CrazySola wrote:

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regenz wrote:

**** THis is very hard to mod due a lot of chaging distance snaping rate . ARGGGGGGGGG!

• I can't see any BG in any Difficulty. Also, the one you wanted to use is too big (both resolution and file format). please use this one and fix:
  
  SPOILER

  

• .Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
  01:01:274 (2,3,4) - really unintuitive. (3) and (4) are too close if you compare to the overall spacing you used.
  01:02:624 (5) - move farther from (4)
  01:04:371 (6) - move farther from (5)
  01:27:794 (4,5,6) - why this weird shape? move (5) down
  01:31:665 (1,2) - uh....
  .Errors/Mistakes: (Bad gameplay issues or badly applied changes)
  01:09:205 (5) - way too close. This change of spacing is not good-looking or playable well.
  01:15:405 (4,5) - compare with 01:13:850 (1,2) / 01:15:986 (5,6) and you'll understand the problem.

1. Capitalize all words in title.
2. I suggest you use offset 8050. Yours is difficult to check cause of vocals.
3. Rename BG file to up9587.jpg and do Full Submit (So BG will work)

1. 00:27:791 (1) - Remove New combo.
2. 00:37:082 (2) - 1 grid down.
3. 00:54:501 (1) - Spacing.
4. 01:06:888 (3,4) - Stack them same as (1,2)
5. 01:15:985 (5) - New combo.
6. 01:17:727 (6,7,8) - 1 grid down.

1. 00:27:398 (1) - Remove new combo.
2. 00:52:172 (3,1) - Too far.
3. 01:14:236 (1) - Remove new combo.
4. 01:20:043 (3,4) - Spacing.
5. 01:21:204 (1,2,3) - Confusing part.
6. 01:46:559 (1) - This trick is not for normal diff. Delete this note.
7. 02:09:978 (3) - New combo.
8. 02:53:720 (3,4) - NO WAI. Make them in one streak. ( And (7) too )

1. 00:32:429 (2) - Space it by grid.
2. 00:35:526 (1,2) - 1 grid left.
3. 00:46:171 (4,5) - Stacked closer compared to others
4. 00:48:107 (3) - 1 grid left.
5. 00:54:494 (2) - Mai God Orz
6. 01:18:107 (1,1,1) - Remove new combos.
7. 01:31:655 (2) - Reverse arrow looks hidden. Unrankable. Do something about it.
8. 02:00:784 (3) - Place it under (2) = =

• 1. Set a Preview Point?
  2. You need a spinner-approachcircle.png and a hitcircleoverlay.png

• 01:21:618(4):Clap
  01:31:682(1,2):Spacing,too far
  01:34:779:Spinner starts here

• 01:30:134(8):Put this under 7
  01:34:586(1,2,3):Spacing,too close
  02:31:295(1):Finish
  02:42:908:Spinner starts here
  02:55:295:^

• 02:18:521:Spinner ends here
  02:55:102(1,2,3,4,5):Spacing,too close

Mystearica wrote:

Hmm~ I like this song now

I know we don't do this anymore but to show my support,

Good luck getting it ranked.

Astom wrote:

Hi~ sry for be late :3
Well no problems found so Star~

------Edit---------
Sry for this xD

-00:36:522 (5) unsnaped circle <.<, u can see it in AIMod << fix
-resize comboburst1.png,comboburst2.png and comboburst.png, Max size is 500x767. << fix
-fix the name of this "up9587.jpg.jpg" xD << ∑(￣Д ￣;) I ... I never see it before ... that's so amazing

>-<~

Thanks

Teara wrote:

Hi!

Star for a good mapset.

[Easy]

Offset is not the same as [Normal] and [Hard] << fix

A nice diff, but I think the slider velocity is kinda to low, even for this easy =p But its fine. Just my opinion, you dont have to change this.
^
^
I think that too ... now it's 0.60 :3

00:39:424 (1) - Change with a slider maybe. its a hard spinner :< << fix

Map to end :< << fix

[Hard]

Good job, but the start is easy compared to the end.

But I guess its fine.

lovhin456 wrote:

Hi!

This color means I'm not sure
This color means is important

General;
- 2 combo burst of the same image ?? Also the the first combo burst proper name is "comboburst-0" and the second comboburst name is "comboburst-1" and so on if you want to add more << fix
- Nice skin ~
- Make the spinner approach circle other color << fix
- Delete: touhou, yellow zebra and sound of red eye from tags ~ << fix

Easy;
- 00:35:552 >> too short, end at 00:36:714 << fix
- 01:04:391 >> end at 01:04:972 << fix
- 01:27:811 >> end at 01:28:585 << fix
- 01:34:004 >> delete this slider, replace it with one note here and the other one at 01:34:391 << fix
- 01:31:972 >> 2 ticks forward but end at the same point as before moving it << Hmm ... I think it feel strange
- 01:56:069 >> end at 01:56:843 << fix
- 02:33:617 >> kiai time should start here << Oops ... my false OwO fix
- 02:42:714 >> 2 ticks forward << fix
- 02:53:359 >> too short ~ fix this ~ << fix

* Normal and Hard are okk to me ~
* Star ~

deepsea wrote:

[Hard]
02:03:03(1)(2) D: >> fix

8,069ms 3/4
59,165ms 4/4
97,875ms 3/4
139,681ms 4/4
178,391ms 3/4

Derekku wrote:

[General]
*I see no spinner-approachcircle in the folder. Please add one (even if it's the default skin's). >> fix
*The same applies for a hitcircleoverlay and regular approachcircle. >> fix
*comboburst1/2 don't work because you have them named wrong. If you only have one combobusrt, you may just name it "comboburst". If you have more than one, you need to name them "comboburst-#" starting with 0. So, you should have a comboburst-0, comboburst-1, and comboburst-2. Although... >> fix
*I don't see the point in your current comboburst-1. It's backwards. Every comboburst should be flipped to look properly when it comes out of the left side of the screen. It will automatically be flipped for the right side of the screen, so if that was your intention for comboburst-1, it doesn't work. Please just remove comboburst-1 and rename comboburst-2 accordingly. >> fix
*section-pass looks a bit strange having the bottom cropped off like it currently is. >> Umm ... i can't TAT
*section-fail blends in with the background so much that I could hardly see it. @-@; >> oh, i think i will make new section-pass and fail next time
*I'm pretty sure that "red" and "eye" should be capitalized. Therefore, the title should be "Sound of Red Eye". Please follow these instructions to make sure that your map uploads correctly once you've changed the title. >> fix
*I think that the preview point would sound a bit better starting earlier (at 72907). >> fix
*Most of this song is in 3/4, not 4/4. Please use the following timing instead: >> fix (=A= i know how to set it ... but i don't know what is it)

8,069ms 3/4
59,165ms 4/4
97,875ms 3/4
139,681ms 4/4
178,391ms 3/4

*Create a new uninherited (red) timing section for each of the above sections (the first is an adjustment of your current offset). Any inherited (green) sections afterwards will need their time signature changed as well. The BPM is fine, so you won't need to adjust that. You may, however, need to resnap all notes after doing this to make sure they're not 1-2ms off. >> fix
*I notice that you're trying to change sliderticks to claps, but sometimes you don't even have the custom override set in the timing panel. o-o; >> hmm ... i think it ok
*Always place inherited sections ~1/4th before the note you want them to affect (except for kiai). This especially affects slider bpm changes and soft/normal sampleset changes. If the player clicks the desired note early/late, the wrong volume/etc will be used if the inherited section is directly on the note. I'm mainly saying this because you have slider bpm changes directly on notes, which sometimes screw up. Actually, now that I look again, you do this correctly in some spots, but then don't in others. @-@ >> @_@ i don't understand because i have a s*ck Eng skill ... so i will try to translate and fix it

[Easy] >> fix
*I expected at least one more break since this is the easiest diff, yet the other diffs have more breaks...
*Second kiai section doesn't end at the same place as the other diffs.
00:26:649 (1,2,3,4) - spaced out beats like this are kinda awkward for helping the player get the timing of the song. I expected three beat-long sliders for each of these or something.
01:01:294 (2,3,4) - this looked a bit confusing to me, so perhaps make (2,3) a slider?
01:58:778 (5,1) - spacing? o-o;

[Normal] << fix
00:58:778 (1,2) - a bit far from the center of the spinner
01:11:359 (1,2,3) - perhaps make this a repeating slider instead? I didn't expect for these to be on red ticks.
02:25:294 (1) - eh... it's a bit awkward to have a break, a slider, and then another break =X
02:52:198 (1) - this isn't stacked correctly under the last slider

[Hard] >> fix
*Why is the stacking leniency so low? o-o;
00:37:294 (2,3,4) - these aren't stacked correctly
01:05:359 (1,2) - the ends aren't stacked nicely

Overall, I think that this mapset is pretty nice. For one of your first maps, it's not bad at all. However, most of the things I mentioned (mainly the general stuff) are issues that could make or break your map. :p Good luck!

Thanks

brikel wrote:

Sorry I'm too late

[Easy]
01:58:778 (5) - change the hit sound clap at the end point? >> fix

Um... I don't find other things.

Nice song!

+39 star !! xD

Thanks

TKiller wrote:

[Hard]

Overall Difficulty +1, it becomes easier to read >> fix

HP Drain +1 >> fix

Stack Leniency +1 (it becomes too low if you +1 OD) >> fix

you use too much soft hitsounds, alternate soft and normal hitsounds to make map more lively and enjoyable >> Umm ... i will try

01:12:520 (1,2,3,4) - these notes could use normal sampleset, for example. Just try switching soft to normal at different places of the map, I'm sure you'll find sections that could use normal sampleset better than soft. >> fix

No complains on the map itself, design and rhythm are ok

Actually, all these maps are fine. Just keep in mind my comment about normal hitsound sampleset. GJ.

Thanks

orioncomet wrote:

[General]
- delete .osb file and full submit again >> fix
- black combo color isn't a godd idea for use it, It's still hard to see tho can you make it lighter more then this or just change it to other color >> fix

[Easy]
00:55:681 - low volume of this timing selection a bit, It's too loud and not match with normal hit clap >> fix
02:16:198 - ^
02:30:133 - ^

[Normal]
- low HP by 2 tick >> fix
- + OD by 1 tick because silder is faster then OD It'd be overlapped >> fix
01:27:036 (3,4,5,6,7) - look a bit too hard for Normal because of pretty high BPM >> fix
02:11:552 - low volume of this timing selection a bit, It's too loud and not match with normal hit clap >> fix
02:13:875 - ^
02:16:198 - ^
02:37:875 - ^

[Hard]
- +OD by 1 tick =] >> fix
01:16:198 - add hit note >> fix
seem fine

your/this map can getting better, for this map look like you only map follow with vocal if you map follow with music a bit it'd be better/more fun

Thx P'Ploy

DiamondCrash wrote:

General; >> fix

00:08:069 - Offset goes here.
The time signature should be 3/4. All of it.
Unsilence your sliderticks. >> *A* ok


Normal;

00:08:069 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1) - This doesn't make any sense. >> 0.0 ? i think it's ok

Insane; >> change hard -> insane ? ... hmm ... good idea

01:15:907 (1) - Delete. >> fix
01:31:488 (5,1,2) - This spacing is silly~ Change it. >> fix
01:47:165 (3) - New combo. >> fix
01:47:940 (1) - No new combo. >> fix
02:16:101 (5) - Delete. >> fix
02:54:520 (7) - This 0.5 section is silly~ Remove it. >> fix

l3lueskyiiz wrote:

DiamondCrash wrote:

General; >> fix

00:08:069 - Offset goes here.
The time signature should be 3/4. All of it.
Unsilence your sliderticks. >> *A* ok


Normal;

00:08:069 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1) - This doesn't make any sense. >> 0.0 ? i think it's ok

Insane; >> change hard -> insane ? ... hmm ... good idea

01:15:907 (1) - Delete. >> fix
01:31:488 (5,1,2) - This spacing is silly~ Change it. >> fix
01:47:165 (3) - New combo. >> fix
01:47:940 (1) - No new combo. >> fix
02:16:101 (5) - Delete. >> fix
02:54:520 (7) - This 0.5 section is silly~ Remove it.>> fix

Thanks

reset wrote:

Sound of Red Eye >w<b