Hanss wrote:

00:39:806 (39806|3) - , maybe at this section make the burst transitions a little smoother and the transition after the burst going back into the calm section a bit less awkward. Other than that the rest made sense and was really fun, good luck :3

_underjoy wrote:

why am I even doing this

IRC

21:26 FelipeLink: Oh hey
21:26 FelipeLink: Underjoy
21:26 FelipeLink: can i ask you a favor pls?
21:26 _underjoy: huh what is it
21:26 _underjoy: also hello
21:29 FelipeLink: hello
21:29 FelipeLink: uh so
21:29 FelipeLink: Can you testplay my map and gimme a feedback about it?
21:29 FelipeLink: i need some feedback from the community
21:29 FelipeLink: then i can get a bubble
21:29 FelipeLink: ;-;
21:29 _underjoy: uh
21:29 _underjoy: is it hard
21:30 FelipeLink: 4,8
21:30 FelipeLink: 4k
21:31 _underjoy: uh
21:31 _underjoy: okay
21:31 _underjoy: np please
21:31 FelipeLink: prob a little underrated, but yeah
21:31 *FelipeLink is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/885133 Amane - Space Time (Amane Hardcore Remix)]
21:31 _underjoy: are you kidding mer
21:32 FelipeLink: no
21:32 FelipeLink: i'm serious ;w;
21:32 FelipeLink: i really like the music
21:32 FelipeLink: i made a vocal version lmao
21:32 _underjoy: what
21:32 _underjoy: vocal space time
21:33 _underjoy: uhh okat
21:33 _underjoy: okay*
21:39 FelipeLink: pls write your feedback in the thread, becuz i need for get da bubble ;w;
21:39 FelipeLink: DC ;w;
21:39 FelipeLink: t/411774
21:39 _underjoy: heh apologies for not taking it seriously
21:39 _underjoy: sorry, I don't mod stuff until 16th of May
21:39 FelipeLink: oh
21:39 FelipeLink: dont worry
21:39 FelipeLink: nono
21:39 FelipeLink: not mod
21:39 _underjoy: all I can do is give you some advices on spot
21:39 FelipeLink: just a feedback
21:40 FelipeLink: pls
21:40 FelipeLink: yeah
21:40 FelipeLink: thats all i need
21:40 _underjoy: but can't we IRC
21:40 FelipeLink: hm
21:40 FelipeLink: sure
21:40 FelipeLink: about vocal version: http://puu.sh/oxYrr/7c456e6d55.mp3
21:40 _underjoy: well first of all
21:40 FelipeLink: and yes, i'm retard
21:40 _underjoy: send that to spy
21:40 FelipeLink: lmao
21:40 FelipeLink: why
21:41 _underjoy: to show him how it should be done lol
21:41 _underjoy: anyway
21:41 _underjoy: the sections before choruses
21:41 _underjoy: I think you should emphasis other sounds
21:41 _underjoy: because they are same difficulty (or harder) than choruses
21:41 FelipeLink: hm
21:41 _underjoy: like, chord every 1/1 maybe, with keeping the jacks
21:42 FelipeLink: can you show me when i should do that?
21:42 _underjoy: 02:41:863 -
21:42 _underjoy: 04:20:606 -
21:43 _underjoy: thats just personal opinion though
21:43 _underjoy: emphasising the kich
21:43 _underjoy: kick*
21:43 _underjoy: also one more thing
21:43 FelipeLink: as a hand?
21:43 _underjoy: noo
21:43 _underjoy: jump would suffice
21:44 _underjoy: 02:31:577 (151577|1,151577|0,151920|1,151920|0,152263|1,152263|0,152606|1,152606|0,152949|1,152949|0,153292|1,153292|0) -
21:44 _underjoy: I liked the idea
21:44 _underjoy: why didn't you make later chords in the same way
21:44 FelipeLink: oh
21:44 FelipeLink: oki
21:44 _underjoy: thats all I can really say
21:44 _underjoy: oh wait there's last thing
21:45 _underjoy: you open up bursts with [23][14] jumptrills most of the time
21:45 _underjoy: give me some love and open them with [14][23] pls
21:45 _underjoy: not all but some at least haha
21:45 FelipeLink: sure, actually i'll ask guil help to variety some of the jumpjacks
21:46 FelipeLink: thanks btw, can you post this on thread?
21:46 _underjoy: the jumpjacks weren't an issue though
21:46 _underjoy: I wasn't just focused on actually hitting them
21:46 _underjoy: uhh okay

aitor98 wrote:

As Felipe requested me a feedback, I just want to let here a comment and reasoning. No kudo

IRC Answer

21:57 FelipeLink: Hello
21:58 aitor98: Hiii
21:58 aitor98: D
21:58 FelipeLink: i know this is sudden, i dont think you know me tbh, but i know you're a good 4k player(you play step too right?) uh i know its weird, but can i ask you for a testplay and a feedback about my map?
21:58 aitor98: I play sm sometimes
21:58 aitor98: But I mainly play osu
21:58 aitor98: Yeah
21:58 aitor98: /np
21:58 aitor98: with feedback do you mean mod?
21:58 aitor98: Or just a simple comment
21:59 FelipeLink: simple comment
21:59 aitor98: okey
21:59 aitor98: np
21:59 *FelipeLink is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/885133 Amane - Space Time (Amane Hardcore Remix)]
21:59 FelipeLink: ajeemaniz asked me to get some feedback from the community
21:59 aitor98: that's good
22:05 aitor98: Well
22:06 aitor98: overall is good
22:06 aitor98: But I saw something
22:06 FelipeLink: hm
22:06 aitor98: 02:28:149 (148149|0) -
22:06 aitor98: That keysound
22:06 aitor98: or hitsound
22:06 aitor98: whatever
22:06 aitor98: mm
22:06 FelipeLink: hm
22:06 FelipeLink: didnt liked?
22:06 aitor98: I dislike about it
22:06 aitor98: Yeah
22:07 FelipeLink: Okay sure, can you post this on the thread?
22:07 FelipeLink: i'll remove
22:07 FelipeLink: p/5075222#p5075222
22:07 aitor98: I want to reason it
22:08 FelipeLink: hm
22:08 aitor98: It's the part that you have set the bass, that's like the restarting of the song
22:08 aitor98: And I think that It's suposed to be a relaxing part
22:08 aitor98: Without strong basses
22:08 aitor98: I don't know if you know what I mean
22:08 FelipeLink: No, i understand
22:09 FelipeLink: i'll remove right now
22:10 FelipeLink: but can you say this on the thread? p/5075222#p5075222
22:10 aitor98: Done

Guilhermeziat wrote:

Here's a mod. Most of the talking was done by me because we were in voice channel on discord.

chat mod + voice

2016-04-27 17:45 FelipeLink: 02:08:949 (128949|3) -
2016-04-27 17:46 Guilhermeziat: 02:08:949 (128949|3) - a partir daqui
2016-04-27 17:47 Guilhermeziat: 02:08:949 (128949|3) -
2016-04-27 17:47 Guilhermeziat: 02:19:920 -
2016-04-27 17:48 Guilhermeziat: 02:20:349 (140349|3,140349|2,140606|2,140606|3) -
2016-04-27 17:49 FelipeLink: 02:52:835 (172835|1) -
2016-04-27 17:49 Guilhermeziat: 02:58:149 (178149|2,178149|3,178235|2,178235|1) -
2016-04-27 17:50 Guilhermeziat: 02:58:149 (178149|1,178149|3,178235|2,178235|1) -
2016-04-27 17:50 Guilhermeziat: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5027557 assim é muito melhor
2016-04-27 17:50 Guilhermeziat: do que tá agora por exemplo
2016-04-27 17:52 Guilhermeziat: 03:03:635 (183635|3,183635|2,183720|2,183720|1) - nessa parte
2016-04-27 17:52 Guilhermeziat: a diferença dos tons é maior
2016-04-27 17:53 FelipeLink: 03:03:806 (183806|0) -
2016-04-27 17:53 Guilhermeziat: HAHAHAAAAHAHAHA
2016-04-27 17:54 Guilhermeziat: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5027578
2016-04-27 17:54 Guilhermeziat: fica mais legal, considerando essa parte da musica em si
2016-04-27 17:55 Guilhermeziat: 03:12:035 (192035|0,192035|3,192120|2,192120|1,192206|0,192206|3,192292|1,192292|2,192377|0,192377|3,192463|1,192463|2,192549|0,192549|3,192635|2,192720|0,192720|1,192806|2,192806|3,192892|0,192892|1,192977|2,192977|3,193063|1,193063|0,193149|3,193149|2,193235|0,193235|1,193320|2,193320|3) -
2016-04-27 17:55 Guilhermeziat: só tem 14 23
2016-04-27 17:55 Guilhermeziat: 12 34
2016-04-27 17:55 Guilhermeziat: seria legal se tu botasse 13 24
2016-04-27 17:56 Guilhermeziat: 03:22:749 - aqui n tem nota mesmo né
2016-04-27 17:56 Guilhermeziat: 03:25:577 (205577|3,205577|2,205663|1,205663|2,205749|3,205749|0) - mesmo caso do de cima que eu tinha falado, mudança maior de tons
2016-04-27 17:57 Guilhermeziat: 03:16:749 -
2016-04-27 17:57 Guilhermeziat: 03:18:635 -
2016-04-27 17:57 Guilhermeziat: 03:20:006 -
2016-04-27 17:57 Guilhermeziat: 03:21:892 -
2016-04-27 17:57 Guilhermeziat: 03:22:749 -
2016-04-27 17:59 FelipeLink: 02:54:035 (174035|0,174035|1,174120|2,174120|1,174206|3,174206|0) -
2016-04-27 17:59 FelipeLink: esse, tal jeito
2016-04-27 17:59 FelipeLink: 02:55:406 (175406|2,175406|3,175492|1,175492|2,175577|0,175577|3) -
2016-04-27 17:59 FelipeLink: tal jeito
2016-04-27 18:02 Guilhermeziat: 02:54:035 (174035|1,174035|0,174120|1,174120|2,174206|3,174206|0) - deixa assim
2016-04-27 18:02 Guilhermeziat: 02:55:406 (175406|3,175406|2,175492|2,175492|1,175577|0,175577|3) - essa também deixa assim
2016-04-27 18:02 Guilhermeziat: 02:56:777 (176777|1,176777|0,176863|1,176863|2,176949|3,176949|0) - essa também
2016-04-27 18:05 Guilhermeziat: 02:58:149 (178149|2,178149|3,178235|1,178235|2,178320|3,178320|0) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5027635
2016-04-27 18:05 Guilhermeziat: 02:59:520 (179520|1,179520|0,179606|2,179606|1,179692|3,179692|0) - deixa
2016-04-27 18:05 Guilhermeziat: 03:00:892 (180892|2,180892|1,180977|2,180977|3,181063|1,181063|0) - deixa
2016-04-27 18:07 Guilhermeziat: 03:02:263 (182263|0,182263|1,182349|1,182349|2,182435|3,182435|0) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5027645
2016-04-27 18:08 Guilhermeziat: 03:03:635 (183635|3,183635|2,183720|1,183720|2,183806|0,183806|3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5027657
2016-04-27 18:08 Guilhermeziat: 03:05:006 (185006|1,185006|0,185092|2,185092|1,185177|0,185177|3) - muda o primeiro pulo pra 13
2016-04-27 18:09 Guilhermeziat: 03:06:377 (186377|3,186377|2,186463|1,186463|2,186549|0,186549|3) - muda o primeiro pra 24
2016-04-27 18:10 Guilhermeziat: 03:09:120 (189120|3,189120|2,189206|2,189206|1,189292|0,189292|3) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5027671
2016-04-27 18:11 FelipeLink: 03:05:006 (185006|3,185006|0,185092|2,185092|1,185177|3,185177|0) -
2016-04-27 18:12 Guilhermeziat: 03:11:863 (191863|2,191863|3,191949|2,191949|1) - po isso aqui ta estranho
2016-04-27 18:12 FelipeLink: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5027690
2016-04-27 18:14 Guilhermeziat: 03:15:977 (195977|0,195977|1,196063|2,196063|1,196149|3,196149|0) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5027702
2016-04-27 18:14 Guilhermeziat: lembrando pra só considerar o que tá em azul
2016-04-27 18:15 Guilhermeziat: 03:17:349 (197349|3,197349|2,197435|2,197435|1,197520|0,197520|3) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5027708
2016-04-27 18:16 Guilhermeziat: 03:18:720 (198720|1,198720|0,198806|2,198806|1,198892|3,198892|0) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5027710
2016-04-27 18:17 Guilhermeziat: 03:20:092 (200092|2,200092|3,200177|1,200177|2,200263|3,200263|0) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5027716
2016-04-27 18:17 Guilhermeziat: 03:21:463 (201463|1,201463|0,201549|2,201549|1,201635|0,201635|3) - deixa
2016-04-27 18:18 FelipeLink: 03:25:577 (205577|2,205577|3,205663|2,205663|0,205749|3,205749|0) -
2016-04-27 18:18 Guilhermeziat: 03:22:835 (202835|2,202835|1,202920|2,202920|3,203006|0,203006|1) -
2016-04-27 18:20 Guilhermeziat: 03:22:835 (202835|3,202835|1,202920|2,202920|3,203006|0,203006|1) - muda o 34 pra 24
2016-04-27 18:20 Guilhermeziat: 03:24:206 (204206|3,204206|1,204292|1,204292|2,204377|3,204377|0) - muda o 12 pra 24
2016-04-27 18:20 Guilhermeziat: 03:25:577 (205577|2,205577|3,205663|1,205663|0,205749|3,205749|0) -
2016-04-27 18:21 Guilhermeziat: deixa
2016-04-27 18:23 Guilhermeziat: 03:26:949 (206949|0,206949|1,207035|1,207035|2,207120|0,207120|3) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5027757
2016-04-27 18:23 Guilhermeziat: 03:28:320 (208320|2,208320|3,208406|2,208406|1,208492|0,208492|3) - mirror da foto
2016-04-27 18:24 Guilhermeziat: 03:29:692 (209692|1,209692|0,209777|1,209777|2,209863|0,209863|3) - igual a foto
2016-04-27 18:24 Guilhermeziat: 03:31:063 (211063|2,211063|3,211149|1,211149|2,211235|3,211235|0) - 13 24 14
2016-04-27 18:25 Guilhermeziat: 03:33:806 (213806|1,213806|0,213892|1,213892|2) - ve iss aí tb
2016-04-27 18:26 Guilhermeziat: 04:31:577 - até 04:36:708 -
2016-04-27 18:26 Guilhermeziat: tu repete o 14
2016-04-27 18:26 Guilhermeziat: isso tá bom
2016-04-27 18:27 Guilhermeziat: 04:37:063 - a partir daqeui
2016-04-27 18:29 Guilhermeziat: faz algo desse tipo https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5027799
2016-04-27 18:29 Guilhermeziat: mudando o pulo a cada 1/1
2016-04-27 18:31 Guilhermeziat: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5027810 ou assim
2016-04-27 18:31 Guilhermeziat: olha
2016-04-27 18:31 Guilhermeziat: mudando a lcada 1/1
2016-04-27 18:35 Guilhermeziat: 04:43:749 (283749|2,283749|1,283835|2,283835|3,283920|1,283920|0) - deixa
2016-04-27 18:35 Guilhermeziat: 04:45:120 (285120|1,285120|2,285206|0,285206|1,285292|2,285292|3) - deixa
2016-04-27 18:35 Guilhermeziat: 04:46:492 (286492|1,286492|2,286577|2,286577|3,286663|0,286663|1) - deixa
2016-04-27 18:35 Guilhermeziat: 04:47:863 (287863|2,287863|1,287949|1,287949|0,288035|3,288035|2) - muda o 23 pra 13
2016-04-27 18:36 Guilhermeziat: 04:49:235 (289235|2,289235|1,289320|3,289320|2,289406|1,289406|0) - deixa
2016-04-27 18:37 Guilhermeziat: 04:50:606 (290606|0,290606|1,290692|1,290692|2,290777|0,290777|3) - deixa
2016-04-27 18:37 Guilhermeziat: NÃO
2016-04-27 18:37 Guilhermeziat: N DEIXA
2016-04-27 18:37 Guilhermeziat: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5027839 faz isso
2016-04-27 18:38 Guilhermeziat: 04:51:977 (291977|1,291977|2,292063|1,292063|3,292149|0,292149|2) - muda o 34 pra 24 e o 12 pra 13
2016-04-27 18:38 Guilhermeziat: 04:53:349 (293349|3,293349|2,293435|1,293435|2,293520|0,293520|1) - muda pra 34 23 12
2016-04-27 18:39 Guilhermeziat: 04:54:720 (294720|1,294720|2,294806|2,294806|3,294892|0,294892|1) - essa patterns é maaneira, deixa
2016-04-27 18:39 Guilhermeziat: 04:56:092 (296092|2,296092|1,296177|1,296177|0,296263|2,296263|3) - idem
2016-04-27 18:40 Guilhermeziat: 04:58:835 (298835|2,298835|1,298920|0,298920|3,299006|3,299006|2) - muda o 12 pra 14
2016-04-27 18:43 Guilhermeziat: 05:05:692 (305692|1,305692|2,305777|2,305777|3,305863|0,305863|1) - muda o 34 pra 14
2016-04-27 18:43 Guilhermeziat: 05:07:063 (307063|2,307063|1,307149|0,307149|1,307235|3,307235|2) - ctrl h
2016-04-27 18:43 Guilhermeziat: 05:08:435 (308435|2,308435|1,308520|3,308520|2,308606|1,308606|0) - igual ao primeiro
2016-04-27 18:44 Guilhermeziat: 05:09:806 (309806|1,309806|3,309892|2,309892|0,309977|1,309977|2) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5027875
2016-04-27 18:45 Guilhermeziat: 05:11:177 (311177|1,311177|2,311263|3,311263|2,311349|0,311349|1) - muda o 23 pra 12 e o ultimo 12 pra 14
2016-04-27 18:45 Guilhermeziat: 05:12:549 (312549|0,312549|1,312635|1,312635|2,312720|0,312720|3) - deixa
2016-04-27 18:46 Guilhermeziat: 05:13:920 (313920|2,313920|1,314006|2,314006|3,314092|1,314092|0) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5027887
2016-04-27 18:47 Guilhermeziat: 05:15:463 -
2016-04-27 18:47 Guilhermeziat: 05:15:292 (315292|2,315292|1,315377|0,315377|1,315463|0,315463|2) - 23 12 134
2016-04-27 18:47 Guilhermeziat: todo 1/1 a partir daí é hand
2016-04-27 18:47 Guilhermeziat: sem jumpjacks
2016-04-27 18:48 FelipeLink: k
2016-04-27 18:48 Guilhermeziat: na parte da dense js, deixa jumps

I hope this helps, good luck.

juankristal wrote:

that moment when you suddenly decide to brainstorm

17:03 FelipeLink: heyhey
17:03 FelipeLink: juan
17:03 FelipeLink: about rolling girl
17:03 juankristal: sup
17:03 juankristal: yes?
17:03 FelipeLink: you're gonna do 1 or 2 diffs?
17:03 juankristal: for now, I do think only 1
17:03 juankristal: if you need 2 tho I can try
17:03 FelipeLink: nah
17:03 FelipeLink: its good
17:04 FelipeLink: ^^
17:04 FelipeLink: can i ask you a favorr
17:04 juankristal: sure
17:04 juankristal: what is it?
17:04 *FelipeLink is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/885133 Amane - Space Time (Amane Hardcore Remix)]
17:04 FelipeLink: can you play this and give me a feedback?
17:04 FelipeLink: not mod, a feedback
17:04 juankristal: yeh
17:04 juankristal: give me 1 sec
17:04 FelipeLink: ajeemaniz asked me to get a few feedbacks, then i can get a bubble
17:04 juankristal: I want to score a top in one song first
17:05 FelipeLink: o
17:05 FelipeLink: sure~
17:05 *juankristal is playing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/442102 Rex - Heart of Witch [4K SC]] <osu!mania> |4K|
17:05 juankristal: ;(
17:05 FelipeLink: LOL
17:05 juankristal: RIP ME
17:07 *juankristal is playing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/885133 Amane - Space Time (Amane Hardcore Remix) [Rerum Spatium Tempusque]] <osu!mania> |4K|
17:07 juankristal: tempusque
17:07 juankristal: pls
17:08 FelipeLink: kek
17:15 juankristal: mmh
17:15 juankristal: there is one part
17:15 juankristal: 02:47:349 -
17:15 juankristal: that I think can be better
17:15 juankristal: the rest is just, meh
17:15 juankristal: I dont really love the song honestly XD
17:15 juankristal: the chart is huge amounts better than spys
17:15 FelipeLink: lmao
17:15 juankristal: I likee how you use the minijacks
17:16 FelipeLink: about 02:47:349 -
17:16 FelipeLink: what you think i should do?
17:16 juankristal: I am noot sure about some of them felt a bit weird
17:16 FelipeLink: i see, i'll take a look again tho
17:16 FelipeLink: can i ask you to post this on the thread?(then ajeemaniz can see that i'm really getting feedbacks)
17:16 FelipeLink: t/411774
17:17 juankristal: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5033964
17:17 juankristal: something like that
17:17 juankristal: you mark all the white beats with a double [12]
17:17 juankristal: so I feel it can bee better
17:17 juankristal: if you do more like a "repetitive" pattern all the way in that section
17:17 FelipeLink: yeah
17:18 FelipeLink: i'll take a look :v
17:18 juankristal: please
17:18 juankristal: not pacman face
17:18 juankristal: D:
17:18 juankristal: xDD
17:18 FelipeLink: sure, i promise
17:18 FelipeLink: actually changing right now
17:18 juankristal: should I post something then?
17:18 juankristal: cuz it was like
17:18 juankristal: only that
17:19 FelipeLink: yeah post about that
17:19 FelipeLink: even fi is a minor thing, everything counts
17:19 FelipeLink: if*
17:19 FelipeLink: say about the minijacks too
17:19 FelipeLink: its a major thing
17:20 juankristal: 03:09:120 (189120|0,189120|3,189206|1,189206|2,189292|3,189292|1) -
17:20 juankristal: that minijack
17:20 juankristal: should be red+blue imo
17:21 FelipeLink: oh, yeah
17:21 FelipeLink: missed that lmao
17:21 juankristal: 03:11:863 (191863|3,191863|2,191949|0,191949|1,192035|1,192035|3) - same here?
17:21 juankristal: 03:22:835 (202835|1,202835|2,202920|3,202920|0,203006|3,203006|1) -
17:21 juankristal: 03:25:577 (205577|3,205577|2,205663|2,205663|0,205749|3,205749|0) - double minijack
17:21 juankristal: rip
17:22 juankristal: 03:28:320 (208320|1,208320|3,208406|3,208406|2,208492|1,208492|0,208577|1) - made in purpouse?
17:22 FelipeLink: on that 3:25
17:22 juankristal: 03:31:063 (211063|2,211063|3,211149|0,211149|2,211235|3,211235|0) - ^
17:22 FelipeLink: its because of the beat tho
17:22 juankristal: got it
17:22 juankristal: I will ignore those ones then
17:22 FelipeLink: and fixed all the others
17:24 FelipeLink: 04:53:349 (293349|2,293349|3,293435|2,293435|1,293520|0,293520|1) - example about the ''beats''
17:24 juankristal: 04:37:235 - you can do something about this one as the first thing I pointed out
17:24 FelipeLink: yeah, i changed for something similar
17:25 juankristal: it works that way anyways cuz song is really repetitive
17:25 juankristal: 04:58:835 (298835|1,298835|2,298920|3,298920|0,299006|2,299006|3) -
17:25 juankristal: 05:05:692 (305692|2,305692|1,305777|3,305777|0,305863|1,305863|0) -
17:26 juankristal: well
17:26 juankristal: I think I am getting what you want to do
17:26 juankristal: for those minijacks
17:26 juankristal: is like the intro
17:26 juankristal: where you have no minijack then minijack
17:26 FelipeLink: yeah
17:26 juankristal: so yeah
17:27 juankristal: anyway
17:27 juankristal: hope my brainstorm was okey
17:27 juankristal: for at least something
17:27 juankristal: xD

hope it was something useful at least haha

Good luck here o7

spoonguy wrote:

A única coisa que realmente me incomoda no mapa são os minijacks logo antes das jumptrills:
03:11:949 -
03:33:806 -
05:01:577 -
05:23:606 -

postado aqui só para você fingir que isso foi um mod
abraços e boa sorte para ranquear isso aí

ajeemaniz wrote:

alright, sorry for late recheck

i repeat my previous mod about the spacing that placed everywhere around kiai part such 03:00:806 - 03:03:549 - and so on where you can actually add notes around there..
i also talked with [-Seiryuu-] as well, sei said its plays awkward.. tl;dr, add notes on those empty spots..

fix them & reply soon

ajeemaniz wrote:

i can't reply soon, but i know i can give a star icon!

no kud

00:35:692 (35692|0,36035|3,36377|0,36720|3) - add kick applied
00:43:235 (43235|3) - ^ applied
00:43:235 (43235|3,57635|3,57977|0,58320|3,58663|1) - ^ applied

01:41:606 (101606|3,102977|2) - 3 4 allright, changed

those piano reminds me with oboro :3 i love keysounding piano ;3

02:51:463 (171463|0) - add whistle with normal sampleset? applied

02:52:835 (172835|2,173177|3,173520|1,173863|1) - the hitsound placement is currently 1/1 kick, i suggest you to make kick snare kick snare in the rest of kiai instead, like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5113619
apply in the next kiais as well, the current hitsound placement rather monotonous Okay that was a long task, but done!

03:09:806 (189806|3) - kick fixed when i made the ''long task''
03:10:663 (190663|3,191006|0,191177|0) - kiiick fixed when i made the ''long task''
omg i thought you already fix these

03:18:720 (198720|1,198720|0,198806|0,198806|2,198892|3,198892|1,198977|0) - http://puu.sh/oLw19.jpg applied
03:19:920 (199920|2) - kick applied

03:56:263 (236263|3,236349|2,236435|3,236520|1) - missing & double kick, fix owo

03:56:263 (236263|3,236349|2,236435|3,236520|1,238149|3) - G7H piano where, silly OH, lmfao blame hitsounds on SB :cc, fixed

04:41:177 (281177|3) - w with normal sampleset like i said before applied

05:16:749 (316749|3) - 05:18:120 (318120|0) - 05:19:492 (319492|2) - 05:20:863 (320863|1) - add 1 more note to layer the synth, its ok to overnote in this ending part Ayyyyyy

05:23:692 (323692|1,323692|3,323777|0,323777|2,323863|3,323863|1,323949|2,323949|0,324035|3,324035|1,324120|0,324120|2,324206|1,324206|3,324292|2) - make this full 12 34 12 34 jumpstream for final stream! \:D/

05:23:692 (323692|3,323692|1,323777|2,323777|0,323863|1,323863|3,323949|0,323949|2,324035|1,324035|3,324120|2,324120|0,324206|3,324206|1,324292|2,342892|0,343063|1,343235|2,343406|3,343749|2,343920|3,344092|3,344606|0) - kick where lmao, fixed

05:57:977 (357977|2) - remove, 05:57:977 (357977|1) - snare applied
05:59:177 (359177|0,359263|0) - snare applied

alright that should covers everything, i will keep replying late but i know you did a great improvement.. good job!

Hydria wrote:

I'll be back after this mod, there's still a lot of work to do.

Nivrad00 wrote:

BN check

General

I'd like for you to add these tags: NISH beatmania IIDX 18 Resort Anthem 天音 Tribullets Beat U Down. This song is a remix of Space Time by NISH, which first appeared in beatmania IIDX 18 Resort Anthem. The remix was later released by the label Tribullets on the CD Beat U Down. On the Tribullets website the artist is credited as 天音, which according to Google Translate is Amane in Japanese. Here are my sources:

https://soundcloud.com/ama_loli/amane-space-time-amane ''ama_loli'' OH MY GOD AMANE IS A LOLI? IS THIS REAL, OWO
http://tribullets.info/index.cgi?no=40&continue=on
https://remywiki.com/Space_Time
Sure, added all the tags ^^
Hahah I get it there's a picture of space and a picture of time in the background
Wait... that clock looks familiar...
Is that Chronostasis?? https://osu.ppy.sh/b/459652 LMAO
Actually I do have a suggestion about the background. Combining two very detailed images makes your background look messy. I advise you to find another image. Ur choice tho
Ahem, lemme talk about a old history with you.
THE HISTORY ABOUT DA BG
A boy who has no creativity was kinda confused and lost, ''what i should put as a bg? ...'' then he just googled ''space'' and found this - https://encrypted-tbn0.gstatic.com/imag ... 7fRBDC0ojQ , after that he googled ''time in space'' and found that - https://i.ytimg.com/vi/aD0bstoPVco/maxresdefault.jpg , then he used a elemental tool who is know by ''PS'', and merged a new one and unique BG. Ajeemaniz asked this too, so there you go:
2016-05-03 12:28 ajeemaniz: can you give me the original bg of yours
2016-05-03 12:28 ajeemaniz: i mean, its from 2 background right?
2016-05-03 12:29 FelipeLink: Uh, i photoshopped this
2016-05-03 12:29 FelipeLink: x.x
2016-05-03 12:29 ajeemaniz: i know
2016-05-03 12:29 ajeemaniz: just give me the original bgs
2016-05-03 12:30 FelipeLink: https://encrypted-tbn0.gstatic.com/imag ... 7fRBDC0ojQ
2016-05-03 12:30 ajeemaniz: oh its 10:30 right now.. o.o
2016-05-03 12:30 ajeemaniz: i should working again though
2016-05-03 12:30 FelipeLink: oh
2016-05-03 12:30 FelipeLink: np ;w;
2016-05-03 12:30 ajeemaniz: fkkk i thought its still 9:30
2016-05-03 12:30 FelipeLink: https://i.ytimg.com/vi/aD0bstoPVco/maxresdefault.jpg
2016-05-03 12:31 FelipeLink: this is the 2 img i used
2016-05-03 12:31 ajeemaniz: i'll make a reminder to mod your map tomorrow
2016-05-03 12:31 FelipeLink: sure ^^
2016-05-03 12:31 ajeemaniz: alright, i need to go find customer again ;-;
2016-05-03 12:31 FelipeLink: ;-;
2016-05-03 12:31 FelipeLink: good luck on your work
2016-05-03 12:31 ajeemaniz: thank you!
But yeah, i'm open for changes on the bg! ^^

Rerum Spatium Tempusque

00:13:577 - this should be a double based on your previous patterns Yeah, thats makes sense
00:32:606 - double? oki
00:51:806 - same ^
01:03:463 - same maybe, like the doubles at 01:06:206 - and 01:08:949 - Okay!
02:08:949 - I agree with Hydria's suggestion. Also most of the jacks seem to be on the right hand; why not balance it out a little more? Yeah, i checked Hydria mod first, and fixed that, all are ''N J N J'' now, and i changed some right hand jacks to left hand
04:20:606 to 04:31:235 - this part has the same problem. The jack pattern is:
J N J J
J J N -
AND most of the jacks are on the right hand again. hm, i did a recheck on those patterns, looking your suggestions i made a change, thanks
02:50:692 (170692|0,170692|3,170777|1) - shouldn't this be single-double instead of double-single My bad, fixed
03:03:720 (183720|0,183806|1) - this should be a jack like 03:25:663 (205663|0,205749|0) - , 04:53:435 (293435|1,293520|1) - , and 05:15:377 (315377|0,315463|0) - yeah, i didnt see that, fixed, thanks!
03:09:292 - , 03:31:235 - , 04:59:006 - , 04:59:006 - , and 05:42:892 - I'm not sure why you decided to do this rhythm with the hitsounds

x x O x x O x x O x x O x x O x
(x = kick, O = snare)

when the rhythm in the song is clearly

x x O x x x O x x x O x x x O x

You should definitely change that ;n;
RAGING INSIDE, WAKE ME UP, CANT WAKE UP, ajeemaniz said to me to put '' x x O x x O, it was x x O x x x O'' anyway, changed.

05:24:377 - why didn't you change the jumptrill pattern halfway through like all the other times? If this is on purpose to emphasize the end of the map that's cool, but it just makes it easier yeah, it was to emphasize, but i can change sure~
05:38:435 - double oki!
05:27:806 (327806|2,328320|0) - and 05:33:292 (333292|2,333806|0) - why did you decide to put these on different lanes? it's inconsistent with every other repetition hm, yeah i got your point, fixed
05:45:977 - hitsound is doubled here woops, sorry : s

Although the chord size and jacks are fairly consistent, my overall impression is that the map is sort of messy. Not only do a lot of the patterns seem visually unattractive, there are several "accidental patterns" like 03:08:863 (188863|1,188949|0,189035|1,189120|0,189206|1,189292|0) - , where there's a trill for no reason, or 00:21:977 (21977|0,21977|1,22320|0,22320|1,22663|0,22663|1,23006|0,23006|1,23349|0,23349|1) - , where there's a bunch of identical jumps in a row for no reason. About the trill, i missed that, i changed, about some parts of those jumps in the same row, some players asked me to do that in some parts, and i agreed.(Guilhermeziat, Underjoy)

I have limited 4K experience though, so I could be making a mountain out of a molehill and I'm not going to ask you to fix it. That would be like asking for a remap anyway lol

Seems like a pretty fun marathon to me! I'll be back with a bubble once you respond to all my suggestions.

Hydria wrote:

Hydria wrote:

I'll be back after this mod, there's still a lot of work to do.

dropping in as promised just to point out something:
02:10:149 (130149|1,130149|0,130235|2,130235|3) - 02:11:520 (131520|3,131520|1,131606|0,131606|3) - 02:12:892 (132892|0,132892|2,132977|1,132977|3) - 02:14:263 (134263|2,134263|3,134349|2,134349|1) - 02:15:635 (135635|1,135635|0,135720|2,135720|3) - 02:17:006 (137006|1,137006|2,137092|1,137092|0) - 02:18:377 (138377|2,138377|0,138463|0,138463|3) - 02:19:749 (139749|2,139749|3,139835|1,139835|2) - 02:21:120 (141120|0,141120|1,141206|3,141206|2) - 02:22:492 (142492|2,142492|3,142577|2,142577|1) - 02:23:863 (143863|2,143863|0,143949|1,143949|3) - 02:25:235 (145235|0,145235|3,145320|2,145320|1) - 02:26:606 (146606|1,146606|0,146692|2,146692|3) - 02:27:977 (147977|3,147977|2,148063|2,148063|1) - 02:29:349 (149349|3,149349|0,149435|3,149435|1) -

all of these 2 chord patterns are inconsistent with one another, as it currently goes (in 4x4 blocks, right to left, N = no jack, J = jack):

N J N J
N J J J
N J N N
N J J -

if this is all intentional, ignore this post, but it should be fixed up into something like a N J N J pattern for all 4 blocks, right now it just doesn't make too much sense

03:09:292 - , 03:31:235 - , 04:59:006 - , 04:59:006 - , and 05:42:892 - I'm not sure why you decided to do this rhythm with the hitsounds

x x O x x O x x O x x O x x O x
(x = kick, O = snare)

when the rhythm in the song is clearly

x x O x x x O x x x O x x x O x

You should definitely change that ;n;
RAGING INSIDE, WAKE ME UP, CANT WAKE UP, ajeemaniz said to me to put '' x x O x x O, it was x x O x x x O'' anyway, changed.

Nivrad00 wrote:

03:09:292 - , 03:31:235 - , 04:59:006 - , 04:59:006 - , and 05:42:892 - I'm not sure why you decided to do this rhythm with the hitsounds

x x O x x O x x O x x O x x O x
(x = kick, O = snare)

when the rhythm in the song is clearly

x x O x x x O x x x O x x x O x

You should definitely change that ;n;
RAGING INSIDE, WAKE ME UP, CANT WAKE UP, ajeemaniz said to me to put '' x x O x x O, it was x x O x x x O'' anyway, changed.

03:10:320 - you put a kick here instead of a snare
04:59:006 - , 04:59:006 - you didn't change the hitsound rhythm here. If that's on purpose for variety, that's alright – I'm just making sure it wasn't an accident. Feel free to follow your own opinion, especially since two BNs gave you conflicting advice

Discussed about the BG on Discord. Everything else looks good!

ajeemaniz wrote:

oh yasss (fk im late to give the bubble orz)
but anyway grats!

juankristal wrote:

Alright Felipe, its S P A C E T I M E

Some hours of IRC...

18:14 FelipeLink: yo ln brother
18:14 juankristal: sup
18:15 FelipeLink: so, when you're free can  i ask for a bn check on my spacetime ?
18:15 *FelipeLink is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/885133 Amane - Space Time (Amane Hardcore Remix)]
18:15 FelipeLink: it has 1 bubble already
18:15 juankristal: sure, I was looking at it today
18:15 juankristal: have some time today?
18:16 FelipeLink: sure!
18:16 FelipeLink: <3
18:17 juankristal: lemme play something first
18:19 FelipeLink: sure, no problem
18:20 juankristal: there we go
18:20 FelipeLink: o:
18:21 *juankristal is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/885133 Amane - Space Time (Amane Hardcore Remix) [Rerum Spatium Tempusque]]
18:21 juankristal: alright, lets see
18:22 juankristal: I think I am going to play it first tbh
18:22 juankristal: xD
18:22 FelipeLink: lmao
18:22 FelipeLink: sure
18:29 juankristal: that was 
18:29 juankristal: a better than expected play
18:29 FelipeLink: ayy thanks xD
18:29 juankristal: anyways
18:29 *juankristal is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/885133 Amane - Space Time (Amane Hardcore Remix) [Rerum Spatium Tempusque]]
18:30 juankristal: usagi did check the hitsounds and all that, right?
18:30 FelipeLink: yeah
18:30 juankristal: cool
18:30 FelipeLink: usagi and nivraad
18:31 juankristal: 00:11:435 (11435|2) - 
18:32 juankristal: that is a ghost note, isnt it?
18:32 FelipeLink: hm
18:32 FelipeLink: true
18:33 juankristal: cool bubbled
18:33 juankristal: kappa
18:33 FelipeLink: lmao
18:34 juankristal: 00:03:206 (3206|1) - 00:00:463 (463|2,1835|2,3206|1) - 
18:34 juankristal: in general I think those are
18:34 juankristal: 00:04:577 (4577|2) - 
18:34 juankristal: 00:05:949 (5949|3) - 
18:34 juankristal: 00:07:320 (7320|0) - 
18:35 juankristal: 00:10:063 (10063|1) - 
18:35 juankristal: (that last one could be a good opportunity to move 00:10:149 (10149|2) - to 2 so you avoid the anchor there)
18:35 juankristal: 00:11:435 (11435|2) - 
18:35 juankristal: 00:12:806 (12806|2) - 
18:36 juankristal: dunno if that makes sense for you or something xD
18:36 FelipeLink: no, i kinda understand
18:37 FelipeLink: fixed all
18:37 juankristal: the rest of the intro looks cool
18:37 FelipeLink: aight
18:38 juankristal: 00:23:949 (23949|1) - shouldnt that one be 00:23:606 - there?
18:39 juankristal: I mean, the *chrink* sound or whatever that is sounds there
18:40 FelipeLink: hm
18:40 FelipeLink: right
18:41 juankristal: 00:25:320 (25320|2) - that sounds like ghost again
18:41 juankristal: 00:26:692 (26692|1) - that should be in 00:26:349 - 
18:42 FelipeLink: true
18:42 FelipeLink: changed
18:43 juankristal: 00:28:063 (28063|0) - I think this is also a ghost
18:43 juankristal: which would lead me to move 00:27:977 (27977|3) - that to 1
18:45 FelipeLink: right
18:45 juankristal: theen
18:46 juankristal: 00:29:435 - 
18:46 juankristal: here
18:46 FelipeLink: you mean the anchor?
18:46 juankristal: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6483143
18:46 juankristal: maybe that works better? 
18:46 FelipeLink: oh
18:46 juankristal: it kinda keeps a trill for left hand
18:46 juankristal: for the dududu pitch or that
18:47 juankristal: and then the pitch goes down so it works as a stair
18:47 FelipeLink: yeahh
18:47 FelipeLink: its keep the trill
18:47 FelipeLink: right, changed ^^
18:47 juankristal: :)
18:48 juankristal: cool
18:48 juankristal: now lets see, after the jumptrill burst
18:48 FelipeLink: sure
18:48 juankristal: I think those 00:43:149 (43149|0,43320|1) - are at the same pitch
18:49 juankristal: move the first to 2 maybe?
18:49 FelipeLink: hm, sure
18:49 juankristal: I mean, its something really minor
18:49 juankristal: xD
18:50 FelipeLink: lmao
18:50 FelipeLink: its good
18:50 juankristal: 00:49:235 - here
18:50 juankristal: 00:49:920 - 
18:50 juankristal: 00:50:606 - 
18:50 juankristal: I think you could use the exact same pattern in those 3 spots
18:50 juankristal: kinda fits the repetitiveness of the music
18:51 FelipeLink: right
18:51 FelipeLink: i'll change
18:51 juankristal: 00:51:292 (51292|0,51377|1,51463|2,51463|3,51549|0,51635|3) - and then you can ctrl+h that
18:52 juankristal: so you keep a trill for the pitch before the jumptrill and the decreasing pitch as well
18:52 FelipeLink: changed ^^
18:52 juankristal: sweet
18:53 juankristal: (btw, dont accept everything just because I am a BN, if thats the case)
18:53 juankristal: (tell me if you feel like it kinda doesnt fit or you have some sort of reasoning behind what I point)
18:53 FelipeLink: no, dont worry
18:54 juankristal: 01:14:092 - should probably add a not here
18:54 FelipeLink: i'll just accept what i think its right
18:54 juankristal: kinda did the same thing 01:11:349 - here before
18:54 FelipeLink: if you see the thread, i kinda accept 90% :v
18:54 juankristal: :v
18:54 juankristal: would probably 00:49:920 (49920|2,50006|3,50092|0,50092|2,50177|1,50263|2,50349|1,50435|3,50435|0,50606|1,50692|2,50777|3,50777|0,50863|2,50949|1,51035|2,51120|1,51120|0,51292|0,51377|1,51463|2,51463|3,51549|0,51635|3,74177|1,74263|2,74349|1,74435|2) - 
18:54 juankristal: wtf
18:54 juankristal: osu go home your are drunk
18:54 FelipeLink: what
18:54 juankristal: 01:14:177 (74177|2,74263|1,74349|2,74435|1) - there we go, ctrl+h that one and add a note where I said
18:54 FelipeLink: lmao
18:55 juankristal: 01:14:092 - here on 2
18:55 FelipeLink: http://puu.sh/s5xmX/f28b460f75.jpg like that?
18:55 juankristal: then, here 01:24:892 - that place has a burst sound as well
18:55 juankristal: yup
18:55 juankristal: exactly like that
18:56 FelipeLink: right
18:56 juankristal: for that place you can just make the same burst and move the double to [14]
18:56 juankristal: that should work fine
18:56 juankristal: you could do something else tho, if you feel like it
18:57 FelipeLink: yeah, i got it already dont worry ^^
18:58 FelipeLink: [14] is the best way tbh
19:00 juankristal: alright now
19:00 juankristal: 2 mins in already
19:00 FelipeLink: aight
19:00 juankristal: okey so this might not make that much sense but I am going to point it out anyways
19:01 juankristal: 02:09:206 (129206|1,129292|2,129463|1,129549|2,129720|2,129806|3) - all those are like a mini stair
19:01 FelipeLink: sure
19:01 juankristal: 02:10:320 (130320|1,130406|0,130577|1,130663|2) - tho, those ones
19:01 juankristal: are inverted
19:01 juankristal: lets see the rest
19:02 juankristal: yeah, its not worth at all
19:02 juankristal: ignore that xD
19:02 FelipeLink: lmao
19:03 juankristal: 02:11:777 (131777|3) - I would try to move that one to somewhere else tho
19:03 juankristal: 02:11:520 (131520|3,131606|3,131692|2,131777|3,131863|2) - that might be a bit unbalanced for right hand
19:03 juankristal: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6483299
19:03 juankristal: maybe like that
19:05 FelipeLink: i changed to something similar
19:05 FelipeLink: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6483313
19:06 juankristal: that works
19:07 juankristal: 02:31:235 - those triples are necesary?
19:08 juankristal: 02:33:635 - 
19:08 juankristal: 02:36:720 - 
19:08 juankristal: 02:39:120 - 
19:09 FelipeLink: i can remove if you want, but those triples is = jump(double) for the Bass at every 1/1(the white line) and 1 LN for the piano
19:11 juankristal: I mean, it doesnt really kill anything
19:11 juankristal: just wanted to know
19:11 juankristal: 02:41:863 - I remember I did something here last time I modded this LOL
19:11 juankristal: it looks cool
19:11 FelipeLink: hm
19:12 FelipeLink: cant remember lmao
19:12 juankristal: xD
19:12 juankristal: its fine
19:13 juankristal: thaat might be a bit too much 02:53:349 (173349|1,173520|1,173692|1,173863|1,174035|1,174120|1,174292|1,174463|1) - 
19:13 juankristal: 02:53:692 (173692|1,173777|0) - move that one slot to right and 02:53:863 (173863|1) - that one to left
19:13 FelipeLink: right, changed some notes to remove the anchor
19:13 juankristal: should be enough to fix it 
19:14 FelipeLink: oh lets see
19:15 FelipeLink: right
19:15 FelipeLink: fi9xed
19:15 juankristal: 02:55:406 - I would say something like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6483388
19:15 juankristal: to reduce the load in the right hand
19:16 FelipeLink: sure, its still make sense(no jack in the white line+ jack is on the right hand)
19:16 FelipeLink: changed
19:17 juankristal: 02:59:349 (179349|0,179435|2) - make those 3-4
19:17 juankristal: again, fits better the balance
19:18 FelipeLink: k
19:18 juankristal: oh my god the kiai never stops
19:18 juankristal: LOL
19:18 FelipeLink: lmao
19:19 FelipeLink: 2 kiai section baby :v
19:19 juankristal: 03:15:977 (195977|1) - move to 4
19:19 juankristal: again, balance the right hand a little bit
19:19 juankristal: left
19:21 juankristal: 03:38:006 (218006|1,218177|3,218692|3) - I think those are more ghosts
19:21 FelipeLink: right
19:22 juankristal: 03:40:749 (220749|2,221263|2) - same
19:22 juankristal: 03:42:120 (222120|1) - 
19:22 juankristal: 03:42:463 (222463|2,222635|2) - 
19:23 juankristal: 03:38:006 (218006|1,218177|3,218692|3,220749|2,221263|2,222120|1,222463|2,222635|2,225377|0,225720|3) - 
19:23 juankristal: fuck editor
19:23 juankristal: 03:45:377 (225377|0,225720|3) - just that
19:24 FelipeLink: hm, checking one per one, but i think its all ghost
19:25 juankristal: 03:47:092 (227092|1,227263|2) - 
19:25 juankristal: 03:41:263 (221263|2) - 
19:25 juankristal: 03:46:749 (226749|0) - 
19:25 FelipeLink: 03:41:349 -  ?
19:25 juankristal: 03:47:263 - readd that
19:26 juankristal: yeh
19:26 juankristal: its like
19:26 juankristal: dingilingilin dingilingin
19:26 FelipeLink: right, i checked all the spots
19:26 juankristal: 03:45:892 - and readd here I think
19:26 juankristal: oops
19:27 juankristal: 03:47:263 - 
19:27 juankristal: just those 2 readd
19:27 FelipeLink: right
19:28 juankristal: lemme replay it in case something exploed
19:28 FelipeLink: hm, i guess not
19:28 FelipeLink: but sure
19:29 juankristal: 03:40:749 (220749|2) - 
19:29 juankristal: 03:42:120 (222120|1) - 
19:29 juankristal: 03:42:463 (222463|2) - 
19:29 juankristal: 03:43:149 (223149|3) - 
19:30 juankristal: 03:45:892 (225892|3) - 
19:30 juankristal: fuck
19:30 juankristal: I am starting to hear stuff
19:30 FelipeLink: lmao
19:31 FelipeLink: i can clearly hear no ghost now tbh
19:31 juankristal: 03:38:006 (218006|1) - 
19:31 juankristal: 03:39:377 (219377|1) - 
19:31 juankristal: 03:39:720 - add
19:31 juankristal: 03:41:092 - ^
19:31 juankristal: 03:41:092 - 
19:31 juankristal: ^
19:32 FelipeLink: lmao
19:32 FelipeLink: ''i agree'' naisu osu!
19:32 juankristal: 03:43:149 - readd
19:32 juankristal: 03:43:492 (223492|2) - delete
19:32 juankristal: 03:44:863 (224863|2) - delete
19:33 juankristal: 03:45:892 - readd
19:33 FelipeLink: hm, ok
19:33 juankristal: 03:46:235 (226235|2) - and delete
19:33 juankristal: and THEN
19:33 juankristal: I think that would be it LOL
19:34 juankristal: I think I will kill myself now
19:34 FelipeLink: lmfao
19:34 FelipeLink: space time hardest music to map
19:34 juankristal: 03:42:635 (222635|2) - is that still alive?
19:34 juankristal: if so, move down to 03:42:463 - 
19:35 FelipeLink: no, its deleted, dont worry
19:35 juankristal: sweet
19:35 juankristal: can you update the map?
19:35 juankristal: so I can see how it looks for you
19:35 FelipeLink: sure
19:35 juankristal: yeez I feel sorry for all this super madness
19:35 FelipeLink: lmao
19:36 FelipeLink: i want to feel sorry :c
19:36 FelipeLink: ''if you update it will reset the bubble status'' is that fine?
19:36 juankristal: yeah
19:36 FelipeLink: k
19:36 juankristal: tell me when it is updated
19:36 FelipeLink: done
19:38 juankristal: 03:38:006 (218006|3) - that should be killed
19:38 FelipeLink: k
19:39 juankristal: 03:38:177 - add there
19:39 juankristal: 03:38:692 - ^
19:39 juankristal: 03:39:377 (219377|1) - kill
19:39 juankristal: 03:40:749 (220749|2) - move to 03:40:920 - 
19:39 FelipeLink: right
19:40 juankristal:  03:42:120 (222120|1) - delete
19:40 juankristal: and that looks fine now jeez
19:40 FelipeLink: lmao
19:40 juankristal: (oh fuck it repeats...)
19:41 FelipeLink: noo
19:41 FelipeLink: its dont repeat
19:41 FelipeLink: 03:47:692 -
19:41 FelipeLink: after this burst
19:41 FelipeLink: i mapped all in 1/4(the sound in the bg)
19:41 FelipeLink: and ignored the dingling
19:41 FelipeLink: cos it would be boring
19:42 juankristal: mmh, alright fair
19:43 FelipeLink: ^^
19:44 juankristal: might need some testplay tho
19:44 juankristal: like, you might want to play that later
19:44 juankristal: but first lets end this
19:45 FelipeLink: sure
19:45 juankristal: even tho I understand those jacks 04:21:806 (261806|2,261892|2,263177|1,263263|1) - 
19:45 juankristal: I find them super low to follow
19:45 FelipeLink: >_>
19:45 juankristal: uintil 04:31:586 - here
19:46 juankristal: 04:28:663 (268663|1,268749|1) - like, can you tell there is a jack there? xD
19:46 juankristal: 04:23:177 (263177|1,263263|1) - 
19:46 FelipeLink: well, hearing on 100% :VVV
19:46 juankristal: I have it in 100% xD
19:47 FelipeLink: well, i dont mind changing, but i kinda feel if i remove it would be so normal
19:48 juankristal: I think you just need to remove the 2 pointed out
19:48 juankristal: the other ones are clearly heareable
19:49 FelipeLink: oki
19:49 juankristal: alright, lets see
19:50 juankristal: almost done
19:50 juankristal: move 04:45:035 (285035|0) -  to 4balance again
19:50 juankristal: 04:44:777 (284777|0,284863|3) - maybe even ctrl+h that
19:50 FelipeLink: k
19:50 FelipeLink: hm yeah, after moving to 4, ctrl+h sounds good
19:51 juankristal: 04:47:777 (287777|1,287863|2) - move to right maybe
19:51 juankristal: 04:48:977 (288977|0,289149|3) - ctrl+h
19:52 FelipeLink: right
19:52 juankristal: LAST KIAI
19:53 juankristal: HYPE
19:53 FelipeLink: lmao
19:53 juankristal: 05:15:463 - why it suddenly transforms into triples?
19:54 FelipeLink: enphasis
19:54 FelipeLink: emphasis*
19:54 juankristal: I mean
19:54 juankristal: it feels a bit random
19:55 juankristal: and by a bit I mean quite a lot actually 
19:55 FelipeLink: hm its like the last ''hard'' section of the map
19:55 juankristal: xD
19:55 FelipeLink: lmao
19:55 juankristal: I know, I get what you attempt to do but
19:55 juankristal: it just feels super random
19:55 juankristal: 05:13:920 - also shouldnt this jack be left
19:56 juankristal: and this 05:15:292 - right
19:57 FelipeLink: o
19:57 FelipeLink: well
19:57 FelipeLink: about the triple/hands, i guess i can remove so
19:58 juankristal: like, I am trying to think some way to like
19:58 juankristal: making it harder and making it having sense
19:58 juankristal: but really, changing anything in the last kiai kinda forces you to do the same for the previous kiai
20:00 FelipeLink: i see, i understand
20:00 FelipeLink: i'm changing to jumps/doubles so
20:00 juankristal: mmh
20:00 juankristal: update then so I can check it with doubles
20:01 FelipeLink: ok, give me like 5mins i guess, need to check the pitch for each jack
20:01 juankristal: alright
20:04 FelipeLink: ok, its updated
20:04 juankristal: alright
20:04 juankristal: looks fine
20:04 juankristal: 05:27:206 (327206|2) - delete
20:05 juankristal: 05:28:063 - add
20:05 juankristal: 05:29:949 (329949|1) - delete
20:05 juankristal: 05:30:806 - add
20:05 juankristal: 05:31:320 (331320|1) - delete
20:05 juankristal: 05:32:692 (332692|2) - delete
20:06 juankristal: 05:33:549 - add
20:06 juankristal: 105:39:035 - add
20:06 juankristal: 05:39:120 - add to double
20:06 juankristal: 05:39:463 - ^
20:06 juankristal: 05:41:777 - same here
20:06 juankristal: 05:42:806 - add
20:07 FelipeLink: aight
20:08 juankristal: 05:50:006 - add
20:08 juankristal: 05:51:892 (351892|2) - move to 
20:08 juankristal: 05:52:063 - 
20:08 juankristal: to that time
20:08 juankristal: 05:52:749 - add
20:08 juankristal: 05:55:492 - add
20:08 juankristal: 06:00:977 -  add
20:08 juankristal: 06:01:063 (361063|0,361406|0) - doubles
20:09 juankristal: 06:03:720 - same thing
20:09 FelipeLink: I agree!
20:09 juankristal: and after that, update
20:09 FelipeLink: aight <3
20:10 FelipeLink: oki updated
20:10 FelipeLink: and added your name to the ''modder'' list <3
20:10 juankristal: ♥
20:10 juankristal: tell me when its updated
20:10 FelipeLink: done
20:11 juankristal: its says latest pending still
20:11 juankristal: wtf
20:12 FelipeLink: what
20:12 FelipeLink: let me update again
20:12 juankristal: lemme redownload
20:12 juankristal: nah
20:12 juankristal: my internet is being ass
20:12 FelipeLink: lmao
20:13 juankristal: 05:41:863 (341863|3,342206|3) - those should be doubles
20:13 FelipeLink: oh, right
20:14 juankristal: 06:03:120 (363120|0) - that as well
20:15 FelipeLink: i think that i deleted for accident :v
20:15 FelipeLink: readded
20:15 juankristal: 06:03:806 (363806|0,364149|0) - those as well
20:15 FelipeLink: added
20:16 juankristal: cool then, last update (hopefuly)
20:17 juankristal: also, there are 2 space time pics on the folder or its just me for redownloading it=
20:17 FelipeLink: let me see
20:18 FelipeLink: updated
20:18 FelipeLink: and its only for you i guess
20:18 FelipeLink: here its 1 pic
20:18 FelipeLink: http://puu.sh/s5CwL/f1e6747148.jpg
20:18 juankristal: alright then
20:25 FelipeLink: yolo, i saw a jack thats should not be, going to fix
20:25 juankristal: yup
20:25 juankristal: same
20:25 FelipeLink: the rest seems fine, just one jack wtf
20:25 juankristal: when was it
20:26 FelipeLink: sec
20:26 FelipeLink: 02:11:949 (131949|1,132035|1) -
20:26 FelipeLink: changed
20:26 juankristal: I think I saw 2
20:26 juankristal: that one was 1
20:26 FelipeLink: hm
20:27 juankristal: 06:00:635 (360635|0,360720|0) - 
20:27 juankristal: here
20:27 juankristal: 06:00:635 (360635|0) - just delete
20:27 FelipeLink: oh nice
20:27 FelipeLink: ty
20:27 juankristal: alright
20:27 FelipeLink: aight, i guess its ready?
20:27 juankristal: another update and we are done
20:27 juankristal: yup
20:28 FelipeLink: ok updating
20:28 FelipeLink: thanks for the long bn check <3
20:28 juankristal: no problem haha
20:28 juankristal: congratulations on earning my first bubble xD
20:28 FelipeLink: ayyyyyyyyyyyyyyy
20:28 FelipeLink: <3 <3 <3
20:28 juankristal: and of course, good luck with the qualification :D
20:28 FelipeLink: thanks ^^
20:29 juankristal: if I have to ask something to the last bn that check this would be the part of the 1/4 stream that isnt dingiling
20:29 juankristal: as we mentioned previously
20:29 juankristal: to have a second opinion there

And there goes my first bubble ayyyy!! Good luck with the qualification!

#2 Bubble.

[ S a k u r a ] wrote:

SPOILER

coincidence?

[ S a k u r a ] wrote:

SPOILER

coincidence?

Kuo Kyoka wrote:

I don't know, I did throught both maps for a while and taken these: http://puu.sh/s9wQw/3dc3c6790b.docx (Your map: Left // Spy's difficult: Right)
I mean, If you use some patterns as reference then it's fine, you can learn how the way it should be map but it's kind of a lot didn't it? My though so my apologies If I'm wrong

Hitsound / Keysound isn't an excuse tho
Also burst are repetitive but it's different from Spy's difficulty
Try to map with your own ideas, don't be strict with other maps

Soul Evans wrote:

Have you asked permission from spy for using his map as a base? i'm just pointing that out that it can be a good thing to have an okay from the person himself rather than asking BN if it's breaking the rules or not.
besides that you seem to take alot of things not just spy's patterns, but a photo shopped edit of over the tops BG with a banner that is a cut font from spy's space time font

also that red font hurts my eyes

pm and answer

Lenfried- wrote:

Though using spy's map as a base should have its limits and it was claimed that only minor parts are similar which i assume are the calmer sections so that's perfectly fine for me. Map got modded a couple of times so unintentional copied sections may have been identical due to mods that intend to cover the song with technicality.

Let's all appreciate how these people ignored the fact that this map used consistent minijacks for the chorus to stand out from spy's map

Kuo Kyoka wrote:

Still feel like it's Spy map but rearranged 50%, more jacks and stuffs
So on, nevermind what I said then, continue with your point of views. Did you done it the right way? I mean If you took Spy's map as reference, then you can take something like snaps, or some few technical patterns which help you map much more easier, but it's kind of overused, overall I check it, some patterns are just the same but rearranged by your own pattern (balance, jacks, pitch etc. or whatever). And I didn't say you copy Spy's pattern since you said you just reference so I respect it, I don't want to get involved to any dramas here, If you think you done the right thing, you can continue to do it by your ways, I do respect other's opinion so I don't have my will to change their minds If they don't want to. But just thinking about it then. As I said, don't get strict from any mappers and other's map, stay creative by your own ideas.

So, good luck. Hope my words didn't harrashing either.

Cra Dow wrote:

Felipe, de qualquer forma podias ter optado por fazer um mapa de 5k em vez de 4k (já que 4k e 5k são muito parecidos) assim evitavas esta discussão e critica.
Bem com todo o respeito não vejo muito espaço de melhoria no mapa do Spy ou num mapa de 4K (ranked) qualquer pois 4! é um número muito baixo, a não ser que o BPM seja muito alto e lhe falta notas para estar abordar todas que a música contem ( o mapa foi concluído abaixo da dificuldade que devia ter) acho que as pessoas deviam diversificar mais a quantidade de teclas que usam.
Bem boa sorte!

ps: Não ligues demasiado, a música é boa e o mapa é divertido

Loctav wrote:

I ran a text comparison of both versions of this map, and while you claim to be "inspired" by it, I figured that you literally just took the .osu file from the original, rearranged a few things here and there (hey, lets move this note from 4 to 3! https://puu.sh/scA5V/51f6117050.png) or added a few weirdly named hitsounds (https://puu.sh/scAw8/003fe08374.png).

I don't call that inspired. I call that plagiarism. Maybe you should map something entirely on your own before you start getting stuff qualified. Thank you very much.

EDIT: oh well, kudos to you, you made the very inspired choice to raise the HP from 8 to 9. Well if that isn't creative, eh?

EDIT2: the silver lining here is, well, that Spy's original is maybe not that bad at all, given that majority of it still gets qualified nowadays, especially by people who may or may not have been very unfair towards Spy and his map back then.

Loctav wrote:

weirdly named hitsounds (https://puu.sh/scAw8/003fe08374.png)

spoonguy wrote:

"Very touching, I cry every time"

Apparently Felipe is about to just do it anyway.
But don't ever use that argument again, alright?

Guilhermeziat wrote:

Hi, here's a mod for your map as you requested
There wasn't much to point out, but the map surely improved a whole lot since the first version, good job!

Plagiarism

00:08:092 (8092|0,8092|1,8177|1,8177|2,8263|3,8263|2) - This pattern right off the bat doesn't seem too friendly. I also have no idea if you're trying to keep some sort of consistency with the kicks on the first column from there on, it seems like you do but then it gets messed up? I don't know. My suggestion would be change the last jump to a 14 instead of 34, so the pattern isn't so aggressive. I'd also suggest you to try keeping the consistency with the kicks better on one of the columns (doesn't need to be coluimn 1) but I guess you're already layering them with the jumps, so up to you. Right, changed, yeah i'll try to stick to one column for consistency.

00:29:349 (29349|0,29435|1,29520|0,29606|1,29692|0,29777|1,29863|0,29949|1) - Seems a bit inconsistent compared to the rest of the patterning. Huge left hand trill all of a sudden, adds a bit of a spike, would be good if you smoothened that out, maybe something like this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6545993 (anchor on column 2 stays, but In my opinion that's a lot better than a big trill all of a sudden) This one does make me feel a bit uncomfortable, so please change it, doesn't need to be the way I showed on the screenshot, just make the patterning more fluid there.
O, right i agree with you, after adding some hands i guess i did some ohtrills @.@, well changed to something more smooth

00:30:035 (30035|2,30035|3,30120|2,30120|1,30206|1,30206|0) - Again with this kind of jumpjack. This one is fine, since I told you to change what comes before, but just letting you know that putting this right after the huge trill was a dick move (^:
(^:, well i guess its fine now because no more trill

00:51:977 (51977|2,51977|3,52063|1,52063|2,52149|0,52149|1) - Ok so, I'm going to ask you to pay attention to the synth sounds and see if you agree with me that making those jumps 34 12 and 14 (or 34 12 23, whatever floats your boat) makes a ton more sense than that. Second synth note goes an octave higher than the first one, I think it's only fair that you don't provoke a jack in between them.
oki, changed

02:08:092 (128092|0,128092|1,128177|3,128177|2,128263|1,128263|0,128349|2,128349|3) - This doesn't feel like it should be layered that hard, but I can't think of another way to map it. I do think only the jump at the 1/1 part pointed out deserves to be a jump, the rest doesn' t.
Oki, changed to single notes, jump only on the 1/1 now o/


Everything on the drops and in between is perfectly fine.

05:27:206 - Listen to the hi-hats here. Don't you think a mini-jack for them would go just fine? I think it's a good idea in my opinion, given you put them at the right place.. I could help you on that later if you want to. They happen in other times too:
05:28:663 -
05:29:863 - Here, they don't form a minijack, but I think that just making them consistent on the same column is already enough to produce a really fun pattern to play
05:31:235 -
05:32:692 -

And it goes on until the last burst. I think you'll be able to tell the rest of the times they happen, since they're so out there compared to the rest of the instruments.
i'll talk to you on private about this, maybe i'll apply

05:37:235 (337235|3,337235|2,337320|1,337320|2,337406|0,337406|1) - Again with this pattern. Just mirror it if you want, so at least this one will go the other way or something. The pattern is fine here since it's already at the end of the song and you don't need to worry about it being the beggining (^: but that's been repeated for like the 5th or 6th time throughout the song.
Oki, mirrored and changed a few notes here and the for jack avoidance

Good luck with your map.

shadowsnoop wrote:

Okay, checked every single note looking for possible conflicted placements between spy and felipe´s map.

Note: Voice chat was used.

FML

2016-11-11 17:38 shadowsnoop: 00:47:606 (47606|2,47692|3,47692|1,47692|0,47777|2,47863|0,47863|1) -
2016-11-11 17:41 shadowsnoop: 01:23:520 (83520|0,83520|2) -
2016-11-11 17:42 FelipeLink: 01:20:692 -
2016-11-11 17:42 FelipeLink: 01:20:692 (80692|0,80777|2) -
2016-11-11 17:44 shadowsnoop: 02:41:863 -
2016-11-11 17:47 shadowsnoop: 03:45:377 -
2016-11-11 17:47 shadowsnoop: 03:46:235 -
2016-11-11 17:52 shadowsnoop: 02:53:006 (173006|2,173006|3,173092|1,173177|0,173177|3) -
2016-11-11 17:53 FelipeLink: oks
2016-11-11 17:53 shadowsnoop: 02:54:892 (174892|3,174977|2,175063|1,175149|0) -
2016-11-11 17:54 FelipeLink: k
2016-11-11 17:54 shadowsnoop: 02:55:920 (175920|0,176006|1,176092|3,176177|2,176263|1,176349|2) -
2016-11-11 17:56 shadowsnoop: 02:58:149 (178149|1,178235|2,178320|1,178320|3,178406|0) -
2016-11-11 17:59 shadowsnoop: 03:06:549 (186549|0,186635|1,186720|2,186806|3,186892|2,186977|1) -
2016-11-11 18:00 shadowsnoop: 03:07:492 (187492|3,187577|2,187663|3,187749|1,187835|2,187920|3,188006|2,188092|1,188177|3) -
2016-11-11 18:01 FelipeLink: k
2016-11-11 18:01 shadowsnoop: 03:15:463 (195463|2,195549|3,195635|1,195720|3,195806|2) -
2016-11-11 18:02 shadowsnoop: 03:16:920 (196920|2,197006|1,197092|0,197177|1) -
2016-11-11 18:04 shadowsnoop: 03:20:863 (200863|0,200949|3,200949|2,201035|1,201120|0) -
2016-11-11 18:05 FelipeLink: 02:42:206 (162206|1,162206|0,162292|2,162377|1,162463|2) - xksxkksx, changed
2016-11-11 18:06 shadowsnoop: 03:22:149 (202149|2,202235|1,202320|0,202406|2) -
2016-11-11 18:07 shadowsnoop: 03:23:520 (203520|1,203606|3,203692|1,203692|2,203777|0,203863|3) -
2016-11-11 18:09 shadowsnoop: 03:27:720 (207720|2,207806|0,207806|1,207892|3,207977|1,208063|2) -
2016-11-11 18:10 shadowsnoop: 03:28:577 (208577|3,208663|2,208663|0,208749|1,208835|3,208835|0,208920|1,208920|2,209006|3,209092|2,209177|0,209177|1) -
2016-11-11 18:11 shadowsnoop: 03:30:720 (210720|3,210806|1,210892|0,210977|1,211063|3,211149|2,211235|1) -
2016-11-11 18:12 FelipeLink: aight
2016-11-11 18:26 shadowsnoop: 00:19:235 (19235|1,19235|3,19406|0,19492|1,19577|2) -
2016-11-11 18:27 shadowsnoop: 00:24:892 (24892|0) - >2
2016-11-11 18:31 shadowsnoop: 00:42:035 (42035|0,42120|1,42206|2,42720|3,42806|2,42892|1) -
2016-11-11 18:31 shadowsnoop: 00:43:063 (43063|2,43235|2,43235|3,43320|1,43406|0,43577|1,43577|3) -
2016-11-11 18:32 shadowsnoop: 00:43:920 (43920|2,43920|3,44006|0,44092|1,44177|2,44263|0,44263|1,44435|3,44606|0,44777|1,44863|0,44949|3,44949|2,45035|0,45206|1,45292|3,45292|2,45549|3,45635|2,45635|0) -
2016-11-11 18:33 shadowsnoop: 00:48:549 (48549|0,48635|1,48720|3,48720|2,48892|3) -
2016-11-11 18:33 shadowsnoop: 00:50:777 (50777|0,50863|1,50949|2,51035|1,51120|2,51120|3) -
2016-11-11 18:34 FelipeLink: ay
2016-11-11 18:34 shadowsnoop: 00:53:349 (53349|0,53435|1,53520|2,53520|3,53606|0,53692|2,53777|1,53863|2,53863|0,53863|3) -
2016-11-11 18:35 shadowsnoop: 00:54:035 (54035|1,54120|2,54206|0,54206|1,54292|3,54377|2,54463|3,54549|0,54549|2) -
2016-11-11 18:40 shadowsnoop: 00:56:263 (56263|1,56263|0,56349|3,56435|1,56520|2,56606|3) -
2016-11-11 18:41 shadowsnoop: 01:25:063 - +1
2016-11-11 18:42 FelipeLink: k
2016-11-11 18:43 shadowsnoop: 02:07:749 (127749|1,127749|3,127920|0,127920|2,128092|3,128092|2,128177|0,128177|1,128263|3,128263|2,128349|0,128349|1,128435|3,128477|2,128520|1,128606|3,128606|0,128777|0,128863|0,128949|1,128949|2,128949|3,129035|0) -
2016-11-11 18:46 shadowsnoop: 02:30:892 (150892|3,150892|0,151063|2,151063|1,151235|3,151235|1,151235|0,151406|0,151406|2,151577|3,151577|2,151920|3,151920|0,152263|2,152263|0,152606|1,152606|0,152949|3,152949|0,153292|2,153292|0,153635|2,153635|1,153635|0,153806|1,153806|3,153977|2,153977|0,154149|0,154149|3,154320|2,154320|3,154663|3,154663|0,155006|2,155006|0,155349|1,155349|0,155692|3,155692|0,156035|2,156035|0,156377|1,156377|0,156549|3,156549|2,156720|1,156720|2,156720|... (message truncated)
2016-11-12 19:42 shadowsnoop: 03:37:063 (217063|2,217235|3,217320|0,217406|3,217749|2,217835|1,217920|0) -
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2016-11-12 19:43 shadowsnoop: 03:41:349 (221349|0,221435|1,221520|2,221520|3,221692|1,221863|3,221949|2,222035|0) -
2016-11-12 19:43 shadowsnoop: 03:43:235 (223235|0,223235|2,223320|1,223406|3,223577|1,223663|3,223749|1,223920|3) -
2016-11-12 19:44 shadowsnoop: 03:44:092 (224092|0,224177|1,224263|2,224435|3,224520|2,224606|1,224606|0,224692|2,224777|1) -
2016-11-12 19:44 shadowsnoop: 03:44:949 (224949|3,224949|0,225035|1,225120|3,225292|2,225292|1,225463|3,225549|1,225635|0) -
2016-11-12 19:44 shadowsnoop: 03:46:320 (226320|1,226320|0,226406|3,226492|0,226577|2,226663|0) -
2016-11-12 19:45 shadowsnoop: 03:47:177 (227177|3,227263|2,227349|0,227349|1,227435|3) -
2016-11-12 19:45 shadowsnoop: 03:49:577 (229577|0,229663|2,229749|3,229749|1,229920|2,230006|0,230092|3) -
2016-11-12 19:46 shadowsnoop: 03:52:749 (232749|0,232835|3,232835|1,232920|2,233006|0,233092|1,233177|0,233177|3) -
2016-11-12 19:48 shadowsnoop: 04:21:549 (261549|2,261635|0,261635|3,261720|1,261806|2,261892|2,261977|0,261977|3,262063|1,262149|2,262235|0,262320|1,262320|3,262406|2,262492|1,262577|0,262663|2,262663|3,262749|1,262835|0,262920|2,263006|1,263006|3) -
2016-11-12 19:49 shadowsnoop: 04:24:206 (264206|2,264292|1,264377|0,264377|3,264463|1,264549|2) -
2016-11-12 19:49 shadowsnoop: 04:24:806 (264806|0,264892|1,264977|2,265063|1,265063|3,265149|2,265235|0,265320|2,265406|1,265406|3) -
2016-11-12 19:49 shadowsnoop: 04:25:492 (265492|0,265577|2,265663|1,265749|3,265749|0,265835|2) -
2016-11-12 19:50 shadowsnoop: 04:27:463 (267463|3,267463|0,267549|2,267635|1,267720|2,267806|3,267806|1,267892|0) -
2016-11-12 19:51 shadowsnoop: 04:27:977 (267977|2,268063|1,268149|3,268149|0,268235|2,268320|1,268406|2,268492|1,268492|3,268577|0,268663|1,268749|2,268835|0,268835|3,268920|2) -
2016-11-12 19:51 shadowsnoop: 04:31:577 (271577|0,271663|2,271749|1,271835|3,271920|0,271920|1,272006|2) -
2016-11-12 19:53 FelipeLink: k
2016-11-12 19:53 shadowsnoop: 04:37:063 (277063|0,277149|1,277235|3,277406|3,277577|3,277663|1,277749|3,277835|1,277920|3) -
2016-11-12 19:55 shadowsnoop: 04:42:720 (282720|2,282892|3,282892|0,282977|2,283235|1,283235|2,283320|3,283406|1,283492|3,283577|0) -
2016-11-12 19:57 shadowsnoop: 04:49:749 (289749|3,289835|0,289920|2,290006|1,290092|0,290092|3,290177|2,290263|0,290349|1,290435|3) -
2016-11-12 19:58 shadowsnoop: 04:55:406 (295406|3,295492|2,295577|0,295577|1,295663|3,295749|1,295835|2,295920|1,295920|0) -
2016-11-12 20:04 shadowsnoop: parecido
2016-11-12 20:04 shadowsnoop: 05:11:606 (311606|0,311692|3,311692|2,311777|0,311777|1,311863|3,311949|2,312035|0,312035|1) -
2016-11-12 20:05 shadowsnoop: 05:12:377 (312377|3,314692|1,314777|2,314777|3,314863|0,314949|2,315035|1,315120|0) -
2016-11-12 20:05 FelipeLink: ?
2016-11-12 20:05 FelipeLink: LMAO
2016-11-12 20:05 shadowsnoop: oops
2016-11-12 20:06 shadowsnoop: 05:13:577 (313577|3,313663|1,313749|0,313835|1,313920|3,314006|2,314092|1) -
2016-11-12 20:08 shadowsnoop: 05:16:406 (316406|3,316492|2,316577|3,316663|2,316749|1,316835|2) -
2016-11-12 20:09 shadowsnoop: 05:20:435 (320435|3,320520|1,320606|0,320692|1,320777|3,320863|2,320949|3,320949|1) -
2016-11-12 20:10 shadowsnoop: 05:26:606 (326606|0,326777|3,326777|2,326949|2,327120|1,327120|3,327292|0,327377|1,327463|2,327463|3,327549|1,327635|2,327806|1,327806|3,328149|2,328149|3) -
2016-11-12 20:10 FelipeLink: JOOOOOOOOOOOOJ
2016-11-12 20:10 shadowsnoop: fuck yourself please 05:28:749 (328749|3,328835|0,328835|1,328920|2,329006|3,329092|1,329177|2,329177|0,329263|1,329349|3,329435|2,329520|1,329520|0,329692|1,329863|0,329863|2) -
2016-11-12 20:11 shadowsnoop: 05:30:035 (330035|3,330120|2,330206|1,330206|0,330292|3,330377|1,330549|0,330549|2) -
2016-11-12 20:11 shadowsnoop: 05:32:435 (332435|2,332606|3,332606|1,332777|0,332863|1,332949|3,332949|2,333035|0,333120|2,333292|3) -
2016-11-12 20:12 shadowsnoop: 05:34:320 (334320|3,334320|2,334406|0,334492|1,334577|0,334663|2,334663|3,334749|1,334835|0,334920|2,335006|3,335006|1,335177|2,335349|2,335349|3,335520|0,335606|2,335692|1,335692|3,335777|0,335949|1,336035|2,336035|3) -
2016-11-12 20:12 shadowsnoop: 05:37:492 (337492|2,337577|0,337663|1,337749|3,337920|2,338092|3,338263|2,338349|1,338435|3,338520|2,338606|1,338777|3) -
2016-11-12 20:13 FelipeLink: ;w;[
2016-11-12 20:13 shadowsnoop: 05:39:635 (339635|2,339720|1,339806|3,339892|0,339977|2,340063|1) -
2016-11-12 20:13 shadowsnoop: 05:40:320 (340320|2,340406|1,340492|3,340663|2,340835|3,341006|2,341092|1,341177|3,341263|0,341520|3) -
2016-11-12 20:14 shadowsnoop: 05:50:606 (350606|1,350692|2,350777|0,350863|1,350949|3,351035|2,351120|0,351120|1,351292|1,351377|3,351463|0) -
2016-11-12 20:14 shadowsnoop: 05:52:149 (352149|0,352235|1,352320|2,352492|0) -
2016-11-12 20:15 shadowsnoop: 05:53:006 (353006|1,353177|0,353349|1,353435|2,353520|0,353606|1,353692|3,353863|0,354035|2,354120|3,354206|0,354206|1) -
2016-11-12 20:15 shadowsnoop: smh
2016-11-12 20:15 shadowsnoop: smh
2016-11-12 20:15 shadowsnoop: smh
2016-11-12 20:15 FelipeLink: E-E
2016-11-12 20:15 FelipeLink: e-e
2016-11-12 20:15 shadowsnoop: holly fucking shit 05:54:377 (354377|3,354549|0,354720|1,354806|3,354892|0,354977|1,355063|2,355235|0,355406|2,355577|0,355749|1,355920|0,356092|1,356177|2,356263|0,356349|1,356435|3,356520|2,356606|1,356606|0,356692|3,356777|2,356863|1,356949|2) -
2016-11-12 20:16 shadowsnoop: 05:58:149 (358149|2,358235|1,358320|0,358320|2,358492|1,358577|2,358663|0,358749|2,358835|1,359006|3) -
2016-11-12 20:16 shadowsnoop: bem parecido 05:59:092 (359092|2,359177|0,359177|1,359263|0,359263|1,359349|2,359349|3,359435|1,359520|2,359606|3,359692|0,359692|1,359863|3,360035|1,360035|0) -
2016-11-12 20:17 shadowsnoop: smh again 06:00:720 (360720|0,360892|2,361063|0,361235|1,361406|0,361577|1,361663|2,361749|0,361835|1,361920|3,362006|2,362092|1,362092|0,362177|3,362263|1,362349|2,362435|0,362435|1,362606|3,362777|0,362949|1,363035|3,363120|0,363292|1,363463|0) -
2016-11-12 20:18 shadowsnoop: 06:03:635 (363635|2,363806|0,363977|1,364149|0,364320|1,364406|2,364492|0,364577|1,364663|3,364749|2,364835|0,364835|1,364920|3,365006|1,365177|0,365177|1,365349|3) -
2016-11-12 20:18 shadowsnoop: I just want to buttfuck you right now
2016-11-12 20:18 shadowsnoop: 06:09:463 (369463|1,369549|2,369635|0,369720|1,369806|0,369892|2,369977|0,370063|1,370149|3) -
2016-11-12 20:19 FelipeLink: lmao
2016-11-12 20:19 FelipeLink: jej
2016-11-12 21:00 shadowsnoop: 05:59:349 -
2016-11-12 21:02 shadowsnoop: 00:00:035 (35|2,206|1,292|3,377|1) -
2016-11-12 21:02 shadowsnoop: 00:00:977 (977|3,1063|1,1149|2,1235|3,1406|0) -
2016-11-12 21:04 shadowsnoop: 00:08:263 -
2016-11-12 21:12 shadowsnoop: 05:32:692 -
2016-11-12 21:12 shadowsnoop: 05:32:777 -

Gave some suggestions, added some hands, checked notes consistency, changed some patterns... map´s looking fine!

snoverpk wrote:

irc

2016-11-14 00:52 FelipeLink: hey nosver
2016-11-14 00:52 snoverpk: hi fepilekiln
2016-11-14 00:53 FelipeLink: hmm, can i ask you a favor
2016-11-14 00:53 FelipeLink: actually 2 favors
2016-11-14 00:53 snoverpk: maybe(?)
2016-11-14 00:53 FelipeLink: 1- mutual me u fucker
2016-11-14 00:53 FelipeLink: )":
2016-11-14 00:54 snoverpk: what's the second favor
2016-11-14 00:54 can i ask for a mod on my space time? i kinda need more 2 mods to get a bn check again *sigh*
2016-11-14 00:54 FelipeLink: i remapped everything
2016-11-14 00:54 FelipeLink: so its a new map
2016-11-14 00:54 snoverpk: ok but i'll only do an irc mod
2016-11-14 00:54 snoverpk: and it won't be long because my back hurts and i want to go to bed
2016-11-14 00:54 FelipeLink: no problem
2016-11-14 00:55 FelipeLink: ACTION is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/885133 Amane - Space Time (Amane Hardcore Remix)]
2016-11-14 00:55 snoverpk: ACTION is playing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/885133 Amane - Space Time (Amane Hardcore Remix) [Rerum Spatium Tempusque]] <osu!mania> +DoubleTime |4K|
2016-11-14 00:57 snoverpk: ok i see problems with this map
2016-11-14 00:57 FelipeLink: hm, right
2016-11-14 00:58 snoverpk: 00:26:949 (26949|1,27035|0,27120|1,27206|0,27292|1) - this pattern doesn't look polished
2016-11-14 00:58 snoverpk: 00:37:406 (37406|0) - move to 4
2016-11-14 00:59 snoverpk: 00:38:092 (38092|3,38092|1,38177|0,38263|1,38263|3) - i don't recommend this pattern
2016-11-14 00:59 snoverpk: also long uncomfortable anchor on 4
2016-11-14 00:59 snoverpk: 00:45:120 (45120|1) - could probably move this to 3 to avoid the trill
2016-11-14 00:59 FelipeLink: right
2016-11-14 01:00 snoverpk: 00:54:635 (54635|0) - move to 3 also i think this is unsnapped
2016-11-14 01:00 snoverpk: or not
2016-11-14 01:00 snoverpk: 00:56:949 - this entire pattern starting from here is kinda weird
2016-11-14 01:01 snoverpk: 00:58:320 - this anchor is really long and i don't recommend it
2016-11-14 01:02 FelipeLink: anchor? where
2016-11-14 01:02 snoverpk: on 3
2016-11-14 01:02 FelipeLink: oh
2016-11-14 01:02 FelipeLink: true
2016-11-14 01:02 snoverpk: 01:23:949 (83949|0,84035|1,84035|2) - this would probably feel smoother if it was 3[12] but you would have to change the pattern before it to be a bit less trilly
2016-11-14 01:02 snoverpk: not a necessary change though
2016-11-14 01:03 snoverpk: 01:24:206 (84206|1,84292|2,84377|1,84377|3) - alternatively you can change this to 12[34]
2016-11-14 01:04 snoverpk: 02:11:520 (131520|3,131606|3) - are these jacks really necessary in this part
2016-11-14 01:04 snoverpk: i think this entire part is a bit too dense considering the music isn't really that intense
2016-11-14 01:04 FelipeLink: yep
2016-11-14 01:04 FelipeLink: its necessary for consistency
2016-11-14 01:05 FelipeLink: this section will do jack, no, jack, no, jack, no, etc
2016-11-14 01:05 snoverpk: that's what i mean
2016-11-14 01:05 FelipeLink: and in the ''kiai'' its jack every ''sound''
2016-11-14 01:05 snoverpk: i don't think that's necessary
2016-11-14 01:06 snoverpk: that part is too dense in general though
2016-11-14 01:06 snoverpk: considering the music
2016-11-14 01:06 FelipeLink: no ghost in that section tho
2016-11-14 01:06 snoverpk: that doesn't mean it's not too dense
2016-11-14 01:06 snoverpk: i think it's too dense when you compare it to the kiai
2016-11-14 01:07 snoverpk: it's a lot calmer than the kiai
2016-11-14 01:07 snoverpk: i'm too lazy to mod the rest
2016-11-14 01:07 FelipeLink: well, its not denser than kiai tho
2016-11-14 01:07 FelipeLink: lmao
2016-11-14 01:07 snoverpk: also i don't like how the bursts are just rolls
2016-11-14 01:07 snoverpk: also yes it's not denser than the kiai
2016-11-14 01:07 FelipeLink: hm, well
2016-11-14 01:07 snoverpk: but it's as dense as the kiai
2016-11-14 01:07 snoverpk: you should make it less dense
2016-11-14 01:09 FelipeLink: ._., i dont think so
2016-11-14 01:09 FelipeLink: i changed everything except that
2016-11-14 01:09 FelipeLink: and the rolls is shoegazer suggestion
2016-11-14 01:10 snoverpk: well that's just because i don't like rolls i would prefer better speed patterns
2016-11-14 01:10 snoverpk: but still the part before kiai shouldn't be as dense as the kiai
2016-11-14 01:10 FelipeLink: man if i remove notes
2016-11-14 01:10 FelipeLink: it will be like spy
2016-11-14 01:10 FelipeLink: and they will fucking say
2016-11-14 01:10 FelipeLink: ''YOU COPIED, CTRL+V, CTRL+H''
2016-11-14 01:11 FelipeLink: thats why i cant
2016-11-14 01:11 FelipeLink: can you post the log in the thread pls?
2016-11-14 01:11 snoverpk: ok

FelipeLink wrote:

Thanks for the Guil, really appreciate.

KcHecKa wrote:

When senpai rejects you

Guilhermeziat wrote:

FelipeLink wrote:

Thanks for the Guil, really appreciate.

You're welcome, modLink.

Soul Evans wrote:

IRC with guil 2.0

BR time

2016-11-18 13:26 Soul Evans: Okay let me testplay
2016-11-18 13:26 FelipeLink: right
2016-11-18 13:34 Soul Evans: cold hands
2016-11-18 13:34 FelipeLink: np
2016-11-18 13:35 Soul Evans: 02:59:349 - 
2016-11-18 13:35 Soul Evans: You have a stacked note here
2016-11-18 13:35 FelipeLink: LOL
2016-11-18 13:35 FelipeLink: removed
2016-11-18 13:36 Soul Evans: 02:06:206 - why are there two timing points stacked here
2016-11-18 13:36 FelipeLink: blame agka program
2016-11-18 13:36 FelipeLink: :100:
2016-11-18 13:36 FelipeLink: removed
2016-11-18 13:36 Soul Evans: Disable custom colours
2016-11-18 13:37 Soul Evans: from your beatmaps options
2016-11-18 13:37 Soul Evans: since it's for standard and i think it's useless
2016-11-18 13:37 FelipeLink: right, disabled
2016-11-18 13:38 Soul Evans: okay umm
2016-11-18 13:39 Soul Evans: It's probably prefference to me but wouldn't it be better if the bursts such as 00:38:435 - 
2016-11-18 13:39 Soul Evans: have jumptrills first before the trills?
2016-11-18 13:39 Soul Evans: (idk what they're called)
2016-11-18 13:39 Soul Evans: basically ctrl+g them i think
2016-11-18 13:40 FelipeLink: hm
2016-11-18 13:40 Soul Evans: thing is
2016-11-18 13:40 Soul Evans: i don't really get ready for the dense rolls because i was expecting jumptrills at first
2016-11-18 13:41 FelipeLink: well
2016-11-18 13:41 FelipeLink: if i ctrl+g
2016-11-18 13:41 FelipeLink: the transition will be worse
2016-11-18 13:41 FelipeLink: no jokee
2016-11-18 13:41 FelipeLink: all bursts
2016-11-18 13:41 FelipeLink: are different jumptrill(4 1/1) then the normal one(12/34)
2016-11-18 13:42 Soul Evans: i see
2016-11-18 13:42 Soul Evans: 01:00:377 -  this pattern on the other hand
2016-11-18 13:43 Soul Evans: uuh i think it's best if you changed it to something else (optional)
2016-11-18 13:44 FelipeLink: i know that double trill are the hardest jumptrill haha
2016-11-18 13:44 FelipeLink: its just for variation, cant change
2016-11-18 13:44 Soul Evans: 01:49:749 (109749|3,109920|1) - 
2016-11-18 13:44 Soul Evans: This on the other hand is uncomfy to hit
2016-11-18 13:44 Soul Evans: atleast move 01:49:920 (109920|1) -  to 1
2016-11-18 13:45 Soul Evans: 01:59:520 (119520|0) - same here
2016-11-18 13:45 FelipeLink: about that, i cant, its PR oriented
2016-11-18 13:45 FelipeLink: feerum suggested to do the pr
2016-11-18 13:45 FelipeLink: so i did
2016-11-18 13:46 Soul Evans: would you sacrifice playability for PR?
2016-11-18 13:46 FelipeLink: 01:49:920 (109920|1) -  if i change to 1
2016-11-18 13:46 FelipeLink: 01:50:263 (110263|0) -  <- rip pr
2016-11-18 13:46 FelipeLink: no, i made a section without PR because playability
2016-11-18 13:47 FelipeLink: but i think this is p playable i mean, its just single notes+lns
2016-11-18 13:47 FelipeLink: 01:50:263 (110263|0) -  <- no pr oriented because playability
2016-11-18 13:47 Soul Evans: 02:23:863 -  why does this don't have a mini jack
2016-11-18 13:47 FelipeLink: oops
2016-11-18 13:47 FelipeLink: wrong timing
2016-11-18 13:47 Soul Evans: like the rest?
2016-11-18 13:47 FelipeLink: 04:20:606 -
2016-11-18 13:48 Soul Evans: 02:26:606 - same here
2016-11-18 13:48 FelipeLink: this section is jack, no jack, jack, no jack
2016-11-18 13:48 Soul Evans: oooh i was gonna ask that
2016-11-18 13:48 FelipeLink: =p
2016-11-18 13:48 Soul Evans: 02:30:892 -  i think these have a little bit more sound to it
2016-11-18 13:48 Soul Evans: you can make those triples instead
2016-11-18 13:49 Soul Evans: ofcourse
2016-11-18 13:49 FelipeLink: hm ok, i agree
2016-11-18 13:49 Soul Evans: when it's not touching LNs
2016-11-18 13:49 FelipeLink: yd
2016-11-18 13:49 Soul Evans: 02:51:977 - if this has 3 note ladder
2016-11-18 13:50 Soul Evans: 02:51:720 -  then add a note here
2016-11-18 13:50 Soul Evans: for consistency
2016-11-18 13:50 FelipeLink: ye*
2016-11-18 13:52 FelipeLink: right ok, i did some changes
2016-11-18 13:52 Soul Evans: 03:23:177 - How about you make this section like this ? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6595769
2016-11-18 13:52 Soul Evans: for consistency's sake
2016-11-18 13:53 Soul Evans: 03:25:149 - Same here https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6595774
2016-11-18 13:53 FelipeLink: sec
2016-11-18 13:55 FelipeLink: ok changed both
2016-11-18 13:57 Soul Evans: 03:25:577 - why does this have double jacks when most of what i've seen are 1 jack
2016-11-18 13:58 Soul Evans: 03:03:635 - forgot to mention this too
2016-11-18 13:59 FelipeLink: its happen sometimes
2016-11-18 14:00 FelipeLink: 00:30:035 (30035|0,30035|3,30120|2,30120|1,30206|3,30206|1) -
2016-11-18 14:00 FelipeLink: same sound
2016-11-18 14:00 FelipeLink: but on a soft section
2016-11-18 14:00 Soul Evans: hmm i see
2016-11-18 14:01 Soul Evans: 03:36:035 - 
2016-11-18 14:01 Soul Evans: it's kinda off putting for me to play that
2016-11-18 14:01 Soul Evans: since it's just 4 rolls
2016-11-18 14:01 Soul Evans: can't you change it like the other bursts?
2016-11-18 14:02 FelipeLink: ok
2016-11-18 14:03 Soul Evans: 03:37:063 - for this type of sound
2016-11-18 14:03 Soul Evans: in the earlier sections before it
2016-11-18 14:04 Soul Evans: you used 3 note chords for it
2016-11-18 14:04 Soul Evans: so i suggest making it for this sections too
2016-11-18 14:04 FelipeLink: uh yeah
2016-11-18 14:04 Soul Evans: now ofcourse you can still keep 3 note chords for 03:38:092 - 
2016-11-18 14:04 Soul Evans: no need to change those
2016-11-18 14:04 FelipeLink: yeah like.. i kinda just want to keep those hands
2016-11-18 14:05 FelipeLink: and those hands are for the change in the pitch/density of the sound
2016-11-18 14:05 FelipeLink: i think its fine if i dont put hands on this section because its pretty soft
2016-11-18 14:05 FelipeLink: if i add more hands
2016-11-18 14:05 FelipeLink: it will lose his impact
2016-11-18 14:05 Soul Evans: alrighty
2016-11-18 14:05 Soul Evans: 03:40:835 -  missing 3 note chord for the same sound
2016-11-18 14:06 Soul Evans: 03:46:320 -  i think here too
2016-11-18 14:06 Soul Evans: i know they're soft but something about it staying as hands feels off though
2016-11-18 14:07 FelipeLink: eh!?
2016-11-18 14:07 Soul Evans: idk
2016-11-18 14:07 Soul Evans: Oh and i forgot to mention
2016-11-18 14:07 Soul Evans: 02:07:577 - 
2016-11-18 14:07 Soul Evans: please for the love of eze raise the slowjam in this
2016-11-18 14:07 Soul Evans: this should be more faster especially with all the notes before it
2016-11-18 14:07 FelipeLink: right
2016-11-18 14:08 Soul Evans: 04:20:606 - okay this defenitley sounds off
2016-11-18 14:09 Soul Evans: the hard drum should have 3 note chords because the rest of the hands
2016-11-18 14:09 Soul Evans: that blends in with this feels unatural to his
2016-11-18 14:09 Soul Evans: hit*
2016-11-18 14:09 Soul Evans: or atleast start here 04:31:577 - 
2016-11-18 14:09 FelipeLink: hm i do agree
2016-11-18 14:09 FelipeLink: but i undermapped for playability
2016-11-18 14:09 FelipeLink: like hand = minijack
2016-11-18 14:10 Soul Evans: meh i think it's alright
2016-11-18 14:10 Soul Evans: it's good to keep this more stamina oriented
2016-11-18 14:10 Soul Evans: for like uuh people not to famr
2016-11-18 14:10 Soul Evans: farm*
2016-11-18 14:11 FelipeLink: lmao
2016-11-18 14:11 Soul Evans: and people that can handle Icy JS files
2016-11-18 14:11 FelipeLink: i made this map the most confortable imo
2016-11-18 14:11 Soul Evans: will get a pass for this 
2016-11-18 14:11 FelipeLink: this is not a pp map
2016-11-18 14:11 FelipeLink: its a hp9 for a reason
2016-11-18 14:11 Soul Evans: man people are too strong for hp9 nowadays
2016-11-18 14:11 FelipeLink: lmao
2016-11-18 14:12 FelipeLink: its 4,8 its not that hard o:
2016-11-18 14:12 Soul Evans: Theres nothing in this map that could kill a farmer
2016-11-18 14:12 Soul Evans: if it's the minijacks he'll raise hp again
2016-11-18 14:12 Soul Evans: from the rest of the streams
2016-11-18 14:12 Soul Evans: and bursts are pretty much spam
2016-11-18 14:12 FelipeLink: lmao
2016-11-18 14:13 Soul Evans: 04:53:520 (293520|1) -  i don't think this pattern is suitable
2016-11-18 14:13 Soul Evans: it's doesn't play like a jack imo
2016-11-18 14:13 Soul Evans: 04:53:435 (293435|1) - move to 1
2016-11-18 14:13 FelipeLink: its the same sound i already linked <_>
2016-11-18 14:13 FelipeLink: oh
2016-11-18 14:14 FelipeLink: ok
2016-11-18 14:14 FelipeLink: changed
2016-11-18 14:14 Soul Evans: 05:03:806 - ok so remember what i said about this earlier?
2016-11-18 14:14 Soul Evans: same thing i said lol
2016-11-18 14:14 FelipeLink: k
2016-11-18 14:17 Soul Evans: 06:09:720 - this last section is kinda meh, and there are strong notes that doesn't suit it to be just 1 notes like what spy did
2016-11-18 14:17 Soul Evans: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6595884
2016-11-18 14:17 Soul Evans: suggestion
2016-11-18 14:19 FelipeLink: ok changed to something similar

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Nivrad00 wrote:

Kudos to felipe for reworking so much of this map. Recheck time ;n;

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00:55:749 - I think this should be a single and 00:56:092 - should be a double Yeah i agree, right, changed
01:23:692 - add finish Added
02:03:549 (123549|0,124920|1,126292|2) - shouldn't these three LNs be on the second, third, and fourth lane respectively? they're the only ones that break the 1-2-3, 2-3-4 pattern ;n; oo, yeah, changed ><
02:08:092 (128092|1,128092|0,128177|3,128177|2,128349|2,128349|3) - I think I saw someone else give this suggestion, but I think it would emphasize the beat nicely if you made these singles and left this 02:08:263 (128263|1,128263|0) - a double was waiting for a BN opnion, well changed!
02:30:892 - spy's map also uses a 1st-lane stack to represent the snare in this section, including after 02:41:863 - . I suggest you try something else. Maybe you could switch the stack to a different lane every two measures or something? also the effect is a bit dampened because beats like 02:31:577 -, 02:34:320 -, etc have the LN release instead of a note uh, i did something else, its change every 2 1/1 now, still the minijacks are still on the column 3 and its justificable
04:20:606 - same here ^
02:41:349 - missing normal note? o yeah, a missing note >_>, fixed, thanks
03:11:949 - unnecessary kick right, removed
03:33:892 - same ^
04:41:692 (281692|3) - this LN should start at 04:41:863 - for consistency with the beginning of the first kiai (02:52:149 (172149|3) - ). Also I notice spy's map has the same inconsistency, so I imagine this wasn't on purpose o-o, changed
05:20:949 - shouldn't the hitsound pattern here be
k k s k k k s k
instead of
k k s k k s k k
? yeah, didnt saw that, fixed
ANCHOR HUNTING TIME:
00:47:520 (47520|3,47692|3,47863|3,48035|3,48206|3,48377|3,48549|3,48720|3,48892|3,49063|3,49235|3,49406|3,49577|3,49749|3,49920|3,50092|3,50263|3,50435|3,50606|3,50777|3,50949|3,51120|3,51292|3,51463|3) - 24-note anchor o-o
I know it's because you're repeating this section:
00:49:235 (49235|0,49235|3,49320|1,49406|3,49406|2,49492|1,49577|3,49577|0,49663|1,49749|3,49749|0,49749|2) -
but you should probably choose a different repeating pattern so that it doesn't make this crazy anchor oki, changed to something+ some reppaterns here and there to not getting too many stacked notes
03:23:863 (203863|3,204035|3,204206|3,204377|3,204549|3,204720|3,204892|3,205063|3,205235|3,205406|3,205577|3,205749|3,205920|3) - 13-note anchor
05:13:063 (313063|3,313235|3,313406|3,313577|3,313749|3,313920|3,314092|3,314263|3,314435|3,314606|3,314777|3) - 11-note anchor
interestingly, all of these anchors are on the same lane o-o
About those 2, i changed some jumps to break the anchor a little so its not that big, there still some anchors because its pretty dense+jacks, but its smaller now

Awaiting your response

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