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mancuso_JM_

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mancuso_JM_ 2016-10-10T04:55:56+00:00

Meh.. A cut version :/

That sucks man.. I know, there is a full version of that song ranked but still, the end of this mp3 doesn't make any kind of sense to me.. Just a little recommendation, don't map cut versions only to have one more rank, if you like the song you'd be able to map the full version.

Anyway.. Congratulations!

Sorry if it sounded rude.. It was not my intention hehe

Kurokami

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Kurokami 2016-10-10T08:10:13+00:00

Disqualification requested.

Kyouren

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Kyouren 2016-10-10T08:13:36+00:00

mancuso_JM_ wrote:
Meh.. A cut version :/

That sucks man.. I know, there is a full version of that song ranked but still, the end of this mp3 doesn't make any kind of sense to me.. Just a little recommendation, don't map cut versions only to have one more rank, if you like the song you'd be able to map the full version.

Anyway.. Congratulations!

Sorry if it sounded rude.. It was not my intention hehe

If you don't like or hate it, why you give me the comment? (I'm really lazy, ok!)

riffy

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riffy 2016-10-10T09:11:09+00:00

Constructive criticism exists for a reason. And in this case the reason is to improve the map. Why don't we start with fixing the SB and continue by addressing more things if/when something shows up?

Kyouren

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Kyouren 2016-10-10T09:13:40+00:00

I'm better fixed all than never :3

Edit:

OK!, Here the some change from this map:
-Remove rainsound.mp3 because it's not fit with song
-Change new SB Background in Kiai time part (Thank you for Rizen because send me some suggestion a BG)
-I only remove 2 duplicated "Hallelujah" file (I need 2 file because it's not worked at 01:02:154 - )
-Add some Combo Colour for kiai time part
-Change colour of bar to white!

Upgrade! :3

riffy

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riffy 2016-10-10T12:13:03+00:00

How come it doesn't work for 7b but work for everything else? This just doesn't make any sense in terms of codding/logic.

Just replacethe line that looks like this

Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\7b.png",320,340

with the code below

Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\7a.png",320,340

Also, you can disable the whitebg thing for 01:04:821 - as it is generally unnecessary and spikes the SB load above the recommended line for no reason. The SB-bright.png file is bright on it's own, adding an extra layer of whiteness feels overdone. Besides, this is the only place that spikes the SB load this way.

The excalamtion marks in difficulty names are still confusing me as they are generally not corresponding well with the mood/style of the song in my mind and no explanation has been given on them.

Also, I've caught just a couple more thing on the Easy.

00:16:487 (3) -00:43:154 (3) - 00:48:487 (3) - 00:53:821 (3) - these and some similar 1/2 beats can be removed, just like the one I've mentioned in the first post. This should give a lot more emphasis to the downbeats, spice up the rhythm and make it easier.
00:58:821 - this should've probably been a clickable beat, as there is a new part of vocals and a strong drum beat are. Probably something like this.

Glad we've got the discussion going.

Kyouren

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Kyouren 2016-10-10T12:37:46+00:00

Remove SB and the problem is done!

Waiting HootOwlStar's respond!

@HootOwlStar: Redownload this map because SB is delete!

Stjpa

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Stjpa 2016-10-10T12:49:16+00:00

So you delete the SB because you don't want to solve the problem even tho you get help? Man....

Kyouren

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Kyouren 2016-10-10T13:10:00+00:00

Stop drama please!

This place is not for doing drama!

riffy

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riffy 2016-10-10T13:15:45+00:00

What drama? You are literally being asked a simple question and given some help to go with it, no agression nor any ill-intended comments have been made.

All we care about is quality, it is all about the map we try so hard to improve.

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HootOwlStar

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HootOwlStar 2016-10-10T13:34:31+00:00

sorry for late. fixed what is mentioned by @Bakari anyway.
and really hope that the SB will remain after fixes since it is really beautifully made.

Just chill, guys.

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Kyouren

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Kyouren 2016-10-10T13:36:39+00:00

Stjpa wrote:
So you delete the SB because you don't want to solve the problem even tho you get help? Man....

He is first making drama <___<

Will upgrade HootOwlStar diff and keep no SB!

Edit:

About 7a and 7b file, in that song, Adam Young say Hallelujah 2 time in "Hallelujah, Hallelujah" and how can you get a really stupid idea? (IT'S ERROR WHEN I TRYING!)

Whitebg, nope because i hate to doing blur in first kiai time and next part!

Sb-bright, it's pass for me because too bright is make player's eyes is hurt!

Diffname in hard diff, i taken from lyrics, it's your problem?

Note:
Really bad, my first sb but it is broken like this case: (What a really nice day)
t/397860/start=75
t/402796/start=75

Shiranai

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Shiranai 2016-10-10T13:53:48+00:00

Just dropping opinion
Mostly hitsound

General

Combo color 2 and 3 just too similiar imo, I can't really distinguish its diffrent when playing, maybe you want to delete one of them? or change into other color like light silver or sth?

Hard

00:42:321 (5) - Based on music, you should use whistle on tail instead clap, because there was a bass not a drum sound
00:52:987 (5) - Same as above
01:03:654 (4) - Also based on music, you should use clap instead whistle to cover the drum
01:05:321 (3) - Obvious missing clap on tail

If you use hitsound copier, that sugestion above might apply as well on other diffs

Sayang bgt sb nya diremove, tapi ya terserah dedek aja sih selaku creator. Kenapa ga coba minta sb yang bener ke bakari, siapa tau dia udah benerin kodenya?

riffy

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riffy 2016-10-10T13:57:49+00:00

Each map is discussed on its own, referring to anything else is irrelevant.

Anyways, what I've done is made the SB less bright by removing the white flash, that is exactly what you wanted, judging from your response. Along with that I have fixed the 7a "error" you've been getting. http://bakarisu.s-ul.eu/tjkgErvO.osb

The problem with the difficulty names was with the exclamation marks, removing them from Easy/Normal would've been enough.

I'll be asking puxtu to translate that as to understand each other better, hope this helps!

Kyouren

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Kyouren 2016-10-10T13:58:09+00:00

Mako Sakata wrote:
Sayang bgt sb nya diremove, tapi ya terserah dedek aja sih selaku creator. Kenapa ga coba minta sb yang bener ke bakari, siapa tau dia udah benerin kodenya?

Fixed all from your mod!

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Sylphi

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Sylphi 2016-10-10T14:12:01+00:00

Locked by mapper's request.

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Kyouren

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Kyouren 2016-10-11T10:31:23+00:00

Upgrade! :3

Kurokami

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Kurokami 2016-10-12T23:07:44+00:00

Bakari wrote:
Also, I've caught just a couple more thing on the Easy.

00:16:487 (3) -00:43:154 (3) - 00:48:487 (3) - 00:53:821 (3) - these and some similar 1/2 beats can be removed, just like the one I've mentioned in the first post. This should give a lot more emphasis to the downbeats, spice up the rhythm and make it easier.
00:58:821 - this should've probably been a clickable beat, as there is a new part of vocals and a strong drum beat are. Probably something like this.
Glad we've got the discussion going.

May I ask for some input on these before progressing? Especially the second one makes me wonder a lot because it does feel better that way.

Kyouren

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Kyouren 2016-10-13T06:33:27+00:00

HootOwlStar wrote:
sorry for late. fixed what is mentioned by @Bakari anyway.

For make it sure, just ask to HootOwlStar :3

HootOwlStar

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HootOwlStar 2016-10-13T15:00:57+00:00

I should post it. I didn't notice the section in the first instance and I don't want to post consecutively so I explained everything via irc.

irc w/ @Bakari

21:52 HootOwlStar: by the way about the 2nd part of your mod, don't want to post additional replies so I just explain to you instead.
21:52 Bakari: sure
21:54 HootOwlStar: about the former, it is to build up difficulty progression. spitting the intro, verse and kiai, it is observable that it gets increasingly tense
21:55 HootOwlStar: and ignoring the vocals I implemented at those intervals will be weird in my case
21:55 HootOwlStar: about the latter, I would rather keep it to make the patterns consistent anyway.
21:56 HootOwlStar: so no fixes for both. fix the first issue in your first post though, as in the update.
21:59 Bakari: Cool, that explains a lot!

ZekeyHache

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ZekeyHache 2016-10-17T05:52:57+00:00

Bub

Electoz

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Electoz 2016-10-20T17:23:41+00:00

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