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headphonewearer 2016-08-02T11:43:14+00:00

Chalwa wrote:
It's good, but you must change little patterns and it will be very good. (Like 01:02:463 (1,2,3,4,5,6), 01:15:521 (4,5,6,7,8,9) )

Thanks! I made some small adjustments with the jump patterns like you suggested, hope you like it better now!

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Creator:Chalwa
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Tags:harddance hardcore cut dance refaller asserin
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Chalwa

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Joined August 2014

Topic Starter

Chalwa 2016-08-03T07:18:48+00:00

havkz wrote:
Chalwa wrote:
It's good, but you must change little patterns and it will be very good. (Like 01:02:463 (1,2,3,4,5,6), 01:15:521 (4,5,6,7,8,9) )
Thanks! I made some small adjustments with the jump patterns like you suggested, hope you like it better now!
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Mazziv

998 posts

Joined July 2013

Mazziv 2016-08-11T12:33:27+00:00

hii m4m from my queue o/
my map: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/436388

[Easy]
check aimod for spacing issues uwu

00:05:992 (1,1) - aaa le overlaps,please dont do this in easy diffs
also id recommend you to remove the nc spam in the beginning
00:25:757 (1,2,1) - try to make a triangle with slidertail of 1,sliderhead of 2 and sliderhead of 3
00:29:992 (2,3,1) - ^
00:41:286 (3,2) - overlap
00:44:110 (3) - cltr+g this slider?
00:46:933 (3,2) - overlap v:
00:51:874 (2,1) - stack the sliderhead of 2 with sliderend of 1?

[Normal]

00:17:992 (2,3,4,5) - try to make a good looking pentagon with it? you know what i mean?
00:17:992 (2,1) - stack
00:21:168 (2,4) - not perfectly stacked
00:59:286 - should have a note
00:57:874 - ^
01:00:698 - ^
01:06:345 - ^

this diff kinda lacks in patterns,it just goes either clockwise or counterclockwise :V

[remove kebab]
this diff looks really good!
(since normal and remove kebab are so close to having teh same sr i recommend you removing the normal diff because it lacks of quality in comparise to the remove kebab diff imo

[Hard]

00:15:168 (3,3) - ctrl+g those for better flow
00:31:404 (1) - why not emphasize this sound as before?
also why do you change the rhythm here? the music didnt change at all and u still changed the rhythm v:
00:39:698 (4,6) - overlap
00:40:227 (4,1,2) - aaa overlap
00:49:051 (3,2) - not stacked
00:54:168 (2,3,4,1) - aaaaaa
00:54:521 (5,2) - aaaaaaaaaaaa
00:47:286 (2,1) - aa
00:47:992 (5,3) - aa
00:51:874 (6,7,1) - could be a nice triangle
00:52:580 (1,2,3) - sam,e
00:55:756 (2,3,4) - same

this diff lacks in aesthetics and the random rhythm changes in the kiai are p weird why :/

[ReFaller's Insane]

00:31:404 (1,3) - are those anchor points on purpose or was it accident because you cant really see the curve of the slider v:
01:01:757 (5,2,3,4) - stack?
00:45:873 (5,7) - try to stack em? D:
00:51:168 (1,5) - it wasnt perfectly stacked for me,maybe im just dumb
00:53:286 (5) - ^
01:05:110 (2,3,4) - move it a bit to the left to avoid the overlap with 01:04:580 (5) - ?

besides that I LOVE THAT DIFF ITS AMAZING

[havkz's Extra]

00:03:169 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - they are not symmetric to the middle of the map if you know whaat i mean
00:44:110 (1) - nc here?
00:50:110 (5,9) - overlap
00:49:051 (6,6,9) - same
00:51:168 (1,6) - stack?
00:51:874 (6,1,2,3) - has not a consistent spacing (only 6 and 1 are not as spaced as 1 and 2)
00:51:874 (6,6) - aaaaaaaa
00:52:580 (3,8) - AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
00:56:463 (9,6) - why not try to stack
01:04:051 (4,9,1) - why
01:18:521 (5,8) - stack?

here take a star for this awesome song! and for refallers awesome diff c:

Chalwa

1,105 posts

Joined August 2014

Topic Starter

Chalwa 2016-08-11T12:48:02+00:00

Mazziv wrote:
hii m4m from my queue o/
my map: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/436388

[Easy]
check aimod for spacing issues uwu AiMod says bad info . It's good

00:05:992 (1,1) - aaa le overlaps,please dont do this in easy diffs
also id recommend you to remove the nc spam in the beginning
00:25:757 (1,2,1) - try to make a triangle with slidertail of 1,sliderhead of 2 and sliderhead of 3
00:29:992 (2,3,1) - ^
00:41:286 (3,2) - overlap
00:44:110 (3) - cltr+g this slider? Fixed in another way
00:46:933 (3,2) - overlap v:
00:51:874 (2,1) - stack the sliderhead of 2 with sliderend of 1?
[Normal]
00:17:992 (2,3,4,5) - try to make a good looking pentagon with it? you know what i mean?
00:17:992 (2,1) - stack
00:21:168 (2,4) - not perfectly stacked
00:59:286 - should have a note
00:57:874 - ^
01:00:698 - ^
01:06:345 - ^
this diff kinda lacks in patterns,it just goes either clockwise or counterclockwise :V Will remove this diff tbh and name "Kebab" diff Normal .
[Hard]

00:15:168 (3,3) - ctrl+g those for better flow
00:31:404 (1) - why not emphasize this sound as before?
also why do you change the rhythm here? the music didnt change at all and u still changed the rhythm v:
00:39:698 (4,6) - overlap
00:40:227 (4,1,2) - aaa overlap
00:49:051 (3,2) - not stacked
00:54:168 (2,3,4,1) - aaaaaa
00:54:521 (5,2) - aaaaaaaaaaaa
00:47:286 (2,1) - aa
00:47:992 (5,3) - aa
00:51:874 (6,7,1) - could be a nice triangle
00:52:580 (1,2,3) - sam,e
00:55:756 (2,3,4) - same
this diff lacks in aesthetics and the random rhythm changes in the kiai are p weird why :/ Will remap this diff

here take a star for this awesome song! and for refallers awesome diff c: Thanks ^^

Thanks so much Mazziv!

headphonewearer

788 posts

Joined October 2014

headphonewearer 2016-08-11T15:23:04+00:00

Mazziv wrote:
[havkz's Extra]
00:03:169 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - they are not symmetric to the middle of the map if you know whaat i mean fixed
00:44:110 (1) - nc here? woops, i put it at 8 instead
00:50:110 (5,9) - overlap fixed
00:49:051 (6,6,9) - same fixed, but its not that necessary because you cant see the overlap ingame
00:51:168 (1,6) - stack? nah that overlap looks cool
00:51:874 (6,1,2,3) - has not a consistent spacing (only 6 and 1 are not as spaced as 1 and 2) did something
00:51:874 (6,6) - aaaaaaaa lol rip, fixed
00:52:580 (3,8) - AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA wut
00:56:463 (9,6) - why not try to stack because the overlap looks cool
01:04:051 (4,9,1) - why i changed it in some way
01:18:521 (5,8) - stack? nope

Thanks for modding!!! ~~rip its not extra anymore lol~~

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-C O N T R A L-

143 posts

Joined October 2015

-C O N T R A L- 2016-08-11T17:40:49+00:00

Mod for a gay person

Gay Mod for Gay Persons <3 |Easy|

00:51:874 (2) - Try to make blanket nigga like on the pic but the pic slider sux it was #fastdesign

01:12:345 (3) - i want sexual contact with this slider
01:15:168 (3) - ^

Gay Mod for Gay Persons <3 |Hard|

00:08:816 (1,2,3,4) - Moving against the clock is better lul
00:25:757 (1) - SEXUAL CONTACT PLS
00:31:404 (1) - ^
00:31:404 (1) - Bad Pattern, make them maybe like this (They look gay too, just made them fast xoxo)

00:41:992 (3,4,5) - Maybe change them too (Just my opinion)

Mój mod dla ciebie rogowej ogiera

Chalwa

1,105 posts

Joined August 2014

Topic Starter

Chalwa 2016-08-11T18:15:06+00:00

-C O N T R A L- wrote:
Mod for a gay person

Gay Mod for Gay Persons <3 Ur gay noob|Easy|
00:51:874 (2) - Try to make blanket nigga like on the pic but the pic slider sux it was #fastdesign

01:12:345 (3) - i want sexual contact with this slider Try to phone at +48123456789
01:15:168 (3) - ^ ^

Gay Mod for Gay Persons <3 I'm not a gay |Hard|
00:08:816 (1,2,3,4) - Moving against the clock is better lul fixed noob
00:25:757 (1) - SEXUAL CONTACT PLS Try to phone at +48123456789
00:31:404 (1) - ^ ^
00:31:404 (1) - Bad Pattern, make them maybe like this (They look gay too, just made them fast xoxo)
WUT?
00:41:992 (3,4,5) - Maybe change them too (Just my opinion) NOOOOOOOOOOOB

Mój mod dla ciebie rogowej ogiera Naucz się pisać po polsku noobie..

NIE BĘDZIE NIEMIEC PLUŁ NAM W TWARZ!!

Thanks for the mod

-NanoRIPE-

2,018 posts

Joined October 2013

-NanoRIPE- 2016-08-12T11:14:05+00:00

hi
just a noob modder passing by

[General]

maybe try to add hitsound for piano sound? for this part 00:04:580 - 00:13:051

[Easy]
00:08:816 (1,2) - make it little bit futher because it looks incosistent spacing with 00:03:169 (1,2)
00:31:404 (1) - why u add whistle here?
01:06:698 (3,4) - imperfect blanket
01:10:227 (4) - move to (288,192) for better flow

[Normal]
00:03:169 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - old mapping style ~
00:19:933 - maybe 1/2 slider here? because i hear 1/2 beat here
00:57:521 (3) - ctrl h?
00:59:463 (9) - delete this note (because its too complex imo if u still add note here,maybe put a break here)
01:02:286 (9) - ^
01:07:933 (9) - ^
01:10:933 until 01:21:874 - im not sure about the pattern here because the pattern of this part looks same with pattern on kiai time (i think on kiai time should be harder) ~

GL ~

Chalwa

1,105 posts

Joined August 2014

Topic Starter

Chalwa 2016-08-12T13:17:24+00:00

-NanoRIPE- wrote:
hi
just a noob modder passing by

[General]
maybe try to add hitsound for piano sound? for this part 00:04:580 - 00:13:051 Will add whe other modders say the same
[Easy]
00:08:816 (1,2) - make it little bit futher because it looks incosistent spacing with 00:03:169 (1,2)
00:31:404 (1) - why u add whistle here?
01:06:698 (3,4) - imperfect blanket
01:10:227 (4) - move to (288,192) for better flow
GL ~

Thanks for mod ^^

C00L

1,078 posts

Joined September 2014

C00L 2016-08-13T13:03:25+00:00

Kebab

Check! - Means it's been checked and nothing wrong has been found
Parts of the mod will be in Polish, parts will be in English
Please ignore my note/slider placement when i post a picture, i do that to provide a clearer image of what i mean

[General]

Add 'Havkz' to ALL your tags, since it's the mappers name
Inconsistencies in Kiai times -
Havkz's Extra -
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:48:345, ends on 00:59:286
Kiai #2: Starts on 00:59:992, ends on 01:09:521

All the other diffs -
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:48:345, ends on 01:10:933

Consider changing this since there is no need for an extra kiai time in he extra diff imo
Consider changing 'havkz's Extra' To 'Havkz's Extra, since all of your diff names start with a capital letter only this one doesn't

[Timing]

Check!

[Hitsounds]

Check!

[Easy Kebab]

00:19:404 (2,1) - napraw ten blanket
00:51:874 (2,3) - napraw ten blanket :^)
01:17:992 (1) - erm zacznij ten spinner tutaj 01:19:404 poniewaz tam muzyka sie scisza a od tad 01:17:992 zmapuj cos bo jeszcze jest mocny beat

[Asserin's Kebab Kebab]

00:43:580 - moglbys tutaj walnac nutke poniwaz jest dosc ostry dzwiek
00:48:345 (1) - moglbys zrobic ten slider troche bardziej ostry pod wzgledem kolkosci (lol) jak zrobiles tutaj 00:49:051 (3) - czy tez tutaj 00:42:698 (1) - zeby podkreslic te vocale
00:47:639 - normal nie potrzebuje calej sekcji po spinerze a to by ladnie pokreslilo vocale

[Hard Kebab]

00:18:698 (3,6) - moglbys zblanketowac :^)

[ReFaller's Kebab]

Ladne :^)

[havkz's Kebab]

00:08:816 (5) - NC since there is a jump in between (4) and (5) so that will be highlighted nicelly, also in slow section like these try to not go above (4/6) NC, depending on the song
00:24:345 (5) - consider spliting this up into little sections to emphasise the sounds at 00:24:698 etc
00:53:992 (1,6) - that's a horrible overlap imo, try re-aranging (1) somewhere else
01:02:639 (2,3,4) - consider placing this here since if you do that it'll get rid of the ugly overlap and also it will add some nice visual impact in the map, and if you do this lower the DS of (5) a little
01:03:698 (1,2,3) - some of your triples like these face the next note, some don't they don't follow a specific pattern consider re-aranging some of them :^)
01:13:404 (8,1) - you could blanket this better, excpet just one bit of the slider start unless there is reasoning for that

[Final Words]
looks alright :^)
Chalwa szukaj BN'ow a nie modow bo oni na bank cos wiecej wyczaja, widzac po ilu modac ta mapa jest powinni pomoc
Good Luck from me ! +1

headphonewearer

788 posts

Joined October 2014

headphonewearer 2016-08-13T15:45:53+00:00

My name isn't Havkz

headphonewearer

788 posts

Joined October 2014

headphonewearer 2016-08-13T17:40:40+00:00

C00L wrote:
[havkz's Kebab] lol
00:08:816 (5) - NC since there is a jump in between (4) and (5) so that will be highlighted nicelly, also in slow section like these try to not go above (4/6) NC, depending on the song fixed
00:24:345 (5) - consider spliting this up into little sections to emphasise the sounds at 00:24:698 etc sure
00:53:992 (1,6) - that's a horrible overlap imo, try re-aranging (1) somewhere else made a blanket
01:02:639 (2,3,4) - consider placing this here since if you do that it'll get rid of the ugly overlap and also it will add some nice visual impact in the map, and if you do this lower the DS of (5) a little fixed
01:03:698 (1,2,3) - some of your triples like these face the next note, some don't they don't follow a specific pattern consider re-aranging some of them :^) i dont really think thats a problem, and btw it looks cool when theyre facing the opposite direction of the notes coming after it
01:13:404 (8,1) - you could blanket this better, excpet just one bit of the slider start unless there is reasoning for that fixed

Thanks for modding!!!

code

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Title:Sahara Bounce
TitleUnicode:Sahara Bounce
Artist:Ganar
ArtistUnicode:Ganar
Creator:Chalwa
Version:havkz's Extra
Source:
Tags:harddance hardcore cut dance refaller asserin
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C00L

1,078 posts

Joined September 2014

C00L 2016-08-13T20:36:03+00:00

havkz wrote:
My name isn't Havkz

lolololol, would still make sense with a capital letter

Chalwa

1,105 posts

Joined August 2014

Topic Starter

Chalwa 2016-08-14T06:51:59+00:00

C00L wrote:
Kebab
Check! - Means it's been checked and nothing wrong has been found
Parts of the mod will be in Polish, parts will be in English
Please ignore my note/slider placement when i post a picture, i do that to provide a clearer image of what i mean

[General]
Add 'Havkz' to ALL your tags, since it's the mappers name
Inconsistencies in Kiai times -
Havkz's Extra -
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:48:345, ends on 00:59:286
Kiai #2: Starts on 00:59:992, ends on 01:09:521

All the other diffs -
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:48:345, ends on 01:10:933

Consider changing this since there is no need for an extra kiai time in he extra diff imo
Nie ma znaczenia chyba
Consider changing 'havkz's Extra' To 'Havkz's Extra, since all of your diff names start with a capital letter only this one doesn't Ale on się nazywa havkz a nie Havkz xD
[Timing]
Check!
[Hitsounds]
Check!

[Easy Kebab]
00:19:404 (2,1) - napraw ten blanket Przcież to jest równe O.o
00:51:874 (2,3) - napraw ten blanket :^)
01:17:992 (1) - erm zacznij ten spinner tutaj 01:19:404 poniewaz tam muzyka sie scisza a od tad 01:17:992 zmapuj cos bo jeszcze jest mocny beat
[Hard Kebab]
00:18:698 (3,6) - moglbys zblanketowac :^) Nie, bo mam idealnego kwadrata 00:18:698 (3,4,5,6)
[Final Words]
looks alright :^)
Chalwa szukaj BN'ow a nie modow bo oni na bank cos wiecej wyczaja, widzac po ilu modac ta mapa jest powinni pomoc Szukam, ale ni chuja nie mogę znaleźć xD
Good Luck from me ! +1

Dziena za stara. Dziena za moda

Feb

1,027 posts

Joined June 2014

Feb 2016-09-09T13:48:51+00:00

combo colour 3 is really similar to 1, maybe use a different one?
in easy 00:46:933 (3) - wrongly snapped should end at 00:47:992 -
current preview point starts at 00:48:345 - if you move it a little earlier ppl won't hear the harsh sound instantly (preview point can be unsnapped)
what is this clap sound, also why don't you have the clap on every white how its supposed to be.
why is drum-hitfinish10 silent? Those need to be audible.

[easi]

rhyhtm wise this is fine, however visually this could use more work

00:44:110 (3,4) - visually they look not alike aaaaa
00:46:933 (3,1) - because of my point with the incorrectly snapped slider, your spacing is inconsistent here.
00:48:345 (1,2) - this looks visually not that cool considering how neatly the notes before where spaced they are almost touching each other. (i don't know if you want to avoid having blankets, but thats not the way)
00:51:168 (1,2) - same first point bbbb
00:58:227 (3,1) - blanketing round sliders on round sliders this long usually don't look that great how about using different shapes for some occasions? Keep in mind that sliders shapes can represent song attributes like 00:59:286 - to 00:59:639 - these sounds could work pretty good in sliders, but you don't have too.

Well this is actually fine, but BN's usually tend to take a look at stuff more if it looks visually pleasing as well.

[assnormal]

Dense - AR5 if you take my advice in consideration.

ur ncing is inconsistent e.g.
00:14:463 (1) - from here until 00:20:816 (3) - here
00:25:757 (3) - new sequence should be nc'd
00:27:168 (5) - this is the first time you have 3 downbeats in your combo so technically speaking the best is to have your nc's on every thrid downbeat.
00:24:345 (1,2) - maybe you can avoid them being so close together. You can move 2 a bit to the right.
00:32:816 (3) - this is basically the biggest problem in the map until now. Keep in mind that clicking every 1/2 beat is very draining at this level, so its wise to have rest at some point. The current 1/2 spam is 7 seconds long. How about giving the player some time to rest? e.g. 00:32:816 (3) - why not make it a simple as 00:31:404 (1) - ? Right now this is as hard as 00:37:051 (1) - whichis an entirely new sequence.

00:48:345 (1) - ^Here is the same problem as above. I highly suggest you to let the player rest in terms of spamming.

00:42:698 (1) - Putting such long slider is the exact same of emphasizes in the build up part for the kiai.

01:19:404 - consider putting an spinner here since the song is fading out, the notes are getting more inaudible thus harder to play for lower tier players.

The diff needs a bit of polishing, however most things in terms of gameplay. You don't have to cover every single note which is happening on 1/2. Most of the time undermapping is the way to go!

[hardi]
this diff lacks in inconsistency rhythm wise. I'll get to that.

00:20:021 - 00:20:198 - 00:37:051 - 01:19:404 - redundant time lines
00:25:757 (1) - 00:31:404 (1) - afaik the slider track must be fully visible therefore you need to create a hole so theres no confusion.

inconsistency rhythmwise:
00:37:051 (1,2) - between these notes you skip the triplet which is fine, but you cover them exactly two downbeats after which is just a repeat in the music
00:38:286 (4,1) - same thing here, this is completely different rhythm to 00:40:404 (4,5,6) - which doesn't make sense if they just a repeat from before.
^
this happens more often i just pointed out those.

00:47:992 (6) - makes more sense as an 1/2 slider since this sound works more like an extended slider (vocal sound)

Yea i can't give much more advice here since the map is so inconsistent.

[insane af]

1 thing why do you whistle sounds for the clap aaaaaa
cool diff some suggestions if you don't mind.

00:40:051 (2,3,4) - why is this manual stacked when everything else is automatic stacked, seems unreasonable to me.
00:49:051 (5) - 1/1 slider fits here better imo, like you did later at 00:54:698 (4) -
00:59:286 (1,2) - deserve more spacing imo to each other since they are so strong, also why nc? You have a similiar nc pattern at 01:16:227 (1) - where downbeat is nc'd so it seems out of touch.
01:05:551 (5,1) - visually these look a like spacingwise to the last object. however the first one is 1/4 the second 1/2. Adjust spacing.
preference, but you usually nc every downbeat, however you break it every single time you have a triplet on it for e.g. 00:49:580 (1) - 00:52:404 (1) - 00:55:227 (1) - might be more consistent to have these nc'd as well.

sry for being late af

beeeeeeee GL

Asserin

332 posts

Joined August 2013

Asserin 2016-09-09T15:58:51+00:00

Feb wrote:
assnormal
Dense - AR5 if you take my advice in consideration.

ur ncing is inconsistent e.g.
00:14:463 (1) - from here until 00:20:816 (3) - here
00:25:757 (3) - new sequence should be nc'd
00:27:168 (5) - this is the first time you have 3 downbeats in your combo so technically speaking the best is to have your nc's on every thrid downbeat.
00:24:345 (1,2) - maybe you can avoid them being so close together. You can move 2 a bit to the right.
00:32:816 (3) - this is basically the biggest problem in the map until now. Keep in mind that clicking every 1/2 beat is very draining at this level, so its wise to have rest at some point. The current 1/2 spam is 7 seconds long. How about giving the player some time to rest? e.g. 00:32:816 (3) - why not make it a simple as 00:31:404 (1) - ? Right now this is as hard as 00:37:051 (1) - whichis an entirely new sequence.

00:48:345 (1) - ^Here is the same problem as above. I highly suggest you to let the player rest in terms of spamming.

00:42:698 (1) - Putting such long slider is the exact same of emphasizes in the build up part for the kiai.

01:19:404 - consider putting an spinner here since the song is fading out, the notes are getting more inaudible thus harder to play for lower tier players.

The diff needs a bit of polishing, however most things in terms of gameplay. You don't have to cover every single note which is happening on 1/2. Most of the time undermapping is the way to go!

Okey i fixed some thing there but mostly you said something what i can change but i don't have to. Its rankable so its useless a bit.

Asserin's Normal

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Chalwa

1,105 posts

Joined August 2014

Topic Starter

Chalwa 2016-09-09T16:05:58+00:00

Feb wrote:
combo colour 3 is really similar to 1, maybe use a different one? not need, cause second blue is much darker
in easy 00:46:933 (3) - wrongly snapped should end at 00:47:992 - fixed
current preview point starts at 00:48:345 - if you move it a little earlier ppl won't hear the harsh sound instantly (preview point can be unsnapped) will fix it, but now i'm busy
what is this clap sound, also why don't you have the clap on every white how its supposed to be. Wait to other modders opinion
why is drum-hitfinish10 silent? Those need to be audible. Will delete it

[easi]

rhyhtm wise this is fine, however visually this could use more work ik, but i dunno how to fix it without remapping :/

00:44:110 (3,4) - visually they look not alike aaaaa fixed
00:46:933 (3,1) - because of my point with the incorrectly snapped slider, your spacing is inconsistent here. fixed
00:48:345 (1,2) - this looks visually not that cool considering how neatly the notes before where spaced they are almost touching each other. (i don't know if you want to avoid having blankets, but thats not the way) fixed
00:51:168 (1,2) - same first point bbbb fixed
00:58:227 (3,1) - blanketing round sliders on round sliders this long usually don't look that great how about using different shapes for some occasions? Keep in mind that sliders shapes can represent song attributes like 00:59:286 - to 00:59:639 - these sounds could work pretty good in sliders, but you don't have too. fixed

Well this is actually fine, but BN's usually tend to take a look at stuff more if it looks visually pleasing as well. Lul it's fine O.o XD

[hardi]
this diff lacks in inconsistency rhythm wise. I'll get to that.

00:20:021 - 00:20:198 - 00:37:051 - 01:19:404 - redundant time lines fixed
00:25:757 (1) - 00:31:404 (1) - afaik the slider track must be fully visible therefore you need to create a hole so theres no confusion. made weird, but imo better slider

inconsistency rhythmwise:
00:37:051 (1,2) - between these notes you skip the triplet which is fine, but you cover them exactly two downbeats after which is just a repeat in the music fixed
00:38:286 (4,1) - same thing here, this is completely different rhythm to 00:40:404 (4,5,6) - which doesn't make sense if they just a repeat from before.
^ fixed
this happens more often i just pointed out those. I'll fix it, but not now, cuz busyyyy

00:47:992 (6) - makes more sense as an 1/2 slider since this sound works more like an extended slider (vocal sound) fixed

Yea i can't give much more advice here since the map is so inconsistent. Thanks for trying

sry for being late af NO PROBLEMO THANKS FOR UR MOD

beeeeeeee GL Thanks bruhh and congratz new ranked

Thanks for mod Feb!

Arduck

56 posts

Joined December 2015

Arduck 2016-09-09T17:46:20+00:00

Asserin's Normal

00:14:286 (5) - Remove this hit circle. There's nothing there. Since you were following the piano with the previous objects, having only that slider is more appropriate 00:14:463 (1) -

Hard

00:40:933 (5) - Add a hitcircle here
00:41:198 (7) - ^
00:47:639 (4) - Why dont you place a hitcircle here
00:47:727 (5) - ^
00:47:904 (6) - ^ so you can follow the lyrics. The previous objects follow nothing.
00:49:668 (7) - Add a hitcircle here as well.
00:52:492 (7) - ^
00:59:286 - No hit objects here, or here 00:59:463 - maybe add 2 hit circles?
01:09:168 (1) - Add a hitcircle here instead, followed by 2x more hitcircles here 01:09:345 (2) - and here 01:09:433 (3) - and then add a slider here 01:09:521 (4) - and here 01:09:874 (5) - for half a note (from the white tick to the red tick)
01:14:992 (5) - There's nothing here in the song.

ReFaller's Insane

01:09:521 (8) - Add a hit circle here and make the spinner end here instead 01:10:757 -

Rank this pls DDDDD: Good luck!

Last edited by Arduck 2016-09-09T23:54:06+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

ReFaller

1,233 posts

Joined August 2014

ReFaller 2016-09-09T20:25:05+00:00

O ja pierdole jakie oblężenie, teraz znaleźć pierwszego modera...

ReFaller

1,233 posts

Joined August 2014

ReFaller 2016-09-09T21:06:33+00:00

OOPS to doublepost

Mazziv

How the hell i could skip this mod so long?
[ReFaller's Insane]

00:31:404 (1,3) - are those anchor points on purpose or was it accident because you cant really see the curve of the slider v: i planned to make these sliders with having very little curving
01:01:757 (5,2,3,4) - stack? it is autostacking, so theoretically it is stacked
00:45:873 (5,7) - try to stack em? D: stream is made by slider, so making stack will ruin whole spacings and take long minutes to fix all of them
00:51:168 (1,5) - it wasnt perfectly stacked for me,maybe im just dumb i prefer this second option...mean ok, i will fix it
00:53:286 (5) - ^ pls damage your eyes ><
01:05:110 (2,3,4) - move it a bit to the left to avoid the overlap with 01:04:580 (5) - ? ok, but i moved more objects 01:05:110 (2,3,4,5,6) - they are

besides that I LOVE THAT DIFF ITS AMAZING
[/list]

Feb

[insane af]

1 thing why do you whistle sounds for the clap aaaaaa point the moment when i used them
cool diff some suggestions if you don't mind.

00:40:051 (2,3,4) - why is this manual stacked when everything else is automatic stacked, seems unreasonable to me. to make an impression of better flowing
00:49:051 (5) - 1/1 slider fits here better imo, like you did later at 00:54:698 (4) - no special reason for do this
00:59:286 (1,2) - deserve more spacing imo to each other since they are so strong, also why nc? You have a similiar nc pattern at 01:16:227 (1) - where downbeat is nc'd so it seems out of touch. this is a moment for short slowdown until slider 4 which is suddenly speeduped
01:05:551 (5,1) - visually these look a like spacingwise to the last object. however the first one is 1/4 the second 1/2. Adjust spacing.
preference, but you usually nc every downbeat, however you break it every single time you have a triplet on it for e.g. 00:49:580 (1) - 00:52:404 (1) - I prefer to set NC there 01:05:110 (2) - instead of adjusting spacing
00:55:227 (1) - might be more consistent to have these nc'd as well. ??? you mean to put NC here? this is already NC'ed

Arduck_GR

i agree only for make a spinner a bit longer, but not long as you wished, i will let to give 1/1 beat pause

Okay, I caught them all. You are my pokemons XD

01:16:227 (1,2) - Zrobiłem te część po staremu, po dłuzszym graniu tego "trójkąta" zdałem sobie sprawe ze nie współgra z tym pod co mapowałem to na prawde, wróciłem więc do anty-jumpów.

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Kanye

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Kanye 2016-10-08T22:25:54+00:00

Hi, M4M from your queue

Sorry I'm so late, I've been really busy and catching up on all my pending mods

[General]
(*) Tags conflict with Mapper's Extra
(*) Add mapper to tags for all other diffs
(*) Remove havkz from tags
(*) Consider removing a blue and purple combo colour, and replacing with a orange and green
(*) Enable widescreen support since your bg resolution is 1366*768
(*) Mapper toggles off the kiai at 59 seconds, and toggles it back on at 2 whites later, which makes more sense, so copy this with the other diffs

[Easy]
(*) 00:31:404 (1) - You've mapped these sliders to 4 whites, and then you make this 2 with a reverse, which kinda doesn't fit as well, so maybe keep it consistent to 4 ticks
(*) 00:52:580 (3) - Blanket around (2)
(*) 00:58:227 (3) - Blanket around the tail of 00:56:110 (4) -
(*) 00:59:639 (1) - Blanket

[Asserin's Normal]
(*) Your SV is the same as the hard, and significantly higher than the Easy, so maybe meet a middle ground with 1.1. 1.3 feels too fast
(*) Consider making this CS 3.6 to make it exactly 1 above the easy?
(*) 00:25:051 (4) - Can blanket this around (3), would look nicer
(*) 00:45:521 (1) - This spinner is too short for a normal diff. For a lower level player, they cannot spin fast enough for this. I would consider just adding a slider
(*) 01:19:404 (1) - Maybe just add a spinner here, similar to the easy

[Hard]
(*) If the Normal doesn't change the SV, then increase it or this, since you don't want it the same
(*) Maybe map sliders to the intro?
(*) 00:28:580 (1,2) - Make this one whole slider, like you've had it
(*) 00:40:404 (4) - Replace the head of this with a circle and add a slider at the tail, like this http://puu.sh/rCiyg.jpg
(*) 00:54:521 (4) - Same for this, which will mean you replace the tail of 00:55:051 (5) - a circle, like this http://puu.sh/rCiG3.jpg
(*) 01:08:639 (4) - And here
(*) 01:17:110 (4) - And here
(*) 01:17:992 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I would consider adding sliders here instead, since the pace has slowed down

[ReFaller's Insane]
(*) 01:20:110 (5) - Stack on (1)
Other than that, all seems good. You could map the intro with sliders, but I think that should be left to the hard or the Extra

[Mapper's Extra]
(*) Definitely map this intro with artistic sliders
(*) 00:19:757 (8) - Not snapped
(*) 00:45:168 (9) - Overlapping (6), try blanket better
(*) 00:45:873 (5) - NC this due to the change in direction
(*) 00:47:639 (1) - Remove NC

Alright that's all I could find, a very nice set, with lots of promise, so good luck!

My map for M4M https://osu.ppy.sh/s/377148

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