1. Impossiblexu's Easy (3.17 stars, 170 notes)
2. kaouji's Hard (5 stars, 278 notes)
3. Normal (4.39 stars, 218 notes)
4. Rin (5 stars, 421 notes)

[Colours]
Combo1 : 251,206,115
Combo2 : 75,218,7
Combo3 : 5,75,239
Combo4 : 147,0,73

impossiblexu wrote:

8-)

Garven wrote:

Woo, first mod as MAT. Maybe I should have picked a mapper that I can actually find things on. -_-

[General]
Add Impossiblexu to tags T T.... fixed.

[Skin] leave it to kaouji.
Can you please use a different color for the spinner approach circle? The white on white blends in and it's hard to tell when the spinner is going to finish.
Same applies to the spinnercircle. Can't see it except on the edges.
Section-pass and section-fail look really low quality - think you could find higher quality images to use?

[Impossiblexu's Easy]
I don't think the custom claps fit during the intro to the song.
Set offset to 2690 (conform with other two difficulties) fixed.
The way this difficulty is styled, I'd up the HP drain +1 at least. used to be +1. worrying about star rating. changed for now.
Please put a break in somewhere.
02:08:023 (1) - End this spinner with the other two diffs and add the finish sound to it? leave it to impossiblexu to decide.

[Normal]
It'd be nice if you could find a good spot to put the break other than right at the beginning of the song. it's hard since the vocal doesn't break...
I don't think the custom claps fit during the intro to the song. it's also my first thought, but after several times i think it's fine. just put it there for now.
00:25:356 (1) - Kinda soon after a spinner for a normal - though if you still want this rhythm, please place this closer to the center of the spinner so it's easier to reorient. k. changed the notes place.
00:57:356 (1) - This is a little better since it's a slider... but maybe horizontal flip it? Eeh, I dunno, hehe. won't change...
01:03:189 (1,1,2,1) - This would read a lot better if it wasn't stacked. agree but i think you can know what i mean by put the notes there -v-. i can't do jumps in Normal so it's a possible way...

[Rin]
01:34:689 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - orz That 6 gets me every time. Really hard to read. >< www
01:37:356 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Argh, another one, haha.
I had to study those two over and over in Editor to get them down. You may want to consider trying to make them easier to read, though if you have others play test it fine, then chalk it up to crappy skill. it's i made them that way... though maybe will change them to a easier placement if too many player complain about it.

As always, great maps. Lemme know when the hard gets posted!

RandomJibberish wrote:

Rin
00:07:689 (10) - Hard to see and following nothing slider is hard to see and following nothing. Make into a beat
00:08:689 (3) - This one's just hard to see, unstack it from the sliderend
00:34:689 (1,2,3,4) - Horribly confusing change in momentum followed by halftime slider? What? At the very least use 0.75 speed changes or something, you can do that this build.
00:41:356 (1,2,3) - Confusing and unneccesary jumps

I can't continue modding this, I'm sorry. Get rid of all the pointless jumps and I'll consider rechecking. It's 180 bpm, random spurts of double spacing isn't really acceptable

wmfchris wrote:

Not much idea about spacing... good job

[Rin]
0:39:856 (7) left to the grid is better imo k.
0:59:023 (7) move this very slightly to the left tired to change this. and when playing the place is fine.
1:43:356 (4) slightly to the right fixed.
2:02:023 (3,4,5) these spacing a bit bigger than before... made them that way.
2:04:523 (3) ^

[normal] fine

lol spacing這麼准我都看不出東西來了

Combo1 : 159,222,255
Combo2 : 62,158,255

SPOILER

Shinde wrote:

General
I don't really feel like pointing out all the errors in the skin. ex. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/25131
I suggest removing it entirely. I find problems with just about everything but the hitcircle and overlay. If you want, I can point out all the errors though and give reasoning. it's not like that on my computer... asking for more opinions.

Rin
Why name a difficulty after yourself? It's your map. Just rename it to Insane. .. Unless Rin is also the name of one of the characters, but even then that seems silly. emm... just kind of .... well used Rin for highest diff name since Little Busters... because of character's name.
Why set the Accuracy to 9 if the approach is 8? This seems an odd choice to me. Just because it's been seperated now doesn't mean you have to utilize this feature. The song IS 180 BPM, so OD9 can work for that BPM, but I don't think the difficulty of the map or tone of the song itself warrant it. it's for the max score for now, since i predict the hard would probably reach 5m, so..T T, if that won't happen i would like to change it back to 8.
01:29:356 (1,2) - Remove (2), extend (1) by 1/4th. This is out of place to me. ok. fixed.
01:34:689 (1) - Why toggle the Kiai here, but not in Normal? forgot this in Normal. fixed.
01:43:856 (5) - Why toggle the Kiai here at all? I don't hear anything in the song that should cause this. my fault, it's just a mistake.
Some of your patterns were very confusing when playing with the included skin. Once I removed the skin/BG they were easy enough, but I think this just illustrates flaws in the skin.

This difficulty reminded me a lot of a Shinxyn map. thanks.... i guess?

Normal
Probably a little hard for a Normal. Consider renaming.. I don't really like 'Normal+' though and it would be a somewhat easy Hard.
00:59:023 (4) - Add repeat maybe..? no. because the next pattern also used red line notes.


Impossiblexu's Easy
This is definitely a Normal. Rename this to Normal and rename your Normal to Hard. There are just too many notes and such a high BPM for it to be considered an Easy. different thinking of "Easy" i think... it's at most an Easy+ imo.
Again, not sure why a different OD and AR (Approach Rate) were used. I would just set them both to 2. 3 or 4 if you decide to rename to Normal.
leave these to impossiblexu.
01:14:690 (2) - Seems an out of place shape compared to all your other sliders.
01:59:356 (2) - Weird slider.

I don't really care for the fact this is a J-Pop song from a visual romance novel, but the map itself is good enough. Anyways, starred.

NatsumeRin wrote:

it's not like that on my computer... asking for more opinions.

James2250 wrote:

-You need to have a difficulty below 3 stars to get it ranked, make Impossiblexu's easy easier in fact below 3.25 stars so now it's ok.
-Do a horizontal flip on comboburst-2 (that is the way it will face when it comes out on the left side of the screen), unless you want it like that? will change i guess.
-You don't need a hit 50k, delete it orz. i must did sth wrong
-Delete osb file in folder it will be on use in the near future.
-The spinner approach circle is still white after so many comments about it? will change but need time... so i stop post mod requests for now....
-The X seems over sized when playing compared to the other skinned elements...maybe its just me? have no idea.


Easy:
01:24:02 timing section isn't doing anything change to C1
00:21:356 (3) - new combo no.
02:08:023 (1) - extend to 02:13:356 like the other difficulties fixed.

Normal:
no complaints

Rin:
01:34:689 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - patterns like this are pretty confusing (always bugs me more during kiai time) you might want to make them slightly easier to read design this with "let players press according to the vocal"... hidden notes are just a personal preference...
01:38:189 (6) - I find sliders like this really hard to read when in the middle of all those notes + kiai time ^

Apart from some hard to read patterns no problems

*star*

• Suggestions! It's up to you!
  Problems! You should take a look at these.
  Errors! Please fix those.
  N: Normal Hit S: Soft Hit W: Whistles F: Finish C: Claps
  CXY: Custom Sound (X Stand for the sound type and Y for the Custom type)
  Example: CN1 -> Custom Normal hit 1

Sections

:arrow: Sections

Intro (From 00:02:689 (1) - until 00:13:356 (9) - )

• Pattern used:
• (1/1) W;C;C;W;C;C;W...

Comments: You used a simple pattern that perfectly fits your song :3
Suggestions, Errors: None in this section.

Second Part (From 00:22:689 (1) - until 01:12:940 (8) - )

• Pattern used:
• (1/2) NW;SW;NC and some alternated (1/1) and (1/2) W;C.

Comments: I liked the effect you did here with those timing points, they're well paced and are easy to follow. Wonderfull
Suggestions, Error: •This would be probably go unnoticed, but i think a Finish would fit in the first note of 01:13:023 (1) -

Last Part (From 01:13:023 (1) - until the end of the song) KIAI Time

• Pattern used:
• Pretty much the same as the previous part

Comments: I like to point Kiai times in separated section because sometimes they need a different pattern. But this is not the case, your previous pattern is still perfect
Suggestions, Errors: • 02:00:356 (1,1,1) - Forgot a Claps here or it's on purpose?

Dragvon wrote:

Hello! Sorry for being late, i had no internet in my main pc so i couldn't mod >.<!
First of all, i'm not a "pro" hitsound modder (...yet xD). But i do try my best to become a nice one :3
Since you've already placed them, i'll do a deep check and maybe point some things :3!
Enough talk, let's start this >:3!

Queue response: Hitsound Check

Info:

• Suggestions! It's up to you!
  Problems! You should take a look at these.
  Errors! Please fix those.
  N: Normal Hit S: Soft Hit W: Whistles F: Finish C: Claps
  CXY: Custom Sound (X Stand for the sound type and Y for the Custom type)
  Example: CN1 -> Custom Normal hit 1

<Rin>
I start with the diff with most objects since they would obviously have more sounds :3
Note: In this diff you used a full Custom Set(Type 1). Therefore, CN1 & CS1 will be only N and S!

Sections

:arrow: Sections

Intro (From 00:02:689 (1) - until 00:13:356 (9) - )

• Pattern used:
• (1/1) W;C;C;W;C;C;W...

Comments: You used a simple pattern that perfectly fits your song :3
Suggestions, Errors: None in this section.

Second Part (From 00:22:689 (1) - until 01:12:940 (8) - )

• Pattern used:
• (1/2) NW;SW;NC and some alternated (1/1) and (1/2) W;C.

Comments: I liked the effect you did here with those timing points, they're well paced and are easy to follow. Wonderfull
Suggestions, Error: •This would be probably go unnoticed, but i think a Finish would fit in the first note of 01:13:023 (1) -

Last Part (From 01:13:023 (1) - until the end of the song) KIAI Time

• Pattern used:
• Pretty much the same as the previous part

Comments: I like to point Kiai times in separated section because sometimes they need a different pattern. But this is not the case, your previous pattern is still perfect
Suggestions, Errors: • 02:00:356 (1,1,1) - Forgot a Claps here or it's on purpose?

<Normal>
Note: This diff follows the exact same pattern from the previous diff. Anything out of the ordinary will be posted
• No errors found!

<Impossiblexu's Easy>

Sections

:arrow: Sections

Intro (From 00:02:690 (1) - until 00:22:689 (1) - )

• Pattern used:
• Alternated (1/1) CF1;SC

Comments: I liked how that custom finish "extends" to the 1/2 tick =p
Suggestions, Errors: None

Second Part (From 00:25:356 (1) - until 01:12:023 (1) - )

• Pattern used:
• Pretty much the same as the previous section.

Comments: Fine.
Suggestions, Errors: • 01:02:690 (1) - It's not a big deal but, i felt the Claps in the 3rd note of the slider a bit too low :3

Last Part (From 01:14:023 (1) - until the end of the song) KIAI Time

• Pattern used:
• Same as the entire map again :3

Comments: It fits fine for the entire song.
Suggestions, Errors: • 01:36:023 (3) - Forgot a Finish here or it's on purpose xD?

Phew, that's it! I guess.. well, i hope you find this useful or maybe help a little :3!
Oh yea, if you have free time, please vote in my queue, i wanna use that to improve myself :3!
Great Song~ Have a star!

Lanttu wrote:

[Skin]
I don't really understand combobursts, they look weird. .~.
Also, I'd really appreciate if the 300/100/50 images were in different colors. With fast map like this, it's impossible (at least for me) to notice if I get 300 or 100 when the images have exactly the same colors. I like the design, though. :3

Section fail/pass images are adorable<3

[Rin]
00:52:023 (4) - Maybe new combo here? fixed.
01:57:356 (6) - ^ ^
02:02:023 (6) - ^ ^
02:05:356 (6) - ^ ^

[Kaouji's hard]
00:46:689 (5) - New combo?
00:55:023 (9) - ^
01:00:022 (8) - ^
01:03:023 (2,3,4) - This part sounds awkward, try to make the rhythm fit the melody more?
01:10:689 (7) - New combo?
01:18:689 (1,2,3,4) - I don't really like these sliders. ;_;
01:42:689 (6) - New combo?

I'm sorry, that's all I could find. ;u; Great work, starred. ^^

jericho2442 wrote:

[Normal]

(suggestion) 00:32:689 (4) - newcombo, this big combo looks REALLY odd in the middle of all these small combos :/ as you wish.
(suggestion)00:44:023 (5) - newcombo, again the same and i feel like this really needs it ;_; say no to this one. i want the triangle to keep the same color, not break.
00:59:689 (1) - remove newcombo, your breaking your pattern what you used at 00:46:689 i changed 00:46's combos. now they should be the same.
00:59:023 (4) - add one repeat to this slider and it plays MUCH nicer agree but think it's too hard (see the next combo). more opinions maybe.
01:03:189 (1) - this newcombo makes this pattern very iratating to play for some reason, it playes much better if you remove the newcombo but players should be able to understand this...? an echo effect. if mapper just put notes but not how they think it's... sigh, at least not me.
01:04:523 (1) - again same ^


[kaouji's hard]
leave it to kaouji.
00:44:189 (9,10) - these notes timing and placement seem to follow nothing, and thus feel wrong, i advise a timing like this, but either way this REALLY needs fixing

SPOILER

00:46:689 (5) - newcombo, to break the verse from the chorus, looks VERY odd as it is
(suggestion) 00:55:023 (9) - newcombo, this combo just feels like it need to break up the lump after the vocals end
01:10:022 (5) - newcombo, due to vocals start here, it plays odd using the same combo for none vocals AND vocals
(suggestion) 01:32:689 (8) - newcombo, feels waaaay too long
01:42:689 (6,7,8) - OMG that horrid overlaps there ;_; please try to line these up better, it looks horrid as it is

i have problems understanding some of the looong combos in this diff

[RIN]

(suggestion) 00:56:356 (2,3) - i kno its a pattern, but i really do think this would play better if these two had closer spacing 1.5x spacing is just a small jump you know ww
(suggestion) 01:34:689 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - this is VERY hard to read, any chance you could make it less blind please >_> ...may consider this but not for now.
(suggestion)01:37:356 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - again same, these kinda kill some of the maps fun ^

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i do really like these maps and i think they have a good flow to them

its just that out of time note part in hard what stops me from staring, as soon as that red criteria is fixed notify me and i will star this o/

Roddie wrote:

Hi :3

Blue: Suggestions.
Violet: Should be fixed in my opinion.
Red: Must be fixed.

Impossiblexu's Easy:

Alright, I guess...

Some of the hitsounds are not placed right on the your difficulty. But its not a big issue.

Normal:

00:35:689 (x, 1)-Maybe add a note there? so the player be thrown off? xD And create a distance snap on 1.
Something like this... nah. it stopped for the short break of rhythm.

SPOILER

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00:48:356 (4)-Add a clap on the end of that slider. used to be there, removed on purpose.
00:53:689 (7)-^
02:06:356 (4)-Add a clap.[/color] to stress the next (1)'s clap, so no.

kaouji's hard:

General:
Its kaouji's Hard. Capitalize the H. ...my fault.

02:07:689 (1)-Move the start of that spinner on 02:07:856? If you do that, fix the end of that spinner on 02:13:356. After you do that, replace it with a note on that white tick on 02:07:689. If you don't understand, please ask me.

changed spinner but won't add notes i guess.

Rin:

Nice.

Good job, Rin as usually.

Star!

Mafiamaster wrote:

缺少approachcircle.png
一秒铅的时间

[Easy]
01:36:023 (3) - 新增Finish在滑块开始

对不起，我的中文不好
lol

Verdisphena wrote:

<- wtf

Nice song ~~