2016-10-11 22:57 GranDSenpai: 00:03:272 (1) -
2016-10-11 22:57 GranDSenpai: i dunno but this looks really awkward
2016-10-11 22:57 GranDSenpai: if it was my map
2016-10-11 22:57 theramdans: yeaaaaah
2016-10-11 22:57 GranDSenpai: i'd do something like this
2016-10-11 22:57 GranDSenpai:
http://puu.sh/rFf5T/814d0e33ab.jpg2016-10-11 22:57 theramdans: I feel you man
2016-10-11 22:57 GranDSenpai: but i think maybe just personal preference really
2016-10-11 22:58 theramdans: doesnt flow well
2016-10-11 22:58 GranDSenpai: it wont change the way it's played
2016-10-11 22:58 GranDSenpai: but it looks more pleasing
2016-10-11 22:58 theramdans: wow that is better than I am expecting
2016-10-11 22:58 theramdans: brb trying that
2016-10-11 22:58 GranDSenpai: also if you do change that
2016-10-11 22:58 GranDSenpai: 00:03:756 (3) - perhaps try doing the same with this note?
2016-10-11 22:59 GranDSenpai: o btw. everything is just a suggestion
2016-10-11 23:00 theramdans: you got it
2016-10-11 23:01 GranDSenpai: 00:35:529 (3,4) -
2016-10-11 23:01 GranDSenpai: this is also just what i would do
2016-10-11 23:01 GranDSenpai: but perhaps switch the order of these two notes?
2016-10-11 23:01 theramdans: let's see
2016-10-11 23:01 GranDSenpai: it would feel more comfortable playing
2016-10-11 23:01 theramdans: is there anything wrong with that?
2016-10-11 23:01 GranDSenpai: i dont think so
2016-10-11 23:02 GranDSenpai: it's just what i would do \:D/
2016-10-11 23:02 theramdans: zig zag eh
2016-10-11 23:02 theramdans: let me try
2016-10-11 23:02 GranDSenpai: if you do end up changing it though
2016-10-11 23:02 GranDSenpai: 00:40:691 (3) - you'd need to change this one the same
2016-10-11 23:02 theramdans: the movement from (4) to (5) is too much I think
2016-10-11 23:03 theramdans: but maybe that will feel more challenging
2016-10-11 23:03 GranDSenpai: 00:44:562 (1) -
2016-10-11 23:03 GranDSenpai: this looks pretty ugly imo
2016-10-11 23:03 GranDSenpai: i see what you were going for though
2016-10-11 23:04 GranDSenpai: maybe could do something like this?
2016-10-11 23:04 GranDSenpai:
http://puu.sh/rFfqb/126d10cd31.jpg2016-10-11 23:06 GranDSenpai: 01:05:852 (1) -
2016-10-11 23:06 theramdans: moar zig zags lol
2016-10-11 23:06 GranDSenpai: you skiped over a rather loud bass drum aswell
2016-10-11 23:06 theramdans: how to make that ? hhaa
2016-10-11 23:06 GranDSenpai: put first three notes down
2016-10-11 23:06 GranDSenpai: and then copy paste
2016-10-11 23:06 theramdans: I skipped it for the vocal
2016-10-11 23:07 GranDSenpai: pishi made a good video about this
2016-10-11 23:07 GranDSenpai: you could map the vocal and the drum
2016-10-11 23:07 GranDSenpai: something like this would work imo
2016-10-11 23:07 GranDSenpai:
http://puu.sh/rFfy3/bbbdecbfbc.jpg2016-10-11 23:08 GranDSenpai: i dont think you should ever skip over loud sounds D:
2016-10-11 23:08 GranDSenpai: 01:09:723 (1) -
2016-10-11 23:08 GranDSenpai: also here
2016-10-11 23:08 GranDSenpai: i think you should do this
2016-10-11 23:08 GranDSenpai:
http://puu.sh/rFfAB/c8508efcfb.jpg2016-10-11 23:08 GranDSenpai: you keep the held effect from the vocals
2016-10-11 23:08 GranDSenpai: but you map the bass
2016-10-11 23:09 GranDSenpai: 01:11:013 (1) - same here
2016-10-11 23:10 GranDSenpai: 01:16:175 (1) - this section is same as the last one exactly
2016-10-11 23:11 GranDSenpai: 01:22:465 (6,2,1,2) - also could i suggest that you move all of these notes up a little tiny bit
2016-10-11 23:12 GranDSenpai: 01:22:143 (4,5) - because this jump is bigger
2016-10-11 23:12 GranDSenpai: 01:22:465 (6,1,2) -
2016-10-11 23:12 GranDSenpai: while this part is more intense but the spacing decreases
2016-10-11 23:12 GranDSenpai: tell me if i'm going too fast
2016-10-11 23:12 theramdans: yeah you are
2016-10-11 23:13 GranDSenpai: ok i'll let you catch up
2016-10-11 23:13 GranDSenpai: tell me when ur rdy
2016-10-11 23:15 theramdans: ok
2016-10-11 23:15 theramdans: you can continue
2016-10-11 23:16 GranDSenpai: 01:44:562 (1) - same thing as the start
2016-10-11 23:16 GranDSenpai: i feel like you should curve the slider
2016-10-11 23:16 theramdans: upward I guess?
2016-10-11 23:16 GranDSenpai:
http://puu.sh/rFfUN/5a3dff5a94.jpg2016-10-11 23:17 theramdans: I got it
2016-10-11 23:18 GranDSenpai: 02:40:691 (5) -
2016-10-11 23:18 GranDSenpai: i like this slider
2016-10-11 23:19 GranDSenpai: 02:44:239 (2) -
2016-10-11 23:19 GranDSenpai: i also feel like there should be a slider here
2016-10-11 23:19 theramdans: `you are the 2nd person to tell me that
2016-10-11 23:19 theramdans:
2016-10-11 23:19 GranDSenpai: instead of just a singletap
2016-10-11 23:19 GranDSenpai: \:D/
2016-10-11 23:20 GranDSenpai: 03:12:626 (1,2,1,2) -
2016-10-11 23:20 GranDSenpai: omg
2016-10-11 23:20 GranDSenpai: this part is hard to play D:
2016-10-11 23:20 GranDSenpai: but you can't really do anything about it
2016-10-11 23:20 GranDSenpai: haha
2016-10-11 23:21 GranDSenpai: 03:17:465 (1) - same as before in my opinion
2016-10-11 23:21 theramdans: ok I put a slider
2016-10-11 23:22 GranDSenpai: that's really all i have to say about the map
2016-10-11 23:22 GranDSenpai: pretty well done