Insane
the diff looks ok after a look-through, just a few suggestions
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00:25:461 - I'm suggesting another patterning for this to include the piano in the background here, notice the highlighted notes:
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00:27:031 (27031|1,27031|0,27118|2,27205|1,27205|3,27205|0) - you might want to repattern this if you did that as it's a repeat of the previous pattern which might not be intended
00:28:019 (28019|3,28078|2) - I feel like if you did 34 instead of 43 with this it'd fit the music more as it's pitch relevant and the jack there kinda matches the piano swing
00:48:485 (48485|2,48572|0,48659|3,48659|1) - Suggesting to do a 14 23 14 pattern here as to go with the *suddenly louder piano* sound
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01:26:508 - Similar suggestion here
I kinda did 221 since i felt that it's more fitting (subjective), but feel free to just flip the jack+grace pattern to 112
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01:32:089 (92089|1,92089|2,92089|0,92205|1,92264|3,92264|2,92351|1,92438|3,92438|2) - Felt that this wasn't "graceful" in terms of patterning:
1) didn't really like how that pattern plays like a jumptrill at the end
2) felt that it could be better if you would to do a minijack and grace all on 1 hand and put the 1/4 right after the grace on the other hand so as to give the hand that played the grace a bit of break so as to "emphasize" that grace patterning
So my suggestion would be
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01:35:752 (95752|0,95752|1,95839|2,95926|0,95926|1,96014|3,96014|2,96101|1,96101|0,96188|2,96188|3,96275|0,96275|1) - Similar to before, try to include the piano in the music in here too by anchoring some stuff
01:37:671 (97671|2,97787|3,97845|2) - same suggestion as before
01:42:147 (102147|3) - wait what's this for
01:42:903 (102903|3) - not too sure about including this in as the instrument is either very soft or just not there at all, think the sudden lack of a 1/1 here emulates quite well what the composer is trying to do here
01:46:915 (106915|3) - miniLN here would be cool but that's like cosmetics
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02:22:845 (142845|2,142845|3,142903|1) - Not a fan of fast streams (with a jack at the back) that start of by pressing 32 or 23, it's more comfy if you did it on 12 or 34, anyways, suggesting a pattern here that kind of emphasizes the piano at the end of this stream by jacking on 1/3:
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02:28:426 (148426|1,148426|0,148485|2,148543|3,148601|0,148601|1) - Suggesting the exact same pattern as before actually
02:34:008 (154008|2,154066|1,154124|3) - uhhhhh suggesting to not start with 23 or 32 on a fast stream
02:41:159 (161159|3,161333|2,161508|1,161682|0,161857|2,162031|1,162205|0) - I think it'd be more pitch relevant if you did 3421432, the last note in particular is 2 because i wanted the very last note to be to the left of that particular note
the diff looks ok after a look-through, just a few suggestions
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00:25:461 - I'm suggesting another patterning for this to include the piano in the background here, notice the highlighted notes:
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00:27:031 (27031|1,27031|0,27118|2,27205|1,27205|3,27205|0) - you might want to repattern this if you did that as it's a repeat of the previous pattern which might not be intended
00:28:019 (28019|3,28078|2) - I feel like if you did 34 instead of 43 with this it'd fit the music more as it's pitch relevant and the jack there kinda matches the piano swing
00:48:485 (48485|2,48572|0,48659|3,48659|1) - Suggesting to do a 14 23 14 pattern here as to go with the *suddenly louder piano* sound
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01:26:508 - Similar suggestion here
I kinda did 221 since i felt that it's more fitting (subjective), but feel free to just flip the jack+grace pattern to 112
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01:32:089 (92089|1,92089|2,92089|0,92205|1,92264|3,92264|2,92351|1,92438|3,92438|2) - Felt that this wasn't "graceful" in terms of patterning:
1) didn't really like how that pattern plays like a jumptrill at the end
2) felt that it could be better if you would to do a minijack and grace all on 1 hand and put the 1/4 right after the grace on the other hand so as to give the hand that played the grace a bit of break so as to "emphasize" that grace patterning
So my suggestion would be
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01:35:752 (95752|0,95752|1,95839|2,95926|0,95926|1,96014|3,96014|2,96101|1,96101|0,96188|2,96188|3,96275|0,96275|1) - Similar to before, try to include the piano in the music in here too by anchoring some stuff
01:37:671 (97671|2,97787|3,97845|2) - same suggestion as before
01:42:147 (102147|3) - wait what's this for
01:42:903 (102903|3) - not too sure about including this in as the instrument is either very soft or just not there at all, think the sudden lack of a 1/1 here emulates quite well what the composer is trying to do here
01:46:915 (106915|3) - miniLN here would be cool but that's like cosmetics
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02:22:845 (142845|2,142845|3,142903|1) - Not a fan of fast streams (with a jack at the back) that start of by pressing 32 or 23, it's more comfy if you did it on 12 or 34, anyways, suggesting a pattern here that kind of emphasizes the piano at the end of this stream by jacking on 1/3:
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02:28:426 (148426|1,148426|0,148485|2,148543|3,148601|0,148601|1) - Suggesting the exact same pattern as before actually
02:34:008 (154008|2,154066|1,154124|3) - uhhhhh suggesting to not start with 23 or 32 on a fast stream
02:41:159 (161159|3,161333|2,161508|1,161682|0,161857|2,162031|1,162205|0) - I think it'd be more pitch relevant if you did 3421432, the last note in particular is 2 because i wanted the very last note to be to the left of that particular note