ctpsky wrote:

蠢mod而已

00:09:959 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 看起来还行 但是移动轨迹一出来就不行了 这只是个小意见 改了下距离
00:12:844 (6) - 和前面的连起来看这个位置不好 换了节奏
00:22:267 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 摆成五角星可能更好
00:25:536 (2) - ^
00:26:113 (4,5,6,7) - 我觉得间距渐大 或者不规则摆放比较好
00:37:075 (6) - 这里要玩死不少读图差的人
00:38:998 (8) - 破坏整体美感 换个位置
00:54:382 (6) - ^ 放在4左边比较好
01:25:152 (5,1) - 把5放在1的尾会比较好玩/w\（应该说1的尾放在5上
01:59:575 (3) - 角度没拖好 看着别扭 改了下
02:08:421 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 感觉不伦不类
02:09:767 (8) - 配合6,7的音效 感觉8删掉好
02:28:036 (3,4) - 反过来玩比较顺手
02:29:382 (2,3,4) - 2,4 和3 互换位置感觉顺手
03:38:613 (4,6) - 拉近一点
04:08:421 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 个人倾向于换成1/4滑条组
05:11:305 (7) - NC吧 看着舒服些

Mei wrote:

你不做海爷的歌，我要revoke了

Sellenite wrote:

没事，你做了火龙果的，还有我的mu

1. 关掉Enable countdown
2. 这歌BPM不高而且是DTable的 建议ar8.5

1. 00:26:113 (4,5,6,7) - 这四个短滑我觉得距离略微大了点.
2. 00:31:882 (3,5,6,7) - 避免overlap吧._.
3. 00:50:921 (2,3,3) - 这还是stack好吧，毕竟下面那个stack好的，这个不弄一下看起来违和
4. 01:01:305 (4) - 这个移到244，102左右，01:00:921 (2) - 这个往左一点，然后我建议5，6ctrl+g，对应的7ctrl+G 例如这样
   图

   
5. 01:14:959 (3,5,7) - 这地方是两个两个一组的吧，建议这三个NC
6. 01:14:959 (3,4,5,6) - 然后这两组之间的距离太近了，这四组应该是一样的间距
7. 01:18:805 (7) - 这个7要么移到361,308左右配合6和8的overlap，要么往左跟滑条blanket吧._.
8. 01:19:190 (1) - 这尾巴位置放的有点远唉，调整一下
9. 01:28:805 (3) - 这个滑条Ctrl+G 然后
10. 01:53:036 (1,2) - 这个间距增大的很莫名，后面也不是重音什么的，反而1和前面间距应该大一点
11. 03:16:882 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 这个串后面的鼓声这么响，我建议加上drum-finish，音效音量小一点
12. 03:17:459 (7) - 就算不改音效，这里也是漏了whistle
13. 03:23:036 (6) - 这滑条头多了个whistle吧，跟前后不一样
14. 03:39:767 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这个似乎不太顺，我建议这样
    图

    
15. 05:14:959 - 不降音量吗.这里没音

1. 00:20:536 (7) - 我的話可能會放到00:19:190 (1,2,3) - 下面
2. 00:22:267 (1) - 放到x184 y148 與前面3和4的頭做個等距?
3. 00:35:729 (7) - x274 y64? 三角梗
4. 01:03:421 (1) - 放到01:03:805 (1) - 上面, 這樣的話會在跳之後有個停頓感
5. 01:12:555 (5,6) - stack一起好像不錯
6. 01:14:959 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - 可以試試這個排版(我選取6是為了標記6的位置)
   
   SPOILER

   
7. 01:18:613 (6) - 可以nc一下
8. 01:22:459 (2) - 實在有點遠 可以考慮x44 y232
9. 01:28:036 (5,6,1,2,3) - 可以做個5角星的梗
   
   SPOILER

   
10. 01:30:921 (7) - 也是可以nc一下
11. 01:49:959 - 這裡突然來個whistle 我覺得有點奇怪
12. 01:57:267 (2) - 這個可以用點拍手聲的音效誒 試試找一個來用
13. 02:34:382 (4) - x72 y292? 這個也跟02:33:421 (5,6) - 擺同一個方向會比較合適
14. 02:36:786 (4,5,6) - 這裡我覺得會有點卡手
    
    SPOILER

    
15. 02:42:652 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 感覺可以擺成圖形
    
    SPOILER

    
16. 03:02:267 - 這裡的finish有點過於凸出 建議remove
17. 03:27:652 (3) - 拆成兩個circle 比較順手
18. 04:06:882 (1) - 我覺得原本應該是在白線停的
19. 04:26:113 (3) - ctrl+g
20. 05:14:959 - 這個可以收小聲音

wcx19911123 wrote:

here's your ticket

[General]
combo colors are too similar, especially the color1 and color4. hope you can fix the color a bit and make them looks more different 改了

[Friends]
00:26:690 (7) - this slider looks a bit odd to play, ctrl+g or make its pattern the same as 00:26:113 (4,5,6) - is better imo 这些当单点打的，应该没问题
02:04:767 (4) - x:256 y:280? blanket better fixed
02:15:921 (4) - ctrl+g? making the jump between 02:15:729 (3,4) - bigger is better imo fixed
04:00:536 - 这里虽然是跟音乐才少了，不过vocal还是有，空了很违和。建议加个note或者至少把04:00:344 (2) - 换成slider会好点 fixed
04:06:882 (1) - 从头给这个spinner降低音量好点，35%左右，不然打的时候太吵了 fixed
04:34:575 (1) - how about extend this slider to 04:34:863 - ? fit the song better(you should also change the direction or the jump to next slider is too huge) fixed
05:11:402 (1) - 跟04:06:882 (1) - 一样，这个的中间可以静音，效果好些。转到最后可以稍微提高点音量 fixed

call me back then

Momochikun wrote:

hi, as requested :3
check your hitsound delay pls ? orz well if you lazy i'll do it later checked, all fine
[Friends]
00:04:767 (1) - 1/2 whiste is too much imo, maybe you could delete some of them delete the last one
00:16:113 (1) - red node slider seems out of place here o3o fine for me :3/
00:22:844 (4) - whistle for obvious reason ? fixed
01:30:921 (1) - ^ fixed
04:21:690 (1) - ^ fixed
01:35:536 (4) - this could touch the hp bar, move down a bit fixed
00:26:882 - from this part i think you could add more whistles to emphasize instrument, i think they were plain atm added some
00:39:190 - also from this the snare drum ryhythm is per 1/1.. i think you could add clap on the all white ticks as well fixed
00:52:844 (6,1) - personally i dont prefer overlap like this -3- my style owo
01:58:805 (5,6) - too noisy ? delete one whis
02:13:805 (1,2,3) - triplet is not really prominent with the music imo there's guitar sound
02:28:421 (5) - might nc for sv change fixed
02:36:882 (5,1) - swap nc would be more sense with vocal here fixed
02:49:382 (5) - NC for consistency fixed
02:54:382 (6,1) - this flow is not comfortable to play since they're facing on different way plays fine
03:29:190 (1,2,3,1) - this gap could be confusing, add more space or just add note z 1.54x enough I think
03:45:344 (1,2) - clap is out of place.. whistle is better I think whistle is too weak to emphasize the guitar
04:47:459 (2) - is it just me that think this slider is weird ? lol want to use some strange slider in this guitar part lol

hitsounds and placement could be improved more imo, good luck o3o

1. Red - Unrankable issue, you must fixed
2. Purple - Highly recommended, consider to use it
3. Black - Suggestion, feel free to fixed or not
4. Gray - Personal preference

1. Your drum-hitclap has 3.5ms delay, it is not unrankable though, but using this version would be nice, I removed the delay for you.
2. maybe you need soft-sliderslide2.wav since you used S:C2

1. I felt some parts lack of hitsounds, especially whistles, maybe you can add some, I will point out some i think that is nice to add below
2. 00:19:286 (2,3) - whistles can be removed here, 00:19:190 (1) - is enough for me
3. 00:20:536 (7) - whistle for piano
4. 00:25:152 (5) - ^
5. 00:28:229 (7) - ^
6. 01:21:305 - 01:21:690 - 01:22:075 - I think it would be nice to have whistles, you know the reason
7. 01:24:767 (3,5) - same as above, all kiais have this kind of work, if you fixed these two, dont forget to change the others
8. 01:46:113 (5,6) - whistle at slider head and note
9. 01:52:075 (4,6) - whistles
10. 03:22:844 (5) - ^

OniJAM wrote:

here's your ticket

1. Red - Unrankable issue, you must fixed
2. Purple - Highly recommended, consider to use it
3. Black - Suggestion, feel free to fixed or not
4. Gray - Personal preference

[General]

1. Your drum-hitclap has 3.5ms delay, it is not unrankable though, but using this version would be nice, I removed the delay for you.
2. maybe you need soft-sliderslide2.wav since you used S:C2

[ Friends]

1. I felt some parts lack of hitsounds, especially whistles, maybe you can add some, I will point out some i think that is nice to add below
2. 00:19:286 (2,3) - whistles can be removed here, 00:19:190 (1) - is enough for me 我觉得那里两个音挺明显的就没改了
3. 00:20:536 (7) - whistle for piano
4. 00:25:152 (5) - ^
5. 00:28:229 (7) - ^
6. 01:21:305 - 01:21:690 - 01:22:075 - I think it would be nice to have whistles, you know the reason
7. 01:24:767 (3,5) - same as above, all kiais have this kind of work, if you fixed these two, dont forget to change the others
8. 01:46:113 (5,6) - whistle at slider head and note
9. 01:52:075 (4,6) - whistles
10. 03:22:844 (5) - ^

Call me back

1. Clear.

1. 00:18:421 (3) - Add whislte.
2. 00:26:305 (5) - Try to add whistle to slider head. Current I felt that a bit empty here. would be fit the song imo.
3. 00:27:459 (2) - whistle
4. 00:27:844 (4) - ^ there are many missed whistle ;;
5. 00:29:959 (1) - ^
6. 00:30:344 (3) - ^ slider end
7. 00:30:921 (5) - ^
8. 00:31:113 (6) - ^ slider end
9. 00:31:690 (2) - ^
10. 00:32:075 (4) - ^
11. 00:32:267 (5) - ^ slider end
12. 00:33:036 (1) - ^ slider head
13. 00:33:613 (3) - ^
14. 00:33:805 (5) - ^ slider end
15. 00:36:113 (1) - ^
16. 00:38:229 (4) - ^
17. 01:57:075 (1) - S:C2 clap is really fit the song. try to add this.
18. 03:49:190 (4) - missed whistle
19. 04:33:229 (1) - whistle?
20. 05:10:171 - The timing seciton is downbeat. so you should move to the line 05:09:979 - here.
    
    almost hitsounds suggestion. others are fine for me.

Ayakura Mei wrote:

妈呀 我就提前恭喜了

Guy wrote:

Hi!

Red : Unrankable issue / must fix.
Blue : Should be fixed / highly suggested.
Black : Just suggestion.


[General]

1. Clear.

[Friends]

1. 00:18:421 (3) - Add whislte.
2. 00:26:305 (5) - Try to add whistle to slider head. Current I felt that a bit empty here. would be fit the song imo.
3. 00:27:459 (2) - whistle
4. 00:27:844 (4) - ^ there are many missed whistle ;;
5. 00:29:959 (1) - ^
6. 00:30:344 (3) - ^ slider end
7. 00:30:921 (5) - ^
8. 00:31:113 (6) - ^ slider end
9. 00:31:690 (2) - ^
10. 00:32:075 (4) - ^
11. 00:32:267 (5) - ^ slider end
12. 00:33:036 (1) - ^ slider head
13. 00:33:613 (3) - ^
14. 00:33:805 (5) - ^ slider end
15. 00:36:113 (1) - ^
16. 00:38:229 (4) - ^
17. 01:57:075 (1) - S:C2 clap is really fit the song. try to add this.
18. 03:49:190 (4) - missed whistle
19. 04:33:229 (1) - whistle?
20. 05:10:171 - The timing seciton is downbeat. so you should move to the line 05:09:979 - here.
    
    almost hitsounds suggestion. others are fine for me.

Call me back~

Xinely wrote:

i guess placeholder here, im quite tired now so probably i will finish my mod tomorrow



firstly sorry i have to pop the bubble since i found out some wrong snapping which i confirmed with Natsu, Jemmmmy and TicClick, what are wrong snap i marked them with red lines here

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  General

1. 在tags里面可以加“新田恵海” （Honoka的seiyuu） "内田 彩" （Kotori的seiyuu）“久保ユリカ” （Hanayo的seiyuu）， “Nitta Emi” "Uchida Aya" “Kubo Yurika”， 歌手们的名字 added

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  Friends

1. 00:09:190 (3) - move to 384,128. it will give more consistent spacing for between (1,2) and (3,4) make it consistent
2. 00:10:152 (2) - you can give whistle for the piano here fixed
3. 00:10:921 (7) - you can give whistle too for the crystal sound fixed
4. 00:12:075 (3) - whistle too for vocal, if you agree so please add for 00:12:844 (6) - 's head too for consistency fixed
5. 00:26:690 (7) - move th tail around 308,252. it will give more natural flow for the 1/4 jumps imo plays well imo
6. 00:38:998 (8) - i think if you stack this circle with 00:37:844 (2) - , it will give more natural flow and triangle pattern shape for 00:38:805 (7,8,1) - I prefer like this
7. 00:49:959 (8) –there is a piano on background music, adding whistle sounds nicely and fits with clap here fixed
8. 00:54:382 (6) –there is a piano again, i guess you can use clap normal additions here, or just use whistle (but it sounds quite random when you dont use whistle in current time so i’d say normal clap fixed
9. 00:58:998 (6) –same as above fixed
10. 01:05:152 -, 01:06:882 -, 01:08:229 – and 01:09:190 – if you hitsound following vocal too, you can add whistles here, just my taste that i love to hitsound both vocals and musics fixed
11. 01:25:344 (1) –probably you forgot whistle on head here, the vocal is really empty w/o it fixed
12. 01:34:575 (1) –same as above fixed
13. 01:36:305 (2) –maybe just for me which jump looks higher than before, personally i prefer to reduce the jump with stack this circle with 01:35:729 (5) -, just my two cents though no
14. 01:52:267 (5) –whistle on head for consistency with 01:46:113 (5) – fixed
15. 01:58:998 (6) –since the music is calm again, try to ctrl+G? I guess player hands will be hurt if they must jump jump and jump in 2 mins fixed
16. 01:59:959 (4) –just my taste to add whistle for vocal fixed
17. 02:09:767 (6) –the music is not really loud so how about reduce the jump with move to 144,200. I think it increased the triangle pattern shape too reduced a little
18. 02:13:229 (5) –imo the flow isnt really natural here, try stack the circle with 02:12:459 (2) -? It feels more natural in my side no
19. 02:15:921 (4) – there is a piano in slider’s head. Add a hitsound maybe? Idk what should use whistle or normal clap so decide it by yourself ~ fixed
20. 02:20:344 (4,5) –hmm imo the placement still can improved here coz the different spacing from (4) to (5) is quite high. Imo try move (4) to 328,184 and then 02:20:536 (5) -248,80. Imo they look more consistent and play nicer here fixed
21. 02:22:652 (2) –i strongly to suggest ctrl+G here when we see 02:23:036 (3,4,5,6,7) –all use small spacing. Keep consistent looks nicer to me no ,my style
22. 02:28:805 (2) –ctrl+g for more natural flow >< it's another style of flow ><
23. 02:30:344 (2,3) –ctrl+G these circles and then move 02:30:536 (3) –to 144,136. Current one feel not really natural in flow imo no
24. 02:43:805 (1) –add whistle on head. It’s stanza also that “lalalala” on pitch fixed
25. 02:56:113 (1) -^ coz vocal fixed
26. 03:05:729 (1) –prefer to ctrl+G because calm music, really my taste only here since you use small spacing like 03:06:498 (4,1) - no
27. 03:17:652 (1) –since the music’s pattern is changed, usually we add finish for it (slider’s head) I feel too loud
28. 04:31:113 (6) – a little bit far jump imo, try stack with 04:30:344 (3) – instead? It will reduce the spacing slightly imo reduce a little
29. 04:36:113 (1) –add whistle on head if you want to emphasize vocal here fixed
30. 04:37:652 (1) -^ fixed
31. 04:25:344 (1) - 04:40:729 (1) -04:42:267 (1) – 04:43:805 (1) - same as above fixed
32. 03:36:402 (4) –guitar is snapped in 1/3 (03:36:370 -) and 1/6 in end (03:36:434 -), guitar and drums quite complicated to map especially 1/6 in 156 bpm, remove 03:36:402 (4) –would be safer way to do here, yep confirmed with ticclick again http://puu.sh/f5W4P.jpg (i’d say to avoid 1/6 here) fixed
33. 03:50:248 (3) –same as above fixed
34. 03:39:190 (1,2,3,4,5) –also some guitars snapped in 1/6 in my side just 03:39:190 (1,2,3,4,5) –become like http://puu.sh/f5SLj.jpg , yep confirmed with ticclick http://puu.sh/f5VQz.jpg fixed
35. 03:45:344 (1,2) –remove claps on their repeat and change to whistles instead. Clap doesnt suit for guitar I want the clap cover the drum on white tick , in order to emphasize the guitar, and whistle is too weak
36. 03:50:248 (3) –same as 03:36:402 (4) – fixed
37. 05:01:305 (2) –imo this circle should be removed, since it’s following to piano and you skip 05:00:921 –this piano so mapped it dosent make sense, better to remove so you will follow vocal instead, if you agree with that so please 05:00:729 (1) –ctr+G, reason coz the jump is too high for calm music, also to make consistent spacing for (2) nonono ;w;
38. 05:02:075 (3) –omg please consistent spacing, it feels really uncomfortable, 400|148 here make it consistent
39. 05:10:940 (5,6,7) –the part is already calm, please reduce the jump 8( I ask for some testplay and it ok imo
    

when you fix the snap, feel free to call me back

Xinely wrote:

snapping issues have been resolved so we can give this back~

Rebubbled #2~

lkx_Shore wrote:

Friends
添加310ms前置时间，凑2000ms。
OD直接拉到8也没差。
重复的绿线↓
00:51:209 -

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Kagamine Ren wrote:

转眼变成老司机，求带带>.>