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Shortthu
bubbled?
gz xd
Yamicchi

Kuo Kyoka wrote:

good.
Shortthu

Kuo Kyoka wrote:

good.
Akasha-
Don't quote me
And my memes
My memes are so mean
But you still quote it because it's meme
Topic Starter
Asaiga

Kuo Kyoka wrote:

Don't quote me
And my memes
My memes are so mean
But you still quote it because it's meme
you are meme, but we quote you because it's

Kuo Kyoka wrote:

good.
LMT
@MrSergio there's a way to fix that without having to delete a timing point is to use x0.585 SV on the reverse slider.
However I've discussed with Asaiga that this shouldn't be a problem as these timing points are really close to each other and the player can't really detect it on full speed. Just in case you think it's more beneficial not to delete a timing point.
The same technique was used in MiddleIsland - Roze [cmn] diff at various places, most notably 00:11:882 (1) - 00:25:082 (2) - 00:36:278 (3) - and so on.

Edit: I still keep the original timing xd.
Seijiro
I assume timing was yours.
I understand your feeling, but with so many timing sections sliders can't fall exactly on the beat. Above all if it's a repeat slider.
That SV is also something I wouldn't have thought, since it requires you to calculate the SV and manually edit it into the .osu (you can't obtain such SV directly from the editor btw)

Anyway, the mapper agreed to change it so that should be fine as you said =3=
LMT

MrSergio wrote:

That SV is also something I wouldn't have thought, since it requires you to calculate the SV and manually edit it into the .osu (you can't obtain such SV directly from the editor btw)
You can change it using the in-game timing panel, even though it doesn't show more than 2 decimals you can always type in 3 or more decimals and it still records the exact value you put in. You can check this on an editor and compare it with the notepad file. Usually correction SV like this only takes maximum 4 decimals.
Just saying since that's something worth knowing. I respect Asaiga's decision on this and I'm just letting you know that it could be done without having to delete a timing point. I do not intend to impede the ranking process of this map in any way.
Thanks for hearing me out.
Hokichi

Kuo Kyoka wrote:

good.
Topic Starter
Asaiga
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Electoz
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Sotarks

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Ashton

Electoz wrote:

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Electoz
[General]

  1. Artist should be 40mP feat. Hatsune Miku instead(generally vocaloids should be featured in the artist section if the producer/composer includes it via official sources) according to these links:
    1. https://twitter.com/40mp/status/753891893860196353
    2. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TdfTLpXM3HA
  2. 01:28:012 - 01:40:906 - 03:13:278 - 03:30:383 - These red lines aren't really needed, can you give me the reasoning behind these? Apart from the piano, nothing else really changed there, other instruments are still following the same metronome as before so I don't really see any reason to reset the downbeats.
  3. There's a sliderslide sound at the beginning part until 01:40:906 but not sure whether this is intentional so I'll mention this just in case.
[Weltschmerz]

  1. 00:01:960 (2) - If you're following vocal then isn't this supposed to end at 00:02:749 instead? According to what you did with 00:06:170 (1) .
  2. 00:37:223 (4,5) - Plays weird cuz they're both circles yet they're clickable on different things from the song, my suggestions here would be either end at 00:36:433 (3) at 00:37:223 instead or just replace 00:37:223 (4,5) with a 1/2 slider.
  3. 02:19:327 - 02:19:590 (2,3) - Are you really gonna skip 1/4 on these parts?
  4. 02:20:642 (6,1) - 02:37:221 (6,1) - Could have used a bigger spacing as the rhythm changes on these places.
  5. 03:32:488 (1,2,3,4,5) - I'm kinda curious what you're trying to follow here, if you're following guitar then 03:32:883 should be mapped since 03:33:540 (3) is on guitar. But if you're following the drums alone then better not make 03:33:540 clickable like what you did with 03:35:383 (2) since nothing's there apart from guitar.
  6. 04:01:172 (1,2,3) - Huh are these supposed to be spaced evenly? Current one looks unintentional to me.
  7. 04:04:856 (2) - This is not snapped correctly, the correct snap should be this instead. This doesn't mean you have to map 1/8 stuff cuz that's for you to decide.
  8. 04:07:488 (2) - Optional but you can use more artistic shape here to express the sound.
  9. 04:20:909 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - Kinda curious here, why a circular flow? This came out of nowhere and plays really off since you didn't do this anywhere else+the song doesn't have anything to reflect/express with this circular flow either, you already did fine with flows on other places like 02:41:958 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - 02:58:800 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) which has a similar rhythm.
Popped the bubble due to metadata, snapping, and timing issues which I would like to hear a reply from those first, call me back later and I'll see whether I'll rebubble this.
Topic Starter
Asaiga
omg first bubble pop hype

Electoz wrote:

[General]

  1. Artist should be 40mP feat. Hatsune Miku instead(generally vocaloids should be featured in the artist section if the producer/composer includes it via official sources) according to these links: Fixed artist. Added 40㍍P to tag
    1. https://twitter.com/40mp/status/753891893860196353
    2. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TdfTLpXM3HA
  2. 01:28:012 - 01:40:906 - 03:13:278 - 03:30:383 - These red lines aren't really needed, can you give me the reasoning behind these? Apart from the piano, nothing else really changed there, other instruments are still following the same metronome as before so I don't really see any reason to reset the downbeats. It is indeed to reset the downbeats. However, if I were to delete those timing points it will rise a new problem which I don't know how to fix and it should be fine the way it is atm. Just a few extra lines in the notepad hope you don't mind.
  3. There's a sliderslide sound at the beginning part until 01:40:906 but not sure whether this is intentional so I'll mention this just in case. I was told to use default whistle here. So there is no slider silence in it. But since u mentioned it and I find it correct as well so I put a third custom whistle hitsound in and make a silenced sliderslide for the session with default hitsound. In case you don't think it fits somehow, I will delete it.
[Weltschmerz]

  1. 00:01:960 (2) - If you're following vocal then isn't this supposed to end at 00:02:749 instead? According to what you did with 00:06:170 (1) . Fixed
  2. 00:37:223 (4,5) - Plays weird cuz they're both circles yet they're clickable on different things from the song, my suggestions here would be either end at 00:36:433 (3) at 00:37:223 instead or just replace 00:37:223 (4,5) with a 1/2 slider. I actually was trying to follow the piano sound here
  3. 02:19:327 - 02:19:590 (2,3) - Are you really gonna skip 1/4 on these parts? Yes, at this point I stop following the piano
  4. 02:20:642 (6,1) - 02:37:221 (6,1) - Could have used a bigger spacing as the rhythm changes on these places. Hope my solution emphasises enough on these 2
  5. 03:32:488 (1,2,3,4,5) - I'm kinda curious what you're trying to follow here, if you're following guitar then 03:32:883 should be mapped since 03:33:540 (3) is on guitar. But if you're following the drums alone then better not make 03:33:540 clickable like what you did with 03:35:383 (2) since nothing's there apart from guitar. True, I made 03:33:277 (2,3) - into 1/2 slider
  6. 04:01:172 (1,2,3) - Huh are these supposed to be spaced evenly? Current one looks unintentional to me. uh no, if it was unintentional it would look less spaced xd. They are indeed not to be spaced evenly, to emphasise the last note
  7. 04:04:856 (2) - This is not snapped correctly, the correct snap should be this instead. This doesn't mean you have to map 1/8 stuff cuz that's for you to decide. I did not decide that. I just didn't know what is the correct answer for this and went with the most reasonable one. But fixed as u suggested. For how it should be placed, please check this again for me, as I'm not really confident with what I just did.
  8. 04:07:488 (2) - Optional but you can use more artistic shape here to express the sound. I think piano gliss, horizontal or slight curve slider like this suits the best, since the length is quite short as well.
  9. 04:20:909 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - Kinda curious here, why a circular flow? This came out of nowhere and plays really off since you didn't do this anywhere else+the song doesn't have anything to reflect/express with this circular flow either, you already did fine with flows on other places like 02:41:958 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - 02:58:800 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) which has a similar rhythm. same, fixed the pattern here
Popped the bubble due to metadata, snapping, and timing issues which I would like to hear a reply from those first, call me back later and I'll see whether I'll rebubble this. come back please ):
Electoz
Romanised Artist should be 40㍍P feat. 初音ミク instead of the current one. Also please remove "hatsune miku 40㍍P 40mP 初音ミク" from the tags since you're gonna include them in the Artist and Title.
As for 04:04:856 (2,3) - I would go with something like this instead, 04:05:251 - can be mapped as well so that's up to you.
I'm not gonna rebubble unless you either fix the timing or convince me with better reasoning than "I don't know how to fix and it should be fine the way it is atm".
Topic Starter
Asaiga

Electoz wrote:

Romanised Artist should be 40㍍P feat. 初音ミク instead of the current one. Also please remove "hatsune miku 40㍍P 40mP 初音ミク" from the tags since you're gonna include them in the Artist and Title.
As for 04:04:856 (2,3) - I would go with something like this instead, 04:05:251 - can be mapped as well so that's up to you.
I'm not gonna rebubble unless you either fix the timing or convince me with better reasoning than "I don't know how to fix and it should be fine the way it is atm".
I think the tag is good now

fixed the timing.
Electoz
[Weltschmerz]

  1. Lots of unsnapped green lines, please make sure you take care of them.
  2. 02:55:643 (1) - Is this NC intentional?
  3. 03:38:802 (1) - Not sure if this is intentional for ending it at 1/6 but 03:40:118 seems to be a better place to end the slider, personal preference I guess.
  4. 03:40:907 (1) - Better end this at 03:41:433 .
  5. 04:01:170 (1,2,3) - Even if this is on purpose it still looks untidy in my opinion, if you want to increase the spacings then can you at least do it with out overlapping 04:01:170 (1,2) ?
  6. 04:05:249 (3) - Is actually 1/8, try listen closely again, also what you have right now plays really uncomfortable with 04:05:644 (4) . If you want to keep that repeat slider then I suggest that the spacing on 04:05:249 (3,4) should be either the same or smaller than 04:05:644 (4,5,6) .
Topic Starter
Asaiga

Electoz wrote:

[Weltschmerz]

  1. 02:55:643 (1) - Is this NC intentional? no it's kinda not. But since you suggested I turned NC off
  2. 03:38:802 (1) - Not sure if this is intentional for ending it at 1/6 but 03:40:118 seems to be a better place to end the slider, personal preference I guess. lol. It's actually a mistake with the inherited point. Didn't see it before, it's fine now
  3. 04:01:170 (1,2,3) - Even if this is on purpose it still looks untidy in my opinion, if you want to increase the spacings then can you at least do it with out overlapping 04:01:170 (1,2) ? since my usual ds suggests me a slight overlap and make it feel more accelerating. But I made it without touching now
  4. 04:05:249 (3) - Is actually 1/8, try listen closely again, also what you have right now plays really uncomfortable with 04:05:644 (4) . If you want to keep that repeat slider then I suggest that the spacing on 04:05:249 (3,4) should be either the same or smaller than 04:05:644 (4,5,6) . wut? I thought I fixed this part before. Okay, fixed
Electoz
Actually I edited the post just a few mins before lol, just recheck those unsnapped green lines and 03:40:907 (1) again.
Topic Starter
Asaiga
Fixed all the green lines. I didn't see that before
Electoz
Yamicchi
Now Icon!!
Shortthu
noice
LMT
najs
Seijiro
fixed few things in game :3
bul #2
Pho
We fixed some rhythm issues, imbalanced hitsound volumes and the custom difficulty name to something more appropriate.
Metadata can be found on Electoz' post here.

Congratz on graduating from the mentorship program Asaiga, Approved!

SPOILER
18:45 Asaiga: hi Pho
18:45 Asaiga: I want to begin our session :D
18:46 Pho: LOL please
18:46 Asaiga: btw, how do you plan to divide time for 2 mentees?
18:48 Pho: 2 hours a week only
18:48 Asaiga: lol, we went pretty far on our first lesson xD
18:49 Asaiga: I hope I will stay as your best mentee :^
18:49 Pho: probably the most notorious one ye
18:50 Asaiga: oy
18:50 Asaiga: D:<
18:50 Asaiga: I haven't done anything bad
18:51 Asaiga: well, I got in drama sometimes but not that big
18:51 Pho: xd
18:53 Asaiga: p/5559394
18:53 Asaiga: owo
18:54 Pho: yea i saw it, give me a few moments
18:54 Asaiga: yes
19:32 Pho: okay, let's see
19:33 Asaiga: hype
19:36 Asaiga: inb4 dq cuz of cringe diff name
19:36 Pho: yea i'd actually like you to choose another one lol
19:37 Asaiga: xD
19:37 Asaiga: let me listen to the song again and read the engsub
19:37 Pho: my conscience doesn't allow to rank something with that diffname lo
19:37 Asaiga: tbh i don't know what is this song is about
19:37 Asaiga: hahahaha
19:38 Pho: i doubt most j-stuff mappers read the lyrics of the songs they map
19:42 Asaiga: I mapped this in 2 days just to have something to talk about for our session
19:42 Pho: 00:34:065 (2,3,4) - snaps are off, these should be 3/16 snapped
19:42 Asaiga: what, how do i do that
19:43 Pho: beatsnap divisor 1/16
19:43 Pho: following the piano here would probably be the best choice to reflect the song, but it screws up the rhythm
19:44 Pho: what you can do is simplify it by just doing this: http://puu.sh/rRRQA/540bcd0a00.jpg
19:45 Pho: because vocal beat is on the red tick
19:45 Pho: but piano is not
19:46 Asaiga: why is (3) slider?
19:46 Asaiga: and where does it end?
19:46 Pho: it's 00:34:591 (3) - this one
19:46 Pho: that picture goes for 00:33:538 (1,2,3) -
19:47 Asaiga: oh so
19:47 Asaiga: I get it
19:48 Asaiga: 00:33:538 (1,2) - hitsound on these 2?
19:48 Pho: whistles on the white ticks
19:49 Pho: 00:52:486 - until this point, increase volume by 10%
19:50 Pho: 00:53:539 - 45% vol. please
19:50 Pho: 00:54:591 - to 01:40:907 - 50%
19:51 Pho: it's way too low, even if the music is calm, you can barely hear the hitsounds
19:51 Asaiga: oho
19:51 Asaiga: done
19:53 Asaiga: diff name changed as well :3
19:57 Pho: 04:00:644 (1) - change the rhythm here a bit, the transition into the kicksliders is way better: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6384788
19:57 Pho: makes the rhythm less choppy and those beats should belong together imo
19:58 Asaiga: o I thought note would emphasise better finish than slider
19:58 Pho: it does
19:59 Pho: but if you listen to 04:00:644 (1,2,3,4) - this part, these notes actually form a unit together
19:59 Pho: with the climax being at 04:01:959 (1) -
19:59 Pho: but that's my interpretation
20:00 Pho: the way you have it right now is fine, it's just something you may want to consider
20:01 Asaiga: okay
20:02 Pho: 04:17:749 (3) - this is pretty meh, considering you were actually following drums previously at 04:09:065 (2,3,4,5,6) -
20:03 Asaiga: ooopps
20:03 Pho: 04:17:486 (2) - do something like: http://puu.sh/rRSS5/47dfd9a5bb.jpg
20:03 Asaiga: I think I mis followed the instrument
20:06 Pho: 05:16:938 - 40%, default-softwhistle
20:07 Pho: 5% vol. makes no sense here when there's a piano note on this beat
20:09 Asaiga: done
20:10 Pho: 03:40:644 - to 03:49:328 - 50% vol. please
20:10 Asaiga: aight
20:11 Asaiga: done
20:12 Asaiga: is ranking always this hard ):
20:12 Asaiga: i don't want to rank another one
20:12 Pho: 02:56:433 - can you shift the first kiai end from 02:54:591 - to this point, that makes more sense
20:12 Pho: the better you get, the less issues you'll run into lol
20:12 Asaiga: indeed I can
20:13 Pho: do the same kiai-end/start for 04:18:539 - 04:18:802 -
20:13 Asaiga: 03:08:012 (2) - should I curve this abit?
20:13 Pho: #consistency
20:14 Pho: no need to
20:15 Pho: 04:58:785 - i'd actually go down to 50% vol. here as well, 60% sounds a bit too loud
20:15 Asaiga: 04:10:118 - you mean kiai starts here?
20:15 Pho: yes
20:15 Pho: wait no
20:16 Asaiga: all of the 60% go to 50%?
20:16 Pho: yes
20:16 Asaiga: 04:10:381 - or here?
20:16 Pho: ^that one's fine
20:16 Pho: what i meant is 04:18:539 - end kiai here and 04:18:802 - restart it here
20:17 Pho: that way it's gonna be consistent with 02:56:697 -
20:17 Asaiga: oh
20:17 Asaiga: ok
20:18 Asaiga: there
20:20 Asaiga: updated
20:20 Asaiga: redl plz
20:20 Asaiga: I changed diff name
20:20 Pho: what
20:20 Pho: is that diffname
20:20 Pho: lo
20:20 Asaiga: :d
20:21 Asaiga: that is indeed
20:21 Asaiga: my innovative diff name
20:21 Pho: no
20:21 Asaiga: wut
20:21 Asaiga: ''Hard'' good?
20:22 Pho: i mean does it relate to the song or sth?
20:22 Asaiga: well in the lyrics
20:22 Pho: i might gonna check the song myself with english lyrics
20:22 Pho: if there's a version existing
20:22 Asaiga: wait are there
20:22 Asaiga: same
20:22 Asaiga: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TdfTLpXM3HA
20:26 Pho: you have something with english subtitles, i don't really understand japanese that well lol
20:27 Asaiga: I can't hear these words in the song as well
20:27 Asaiga: I will change it
20:29 Asaiga: hey
20:29 Asaiga: I think
20:29 Asaiga: Weltschmerz actually suits this song lmao
20:29 Asaiga: from the english translation
20:29 Asaiga: or maybe just sigh
20:29 Asaiga: sigh
20:30 Asaiga: ye, changed to sigh for simplicity
20:30 Asaiga: and clean
20:31 Pho: at least it makes more sense than the other diffnames xD
20:31 Pho: yea, that one's fine. not very original, but it works out
20:31 Asaiga: damn it, have you checked the things I updated?
20:32 Pho: update with the new diffname first
20:33 Asaiga: wait wait
20:33 Asaiga: can I have my diff name ''a s a''?
20:33 Asaiga: it's on the background as well
20:35 Pho: what
20:36 Asaiga: like this
20:37 Pho: diffname 'Sigh' is fine, what do you mean with a s a?
20:37 Asaiga: as diff name
20:37 Asaiga: original
20:37 Asaiga: diff name
20:37 Asaiga: DESU
20:37 Pho: looks retarded tbh xd
20:38 Asaiga: sigh
20:38 Asaiga: well in that case, the diff is up
20:42 Pho: allright, let's see
20:43 Asaiga: ye
Topic Starter
Asaiga
Thanks for making this come true :')


Thanks everyone for helpful mods it really pushed my maps forwards really really fast. Especially Naxess <3


Oyatsu was here
Kalibe
Grats Asaiga! :3
domSaur
grats Asighga
Topic Starter
Asaiga

domSaur wrote:

grats Asighga
hoyl this is good xd

Kalibe wrote:

Grats Asaiga! :3
Thanks :3
Ashton
wow finally :3

good job!
Hazu-
o: Grats!
_DT3

_DT3 wrote:

Ooh, gratz Asa!
Yamicchi
Guys we can't just say gratz?

LET'S PARTYYY!!!!
-NanoRIPE-
Grats!!! ~
Kyouren
Gratzz for your first approved map >w<
rui
congratulations first approved
Topic Starter
Asaiga
Thanks everyone “ヽ(´▽`)ノ”
alacat
Why did you add "feat. Hatsune Miku" on artist ? maybe it's not official. Then, the artist should be "40mP".

  1. http://www.tunecore.co.jp/artist/40mP
  2. http://www.inametoru.com/profile
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