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Here's my mod:
Honestly, it was kinda hard for me to mod this map, since I can barely play 5.5 stars, let alone 8. For the 8* difficulty, I really thought it was fine. You might want a more experienced modder to change some fine details and stuff, but it really did look perfect to me. The only thing is that you haven't set a preview point for the beatmap, so you might want to do that.
Sorry I couldn't help you more!
Honestly, it was kinda hard for me to mod this map, since I can barely play 5.5 stars, let alone 8. For the 8* difficulty, I really thought it was fine. You might want a more experienced modder to change some fine details and stuff, but it really did look perfect to me. The only thing is that you haven't set a preview point for the beatmap, so you might want to do that.
Sorry I couldn't help you more!
Not a full mod here, but I love this song/map, so i might as well throw in some things i noticed:
03:05:494 (111-117) - These feel super out of place
04:13:922 (1) - Just me, but I don't really think it needs to be a spinner here
05:05:922 (1) - This spinner blocks the view of the 1/6th burst that follows it, unless you fly through the spinner. Most people at this level would, but it still might be a problem
Really great map, gl with ranking!
03:05:494 (111-117) - These feel super out of place
04:13:922 (1) - Just me, but I don't really think it needs to be a spinner here
05:05:922 (1) - This spinner blocks the view of the 1/6th burst that follows it, unless you fly through the spinner. Most people at this level would, but it still might be a problem
Really great map, gl with ranking!
[Taikocalpyse]
So many things I don't want to touch because of the whole Taikocalypse style lol (mainly shit like varying the long 1/6 stuff)
00:17:922 (18) - k, so as to make this part consistently have k's on every other white tick?
00:45:636 (203) - no k, so it's like the last one that sounded like this
00:58:494 () - this part of the song goes *heavyfuckingbass* *light hi-hat hit*, so it's more of a 'd k d k' flow. Though since you freestyled, it's up to you.
01:50:779 (67) - k? fits pitch and prepares the flow
01:58:636 (65,66,67,68) - maybe this is the only time the vocals go xx xx but it's the only spot that does this :/
03:31:922 (183,185) - sounds really weird if these aren't D imo
03:34:494 (206,207,208,209,210,211,212,213) - these kkddkkdd to follow the "intensifying stream" pattern?
04:08:208 (360,361,362,363,364,365,366,367,368,369,370) - dddk(1/6), ddkkddd? fits the sounds way more, 04:09:208 (374) - then this could be k so instead of dddk again it's another high 1/6.
04:10:636 (388,389,390,391,392) - I think this part needs more impact, maybe make this dkkkddk?
04:20:779 () to 04:29:636 () - same 'd k d k' stuff if you choose to do that
04:51:494 (243,244,245,246,247) - kkkkk to map the AAAAH note
04:56:779 (297,298,299,300,301,302,303,304,305,306,307,308) - this is fucking hard with the stream starting after bro, 04:57:422 (2) - remove this note to help it out?
03:06:494 () -
05:22:494 () -
05:06:494 () - These green lines doesn't apply the slowdown correctly. Just move it to the blue tick before.
X!
(the mods here thoo)
So many things I don't want to touch because of the whole Taikocalypse style lol (mainly shit like varying the long 1/6 stuff)
00:17:922 (18) - k, so as to make this part consistently have k's on every other white tick?
00:45:636 (203) - no k, so it's like the last one that sounded like this
00:58:494 () - this part of the song goes *heavyfuckingbass* *light hi-hat hit*, so it's more of a 'd k d k' flow. Though since you freestyled, it's up to you.
01:50:779 (67) - k? fits pitch and prepares the flow
01:58:636 (65,66,67,68) - maybe this is the only time the vocals go xx xx but it's the only spot that does this :/
03:31:922 (183,185) - sounds really weird if these aren't D imo
03:34:494 (206,207,208,209,210,211,212,213) - these kkddkkdd to follow the "intensifying stream" pattern?
04:08:208 (360,361,362,363,364,365,366,367,368,369,370) - dddk(1/6), ddkkddd? fits the sounds way more, 04:09:208 (374) - then this could be k so instead of dddk again it's another high 1/6.
04:10:636 (388,389,390,391,392) - I think this part needs more impact, maybe make this dkkkddk?
04:20:779 () to 04:29:636 () - same 'd k d k' stuff if you choose to do that
04:51:494 (243,244,245,246,247) - kkkkk to map the AAAAH note
04:56:779 (297,298,299,300,301,302,303,304,305,306,307,308) - this is fucking hard with the stream starting after bro, 04:57:422 (2) - remove this note to help it out?
03:06:494 () -
05:22:494 () -
05:06:494 () - These green lines doesn't apply the slowdown correctly. Just move it to the blue tick before.
X!
(the mods here thoo)
OD+2.0 pls.
5.0 is so easy for commensurate players to this map.
even od7.0 few players will get nearly SS.
5.0 is so easy for commensurate players to this map.
even od7.0 few players will get nearly SS.
From SEE's Taiko Modding Queue
Sry for late mod. You're one of these mappers I can give mod even on 8* map.
[General]
Good luck Senpai~ :3
Sry for late mod. You're one of these mappers I can give mod even on 8* map.
[General]
- OD5? Only, make it OD6.5, I think it's better in this diff of map. HP the same, could be 5 or even 6 to be this map REALLY hard.
- And name it C18H27NO3 (Extended Ver.).
- 00:13:208 (1) - k better IMO
- 00:17:779 (17) - d
- 00:21:779 (34,35) - Ctrl+G
- 00:22:351 (37,38) - ^
- 00:38:922 (175,176,177) - IMO ddk is better here
- 00:55:708 (25) - k
- 01:32:565 (318,319) - Ctrl+G
- 01:34:922 (349) - k please
- 01:51:065 (69,70,71,72,73,74,75,76,77,78,79,80,81,82,83,84,85,86,87,88,89,90) - Wow, I'm impressed, I really like this :3
- 01:53:208 (104) - d
- 01:54:494 (15) - d
- 02:10:494 (1,2,3,4,6,7,8,9,11,12,13,14,16,17,18,19) - I suggest Ctrl+G, but only suggest here
- 02:57:208 (12) - k
- 03:01:589 (60,62) - Ctrl+G
- 03:44:565 (98,99) - d
- 03:50:351 (166) - ^
- 04:13:827 (435) - k
- 04:57:351 (1) - d
And from 05:15:636 - Look at 4 first points.
Good luck Senpai~ :3Sorry toooooooooooo late ;w; ;w; ;w;
[Backfire]
I pass it someday...lol
Good luck.
[Backfire]
- OD
7? DT is IMPOSSIBLE. - 00:13:065 (25) - change to k? When I thought about pitch.
- 00:56:208 (32,33) - delete and 00:56:351 (1) - move to 00:56:208 (1) - and change spinner end point at 00:57:208 - and 00:56:136 (31) - change to k? When I thought about music.
- 02:10:827 (7) - and 02:11:494 (19) - change to k. When I thought about pitch. I felt that the present placement was sloppy.
I pass it someday...lolGood luck.
from my queue, forgive me i tried
inb4 everything gets denied oops
love the map though, good luck ranking this!
inb4 everything gets denied oops
[Taikocalypse]
tfw modding something above my playing level aaaa
00:07:065 (10) and 00:09:351 (14) - change to d; the section from 00:02:494 to 00:11:636 is pretty calm and passive, so it doesn't warrant the amount of variety created by having 10 and 14 be ks
00:13:208 (1) - change to k to contrast pitch-wise with the following note
00:17:922 (18) - change to d since the pitch is decreasing from 17. this also makes 19 seem a lot less awkward, as it would otherwise stick out as a solo d
00:24:922 (48,49) - ctrl+g. there's a distinct beat on the 1/1, so the hitsounding sounds out of place changing every 1/2
00:47:494 (210) - change to k, this shouldn't be d as its pitch is higher compared with the notes before and after it
00:48:494 (215) - change to k, and
00:49:065 (218) - change to d, both of these help follow the melody
00:57:994 (4) - change to d, the voice deepens so a k doesn't fit as well
01:48:422 (44) - change to k, the synth doesn't drop in pitch continuously through this stream so the stream itself doesn't need to be as straightforward as kkddddk
01:51:065 - about the stream here, the synth goes down and up in pitch; maybe the stream could be made somehow so that the 1/6 triple at 01:51:636 (77,78,79) is ddd? although granted the current stream is probably better for playability. i wouldn't know lol
02:17:922 (33) - this feels out of place as a k, change to d
02:48:208 to 03:24:779 - not a suggestion but the streams in this section are really fun to play
orz idk what to change about the streams anywhere, they sound fine
04:13:351 - put the 1/6ths at the end of the stream instead of the beginning, it would be cool to slow down after the previous two 1/6ths quads then speed up into the spinner
04:38:922 (143) - this can be k since the synth doesn't stop here
all suggestions after this are for following pitch, feel free to blanket deny >.<
05:17:065 (6,7,8) - change to k d d, this should be fine since it still contrasts with the k k d at 05:19:351 (15,16,17)
05:18:779 (13,14) - ctrl+g
05:21:065 (22) - change to d, the pitch decreases from the previous note
05:21:636 (24,26) - ctrl+g
05:23:065 (30,31) - ctrl+g
05:24:065 (34,35) - ctrl+g
05:25:351 (39,40) - ctrl+g
05:25:922 (41) - change to k
05:26:351 (43) - change to d
05:27:636 (48,49) - ctrl+g
05:28:636 (52,53) - ctrl+g
05:30:779 (60,61,62) - k k d
05:31:351 (63,64) - ctrl+g
05:32:494 (67,68,69,70,71) - reverse all colors
tfw modding something above my playing level aaaa
00:07:065 (10) and 00:09:351 (14) - change to d; the section from 00:02:494 to 00:11:636 is pretty calm and passive, so it doesn't warrant the amount of variety created by having 10 and 14 be ks
00:13:208 (1) - change to k to contrast pitch-wise with the following note
00:17:922 (18) - change to d since the pitch is decreasing from 17. this also makes 19 seem a lot less awkward, as it would otherwise stick out as a solo d
00:24:922 (48,49) - ctrl+g. there's a distinct beat on the 1/1, so the hitsounding sounds out of place changing every 1/2
00:47:494 (210) - change to k, this shouldn't be d as its pitch is higher compared with the notes before and after it
00:48:494 (215) - change to k, and
00:49:065 (218) - change to d, both of these help follow the melody
00:57:994 (4) - change to d, the voice deepens so a k doesn't fit as well
01:48:422 (44) - change to k, the synth doesn't drop in pitch continuously through this stream so the stream itself doesn't need to be as straightforward as kkddddk
01:51:065 - about the stream here, the synth goes down and up in pitch; maybe the stream could be made somehow so that the 1/6 triple at 01:51:636 (77,78,79) is ddd? although granted the current stream is probably better for playability. i wouldn't know lol
02:17:922 (33) - this feels out of place as a k, change to d
02:48:208 to 03:24:779 - not a suggestion but the streams in this section are really fun to play
orz idk what to change about the streams anywhere, they sound fine
04:13:351 - put the 1/6ths at the end of the stream instead of the beginning, it would be cool to slow down after the previous two 1/6ths quads then speed up into the spinner
04:38:922 (143) - this can be k since the synth doesn't stop here
all suggestions after this are for following pitch, feel free to blanket deny >.<
05:17:065 (6,7,8) - change to k d d, this should be fine since it still contrasts with the k k d at 05:19:351 (15,16,17)
05:18:779 (13,14) - ctrl+g
05:21:065 (22) - change to d, the pitch decreases from the previous note
05:21:636 (24,26) - ctrl+g
05:23:065 (30,31) - ctrl+g
05:24:065 (34,35) - ctrl+g
05:25:351 (39,40) - ctrl+g
05:25:922 (41) - change to k
05:26:351 (43) - change to d
05:27:636 (48,49) - ctrl+g
05:28:636 (52,53) - ctrl+g
05:30:779 (60,61,62) - k k d
05:31:351 (63,64) - ctrl+g
05:32:494 (67,68,69,70,71) - reverse all colors
love the map though, good luck ranking this!
Topic Starter
thank babby. I did apply everything except like one thing. Until the part where you said it was ok to blanket deny, I think im ok with how it is now. thank u though famhikikochan wrote:
from my queue, forgive me i tried
inb4 everything gets denied oops[Taikocalypse]
tfw modding something above my playing level aaaa
00:07:065 (10) and 00:09:351 (14) - change to d; the section from 00:02:494 to 00:11:636 is pretty calm and passive, so it doesn't warrant the amount of variety created by having 10 and 14 be ks
00:13:208 (1) - change to k to contrast pitch-wise with the following note
00:17:922 (18) - change to d since the pitch is decreasing from 17. this also makes 19 seem a lot less awkward, as it would otherwise stick out as a solo d
00:24:922 (48,49) - ctrl+g. there's a distinct beat on the 1/1, so the hitsounding sounds out of place changing every 1/2
00:47:494 (210) - change to k, this shouldn't be d as its pitch is higher compared with the notes before and after it
00:48:494 (215) - change to k, and
00:49:065 (218) - change to d, both of these help follow the melody
00:57:994 (4) - change to d, the voice deepens so a k doesn't fit as well
01:48:422 (44) - change to k, the synth doesn't drop in pitch continuously through this stream so the stream itself doesn't need to be as straightforward as kkddddk
01:51:065 - about the stream here, the synth goes down and up in pitch; maybe the stream could be made somehow so that the 1/6 triple at 01:51:636 (77,78,79) is ddd? although granted the current stream is probably better for playability. i wouldn't know lol
02:17:922 (33) - this feels out of place as a k, change to d
02:48:208 to 03:24:779 - not a suggestion but the streams in this section are really fun to play
orz idk what to change about the streams anywhere, they sound fine
04:13:351 - put the 1/6ths at the end of the stream instead of the beginning, it would be cool to slow down after the previous two 1/6ths quads then speed up into the spinner
04:38:922 (143) - this can be k since the synth doesn't stop here
all suggestions after this are for following pitch, feel free to blanket deny >.<
05:17:065 (6,7,8) - change to k d d, this should be fine since it still contrasts with the k k d at 05:19:351 (15,16,17)
05:18:779 (13,14) - ctrl+g
05:21:065 (22) - change to d, the pitch decreases from the previous note
05:21:636 (24,26) - ctrl+g
05:23:065 (30,31) - ctrl+g
05:24:065 (34,35) - ctrl+g
05:25:351 (39,40) - ctrl+g
05:25:922 (41) - change to k
05:26:351 (43) - change to d
05:27:636 (48,49) - ctrl+g
05:28:636 (52,53) - ctrl+g
05:30:779 (60,61,62) - k k d
05:31:351 (63,64) - ctrl+g
05:32:494 (67,68,69,70,71) - reverse all colors
love the map though, good luck ranking this!
Hey Backfire, mod request from in-game PM.
Overall, this map is extremely fun. I felt as if I were just nitpicking things, so I left it a bit short. Good work!
Volume
This map has a lot of calm sections (that are still a bit loud) in the beginning that lead into even louder more hardcore ones. Your SV usage signifies this well, but I still think you could have a couple of volume changes to add more emphasis.
00:02:494 to 00:25:351 - 70%? While the difference is slight compared to your default 75% volume, it's still a difference that would be somewhat noticeable.
00:39:065 to 00:47:922 - ^
I found it a bit weird that you had all the volume points at the end very 'decked out' compared to the beginning. I just think that while the details I pointed out here are small, they'll make some noticeable difference, even if it's small.
00:02:494 to 00:25:351 - 70%? While the difference is slight compared to your default 75% volume, it's still a difference that would be somewhat noticeable.
00:39:065 to 00:47:922 - ^
I found it a bit weird that you had all the volume points at the end very 'decked out' compared to the beginning. I just think that while the details I pointed out here are small, they'll make some noticeable difference, even if it's small.
Taikocalypse
01:16:636 (159) - You have this note mapped as a don here, but as a kat at 04:38:922 (143). I would recommend that you either change the first one to be a kat or the second one to be a don. (I think just making it a kat would be better in my opinion.)
02:41:136 (41) - This part seems a bit random when comparing it to all the simple 1/2 patterns that came before it. I think I'd delete the second note in the stream, and make fill 02:45:708 with a don instead. I feel as if having the ending of the calm part more dense makes sense because I believe it signifies that a strong part of the song is coming up more fluently.
03:41:351 (62,63,64,65,66,67,68) - Instead of this being kddkddk, try kdddkdk? When you use patterns similar to this, they're usually styled as ddkddkd. To see it as kddkddk looks and feels a little unsettling to me. This is a stylistic thing (and my opinion of course), but I think it's worth a look at least.
02:41:136 (41) - This part seems a bit random when comparing it to all the simple 1/2 patterns that came before it. I think I'd delete the second note in the stream, and make fill 02:45:708 with a don instead. I feel as if having the ending of the calm part more dense makes sense because I believe it signifies that a strong part of the song is coming up more fluently.
03:41:351 (62,63,64,65,66,67,68) - Instead of this being kddkddk, try kdddkdk? When you use patterns similar to this, they're usually styled as ddkddkd. To see it as kddkddk looks and feels a little unsettling to me. This is a stylistic thing (and my opinion of course), but I think it's worth a look at least.
Overall, this map is extremely fun. I felt as if I were just nitpicking things, so I left it a bit short. Good work!
Topic Starter
Ok I apply all but last 2.Shyguy wrote:
Hey Backfire, mod request from in-game PM.VolumeThis map has a lot of calm sections (that are still a bit loud) in the beginning that lead into even louder more hardcore ones. Your SV usage signifies this well, but I still think you could have a couple of volume changes to add more emphasis.
00:02:494 to 00:25:351 - 70%? While the difference is slight compared to your default 75% volume, it's still a difference that would be somewhat noticeable.
00:39:065 to 00:47:922 - ^
I found it a bit weird that you had all the volume points at the end very 'decked out' compared to the beginning. I just think that while the details I pointed out here are small, they'll make some noticeable difference, even if it's small.Taikocalypse01:16:636 (159) - You have this note mapped as a don here, but as a kat at 04:38:922 (143). I would recommend that you either change the first one to be a kat or the second one to be a don. (I think just making it a kat would be better in my opinion.)
02:41:136 (41) - This part seems a bit random when comparing it to all the simple 1/2 patterns that came before it. I think I'd delete the second note in the stream, and make fill 02:45:708 with a don instead. I feel as if having the ending of the calm part more dense makes sense because I believe it signifies that a strong part of the song is coming up more fluently.
03:41:351 (62,63,64,65,66,67,68) - Instead of this being kddkddk, try kdddkdk? When you use patterns similar to this, they're usually styled as ddkddkd. To see it as kddkddk looks and feels a little unsettling to me. This is a stylistic thing (and my opinion of course), but I think it's worth a look at least.
Overall, this map is extremely fun. I felt as if I were just nitpicking things, so I left it a bit short. Good work!
Hello, as you requested, a mod here.
Feel free to reject anything, my mod are pretty much TnT styled.
A bit late for it, good map tho, I wish you good luck on approving this.
Feel free to reject anything, my mod are pretty much TnT styled.
Taikocalypse
00:02:494 (1) - you can use x _ x x x _ x _ patterns here, the song itself call it.( like 00:03:351, 00:05:636 etc)
00:11:494 - SV 0.77x? smoother SV change
00:11:636 (20) - *it is weird to be d here. 00:16:208 (11) - ,00:20:779 (30) - ,00:25:351 (51) - these 3 places begin the pitch as 00:11:636 does. In structure's perspective, it is really weird, hence I recommend using d for the rest 3 notes, or make (20) k for better structure, as well for the sake of consistent.
00:48:208 (213,214,215) - similar issue* to previous one, begin same pitch, but you begin with k here. I recommend ddk kkd
00:54:351 (11,15) - I reckon k, to match the increasing pitch of the song, as well making a better pattern flow.
00:55:065 (16) - similar issue*, I think you should reconsider this stream pattern.
00:56:208 (32) - Suggestion: Better start the spinner here. //However it is ok to be like this since fx begin at 00:56:351
01:05:208 (54) - k, for the sake of consistency with 01:00:494 (19,20) - and 01:02:779 (35,36) - .
01:07:636 (73) - Maybe a D instead of K. It has a heavy bass fx, so a finisher fx suits, but it is 'Base', k is for high pitch, making this as K is really weird for both mapper and player.
01:13:922 (129,130,131,132,133) - kkdkk? Since you begin the 5plet 01:12:779 (118,119,120,121,122) - with k, so I prefer using same method for this 5plet, for better gameplay.
01:18:779 (179,180) - ctrl + G? this 5plet can be the 'abekobe' version of 01:17:779 (169,170,171,172,173) - for better gameplay.
01:19:065 (183) - 01:20:636 (197) This part, for me, is like 'isolated'. I think you should revise the pattern used here. It is really inconsistant imo and is not good for gameplay(i.e. weird to play and hear).
01:21:351 (204) - Similar issue*
01:25:565 (246) - del , 01:25:636 (247) - d. I think the 7plet reduced the emphasis on 01:25:922 (249) - for d k D it can produce a better emphasis on the D as well following the pitch.
01:27:494 (264,265,266) - kdk? For variant. double kkd is weird for me here. Additionally, the 2 k (01:27:494 (264,266) - ) can emphasis the 2 fx respectively.
01:27:922 (268,269,270,271,272) - reverse d/k here? Begin d here, similar issue*
01:32:208 (311,312,313,314,315,316,317) - try to make this part's structure same as 01:30:494 (295,296,297,298,299,300,301,302,303,304,305,306) - . This part is well mapped hence you should copy and paste to the similar part I mentioned, for consistency, for gameplay experience.
01:35:065 (344) - You should revise the structure used on this part. It is really inconsistent here. From my observation, every 2 bars have its own pattern and done no contribution to consistency. (I am not saying you mapped it badly, but you need to consider overall structure.)
01:51:636 (77,78,79) - I reckon 1/6 kkkd for better emphasis. (If applied, 01:51:636 (77,78,79) - Ctrl + G to make it similar to the stream before you made changes.)
02:16:208 (28) - 02:20:779 (43) - Similar issue*
02:28:779 (68) - Ctrl+G ^ 02:36:494 (17) - to k (additionally, 02:36:494 (17) - ddk k kkd (1/2 snap))
02:41:136 (41) - del? for consistency of the similar patterns after.
You should add green lines for 02:41:279 (43) - ,02:43:565 (56) - etc, These are the part I would like you to add SV in it to make the SV change more smooth. e.g. 02:41:279 (43) - as x0.82; 02:43:565 (56) - as x0.87 etc. Huge SV gap usually ruins the gameplay experience.
03:04:279 - add note? to make the stream have a better cohesion with the music since 1/4 stream fx is given from the song.
Suggestion: reduce finishers from 03:23:636 (132) - , I think it will be better if you make 132 onward a 1/4 stream, as a better flow of structure.
03:37:351 (16) - Revise patterns. plus, it would be better if you can make the notes every 4 measure be singular. It is a good method to emphasis the beat of the song. Like 03:39:636 (41) - , you connected it with the notes after, hence it has less emphasis on the beat it is on. others like 03:48:779 (147) - will be good for revise.
04:50:494 (231) - Make this singular, would be good for emphasizing the beat it is on.
04:55:065 (272,273,274,275,276,277,278,279,280,281,282,283) - (I suggest ddd kkk (dddd) (kkkk)); connect 04:56:208 (284,285,286,287,288,289,290,291,292,293,294,295,296,297,298,1) -
05:15:636 (1) - same as those part I mentioned at the beginning of the mod. (every measure start with d etc.)
05:33:636 (1) - I think k did enough for the last fx, since the fx did not last that long.
00:11:494 - SV 0.77x? smoother SV change
00:11:636 (20) - *it is weird to be d here. 00:16:208 (11) - ,00:20:779 (30) - ,00:25:351 (51) - these 3 places begin the pitch as 00:11:636 does. In structure's perspective, it is really weird, hence I recommend using d for the rest 3 notes, or make (20) k for better structure, as well for the sake of consistent.
00:48:208 (213,214,215) - similar issue* to previous one, begin same pitch, but you begin with k here. I recommend ddk kkd
00:54:351 (11,15) - I reckon k, to match the increasing pitch of the song, as well making a better pattern flow.
00:55:065 (16) - similar issue*, I think you should reconsider this stream pattern.
00:56:208 (32) - Suggestion: Better start the spinner here. //However it is ok to be like this since fx begin at 00:56:351
01:05:208 (54) - k, for the sake of consistency with 01:00:494 (19,20) - and 01:02:779 (35,36) - .
01:07:636 (73) - Maybe a D instead of K. It has a heavy bass fx, so a finisher fx suits, but it is 'Base', k is for high pitch, making this as K is really weird for both mapper and player.
01:13:922 (129,130,131,132,133) - kkdkk? Since you begin the 5plet 01:12:779 (118,119,120,121,122) - with k, so I prefer using same method for this 5plet, for better gameplay.
01:18:779 (179,180) - ctrl + G? this 5plet can be the 'abekobe' version of 01:17:779 (169,170,171,172,173) - for better gameplay.
01:19:065 (183) - 01:20:636 (197) This part, for me, is like 'isolated'. I think you should revise the pattern used here. It is really inconsistant imo and is not good for gameplay(i.e. weird to play and hear).
01:21:351 (204) - Similar issue*
01:25:565 (246) - del , 01:25:636 (247) - d. I think the 7plet reduced the emphasis on 01:25:922 (249) - for d k D it can produce a better emphasis on the D as well following the pitch.
01:27:494 (264,265,266) - kdk? For variant. double kkd is weird for me here. Additionally, the 2 k (01:27:494 (264,266) - ) can emphasis the 2 fx respectively.
01:27:922 (268,269,270,271,272) - reverse d/k here? Begin d here, similar issue*
01:32:208 (311,312,313,314,315,316,317) - try to make this part's structure same as 01:30:494 (295,296,297,298,299,300,301,302,303,304,305,306) - . This part is well mapped hence you should copy and paste to the similar part I mentioned, for consistency, for gameplay experience.
01:35:065 (344) - You should revise the structure used on this part. It is really inconsistent here. From my observation, every 2 bars have its own pattern and done no contribution to consistency. (I am not saying you mapped it badly, but you need to consider overall structure.)
01:51:636 (77,78,79) - I reckon 1/6 kkkd for better emphasis. (If applied, 01:51:636 (77,78,79) - Ctrl + G to make it similar to the stream before you made changes.)
02:16:208 (28) - 02:20:779 (43) - Similar issue*
02:28:779 (68) - Ctrl+G ^ 02:36:494 (17) - to k (additionally, 02:36:494 (17) - ddk k kkd (1/2 snap))
02:41:136 (41) - del? for consistency of the similar patterns after.
You should add green lines for 02:41:279 (43) - ,02:43:565 (56) - etc, These are the part I would like you to add SV in it to make the SV change more smooth. e.g. 02:41:279 (43) - as x0.82; 02:43:565 (56) - as x0.87 etc. Huge SV gap usually ruins the gameplay experience.
03:04:279 - add note? to make the stream have a better cohesion with the music since 1/4 stream fx is given from the song.
Suggestion: reduce finishers from 03:23:636 (132) - , I think it will be better if you make 132 onward a 1/4 stream, as a better flow of structure.
03:37:351 (16) - Revise patterns. plus, it would be better if you can make the notes every 4 measure be singular. It is a good method to emphasis the beat of the song. Like 03:39:636 (41) - , you connected it with the notes after, hence it has less emphasis on the beat it is on. others like 03:48:779 (147) - will be good for revise.
04:50:494 (231) - Make this singular, would be good for emphasizing the beat it is on.
04:55:065 (272,273,274,275,276,277,278,279,280,281,282,283) - (I suggest ddd kkk (dddd) (kkkk)); connect 04:56:208 (284,285,286,287,288,289,290,291,292,293,294,295,296,297,298,1) -
05:15:636 (1) - same as those part I mentioned at the beginning of the mod. (every measure start with d etc.)
05:33:636 (1) - I think k did enough for the last fx, since the fx did not last that long.
A bit late for it, good map tho, I wish you good luck on approving this.