[General]
Song Setup--> Audio--> Music Track Lead-In,1.5 -2 секунды.
В Tags добавить автора Тайко сложности.

[Hard]
00:02:312 (1) - Что с дистанцией? Почему так близко? Должно быть одинаковое расстояние.Дальше ставь.
00:08:512 (6) - ^
00:10:712 (1) - Я знаю твою нездоровую любовь к спиннерам,но он не в тему.
00:12:512 (3) - Норм,но лучше сделай Vertically и Horizontally Flip от (1).
00:15:112 (4) - Дистанцию поправь.

И всё примерно в том же духе.Лучше юзай дистанс снап или хотя бы сам определи дистанцию,и нарушай её только в прыжках.В других случаях она просто делает карту сложнее для чтения.

[Normal]
Я уже говорил,неплохой нормал.
01:29:512- Спиннер здесь закончи.
И ещё.Критерий ранкинга - это сложность ниже 3.00 Стар Рейтинга.

Hellzero wrote:

на свою звезду ~_~

baka~ T-T

SadKangaroo wrote:

[General]
Song Setup--> Audio--> Music Track Lead-In,1.5 -2 секунды.
В Tags добавить автора Тайко сложности.

[Hard]
00:02:312 (1) - Что с дистанцией? Почему так близко? Должно быть одинаковое расстояние.Дальше ставь.
00:08:512 (6) - ^
00:10:712 (1) - Я знаю твою нездоровую любовь к спиннерам,но он не в тему.
00:12:512 (3) - Норм,но лучше сделай Vertically и Horizontally Flip от (1).
00:15:112 (4) - Дистанцию поправь.

И всё примерно в том же духе.Лучше юзай дистанс снап или хотя бы сам определи дистанцию,и нарушай её только в прыжках.В других случаях она просто делает карту сложнее для чтения.

[Normal]
Я уже говорил,неплохой нормал.
01:29:512- Спиннер здесь закончи.
И ещё.Критерий ранкинга - это сложность ниже 3.00 Стар Рейтинга.

Кенгурушечк <3

nice :3

star

star

Как и обещал

Download: Masaomi Kida - Fukkireta (BattorA) [Hellzero's diff].osu

Hellzero wrote:

Как и обещал

D:

на высший суд -_-

~STAR

звезду тебе

rockleejkooo wrote:

звезду тебе

0.0
Спасип:)

Nice map!

[General]
Add CapeCanaveral, Hellzero to the tags since they have a diff and Ron because she is the singer.

[Easy]
Some spacing problems. Try using AImod.

[Hard]
This diff have some spacing problems too.

[Hellzero's diff]
Fix the spacing and return the beat snap divisor to 1/4.

Star!

Godd SOng

Thx:***
But...Louis - only my!:DDD

BattorA wrote:

Thx:***
But...Louis - only my!:DDD

NeveR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! >A<

Louis is mine forever XD

=3

 

стар

lolsorandum star :3

уфф. Так, ладно, не столь плохо как я ожидал.

[Hellzero's]
так-с. Ставь третью сетку.

00:07:312 (3) - зажимай шифт и тяни конец слайдера пока он не будет идеально на одном уровне с началом

да и вообще, касательно следующего слайдера и круга http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/20392 ну ты понел. Концы слайдеров ровнее, изгиб слайдера ровно посередине. Кружок посередине слайдера, будто слайдер его орбита.

Не забудь проверить спейсинг после этих махинаций

00:09:912 (3) - правее (вроде на 2 клетки, я забыл), что было симметрично

00:10:912 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/20394 рикаминдую, линейный слайдер, смотрящий в никуда выглядит рандомно, а тут хоть какой паттерн.

00:14:112 (1,2,3,4) - хорошая попытка, это делается проще. Поставь спейсинг какой хочешь, у тебя подходит 0,9, выдели (2), притащи его так чтоб он был более-менее ровно к середине первого слайдера, потом скопируй первый слайдер, вставь вместо второго и выбери Edit->Rotate by.. и там 120 градусов. И потом тупо пододвигаешь слайдер пользуясь дистанс снепом. Получается ровно и без еботни. Да, (4) не забудь подвинуть.

00:15:312 (5) - либо закругли ровнее и пододвинь чтоб он был частью кольца, которое образуют слайдеры, либо сделай ещё что-то чтоб он как-то был больше похож на часть паттерна

00:17:912 (3,5,6,7) - зажимаешь альт с шифтом и ровно-ровно пододвигаешь начало (5) под конец (3), (7) под конец (5), 6 поближе к середине (5) (вертикально, горизонтально (6) не двигай)

00:22:712 (1) - ужасно, лучше сделай его в форме знака интеграла

00:25:912 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - ну вот, вот, можешь же что-то сделать нормально сам

00:29:712 (2,3,4) - подвинуть так чтоб (3) пошло под конец слайдера

00:30:912 (7) - лучше выдели (5), скопируй на место (7), Ctrl-H, Ctrl-J Ctrl-R, добавь один возврат на него и получится вот так http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/20399

00:35:512 (1) - нет, ну сделай его ровным, сам же видишь что криво пиздец. Не стесняемся зажимать шифт и придавать слайдеру форму на глазок.

01:15:512 (7,8,9) - с этими слайдерами тоже нужно что-то сделать

01:14:512 - кстати, почему начиная отсюда нет хитсаундов?



Насчёт харда, я считаю в нём нет нужды, если привести хард хеллзеро в нормальное состояние. Я надеюсь, из мода к его дифе сделаете нужные выводы и поправите дизайн нормала до божеского состояния, ритм там править не надо вроде. Да, кстати в харде просто ужасный спам клепами. Не надо так делать.

В тайко найдётся что сделать лучше/интереснее, но это потом, для начала доделайте диффы для осу.

Star

Good song & nice map.

But, Why taiko map's lead-in is 0?

Maybe that diff need fix.

[General]
измени либо в нормале велосити либо сделай изю,чистую

[Normal]

велосити всё таки сделай поменьше
00:01:912(1) - убери нью комбо
00:02:312(2) - слайдер выровняй.не хорошо смотрится...
00:16:712(2) - ^
00:15:912(4) - нью комбо, а на 00:16:312 (1) убери
00:19:512 - спинер лучше начать тут и закончить на 00:22:312
00:25:912(1) - выровняй слайдер
00:30:312(2) - на 4 решётки вниз ,1 вправо и слайдеры просмотри
00:37:112(4) - кривой слайдер х))) подними на клетку выше и следующий кривой. и на клетку влево
00:41:912(1,2) - посмотри и выровняй слайдеры на одинаковом уровне.заметь концы странной кривоты ))
00:53:112(2) - две клетки вправо одну вверх.
00:59:512 - спинер тяжеловытый
01:01:512 - 2 - 4клетки вниз. 2 влево.
01:05:512(3) - влево клетку
01:08:712(4) - кривой слайдер!просмотри остальные! такие же!
сделай слайдеры симметричными.
01:26:712 спинер закончи на 01.29.912.и добавь финишь

[Hellzero's diff]
сетку 3!!! обязательно! очень много неровностей

00:09:512 (2) - изза 2 сетки плохо смотрится.исправь на 3 и перемести на 1 клетку влево
00:18:512 (5,7) - выровняй.глаза режит ._.
00:22:712 (1) - смешной такой ) сделай симметричнее и поровнее )
00:29:912 (3) - выровняй
00:48:712(2) перекрывает следующик слайдер на 00.49.712.попробуй куда нибудь переместить.
00:59:512 (1,1,1) - расстояние по шкале разные...а на сетке одинаковое...сделай между первыми двумя расстояние поменьше
01:20:712(3) - сделай ровнее слайдер
01:26:712 - спинер начать тут
01:29:512 - добавить финиш.

Maybe that diff need fix.

What exactly u mean by that

звездую

star^^

star^^

Одну от меня :3

Держи Star Детк xD

ДЕСУ ДЕСУ ДЕСУ

Uber1337 wrote:

ДЕСУ ДЕСУ ДЕСУ

:3

star

на вот, держи

Here's my mod

Blue = Suggestion Red = Check this

[Normal]
-Playfield Background is the standard blue colour; consider changing it (it really only appears when you're in the song select menu but it's nice to have different things ;p)
To do this, go to Song Setup > Colours > Background Colour

-At the beginning there are two inherited timing sections set on sliders. This isn't really good, as it 'll only make the hitsound changes you want if you click AFTER the timing section starts. To fix this, move all timing sections that are set on notes 1/4 back.

00:00:312 (1,2,3) - The spacing in this combo is inconsistent. Please respace this ocmbo so that each note is roughly the same distance apart. I suggest going with (2,3)'s distance, since you continue to use that on the rest of your map. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/24215
00:09:112 (5,6) - Respace these; move them 1 grid left to fix.
00:17:912 (4,5) - Respace these; Make sure (4) isn't hidden under a slider
00:19:112 (6,7) - Jump in the middle of a combo? In the easiest difficulty? respace please.
00:23:912 (4,5) - 4,5 aren't spaced according to the rest of the combo. Maybe this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/24216
00:51:512 (1,1) - Sliders shouldn't be stacked like this. This is an unrankable setup. I suggest http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/24218

There are a few problems with this difficulty; please fix them as soon as you can.


[Insane >A<] (The >A< doesn't really mean anything does it? consider removing it.)

00:05:112 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - New combos here because of the jumps, also try this pattern. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/24220

Yeah... inconsistent spacing with combos, as in [Normal]. Go through the map and correct any spacing in combos that isn't the same.



[Hellzero's insane]
00:19:512 (8) - This slider kinda makes me think you were going to map that small break.... Make it a sinle note, perhaps?

This difficulty is in my opinion a lot closer to rankable standards than the other two. Great job.


... I see you have a lot of 'star' posts in your beatmap thread. I hope you haven't just been getting people to bump up your star count.

...I also see you have given kudosu to some of the star posts. Only give kudosu if you think their input has been helpful.

Azure_Kyte wrote:

Here's my mod

Blue = Suggestion Red = Check this

[Normal]
-Playfield Background is the standard blue colour; consider changing it (it really only appears when you're in the song select menu but it's nice to have different things ;p)
To do this, go to Song Setup > Colours > Background Colour

-At the beginning there are two inherited timing sections set on sliders. This isn't really good, as it 'll only make the hitsound changes you want if you click AFTER the timing section starts. To fix this, move all timing sections that are set on notes 1/4 back.

00:00:312 (1,2,3) - The spacing in this combo is inconsistent. Please respace this ocmbo so that each note is roughly the same distance apart. I suggest going with (2,3)'s distance, since you continue to use that on the rest of your map. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/24215
00:09:112 (5,6) - Respace these; move them 1 grid left to fix.
00:17:912 (4,5) - Respace these; Make sure (4) isn't hidden under a slider
00:19:112 (6,7) - Jump in the middle of a combo? In the easiest difficulty? respace please.
00:23:912 (4,5) - 4,5 aren't spaced according to the rest of the combo. Maybe this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/24216
00:51:512 (1,1) - Sliders shouldn't be stacked like this. This is an unrankable setup. I suggest http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/24218

There are a few problems with this difficulty; please fix them as soon as you can.


[Insane >A<] (The >A< doesn't really mean anything does it? consider removing it.)

00:05:112 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - New combos here because of the jumps, also try this pattern. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/24220

Yeah... inconsistent spacing with combos, as in [Normal]. Go through the map and correct any spacing in combos that isn't the same.



[Hellzero's insane]
00:19:512 (8) - This slider kinda makes me think you were going to map that small break.... Make it a sinle note, perhaps?

This difficulty is in my opinion a lot closer to rankable standards than the other two. Great job.


... I see you have a lot of 'star' posts in your beatmap thread. I hope you haven't just been getting people to bump up your star count.

...I also see you have given kudosu to some of the star posts. Only give kudosu if you think their input has been helpful.

Thhaaaaankss <3

комбо цвета поконтрастней сделай.

и в инсейне;
AR -1/-2
00:41:912 (1) - огромный бесполезный спиннер

ну скорей бы)

молодец, ленушка-кунушка*О*

[Hellzero's diff]
0:26:512 (2,3) right a bit?
0:37:912 (9) left 1 grid

[insane]
0:09:712 (3) right 1 grid
0:14:312 (2) up 1 grid
0:49:412 (6,7) (6) right 1 grid, (7) right + down 1 grid
1:00:912 (3,4,5) uneven spacing
1:25:112 (1,2,3,4,5) uneven spacing

[taiko]
acceptable for me... <_<

wmfchris wrote:

[Hellzero's diff]
0:26:512 (2,3) right a bit?
0:37:912 (9) left 1 grid

[insane]
0:09:712 (3) right 1 grid
0:14:312 (2) up 1 grid
0:49:412 (6,7) (6) right 1 grid, (7) right + down 1 grid
1:00:912 (3,4,5) uneven spacing
1:25:112 (1,2,3,4,5) uneven spacing

[taiko]
acceptable for me... <_<

Thank you (:

хуйпиздагавно. карта хорошая, песня тоже.
не звезда

ты охуенный
xD

STAR..

st@r

[Generall]
Audio-Lead in можно и на 1.5 секунды поставить, лишняя секунда ничего не даст.
Настоятельно рекомендую сделать такой же киа мод как и в Cape's Taiko.
нужна изя, иначе никак.

[Normal]
00:06:712 - Finish на старте
00:13:112 - ^
00:22:712 - ^
00:35:512 - ^
00:48:312 - убери хлопок и поставь финиш
00:51:113 - (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - убери все хлопушки.
00:52:312 - distance это раз, убрать новое комбо это два,
00:59:512 - спиннер должен закончится вот здесь 01:00:112 также finish hitsound сюда
01:01:112 - finish на конце
01:07:512 - finish
01:13:912 - finish на конце

[Hellzero's diff]
00:06:712 - finish на страте
00:13:112 - ^
00:22:712 - ^
00:35:512 - ^
01:01:112 - ^
01:07:512 - ^
00:48:312 - убери клап и вставь финиш
01:11:712 - new combo
01:13:912 - finish
01:20:312 - finish на конце
01:29:312 - убери финиш.

[Insane]
Писать опять про финишы и хитсаунды не буду, исходи из изи и гостевой диффы.
01:00:112 - finish на конце + нужена 2x Section картинка. Да и если честно, нахер ты 2х вставил.
01:03:912 - тот же геморой с 2х

Privet

Sorry for delay

[General]
1) Your bg (BG.jpg) need to resize to 1024x768 (current 961x719)
2) You need an approachcircle.png

[Normal]
00:22:712 (1) - A bit too far from spinner, since this is a normal diff
00:52:312 (1) - You should place this another place, it's very confusing
01:00:712 (1) - A bit too far from spinner, since this is a normal diff

[Cape's Taiko]
You better fix the Taiko BG, because the black bar on bottom. You have to remove it! Look here http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/29432

[Insane]
00:09:712 (3) - Move 1 grid right?
00:34:912 (9,10) - Meh, I don't like small spacing (anti-jump)
01:05:512 (2,3) - Evil jump~

[Hellzero's diff]
Fine~

Nice song
STAR

star :3

star :3

Star :3

star)

Cool, yeah xD
BattoRa 4ever!

Бла-бла :О

Starred ~

Star :d

What is it ?
It's a CATSTAR

star D:

Ну побыстрей бы ранкед. >w<

'__________________________________________________'


- This map needs an Easy diff.
- Custom hitcircle makes the map very hard to read. (Eyes hurt )

- Normal -
01:01:512 (2) - move up & left 1 grid (Lv3)
01:05:112 (2) - move left 4 grids & up 2 grids (Lv3)

- Hellzero's diff -
01:09:512 (9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - move down 1 grid (Lv2)

- Insane -
Difficulty setting is TOO HIGH.

звезда :3

Download: Masaomi Kida - Fukkireta (BattorA) [Beam's Easy].osu

Лови,это конечно нормал,а не изя,но 2-звездный.
Посылай играть в туториал всех,кто скажет что это недостаточно легко.

И ещё...

Исправь Kiai,как у меня в сложности:
00:06:712 - Первый.
01:01:112 - Второй.

Не забудь добавить меня в Tags в других сложностях.

[Song Setup --> Storyboarding]
Disable countdown - ты его вообще не используешь.
Disable letterboxes during breaks - ^

Вроде всё.

Хитсаунды расставил, лови: Download: Masaomi Kida - Fukkireta (BattorA) [Insane].osu

AlMod wrote:

Хитсаунды расставил, лови: [attachment=0:0cdc8]Masaomi Kida - Fukkireta (BattorA) [Insane].osu[/attachment:0cdc8]

:3

star owo

star~

СТАААр xD

<Easy>
wow it's not that easy

<Normal>
00:51:512 (1) - Here the changing in sample set sounds too sudden, either add fade-in for normal set or remove this inherited section

<Hellzero>
00:22:712 (1) - Looks super ugly
01:21:312 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - Confused me a bit on the first try, move the notes further apart?

<Insane>
More effort should be put in this map. First of all don't abuse AR9, it should only be applicable when the map is fast paced and with lots of jumps. This map just give me the feeling that the objects are randomly put and inappropriate jumpings are everywhere. I suggest a whole remap on this.

other things seem ok for me though

[General]
Remove audio from video file and full-resubmit please.
comboburst is too wide. Please keep it to 500 px wide max. Also do a horizontal flip to the image so that he's facing to the right.
Consider adding an approach circle too
That spinner image is really hard to see the cursor on. Consider a different image for that element.

[Beam's Easy]
Not a fan of stacks in easy difficulties - especially when sliders are involved. There are a lot of them in this difficulty, so I'll leave it to you if you want to change any.
00:03:512 (1,2) - This spacing is iffy. Maybe try to get them almost touching?
00:05:112 (3,4,5) - Kind of hard to read this rhythm if you don't know the song.
00:59:512 (1,2,3) - Kind of hard to tell that there's a different rhythm here.
Really good general design though.

[Normal]
00:23:912 (4,5) - Think you can rearrange to reduce the overlap here?
00:59:512 (1) - Waaay too short for a normal. It's rankable, sure, but it doesn't fit with a normal difficulty at all. Just go with the three synth notes or something.
01:14:712 (1,2,3) - Not a visually appealing pattern. Rearrange, perhaps?
The general rhythms here weren't very good imo. It was mostly just on the beat stuff and felt rather robotic to play. Maybe try to use some other rhythms with some of the stronger percussion and vocals?

[Cape's Taiko]
Looks fine

[Hellzero's diff]
Rather unorthodox difficulty name. :/
00:22:712 (1) - Really ugly.
00:32:312 (1,2,3,4,5) - ? Why?
00:41:912 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ There are more. They ... just don't fit the song to me at all.
00:59:512 (1,1,1) - Just keep them all as one combo please
01:14:512 (1) - Why soft sound set now? And the total lack of hitsounds is depressing.
This difficulty felt a bit difficult compared to the Normal diff. If you reduced some of the pointless stream-stacks and the jump distances, I think this would work really well as a hard difficulty.

[Insane]
The song and the general velocity you have mapped is way too slow for AR 9. Reduce to 8 at the least.
00:00:312 (1,2,3,4,5) - This reads really bad with that overlap - even at AR 9. Please try a different configuration.
00:27:312 (7,8) - This jump is rather large compared to the rest of the combos during this phrase of music. Try to make things more consistent.
00:48:312 (1,2,3) - Strange rhythm to throw out after all that huge spacing.
01:04:712 (2,3,4) - Doesn't read very well. Stack the 4.

Needs a bit more work, but it's looking up!

ご苦労さん。
なかなかいいじゃないか。

[general]
video offset 100ms.

[easy]
00:28:712 (3) this doesn't fit with the rest of the song.
01:17:512 (1,2) I think easy needs a downbeat on 1 and 3 here, rather than 2 and 4. move back 1 beat?
01:23:312 (5) this doesn't follow anything discernible in the music.

[normal]
00:59:512 (1) there's not even a good reason to have a spinner here.
01:10:712 (1) nazi

[Are you ready?]
apparently not. Why is this in pending?

[hell]
other than the triplets with no notes in the bg, I can't find anything that bugs me.

Remap :3

Download: Masaomi Kida - Fukkireta (Mizu) [Hellzireta].osu

starrr~

title sould be " Mischievous Function "

Muya wrote:

title sould be " Mischievous Function "

no
In all sources only one name.
Masaomi Kida - Fukkireta

Star

and

CTB Diff xD

Download: Masaomi Kida - Fukkireta (Mizu) [Fruitretta].osu

CTB difficulties are unrankable

Louis Cyphre wrote:

CTB difficulties are unrankable

Мне очень важно твоё мнение, спасибо.
п.с Для меня ранкабл.

Это было не мнение. Никто мапу не забаблит, это не шутка.
Лучше избежать то, что было тут
Ты можешь подумать, что я зла хочу, но это не так.

Значит я буду жаловаться пеппи.
Если МАТы е собраются баблить мапу с ктб диффой, то значит жалоба пеппи обеспечена.
Ктб является одним из режимов осу!, так же как и тайко.
Если же для тайко диффы можно, значит и должны ранкать ктб диффы.
Или тогда вообще ктб режим пусть убирают. Иж ты, придумали чего.

Моё дело предупредить.

:D

Download: Masaomi Kida - Fukkireta (Mizu) [Fruireta].osu

=w=
Irc

~ :3

gogo Mizu!

SOGOOD

[General]
I had to update the mizureta diff after I redownloaded. Maybe do a full submission if you do any fixes to try and fix that.

[Skin]
Add an approach circle please
Your BG's dimensions are... odd. You think you can get it in 1024x768 or 800x600?
I really, really dislike that spinner circle image. It's really difficult to track where your cursor is and makes short spinners with notes very soon after them far more difficult than they should be.
Add a spinner approach circle please.

[Beamsyreta]
00:03:512 (1,2,3,4,5) - It's pretty, but man is it beyond what the easiest difficulty should present.
00:57:912 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Compare the spacings here. There's not enough of a difference to tell the rhythm change.
01:23:312 (5) - This sounds really off from the music.
Good diff, minus that intro part.

[Beginnereta]
00:22:712 (1) - Way too soon after a spinner for a difficulty of this level.
00:59:512 (1) - A short spinner like this in a difficulty labeled as a beginner map? Please, no.
There were a lot of small overlaps that I didn't like such as 00:23:912 (4,5) - and 01:15:512 (2,3) - along with small misalignments that made the difficulty feel very unpolished. Try to go through your map and see if you can the presentation of your map better.
Hit sounding needs a lot of work too, imo.

[Hellzireta]
00:19:512 (8) - Why not just a normal hit?
00:43:312 (6,7) - This looks really misaligned...
Fun~

[Taikoreta]
00:19:912 - Kind of strange having a break during the drum bridge...
00:57:512 (10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - Something about this feels off...

[Mizureta]
00:05:112 (1) - End this at 00:05:712 -

[Fruireta]
CtB difficulties are unrankable. If you plan on getting this mapset ranked, you must remove this from the beatmap pack. You can link it in the first post if you wish.

Garven wrote:

[Hellzireta]
00:19:512 (8) - Why not just a normal hit? ok, chanched.
00:43:312 (6,7) - This looks really misaligned... fixed
Fun~

Download: Masaomi Kida - Fukkireta (Mizu) [Hellzireta].osu

Garven wrote:

[Beamsyreta]
00:03:512 (1,2,3,4,5) - It's pretty, but man is it beyond what the easiest difficulty should present. I've tried to impove spacing to make it more readable.
00:57:912 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Compare the spacings here. There's not enough of a difference to tell the rhythm change. Sure.
01:23:312 (5) - This sounds really off from the music. But if fits vocals perfectly.
Good diff, minus that intro part.

Download: Masaomi Kida - Fukkireta (Mizu) [Beamsyreta].osu

It was mapped a bit far ago,so I have no idea how to improve it.

To the top

This modding thread has been migrated to the new "modding discussions" system. Please make sure to re-post any existing (and unresolved) efforts to the new system as required.