

112,80,140,2,0,P|41:192|112:304,1,280,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,304,1949,2,0,P|471:192|400:80,1,280,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

00:14:619 (1) - this slider can be improved with this code OK

368,96,14619,6,0,P|256:25|144:96,1,280,2|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

00:17:334 (3) - remove finish at the start of the slider and replace it with clap OK
00:30:909 (3,4) - remove whistle OK
00:31:814 (5) - remove finish at the start of the slider and replace it with whistle OK
00:39:959 (1,3) - remove clap OK
00:42:221 (2) - ^ OK
01:07:108 (2) - ^ OK

RatedNC17 wrote:

Sorry if my mod is the suck.

[Easy]
00:17:334 (3) - I think it would sound better with this being a clap slider OK
00:25:479 (1) - Put another finish(?)
00:29:099 (1) - ^
00:34:549 (3,4) - ^
01:13:443 (1) - ^
01:15:253 (2) - ^
01:17:968 (3) - ^
02:09:099 (3) - remove the whistle

Alarido wrote:

M4M from your queue (:

:!: Unrankable ─ Doubtful ─ Tips & tricks ─ ♥ Greetings ─ * Comments

Lines with no marks are mods.

[Lover's Insane]
♥ No true complaint, just a note:
02:28:782 ~ 02:37:606 feels empty >< would place some sliders/notes going with the voice and add a spinner from 02:31:723 to 02:35:796 or a bit more (:　　OK

That's it ^^ Hope you rank the map as soon as possible! Let's bring more challenge to our osu! Pros!!!!

Att.

Alarido wrote:

M4M from your queue (:

:!: Unrankable ─ Doubtful ─ Tips & tricks ─ ♥ Greetings ─ * Comments

Lines with no marks are mods.

[Easy]
♥ No complaints here, although the slider forms are a bit uncommon for their placements that don't form a clear path to follow, but it's OK since spacing is 100%

[code_white03's Normal]
* The spacing is a bit regular, with some changes around 1.1x ~ 1.2x. In general, placements don't form clear paths to flow, while others present different forms. Some flow pieces are very interesting, like the "fishhook flow" among 00:19:597 (3,1) - it's called "Fishhook" because player have go forth to catch and then bring the cursor while playing the slider, making a bit more effort to achieve it.
00:02:402 (2) - it's too near from 00:01:497 (3) in a way the player could hit 00:02:402 (2) before 00:01:949 (1) and break combos >< The solution in the next line, if applied, will help on this too. ▼
00:02:402 (2,3) - JUMP! Not allowed at Normal diffs. For fixing this problem, select and move 00:01:949 (1,2) together to x:132 y:240.
00:04:212 (2) - Overlap its head with 00:05:569 (1)'s head for better appearance.
00:05:117 (3) - Move by 1 grid to left for slight spacing.
00:06:927 (3) - Move to x:128 y:284 for fixing some spacing.
♥ 00:20:049 (1,2,3) - Loved the flow here, could be good if try doing more of these (:
00:47:198 (1,2) - why not do like this? → http://puu.sh/5e73x.jpg
* From 01:52:583 to 01:59:483 - there is speed change, what usually not allowed at Normal and Easy diffs. But... I feel we need look for some BAT sayings on this for this song, specially, since this is OK for me due to song calmness and also for slider ticks telling us how SV goes here too.

* This diff is very well hitsounded and rhythmed just need some work on placements imho

[-RIKKA- Throat]
* WHOA!!! Auto'ed because I'm not thelewa but this diff feels AMAZING ♥ Only may some complaint on some 1/4 parts (not all), I'm very doubtful if song needs them >< specially 00:34:529 (1,2,3,4) where there's only 4 strong beats (BASH BASH BASH BASH), very suitable for BIG KATs on Taiko diff (Oni). on osu!standard, simple notes with higher spacing feels very fiting (:

[BluO's Hard]
♥ No complaints here.

[J-yan Throat]
♥ No complaints here too.

[LdN Throat]
♥ Very good placements ^^ I've no complaints here.

[Lover's Insane]
♥ No true complaint, just a note:
02:28:782 ~ 02:37:606 feels empty >< would place some sliders/notes going with the voice and add a spinner from 02:31:723 to 02:35:796 or a bit more (:

That's it ^^ Hope you rank the map as soon as possible! Let's bring more challenge to our osu! Pros!!!!

Att.

Marcooo wrote:

Yo. Please keep in mind that I am not a mapper. I only point out what felt weird to me while playing.
(is this even a nightcore mix? no other maps have nightcore mix in them, neither have youtube videos)

[Lover's Insane]
00:45:275 Add circle? Seems like you just skipped an obvious vocal　OK
01:03:375 Add circle? ^　OK
01:06:995 ^　OK
01:10:615 ^　OK
01:11:067 ^　OK
01:36:746 (1) sounds really out of place. remove?　OK
01:43:646 Add circle　OK
01:45:682 Add circle　OK
02:07:289 ^　OK
02:15:773 ^ These sound so extremely awkward without circles, you just skip parts which you have previously (in the song) mapped　OK
02:23:805 (1) sounds really weird if you ask me.　OK
02:24:823 (2) move like this? http://puu.sh/5zhVd.jpg　OK
I probably just don't get your style of mapping, if so, please ignore ^_^


Didn't look at hard and normal because i don't know shit about mapping and how they're supposed to be, same with hitsounds.
Hope this helped at least a tiny bit ^_^

Marcooo wrote:

[LdN Throat]
00:22:198 Maybe something like this? http://puu.sh/5zkEo.jpg Doesn't really make it much better imo, but well, changed it.
01:52:017 Why not start here? ( I mean I can hear why but if you move the green section to 01:52:017 then it would sound good IMO) Nope, doesn't really fit imo.
02:28:556 slower slider? doesn't really matter but whatever Changed it.
Probably my favorite map out of the set

Marcooo wrote:

Yo. Please keep in mind that I am not a mapper. I only point out what felt weird to me while playing.
(is this even a nightcore mix? no other maps have nightcore mix in them, neither have youtube videos)

[-Rikka- Throat]
00:37:470 Sounds reaaaallly weird and out of place.　OK
01:45:343 Make this a stream instead of slider, slider + 1 circle looks and feels weird. OK
good map!

Didn't look at hard and normal because i don't know shit about mapping and how they're supposed to be, same with hitsounds.
Hope this helped at least a tiny bit ^_^

Marcooo wrote:

[J-yan Throat]
00:25:931 NC? no, useless, sorry
00:49:008 (1,2,3,4,5) feels really weird that you made the begging and parts that are mapped in other diffs easy by only putting full notes and then you do a 5 note long jumpy thing.. maybe it's just me i thought the same, but it's not, i respected the snap for that it doesn't give any problem for the players
01:01:565 Add circle with NC? i didn't wanted to do it in this part of the timeline, so no
01:08:692 I suggest you space this out. felt weird when playing changed to snap x1.0
01:45:541 Why? sounds really out of place.. just followed the music the best i could, and it's fit, so no

P o M u T a wrote:

putigame's request (BluO's Hard)
00:14:619 (1) - 始点のclap消してfinish追加。
00:50:592 (4) - 終点finish
00:51:044 (1) - このスピナーのスタートを00:50:931 - ここに移動するとよりボーカルにフィットします。終点は同じなので移動する際終点伸ばし忘れることのないように。また、このスピナーにfinishをつけてもいいかなと思いました。
00:58:058 (1) - ここclapじゃなくて音聴く限りfinishだと思いました。clap削除してfinishに変更。
00:59:868 (1) - 音聴く限り始点finish付けたほうが味でるかと思いました。
01:01:678 (1) - ^
01:03:488 (1) - ^ 更にclap 削除
01:05:298 (1) - ^ 更にclap 削除
01:07:108 (1) - ^ 更にclap 削除
01:08:918 (1) - 終点にfinish追加。
01:10:728 (1) - 始点にfinish追加。
01:11:633 (1) - 始点にfinish追加。
01:19:778 (2) - サビはいるとこだし、ここで区切りとしてNCつけたい。あとclapじゃなくてfinish.
01:21:587 (1) - 始点のclap削除してfinish追加。
01:23:397 (1) - clap削除してfinish追加。
01:25:207 (1) - ^ whistleはそのまま。
01:27:017 (1) - 始点clap消してfinish追加。
01:28:827 (1) - 始点finish
01:30:637 (3) - 始点clap消してfinish追加。
01:32:447 (1) - 始点finish追加。
01:34:031 (4) - 終点finish追加。
01:37:651 (5) - ^
01:37:990 (1) - finish追加
01:47:719 - 無駄な緑線
01:59:597 (2) - 始点にsoftのfinish, finishつけて左上のAdditonsをsoftに変更してあげるとできます。
02:01:406 (2) - ^
02:03:216 (1) - ^
02:04:121 (1) - ^
02:05:479 (3) - ^
02:06:836 (1) - 始点clap消して終点finish.
02:15:886 (1) - 始点にfinish追加
02:17:696 (4) - 始点にfinish
02:19:506 (1) - ^ clap削除
02:21:090 (7) - 終点finish
02:24:710 (5) - ^
見落とし部分は一杯あると思いますが、シンバル鳴ってる場所はfinish加えるとよりfitするんで試してみてください。

1. 00:06:022 (2,3) - 2~3の間が不自然に感じました。00:06:474 - には大きなピアノの音があるのでこの音をとって繋いだほうが自然につながると思います。
   ex:
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:20:954 (3) - 1grid left
3. 00:20:954 (3) - move x:128 y:304
   00:20:049 (1,2) - とDSが1.20なのでここだけ1.06なのはおかしいかなと思います。
4. 00:35:999 - 不要な緑線。消して大丈夫だと思います。
5. 01:12:538 (4) - 歌の始まり部分だと思うのでここでNC and 01:12:990 (1) - remove NC
6. 01:19:438 - 不要な緑線
7. 01:23:850 (2) - 1grid up and 01:24:755 (4) - 1grid down
   01:23:850 (2,4) - が重なっているのが気になりました。
8. 02:28:556 (1,3) - 配置が見難く感じたのでこんな配置どうでしょうか。
   
   SPOILER

   
   
   spacingのバラ付きが目立つので少なくともイントロ,Aメロ,サビなど部分部分でのDSは揃えたほうがいいと思います。
   できれば全て統一したほうがいいかなと思います。

AJeyB wrote:

You should change diff names, so it can be ranked, i don't think they will accept "x`s throat ".

1. Note is big... CS +1 will be better but can't fix now maybe
2. 00:06:248 (3) - how about change this to slider?
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:07:153 - put note here?
4. 00:18:578 (2,3) - this shape is not good. how about this? -
   SPOILER

   
5. 00:19:823 (4) - move to 200, 136
6. 00:36:339 (4,5) - use 0.8 DS will be better
7. 00:50:592 (4) - change this slider like this will be nice
   SPOILER

   
8. 00:58:284 (3) - move to 300, 84
9. 01:09:370 (2,1) - swap NC
10. 01:29:732 (1) - this one will be better
    SPOILER

    
11. 01:31:090 (4,5,6) - better use same distance with other streams
12. 01:34:031 (4) - same reason with 00:50:592 (4)
13. 02:05:479 (3) - move slider's end point to 68, 148
14. 02:21:090 (7) - same reason with 00:50:592 (4)
15. 02:24:710 (5) - ^
16. 02:30:479 (5,1) - swap NC
17. 02:31:497 (2,3) - how about this one?
    SPOILER

    

Neta wrote:

Hi~ from my modding queue

[BluO's Hard]

1. Note is big... CS +1 will be better but can't fix now maybe
2. 00:06:248 (3) - how about change this to slider?
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:07:153 - put note here?
4. 00:18:578 (2,3) - this shape is not good. how about this? -
   SPOILER

   
5. 00:19:823 (4) - move to 200, 136
6. 00:36:339 (4,5) - use 0.8 DS will be better
7. 00:50:592 (4) - change this slider like this will be nice
   SPOILER

   
8. 00:58:284 (3) - move to 300, 84
9. 01:09:370 (2,1) - swap NC
10. 01:29:732 (1) - this one will be better
    SPOILER

    
11. 01:31:090 (4,5,6) - better use same distance with other streams
12. 01:34:031 (4) - same reason with 00:50:592 (4)
13. 02:05:479 (3) - move slider's end point to 68, 148
14. 02:21:090 (7) - same reason with 00:50:592 (4)
15. 02:24:710 (5) - ^
16. 02:30:479 (5,1) - swap NC
17. 02:31:497 (2,3) - how about this one?
    SPOILER

    

GOOD LUCK~

Neta wrote:

Hi~ from my modding queue

[BluO's Hard]

1. Note is big... CS +1 will be better but can't fix now maybe
2. 00:06:248 (3) - how about change this to slider?
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:07:153 - put note here?
4. 00:18:578 (2,3) - this shape is not good. how about this? -
   SPOILER

   
5. 00:19:823 (4) - move to 200, 136
6. 00:36:339 (4,5) - use 0.8 DS will be better
7. 00:50:592 (4) - change this slider like this will be nice
   SPOILER

   
8. 00:58:284 (3) - move to 300, 84
9. 01:09:370 (2,1) - swap NC
10. 01:29:732 (1) - this one will be better
    SPOILER

    
11. 01:31:090 (4,5,6) - better use same distance with other streams
12. 01:34:031 (4) - same reason with 00:50:592 (4)
13. 02:05:479 (3) - move slider's end point to 68, 148
14. 02:21:090 (7) - same reason with 00:50:592 (4)
15. 02:24:710 (5) - ^
16. 02:30:479 (5,1) - swap NC
17. 02:31:497 (2,3) - how about this one?
    SPOILER

    

GOOD LUCK~

-Nanaka- wrote:

hihihi
げすとのみなさんもこんにちは！

[じぇねらる]
オフセット+15～20ほどずれてます
ソースが入ってないので追加し全Diff統一しましょう
Ex追加されたしラバーズExtraでもいいかもね！

[のーまる]
HP3AR4OD3でいいと思いまふ！
00:00:140 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - 音取り難しいかと
00:32:719 (3,4) - 見栄えも流れも悪いので横に並べるかblanketつくってあげまそ
00:34:529 (1,2,3) - 素直に三角でいいと思います。
00:45:388 (1,2,3) - ここは切るならにこの音取りが合うと思います　http://puu.sh/7JNc0.jpg
00:49:800 (2,3) - 合ってないと思うので　http://puu.sh/7JNk1.jpg
01:33:239 (2,3) - ^
01:03:488 (1) - 流れ切れてる感があるので曲げてあげましょう
01:12:538 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - いきなり単発地獄なので一番みたいにスライダー混ぜてやったほうが違和感ないとおもいます。
01:20:682 (1,2,1) - NCいりません(複数あるので全てカット)
01:52:357 (1,1) - 違和感しかない！ｗ
02:05:026 (1,2,3,4) - 単発でくるくるするよりもスライダーやリバースでくるくるさせたほうがかわいいと思います！( ,,Ծ ‸ Ծ,,)

DS変わるので流れや配置などはスキップしてまーす
こういうの伸ばしてあげたり連続リバース減らして後に余裕持たせるとレート下がると思うので頑張って！

ノーマルだけ頼まれた？感じなので終わります！
りっかちゃんがんば！