i don't know if a mod will help here, but i really want to see this ranked or at least bubbled
(this is also to try in vain to get midge to try again to get this ranked and to have his phone notify him that someone posted something)
i will try to find as many things wrong with this map as possible, and most of them will be pretty nazi
if i find the same things as monstrata that you already rejected, then just ignore it please bc i couldn't remember everything monstrata talked about
[beyond extreme]
by the way, i think this is pretty playable even for a 19k; i passed it HD with B (pretty much a sight read except for the beginning), but i think i could get an A if i practiced
but tbh star difficulty is pretty broken
- 00:02:706 (5,6) - right now, the cursor movement is a little bit weird here since the slider path changes the cursor direction, so try something more like this?
or
- 00:03:563 (2,3) - same thing here, so try moving 2 down like this
- 00:05:620 (3,3) - consider stacking these notes, it's just a bit off anyhow
- 00:08:363 (2) - maybe curve this slider up, pointing towards the other note, like this (i tried to keep your pattern similar to what it was before)
if you do, perhaps try to repeat the same motion here, 00:08:878 (2,3)
- 00:11:963 (3) - i know that you are mapping the drums here, but maybe change the slider direction when the melody comes in. maybe move the slider's curve thing to the white tick instead of afterwards, maybe try something like this:
- 00:13:849 (3,4) - perhaps straighten out the (3) slider and point towards the (4) slider. stack (4) onto the sliderend of the next (1). i think it would look more clean
- 00:16:763 (4,5,6,7) - i think you may have the wrong rhythm here, so either make (4) shorter to the white tick, or extend it to the next red tick, as i only can hear a triple there and not a quad.
- 00:17:792 (2) - ocd wise, can you line this up with the next slider
- 00:19:335 (1) - from this to 00:22:420 (3) - i think you should change your NC'ing here to emphasize the melody, like you did from 00:14:192 (1) - to 00:18:306 (1)
- 00:25:506 (1) - to keep the flow the same, change to something like this?
- 00:25:678 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - i am in love with this pattern
- 00:31:163 (2) - for flow, maybe ctrl g
- 00:34:420 (1) - i don't really like the kickslider here, because i think it's really confusing rhythm wise, but i still think it's okay
- 00:41:792 (1) - i know you increase spacing here because the SV increases too, but maybe put a little bit closer to the next note, just to make it a bit easier
- 00:47:792 (1,2,1,2) - wow, this pattern fits the music so well
- 01:02:192 (1) - i don't think this slider needs to be this complicated, lol.
- 01:07:506 (1) - in order to give a better visual cue for where the next note is going, consider rotating 180 degrees and stacking: like this
- 01:13:849 (1,2,1) - keep same spacing here, i don't hear anything in the music to merit one having a bigger jump than the other.
- 01:20:363 (2,1) - try moving the (1) referred to here out farther, just like the slider-circles get bigger, because i feel like the (1) slider should be in the same place in reference to the (2) circle to the slider-circles
- 01:24:478 (2) - move down to x:376, y:368 so that 01:24:135 (1) - points to the circle for aesthetics
- 01:24:649 (1) - point the slider to the next note, for aesthetics
- 01:34:249 (1) - in the music, there is a shimmer, so maybe reflect that in this slider!
- 01:36:135 (1,1) - make a bigger jump here, there is a loud note in msuic
- 01:38:363 (1) - maybe move to the right and slightly up here, so that it better follows the slider swirl of the previous note
- 01:48:135 - i would love it if you added a short 1/8 or 1/4 slider here with high SV for the loud note in the music!
(sorry about the change in skin for screenshots)
if you need any clarification about
anything whatsoever, just say so in your response, and i will clarify it
or pm me in game
seriously though, most of my mod is unneeded tbh, i think it probably could be ranked even without this
since it seems that just the beyond extreme diff is preventing this from rank, i won't mod the other ones, unless you say anything about it and i'll be sure to mod the other diffs too! also if you want me to look back at it again, i'll be sure to! i'm sure i missed a ton of things that i could have said
i'm a big fan of your mapping! your racemization is especially awesome :3
tons of luck finding bn's!