Nofool wrote:

haaaa so that was that thing..... i was wondering how the fuck he got those good looking comparisons.. also y do u stop modding rip

1. all diff → a green line is misalignment. please check it.

1. 00:00:690 ~ 00:07:151 - notes color is monotonous. 00:02:536 - and 00:06:228 - try use reverse color of the notes color just before that. (00:00:690 - and 00:04:382 -)
2. 00:18:228 - and 00:21:920 - this slider is needless? need a break, please put notes to change.
3. 00:44:997 ~ 00:51:459 - refer to 00:00:690 ~ 00:07:151 -
4. 01:03:459 (1,2,3) - K - - K - - K ?
5. 01:20:997 - and 01:24:690 - delete slider and put notes.

1. 00:17:920 - change k use a pattern unlike kkd.
2. 00:21:613 - change d ^
3. 00:18:228 - and 00:21:920 - hmm... same as Kantan. please think once.
4. 01:11:766 - change d fits a vocal.
5. 01:03:305 (7,8,9) - change ddk ^
6. 01:20:690 - change k
7. 01:24:382 - change d
8. 01:20:997 - and 01:24:690 - same as Kantan.

1. 00:02:228 - change d?
2. 00:46:536 - ^
3. 01:13:536 - add k follow a vocal.

1. 00:12:536 - ,00:13:459 - and 00:14:382 - need a break. please note delete.
2. 00:17:920 - change k fits the sound of the guitar.
3. 00:21:766 - change d ^
4. 01:00:536 - ,01:01:459 - and 01:02:382 - delete
5. 01:20:690 - change k
6. 01:24:536 - change d

1. 00:04:151 (46,47,48) - delete notes pattern is very long despite Inner Oni.
2. 00:17:920 (24,25,26) - ddk → kkk change? fits a guitar.
3. 00:21:613 (51,52,53) - ddk → ddd
4. 00:48:459 (225,226,227) - delete
5. 01:20:690 - change kkk
6. 01:24:382 - change ddd
7. 01:26:690 ~ 01:27:151 - you can put ddk ddk.

1. 00:17:459 - kkk kkd k → kkd kkk k ?
2. 00:28:690 - ddddkdkdk → ddddkdkkd fits a guitar, and 00:29:305 - can follow to the drumbeat from here neatly.
3. 01:20:228 - refer to 00:17:459 -
4. 01:26:690 - same as Oni, you can put ddkkd k.

Labyr wrote:

hi
I do mod after an interval of a half year lol so bad... np

[ General]

1. all diff → a green line is misalignment. please check it.

[ Kantan]

1. 00:00:690 ~ 00:07:151 - notes color is monotonous. 00:02:536 - and 00:06:228 - try use reverse color of the notes color just before that. (00:00:690 - and 00:04:382 -) i think current structure has enough variety (and fit more the song than reverse)
2. 00:18:228 - and 00:21:920 - this slider is needless? need a break, please put notes to change. haa fits well the guitar imo
3. 00:44:997 ~ 00:51:459 - refer to 00:00:690 ~ 00:07:151 - changed a bit
4. 01:03:459 (1,2,3) - K - - K - - K ? done
5. 01:20:997 - and 01:24:690 - delete slider and put notes. /

[ Futsuu]

1. 00:17:920 - change k use a pattern unlike kkd.
2. 00:21:613 - change d ^ applied both
3. 00:18:228 - and 00:21:920 - hmm... same as Kantan. please think once. /
4. 01:11:766 - change d fits a vocal.
5. 01:03:305 (7,8,9) - change ddk ^ i prefer current patterns
6. 01:20:690 - change k
7. 01:24:382 - change d applied both
8. 01:20:997 - and 01:24:690 - same as Kantan. /

[ Muzukashii]

1. 00:02:228 - change d? prefer k
2. 00:46:536 - ^ /
3. 01:13:536 - add k follow a vocal. done

[ Oni]

1. 00:12:536 - ,00:13:459 - and 00:14:382 - need a break. please note delete. patterns are too simple and fit instrumental, i dont think it needs break
2. 00:17:920 - change k fits the sound of the guitar.
3. 00:21:766 - change d ^ applied both
4. 01:00:536 - ,01:01:459 - and 01:02:382 - delete /
5. 01:20:690 - change k
6. 01:24:536 - change d applied both

[ Inner Oni]

1. 00:04:151 (46,47,48) - delete notes pattern is very long despite Inner Oni. plays weird with break because of unstable timing x_x
2. 00:17:920 (24,25,26) - ddk → kkk change? fits a guitar. i think ddk is better
3. 00:21:613 (51,52,53) - ddk → ddd ok
4. 00:48:459 (225,226,227) - delete /
5. 01:20:690 - change kkk no
6. 01:24:382 - change ddd yes
7. 01:26:690 ~ 01:27:151 - you can put ddk ddk. this sound is too low and all the rest follow the guitar melody

[ Ura Oni]

1. 00:17:459 - kkk kkd k → kkd kkk k ? i prefer current pattern
2. 00:28:690 - ddddkdkdk → ddddkdkkd fits a guitar, and 00:29:305 - can follow to the drumbeat from here neatly. hmm i prefer ddddkdkdk because kdkdk fits the previous patterns
3. 01:20:228 - refer to 00:17:459 - /
4. 01:26:690 - same as Oni, you can put ddkkd k. /

it's mapset made very well, good luck.

IControl wrote:

iControl's Mod


Kantan


00:04:382 (7) - change to d
00:05:305 (9) - d i pref keeping the same color here, i don't like trying too hard for variety
00:07:151 (12) - d I think all these should end on d because the drum sounds lower also I thought 00:04:382 (7) - d would be nice since it goes well with the guitar im just like making a lil difference on those pattern to show the guitar's intensity change, not really trying to perfectly follow it


00:11:459 - add d
00:13:305 - add d again to match the vocals hmm might be seen as too hard yet, im just getting space for long sliders


00:59:459 - ^


Futsuu


00:07:151 (23) - d? sounds lower /


00:21:459 (24,25) - ctrl g sounds lower than higher changed those


01:11:459 (2) - move to here 01:11:151 -
01:13:305 (7) - move to 01:12:997 - I feel the vocals really stand out here and shouldn't be ignored im just trying to get clear break and separating things as much as possible instead of consistently having notes all over the part lol, so yeah ide rather miss that vocal


01:24:228 (24,25) - ctrl g again changed


01:25:920 (28) - remove? it doesn't sound nesscary consistency with similar parts


Inner Oni


01:13:997 (20) - remove
01:14:151 (21) - remove
01:14:228 (21,22) - change to kkk D (should be a triple than a finsher) This sounds better imo and not to over mapped hmm i think kkddk fits more, even drums


Ura Oni


00:21:766 (53) - change to d sounds lower too many kkd


01:06:536 (11,12,13) - change to d d d I didn't think the finisher was necessary and it didn't sound very high here so this fits this part is meh, timing is so unstable that i chosed to make it all finishers so it's not too noticeable honestly lol


01:26:536 - ->01:27:151 - You could add more notes here but I think it sounds fine either way up 2 u just emphasizing the melody a bit i guess


The diffs I didn't mod I thought there sounded fine Good luck!

• [General]

1. You should resnap and unify the kiai time of all difficulties.
2. Time signature is 4/4 in some sessions of Futsuu, Oni, Inner Oni and Ura Oni. Please turn them to red lines, make them as 3/4 and inherit again.
3. Remove unnecessary timing points in the Onis (e.g. 00:15:382 and 01:18:151 - ).
4. Source: ベルセルク
5. Tags: Add "Berserk 2016", remove "ベルセルク"

• [Kantan]

1. 01:12:074 (3) - consider changing this note to d for the pitch decrease of vocal ? This would result in a good contrast to 01:13:613 (5,6) -

• [Futsuu]

1. 00:50:228 (86) - maybe k to keep it consistent with 00:04:074 (12,18) and 00:48:382 (80) - ?
2. 01:12:074 (5) - same as Kantan

• [Muzukashii]

1. 00:31:151 (70,72) - swapping these notes to k d would accompany the vocal nicely. In this way the triplet at 00:31:613 (73,74,75) - could be further emphasized as well.
2. 01:12:074 (6) - same as Kantan
3. 01:13:613 (12) - maybe d as you did in Kantan and Futsuu ?

• [Oni]

1. 00:31:151 (97,99) - same as Muzukashii
2. 01:12:074 (7) - same as Kantan
3. 01:13:613 (14) - same as Muzukashii

• [Inner Oni]
  
  This difficulty is too similar to Ura Oni in terms of note density. You should either remove it or make it simpler by cracking the 1/4 chains. Rename Ura to Inner if you choose the former.

• [Ura Oni]

1. 00:31:151 (127,129) - same as Muzukashii
2. 01:18:151 (43) - this note could be removed to free the subsequent big note considering how 01:21:766 - is mapped. If you think that a triplet lacks emphasis, you may add d at 01:17:766 and 01:17:843 - and then move the timing point at 01:17:843 - to 01:17:766 -

Nardoxyribonucleic wrote:

Hi, here is the M4M as requested. (Finally I have some time to mod again...)

• [General]

1. You should resnap and unify the kiai time of all difficulties. ? this was done on the latest version already
2. Time signature is 4/4 in some sessions of Futsuu, Oni, Inner Oni and Ura Oni. Please turn them to red lines, make them as 3/4 and inherit again. i don't get that part, there is only one time signature and this is 3/4 in all difficulties
3. Remove unnecessary timing points in the Onis (e.g. 00:15:382 and 01:18:151 - ). Those are used to prevent SV bugs as the SV is supposed to change just for the kiai, keeping only the second line may create a bug where the first note is not at the right speed, this happens a lot in SV maps and using another timing point a bit earlier fixes the issue. This technique is rarely/almost never used on ranked maps as they rarely use SV changes, there are a few example of this bug on ranked maps, https://osu.ppy.sh/s/405815 for example on this one that was ranked recently, you can see at - 03:32:471 (955) - the the note and the line are not coming at the same speed while they should be.
4. Source: ベルセルク
5. Tags: Add "Berserk 2016", remove "ベルセルク"

• [Kantan]

1. 01:12:074 (3) - consider changing this note to d for the pitch decrease of vocal ? This would result in a good contrast to 01:13:613 (5,6) - ok

• [Futsuu]

1. 00:50:228 (86) - maybe k to keep it consistent with 00:04:074 (12,18) and 00:48:382 (80) - ? id like to keep just for some variation, same happens for - 00:52:074 (92,93) -.
2. 01:12:074 (5) - same as Kantan

ok

• [Muzukashii]

1. 00:31:151 (70,72) - swapping these notes to k d would accompany the vocal nicely. In this way the triplet at 00:31:613 (73,74,75) - could be further emphasized as well. changed those to d d k d kkk and made what you said at - 00:32:997 (80,81,82) - instead
2. 01:12:074 (6) - same as Kantan
3. 01:13:613 (12) - maybe d as you did in Kantan and Futsuu ? both done

• [Oni]

1. 00:31:151 (97,99) - same as Muzukashii emphasizing the melody more than the vocal this time, si i'd rather keep as it is
2. 01:12:074 (7) - same as Kantan
3. 01:13:613 (14) - same as Muzukashii both done

• [Inner Oni]
  
  This difficulty is too similar to Ura Oni in terms of note density. You should either remove it or make it simpler by cracking the 1/4 chains. Rename Ura to Inner if you choose the former. i did cut the long streams, but to be honest i dont see the density as an issue at all, ura doesnt necessarily means harder than inner, it's fine as long as they provide different patterns.. there ranked maps having inner and ura very similar, i just can't call them both inner.

• [Ura Oni]

1. 00:31:151 (127,129) - same as Muzukashii /
2. 01:18:151 (43) - this note could be removed to free the subsequent big note considering how 01:21:766 - is mapped. If you think that a triplet lacks emphasis, you may add d at 01:17:766 and 01:17:843 - and then move the timing point at 01:17:843 - to 01:17:766 - it definitely plays better with this k to me, i would rather keep it

You may call me back after reaching +12 SP~

• [General]

1. Time signature is 4/4 in some sessions of Futsuu, Oni, Inner Oni and Ura Oni in the editor. Although it does not affect the actual gameplay, please turn them to red lines, make them as 3/4 and inherit again to avoid confusion.
   (screenshot at 00:16:074 - in Futsuu showing 4/4 metronome in the editor)
2. The map you showed has such a problem because the start of the kiai is not snapped. If it is snapped at 03:32:470 - but not 03:32:471 - , both the note and the line will be in sync. So I would strongly recommend you to remove unnecessary green lines in Oni, Inner Oni and Ura Oni as shown below.

• [Oni]

1. 00:15:382 - this green line could be removed.
2. 01:18:151 - same as ^

• [Inner Oni]

1. 00:15:382 - same as Oni
2. 01:13:613 (17) - could be changed to d as well to make it consistent with Oni.

• [Ura Oni]

1. 00:15:382 - same as Oni
2. 01:25:382 - maybe add a timing point here with 1.0x SV as you did in Oni and Inner Oni ? This would also cohere with the slowdown you made at 00:22:613 -

Nardoxyribonucleic wrote:

A quick recheck here. (no kd)

• [General]

1. Time signature is 4/4 in some sessions of Futsuu, Oni, Inner Oni and Ura Oni in the editor. Although it does not affect the actual gameplay, please turn them to red lines, make them as 3/4 and inherit again to avoid confusion.
   (screenshot at 00:16:074 - in Futsuu showing 4/4 metronome in the editor) this is not the case in my version of the map... i have 3/4 absolutely everywhere, same screen on futsuu with no change :
   
2. The map you showed has such a problem because the start of the kiai is not snapped. If it is snapped at 03:32:470 - but not 03:32:471 - , both the note and the line will be in sync. So I would strongly recommend you to remove unnecessary green lines in Oni, Inner Oni and Ura Oni as shown below. i mean this actually happens with correctly snapped lines/notes too sometimes, but alright i will rmove them and make sure there is no issue

• [Oni]

1. 00:15:382 - this green line could be removed.
2. 01:18:151 - same as ^ done

• [Inner Oni]

1. 00:15:382 - same as Oni done
2. 01:13:613 (17) - could be changed to d as well to make it consistent with Oni. done

• [Ura Oni]

1. 00:15:382 - same as Oni
2. 01:25:382 - maybe add a timing point here with 1.0x SV as you did in Oni and Inner Oni ? This would also cohere with the slowdown you made at 00:22:613 - this time i would like to keep the higher SV because that is the last diff/i think the stream suddenly on slower SV doesnt play as well as the patterns on first part

Nwolf wrote:

oh a bubbled set

[General]

00:37:613 - Very calm part compared to the rest of the song, maybe you wanna use a lower volume (50% would make sense maybe) changed on all difficulties to 70% volum

[Muzukashii]
00:01:305 - 00:03:151 - Muzukashii is the only difficulty that features a difficulty curve in the beginning (00:04:843 - ) which by itself I find a very nice idea actually, but it's not present in the other difficulties, leading to inconsistency across the set. Might as well just map the two mentioned spots.
> 00:45:613 - 00:47:459 - same story removed notes on both spots

00:23:074 (41) - All diffs use this as a gap to split 00:22:843 - and 00:23:151 - , Muzukashii is again the only one not doing so. It takes away emphasis for 00:23:151 - so it's a rather disturbing note. One solution would be moving it to 00:22:920 - , another solution would be moving it 00:23:228 - AND deleting 00:22:997 (40) - .
> 00:24:690 - 00:28:382 - repeat if applied
/

[Oni]

01:13:536 (13) - Don't quite understand this note. It makes sense in Inner Oni because it's followed by several more notes, but here it just feels inconsistent with 01:11:690 - used 1/4 here to kind of emphasize the 1/4 rhythm that stars on - 01:13:613 (14) -. having only 1/2 like for the previous part you mentionned sounds a bit empty to me, it is mapped the same way in lower difficulties because they are undermapped as a whole anyways. doesnt disturbe me while playing
[Inner Oni]

00:23:536 (63) - Maybe consider deleting this. Unlike Ura Oni where the colors help a little bit to differentiate between the guitar sounds it's just a huge bunch of one sound here.
> 00:25:382 (80) - 00:29:074 (113) - same removed 2 notes for each spot

00:40:843 - same in Ura Oni: With the general suggestion, either remove this volume change or have this be louder. I don't quite get why this has a lower volume anyway as this is more sound than the other notes here. other notes on this part are mainly on the vocal reasons explained in pm



very good set

Kantan mapped and hitsounded by Nofool
Futsuu mapped and hitsounded by Nofool
Muzukashii mapped and hitsounded by Nofool
Oni mapped and hitsounded by Nofool
Inner Oni mapped and hitsounded by Nofool
Ura Oni mapped and hitsounded by Nofool
Mp3 fixed by pishifat

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[img]http://w.ppy.sh/4/4f/Normal-t.png[/img] [color=#4040FF]Futsuu mapped and hitsounded [/color] by [url=https://osu.ppy.sh/u/672430]Nofool[/url]
[img]http://w.ppy.sh/4/49/Hard-t.png[/img] [color=#FF8000]Muzukashii mapped and hitsounded [/color] by [url=https://osu.ppy.sh/u/672430]Nofool[/url]
[img]http://w.ppy.sh/a/a5/Insane-t.png[/img] [color=#FF0000]Oni mapped and hitsounded [/color] by [url=https://osu.ppy.sh/u/672430]Nofool[/url]
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[img]http://w.ppy.sh/9/91/Expert-t.png[/img] [color=#800040]Ura Oni mapped and hitsounded [/color] by [url=https://osu.ppy.sh/u/672430]Nofool[/url]
Mp3 fixed by [url=https://osu.ppy.sh/u/pishifat]pishifat[/url]  [/size][/centre]

Nwolf wrote:

you can't live without the faiyaeehhh