Easy:
I'd suggest to avoid overlaps in easy diff.
00:12:140 (1,1,2,4) - seems like (1) should be moved to the top to avoid overlap with 3?
00:44:723 (1,3) - not parallel http://puu.sh/rJMEI/9890b217a5.png
00:46:312 (3,4) - not linear
01:03:001 (1) - this should be like 00:12:140 (1) - or 00:24:855 (5) - i assume?
01:40:749 (4,1) - not parallel
01:53:862 (1) - same shape issues as i already mentioned
02:14:623 - why break here? you didnt finish emphasizing this vocal line 02:12:935 (3) -
Overall SeemsGood
Normal:
00:21:279 (4) - reverse slider maybe?
01:28:829 (5,1) - not linear
01:33:398 (4) - nc maybe?
01:34:193 - vocal line starts here, on sliderend ;w;
02:06:080 - i dont really like this unmapped beat, actually there few of them that i didnt mentioned before ;w;
02:14:524 - same thing with break here, already mentioned this in easy diff mod above ^
02:22:471 (5,1) - they should be different i assume?
Gj, nice diff, seemed pretty consistent.
Hard:
00:14:524 (5) - nc maybe?
00:15:716 (10) - i dont really like this shape (due to vocal changes)
00:19:094 - why is this not mapped? ithis is hard diff, theres no reason to skip this part ;w;
00:55:849 (1,2) - make s-end and s-start linear?
01:26:842 (3,1) - 328/214 to make (3) stacked with 01:26:047 (1) - ?
02:00:816 - already mentioned this break
02:01:610 - ^
02:14:657 - ^ ;w;
02:52:272 (2,1) - they should have the same shape?
Insane:
00:15:319 (3,4) - they shouldnt have the same shape? due to the song
maybe make (4) with higher sv
00:20:484 (2) - 192/202 cmon dude ;w;
00:24:259 (9) - nc?
01:25:253 (4) - 173/272
01:26:445 (2) - 166/253
01:26:047 (1) - 16/208 then?
01:26:643 (3) - 200/384 then?
02:01:809 (2,5) - why are they stacked? 02:02:802 (5) - 57/201
02:02:405 (3,2) - make them stacked then
02:05:981 (9) - nc?
02:14:524 - told you about this break already
02:28:729 (8,1) - this transition seems not that smooth tbh
02:43:133 (3,6,7) - i dont think they are linear enough
02:49:094 (4) - move the red anchor a bit to the top? lmao
thats it!
gl!
m4m:
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/496609
I'd suggest to avoid overlaps in easy diff.
00:12:140 (1,1,2,4) - seems like (1) should be moved to the top to avoid overlap with 3?
00:44:723 (1,3) - not parallel http://puu.sh/rJMEI/9890b217a5.png
00:46:312 (3,4) - not linear
01:03:001 (1) - this should be like 00:12:140 (1) - or 00:24:855 (5) - i assume?
01:40:749 (4,1) - not parallel
01:53:862 (1) - same shape issues as i already mentioned
02:14:623 - why break here? you didnt finish emphasizing this vocal line 02:12:935 (3) -
Overall SeemsGood
Normal:
00:21:279 (4) - reverse slider maybe?
01:28:829 (5,1) - not linear
01:33:398 (4) - nc maybe?
01:34:193 - vocal line starts here, on sliderend ;w;
02:06:080 - i dont really like this unmapped beat, actually there few of them that i didnt mentioned before ;w;
02:14:524 - same thing with break here, already mentioned this in easy diff mod above ^
02:22:471 (5,1) - they should be different i assume?
Gj, nice diff, seemed pretty consistent.
Hard:
00:14:524 (5) - nc maybe?
00:15:716 (10) - i dont really like this shape (due to vocal changes)
00:19:094 - why is this not mapped? ithis is hard diff, theres no reason to skip this part ;w;
00:55:849 (1,2) - make s-end and s-start linear?
01:26:842 (3,1) - 328/214 to make (3) stacked with 01:26:047 (1) - ?
02:00:816 - already mentioned this break
02:01:610 - ^
02:14:657 - ^ ;w;
02:52:272 (2,1) - they should have the same shape?
Insane:
00:15:319 (3,4) - they shouldnt have the same shape? due to the song
maybe make (4) with higher sv
00:20:484 (2) - 192/202 cmon dude ;w;
00:24:259 (9) - nc?
01:25:253 (4) - 173/272
01:26:445 (2) - 166/253
01:26:047 (1) - 16/208 then?
01:26:643 (3) - 200/384 then?
02:01:809 (2,5) - why are they stacked? 02:02:802 (5) - 57/201
02:02:405 (3,2) - make them stacked then
02:05:981 (9) - nc?
02:14:524 - told you about this break already
02:28:729 (8,1) - this transition seems not that smooth tbh
02:43:133 (3,6,7) - i dont think they are linear enough
02:49:094 (4) - move the red anchor a bit to the top? lmao
thats it!
gl!
m4m:
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/496609