RandomJibberish wrote:

Mmmm, relaxing song.

General
Here's your optimised SB, it should look exactly the same as the original but with a much smaller filesize and a lightly lower SB load, let me know if anything looks off. Delete your SB folder then extract the rar into the song folder overwriting everything. Do this and full submit before you start fixing my suggestions Thanks for the SB clean up

Normal
02:53:093 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - very cramped and hard to read changed
02:57:982 (7,1,2,3,4,5) - ^ changed

Hard
02:13:093 (3,4,5) - Random triplet is random indeed
02:27:315 (2,3,4) - ^ ^
02:49:760 (6) - ^ will keep
02:54:871 (1,2,3) - ^ indeed

Fabulous map

Haneii wrote:

~Easy ~
01:08:426 (1) – turn off distance snap and move it a bit to the left like this? done

SPOILER

02:55:538 (1,2,3) – take off the claps on all of them, then add a whistle to 1 and 3? done
02:57:538 (3) – finish at the end instead? yes

~Normal~
02:06:426 (5) – whistle or finish? there was a whistle put I put a finish now instead^^

~Hard~
Looks great Thank you


~Twinkle twinkle little star~

jericho2442 wrote:

follow james mod for SB needs since them BG's HAVE to be 800x600

just a design mod


[Easy]
00:32:426 (2) - newcombo to follow your pattern done
00:35:982 (1,2) - this combo dont really play according to the music, plays MUCH better something like this actually only could see the upper part of the screenshot for some reason lol, well changed

SPOILER

00:47:538 (7) - newcombo so that you follow the pattern you start from here done
(suggestion) 01:07:982 (7) - i think a new combo on this and them removing the next newcombo suits better also done

01:11:538 (1) - end this spinner on 01:15:093 and it plays much better okay
(suggestion) 01:43:093 (4) - take the repeat off this ^

01:47:982 (2,3,4,5,6) - abit ugly, would look much better lined like this done

SPOILER

02:11:982 (7) - placement would be better here done that also

SPOILER

[Normal]

just some advise on this for now

try to cut down some of the claps, it feels abit too powerfull for the song in area's will do the hitsound change after school :p

most likely normal still needs some combo modding, but the most important thing is to cool the claps down abit

[Hard]

00:08:204 (2) - make this slider suit the curve of the one before better did it a bit better now
01:02:649 (1,2,3) - nice looking combo, but the spacing of (2,3) REALLY bugs me hoepfully made it a bit better
01:22:649 (6) - newcombo
(suggestion) 01:52:426 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - i feel a newcombo needs to be in here to it follows with how you do the combo after, but i cant 100% place where i want the combo >_> made it at (5)

normal would be MUCH better with this style of hitsounding

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<3 the maps great work and star o/ thanks jeri <3

James2250 wrote:

Hey I like this song

You have 2 osb files in your folder, delete one of them because of the name change I had before, deleted^^
According to people I asked thumbs file in sb folder isn't needed, so delete it (I rarely see it so..) damnit forgot how can make them seeable
Seeing as you are using them as a sb, resize the backgrounds in the sb folder to 800x600 reeeeeally weird I thought I actually did that

I see no problems with the maps, they are nicely done~ thank you~
*star*

Garven wrote:

As per your request:

[General]
Remove "techno" from tags since it'll be added as the genre when ranked. okay, but when you searh in osu for techno it still won't fid the genre (I know that will be changed with osz2)
Wouldn't radio edit go into the title in a parenthetical statement? I dunno on this one, though. Well at first I had it in the title but a lot of people said just put it in the tags.

[Storyboard]
slowdown.png has a lot of unnecessary transparency in it. Crop the top and bottom around the text please. done

[Easy]
The snap feels a little bit high compared to the slider speed for easy.. but... eh. Whatever.
00:27:093 (1) - Think you could smooth this angle out a bit? Looks bad this sharp to me. Same with copy/paste later on. wanna keep it like this because the spacing puts it there and I wanted it to be symmetrical
00:35:982 (1,1) - The smaller 1 slider looks bad with that kink in the middle. I tried to smooth it out, but it messes up the blanket. You may want to adjust both of the sliders if you really want that blanket to look nice.
01:20:871 (1,2) - Having the clap in the middle of these two sliders just feels so wrong compared to the strict 2, 4 clap in the song.
02:03:093 (4,5) - I don't recommend using stacks for new rhythms other than 1/1s since it may be hard to discern for newer players as to when to click. They're probably just clicking the beat, hehe.
02:49:315 (3) - Kind of expecting soft whistles or claps on these with the song...
02:51:093 (1,2) - Were these intended to be slightly off? Might look better if it was more off so it looks more intentional or lined up. Right now it looks like you just kind of missed.
02:53:093 (1) - Hrm, might be better to start these offbeats with a slider instead of all single beats. A rhythm change like that is kind of jarring without some sort of introduction with a slider so even missing badly won't have big consequences.
03:00:204 (1) - Yeah, like this! Maybe do this one first, then do the singles second.

[Normal]
00:30:649 (3) - I understand the pattern you're going with here, but there's a slight overlap with 00:32:871 (1) - on this slider. Dunno if you want to move the 1 or not.
00:57:538 (2) - Hrm, maybe move left half a grid?
00:59:315 (2) - And this right half a grid?
01:23:093 (1) - Hrm, maybe something like this?

SPOILER

01:43:760 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5) - Eh, stick with either clap or soft whistle. Change between them like this sounds really awkward.
01:59:538 (1,2,3) - Think you could add slight curves to these? The linear set up looks kind of odd against what you had used up to this point.
02:10:204 (1) - Move down and right one grid to reduce overlap
02:54:204 (6) - Slight curve to reduce overlap?

[Hard]
00:07:538 (1,2) - Well, I already threw my opinion on these in #mod
00:07:538 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - Wait, didn't I just play a slower version of this? :P
00:18:204 (1,2) - Think you can smooth out the corners?
00:34:204 (1,2) - These might look cooler with a slight curved indent. You'd have to use bezier with a red anchor though.
02:15:204 - Can you make Slowdown show up a little earlier? Having it show up the moment you hit the slider is pointless as a warning.

And there you go~

DeathxShinigami wrote:

Hi I wanna be a hater. c:

Blazevoir wrote:

Sorry I took so long Anyway,

[Easy]
* 02:09:315 (4) - Sounds weird when it hits the reverse arrow changed
* 02:24:871 (1) - ^ nope

[Normal]
Fine~

[Hard]
* 01:13:538 (1) - I dunno... Shouldn't this start sooner (like on a blue or yellow tick)? picky people lol. those few milliseconds most don't even matter. changed anyways
* 01:15:315 (1) - ^ ^
* 02:15:538 (1) - I think this is fine without half-speed, especially since this is the only half-speed slider. will keep the x0.5 section

Just opinions; you don't have to follow them Nice song btw~

★~

Ultimate wrote:

Hi Ruka =D

General:
BPM: ok
Offset: ok
Tags: Try to add a tag or 3. can't find any more stuff that would be related
Folder: Please delete the .osb file you're not using and full submit. told you on IRC, you got a bit old version with the other .osb still in the folder

Easy:

01:15:982 (1,2) - I think the distance between these notes is a bit too small, maybe you can new combo the slider ( optional ) had it before like that but then people said I should change it so I'll leave it for now
02:13:760 (1) - 1 (lvl 3 grid) to the right ( this puts it right on top of 02:11:538 (6) ) yes
02:53:093 (1) - Noobs are gonna hate you for putting the slider here xD ( love it hehe ) and then I cared, expect wait no xD
03:00:204 (1,1,2) - Also for these three xD. ^

Smooth and lots O spinners, good easy map. thank you^^

Normal:

02:07:982 (3) - Try to avoid sliders and notes this close to the edge next time lol sry

Nice build up, it's on the edge of Hard. But still a Normal so we're good . yay^^

Hard:

00:44:871 (6) - *pukes* ugly ass slider xD gonna keep it for the sake that it is symmetrical to (1)
01:11:538 - I don't really like the spinners this way, maybe this will suite more: okay changed it back to this again lol

[attachment=0:b6c4e]sliders.jpg[/attachment:b6c4e]

02:27:982 (1) - <3 this slider thanks lol, that one was made pretty muchw ith no effort a all
02:57:982 (7) - Might wanna try putting the clap on the end of the slider instead of in the middle ( optional ) hmmm that sounds abit weird though, gonna keep it like it is

again, nice smooth maps alltogether. I think with these modifications it's ready for bubble. yay thanks Ultimate for the mod
ps. Almost all mods that i mentioned are optional, just try and than decide

Dangaard wrote:

[Easy]
02:09:315 (4) - Shouldn't the clap be on the 2nd tick of the slider? done

[Normal]
01:01:315 (2) - This seems to have a bit to many claps, imo. How about removing the clap on the last red tick? Also on the other parts that got the same structure in hitsounding, so on [Hard] as well (though, it seems that you haven't put these sound patterns consistently on [Hard]). done

[Hard]
00:44:871 (6) - compared to your other slider shapes, this kinda looks out of place. I see that you rotated/flipped the previous slider and reversed the direction of it, though the 2nd slider doesn't look nearly as smooth as the first one, so I don't recommend to rely on the reverse function too much. made the curve a bit smoother

Pretty good map, the linear sliders on [Hard] look kinda sexy ;3
the double strobe SB is a bit annoying, imo

NotShinta wrote:

Hard
00:08:204 (2) - This is sharp and not quiiite symmetrical. What'dya think? yes
00:57:315 (2,3) - Don't like these. At all. dealwithit

This is a great map. Very nice patterns, good consistency between diffs. Some sliders aren't perfectly symmetrical, but that shouldn't matter.

Jarby wrote:

That kiai burst at the end is SILLY. well they stay

Easy:

02:13:760 (1) - CENTER IT OKAY
Normal:

00:16:426 (2) - It would make more sense for this to be a perfectly straight slider in the middle. Consider that 1 was curved to the left and 3 is curved to the right. yes
00:39:538 (4) - CENTER IT OKAY

Hard:

00:07:538 (1) - I'd say just vertically flip and respace this, looks odd trying to complement the next slider the way it is now. soooo much hassle about that one slider. stop it
00:57:315 (2,3) - Ugly sliders there bro, use a different shape. They stay

Jarby wrote:

00:07:538 (1) - I'd say just vertically flip and respace this, looks odd trying to complement the next slider the way it is now.

blissfulyoshi wrote:

Easy:
01:23:982 (1) - flip this vertically over the 3 to prevent the overlap with 01:22:204 (2)

Hard:
00:32:871 (1,2,3) - I don't like the overlapping caused by the 300s of this and the previous combo, but I don't know how to change it