-Konner- wrote:

Wrong: "Space & Time" not in the tags. smh tbh br fam

FINDT wrote:

Modddddd (M4M with This Map)

~~~~~

(0123)
00:03:120 (3120|2) - Add note on 2 (for clap/drum sound) - Ok
00:03:463 (3463|1) - ^ add on 1 - Ok
00:03:635 (3635|1) - Move to 2 - Ok
00:03:977 (3977|3) - Remove - Ok
00:05:349 (5349|2) - Remove - Ok
00:05:520 (5520|2) - Move to 1 - Ok
00:05:863 (5863|3) - Add note on 3 (for the drum sound) - Ok
00:06:206 (6206|3) - ^ on 3 - Ok
00:06:549 (6549|1) - ^ on 1 - Ok
00:11:692 (11692|0) - ^ on 0 - Ok
00:13:406 (13406|2) - ^ on 2 - Ok
00:15:806 (15806|2) - move to 1 - Ok
00:30:206 (30206|1) - Add on 1 - Ok
00:30:549 (30549|1) - Add on 1 - Ok
00:30:892 (30892|0) - Add on 0 - Ok
00:31:235 (31235|1) - Add on 1 - Ok
00:32:949 (32949|0) - Add on 0 - Ok
00:33:292 (33292|1) - Add on 1 - Ok
00:33:463 (33463|1) - Move to 2 - Ok
00:33:635 (33635|0) - Add on 0 - Ok
00:33:977 (33977|2) - Add on 2 - Ok
00:35:349 (35349|2) - Add on 2 - Ok
00:35:863 (35863|2,35863|1) - Move to 3-2 - Ok
00:41:863 (41863|0) - Add on 0 - Ok
00:44:606 (44606|2) - Add on 2 - Ok
00:47:349 (47349|2) - Add on 2 - Ok
00:55:577 (55577|1) - Add on 1 - Ok
On this 01:06:035 (66035|2,66035|3) - this 01:08:435 (68435|3,68435|1) - this 01:08:777 (68777|0,68777|2) - and other same 2 jump notes.. - I have no idea why you make it 2 notes, consider to change to single notes? :> - Rejected As you can see, i just changed the LNS to Single notes for being more confortable to hit(i asked some opnions) https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4467802 / https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4467818

01:24:377 (84377|1) - add note on 1 (it should be 2 notes ;v) - Ok
01:24:720 (84720|1) - ^ add on 1 - Ok
02:08:606 (128606|3) - ^ Add on 3 - Ok
02:10:149 (130149|3,130149|2,130235|1,130235|2,130320|0,130320|1) - uhm well, listen with 25%, it shouldn't be like this xD (and other same note like this too), consider to change? :> - Rejected i can listen pretty well even on 25% this part really exist dude..

02:52:835 - 03:36:720 the kiai time should be in this part - Ok

04:42:549 - 05:26:435 ^ - Ok

delete the other kiai time pls - Ok

05:37:749 (337749|0) - Add note on 0 - Ok
05:38:092 (338092|1) - Add on 1 - Ok
05:39:806 (339806|2) - Add on 2 - Ok
05:40:149 (340149|2) - Add on 2 - Ok
05:40:492 (340492|0) - Add on 0 - Ok
05:40:835 (340835|1) - Add on 1 - Ok
05:41:177 (341177|2) - Add on 2 - Ok
05:41:349 (341349|2) - Move to 1 - Ok
05:42:549 (342549|2) - Add on 2 - Ok
05:42:720 (342720|2) - Move to 1 - Ok
05:43:235 (343235|2,343235|1) - Move to 3-2 - Ok
05:49:406 (349406|1) - Add on 1 - Ok
05:50:777 (350777|3) - Add on 3 - Ok
05:51:463 (351463|2) - Add on 2 - Ok
05:51:806 (351806|1) - Add on 1 - Ok
05:52:149 (352149|3) - Add on 3 - Ok
05:53:863 (353863|3) - Add on 3 - - ?_?
05:53:949 (353949|3) - Move to 0 - ?_?
05:54:549 (354549|2) - Add on 2 - Ok
05:54:892 (354892|2) - Add on 2 - Ok
05:56:263 (356263|3) - Add on 3 - Ok
05:57:292 (357292|2) - Add on 2 - Ok
05:57:635 (357635|2) - Add on 2 - Ok
06:01:749 (361749|3) - Add on 3 - Ok
06:02:777 (362777|2) - Add on 2 - Ok
06:04:492 (364492|3) - Add on 3 - Ok
06:05:777 (365777|3,365949|2) - ????????????????? - I Clearly can hear a sound even on 100%

Just that~~~ Don't forget to mod my maps :p

Thanks

FelipeLink wrote:

dont worry i dont bite

Not even ecstasy can help me through this.

OK GENERAL STUFF
1. need a background that's (1024/1366)x768. The current background resolution is 16:10 (why) (questionably unrankable) and you should be USING THE OFFICIAL BACKGROUND INSTEAD because your current background is bad.
Everything else seems fine.
Also nice latin you got there (no but it's not really needed but w/e)

Hydria wrote:

FelipeLink wrote:

dont worry i dont bite

LIES


Not even ecstasy can help me through this.

OK GENERAL STUFF
1. need a background that's (1024/1366)x768. The current background resolution is 16:10 (why) (questionably unrankable) and you should be USING THE OFFICIAL BACKGROUND INSTEAD because your current background is bad.
Everything else seems fine.
Also nice latin you got there (no but it's not really needed but w/e)

ok the actual mod

00:00:463 - missing note - Ok
00:00:635 (635|2) - ghost note - Ok
00:01:835 - missing note - Ok
00:02:177 (2177|2) - ghost note - Ok
00:03:206 - missing note - Ok
00:03:377 (3377|2) - ghost note - Ok
00:04:577 - missing note - Ok
00:05:435 (5435|0) - ghost note - Ok
00:05:949 - missing note - Ok
00:07:320 - missing note - Ok
00:08:863 - ghost note - Ok
00:09:977 - should be 2 chord - Ok
00:10:063 - missing note - Ok
00:10:320 - should be 2 chord - Ok
00:10:663 - should be 2 chord - Ok
00:11:435 - missing note - Ok
00:12:720 - should be 2 chord - Ok
00:12:806 - missing note - Ok
00:13:063 - should be 2 chord - Ok
00:13:749 (13749|3,13920|3,14092|2,14263|2,14435|3,14606|3) - want to make some non right side jacks - My brain like some jacks xddd(changed)
00:16:492 - Ok(16492|0,16492|3,16577|2,16577|1,16663|0,16663|3,16749|1,16749|2,16835|0,16835|3,16920|2,16920|1,17006|3,17006|2,17092|0,17092|1,17177|2,17177|3,17263|0,17263|1,17349|2,17349|3,17435|0,17435|1,17520|2,17520|3,17606|0,17606|1,17692|2,17692|3,17777|1,17777|0) - change the patterns every 4 beats like this - uhh yeah i changed, not 100% like your img, but i get it what you want
00:21:635 (21635|1,21635|0,21977|1,21977|0,22320|1,22320|0,22663|0,22663|1,23006|1,23006|0,23349|0,23349|1,23692|0,23692|1) - change now - Ok
00:24:206 (24206|0,24292|1,24377|3,24377|2,24463|1,24549|2,24635|3,24720|0,24720|1) - ctrl-H - Ok
00:25:235 (25235|1,25406|1,25406|0,25577|0,25663|1,25835|0,25920|1) - why so heavy on the left side - Ok
00:29:520 (29520|3,29520|2,29692|2,29777|3,29863|2,30035|3,30035|2,30120|3,30120|2) - lighten up on the right hand a bit jeez - Ok
00:33:806 (33806|2) - move to 2 to stop the 3 column 1/2 jack - Ok
00:35:520 (35520|2) - ^ - Ok
00:39:206 (39206|2) - remove - Ok
00:39:806(39806|3,39849|2,39892|1,39935|0,39977|3,40020|2,40063|1,40106|0,40149|3,40192|2,40235|1,40277|0,40320|3,40363|2,40406|1,40449|0,40492|3,40535|2,40577|1,40620|0,40663|3,40706|2,40749|1,40792|0,40835|3,40877|2,40920|1,40963|0,41006|3,41049|2,41092|1,41135|0) - change - Will change for now and get some test
00:42:549 (42549|0,42549|1,42635|2,42720|3,42806|2,42892|0,42892|1) - what's your obsession with this - i think i like jumps(12/34)
00:43:577 (43577|2,43577|3,43663|1,43749|0,43835|1,43920|3,43920|2) - see - ;w;
00:44:949 (44949|3,44949|2,45035|1,45120|0,45206|1,45292|3,45292|2) - literally everywhere - e.e
00:45:977 (45977|1,46149|1,46320|1,46492|1,46663|1) - wwwwww - wwww
00:46:749 (46749|3,46835|2,46920|3,47006|2) - love me some random 1h trill - i love ;-;
00:47:777 (47777|0,47863|1,47949|2,48035|0,48035|1,48120|2,48206|1,48292|0) - no - Ok
00:49:749 (49749|1,49749|2,49920|2,50006|1,50092|2,50177|1,50263|2,50349|1,50435|2,50606|1,50692|2,50777|1,50863|2,50949|1,51035|2,51120|1) - the fuck is this no - Ok
00:51:377 (51377|1,51463|2,51549|1,51635|2,51720|1) - I can see what you're trying to do but no - Sadly, but ok
00:51:892 (51892|2) - remove, no drum beat - Ok
00:52:149 (52149|1,52149|0,52235|2,52320|3,52406|2,52492|1,52492|0) - point proven x2 - xdddd
00:54:892 (54892|0,54892|1,54977|2,55063|3,55149|2,55235|1,55235|0) - the patterns start coming and they don't stop coming - Never gonna give you up
00:55:920 (55920|1,55920|0,56006|2,56092|3,56177|2,56263|1,56263|0) - fed to the rules and I hit the ground running - ,_,
00:57:635 - Ok(57635|3,57635|1,57635|0,57806|1,57806|0,57806|2,57977|0,57977|3,57977|2,58149|2,58149|3,58149|1,58320|3,58320|2,58320|0,58492|0,58492|2,58492|1,58663|3,58663|2,58663|0,58835|3,58835|2,58835|1,59006|2,59006|1,59006|0,59177|2,59177|1,59177|3,59349|3,59349|1,59349|0,59520|3,59520|0,59520|2,59692|1,59692|2,59692|0,59863|3,59863|2,59863|0,60035|1,60035|3,60035|2,60206|3,60206|2,60206|0) - why are these now hands instead of jumps, what made you change them - Changed all jumps to Hand
01:00:806 (60806|1) - remove - Ok
01:01:749 - Ok(61749|0,61792|1,61835|2,61877|3,61920|0,61963|1,62006|2,62049|3,62092|0,62135|1,62177|2,62220|3,62263|0,62306|1,62349|2,62392|3,62435|0,62477|1,62520|2,62563|3,62606|0,62649|1,62692|2,62735|3,62777|0,62820|1,62863|2,62906|3,62949|0,62992|1,63035|2,63077|3) - you're not keeping those rolls in, I guarantee it - the future may speak for us
01:08:606 (68606|3,68863|3) - ghost notes - Ok
01:11:349 (71349|3,71349|0) - ^ - Ok
01:12:720 (72720|0,72720|3) - ^ - Ok
01:13:406 (73406|3) - ^ - Ok
01:14:092 (74092|2,74092|3) - ^ - Ok
01:16:835 (76835|2,76835|3) - ^ - Ok
01:19:577 (79577|0,79577|3) - ^ - Ok
01:22:320 (82320|3,82320|1) - 1. no - Ok
01:22:149 (82149|3,82235|2,82320|3,82320|1,82406|2,82492|3) - 2. no x2 - Ok
01:24:035 (84035|1,84206|1,84377|1,84592|1,84720|1,84977|1) - ?_? - Ok
02:08:777 (128777|2,128949|2,129120|2,129292|2) - errrr - Ok
02:10:149 (130149|2,130149|3,130235|2,130235|1,130320|0,130320|1) - really need handjacks in a slow section of the song fuck off Jumpjack* , and yes for consistency
02:11:520 (131520|0,131520|1,131606|1,131606|2,131692|3,131692|2) - get rid of all of these in this section. I'm not pointing anymore out. ^
02:33:977 (153977|3) - note doesn't exist here - Ok
02:43:149 (163149|1,163320|1,163492|1,163663|1) - other columns exist - :c
02:46:320 (166320|0,166320|1,166406|2,166492|3,166577|2,166663|1,166663|0) - didn't make sense not to live for fun - 12/34 jumps = <3
02:47:692 (167692|3,167863|3,168035|3,168206|3,168377|3,168549|3,168720|3) - wwwwwwwwwwww part 2 - wwwwww
02:50:092(170092|0,170092|1,170177|3,170177|2,170263|0,170263|1,170349|2,170349|3,170435|1,170435|0,170520|2,170520|3,170606|1,170606|0,170692|3,170692|2,170777|1,170777|0,170863|2,170863|3,170949|1,170949|0,171035|3,171035|2,171120|1,171120|0,171206|3,171206|2,171292|1,171292|0,171377|2,171377|3) - see 00:16:492 - - Ok
02:51:977 (171977|0,172063|1,172149|2,172235|1,172320|0,172363|1,172406|2,172492|1) - change to this? - Ok


02:54:035 (174035|2,174035|3,174120|2,174120|1,174206|0,174206|1) - ok, I want you to stop here, don't read the rest of the mod, don't touch anything else for about 5 minutes, and think to yourself: Are these really necessary? Yes, they are my friend


02:57:377 (177377|3,177463|2,177549|1,177635|3,177635|2,177720|1,177806|2,177892|3) - why - Ok
02:58:406 (178406|0,178492|1,178577|2,178663|0,178663|1,178749|2,178835|1,178920|0) - mirror of ^ - Ok
03:01:235 (181235|1,181406|1,181577|1,181749|1) - - Ok
03:02:777 (182777|3,182777|2,182863|1,182949|0,183035|1,183120|3,183120|2) - your brain gets smart but your head gets dumb - Blame Brazilzilzilzil
03:03:120 (183120|2,183292|2,183463|2,183635|2,183720|2) - still gotta watch out for these man - yeahh
03:09:463(189463|2,189463|0,189463|1,189635|3,189635|1,189635|0,189806|2,189806|3,189806|1,189977|1,189977|2,189977|0,190149|0,190149|2,190149|3,190320|1,190320|3,190320|0,190492|1,190492|3,190492|2,190663|1,190663|0,190663|2,190835|1,190835|3,190835|2,191006|0,191006|3,191006|1,191177|3,191177|2,191177|1,191349|2,191349|0,191349|1,191520|0,191520|1,191520|3,191692|2,191692|1,191692|3,191863|3,191863|0,191863|2) - again with this section - Ok
03:12:635 (192635|1) - remove - Ok
03:13:406 - Ok(193406|0,193449|1,193492|2,193535|3,193577|0,193620|1,193663|2,193706|3,193749|0,193792|1,193835|2,193877|3,193920|0,193963|1,194006|2,194049|3,194092|0,194135|1,194177|2,194220|3,194263|0,194306|1,194349|2,194392|3,194435|0,194477|1,194520|2,194563|3,194606|0,194649|1,194692|2,194735|3) - zzzzzzzzzzzz - ;w;
03:14:777 - pretty sure this and above is just mirrored or something - Ok
03:34:406 (214406|2) - remove - Ok
03:35:349 - Ok(215349|3,215392|2,215435|1,215477|0,215520|3,215563|2,215606|1,215649|0,215692|3,215735|2,215777|1,215820|0,215863|3,215906|2,215949|1,215992|0,216035|3,216077|2,216120|1,216163|0,216206|3,216249|2,216292|1,216335|0,216377|3,216420|2,216463|1,216506|0,216549|3,216592|2,216635|1,216677|0) - zzzzzzzzzzzz - ;W;W;W;W;W;W;
03:43:063 (223063|2,223149|1,223235|2,223235|0,223320|1,223406|2) - what - Ok
03:51:377 (231377|1,231463|0,231549|1,231635|0,231720|1) - keep up the 1h trills - BUT I LIKE 1H TRILLS ;_;
03:56:177 (236177|2) - remove - Ok
03:57:292(237292|3,237335|2,237377|1,237420|0,237463|3,237506|2,237549|1,237592|0,237635|3,237677|2,237720|1,237763|0,237806|3,237849|2,237892|1,237935|0,237977|3,238020|2,238063|1,238106|0,238149|3,238192|2,238235|1,238277|0,238320|3,238363|2,238406|1,238449|0,238492|3,238535|2,238577|1,238620|0) - I sound like a bee here - bzzzzzzt like that?
04:20:692 (260692|1,260863|1,261035|1,261206|1,261377|1,261549|1) - - Ok
04:26:263 (266263|1,266349|2,266435|1,266435|3,266520|2,266606|1) - - Ok
04:29:692 (269692|1,269863|1,270035|1,270206|1,270377|1,270549|1,270720|1,270892|1) - there's the longest one - At this point, i just see that my brain like anchors
04:34:835 (274835|1,274920|2,275006|3,275006|1,275092|2,275177|1) - - Ok
04:37:063 (277063|3,277235|3,277406|3,277577|3,277749|3,277920|3,278092|3,278263|3,278435|3) - turns out I was wrong before [color=green- Changed to Hands[/color]
04:40:406 (280406|1) - remove - Ok
04:41:092 (281092|1) - ^ - Ok
04:41:606 (281606|1,281692|0,281777|2,281863|0,281949|1,282035|2,282077|1,282120|0,282206|1) - see previous pattern suggestion
04:47:949 (287949|1,288035|1,288206|1,288377|1,288549|1) -
again with the jumpjacks - my jumpjack will bite you
05:02:349 (302349|1) - remove - Ok
05:03:120 (303120|0,303163|1,303206|2,303249|3,303292|0,303335|1,303377|2,303420|3,303463|0,303506|1,303549|2,303592|3,303635|0,303677|1,303720|2,303763|3,303806|0,303849|1,303892|2,303935|3,303977|0,304020|1,304063|2,304106|3,304149|0,304192|1,304235|2,304277|3,304320|0,304363|1,304406|2,304449|3) - keep zzzzzing along bzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz e.e.e..e.e.e
05:06:377 (306377|1,306549|1,306720|1,306892|1,307063|1,307149|1) - - Ok
05:09:892 (309892|1,309977|1,310149|1,310320|1,310492|1) - - Ok
05:13:577 (313577|2,313663|1,313749|2,313835|1,313920|2,314006|1,314006|2) - this is pretty lol - Ok
05:18:120 (318120|1,318120|2,318206|2,318292|1,318377|2,318463|1,318549|2,318635|1) - so is this - Ok
05:24:292 (324292|1) - remove - Ok
05:25:063 (325063|0,325106|1,325149|2,325192|3,325235|0,325277|1,325320|2,325363|3,325406|0,325449|1,325492|2,325535|3,325577|0,325620|1,325663|2,325706|3,325749|0,325792|1,325835|2,325877|3,325920|0,325963|1,326006|2,326049|3,326092|0,326135|1,326177|2,326220|3,326263|0,326306|1,326349|2,326392|3) - zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz >_>_>_>
05:35:863 (335863|2,335949|1,336035|2,336120|1,336206|2,336292|1,336377|2) - more trills - blame my brain
05:45:892 (345892|1) - remove - Ok
05:46:920 (346920|3,347006|3) - ahahaha wtf is this - This is love
oh yeah also 05:47:006(347006|3,347049|2,347092|1,347135|0,347177|3,347220|2,347263|1,347306|0,347349|3,347392|2,347435|1,347477|0,347520|3,347563|2,347606|1,347649|0,347692|3,347735|2,347777|1,347820|0,347863|3,347906|2,347949|1,347992|0,348035|3,348077|2,348120|1,348163|0,348206|3,348249|2,348292|1,348335|0) - no - ripperino
05:57:635 (357635|2,357720|1,357806|2,357892|1,357977|0,358063|1,358149|0,358235|1,358320|0) - trill central - who dont love some trills
06:05:692 (365692|0,365692|1,365863|1,365863|0,366035|0,366035|1,366206|0,366206|1,366377|1,366377|0,366549|0,366549|1,366720|0,366720|1,366892|1,366892|0,367063|0,367063|1) - nice column usage, definitely with the zero notes in lane 3 (sarcasm) - ayyy lmao, okay changed that
06:07:835 (367835|1) - remove - Tytytyty

I'll be back after this mod, there's still a lot of work to do.

shadowsnoop wrote:

Just passing by~~~~

Difficult: Rerum Spatium Tempusque

Lil'Mod

01:16:835 - missing note - Added

00:51:892 - Missing Note Added

01:05:863 - ^ Added

01:08:606 - ^ Added

01:11:349 - ^ Added

01:12:720 - ^ Added

01:13:406 - ^ Added

01:13:492 - ^ Added

01:16:835 - ^ Added

01:19:577 - ^ - Added

01:19:663 - ^ - Added

Other suggestions and possibly advices were given through private chat <3

Just rank it already.

by-ad wrote:

Felipelink your beatmap i think little "in a hurry".


Thank's the beatmap

roko100789 wrote:

Hi.
Just a quick mod in hue. Good luck trying to understand wth happened here.

2016-02-11 01:12 FelipeLink: oi
2016-02-11 01:13 roko100789: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/885133 Amane - Space Time (Amane Hardcore Remix) [Rerum Spatium Tempusque]]
2016-02-11 01:13 roko100789: Tem must change tier, bns vão reclamar tier, pitch stuff e outras coisas 
2016-02-11 01:13 roko100789: No overall o mapa tá bom
2016-02-11 01:14 FelipeLink: hm
2016-02-11 01:14 FelipeLink: tem como tu fazer um mod de topico
2016-02-11 01:14 FelipeLink: da mais valor ao mod
2016-02-11 01:14 roko100789: Eu prefiro irc 
2016-02-11 01:14 roko100789: É mais prático
2016-02-11 01:14 roko100789: E tenho que dormir logo
2016-02-11 01:14 roko100789: Mas se tu quiser, posso tentar fazer
2016-02-11 01:14 FelipeLink: e.e
2016-02-11 01:14 roko100789: Só vou demorar um tempinho
2016-02-11 01:14 roko100789: Porque sou lerdo
2016-02-11 01:14 roko100789: E frescurento
2016-02-11 01:15 FelipeLink: nah deboas
2016-02-11 01:15 roko100789: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/885133 Amane - Space Time (Amane Hardcore Remix) [Rerum Spatium Tempusque]]
2016-02-11 01:15 FelipeLink: se qusier pode ate usar move fun to ou ate mesmo pt
2016-02-11 01:15 roko100789: Vai querer o tópico então?
2016-02-11 01:15 roko100789: af
2016-02-11 01:15 roko100789: Sem graça
2016-02-11 01:15 roko100789: É pouca coisa
2016-02-11 01:15 FelipeLink: :c
2016-02-11 01:15 FelipeLink: blz vamo irc mesmo
2016-02-11 01:15 roko100789: 01:05:692 - Os bns provavelmente vão reclamar dessas sete notas
2016-02-11 01:16 roko100789: Porque só cinco são reproduzidas no som principal
2016-02-11 01:16 roko100789: Isso se segue por boa parte da música
2016-02-11 01:16 roko100789: Mas não precisa mudar agora não
2016-02-11 01:16 roko100789: Só vai anotando
2016-02-11 01:16 roko100789: Aliás, nem anota nada, só da uma olhada no chatlog quando estiver com vontade de editar
2016-02-11 01:16 roko100789: Não tem nenhuma mudança que implique em outra, então tu pode fazer isso mais tarde
2016-02-11 01:17 roko100789: 01:25:063 - 01:44:349 - Os bns podem reclamar dessa sessão
2016-02-11 01:17 roko100789: Porque você tem espaço o suficiente pra seguir pitch, mas não está seguindo
2016-02-11 01:18 roko100789: Pode fazer algo como 1 3 4 | 1 2 3 | 1 2 4 
2016-02-11 01:18 roko100789: E por ai vai
2016-02-11 01:18 roko100789: O importante é que as notas sejam crescentes, já que é o som
2016-02-11 01:18 roko100789: 01:46:320 - Aqui você já tem o piano, então não precisa seguir o pitch
2016-02-11 01:18 roko100789: Fun fact sobre o 4k
2016-02-11 01:18 FelipeLink: e.e
2016-02-11 01:18 FelipeLink: o pitch ta inverse
2016-02-11 01:18 roko100789: 02:19:749 - Esses minijacks não fazem sentido
2016-02-11 01:18 FelipeLink: entao é deboas
2016-02-11 01:18 roko100789: Não tem pitch pra ele não
2016-02-11 01:19 roko100789: E você não fez nenhum outro durante essa sessão
2016-02-11 01:19 roko100789: 02:30:892 - Não sei se foi intencional, mas você colocou uma nota ao lado do som do piano
2016-02-11 01:19 roko100789: Os bns podem reclamar, tu vai precisar explicar qual a utilidade delas
2016-02-11 01:19 roko100789: No caso
2016-02-11 01:19 roko100789: 02:30:892 - 02:41:520 - Durante toda essa sessão
2016-02-11 01:20 FelipeLink: hm
2016-02-11 01:20 FelipeLink: nn isso existe roko
2016-02-11 01:20 FelipeLink: é os 'ts,ts,ts,ts,''
2016-02-11 01:20 roko100789: Sim, eu sei
2016-02-11 01:20 roko100789: Só tô falando pra tu estar preparado pra justificar
2016-02-11 01:20 roko100789: Porque o som não carrega hitsound
2016-02-11 01:20 FelipeLink: entendo
2016-02-11 01:20 FelipeLink: sim sim, só a ln ta com hitsound
2016-02-11 01:21 roko100789: 02:54:035 - Durante toda essa sessão, tu fes esses chordmash (ou chame como quiser)
2016-02-11 01:21 roko100789: Eu honesmante não acho que o som permita isso
2016-02-11 01:21 roko100789: No máximo um [34 23 14]
2016-02-11 01:21 roko100789: Mas espere um bn check
2016-02-11 01:21 FelipeLink: sim sobre isso vo espera um bn mesmo
2016-02-11 01:21 roko100789: Aliás, isso aparece nas tuas duas sessões de kiai, acho
2016-02-11 01:21 FelipeLink: s
2016-02-11 01:22 roko100789: 03:55:920 - A transição tá cedo demais
2016-02-11 01:22 FelipeLink: k
2016-02-11 01:22 roko100789: Tenta extender o [14 23 14 23] até pelo menos 03:56:435 - 
2016-02-11 01:22 roko100789: Isso se repete em outras sessões
2016-02-11 01:22 roko100789: Vou pescar elas, pera
2016-02-11 01:22 roko100789: 05:45:635 - 
2016-02-11 01:23 roko100789: 06:07:577 - 
2016-02-11 01:23 roko100789: Essas ai
2016-02-11 01:23 roko100789: 03:58:792 (238792|1,238835|0) - É por isso que você não fica conversando enquanto faz maps xd
2016-02-11 01:24 roko100789: Já que você tá usando do inverse pitch, tenta fazer um  1 2 3 nesse trecho (03:58:663 - )
2016-02-11 01:24 FelipeLink: LMAO
2016-02-11 01:24 FelipeLink: K
2016-02-11 01:24 roko100789: Além de ter feito 2 1 3, você usou snap errado
2016-02-11 01:24 roko100789: Seu jej
2016-02-11 01:24 roko100789: Por fim
2016-02-11 01:24 roko100789: 06:08:949 - 
2016-02-11 01:25 roko100789: O som das batidas acaba aqui
2016-02-11 01:25 FelipeLink: n tem como tirar esse minijackl
2016-02-11 01:25 FelipeLink: ;w;
2016-02-11 01:25 roko100789: Você tem apenas uma batida de fundo
2016-02-11 01:25 FelipeLink: eu tava falando com o guil
2016-02-11 01:25 roko100789: 06:08:949 (368949|0,368949|1) - Essas notas não deveriam existir
2016-02-11 01:25 roko100789: Digo
2016-02-11 01:25 roko100789: Deveria ser só uma, não duas
2016-02-11 01:25 roko100789: As lns deveriam ir pra coluna da nota que você vai tirar (se você tirar)
2016-02-11 01:25 FelipeLink: OH
2016-02-11 01:25 roko100789: Se você for aplicar isso, vai ter algumas mudanças pra fazer
2016-02-11 01:25 roko100789: E é só isso mesmo

Now stop complaining about your life and go rank dis, dumb.

-[C R A Z Y]- wrote:

This version is more comfortable to play

ajeemaniz wrote:

alright


[memetime]
generally i only point out the problem once, it seems the problem repeating as the song repeats by itself.. self mod is really encouraged, and find some couple more mods as well..

and the hitsound

> View - Show Sample Name..
please get rid any double & missing hitsound like http://puu.sh/ouZrL.jpg at 00:17:349 (17349|2,17349|3) - , keep using single hitsound & fix them in the whole map, you know what to do Fixed the whole map, yeahh i didnt see that lmao.

i won't give a green light for now..

00:15:120 (15120|0,15635|0) - add 1/1 LN like how you did at 00:12:377 (12377|0,12892|0) -
00:19:235 (19235|1) - add 1 on 4
00:23:520 (23520|3,23692|1) - move to 3 - 4
00:26:263 (26263|0,26435|2) - ^ 2-1
Fixed.

00:16:492 (16492|0,16663|0,16835|0,17006|0,17177|3,17349|3,17520|3,17692|3) - http://puu.sh/ouZBF.jpg please use proper measure in this js part, the transition would feel smoother after 4th beat.. http://puu.sh/ouZFk.jpg

00:38:435 (38435|3,38606|3,38777|3,38949|3,39120|3,39292|3,39463|3,39635|3) - same goes to this part and so on for the rest... '-'
oh, yeah sure, fixed all

00:32:777 (32777|1,32949|3,33120|2) - seems like you forgot to layer the synth here, like you did at 00:30:035 (30035|2,30120|2,30206|1,30292|2,30377|0) - ? except you only layer the hat, you can ignore this
i think i just missed that, anyway fixed.

01:02:435 (62435|1) - you may start using 123412341234 half to end of the 1/8 stream.. just for some variation
I changed some of the bursts to what you suggested for variation, so its like 1 burst like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5012746 Then one like you said: http://puu.sh/ovqum/0059c39ac1.jpg
01:05:692 (65692|2,65692|1) - 01:08:435 (68435|3,68435|1) - 01:11:177 (71177|0,71177|2) - http://puu.sh/ouZPO.jpg
i removed this because this part is kinda cancer ;w;, but sure fixed
01:19:749 (79749|2) - what is this WTF, dont ask meeee ~runs~

01:38:863 (98863|1) - you know you almost don't use 1st lane for the ln... move some LN to 1st lane fixed

02:12:892 (132892|1,132977|2) - ctrl + h i got what you want to say, fixed and ''added some variation'' for this part

02:17:006 (137006|1,137006|0,137092|2,137092|1) - move 1 column to right, and 02:17:177 (137177|3) - to 2.. we already talked about this irc.. you know how to variate them without breaking the PR itself..
plus, the mini jack usage only uses index finger in 2nd and 3rd lane, i think you can use 1st & 4th lane for the mini jack as well to make it less repetitive.. http://puu.sh/ov03B.jpg Oki, i variated a little more in there

03:25:492 - also, nice spacing.. but i suggest you to ask people about the spacing usage in this part and in the rest because i can hear hear something you can put in between of these empty spot Fixed all.

03:57:977 (237977|3) - 4321 4321 4321 4321 as i told earlier already fixed that,but i should give a note: this part 03:57:977 (237977|3) - its not the 4321 4321, the previous was(just saying that because i'm not ignoring or rejecting your mod, i just applied in the previous stream)

again.. i don't want to give a long wall of text about hitsound mod this time, you have to fix missing & double hitsound because its so messy around 04:37:063 (277063|3) - already fixed in the first comment :v, thanks for advice tho

05:00:206 (300206|1,300206|0,300292|3,300377|1,300377|2) - hmm, maybe you want to put doublets to layer the synth http://puu.sh/ov0j1.jpg , applies to 05:01:663 (301663|1) - as well
Okay added, and added in the other parts too for consistency
[overall]
comfortable map, fix small technical problem here and there, get couple more mods, and fix the whole hitsound would be great..
Thank you, fixed all the problems i think, the hitsound too.

Hanss wrote:

00:39:806 (39806|3) - , maybe at this section make the burst transitions a little smoother and the transition after the burst going back into the calm section a bit less awkward. Other than that the rest made sense and was really fun, good luck :3

_underjoy wrote:

why am I even doing this

IRC

21:26 FelipeLink: Oh hey
21:26 FelipeLink: Underjoy
21:26 FelipeLink: can i ask you a favor pls?
21:26 _underjoy: huh what is it
21:26 _underjoy: also hello
21:29 FelipeLink: hello
21:29 FelipeLink: uh so
21:29 FelipeLink: Can you testplay my map and gimme a feedback about it?
21:29 FelipeLink: i need some feedback from the community
21:29 FelipeLink: then i can get a bubble
21:29 FelipeLink: ;-;
21:29 _underjoy: uh
21:29 _underjoy: is it hard
21:30 FelipeLink: 4,8
21:30 FelipeLink: 4k
21:31 _underjoy: uh
21:31 _underjoy: okay
21:31 _underjoy: np please
21:31 FelipeLink: prob a little underrated, but yeah
21:31 *FelipeLink is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/885133 Amane - Space Time (Amane Hardcore Remix)]
21:31 _underjoy: are you kidding mer
21:32 FelipeLink: no
21:32 FelipeLink: i'm serious ;w;
21:32 FelipeLink: i really like the music
21:32 FelipeLink: i made a vocal version lmao
21:32 _underjoy: what
21:32 _underjoy: vocal space time
21:33 _underjoy: uhh okat
21:33 _underjoy: okay*
21:39 FelipeLink: pls write your feedback in the thread, becuz i need for get da bubble ;w;
21:39 FelipeLink: DC ;w;
21:39 FelipeLink: t/411774
21:39 _underjoy: heh apologies for not taking it seriously
21:39 _underjoy: sorry, I don't mod stuff until 16th of May
21:39 FelipeLink: oh
21:39 FelipeLink: dont worry
21:39 FelipeLink: nono
21:39 FelipeLink: not mod
21:39 _underjoy: all I can do is give you some advices on spot
21:39 FelipeLink: just a feedback
21:40 FelipeLink: pls
21:40 FelipeLink: yeah
21:40 FelipeLink: thats all i need
21:40 _underjoy: but can't we IRC
21:40 FelipeLink: hm
21:40 FelipeLink: sure
21:40 FelipeLink: about vocal version: http://puu.sh/oxYrr/7c456e6d55.mp3
21:40 _underjoy: well first of all
21:40 FelipeLink: and yes, i'm retard
21:40 _underjoy: send that to spy
21:40 FelipeLink: lmao
21:40 FelipeLink: why
21:41 _underjoy: to show him how it should be done lol
21:41 _underjoy: anyway
21:41 _underjoy: the sections before choruses
21:41 _underjoy: I think you should emphasis other sounds
21:41 _underjoy: because they are same difficulty (or harder) than choruses
21:41 FelipeLink: hm
21:41 _underjoy: like, chord every 1/1 maybe, with keeping the jacks
21:42 FelipeLink: can you show me when i should do that?
21:42 _underjoy: 02:41:863 -
21:42 _underjoy: 04:20:606 -
21:43 _underjoy: thats just personal opinion though
21:43 _underjoy: emphasising the kich
21:43 _underjoy: kick*
21:43 _underjoy: also one more thing
21:43 FelipeLink: as a hand?
21:43 _underjoy: noo
21:43 _underjoy: jump would suffice
21:44 _underjoy: 02:31:577 (151577|1,151577|0,151920|1,151920|0,152263|1,152263|0,152606|1,152606|0,152949|1,152949|0,153292|1,153292|0) -
21:44 _underjoy: I liked the idea
21:44 _underjoy: why didn't you make later chords in the same way
21:44 FelipeLink: oh
21:44 FelipeLink: oki
21:44 _underjoy: thats all I can really say
21:44 _underjoy: oh wait there's last thing
21:45 _underjoy: you open up bursts with [23][14] jumptrills most of the time
21:45 _underjoy: give me some love and open them with [14][23] pls
21:45 _underjoy: not all but some at least haha
21:45 FelipeLink: sure, actually i'll ask guil help to variety some of the jumpjacks
21:46 FelipeLink: thanks btw, can you post this on thread?
21:46 _underjoy: the jumpjacks weren't an issue though
21:46 _underjoy: I wasn't just focused on actually hitting them
21:46 _underjoy: uhh okay

aitor98 wrote:

As Felipe requested me a feedback, I just want to let here a comment and reasoning. No kudo

IRC Answer

21:57 FelipeLink: Hello
21:58 aitor98: Hiii
21:58 aitor98: D
21:58 FelipeLink: i know this is sudden, i dont think you know me tbh, but i know you're a good 4k player(you play step too right?) uh i know its weird, but can i ask you for a testplay and a feedback about my map?
21:58 aitor98: I play sm sometimes
21:58 aitor98: But I mainly play osu
21:58 aitor98: Yeah
21:58 aitor98: /np
21:58 aitor98: with feedback do you mean mod?
21:58 aitor98: Or just a simple comment
21:59 FelipeLink: simple comment
21:59 aitor98: okey
21:59 aitor98: np
21:59 *FelipeLink is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/885133 Amane - Space Time (Amane Hardcore Remix)]
21:59 FelipeLink: ajeemaniz asked me to get some feedback from the community
21:59 aitor98: that's good
22:05 aitor98: Well
22:06 aitor98: overall is good
22:06 aitor98: But I saw something
22:06 FelipeLink: hm
22:06 aitor98: 02:28:149 (148149|0) -
22:06 aitor98: That keysound
22:06 aitor98: or hitsound
22:06 aitor98: whatever
22:06 aitor98: mm
22:06 FelipeLink: hm
22:06 FelipeLink: didnt liked?
22:06 aitor98: I dislike about it
22:06 aitor98: Yeah
22:07 FelipeLink: Okay sure, can you post this on the thread?
22:07 FelipeLink: i'll remove
22:07 FelipeLink: p/5075222#p5075222
22:07 aitor98: I want to reason it
22:08 FelipeLink: hm
22:08 aitor98: It's the part that you have set the bass, that's like the restarting of the song
22:08 aitor98: And I think that It's suposed to be a relaxing part
22:08 aitor98: Without strong basses
22:08 aitor98: I don't know if you know what I mean
22:08 FelipeLink: No, i understand
22:09 FelipeLink: i'll remove right now
22:10 FelipeLink: but can you say this on the thread? p/5075222#p5075222
22:10 aitor98: Done

Guilhermeziat wrote:

Here's a mod. Most of the talking was done by me because we were in voice channel on discord.

chat mod + voice

2016-04-27 17:45 FelipeLink: 02:08:949 (128949|3) -
2016-04-27 17:46 Guilhermeziat: 02:08:949 (128949|3) - a partir daqui
2016-04-27 17:47 Guilhermeziat: 02:08:949 (128949|3) -
2016-04-27 17:47 Guilhermeziat: 02:19:920 -
2016-04-27 17:48 Guilhermeziat: 02:20:349 (140349|3,140349|2,140606|2,140606|3) -
2016-04-27 17:49 FelipeLink: 02:52:835 (172835|1) -
2016-04-27 17:49 Guilhermeziat: 02:58:149 (178149|2,178149|3,178235|2,178235|1) -
2016-04-27 17:50 Guilhermeziat: 02:58:149 (178149|1,178149|3,178235|2,178235|1) -
2016-04-27 17:50 Guilhermeziat: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5027557 assim é muito melhor
2016-04-27 17:50 Guilhermeziat: do que tá agora por exemplo
2016-04-27 17:52 Guilhermeziat: 03:03:635 (183635|3,183635|2,183720|2,183720|1) - nessa parte
2016-04-27 17:52 Guilhermeziat: a diferença dos tons é maior
2016-04-27 17:53 FelipeLink: 03:03:806 (183806|0) -
2016-04-27 17:53 Guilhermeziat: HAHAHAAAAHAHAHA
2016-04-27 17:54 Guilhermeziat: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5027578
2016-04-27 17:54 Guilhermeziat: fica mais legal, considerando essa parte da musica em si
2016-04-27 17:55 Guilhermeziat: 03:12:035 (192035|0,192035|3,192120|2,192120|1,192206|0,192206|3,192292|1,192292|2,192377|0,192377|3,192463|1,192463|2,192549|0,192549|3,192635|2,192720|0,192720|1,192806|2,192806|3,192892|0,192892|1,192977|2,192977|3,193063|1,193063|0,193149|3,193149|2,193235|0,193235|1,193320|2,193320|3) -
2016-04-27 17:55 Guilhermeziat: só tem 14 23
2016-04-27 17:55 Guilhermeziat: 12 34
2016-04-27 17:55 Guilhermeziat: seria legal se tu botasse 13 24
2016-04-27 17:56 Guilhermeziat: 03:22:749 - aqui n tem nota mesmo né
2016-04-27 17:56 Guilhermeziat: 03:25:577 (205577|3,205577|2,205663|1,205663|2,205749|3,205749|0) - mesmo caso do de cima que eu tinha falado, mudança maior de tons
2016-04-27 17:57 Guilhermeziat: 03:16:749 -
2016-04-27 17:57 Guilhermeziat: 03:18:635 -
2016-04-27 17:57 Guilhermeziat: 03:20:006 -
2016-04-27 17:57 Guilhermeziat: 03:21:892 -
2016-04-27 17:57 Guilhermeziat: 03:22:749 -
2016-04-27 17:59 FelipeLink: 02:54:035 (174035|0,174035|1,174120|2,174120|1,174206|3,174206|0) -
2016-04-27 17:59 FelipeLink: esse, tal jeito
2016-04-27 17:59 FelipeLink: 02:55:406 (175406|2,175406|3,175492|1,175492|2,175577|0,175577|3) -
2016-04-27 17:59 FelipeLink: tal jeito
2016-04-27 18:02 Guilhermeziat: 02:54:035 (174035|1,174035|0,174120|1,174120|2,174206|3,174206|0) - deixa assim
2016-04-27 18:02 Guilhermeziat: 02:55:406 (175406|3,175406|2,175492|2,175492|1,175577|0,175577|3) - essa também deixa assim
2016-04-27 18:02 Guilhermeziat: 02:56:777 (176777|1,176777|0,176863|1,176863|2,176949|3,176949|0) - essa também
2016-04-27 18:05 Guilhermeziat: 02:58:149 (178149|2,178149|3,178235|1,178235|2,178320|3,178320|0) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5027635
2016-04-27 18:05 Guilhermeziat: 02:59:520 (179520|1,179520|0,179606|2,179606|1,179692|3,179692|0) - deixa
2016-04-27 18:05 Guilhermeziat: 03:00:892 (180892|2,180892|1,180977|2,180977|3,181063|1,181063|0) - deixa
2016-04-27 18:07 Guilhermeziat: 03:02:263 (182263|0,182263|1,182349|1,182349|2,182435|3,182435|0) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5027645
2016-04-27 18:08 Guilhermeziat: 03:03:635 (183635|3,183635|2,183720|1,183720|2,183806|0,183806|3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5027657
2016-04-27 18:08 Guilhermeziat: 03:05:006 (185006|1,185006|0,185092|2,185092|1,185177|0,185177|3) - muda o primeiro pulo pra 13
2016-04-27 18:09 Guilhermeziat: 03:06:377 (186377|3,186377|2,186463|1,186463|2,186549|0,186549|3) - muda o primeiro pra 24
2016-04-27 18:10 Guilhermeziat: 03:09:120 (189120|3,189120|2,189206|2,189206|1,189292|0,189292|3) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5027671
2016-04-27 18:11 FelipeLink: 03:05:006 (185006|3,185006|0,185092|2,185092|1,185177|3,185177|0) -
2016-04-27 18:12 Guilhermeziat: 03:11:863 (191863|2,191863|3,191949|2,191949|1) - po isso aqui ta estranho
2016-04-27 18:12 FelipeLink: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5027690
2016-04-27 18:14 Guilhermeziat: 03:15:977 (195977|0,195977|1,196063|2,196063|1,196149|3,196149|0) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5027702
2016-04-27 18:14 Guilhermeziat: lembrando pra só considerar o que tá em azul
2016-04-27 18:15 Guilhermeziat: 03:17:349 (197349|3,197349|2,197435|2,197435|1,197520|0,197520|3) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5027708
2016-04-27 18:16 Guilhermeziat: 03:18:720 (198720|1,198720|0,198806|2,198806|1,198892|3,198892|0) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5027710
2016-04-27 18:17 Guilhermeziat: 03:20:092 (200092|2,200092|3,200177|1,200177|2,200263|3,200263|0) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5027716
2016-04-27 18:17 Guilhermeziat: 03:21:463 (201463|1,201463|0,201549|2,201549|1,201635|0,201635|3) - deixa
2016-04-27 18:18 FelipeLink: 03:25:577 (205577|2,205577|3,205663|2,205663|0,205749|3,205749|0) -
2016-04-27 18:18 Guilhermeziat: 03:22:835 (202835|2,202835|1,202920|2,202920|3,203006|0,203006|1) -
2016-04-27 18:20 Guilhermeziat: 03:22:835 (202835|3,202835|1,202920|2,202920|3,203006|0,203006|1) - muda o 34 pra 24
2016-04-27 18:20 Guilhermeziat: 03:24:206 (204206|3,204206|1,204292|1,204292|2,204377|3,204377|0) - muda o 12 pra 24
2016-04-27 18:20 Guilhermeziat: 03:25:577 (205577|2,205577|3,205663|1,205663|0,205749|3,205749|0) -
2016-04-27 18:21 Guilhermeziat: deixa
2016-04-27 18:23 Guilhermeziat: 03:26:949 (206949|0,206949|1,207035|1,207035|2,207120|0,207120|3) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5027757
2016-04-27 18:23 Guilhermeziat: 03:28:320 (208320|2,208320|3,208406|2,208406|1,208492|0,208492|3) - mirror da foto
2016-04-27 18:24 Guilhermeziat: 03:29:692 (209692|1,209692|0,209777|1,209777|2,209863|0,209863|3) - igual a foto
2016-04-27 18:24 Guilhermeziat: 03:31:063 (211063|2,211063|3,211149|1,211149|2,211235|3,211235|0) - 13 24 14
2016-04-27 18:25 Guilhermeziat: 03:33:806 (213806|1,213806|0,213892|1,213892|2) - ve iss aí tb
2016-04-27 18:26 Guilhermeziat: 04:31:577 - até 04:36:708 -
2016-04-27 18:26 Guilhermeziat: tu repete o 14
2016-04-27 18:26 Guilhermeziat: isso tá bom
2016-04-27 18:27 Guilhermeziat: 04:37:063 - a partir daqeui
2016-04-27 18:29 Guilhermeziat: faz algo desse tipo https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5027799
2016-04-27 18:29 Guilhermeziat: mudando o pulo a cada 1/1
2016-04-27 18:31 Guilhermeziat: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5027810 ou assim
2016-04-27 18:31 Guilhermeziat: olha
2016-04-27 18:31 Guilhermeziat: mudando a lcada 1/1
2016-04-27 18:35 Guilhermeziat: 04:43:749 (283749|2,283749|1,283835|2,283835|3,283920|1,283920|0) - deixa
2016-04-27 18:35 Guilhermeziat: 04:45:120 (285120|1,285120|2,285206|0,285206|1,285292|2,285292|3) - deixa
2016-04-27 18:35 Guilhermeziat: 04:46:492 (286492|1,286492|2,286577|2,286577|3,286663|0,286663|1) - deixa
2016-04-27 18:35 Guilhermeziat: 04:47:863 (287863|2,287863|1,287949|1,287949|0,288035|3,288035|2) - muda o 23 pra 13
2016-04-27 18:36 Guilhermeziat: 04:49:235 (289235|2,289235|1,289320|3,289320|2,289406|1,289406|0) - deixa
2016-04-27 18:37 Guilhermeziat: 04:50:606 (290606|0,290606|1,290692|1,290692|2,290777|0,290777|3) - deixa
2016-04-27 18:37 Guilhermeziat: NÃO
2016-04-27 18:37 Guilhermeziat: N DEIXA
2016-04-27 18:37 Guilhermeziat: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5027839 faz isso
2016-04-27 18:38 Guilhermeziat: 04:51:977 (291977|1,291977|2,292063|1,292063|3,292149|0,292149|2) - muda o 34 pra 24 e o 12 pra 13
2016-04-27 18:38 Guilhermeziat: 04:53:349 (293349|3,293349|2,293435|1,293435|2,293520|0,293520|1) - muda pra 34 23 12
2016-04-27 18:39 Guilhermeziat: 04:54:720 (294720|1,294720|2,294806|2,294806|3,294892|0,294892|1) - essa patterns é maaneira, deixa
2016-04-27 18:39 Guilhermeziat: 04:56:092 (296092|2,296092|1,296177|1,296177|0,296263|2,296263|3) - idem
2016-04-27 18:40 Guilhermeziat: 04:58:835 (298835|2,298835|1,298920|0,298920|3,299006|3,299006|2) - muda o 12 pra 14
2016-04-27 18:43 Guilhermeziat: 05:05:692 (305692|1,305692|2,305777|2,305777|3,305863|0,305863|1) - muda o 34 pra 14
2016-04-27 18:43 Guilhermeziat: 05:07:063 (307063|2,307063|1,307149|0,307149|1,307235|3,307235|2) - ctrl h
2016-04-27 18:43 Guilhermeziat: 05:08:435 (308435|2,308435|1,308520|3,308520|2,308606|1,308606|0) - igual ao primeiro
2016-04-27 18:44 Guilhermeziat: 05:09:806 (309806|1,309806|3,309892|2,309892|0,309977|1,309977|2) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5027875
2016-04-27 18:45 Guilhermeziat: 05:11:177 (311177|1,311177|2,311263|3,311263|2,311349|0,311349|1) - muda o 23 pra 12 e o ultimo 12 pra 14
2016-04-27 18:45 Guilhermeziat: 05:12:549 (312549|0,312549|1,312635|1,312635|2,312720|0,312720|3) - deixa
2016-04-27 18:46 Guilhermeziat: 05:13:920 (313920|2,313920|1,314006|2,314006|3,314092|1,314092|0) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5027887
2016-04-27 18:47 Guilhermeziat: 05:15:463 -
2016-04-27 18:47 Guilhermeziat: 05:15:292 (315292|2,315292|1,315377|0,315377|1,315463|0,315463|2) - 23 12 134
2016-04-27 18:47 Guilhermeziat: todo 1/1 a partir daí é hand
2016-04-27 18:47 Guilhermeziat: sem jumpjacks
2016-04-27 18:48 FelipeLink: k
2016-04-27 18:48 Guilhermeziat: na parte da dense js, deixa jumps

I hope this helps, good luck.

juankristal wrote:

that moment when you suddenly decide to brainstorm

17:03 FelipeLink: heyhey
17:03 FelipeLink: juan
17:03 FelipeLink: about rolling girl
17:03 juankristal: sup
17:03 juankristal: yes?
17:03 FelipeLink: you're gonna do 1 or 2 diffs?
17:03 juankristal: for now, I do think only 1
17:03 juankristal: if you need 2 tho I can try
17:03 FelipeLink: nah
17:03 FelipeLink: its good
17:04 FelipeLink: ^^
17:04 FelipeLink: can i ask you a favorr
17:04 juankristal: sure
17:04 juankristal: what is it?
17:04 *FelipeLink is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/885133 Amane - Space Time (Amane Hardcore Remix)]
17:04 FelipeLink: can you play this and give me a feedback?
17:04 FelipeLink: not mod, a feedback
17:04 juankristal: yeh
17:04 juankristal: give me 1 sec
17:04 FelipeLink: ajeemaniz asked me to get a few feedbacks, then i can get a bubble
17:04 juankristal: I want to score a top in one song first
17:05 FelipeLink: o
17:05 FelipeLink: sure~
17:05 *juankristal is playing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/442102 Rex - Heart of Witch [4K SC]] <osu!mania> |4K|
17:05 juankristal: ;(
17:05 FelipeLink: LOL
17:05 juankristal: RIP ME
17:07 *juankristal is playing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/885133 Amane - Space Time (Amane Hardcore Remix) [Rerum Spatium Tempusque]] <osu!mania> |4K|
17:07 juankristal: tempusque
17:07 juankristal: pls
17:08 FelipeLink: kek
17:15 juankristal: mmh
17:15 juankristal: there is one part
17:15 juankristal: 02:47:349 -
17:15 juankristal: that I think can be better
17:15 juankristal: the rest is just, meh
17:15 juankristal: I dont really love the song honestly XD
17:15 juankristal: the chart is huge amounts better than spys
17:15 FelipeLink: lmao
17:15 juankristal: I likee how you use the minijacks
17:16 FelipeLink: about 02:47:349 -
17:16 FelipeLink: what you think i should do?
17:16 juankristal: I am noot sure about some of them felt a bit weird
17:16 FelipeLink: i see, i'll take a look again tho
17:16 FelipeLink: can i ask you to post this on the thread?(then ajeemaniz can see that i'm really getting feedbacks)
17:16 FelipeLink: t/411774
17:17 juankristal: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5033964
17:17 juankristal: something like that
17:17 juankristal: you mark all the white beats with a double [12]
17:17 juankristal: so I feel it can bee better
17:17 juankristal: if you do more like a "repetitive" pattern all the way in that section
17:17 FelipeLink: yeah
17:18 FelipeLink: i'll take a look :v
17:18 juankristal: please
17:18 juankristal: not pacman face
17:18 juankristal: D:
17:18 juankristal: xDD
17:18 FelipeLink: sure, i promise
17:18 FelipeLink: actually changing right now
17:18 juankristal: should I post something then?
17:18 juankristal: cuz it was like
17:18 juankristal: only that
17:19 FelipeLink: yeah post about that
17:19 FelipeLink: even fi is a minor thing, everything counts
17:19 FelipeLink: if*
17:19 FelipeLink: say about the minijacks too
17:19 FelipeLink: its a major thing
17:20 juankristal: 03:09:120 (189120|0,189120|3,189206|1,189206|2,189292|3,189292|1) -
17:20 juankristal: that minijack
17:20 juankristal: should be red+blue imo
17:21 FelipeLink: oh, yeah
17:21 FelipeLink: missed that lmao
17:21 juankristal: 03:11:863 (191863|3,191863|2,191949|0,191949|1,192035|1,192035|3) - same here?
17:21 juankristal: 03:22:835 (202835|1,202835|2,202920|3,202920|0,203006|3,203006|1) -
17:21 juankristal: 03:25:577 (205577|3,205577|2,205663|2,205663|0,205749|3,205749|0) - double minijack
17:21 juankristal: rip
17:22 juankristal: 03:28:320 (208320|1,208320|3,208406|3,208406|2,208492|1,208492|0,208577|1) - made in purpouse?
17:22 FelipeLink: on that 3:25
17:22 juankristal: 03:31:063 (211063|2,211063|3,211149|0,211149|2,211235|3,211235|0) - ^
17:22 FelipeLink: its because of the beat tho
17:22 juankristal: got it
17:22 juankristal: I will ignore those ones then
17:22 FelipeLink: and fixed all the others
17:24 FelipeLink: 04:53:349 (293349|2,293349|3,293435|2,293435|1,293520|0,293520|1) - example about the ''beats''
17:24 juankristal: 04:37:235 - you can do something about this one as the first thing I pointed out
17:24 FelipeLink: yeah, i changed for something similar
17:25 juankristal: it works that way anyways cuz song is really repetitive
17:25 juankristal: 04:58:835 (298835|1,298835|2,298920|3,298920|0,299006|2,299006|3) -
17:25 juankristal: 05:05:692 (305692|2,305692|1,305777|3,305777|0,305863|1,305863|0) -
17:26 juankristal: well
17:26 juankristal: I think I am getting what you want to do
17:26 juankristal: for those minijacks
17:26 juankristal: is like the intro
17:26 juankristal: where you have no minijack then minijack
17:26 FelipeLink: yeah
17:26 juankristal: so yeah
17:27 juankristal: anyway
17:27 juankristal: hope my brainstorm was okey
17:27 juankristal: for at least something
17:27 juankristal: xD

hope it was something useful at least haha

Good luck here o7

spoonguy wrote:

A única coisa que realmente me incomoda no mapa são os minijacks logo antes das jumptrills:
03:11:949 -
03:33:806 -
05:01:577 -
05:23:606 -

postado aqui só para você fingir que isso foi um mod
abraços e boa sorte para ranquear isso aí

ajeemaniz wrote:

alright, sorry for late recheck

i repeat my previous mod about the spacing that placed everywhere around kiai part such 03:00:806 - 03:03:549 - and so on where you can actually add notes around there..
i also talked with [-Seiryuu-] as well, sei said its plays awkward.. tl;dr, add notes on those empty spots..

fix them & reply soon

ajeemaniz wrote:

i can't reply soon, but i know i can give a star icon!

no kud

00:35:692 (35692|0,36035|3,36377|0,36720|3) - add kick applied
00:43:235 (43235|3) - ^ applied
00:43:235 (43235|3,57635|3,57977|0,58320|3,58663|1) - ^ applied

01:41:606 (101606|3,102977|2) - 3 4 allright, changed

those piano reminds me with oboro :3 i love keysounding piano ;3

02:51:463 (171463|0) - add whistle with normal sampleset? applied

02:52:835 (172835|2,173177|3,173520|1,173863|1) - the hitsound placement is currently 1/1 kick, i suggest you to make kick snare kick snare in the rest of kiai instead, like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5113619
apply in the next kiais as well, the current hitsound placement rather monotonous Okay that was a long task, but done!

03:09:806 (189806|3) - kick fixed when i made the ''long task''
03:10:663 (190663|3,191006|0,191177|0) - kiiick fixed when i made the ''long task''
omg i thought you already fix these

03:18:720 (198720|1,198720|0,198806|0,198806|2,198892|3,198892|1,198977|0) - http://puu.sh/oLw19.jpg applied
03:19:920 (199920|2) - kick applied

03:56:263 (236263|3,236349|2,236435|3,236520|1) - missing & double kick, fix owo

03:56:263 (236263|3,236349|2,236435|3,236520|1,238149|3) - G7H piano where, silly OH, lmfao blame hitsounds on SB :cc, fixed

04:41:177 (281177|3) - w with normal sampleset like i said before applied

05:16:749 (316749|3) - 05:18:120 (318120|0) - 05:19:492 (319492|2) - 05:20:863 (320863|1) - add 1 more note to layer the synth, its ok to overnote in this ending part Ayyyyyy

05:23:692 (323692|1,323692|3,323777|0,323777|2,323863|3,323863|1,323949|2,323949|0,324035|3,324035|1,324120|0,324120|2,324206|1,324206|3,324292|2) - make this full 12 34 12 34 jumpstream for final stream! \:D/

05:23:692 (323692|3,323692|1,323777|2,323777|0,323863|1,323863|3,323949|0,323949|2,324035|1,324035|3,324120|2,324120|0,324206|3,324206|1,324292|2,342892|0,343063|1,343235|2,343406|3,343749|2,343920|3,344092|3,344606|0) - kick where lmao, fixed

05:57:977 (357977|2) - remove, 05:57:977 (357977|1) - snare applied
05:59:177 (359177|0,359263|0) - snare applied

alright that should covers everything, i will keep replying late but i know you did a great improvement.. good job!

Hydria wrote:

I'll be back after this mod, there's still a lot of work to do.

Nivrad00 wrote:

BN check

General

I'd like for you to add these tags: NISH beatmania IIDX 18 Resort Anthem 天音 Tribullets Beat U Down. This song is a remix of Space Time by NISH, which first appeared in beatmania IIDX 18 Resort Anthem. The remix was later released by the label Tribullets on the CD Beat U Down. On the Tribullets website the artist is credited as 天音, which according to Google Translate is Amane in Japanese. Here are my sources:

https://soundcloud.com/ama_loli/amane-space-time-amane ''ama_loli'' OH MY GOD AMANE IS A LOLI? IS THIS REAL, OWO
http://tribullets.info/index.cgi?no=40&continue=on
https://remywiki.com/Space_Time
Sure, added all the tags ^^
Hahah I get it there's a picture of space and a picture of time in the background
Wait... that clock looks familiar...
Is that Chronostasis?? https://osu.ppy.sh/b/459652 LMAO
Actually I do have a suggestion about the background. Combining two very detailed images makes your background look messy. I advise you to find another image. Ur choice tho
Ahem, lemme talk about a old history with you.
THE HISTORY ABOUT DA BG
A boy who has no creativity was kinda confused and lost, ''what i should put as a bg? ...'' then he just googled ''space'' and found this - https://encrypted-tbn0.gstatic.com/imag ... 7fRBDC0ojQ , after that he googled ''time in space'' and found that - https://i.ytimg.com/vi/aD0bstoPVco/maxresdefault.jpg , then he used a elemental tool who is know by ''PS'', and merged a new one and unique BG. Ajeemaniz asked this too, so there you go:
2016-05-03 12:28 ajeemaniz: can you give me the original bg of yours
2016-05-03 12:28 ajeemaniz: i mean, its from 2 background right?
2016-05-03 12:29 FelipeLink: Uh, i photoshopped this
2016-05-03 12:29 FelipeLink: x.x
2016-05-03 12:29 ajeemaniz: i know
2016-05-03 12:29 ajeemaniz: just give me the original bgs
2016-05-03 12:30 FelipeLink: https://encrypted-tbn0.gstatic.com/imag ... 7fRBDC0ojQ
2016-05-03 12:30 ajeemaniz: oh its 10:30 right now.. o.o
2016-05-03 12:30 ajeemaniz: i should working again though
2016-05-03 12:30 FelipeLink: oh
2016-05-03 12:30 FelipeLink: np ;w;
2016-05-03 12:30 ajeemaniz: fkkk i thought its still 9:30
2016-05-03 12:30 FelipeLink: https://i.ytimg.com/vi/aD0bstoPVco/maxresdefault.jpg
2016-05-03 12:31 FelipeLink: this is the 2 img i used
2016-05-03 12:31 ajeemaniz: i'll make a reminder to mod your map tomorrow
2016-05-03 12:31 FelipeLink: sure ^^
2016-05-03 12:31 ajeemaniz: alright, i need to go find customer again ;-;
2016-05-03 12:31 FelipeLink: ;-;
2016-05-03 12:31 FelipeLink: good luck on your work
2016-05-03 12:31 ajeemaniz: thank you!
But yeah, i'm open for changes on the bg! ^^

Rerum Spatium Tempusque

00:13:577 - this should be a double based on your previous patterns Yeah, thats makes sense
00:32:606 - double? oki
00:51:806 - same ^
01:03:463 - same maybe, like the doubles at 01:06:206 - and 01:08:949 - Okay!
02:08:949 - I agree with Hydria's suggestion. Also most of the jacks seem to be on the right hand; why not balance it out a little more? Yeah, i checked Hydria mod first, and fixed that, all are ''N J N J'' now, and i changed some right hand jacks to left hand
04:20:606 to 04:31:235 - this part has the same problem. The jack pattern is:
J N J J
J J N -
AND most of the jacks are on the right hand again. hm, i did a recheck on those patterns, looking your suggestions i made a change, thanks
02:50:692 (170692|0,170692|3,170777|1) - shouldn't this be single-double instead of double-single My bad, fixed
03:03:720 (183720|0,183806|1) - this should be a jack like 03:25:663 (205663|0,205749|0) - , 04:53:435 (293435|1,293520|1) - , and 05:15:377 (315377|0,315463|0) - yeah, i didnt see that, fixed, thanks!
03:09:292 - , 03:31:235 - , 04:59:006 - , 04:59:006 - , and 05:42:892 - I'm not sure why you decided to do this rhythm with the hitsounds

x x O x x O x x O x x O x x O x
(x = kick, O = snare)

when the rhythm in the song is clearly

x x O x x x O x x x O x x x O x

You should definitely change that ;n;
RAGING INSIDE, WAKE ME UP, CANT WAKE UP, ajeemaniz said to me to put '' x x O x x O, it was x x O x x x O'' anyway, changed.

05:24:377 - why didn't you change the jumptrill pattern halfway through like all the other times? If this is on purpose to emphasize the end of the map that's cool, but it just makes it easier yeah, it was to emphasize, but i can change sure~
05:38:435 - double oki!
05:27:806 (327806|2,328320|0) - and 05:33:292 (333292|2,333806|0) - why did you decide to put these on different lanes? it's inconsistent with every other repetition hm, yeah i got your point, fixed
05:45:977 - hitsound is doubled here woops, sorry : s

Although the chord size and jacks are fairly consistent, my overall impression is that the map is sort of messy. Not only do a lot of the patterns seem visually unattractive, there are several "accidental patterns" like 03:08:863 (188863|1,188949|0,189035|1,189120|0,189206|1,189292|0) - , where there's a trill for no reason, or 00:21:977 (21977|0,21977|1,22320|0,22320|1,22663|0,22663|1,23006|0,23006|1,23349|0,23349|1) - , where there's a bunch of identical jumps in a row for no reason. About the trill, i missed that, i changed, about some parts of those jumps in the same row, some players asked me to do that in some parts, and i agreed.(Guilhermeziat, Underjoy)

I have limited 4K experience though, so I could be making a mountain out of a molehill and I'm not going to ask you to fix it. That would be like asking for a remap anyway lol

Seems like a pretty fun marathon to me! I'll be back with a bubble once you respond to all my suggestions.

Hydria wrote:

Hydria wrote:

I'll be back after this mod, there's still a lot of work to do.

dropping in as promised just to point out something:
02:10:149 (130149|1,130149|0,130235|2,130235|3) - 02:11:520 (131520|3,131520|1,131606|0,131606|3) - 02:12:892 (132892|0,132892|2,132977|1,132977|3) - 02:14:263 (134263|2,134263|3,134349|2,134349|1) - 02:15:635 (135635|1,135635|0,135720|2,135720|3) - 02:17:006 (137006|1,137006|2,137092|1,137092|0) - 02:18:377 (138377|2,138377|0,138463|0,138463|3) - 02:19:749 (139749|2,139749|3,139835|1,139835|2) - 02:21:120 (141120|0,141120|1,141206|3,141206|2) - 02:22:492 (142492|2,142492|3,142577|2,142577|1) - 02:23:863 (143863|2,143863|0,143949|1,143949|3) - 02:25:235 (145235|0,145235|3,145320|2,145320|1) - 02:26:606 (146606|1,146606|0,146692|2,146692|3) - 02:27:977 (147977|3,147977|2,148063|2,148063|1) - 02:29:349 (149349|3,149349|0,149435|3,149435|1) -

all of these 2 chord patterns are inconsistent with one another, as it currently goes (in 4x4 blocks, right to left, N = no jack, J = jack):

N J N J
N J J J
N J N N
N J J -

if this is all intentional, ignore this post, but it should be fixed up into something like a N J N J pattern for all 4 blocks, right now it just doesn't make too much sense

03:09:292 - , 03:31:235 - , 04:59:006 - , 04:59:006 - , and 05:42:892 - I'm not sure why you decided to do this rhythm with the hitsounds

x x O x x O x x O x x O x x O x
(x = kick, O = snare)

when the rhythm in the song is clearly

x x O x x x O x x x O x x x O x

You should definitely change that ;n;
RAGING INSIDE, WAKE ME UP, CANT WAKE UP, ajeemaniz said to me to put '' x x O x x O, it was x x O x x x O'' anyway, changed.

Nivrad00 wrote:

03:09:292 - , 03:31:235 - , 04:59:006 - , 04:59:006 - , and 05:42:892 - I'm not sure why you decided to do this rhythm with the hitsounds

x x O x x O x x O x x O x x O x
(x = kick, O = snare)

when the rhythm in the song is clearly

x x O x x x O x x x O x x x O x

You should definitely change that ;n;
RAGING INSIDE, WAKE ME UP, CANT WAKE UP, ajeemaniz said to me to put '' x x O x x O, it was x x O x x x O'' anyway, changed.

03:10:320 - you put a kick here instead of a snare
04:59:006 - , 04:59:006 - you didn't change the hitsound rhythm here. If that's on purpose for variety, that's alright – I'm just making sure it wasn't an accident. Feel free to follow your own opinion, especially since two BNs gave you conflicting advice

Discussed about the BG on Discord. Everything else looks good!

ajeemaniz wrote:

oh yasss (fk im late to give the bubble orz)
but anyway grats!

juankristal wrote:

Alright Felipe, its S P A C E T I M E

Some hours of IRC...

18:14 FelipeLink: yo ln brother
18:14 juankristal: sup
18:15 FelipeLink: so, when you're free can  i ask for a bn check on my spacetime ?
18:15 *FelipeLink is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/885133 Amane - Space Time (Amane Hardcore Remix)]
18:15 FelipeLink: it has 1 bubble already
18:15 juankristal: sure, I was looking at it today
18:15 juankristal: have some time today?
18:16 FelipeLink: sure!
18:16 FelipeLink: <3
18:17 juankristal: lemme play something first
18:19 FelipeLink: sure, no problem
18:20 juankristal: there we go
18:20 FelipeLink: o:
18:21 *juankristal is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/885133 Amane - Space Time (Amane Hardcore Remix) [Rerum Spatium Tempusque]]
18:21 juankristal: alright, lets see
18:22 juankristal: I think I am going to play it first tbh
18:22 juankristal: xD
18:22 FelipeLink: lmao
18:22 FelipeLink: sure
18:29 juankristal: that was 
18:29 juankristal: a better than expected play
18:29 FelipeLink: ayy thanks xD
18:29 juankristal: anyways
18:29 *juankristal is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/885133 Amane - Space Time (Amane Hardcore Remix) [Rerum Spatium Tempusque]]
18:30 juankristal: usagi did check the hitsounds and all that, right?
18:30 FelipeLink: yeah
18:30 juankristal: cool
18:30 FelipeLink: usagi and nivraad
18:31 juankristal: 00:11:435 (11435|2) - 
18:32 juankristal: that is a ghost note, isnt it?
18:32 FelipeLink: hm
18:32 FelipeLink: true
18:33 juankristal: cool bubbled
18:33 juankristal: kappa
18:33 FelipeLink: lmao
18:34 juankristal: 00:03:206 (3206|1) - 00:00:463 (463|2,1835|2,3206|1) - 
18:34 juankristal: in general I think those are
18:34 juankristal: 00:04:577 (4577|2) - 
18:34 juankristal: 00:05:949 (5949|3) - 
18:34 juankristal: 00:07:320 (7320|0) - 
18:35 juankristal: 00:10:063 (10063|1) - 
18:35 juankristal: (that last one could be a good opportunity to move 00:10:149 (10149|2) - to 2 so you avoid the anchor there)
18:35 juankristal: 00:11:435 (11435|2) - 
18:35 juankristal: 00:12:806 (12806|2) - 
18:36 juankristal: dunno if that makes sense for you or something xD
18:36 FelipeLink: no, i kinda understand
18:37 FelipeLink: fixed all
18:37 juankristal: the rest of the intro looks cool
18:37 FelipeLink: aight
18:38 juankristal: 00:23:949 (23949|1) - shouldnt that one be 00:23:606 - there?
18:39 juankristal: I mean, the *chrink* sound or whatever that is sounds there
18:40 FelipeLink: hm
18:40 FelipeLink: right
18:41 juankristal: 00:25:320 (25320|2) - that sounds like ghost again
18:41 juankristal: 00:26:692 (26692|1) - that should be in 00:26:349 - 
18:42 FelipeLink: true
18:42 FelipeLink: changed
18:43 juankristal: 00:28:063 (28063|0) - I think this is also a ghost
18:43 juankristal: which would lead me to move 00:27:977 (27977|3) - that to 1
18:45 FelipeLink: right
18:45 juankristal: theen
18:46 juankristal: 00:29:435 - 
18:46 juankristal: here
18:46 FelipeLink: you mean the anchor?
18:46 juankristal: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6483143
18:46 juankristal: maybe that works better? 
18:46 FelipeLink: oh
18:46 juankristal: it kinda keeps a trill for left hand
18:46 juankristal: for the dududu pitch or that
18:47 juankristal: and then the pitch goes down so it works as a stair
18:47 FelipeLink: yeahh
18:47 FelipeLink: its keep the trill
18:47 FelipeLink: right, changed ^^
18:47 juankristal: :)
18:48 juankristal: cool
18:48 juankristal: now lets see, after the jumptrill burst
18:48 FelipeLink: sure
18:48 juankristal: I think those 00:43:149 (43149|0,43320|1) - are at the same pitch
18:49 juankristal: move the first to 2 maybe?
18:49 FelipeLink: hm, sure
18:49 juankristal: I mean, its something really minor
18:49 juankristal: xD
18:50 FelipeLink: lmao
18:50 FelipeLink: its good
18:50 juankristal: 00:49:235 - here
18:50 juankristal: 00:49:920 - 
18:50 juankristal: 00:50:606 - 
18:50 juankristal: I think you could use the exact same pattern in those 3 spots
18:50 juankristal: kinda fits the repetitiveness of the music
18:51 FelipeLink: right
18:51 FelipeLink: i'll change
18:51 juankristal: 00:51:292 (51292|0,51377|1,51463|2,51463|3,51549|0,51635|3) - and then you can ctrl+h that
18:52 juankristal: so you keep a trill for the pitch before the jumptrill and the decreasing pitch as well
18:52 FelipeLink: changed ^^
18:52 juankristal: sweet
18:53 juankristal: (btw, dont accept everything just because I am a BN, if thats the case)
18:53 juankristal: (tell me if you feel like it kinda doesnt fit or you have some sort of reasoning behind what I point)
18:53 FelipeLink: no, dont worry
18:54 juankristal: 01:14:092 - should probably add a not here
18:54 FelipeLink: i'll just accept what i think its right
18:54 juankristal: kinda did the same thing 01:11:349 - here before
18:54 FelipeLink: if you see the thread, i kinda accept 90% :v
18:54 juankristal: :v
18:54 juankristal: would probably 00:49:920 (49920|2,50006|3,50092|0,50092|2,50177|1,50263|2,50349|1,50435|3,50435|0,50606|1,50692|2,50777|3,50777|0,50863|2,50949|1,51035|2,51120|1,51120|0,51292|0,51377|1,51463|2,51463|3,51549|0,51635|3,74177|1,74263|2,74349|1,74435|2) - 
18:54 juankristal: wtf
18:54 juankristal: osu go home your are drunk
18:54 FelipeLink: what
18:54 juankristal: 01:14:177 (74177|2,74263|1,74349|2,74435|1) - there we go, ctrl+h that one and add a note where I said
18:54 FelipeLink: lmao
18:55 juankristal: 01:14:092 - here on 2
18:55 FelipeLink: http://puu.sh/s5xmX/f28b460f75.jpg like that?
18:55 juankristal: then, here 01:24:892 - that place has a burst sound as well
18:55 juankristal: yup
18:55 juankristal: exactly like that
18:56 FelipeLink: right
18:56 juankristal: for that place you can just make the same burst and move the double to [14]
18:56 juankristal: that should work fine
18:56 juankristal: you could do something else tho, if you feel like it
18:57 FelipeLink: yeah, i got it already dont worry ^^
18:58 FelipeLink: [14] is the best way tbh
19:00 juankristal: alright now
19:00 juankristal: 2 mins in already
19:00 FelipeLink: aight
19:00 juankristal: okey so this might not make that much sense but I am going to point it out anyways
19:01 juankristal: 02:09:206 (129206|1,129292|2,129463|1,129549|2,129720|2,129806|3) - all those are like a mini stair
19:01 FelipeLink: sure
19:01 juankristal: 02:10:320 (130320|1,130406|0,130577|1,130663|2) - tho, those ones
19:01 juankristal: are inverted
19:01 juankristal: lets see the rest
19:02 juankristal: yeah, its not worth at all
19:02 juankristal: ignore that xD
19:02 FelipeLink: lmao
19:03 juankristal: 02:11:777 (131777|3) - I would try to move that one to somewhere else tho
19:03 juankristal: 02:11:520 (131520|3,131606|3,131692|2,131777|3,131863|2) - that might be a bit unbalanced for right hand
19:03 juankristal: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6483299
19:03 juankristal: maybe like that
19:05 FelipeLink: i changed to something similar
19:05 FelipeLink: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6483313
19:06 juankristal: that works
19:07 juankristal: 02:31:235 - those triples are necesary?
19:08 juankristal: 02:33:635 - 
19:08 juankristal: 02:36:720 - 
19:08 juankristal: 02:39:120 - 
19:09 FelipeLink: i can remove if you want, but those triples is = jump(double) for the Bass at every 1/1(the white line) and 1 LN for the piano
19:11 juankristal: I mean, it doesnt really kill anything
19:11 juankristal: just wanted to know
19:11 juankristal: 02:41:863 - I remember I did something here last time I modded this LOL
19:11 juankristal: it looks cool
19:11 FelipeLink: hm
19:12 FelipeLink: cant remember lmao
19:12 juankristal: xD
19:12 juankristal: its fine
19:13 juankristal: thaat might be a bit too much 02:53:349 (173349|1,173520|1,173692|1,173863|1,174035|1,174120|1,174292|1,174463|1) - 
19:13 juankristal: 02:53:692 (173692|1,173777|0) - move that one slot to right and 02:53:863 (173863|1) - that one to left
19:13 FelipeLink: right, changed some notes to remove the anchor
19:13 juankristal: should be enough to fix it 
19:14 FelipeLink: oh lets see
19:15 FelipeLink: right
19:15 FelipeLink: fi9xed
19:15 juankristal: 02:55:406 - I would say something like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6483388
19:15 juankristal: to reduce the load in the right hand
19:16 FelipeLink: sure, its still make sense(no jack in the white line+ jack is on the right hand)
19:16 FelipeLink: changed
19:17 juankristal: 02:59:349 (179349|0,179435|2) - make those 3-4
19:17 juankristal: again, fits better the balance
19:18 FelipeLink: k
19:18 juankristal: oh my god the kiai never stops
19:18 juankristal: LOL
19:18 FelipeLink: lmao
19:19 FelipeLink: 2 kiai section baby :v
19:19 juankristal: 03:15:977 (195977|1) - move to 4
19:19 juankristal: again, balance the right hand a little bit
19:19 juankristal: left
19:21 juankristal: 03:38:006 (218006|1,218177|3,218692|3) - I think those are more ghosts
19:21 FelipeLink: right
19:22 juankristal: 03:40:749 (220749|2,221263|2) - same
19:22 juankristal: 03:42:120 (222120|1) - 
19:22 juankristal: 03:42:463 (222463|2,222635|2) - 
19:23 juankristal: 03:38:006 (218006|1,218177|3,218692|3,220749|2,221263|2,222120|1,222463|2,222635|2,225377|0,225720|3) - 
19:23 juankristal: fuck editor
19:23 juankristal: 03:45:377 (225377|0,225720|3) - just that
19:24 FelipeLink: hm, checking one per one, but i think its all ghost
19:25 juankristal: 03:47:092 (227092|1,227263|2) - 
19:25 juankristal: 03:41:263 (221263|2) - 
19:25 juankristal: 03:46:749 (226749|0) - 
19:25 FelipeLink: 03:41:349 -  ?
19:25 juankristal: 03:47:263 - readd that
19:26 juankristal: yeh
19:26 juankristal: its like
19:26 juankristal: dingilingilin dingilingin
19:26 FelipeLink: right, i checked all the spots
19:26 juankristal: 03:45:892 - and readd here I think
19:26 juankristal: oops
19:27 juankristal: 03:47:263 - 
19:27 juankristal: just those 2 readd
19:27 FelipeLink: right
19:28 juankristal: lemme replay it in case something exploed
19:28 FelipeLink: hm, i guess not
19:28 FelipeLink: but sure
19:29 juankristal: 03:40:749 (220749|2) - 
19:29 juankristal: 03:42:120 (222120|1) - 
19:29 juankristal: 03:42:463 (222463|2) - 
19:29 juankristal: 03:43:149 (223149|3) - 
19:30 juankristal: 03:45:892 (225892|3) - 
19:30 juankristal: fuck
19:30 juankristal: I am starting to hear stuff
19:30 FelipeLink: lmao
19:31 FelipeLink: i can clearly hear no ghost now tbh
19:31 juankristal: 03:38:006 (218006|1) - 
19:31 juankristal: 03:39:377 (219377|1) - 
19:31 juankristal: 03:39:720 - add
19:31 juankristal: 03:41:092 - ^
19:31 juankristal: 03:41:092 - 
19:31 juankristal: ^
19:32 FelipeLink: lmao
19:32 FelipeLink: ''i agree'' naisu osu!
19:32 juankristal: 03:43:149 - readd
19:32 juankristal: 03:43:492 (223492|2) - delete
19:32 juankristal: 03:44:863 (224863|2) - delete
19:33 juankristal: 03:45:892 - readd
19:33 FelipeLink: hm, ok
19:33 juankristal: 03:46:235 (226235|2) - and delete
19:33 juankristal: and THEN
19:33 juankristal: I think that would be it LOL
19:34 juankristal: I think I will kill myself now
19:34 FelipeLink: lmfao
19:34 FelipeLink: space time hardest music to map
19:34 juankristal: 03:42:635 (222635|2) - is that still alive?
19:34 juankristal: if so, move down to 03:42:463 - 
19:35 FelipeLink: no, its deleted, dont worry
19:35 juankristal: sweet
19:35 juankristal: can you update the map?
19:35 juankristal: so I can see how it looks for you
19:35 FelipeLink: sure
19:35 juankristal: yeez I feel sorry for all this super madness
19:35 FelipeLink: lmao
19:36 FelipeLink: i want to feel sorry :c
19:36 FelipeLink: ''if you update it will reset the bubble status'' is that fine?
19:36 juankristal: yeah
19:36 FelipeLink: k
19:36 juankristal: tell me when it is updated
19:36 FelipeLink: done
19:38 juankristal: 03:38:006 (218006|3) - that should be killed
19:38 FelipeLink: k
19:39 juankristal: 03:38:177 - add there
19:39 juankristal: 03:38:692 - ^
19:39 juankristal: 03:39:377 (219377|1) - kill
19:39 juankristal: 03:40:749 (220749|2) - move to 03:40:920 - 
19:39 FelipeLink: right
19:40 juankristal:  03:42:120 (222120|1) - delete
19:40 juankristal: and that looks fine now jeez
19:40 FelipeLink: lmao
19:40 juankristal: (oh fuck it repeats...)
19:41 FelipeLink: noo
19:41 FelipeLink: its dont repeat
19:41 FelipeLink: 03:47:692 -
19:41 FelipeLink: after this burst
19:41 FelipeLink: i mapped all in 1/4(the sound in the bg)
19:41 FelipeLink: and ignored the dingling
19:41 FelipeLink: cos it would be boring
19:42 juankristal: mmh, alright fair
19:43 FelipeLink: ^^
19:44 juankristal: might need some testplay tho
19:44 juankristal: like, you might want to play that later
19:44 juankristal: but first lets end this
19:45 FelipeLink: sure
19:45 juankristal: even tho I understand those jacks 04:21:806 (261806|2,261892|2,263177|1,263263|1) - 
19:45 juankristal: I find them super low to follow
19:45 FelipeLink: >_>
19:45 juankristal: uintil 04:31:586 - here
19:46 juankristal: 04:28:663 (268663|1,268749|1) - like, can you tell there is a jack there? xD
19:46 juankristal: 04:23:177 (263177|1,263263|1) - 
19:46 FelipeLink: well, hearing on 100% :VVV
19:46 juankristal: I have it in 100% xD
19:47 FelipeLink: well, i dont mind changing, but i kinda feel if i remove it would be so normal
19:48 juankristal: I think you just need to remove the 2 pointed out
19:48 juankristal: the other ones are clearly heareable
19:49 FelipeLink: oki
19:49 juankristal: alright, lets see
19:50 juankristal: almost done
19:50 juankristal: move 04:45:035 (285035|0) -  to 4balance again
19:50 juankristal: 04:44:777 (284777|0,284863|3) - maybe even ctrl+h that
19:50 FelipeLink: k
19:50 FelipeLink: hm yeah, after moving to 4, ctrl+h sounds good
19:51 juankristal: 04:47:777 (287777|1,287863|2) - move to right maybe
19:51 juankristal: 04:48:977 (288977|0,289149|3) - ctrl+h
19:52 FelipeLink: right
19:52 juankristal: LAST KIAI
19:53 juankristal: HYPE
19:53 FelipeLink: lmao
19:53 juankristal: 05:15:463 - why it suddenly transforms into triples?
19:54 FelipeLink: enphasis
19:54 FelipeLink: emphasis*
19:54 juankristal: I mean
19:54 juankristal: it feels a bit random
19:55 juankristal: and by a bit I mean quite a lot actually 
19:55 FelipeLink: hm its like the last ''hard'' section of the map
19:55 juankristal: xD
19:55 FelipeLink: lmao
19:55 juankristal: I know, I get what you attempt to do but
19:55 juankristal: it just feels super random
19:55 juankristal: 05:13:920 - also shouldnt this jack be left
19:56 juankristal: and this 05:15:292 - right
19:57 FelipeLink: o
19:57 FelipeLink: well
19:57 FelipeLink: about the triple/hands, i guess i can remove so
19:58 juankristal: like, I am trying to think some way to like
19:58 juankristal: making it harder and making it having sense
19:58 juankristal: but really, changing anything in the last kiai kinda forces you to do the same for the previous kiai
20:00 FelipeLink: i see, i understand
20:00 FelipeLink: i'm changing to jumps/doubles so
20:00 juankristal: mmh
20:00 juankristal: update then so I can check it with doubles
20:01 FelipeLink: ok, give me like 5mins i guess, need to check the pitch for each jack
20:01 juankristal: alright
20:04 FelipeLink: ok, its updated
20:04 juankristal: alright
20:04 juankristal: looks fine
20:04 juankristal: 05:27:206 (327206|2) - delete
20:05 juankristal: 05:28:063 - add
20:05 juankristal: 05:29:949 (329949|1) - delete
20:05 juankristal: 05:30:806 - add
20:05 juankristal: 05:31:320 (331320|1) - delete
20:05 juankristal: 05:32:692 (332692|2) - delete
20:06 juankristal: 05:33:549 - add
20:06 juankristal: 105:39:035 - add
20:06 juankristal: 05:39:120 - add to double
20:06 juankristal: 05:39:463 - ^
20:06 juankristal: 05:41:777 - same here
20:06 juankristal: 05:42:806 - add
20:07 FelipeLink: aight
20:08 juankristal: 05:50:006 - add
20:08 juankristal: 05:51:892 (351892|2) - move to 
20:08 juankristal: 05:52:063 - 
20:08 juankristal: to that time
20:08 juankristal: 05:52:749 - add
20:08 juankristal: 05:55:492 - add
20:08 juankristal: 06:00:977 -  add
20:08 juankristal: 06:01:063 (361063|0,361406|0) - doubles
20:09 juankristal: 06:03:720 - same thing
20:09 FelipeLink: I agree!
20:09 juankristal: and after that, update
20:09 FelipeLink: aight <3
20:10 FelipeLink: oki updated
20:10 FelipeLink: and added your name to the ''modder'' list <3
20:10 juankristal: ♥
20:10 juankristal: tell me when its updated
20:10 FelipeLink: done
20:11 juankristal: its says latest pending still
20:11 juankristal: wtf
20:12 FelipeLink: what
20:12 FelipeLink: let me update again
20:12 juankristal: lemme redownload
20:12 juankristal: nah
20:12 juankristal: my internet is being ass
20:12 FelipeLink: lmao
20:13 juankristal: 05:41:863 (341863|3,342206|3) - those should be doubles
20:13 FelipeLink: oh, right
20:14 juankristal: 06:03:120 (363120|0) - that as well
20:15 FelipeLink: i think that i deleted for accident :v
20:15 FelipeLink: readded
20:15 juankristal: 06:03:806 (363806|0,364149|0) - those as well
20:15 FelipeLink: added
20:16 juankristal: cool then, last update (hopefuly)
20:17 juankristal: also, there are 2 space time pics on the folder or its just me for redownloading it=
20:17 FelipeLink: let me see
20:18 FelipeLink: updated
20:18 FelipeLink: and its only for you i guess
20:18 FelipeLink: here its 1 pic
20:18 FelipeLink: http://puu.sh/s5CwL/f1e6747148.jpg
20:18 juankristal: alright then
20:25 FelipeLink: yolo, i saw a jack thats should not be, going to fix
20:25 juankristal: yup
20:25 juankristal: same
20:25 FelipeLink: the rest seems fine, just one jack wtf
20:25 juankristal: when was it
20:26 FelipeLink: sec
20:26 FelipeLink: 02:11:949 (131949|1,132035|1) -
20:26 FelipeLink: changed
20:26 juankristal: I think I saw 2
20:26 juankristal: that one was 1
20:26 FelipeLink: hm
20:27 juankristal: 06:00:635 (360635|0,360720|0) - 
20:27 juankristal: here
20:27 juankristal: 06:00:635 (360635|0) - just delete
20:27 FelipeLink: oh nice
20:27 FelipeLink: ty
20:27 juankristal: alright
20:27 FelipeLink: aight, i guess its ready?
20:27 juankristal: another update and we are done
20:27 juankristal: yup
20:28 FelipeLink: ok updating
20:28 FelipeLink: thanks for the long bn check <3
20:28 juankristal: no problem haha
20:28 juankristal: congratulations on earning my first bubble xD
20:28 FelipeLink: ayyyyyyyyyyyyyyy
20:28 FelipeLink: <3 <3 <3
20:28 juankristal: and of course, good luck with the qualification :D
20:28 FelipeLink: thanks ^^
20:29 juankristal: if I have to ask something to the last bn that check this would be the part of the 1/4 stream that isnt dingiling
20:29 juankristal: as we mentioned previously
20:29 juankristal: to have a second opinion there

And there goes my first bubble ayyyy!! Good luck with the qualification!

#2 Bubble.

[ S a k u r a ] wrote:

SPOILER

coincidence?

[ S a k u r a ] wrote:

SPOILER

coincidence?

Kuo Kyoka wrote:

I don't know, I did throught both maps for a while and taken these: http://puu.sh/s9wQw/3dc3c6790b.docx (Your map: Left // Spy's difficult: Right)
I mean, If you use some patterns as reference then it's fine, you can learn how the way it should be map but it's kind of a lot didn't it? My though so my apologies If I'm wrong

Hitsound / Keysound isn't an excuse tho
Also burst are repetitive but it's different from Spy's difficulty
Try to map with your own ideas, don't be strict with other maps

Soul Evans wrote:

Have you asked permission from spy for using his map as a base? i'm just pointing that out that it can be a good thing to have an okay from the person himself rather than asking BN if it's breaking the rules or not.
besides that you seem to take alot of things not just spy's patterns, but a photo shopped edit of over the tops BG with a banner that is a cut font from spy's space time font

also that red font hurts my eyes

pm and answer

Lenfried- wrote:

Though using spy's map as a base should have its limits and it was claimed that only minor parts are similar which i assume are the calmer sections so that's perfectly fine for me. Map got modded a couple of times so unintentional copied sections may have been identical due to mods that intend to cover the song with technicality.

Let's all appreciate how these people ignored the fact that this map used consistent minijacks for the chorus to stand out from spy's map

Kuo Kyoka wrote:

Still feel like it's Spy map but rearranged 50%, more jacks and stuffs
So on, nevermind what I said then, continue with your point of views. Did you done it the right way? I mean If you took Spy's map as reference, then you can take something like snaps, or some few technical patterns which help you map much more easier, but it's kind of overused, overall I check it, some patterns are just the same but rearranged by your own pattern (balance, jacks, pitch etc. or whatever). And I didn't say you copy Spy's pattern since you said you just reference so I respect it, I don't want to get involved to any dramas here, If you think you done the right thing, you can continue to do it by your ways, I do respect other's opinion so I don't have my will to change their minds If they don't want to. But just thinking about it then. As I said, don't get strict from any mappers and other's map, stay creative by your own ideas.

So, good luck. Hope my words didn't harrashing either.

Cra Dow wrote:

Felipe, de qualquer forma podias ter optado por fazer um mapa de 5k em vez de 4k (já que 4k e 5k são muito parecidos) assim evitavas esta discussão e critica.
Bem com todo o respeito não vejo muito espaço de melhoria no mapa do Spy ou num mapa de 4K (ranked) qualquer pois 4! é um número muito baixo, a não ser que o BPM seja muito alto e lhe falta notas para estar abordar todas que a música contem ( o mapa foi concluído abaixo da dificuldade que devia ter) acho que as pessoas deviam diversificar mais a quantidade de teclas que usam.
Bem boa sorte!

ps: Não ligues demasiado, a música é boa e o mapa é divertido

Loctav wrote:

I ran a text comparison of both versions of this map, and while you claim to be "inspired" by it, I figured that you literally just took the .osu file from the original, rearranged a few things here and there (hey, lets move this note from 4 to 3! https://puu.sh/scA5V/51f6117050.png) or added a few weirdly named hitsounds (https://puu.sh/scAw8/003fe08374.png).

I don't call that inspired. I call that plagiarism. Maybe you should map something entirely on your own before you start getting stuff qualified. Thank you very much.

EDIT: oh well, kudos to you, you made the very inspired choice to raise the HP from 8 to 9. Well if that isn't creative, eh?

EDIT2: the silver lining here is, well, that Spy's original is maybe not that bad at all, given that majority of it still gets qualified nowadays, especially by people who may or may not have been very unfair towards Spy and his map back then.

Loctav wrote:

weirdly named hitsounds (https://puu.sh/scAw8/003fe08374.png)

spoonguy wrote:

"Very touching, I cry every time"

Apparently Felipe is about to just do it anyway.
But don't ever use that argument again, alright?

Guilhermeziat wrote:

Hi, here's a mod for your map as you requested
There wasn't much to point out, but the map surely improved a whole lot since the first version, good job!

Plagiarism

00:08:092 (8092|0,8092|1,8177|1,8177|2,8263|3,8263|2) - This pattern right off the bat doesn't seem too friendly. I also have no idea if you're trying to keep some sort of consistency with the kicks on the first column from there on, it seems like you do but then it gets messed up? I don't know. My suggestion would be change the last jump to a 14 instead of 34, so the pattern isn't so aggressive. I'd also suggest you to try keeping the consistency with the kicks better on one of the columns (doesn't need to be coluimn 1) but I guess you're already layering them with the jumps, so up to you. Right, changed, yeah i'll try to stick to one column for consistency.

00:29:349 (29349|0,29435|1,29520|0,29606|1,29692|0,29777|1,29863|0,29949|1) - Seems a bit inconsistent compared to the rest of the patterning. Huge left hand trill all of a sudden, adds a bit of a spike, would be good if you smoothened that out, maybe something like this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6545993 (anchor on column 2 stays, but In my opinion that's a lot better than a big trill all of a sudden) This one does make me feel a bit uncomfortable, so please change it, doesn't need to be the way I showed on the screenshot, just make the patterning more fluid there.
O, right i agree with you, after adding some hands i guess i did some ohtrills @.@, well changed to something more smooth

00:30:035 (30035|2,30035|3,30120|2,30120|1,30206|1,30206|0) - Again with this kind of jumpjack. This one is fine, since I told you to change what comes before, but just letting you know that putting this right after the huge trill was a dick move (^:
(^:, well i guess its fine now because no more trill

00:51:977 (51977|2,51977|3,52063|1,52063|2,52149|0,52149|1) - Ok so, I'm going to ask you to pay attention to the synth sounds and see if you agree with me that making those jumps 34 12 and 14 (or 34 12 23, whatever floats your boat) makes a ton more sense than that. Second synth note goes an octave higher than the first one, I think it's only fair that you don't provoke a jack in between them.
oki, changed

02:08:092 (128092|0,128092|1,128177|3,128177|2,128263|1,128263|0,128349|2,128349|3) - This doesn't feel like it should be layered that hard, but I can't think of another way to map it. I do think only the jump at the 1/1 part pointed out deserves to be a jump, the rest doesn' t.
Oki, changed to single notes, jump only on the 1/1 now o/


Everything on the drops and in between is perfectly fine.

05:27:206 - Listen to the hi-hats here. Don't you think a mini-jack for them would go just fine? I think it's a good idea in my opinion, given you put them at the right place.. I could help you on that later if you want to. They happen in other times too:
05:28:663 -
05:29:863 - Here, they don't form a minijack, but I think that just making them consistent on the same column is already enough to produce a really fun pattern to play
05:31:235 -
05:32:692 -

And it goes on until the last burst. I think you'll be able to tell the rest of the times they happen, since they're so out there compared to the rest of the instruments.
i'll talk to you on private about this, maybe i'll apply

05:37:235 (337235|3,337235|2,337320|1,337320|2,337406|0,337406|1) - Again with this pattern. Just mirror it if you want, so at least this one will go the other way or something. The pattern is fine here since it's already at the end of the song and you don't need to worry about it being the beggining (^: but that's been repeated for like the 5th or 6th time throughout the song.
Oki, mirrored and changed a few notes here and the for jack avoidance

Good luck with your map.

shadowsnoop wrote:

Okay, checked every single note looking for possible conflicted placements between spy and felipe´s map.

Note: Voice chat was used.

FML

2016-11-11 17:38 shadowsnoop: 00:47:606 (47606|2,47692|3,47692|1,47692|0,47777|2,47863|0,47863|1) -
2016-11-11 17:41 shadowsnoop: 01:23:520 (83520|0,83520|2) -
2016-11-11 17:42 FelipeLink: 01:20:692 -
2016-11-11 17:42 FelipeLink: 01:20:692 (80692|0,80777|2) -
2016-11-11 17:44 shadowsnoop: 02:41:863 -
2016-11-11 17:47 shadowsnoop: 03:45:377 -
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2016-11-11 17:52 shadowsnoop: 02:53:006 (173006|2,173006|3,173092|1,173177|0,173177|3) -
2016-11-11 17:53 FelipeLink: oks
2016-11-11 17:53 shadowsnoop: 02:54:892 (174892|3,174977|2,175063|1,175149|0) -
2016-11-11 17:54 FelipeLink: k
2016-11-11 17:54 shadowsnoop: 02:55:920 (175920|0,176006|1,176092|3,176177|2,176263|1,176349|2) -
2016-11-11 17:56 shadowsnoop: 02:58:149 (178149|1,178235|2,178320|1,178320|3,178406|0) -
2016-11-11 17:59 shadowsnoop: 03:06:549 (186549|0,186635|1,186720|2,186806|3,186892|2,186977|1) -
2016-11-11 18:00 shadowsnoop: 03:07:492 (187492|3,187577|2,187663|3,187749|1,187835|2,187920|3,188006|2,188092|1,188177|3) -
2016-11-11 18:01 FelipeLink: k
2016-11-11 18:01 shadowsnoop: 03:15:463 (195463|2,195549|3,195635|1,195720|3,195806|2) -
2016-11-11 18:02 shadowsnoop: 03:16:920 (196920|2,197006|1,197092|0,197177|1) -
2016-11-11 18:04 shadowsnoop: 03:20:863 (200863|0,200949|3,200949|2,201035|1,201120|0) -
2016-11-11 18:05 FelipeLink: 02:42:206 (162206|1,162206|0,162292|2,162377|1,162463|2) - xksxkksx, changed
2016-11-11 18:06 shadowsnoop: 03:22:149 (202149|2,202235|1,202320|0,202406|2) -
2016-11-11 18:07 shadowsnoop: 03:23:520 (203520|1,203606|3,203692|1,203692|2,203777|0,203863|3) -
2016-11-11 18:09 shadowsnoop: 03:27:720 (207720|2,207806|0,207806|1,207892|3,207977|1,208063|2) -
2016-11-11 18:10 shadowsnoop: 03:28:577 (208577|3,208663|2,208663|0,208749|1,208835|3,208835|0,208920|1,208920|2,209006|3,209092|2,209177|0,209177|1) -
2016-11-11 18:11 shadowsnoop: 03:30:720 (210720|3,210806|1,210892|0,210977|1,211063|3,211149|2,211235|1) -
2016-11-11 18:12 FelipeLink: aight
2016-11-11 18:26 shadowsnoop: 00:19:235 (19235|1,19235|3,19406|0,19492|1,19577|2) -
2016-11-11 18:27 shadowsnoop: 00:24:892 (24892|0) - >2
2016-11-11 18:31 shadowsnoop: 00:42:035 (42035|0,42120|1,42206|2,42720|3,42806|2,42892|1) -
2016-11-11 18:31 shadowsnoop: 00:43:063 (43063|2,43235|2,43235|3,43320|1,43406|0,43577|1,43577|3) -
2016-11-11 18:32 shadowsnoop: 00:43:920 (43920|2,43920|3,44006|0,44092|1,44177|2,44263|0,44263|1,44435|3,44606|0,44777|1,44863|0,44949|3,44949|2,45035|0,45206|1,45292|3,45292|2,45549|3,45635|2,45635|0) -
2016-11-11 18:33 shadowsnoop: 00:48:549 (48549|0,48635|1,48720|3,48720|2,48892|3) -
2016-11-11 18:33 shadowsnoop: 00:50:777 (50777|0,50863|1,50949|2,51035|1,51120|2,51120|3) -
2016-11-11 18:34 FelipeLink: ay
2016-11-11 18:34 shadowsnoop: 00:53:349 (53349|0,53435|1,53520|2,53520|3,53606|0,53692|2,53777|1,53863|2,53863|0,53863|3) -
2016-11-11 18:35 shadowsnoop: 00:54:035 (54035|1,54120|2,54206|0,54206|1,54292|3,54377|2,54463|3,54549|0,54549|2) -
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2016-11-11 18:41 shadowsnoop: 01:25:063 - +1
2016-11-11 18:42 FelipeLink: k
2016-11-11 18:43 shadowsnoop: 02:07:749 (127749|1,127749|3,127920|0,127920|2,128092|3,128092|2,128177|0,128177|1,128263|3,128263|2,128349|0,128349|1,128435|3,128477|2,128520|1,128606|3,128606|0,128777|0,128863|0,128949|1,128949|2,128949|3,129035|0) -
2016-11-11 18:46 shadowsnoop: 02:30:892 (150892|3,150892|0,151063|2,151063|1,151235|3,151235|1,151235|0,151406|0,151406|2,151577|3,151577|2,151920|3,151920|0,152263|2,152263|0,152606|1,152606|0,152949|3,152949|0,153292|2,153292|0,153635|2,153635|1,153635|0,153806|1,153806|3,153977|2,153977|0,154149|0,154149|3,154320|2,154320|3,154663|3,154663|0,155006|2,155006|0,155349|1,155349|0,155692|3,155692|0,156035|2,156035|0,156377|1,156377|0,156549|3,156549|2,156720|1,156720|2,156720|... (message truncated)
2016-11-12 19:42 shadowsnoop: 03:37:063 (217063|2,217235|3,217320|0,217406|3,217749|2,217835|1,217920|0) -
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2016-11-12 19:43 shadowsnoop: 03:41:349 (221349|0,221435|1,221520|2,221520|3,221692|1,221863|3,221949|2,222035|0) -
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2016-11-12 19:44 shadowsnoop: 03:44:949 (224949|3,224949|0,225035|1,225120|3,225292|2,225292|1,225463|3,225549|1,225635|0) -
2016-11-12 19:44 shadowsnoop: 03:46:320 (226320|1,226320|0,226406|3,226492|0,226577|2,226663|0) -
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2016-11-12 19:48 shadowsnoop: 04:21:549 (261549|2,261635|0,261635|3,261720|1,261806|2,261892|2,261977|0,261977|3,262063|1,262149|2,262235|0,262320|1,262320|3,262406|2,262492|1,262577|0,262663|2,262663|3,262749|1,262835|0,262920|2,263006|1,263006|3) -
2016-11-12 19:49 shadowsnoop: 04:24:206 (264206|2,264292|1,264377|0,264377|3,264463|1,264549|2) -
2016-11-12 19:49 shadowsnoop: 04:24:806 (264806|0,264892|1,264977|2,265063|1,265063|3,265149|2,265235|0,265320|2,265406|1,265406|3) -
2016-11-12 19:49 shadowsnoop: 04:25:492 (265492|0,265577|2,265663|1,265749|3,265749|0,265835|2) -
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2016-11-12 19:51 shadowsnoop: 04:27:977 (267977|2,268063|1,268149|3,268149|0,268235|2,268320|1,268406|2,268492|1,268492|3,268577|0,268663|1,268749|2,268835|0,268835|3,268920|2) -
2016-11-12 19:51 shadowsnoop: 04:31:577 (271577|0,271663|2,271749|1,271835|3,271920|0,271920|1,272006|2) -
2016-11-12 19:53 FelipeLink: k
2016-11-12 19:53 shadowsnoop: 04:37:063 (277063|0,277149|1,277235|3,277406|3,277577|3,277663|1,277749|3,277835|1,277920|3) -
2016-11-12 19:55 shadowsnoop: 04:42:720 (282720|2,282892|3,282892|0,282977|2,283235|1,283235|2,283320|3,283406|1,283492|3,283577|0) -
2016-11-12 19:57 shadowsnoop: 04:49:749 (289749|3,289835|0,289920|2,290006|1,290092|0,290092|3,290177|2,290263|0,290349|1,290435|3) -
2016-11-12 19:58 shadowsnoop: 04:55:406 (295406|3,295492|2,295577|0,295577|1,295663|3,295749|1,295835|2,295920|1,295920|0) -
2016-11-12 20:04 shadowsnoop: parecido
2016-11-12 20:04 shadowsnoop: 05:11:606 (311606|0,311692|3,311692|2,311777|0,311777|1,311863|3,311949|2,312035|0,312035|1) -
2016-11-12 20:05 shadowsnoop: 05:12:377 (312377|3,314692|1,314777|2,314777|3,314863|0,314949|2,315035|1,315120|0) -
2016-11-12 20:05 FelipeLink: ?
2016-11-12 20:05 FelipeLink: LMAO
2016-11-12 20:05 shadowsnoop: oops
2016-11-12 20:06 shadowsnoop: 05:13:577 (313577|3,313663|1,313749|0,313835|1,313920|3,314006|2,314092|1) -
2016-11-12 20:08 shadowsnoop: 05:16:406 (316406|3,316492|2,316577|3,316663|2,316749|1,316835|2) -
2016-11-12 20:09 shadowsnoop: 05:20:435 (320435|3,320520|1,320606|0,320692|1,320777|3,320863|2,320949|3,320949|1) -
2016-11-12 20:10 shadowsnoop: 05:26:606 (326606|0,326777|3,326777|2,326949|2,327120|1,327120|3,327292|0,327377|1,327463|2,327463|3,327549|1,327635|2,327806|1,327806|3,328149|2,328149|3) -
2016-11-12 20:10 FelipeLink: JOOOOOOOOOOOOJ
2016-11-12 20:10 shadowsnoop: fuck yourself please 05:28:749 (328749|3,328835|0,328835|1,328920|2,329006|3,329092|1,329177|2,329177|0,329263|1,329349|3,329435|2,329520|1,329520|0,329692|1,329863|0,329863|2) -
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2016-11-12 20:11 shadowsnoop: 05:32:435 (332435|2,332606|3,332606|1,332777|0,332863|1,332949|3,332949|2,333035|0,333120|2,333292|3) -
2016-11-12 20:12 shadowsnoop: 05:34:320 (334320|3,334320|2,334406|0,334492|1,334577|0,334663|2,334663|3,334749|1,334835|0,334920|2,335006|3,335006|1,335177|2,335349|2,335349|3,335520|0,335606|2,335692|1,335692|3,335777|0,335949|1,336035|2,336035|3) -
2016-11-12 20:12 shadowsnoop: 05:37:492 (337492|2,337577|0,337663|1,337749|3,337920|2,338092|3,338263|2,338349|1,338435|3,338520|2,338606|1,338777|3) -
2016-11-12 20:13 FelipeLink: ;w;[
2016-11-12 20:13 shadowsnoop: 05:39:635 (339635|2,339720|1,339806|3,339892|0,339977|2,340063|1) -
2016-11-12 20:13 shadowsnoop: 05:40:320 (340320|2,340406|1,340492|3,340663|2,340835|3,341006|2,341092|1,341177|3,341263|0,341520|3) -
2016-11-12 20:14 shadowsnoop: 05:50:606 (350606|1,350692|2,350777|0,350863|1,350949|3,351035|2,351120|0,351120|1,351292|1,351377|3,351463|0) -
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2016-11-12 20:15 shadowsnoop: 05:53:006 (353006|1,353177|0,353349|1,353435|2,353520|0,353606|1,353692|3,353863|0,354035|2,354120|3,354206|0,354206|1) -
2016-11-12 20:15 shadowsnoop: smh
2016-11-12 20:15 shadowsnoop: smh
2016-11-12 20:15 shadowsnoop: smh
2016-11-12 20:15 FelipeLink: E-E
2016-11-12 20:15 FelipeLink: e-e
2016-11-12 20:15 shadowsnoop: holly fucking shit 05:54:377 (354377|3,354549|0,354720|1,354806|3,354892|0,354977|1,355063|2,355235|0,355406|2,355577|0,355749|1,355920|0,356092|1,356177|2,356263|0,356349|1,356435|3,356520|2,356606|1,356606|0,356692|3,356777|2,356863|1,356949|2) -
2016-11-12 20:16 shadowsnoop: 05:58:149 (358149|2,358235|1,358320|0,358320|2,358492|1,358577|2,358663|0,358749|2,358835|1,359006|3) -
2016-11-12 20:16 shadowsnoop: bem parecido 05:59:092 (359092|2,359177|0,359177|1,359263|0,359263|1,359349|2,359349|3,359435|1,359520|2,359606|3,359692|0,359692|1,359863|3,360035|1,360035|0) -
2016-11-12 20:17 shadowsnoop: smh again 06:00:720 (360720|0,360892|2,361063|0,361235|1,361406|0,361577|1,361663|2,361749|0,361835|1,361920|3,362006|2,362092|1,362092|0,362177|3,362263|1,362349|2,362435|0,362435|1,362606|3,362777|0,362949|1,363035|3,363120|0,363292|1,363463|0) -
2016-11-12 20:18 shadowsnoop: 06:03:635 (363635|2,363806|0,363977|1,364149|0,364320|1,364406|2,364492|0,364577|1,364663|3,364749|2,364835|0,364835|1,364920|3,365006|1,365177|0,365177|1,365349|3) -
2016-11-12 20:18 shadowsnoop: I just want to buttfuck you right now
2016-11-12 20:18 shadowsnoop: 06:09:463 (369463|1,369549|2,369635|0,369720|1,369806|0,369892|2,369977|0,370063|1,370149|3) -
2016-11-12 20:19 FelipeLink: lmao
2016-11-12 20:19 FelipeLink: jej
2016-11-12 21:00 shadowsnoop: 05:59:349 -
2016-11-12 21:02 shadowsnoop: 00:00:035 (35|2,206|1,292|3,377|1) -
2016-11-12 21:02 shadowsnoop: 00:00:977 (977|3,1063|1,1149|2,1235|3,1406|0) -
2016-11-12 21:04 shadowsnoop: 00:08:263 -
2016-11-12 21:12 shadowsnoop: 05:32:692 -
2016-11-12 21:12 shadowsnoop: 05:32:777 -

Gave some suggestions, added some hands, checked notes consistency, changed some patterns... map´s looking fine!