[ General]
- Should be cool if you search another BG with 1366*768 size.
- I wish that in the last spinner, density, volume down gradually, ie add a point inherited until the end of the spinner, I feel that will give you a better view.
- Not more issues.
- 00:00:504 (1,2,3,4,1) - I would distances between them increases gradually, but with some similarity, try the following:
(2) x: 261, (3) x: 109, (4) x: 280, (1) x: 471, perhaps the change will not be as noticeable, but I think it will give a better look to the map. - 00:14:936 (3,4) - I would like you to give more movement into these notes, what if you try to move (4) to the right to give more space between (4) and (1), so they are not so close together, and apart could tilt (3) a little to the left, to make it easier to reach (4) with a big move.
- Well, sorry you have not been many suggestions here, but there is nothing serious to mention, good cup.
- 00:00:504 - I feel I should start here, adding a slider 1/2, to get a better rhythm. I'll leave you an example, it could be something similar in the cup, distances increase as the density of sounds.
- 00:00:164 (1,2) - Honestly I see no need to add a jump here, if you want to add a jump, the best position to add is 00:01:186 - here, because it has a great sound comparison of other sound that is not so audible.
- 00:00:732 (2,2) - By the way, I see that because of these notes, makes you lose range between jumps, avoid adding too many notes, instead of adding more space and several jumps.
- 00:11:073 (1,2) - Be careful with this kind of distance, it costs me work to get to the next note (2), consider reducing the distance because the sound here is not so hard to add a jump.
- Well, I have no more to say, only a small problem is this 00:10:277 (2,3) - type of repetitive patterns, I wish they had more variety, and also careful with the distances, I would like to take a likeness, try 1,70x or you can vary as you see it.
- 00:00:732 (2,4,2,4) - Be careful when placing these notes between the sliders, I would like you to take a distance specific to these notes, usually does not look bad unlike Salad, that because of them, prevented add certain jumps as well also look where to place the jumps properly.
- 00:04:936 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I wish this stream has shaped curve to avoid stockades notes such as 00:05:163 (3,4,5) -these.
- I will take into account the divisor 1/6 as 1/3, so you could add a dash 00:05:618 (1) - here, but first you have to remove 00:05:504 (6) - certain notes to be possible. I'll leave you an example.
- 00:06:982 (1,2) - Hdash feel this is not necessary, because we do not add 00:05:390 (5,1) - one here, for consistency, I suggest you remove it.
- 00:09:709 (5,6) - I feel that this should be a little more together, because to get to (7) is difficult imo.
- 00:32:095 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I feel this stream is rare and confused, I suggest you make it more practical and functional, somewhat like the previous stream that I mentioned.
- 00:32:891 (1,2) - I wish that these notes have more distance, due to the intensity of their sounds.
- 00:46:413 (6) - Delete this note to make it easier to create a jump to (1) will be much better.
- 00:08:231 (7,1) - It would be better if you remove (7) to create a simple jump to (1) I feel it is more natural compared to the h-dash that is forced to (1).
- 00:10:845 (3,1) - It is basically the same, I feel I should add a note (which is currently the slider 3) to add another more fluid and natural to jump (1).
- Well, not much to say, these streams fit very well, especially the end, although the h-dash that has made me doubt.
- 00:05:618 (1,2) - It is a bit far, I would like you to reduce the distance, to make it more natural movement.
- 00:07:323 (2,3) - There is currently a sound (3) which could be emphasized with an h-dash, so I would like that will increase the distance to create a h-dash. Try to place the slider in x: 80.
- 00:08:232 (5,1) - If you applied my previous suggestion, I guess you could add another h-dash between these notes, for consistency between the sounds there, so well, adds a h-dash here. I'll leave you an example.
- 00:09:595 (5,1) - It is optional, but another h-dash fit perfect here, because of the same reasons I mentioned.
- Nothing more to say, it is a great difficulty.