I think your diff is ready to ranking since ppl don't find/mention errors from it.-Mo- wrote:
Where are my mods o.o
I think your diff is ready to ranking since ppl don't find/mention errors from it.-Mo- wrote:
Where are my mods o.o
Thank you for the mod! :3Alveryn wrote:
[General][Abyssal Catharsis]
- normal-sliderslide.wav is uselss because it's the same as soft-sliderslide.wav and could be replaced with SC:1 green tick Can't say anything to this since -Mo- is using that file in his map.
- whiteout.jpg should be same size as bg.jpg and "ground effect 1.jpg" (1346x757) It doesn't matter, because I'm scaling that image in SB.
- 00:37:897 (3) - move this to sliderend of 00:37:297 (1) - yea
- 01:07:297 (7) - to sliderstart of 01:07:697 (1) - k
- 01:24:497 (5) - CTRL +G for flow hmm, why not?
smsh150 wrote:
Alveryn wrote:
normal-sliderslide.wav is uselss because it's the same as soft-sliderslide.wav and could be replaced with SC:1 green tick Can't say anything to this since -Mo- is using that file in his map.
Reya wrote:
m4m xdNormal
00:26:897 (2) - try to turn this a bit left to avoid overlap confuse https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5671814 I prefer the current flow, and the overlap doesn't really matter anyway since the objects are far enough apart in time.
00:28:097 (4) - isn't a really good form, can you make it more beautiful? Changed.
01:01:297 (1,2) - i think its not a really good idea to make double reverse on normal.
02:18:097 (1,2) - ^ This should be fine.
01:04:497 (1,2) - this objects to high. replace pls
01:11:697 (2) - ^
01:13:297 (5) - ^ (up it) There is nothing wrong with this. Objects are still on screen and not overlapping the health bar. There's no reason not to use as much of the field as you can.
Honestly, I do not even know what to say about slider forms. But, im not good at easiest diffs. Speak your mind ^^
Thank you for modding!!Reya wrote:
m4m xdHard
00:23:297 (2) - change to 1\2 slider and 1\1 slider for better music following. 00:24:097 (4) - change it to circle. For example - good flow and rhythm http://makina.s-ul.eu/ChpENZsY Hm why not?
00:40:297 (5) - fix spacing? y
01:06:097 (1) - replace it to x168 y216 to get symmetric pattern I don't agree with this
03:24:497 (1) - make it a bit more nice pls. okay ;w;
Hard looks good, but need some cosmetic changesAbyssal Catharsis
00:16:297 (5) - isn't good to finish sliders on big white tick's, you need to start from this point 00:16:497 - in this song
00:17:897 (7) - ^
00:19:497 (5) - ^
00:21:097 (7) - ^ fix all pls, its important for this song I don't agree with this. Imo it's better to map melody in that point.
00:35:697 (1,2,3) - i have idea, how about http://makina.s-ul.eu/dSBwxcfl works, so why not
01:22:497 (2,3) - replace it a bit http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5671911 replaced bit differently, but yea agreed
01:54:497 (1,2) - why nc? it's for better readable and makes it look better.
02:21:497 (2) - not a good form, make it more beautiful There is many kind of beauty, and this is one of those that I like, sorry
nice song! good luck! Thx!
(and rank it pls) yea I'm trying to ;w;
Thanks for modding!Dailycare wrote:
[Mo's Normal]
Looks nice. But I have some opinions on your diff
*00:25:297 (4,5) - I know it might be hard for you to fix this rhythm.. But 3/4 repeat slider is more better to me. I think removing drum sampleset on 00:25:697 - would work if you don't want to change the rhythm Decided on option 2 as it is since it follows the synths better.
*00:27:897 (3,3) - 01:44:697 (3,3) - Consider removing circles. There're no confident drum sounds on red ticks There are strong synth and a vocal note here, so I think it is appropriate.
*00:31:097 (3) - It touches the HP bar. I'd rather move it down. Yep
*00:38:097 (5) - and similar 1/2s - How about changing it to 3/4? It sounds a ton better than 1/2 (It's a subjective opinion) I don't think there's anything wrong with the current rhythm, and I would prefer to keep the red tick as an active note since it has a stronger feel when going into the next section of the song.
*01:39:697 (1) - What about finishing at 01:41:697 - like hard? I feel that mapping the drums on 01:42:097 would be more appropriate, and the 2/1 gap before the notes feels more natural to me..
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Source:艦隊これくしょん~艦これ~
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Thank you for modding!!!Dailycare wrote:
[Abyssal Catharsis]
*01:29:597 (4,5) - What about changing them to 1/3 slider or making (4) 1/2? I prefer the way it is now.
*01:58:297 (4,5) - They make me questionable.. Especially, I think it would be better to make 01:58:897 - and 01:58:497 - clickable alright
*02:21:297 - ~ 02:34:097 - Well I think putting a break here would be more better. The current slowest SV made me a bit confused though it expressed the music well I prefer the way it is now.
[Hard]
*The spacing is a bit awkward for me, and I guess it might make the diff a bit messy. ex) 01:58:697 (6,1) - You used x1.9 for emphasizing, but why did you use x2 at 02:00:097 (4,1) - ? Yea I'll try to fix those.
*00:38:097 (1) - 01:54:897 (1) - It can't be divided into 3. Using 1/8 is correct like the highest diff. fixed
*01:16:897 (2) - Let this slider start at 01:16:797 - . And put the circle at 01:17:097 - . What do you think of it? and if you want to fix it, just apply it to 02:59:297 (2) - too. Hm alright
*What about using a slidertick hitsound at 01:26:497 - ?
*03:09:297 - ~ 03:12:497 - Why did you use x1.3 here? You just used x1.4 at the similar previous part. woops :/
Sorry for late and short mod, I just focused on my mapset ;w;
Btw simple, but awesome storyboard.
Fanteer wrote:
Mo's Normal
01:46:897 (2,5) - ugly overlap You're free to fix this for me smsh, just rotate the slider by 3 degrees.
-Mo- wrote:
Fanteer wrote:
Mo's Normal
01:46:897 (2,5) - ugly overlap You're free to fix this for me smsh, just rotate the slider by 3 degrees. Fixed
Thank you for the mod!!!!Fanteer wrote:
hi
M4M
Hard
00:26:097 (1,2,3,4) - then you are using, 2 straight slider + 2 curved slider, 00:27:697 (1,2,3,4) - you can then do the same IMO that dones't really matter imo
00:38:097 (3) - maybe remove NC ? Since I do there big jump I would keep that
01:00:897 (4) - maybe http://puu.sh/r3fQb/314647e5fc.jpg I don't think that flows very well, unlike the current one
01:09:097 (5) - this slider have end on white tick and this white tick should be NC. you must remake it changed it to different, but yes
01:13:897 (6) - remove NC 01:14:097 (1) - NC It would look ugly/stupid to me, so no thx :<
02:03:497 (4,5,6) - ^ ^
01:56:297 (2,3,4) - overlap HP bar fixed
Abyssal Catharsis
00:54:497 (4) - Maybe put this slider about 00:53:697 (2) - as it is done in 00:53:297 (1,3) - yea why not
01:36:297 (1) - I wrote about this above (Hard) changed NC's place, but didn't remake it
01:39:497 (5) - ^ in this place it's fine
02:00:297 (7) - ^ ^
02:51:497 (6) - ^ ^
02:21:497 (2) - ugly slider Well everyone has own taste and I think it's great :<<
03:04:297 (1) - remove NC 03:04:497 (3) - NC ( example 03:05:897 (7,8,1) - ) ^
GL :)
_Yiiiii wrote:
[Normal]
00:15:697 (4,1,2) - Not a good flow for Normal.
01:52:497 (1,2,3) - ^ How exactly?
There are same problems latter.
TOO MANY WHISTLE And why is this a problem?
Thank you for modding!!!_Yiiiii wrote:
Hi, M4M!
[Abyssal Catharsis]
00:14:097 (5) - Ctrl+G to change flow here because you always do that with the same sound. Imo it doesn't break a flow there.
00:38:397 (5) - How about replacing this slider with two circles to make a uncomfortable sense? It would make it worse, imo
02:00:697 (1,2,3,4) - Not good for game play. yea changed a bit
02:27:697 (2,3) - and 02:29:297 (1,2) - Why you used different DS for almost the same sound? I'll try to fix things up there.
03:24:797 (2) - ^^ y
[Hard]
00:23:297 (2,3) - I don't like this overlap, what about you? To my mind it's good.
00:47:297 (2,3,4) - Why change DS? Didn't want to notes to overlap... that's why.
01:01:297 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - Try decreasing DS bit by bit. I prefer the current way
That's all, hope for rank~
DavidEd wrote:
Normal
- 00:13:297 (1) - Same as the hard. Probably should've started the song at x:352 y:128 to make it blend in with the storyboard just like you did in your hardest difficulty. But I guess there isn't too much to do about it, unless you want to reposition like half of the map xD Yo smsh, make the circle difficulty specifc \o/
- 01:04:497 (1) - Consider changing this slider's shape so that it doesnt touch the healthbar Eh well this is fine in default skin, but I made the corner a little less sharp anyway.
- 01:13:297 (5) - Same as above, but this time it's way too close to the bottom. Similar solution.
- 02:34:097 to 02:45:297 - Tell smsh to add a silent soft-sliderslide2 so that you can get rid of that slider sound (make sure you change sampleset after that too) ^*^*^*^**^*^*^*^*^**^
- 03:22:097 (1) - Delete spinner and map this last part just like the other difficulties Well you can tell I mapped this a long time ago.
The background is a bit off as you can see on this picture (the black bars on the side). I dont think that was intentional? It's like this on all the resolutions I tried (1920x1080, 1600x900 and 1366x768). So make sure to get that fixed.Thanks for modding!
That's just how it is in the editor when you add a storyboard. Although.... we can have 1920x1080 backgrounds now sooooo...
艦隊これくしょん -艦これ-
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Thank you so much for modding!!!! no comment/green text = fixedDavidEd wrote:
Trance <3
Storyboard
- The background is a bit off as you can see on this picture (the black bars on the side). I dont think that was intentional? It's like this on all the resolutions I tried (1920x1080, 1600x900 and 1366x768). So make sure to get that fixed.
- Consider adding a white flash on major beats like on 00:26:097 - and 00:38:897 - just like you did at the kiai? I feel like it brings more life into the map/storyboard.
- Add lyrics?
Abyssal Catharsis
- 00:51:297 - Hard beats like these should be clickable
- 01:25:097 (6) - Move to x:308 y:56 so it doesn't break flow, also gives it some structure
- 01:45:497 (4,5,6) - This increase in spacing came out of nowhere. Nothing that I could hear suggests it, but do as you will.
- 01:50:897 - You should use a much louder kick than the current one because now the volume is waaay too low and will sound out of place.
- 02:08:097 - Hard beats like these should be clickable
- 02:58:897 (1,2) - Should probably decrease the spacing a bit so people dont get confused after having played this 01:16:497 (1,2) -
- 03:12:497 - Probably should've just mapped this anyways since the song is about to end in 15 sec. Its better to put the break after the first kiai like in your hard difficulty Imo it's stupid to not map the end of the song.
Hard
- 00:13:297 (1) - Probably should've started the song at x:352 y:128 to make it blend in with the storyboard just like you did in your hardest difficulty. But I guess there isn't too much to do about it, unless you want to reposition like half of the map xD I'll deal with it later
- 00:38:097 (1,2) - I'm not certain if this will be an accepted pattern in a hard difficulty. But do keep it anyways. How it isn't? D:
- 01:20:497 (1,2,3,4) - BN's will hate this overlap. And I think you should deal with it aswell
- 02:06:897 (1,2,1) - I dont really mention this often, but damn does this look beautiful Oh thank you (#>_<#)
- 02:21:497 - Please do keep consistent breaks throughout your difficulties I don't think this is a big deal, Will see what BNs will say
- 03:12:697 - Same as in your hardest difficulty ^
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Looks good guys. Just make sure to polish and look for minor issues such as bad blankets and such.
Good luck!
no reply = fixed/changedLulu- wrote:
Hi, M4M from #modreqs!
Just gonna suggest some stuff, as I couldn't find any major gameplay affecting flaws
[Storyboard]
Could use Lyrics and really needs more effects, like in 00:51:697 and 02:08:497; It's a bit bland overall but doesn't need much more to become a nice SB.
I removed SB since I think I can do better one if I just wanted to.
[General]
Remove japanese tag
00:51:697 - Kiai on the strong beats?
02:08:497 - ^
[Abyssal Catharsis]
00:16:697 (1,2,3) - I'd move this closer to 5 and rotate it by 15° or something, looks cleaner and plays better imo I think it looks better with current state.
00:19:097 (4) - I don't get why you randomly spaced it this far away from 3
00:53:297 (1,2,3,4) - Consistency is key, this also applies to hitsounding. Either remove the whistles or add some more in these parts. (You could also add some BG effects in your storyboards in these parts)
01:45:897 (6) - Try a sharper angle I think it's fine
02:20:897 (1,2,3,4,1) - Curve this? Looks better with current state
02:20:897 - Please keep your breaks consistent throughout the spread, I don't even think this is rankable There isn't a ranking criteria or guideline that says those should be same in all diffs. Breaks are more common to the lowerest diff and I wanted to map this part in Catharsis.
03:12:497 (2) - Please map this, it's a very strong section of the song and just feels unprofessional when left unmapped It's totally same rhythm as before (00:13:297 - 01:30:097 - ) and since I didn't want to put break at 02:21:297 - , it's more reasonable to have it at this point.
Most of the patterns, slider angles, etc need more polishing. It's only minor stuff tho, so I didn't point these flaws out, there would just be too many. Also recheck some blankets I'll do my best!
[Hard]
00:32:897 (2) - ctrl+g?
00:59:697 (1) - You can still space this a bit further from the last slider
[Mo's Normal]
03:26:897 - SB: Change the "Beatmap by" to "Difficulty by" ^as I said about SB
Good luck with your map!
Thank you so much for modding!! >.<Lasse wrote:
ingame m4m request (map)
metadata? ? yea what about it ?
why is the highest diff the only one ending with a spinner/much later because of that? you coud at least be consistent for your own diffs I have just forgot it :/
abyssal
00:16:897 (3) - this just feels so wrong to me, there is no really strong/noticeable held synth or anything to support the 3/4 and even if there is a sound on the blue tick, 1/2 seems to fit the music much better // 00:20:097 (3) -
maybe you wanted some rhythm "variation" but keep in mind this part is only a few seconds long, so a bit more repetitive rhythm won't bother people that play this when the music is this repetitive
00:25:297 (3) - should probably be 1/8? http://i.imgur.com/CwnKCBZ.jpg
00:26:897 (4,5,6) - rhythm choice seems weird as it makes the weak beat on 00:27:097 - clickable, but not the strong vocal + synth on 00:27:497 - ? when something likehttp://i.imgur.com/TyaJE6P.jpg would be great
also it feels like you randomly switch focus very often like 00:32:497 (1,2,3,4,1) - is nice as it's very clear what it follows (vocals), but then 00:34:697 (2,3,4) - suddenly goes back to drums/instrumental
00:46:697 (1) - this tick should be lower volume, right now it gives as much feedback as clickable objects which is not something you want // 01:50:897 - and all other ones like these (just reduce the volume of the file instead of all these timing points)
00:51:697 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - liked this pattern, though it would be much nicer if you made it more polished by getting rid of all these tiny borderr overlaps etc. when you could have things like http://i.imgur.com/WpPOut2.jpg 1/2 sliderjumps are much easier than circlejumps anyways, so a bit more spacing doesn't really hurt here // 02:10:097 (1,3) -
overall there are more of these "small things" that add up and make things seem less polished overall, like why does 00:54:897 (1,3) - overlap so randomly when it could be http://i.imgur.com/lGjBbQv.jpg and all such things
01:01:297 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2) - where is the hitsounding? even just using drum sampleset instead of soft could be nice to match the song better
// 02:18:097 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) -
01:14:897 (5,8,9,1) - completely ruined by autostacking, enable stacking in the editor http://i.imgur.com/fJLO2vX.jpg and move the triplet to fit
now that you have stacking enabled you might also want to check things like 01:22:897 (4,5,6) - which would be great if they were spaced just a bit more
01:26:697 (7) - how about making this into a bit spaced 1/4 circles? should fit vocal really well http://i.imgur.com/2lfSl5f.jpg
01:29:297 (3,4,5) - a few green lines to match the volume progression of the song would be great
01:31:097 (4,5,6,7,1) - random linear flow seems so unfitting with every other pattern you put on the map, despite nothing outstanding in the song, could for example stack 01:31:097 (4,5,6) - under the tail of 01:30:497 (2) - and move 01:31:497 (7) - => http://i.imgur.com/ZEWqZX6.jpg would be similar to what you did on 01:39:897 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I did my own pattern but thx for the example!
01:55:197 (2,1) - rhythm here is really hard to recognize cause the spacing is more like your usual 1/2 spacing, would make them closer I can't find a good way to do that, since then it looks messy. D:
02:21:497 (2) - why not something like http://i.imgur.com/gwsrBdv.jpg or http://i.imgur.com/0LiNCs7.jpg Cause I like this one more. those would work too, I understand.
02:25:097 (2,1,2,3) - reverse emphasis thing seems so weird here. if you are going to keep it, at least don't break consistency on 02:33:297 (2) - and make it into http://i.imgur.com/bJlfaab.jpg
03:11:097 (2,1,2,1) - add some green lines to gradually decrease volume
making your rhythm so drum emphasis heavy for a vocal song feels like you are not really using the whole potential the song offers because vocal emphasis/rhythm is usually much more "dynamic" than drums, hope that is something you can consider for future maps
hitsound things most likely apply to lower diffs too
Yea I know. I'll keep that in mind.
hard
00:38:097 (1) - I think these 1/8 things are a bit much for this difficulty, especially considering how normal is mapped. why not http://i.imgur.com/gCWNeHA.jpg ? // same for 01:16:497 (1) - and all others
00:45:097 (7,1) - such linear speedup doesn't work well here. you could try something like http://i.imgur.com/JhWRlAh.jpg to get it more angled
// 01:21:297 (4,5,1) -
00:48:397 (5) - why? rhythm wise 2 circles would actually be easier to play/more expectable and also fit the emphasis of the song better
01:56:297 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - seems like a pretty random spike in difficulty for such a part
I'm okay with giving this a try if you polish things up a a little
Lasse wrote:
mo
od5 is too much considering this is the lowest diff and hard also only uses 5.5 => od4 would be nice You're free to change this for me,smshSanttu.
Lasse wrote:
Metadata? = give me a proper source, like official website/album cover or something like that
Though I already found it http://www.yuuhei-satellite.jp/2968
Make sure romanization and all that stuff is correct
Metadata should be now fine, added few tags and changed OD to 4.-Mo- wrote:
Lasse wrote:
mo
od5 is too much considering this is the lowest diff and hard also only uses 5.5 => od4 would be nice You're free to change this for me,smshSanttu.
Lasse wrote:
you changed ar instead of od on normal lol
should be ar5 od4
abyssal
01:04:097 (1) - is the sliderwhislte intended here? it kinda fits, just make sure you actually wanted it to be there
seems okay besides that
Oh shit... xd-Mo- wrote:
Also adding on that you could toggle off the SB epilepsy warning, given that you uh, removed it
Thx for checking, I also fixed a lot of rhythms that didn't really embrace that music right.Nao Tomori wrote:
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might be a bit cuz can only quali 1 map a day x d
[abyssal catharsis]
00:50:697 (1) - i don't understand what kind of weird wiggly sound this is following. the song seems to present a pretty simple rhythm like http://puu.sh/uMyqb/9844c08add.jpg but it's just all ignored? Basses and snares stopped "playing" and the music got silent there. It would maybe work the way you suggested, but imo the current one reflects the music the best way possible. The background sounds in that part aren't so important.
same thing with 02:07:497 (1) - . ^
01:04:497 - seems weird to have such a strong sound on slider end. Y that's true
01:37:897 - shouldn't this be a 1/2 slider? It would be, but it's not. And besides you don't give me a reason why it should be 1/2 slider... To me it looks fine
01:55:197 (2) - i think this rhythm is pretty terrible cuz the slider repeat is stronger than the head, there's an ignored sound on the red tick and the slider end is pretty strong. y, that's right, I also did it better previously so idk why i didn't have it here too xd
02:02:697 (3) - this thing has similar issue where the head is on something almost inaudible compared to the end y fixed
02:22:897 (1,3) - there isn't anything on these notes indeed.... it feels really empty without them but what can I do
yeah, i don't really understand the rhythm choice. to me it seems rather bad, unless i missed a core factor or theme that explains it. please let me know. I pretty much mapped the strong beats from the music and some iconic sounds from vocal that fit nicely. I tried to emphasize the places where the melody has held sound in red ticks.
Thx for modding ones again!Nao Tomori wrote:
back with some more rhythm stuff. this is a lot more subjective, so it isn't an issue when you disagree with me.
[abssyal catharsis]
00:17:297 - 00:20:497 - could be cool to use the 1/2 sliders here on these notes just to keep every one of those sounds under a slider. y why not
00:27:497 - 00:27:897 - you could use sliders on these to follow the vocals more closely, like you did at 00:26:497 (3,4) - . imo more interesting than just sliders on every white tick. sound good imo
01:40:497 - imo should also be a 1/2 slider y, works better
to me making 02:24:697 (1) - into a slider and moving all the subsequent ones till 02:27:097 - back a red tick sounds a lot better.
02:32:697 - same in this section. agreed
02:49:297 (5) - missing a whistle or something woops
03:00:297 (3) - strongest sounds here are under repeat and slider end. fixed
regarding slider ends with stronger sounds than heads.
since you do this a lot, ofc it's clear that it's on purpose. i'm still suggesting against it because using the slider object "backwards" is a concept that i find rather contrary to how a song should be represented. i can't force you to change your concept, of course. if you disagree with me about this, it isn't a problem, as many people are not of the same opinion as me.
regarding angles and other stuff.
i'm not really a fan of using wide angles as much as you do. this is purely stylistic and not something i can mod. however, since i can't really agree with the object placement and use of cursor movement, i won't nominate this, but lasse is fine to rebubble.