RO yeah

>< star~~~
eat icecream too hot today~

star

star

这么热的天,是应该吃些冰淇淋呢.

star？

star

RO ~

Star ~

[coffee]
00:23:757 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - 改成这样00:23:757 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2,3,4,5,6)
并且spinner在00:25:212 开始 结束在00:25:115
且这串上蓝线的wh全部取消
00:24:988 (6) - clap
00:27:899 (4) - ^
00:28:235 (7) - clap?
00:36:966 (9) - 取消clap?
00:40:996 (8) - add finish?
00:48:608 (6) - clap
00:48:832 (7) - 第二个折返和尾巴上clap
00:53:981 (9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - 这段要加音效啊<.< 如果是我的话 我会9,11,14+clap 你也可以自己琢磨下
00:55:772 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - 同上也要加音效>.> 5,7,9,10,11,14,15+clap
00:57:115 (x) - add note
00:57:227 (x) - add note and clap
00:57:339 (x) - add note and finish
01:09:876 (1,2,3,4) - 觉得这四个音用normal会比soft要好:加根绿线 normal
01:11:556 (5) - 如果上面盖了 这里就加根绿线 soft 因为口哨有点太...
01:38:757 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - 参考前面的加法
01:43:682 (1,2,3) - 这三个中间看起来的间距不一样，虽然说可能本来就不一样 但是我觉得让他们看起来一样比较舒服>.>......换句话说就是利用复制粘贴CRTL+J
01:45:473 (5) - 取消clap
01:46:817 (8) - 中间折返的clap取消
01:49:503 (10) - 尾巴的wh换成clap
01:50:175 (11) - clap取消
01:53:533 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - 参考之前的加法
01:57:339 (5) - 取消clap
01:58:235 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 这段音效加上...
这后面的音效不mod了...比较乱...你可能需要找一个系统的音效MOD>.> 我只是渣音效...提出来的你不想改也可以无视>.>
可以多尝试normal和soft之间的转换>.>

00:21:294 (1,2,3,4) - 整个在一条线上比较好 可以按住shift调调看
00:33:832 (6,7,8) - 看样子这三角关系应该很歪...8往左边点?
02:16:817 (4,4,5,6,7) - 对齐
02:22:638 (8) - 这个还可以拉更好 目前看来有点随便
01:34:727 (1,2,3,4,5) - 形状很怪...3离1太近了 导致整个形状都很微妙...整体需要再移动一下
01:36:966 (5) - 5离2太近 显得不够美观+有点挤

应要求只看了coffee难度

忘记了 突然看到>.>

i like coffee.

coffee:
01:27:787 (5) - : no clap at the end.
01:31:369 (4) - : no clap. or use normal-normal hitsound plz.
02:06:966 (1) - : remove clap.
02:10:100 (6,7) - : ...spacing?
02:22:638 (8) - : HEEEEEEEEELL NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO slider under steam!!!!!!!!!!!!

normal:
00:22:861 (x) - add clap. but... do you know how to add clap in the middle of slider?(runs
..and more...

Easy:
00:38:533 (1) - I like finish hitsound better.
02:12:563 (7,8) - : Spacing. and I suggest that do not let (02:11:220 (6) -) this slider cover the notes behind.
02:20:175 (1) - : remove whistle, please.

Wow...two .osb files in your folder~

abalee wrote:

coffee:
01:27:787 (5) - : no clap at the end.
01:31:369 (4) - : no clap. or use normal-normal hitsound plz.
02:06:966 (1) - : remove clap.
02:10:100 (6,7) - : ...spacing?
02:22:638 (8) - : HEEEEEEEEELL NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO slider under steam!!!!!!!!!!!!

normal:
00:22:861 (x) - add clap. but... do you know how to add clap in the middle of slider?(runs
..and more...

Easy:
00:38:533 (1) - I like finish hitsound better.
02:12:563 (7,8) - : Spacing. and I suggest that do not let (02:11:220 (6) -) this slider cover the notes behind.
02:20:175 (1) - : remove whistle, please.

Wow...two .osb files in your folder~

all have fixed

star

star~

lol star

路过下歌 顺便Star

Selee wrote:

路过下歌 顺便Star

add preview point for every difficulties please.

abalee wrote:

add preview point for every difficulties please.

ok

我快變挖坑王了

Timing : -10ms to all offset.
Don't forget resnap all notes and recheck green lines.

Custom hitsound有用到嗎?
沒有用到的話就把"normal-hitwhistle.wav","normal-hitnormal.wav"從資料夾中移除並重新full-submit一次

[Easy]
Remove lead-in,it's useless.

[Normal]
Remove lead-in,it's useless.

01:56:891 (7,8) - Spacing.
加一點東西,讓這diff在2:23的地方結束?

[coffee]
Remove lead-in,it's useless.

kioukiou wrote:

Timing : -10ms to all offset.
Don't forget resnap all notes and recheck green lines.

Custom hitsound有用到嗎?
沒有用到的話就把"normal-hitwhistle.wav","normal-hitnormal.wav"從資料夾中移除並重新full-submit一次

[Easy]
Remove lead-in,it's useless.

[Normal]
Remove lead-in,it's useless.

01:56:891 (7,8) - Spacing.
加一點東西,讓這diff在2:23的地方結束?

[coffee]
Remove lead-in,it's useless.

thank you very much~

Bubbled.

Will have to pop this for now

-You don't need Ragnarok or SoundTeMP in the tags as they are already in the artist/source (also make sure the tags are the same on every difficulty)
-I would put the source as 'Ragnarok Online' as that is what most maps seem to have it as and seems correct
-Your mp3 is currently 96kbps, I would double check that as it meant to be 128-192kbps
-Use at least tick rate 1, there isn't any reason to use 0.5 for this song that I can see

Easy:
-Try and keep a steady rhythm of claps going during the map, they seem to work well sometimes but other parts sound pretty empty
-Some of the combos seem pretty random, stuff like 00:22:404 (1) and 00:27:777 (1) don't really need their own combo
-The stats on this difficulty don't need to be all set to minimum, I recommend at least AR/OD/HP +1
00:31:359 (2,3) - separate stuff like this slightly more
00:35:837 (3,1) - overlaps like this generally don't look nice when playing
01:34:942 (5,6) - ^
01:38:524 (1) - sliders like this could look much cleaner (try and get rid of any sharp curves)
01:50:165 (3,1) - same overlapping comment, try and fix any more of these
02:14:344 (11) - cut this combo down as it is pretty long for an Easy (also stacks with 5+ notes can confuse beginners)

Normal:
-If you are going to do slider speed changes I would do 0.75 as it is kind of sudden going from 1 to 0.5 especially on a Normal
-Some sections could use some more claps to fit the song
00:20:613 (1) - some combo placements still seem random
01:16:583 (4,5,6) - odd pattern
01:56:882 (7) - new combo?
02:04:046 (6) - I wouldn't suggest overlapping this with previous notes
02:19:718 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - could be more creative

coffee:
-Is there a reason for the custom name? Seems strange as the other 2 don't have one
-Hitsounds are much better here, combos could prob use some slight fixing up
-Can be hard to follow as some parts follow 0.5 spacing while others follow 1.0
01:13:449 (3,4) - avoid overlaps
02:22:628 (8) - sliders like this aren't a good idea as you can't tell the direction the slider ball goes in at first

Isn't looking too bad but needs more more improvements. Try and get some more mod posts before I rebubble~

冰冰

James2250 wrote:

Will have to pop this for now

-You don't need Ragnarok or SoundTeMP in the tags as they are already in the artist/source (also make sure the tags are the same on every difficulty)
-I would put the source as 'Ragnarok Online' as that is what most maps seem to have it as and seems correct
-Your mp3 is currently 96kbps, I would double check that as it meant to be 128-192kbps
-Use at least tick rate 1, there isn't any reason to use 0.5 for this song that I can see

Easy:
-Try and keep a steady rhythm of claps going during the map, they seem to work well sometimes but other parts sound pretty empty
-Some of the combos seem pretty random, stuff like 00:22:404 (1) and 00:27:777 (1) don't really need their own combo
-The stats on this difficulty don't need to be all set to minimum, I recommend at least AR/OD/HP +1
00:31:359 (2,3) - separate stuff like this slightly more
00:35:837 (3,1) - overlaps like this generally don't look nice when playing
01:34:942 (5,6) - ^
01:38:524 (1) - sliders like this could look much cleaner (try and get rid of any sharp curves)
01:50:165 (3,1) - same overlapping comment, try and fix any more of these
02:14:344 (11) - cut this combo down as it is pretty long for an Easy (also stacks with 5+ notes can confuse beginners)

Normal:
-If you are going to do slider speed changes I would do 0.75 as it is kind of sudden going from 1 to 0.5 especially on a Normal
-Some sections could use some more claps to fit the song
00:20:613 (1) - some combo placements still seem random
01:16:583 (4,5,6) - odd pattern
01:56:882 (7) - new combo?
02:04:046 (6) - I wouldn't suggest overlapping this with previous notes
02:19:718 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - could be more creative

coffee:
-Is there a reason for the custom name? Seems strange as the other 2 don't have one
-Hitsounds are much better here, combos could prob use some slight fixing up
-Can be hard to follow as some parts follow 0.5 spacing while others follow 1.0
01:13:449 (3,4) - avoid overlaps
02:22:628 (8) - sliders like this aren't a good idea as you can't tell the direction the slider ball goes in at first

Isn't looking too bad but needs more more improvements. Try and get some more mod posts before I rebubble~

thx for your mod.~

seems fine to me

yaya wrote:

seems fine to me

yaya wrote:

seems fine to me

James2250 wrote:

-You don't need Ragnarok or SoundTeMP in the tags as they are already in the artist/source

yaya wrote:

seems fine to me

What part of this seems fine to you yaya?, anyways on to mod the map...

[Timing]
Timing feels really awkward to me, either that or many of your notes are off :<

[General]
As stated before, Remove ragnarok from the tags since it's already in the source.
As for the bitrate, i doubt there's much you can do about that since the mp3s that come with the game are 96 kbps anyways.

[coffee]
You dont need t name your own diff after yourself ._. seems awkward specially since all the diffs are yours?
So many random streams i dont know where to start >.< for example 00:23:747 (6,7,8,9,10,11,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) What are these following?
Combos are really inconsistent as well.
00:54:866 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - These sound really awkard
01:11:657 (1,2,3,4) - Random Anti-Jumps?
01:51:060 (1,2,3,4) - Random Jumps?
02:08:970~ why suddenly double the spacing?

[Normal]
Random spinners?
02:04:055 (6) - Slider repeat is hidden.
00:40:771 (1) - Remove new combo
00:43:458 (1) - ^
00:47:936 (7) - New combo.

[Easy]
Slider speed is too fast.
Use Distance spacing 1.0x or at least 0.9x not 0.6x!
00:12:553 (1) - A lone note here looks awkward, either map the 4 drums or dont map it at all...
00:38:523 (1) - This spinner should be starting way later.
00:43:224 -Random break
00:59:120 (2,3) - Why are these the only stacked sliders, and why are they even stacked at all?
01:08:075 (1) - Random spinner.
01:13:168 - Random break.
01:38:523 (8) - Here's where a spinner would fit instead of that bad whistle sounding slider.

I seriously dont see what "seems fine" to you yaya, but i agree map still needs way more modding and is not ready at all for a bubble.

Sakura Hana wrote:

Balabala

No why. XD

Because mapper is Ice coffee but not you.

Could you please stop changing mapper's style?

You can ask mapper fix it because it's illegal.

But you can't ask mapper fix it because you don't like it.

Same as yaya, looks good to me.

So i gave it a bubble.

But i don't know why Normal's timing is changed.

Offset is 12,553.

Fix it please.

kioukiou wrote:

Sakura Hana wrote:

Balabala

No why. XD

Because mapper is Ice coffee but not you.

Could you please stop changing mapper's style?

You can ask mapper fix it because it's illegal.

But you can't ask mapper fix it because you don't like it.

Same as yaya, looks good to me.

So i gave it a bubble.

Even so, the map still has to make sense as well. And another thing... giving bubbles carelessly is something frowned upon as this is the 2nd time i've seen this happen. Make sure the map gets the proper inspectons it needs first BEFORE you think it needs a bubble, not after you give it a bubble.

And kioukiou..... keep the insults down.

Hard
01:11:657 (1,2,3) - why the decrease in spacing (i'm okay with it, I'm just curious)
01:27:552 (4,5) - maybe like this:

01:21:284 (x) - maybe add a note here
01:34:717 (1,2,3,4,5) - maybe like this:

01:37:403 (6,7) - maybe line these like you did (8,9) and (10,11)?
01:47:254 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - (discussed on irc) EDIT don't forget to adjust (10,11)
01:58:784 (5) - 1 grid up so that it is like (2)
02:13:896 (5) - line up with (4)?
02:19:717 (1) - maybe put a finish on this instead of a clap?

EDIT - new stuff below
Normal
00:29:567 (2) - is this supposed to be straight, it has an extra slider point attached.

00:33:150 (8) - this one isn't straight either. hold down the shift key while adjusting the end sliderpoint (remove extra slider point)
00:38:523 (2,3,4,5) - is this supposed to make a square, if so move (5) 1 grid left
01:11:209 (4,1) - this jump isn't a good idea. maybe swap (1,2)
01:25:985 (1) - end on the white tick?
01:43:896 (6) - new combo?
01:56:433 (6) - 1 grid left so that it is symmetrical to (1)
02:07:179 (5) - 1 grid right
02:08:970 (1,2) - this overlap is ugly
02:16:582 (2) - 1 grid up

Easy - I would probably make the breaks the same as [Normal] and [Hard]
00:18:821 (5) - new combo?
00:37:627 (3) - 1 grid up
00:49:269 (x) - put another slider like (3) here?
01:31:358 (3) - 1 grid left
01:38:523 (8) - new combo
02:04:493 (4) - 1 grid left
02:14:344 (x) - place a note here?

I will do a combo mod on the easy diff after this

offset needs to be 1 section ahead due to a green line at 12553, so i told coffee to move it, but seems like he only did for normal XD.

other than that, all i wanna say is i can play, u can play, we all can play, and thats the fun of osu after all.

oh, do remove the tags thou, some ppl r being serious on modding.

tag problem has fixed.
mp3 only has 96kbps

I kinda want to apologize if i sounded rude in my mod post, I meant in no way harm to you or your map, the bubble was popped because there were some unrankable issues, but i like to do my full mod together with it, so i also pointed out my suggestions to your map. If at any point you felt i was imposing changes on you i apologize that was not my intention, however the critical issues must be fixed before i can return the bubble, i'll probably recheck this sometime tomorrow, thanks for understanding.