karenying wrote:
Hard
HP/AR/OD+2 fixed
1.一串串hitclap實在不好聽我按照這個改改看好了Vikon wrote:
最簡單而好聽的hitclap落法 : 每2條白線落一clap,然後不斷重覆這pattern就可以了。
ps. 01:26:618 (4) - 不過這里2個clap很好聽
2.whistle很好聽,基本不用改
試着把hitsound改至01:32:407
你可以看看,參考着改
karenying wrote:
Hard
HP/AR/OD+2 fixed
1.一串串hitclap實在不好聽我按照這個改改看好了Vikon wrote:
最簡單而好聽的hitclap落法 : 每2條白線落一clap,然後不斷重覆這pattern就可以了。
ps. 01:26:618 (4) - 不過這里2個clap很好聽
2.whistle很好聽,基本不用改
試着把hitsound改至01:32:407
你可以看看,參考着改
thx~SadKangaroo wrote:
[Relax]
00:04:249 (1,2,3) - It's so close,and suddenly jumping to 00:08:460 (1).You have to fix distance. fixed
00:40:828 (3) - Too close. fixed
02:53:723 (4) - Stack or make something like with next ones. fixed
03:10:828 (2,3,4) - You must have some distance between (1) and this pattern. fixed
[Hard]
00:37:934 (1) - Fix distance,place further. fixed
03:45:302 (x) - Isn't it better for 0.5x Timing Section? not better..it will be too slow
Relax is kinda boring,maybe because of way too slow sliders,but Hard is fine.
Good luck.
Garven wrote:
As per your request:
[General]
Remove miku, kaito, and luka from the tags. They're all in the artist anyway.
If you can, try to remove the audio from the video to save a little bit of space.
Before you start asking for BATs, make sure that you remove the .osb file in your song's folder and do a full resubmission.
If you'd like, please check my user page for some general mapping tips (mostly concerned with distance snap here)
[Relax]
00:16:881 (1) - Maybe position this so the end of it isn't colliding with the 00:14:776 (2) - ?
00:18:986 (2,3) - These are too close together.
00:20:039 (3) - Move the middle slider point left and up one grid. This will line up the end points and look nicer.
00:36:355 (2) - Too close. >< Move up please
Hrm, there seem to be a lot of spacing inconsistencies here. Perhaps start using distance snap as a guide so that your note spacing has a lot more uniformity to it. I'm not saying to use it at all times - just where it makes sense to keep your map's flow good.
01:00:039 (2) - Short curved sliders like this kind of look ugly. If you're going to use a short slider, just make it straight or make the curve much less sharp.
01:20:039 (1) - Hrm, considering what you did just before this, maybe do a single hit here, then a slider from 01:20:565 - to 01:20:960 - ?
01:48:460 (1,1,1,1) - With such a low HP drain, I don't think all these new combos are needed.
01:59:513 (1) - This is a bit too soon after a spinner for such a difficulty. Maybe end the spinner at 01:57:144 - and map a beat at 01:58:986 - ?
02:01:881 (4,5) - Hrm, these don't look so good to me
02:38:986 (1,1,1,1) - New combo thing again, hehe
02:52:934 (1,2,3,4) - Try repositioning these down and to the left. The way osu! stacks these makes it really far away from where they would normally appear.
02:55:039 (1,2,3,4) - ^
02:57:144 (1,2,3,4) - ^
02:59:250 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - ^
03:30:565 (2,1) - Kind of a far jump for this type of difficulty.
03:59:776 (1,1,1) - New combos. -_-
04:16:881 (1,1,1,1) - ^
04:22:407 (1) - Remove new combo
[Hard]
00:07:802 - Expected a note here
00:53:197 (1,2) - This jump felt unjustified/a bit too extreme for my liking.
01:32:144 (12) - Might sound better if you silenced the end of the slider.
Yeah, give a lot more attention to your Relax difficulty. And in general, both maps feel artificially slow compared to the song. I'd like to suggest that you increase the slider velocity a little on both, but that's a lot of remapping to do, hehe.
thx~Zetsubou Sensei wrote:
Hey.
- Add some tags em....
- Add Kiai Time? no kiai time,it hurts my eyes
[Relax]
Check AIMOD (spacing)
Use Large Size Circles fixed
01:11:355 (5) - extend this slider to end at 01:13:855 (although i dont like it ending on a blue tick...it sounds alot better) fixed
01:15:828 (1) - extend this slider to end at 01:17:144 fixed
01:57:407 - remove this break fixed
[Hard]
There are some notes that would look alot better if properly stacked (00:13:737 (3,4) <--- notes like these)
03:33:460 (3) - add a few more repeats to end this slider at 03:33:986 not sound better
03:34:249 (x) - add a note here (with clap) fixed
~STAR (lol i like the vid) GOOD LUCK!
shabao_pig wrote:
个人看法,仅供参考
HARD
00:23:723 感觉需要一个circle fixed
00:37:934 距离有点迷惑,或许可以在00:37:671加一个circle,然后00:37:934到00:38:197用一个slider fixed
00:53:197 尝试互换一下1、2的位置 fixed
01:18:723 距离问题 fixed
01:31:092 这个circle前移1/4拍感觉好点,再调整一下距离 不要>_>
后面总体来说没什么问题
RELAX
00:35:828 这里有点紧密了fixed
00:46:881 5、6离slider太近了 fixed
01:03:723 同上,有遮挡关系会让人误认为是连打 fixed 连打什么的。Easy难度怎么会有>.<
02:19:249 同一类问题,这里显得有点远了 ^
02:20:565 其实这里也可以近一点的 视觉差错嘛>_>
02:46:355 做成三角形吧,距离大一点>_< fixed
02:50:565 这里开始稍微考虑一下Stack Lenienc的影响吧,有点不好看,呵呵fixed
03:59:776 这里的三个1往前移半拍,你要考虑打图的人可能没听过这个歌,所以不要太多的按照歌词来做……fixed
后面有些小距离问题最好调整一下 fixed
star 加油
thxkuyukiP wrote:
Recheck time. Thanks for calling me out!
General
Is it just me or is there still a black background when playing? Maybe I just haven't re-downloaded in a while.
Relax
-00:08:460 (1) : Perhaps try to make this slider shaped like the one before? (At 00:05:302) fixed
-01:33:723 (1) : Kiai Time? fixed
Hard
-02:38:197 (4) : One grid space down. fixed
-04:10:565 (10) : Kiai Time? fixed
- Consider mapping after the last spinner? not better,I think
Amazing improvement since the last time. Hard definitely better, Relax could use better shaped sliders. Otherwise, really good.
Already starred this ;D
ZLOdeuka wrote:
[ General ]
in some places very much want to see Kiai time...
[ Relax ]
(✹) Slider Tick Rate = 1 . beautiful sounds
(✹) 01:11:355 - slider finish here ~ 01:11:881. spiner start here 01:12:144 and finish 01:15:302
(✹) 01:17:934(3) can do the same as the slider and 2 combo 01:15:828?
(✹) 01:24:249 (1) Make slide smoother. does not looks nice
(✹) 02:28:460(4) - take away the slider and put the Circle. and start the spinner here 02:28:986 and finish 02:32:144
(✹) 04:05:828 Add Circle
[ Hard ]
fine..~
I like this map...~STAR
谢谢Rin酱~NatsumeRin wrote:
Red: You must fix this.
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.
[General]
需要加slider上拍子的whistle音的时候,不要点slider加,这样会把滑动音也改掉,记得一个一个点音去加,这样的情况比较多,建议彻底查一遍。例00:51:092 (1) @ [Normal] fixed
作曲KurousaP,写进source,然后vocaloid和vocaloid2进tags. fixed
[Relax]
按照惯例也好语法也好,应该叫Relaxing,或者Normal就好 fixed
OD+1. fixed
这个难度的spacing,显得有些混乱,我不确定自己点全了,建议彻查。
00:20:039 (3,1) - 比如这里。 感觉没问题的说。。
00:39:513 (4,1) - 更远。 fixed
00:42:144 (3,1,2) - 没有违和感吗。。 fixed
00:51:092 (1,2) - 再比如。 fixed
01:33:723 (1,2,3) - 这一串小到几乎可以看成1/2了。 fixed
01:51:355 (2,4,5) - 实际玩起来时这里很难看,建议到song setup - advanced 里把stack leniency拉低一点再看。 fixed
02:17:671 (4,1) - 。。 fixed
02:24:776 (1,2,3) - 完全混乱。请看右上角的spacing. fixed
中段的效果不错不过我怀疑有人会大力反对。
03:28:460 (1,2,1,2) - spacing fixed
整体评价是:和Hard比我觉得实在是没用心。
[Hard]
00:53:197 (1,2) - 间距超出理解,音阶变化不大,也没有什么前兆,我觉得在1.5x以内还好说,2x+有点大了。 fixed
01:12:144 (8,1) - spacing. 有距离问题嘛?
01:48:723 (3,4,5) - 把它们右一格,虽然其实是你两边间距不等。。但重叠效果后这么摆不错。 fixed
02:01:618 (1,2) - 同样是不太能理解的跳。 fixed
04:05:565 (4,1) - 建议放远,现在容易理解为1/2 fixed
All fixed.James2250 wrote:
-Pretty nazi mod but take from it what you want~
-Make the preview point is the same on both difficulties
-Do you need both of these (Vocaloid,Vocaloid2) in tags?
-There are too many short breaks, get rid of most of them and put 2-3 longer breaks in the map (it is annoying to have a break every 20 seconds etc)
Relaxing:
For the parts where it is basically just the singer and no background music, whistles would sound nicer than claps (example 02:16:355 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7)) --- try and go through and fix that on all the places
Try and follow 1 distance snap on the easiest difficulty, or else it is confusing for example 00:53:986 (4,5) and 00:59:513 (1,2) should be the same distance apart
For the easiest difficulty you should fix most of the errors that AIMod points out
00:04:249 (1) - add finish
00:05:302 (2) - add finish to the end (doesn't sound good with whistle on slider either) also both sliders would look better being symmetrical
00:08:460 (4) - ^ (add finish to the start, clap to the end) -- not going to list all the places but there are alot of places in the map that finishes work
00:12:671 (1) - add finish to start
00:12:671 (1,2,1,2,3) - add claps to this part
00:21:092 (1,2,3) - whistles on sliders don't fit
00:33:723 (1) - add finish to the start (and any others like this) ---not going to point them all out
00:33:723 (1,2,3,4) - make sure spacing stays equal
00:36:881 (3) - add clap to the end to match other one?
01:07:934 (1) - sliders like this could be more symmetrical
Spacing between 01:22:144 (4,1) and 01:24:250 (1,2,3,4) should be the same
01:30:565 (1) - would sound better with a silenced ending
01:58:986 (1,3) - don't have stuff like this overlap
02:53:723 (4,1,2,3,4) - don't have any of this overlap
Dont have 2 breaks around 1 note 03:20:039 (1) The breaks add automatically..
03:45:302 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - same things that was mentioned before with changing claps to whistles on the quieter parts of the song (and continues from here)
04:14:776 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - whistle spam doesn't sound good
Best thing to do for this difficulty is go through the entire thing with 1 distance snap and makes sure everything its snapped (unless the jumps really fit), and adjust some hitsounds so they fit the song more
Hard:
AR + 1
Not going to point them all out but all of the whistles get annoying after a while, try and keep a steady rhythm with claps and remove alot of the whistles
00:13:723 (3,4) - stack stuff like this? (unless you want it like this go through and check them in the rest of the map)
00:42:144 (1,2) - align?
01:01:618 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:12:144 (8,1) - don't have anti jumps
03:19:513 (1,2) - again don't do this
Prefer Hard alot more, but after some polishing the maps won't look too bad~
PM me after fixes and I will star
thx for modding All fixedthekillerhjkhjk wrote:
[hard]
03:32:667 (1,2,3) - snap these notes to 1/3 beat spacing to fit the guitar
[relaxing]
03:45:302-03:59:776 the hitsounds are too loud here, take them down 2-3 ticks?
thats all, starring
thx eveeveless wrote:
[general]
acute2.jpg的2去掉...别2啊1都没有 >_>不要在意细节。。
MP3剪过?中间感觉好奇怪 没有剪过0.0
绿线提前尽量要对线...而且绿线提前是为了防止打快..提前那么点没什么用吧... fixed
[Hard]
00:05:697 (x) - 加note fixed
00:47:407 - 给我个这边break的理由fixed
01:04:249 - ^ 之后的各种break...可以自己打节奏fixed
01:17:934 (7) - new combofixed
01:18:460 - 加notefixed
02:11:092 - ^fixed
02:24:249 - ^fixed
03:20:039 (2) - 前移到红线fixed
[Relaxing]
自己开AIMOD看spacing 高难度就算了。低难度要保证spacing不出问题
kanpakyin wrote:
=v=來mod
---------------------------------
紅色=我覺得你應該要修改
藍色=意見而已
(之前都是用英語來mod...希望用中文不要有甚麼以外把-v-)
[Relaxing]
00:05:275(2)雖然說是easy..但我覺得spacing問題也要重視 fixed
00:08:438(4)^fixed
00:40:059(1)向左移1格(grid)fixed
01:24:259(1)向下移1格fixed
01:30:074(2)把whistle除掉fixed
Hard也沒什麼大問題
就這樣...
star~
thanks a lot!Disoy wrote:
首先,你有些綠線加在note上綠線除了KIAI以外是要加在note前的 0.0 懂了,等会改掉
[Relaxing]
00:47:144 (6) - 改成長點的slider? fixed
00:54:513 (5) - 同上or把在00:55:302改成長的slider? 後續一樣的省略...fixed
01:43:723 (2) - 加個hitclap?fixed
01:45:828 (4) - ^fixed
02:50:565 (1,2,3,4,5) - 這是低難度的出現這個有點不好..等会试着加点距离>_>
03:28:460 (1) - 這裡用hitwhistle有點不適合,不然你可以分別再slider的頭跟尾加上hitwhsitle而不要一整條加fixed
03:32:671 (1) - ^fixed
03:36:881 (1) - hitwhistle換成hitfinish?fixed
03:53:197 (5) - 加個hitclap?fixed
[Hard]
這難度除了hitwhistle多了點造成有點吵以外..本身是沒問題的^ ^
02:08:986 (4) - 下移一格fixed
03:19:513 (1,2,3) - 這裡的3個circle要不要把它變成3角形的這樣比較好看
fixed
04:17:671 (5) - 這裡new combofixed
thx for modding. All fixedFamfrit wrote:
Modding:
General:
- I would have reduced the stack (4/9) of all diffs
Timing:
Good
Relaxing:
00:08:460 (4) - new combo
00:56:486 - add break time
01:19:513 - add short slider
01:37:407 - add a circle
02:28:986 (spinner) - start this on 02:28:723. finished - 02:32:144
02:47:539-02:49:513 - add spinner
03:34:644 (Timing Setup Panel): add new timing (1,3x). then 03:34:776 (2) - add 1 repeat. shortened this slider a bit. should get 4 repeats. don't understand - PM
04:21:881 (1) - delete new combo
<sound>
W - Whistle. E - Finish. R - Clap
Hard:
- HP Drain -1 I want to give score.
00:09:249 (3,4) - spaicing
00:58:986 (9) - add a circle
01:30:960 (8) - add a circle
01:31:092 (9) - delete circle
01:31:355 (10) - move on 01:31:223
01:31:618 (11,12) - move on 01:31:486
01:37:407 (10) - add a sircle
01:43:723 (8) - add a sircle
01:50:565 (2,4) - lol, this sliders asymmetrical. Ctrl+C on #2 and ctrl+V on #4
02:00:302 (2,3) - spaicing
02:28:986 (6) - spaicing. move out from slider
02:45:302 (1,2) - spaicing
02:47:671 (spinner) - start at 02:47:539, finish - 02:49:513
02:56:355 (9) - add a sircle (deathstream - yes)
03:00:565 (7) - add a sircle
03:19:513 (1,2,3) - asymmetrical. and made three color combos for the characters: #1 - dark blue. #2 - red. #3 - blue. Kawaii~
03:32:671 (5) - new combo
03:36:881 (3) - new combo
03:37:407 (1) - delete new combo
03:47:144 (1) - delete new combo
03:47:407 (3) - new combo
Awesome map O_O Big Star
那个。。怎么消。0.0Colin Hou wrote:
[General]:
- 视频么有消音啊...这个需要消掉音乐的
All fixed!!Sandpig wrote:
hi
(>'(oo)')> my mod <('(oo)'<)
好像没有用到kiai mode 拒绝瞎眼orz
Hard
01:30:565 (6,7,8) - spacing
01:31:750 (11,12) - 这个最好也远一点
02:30:565 - 从这里开始我觉得你已经可以加音量或者换NORMAL了
02:55:828 (5,6,7,8,9) - clap的stream很难听除非你有什么特殊用意……
03:00:039 (3,4,5,6,7) - ^
03:45:302 这里开始我感觉音乐的鼓点还是比较明显的,试试用点重音(比如soft和normal结合)
Relaxing
01:15:828 这里开始用重音。而且我发现好像前边高潮部分也是soft- - 真是relaxing么……
03:07:407 (1,2,1,2) - 建议分开
03:45:302 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这几个间距怎么突然变短了……而且你跟03:51:618 (1,2,3,4,5) 对比一下
03:53:723 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
04:02:144 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这里开DT就鬼畜了……而且这么排列总感觉是蛋疼到不知道怎么弄了搞出来的……建议局部remap……
04:06:355 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - 这里最好也remap下……还有这部分clap感觉太多了
已经star过了
Combo1 : 254,112,165
Combo2 : 88,209,198
Combo3 : 22,45,122
Thanks ~lovhin456 wrote:
Hi!! Here's my mod >w<
General;
- I looooooooooove this song ~~~ >w<
- Use these colors ?? fixedCombo1 : 254,112,165
Combo2 : 88,209,198
Combo3 : 22,45,122
Relaxing;
- Weird, the slider speed is really slow which makes it easy, but some of the patterns are for a normal, kind of boring too >w>
- 00:08:460 >> Finish at start fixed
- 00:24:513 >> New combo ?? fixed
- 01:22:144 >> You can totally curve this better ~ fixed
- 01:24:249 >> Remove whistle from start and add finish fixed
- 01:41:092 (4,5) >> Delete (5) and extend (4) to the next white tick fixed
- 01:42:144 >> Remove whistle from start and add finish fixed
- I just noticed some of your notes have 2 hitsounds, that isn't good, is too loud
- I personally don't like whistles for this song, but then again that's just me
Hard;
- 01:41:618 >> Remove new combo then add new combo to the next note fixed
* Star & Good Luck ~ (ノ>w<)ノ★