Okay let's mod this.
There are few situations like this, I think it's a bigger issue because it feels really weird to play it.
It can be an issue when you click those sliders but you hear a strong beat on the end out of nowhere, I tend to think I missed a click and the whole rhythm becomes unstable. I think you should change those parts.
00:17:490 (1,2) - That extension onto the strong beat just makes you hold it for too long, I recommend putting a kickslider there instead for the emphasis because now you have the emphasis after the actual strong beat and it ignores the start.
00:55:283 (2,3) - You can hear this is mapped wrong. It's mapped offbeat and doesn't fit the rhythm at all, you can clearly hear it when you play it.
01:53:859 (1,1) - 01:54:278 - you just added this beat with hitsound which basically made the pattern worse. The streaming directly after 1/1 starting oin blue tick is not cool and it would be much better if you just didn't invent a beat that doesn't exist in the first place and you just went with stream starting on the white tick because that's how the rhythm in the song goes. If you say you mapped to the vocals, it's 1/6 first and going into 1/4 so that's wrong rhythm too.
01:56:205 (4,5) - I don't know why sliders are made this offbeat way sometimes, it's inconsistent with the rest of the song and quite frankly the strong beats are SCREAMING to be clicked at.
02:13:300 (2,3) - What, this is completely offbeat. You can hear that while playing at once and these things ruin this map which is very fucking sad..
02:15:479 (1,2) - When you hear that strong beat on the end of the slider you should be clicking the next note spaced far away from it. I'd do a 5 stream there instead of what you did, much better playability.
02:24:864 (1,1) - Not a perfect stack.
03:46:652 (1,2,3,4) - This should be this rhythm -> Something like this
http://puu.sh/rb9Sf/43926f3417.jpg your rhythm skips so many strong beats it's pain to play and could be much better, doesn't have to be this way but atleast make it fit the beats or hitsound it so it doesn't ignore it.
04:18:328 (2,3) - Shorten the slider and make the stream start at white tick, that's when emphasis comes on but sliderend once again, doesn't really make it seen strong.
04:22:853 (1) - Such an opportunity for an epic slider here.
04:32:909 (1,2,3) - Not perfect stack.
04:38:188 - This is just my personal opinion, I won't point out more of those but this doesn't need to be mapped and it feels weird to play an additional note in those situations, there are few of those in this map but I think you want it to be this way, this is just something I dislike and it's an overmap.
I understand the last kiai with the sliderends, it's consistent throughout the kiai so it's fine and you get used to it, no randomness.
You can ignore this mod if you just want to quickrank this although I recommend looking through it to ensure you map has the best quality, also you could probably find some more of those that are just not rhytmically correct and don't really fit.
Amazing map!
