grumd wrote:

[advanced]

00:20:020 (2) - 00:30:750 (2) - 00:39:290 (5) - как для карты, которая претендует на звание карты полностью на 1.0х спейсинге, слишком часто появляются всякие неаккуратные спейсинги вроде 0.95 или 1.05. это выглядит некрасиво. надо отполировать Пофиксила везде, хоть и часто слышала, что спейсингом можно немного пренебречь ради сохранения идеального бланкета
00:07:100 (4,5,6) - также в карте зачастую отсутствует понимание базовых правил ритма. эти слайдеры начинаются на красном тике. известно, что красный тик это слабая доля, а белый тик это сильная доля. особенность слайдера в том, что игрок нажимает на начало, а когда встречается конец слайдера, ничего особо делать не надо, просто отпустить кнопку. поэтому заведено, что на сильных долях нужно слайдеры начинать, а не заканчивать. чтобы нажатие клавиши игроком приходилось на самые сильные и ударные ноты в музыке. так играть намного приятнее. поэтому старайся не начинать слайдеры на красных тиках. Пофиксила, там сложный ритм был
00:23:523 (2) - 00:25:275 (5) - я не вижу никаких причин так сильно повышать скорость слайдеров здесь. вокал не настолько жёстко меняется, чтобы такое делать. выглядит очень странно и играется неприятно. плюс, из-за изменения скорость слайдеров меняется и спейсинг, поэтому эти быстрые слайдеры находятся на гораздо большем расстоянии от соседних слайдеров, чем обычно, что тоже путает игрока. особенно, когда вся остальная карта на одном и том же расстоянии сделана. Remapped
00:32:282 (6) - 00:51:115 (1) - кривой и несимметричный слайдер. чтобы сделать такой слайдер ровным, следи за двумя вещами: точка конца слайдера должна быть по центру его конца (http://i.imgur.com/M0TfGea.png), а остальные точки должны быть симметричны (http://i.imgur.com/4HQ5KBr.png или http://i.imgur.com/EPR34td.png) Пофикшено
00:46:407 (4) - это очень и очень непредсказуемый ритм, никто в своей жизни никогда не догадается, что внезапно нужно сыграть ноту на синем тике. когда встречаются такие необычные моменты, никогда не ставь кружки в непредсказуемые ноты. всегда используй конец слайдера или репит слайдера для этой ноты. вот так нельзя: http://i.imgur.com/yV0LTKp.png вот так можно: http://i.imgur.com/0aOlAah.png вот так можно: http://i.imgur.com/YDpsmMj.png Фиксед
00:46:954 - к тому же, рекомендую добавить и сюда ноту, здесь есть барабан Добавила
00:48:268 (2) - 00:50:020 (6) - здесь очень сильный вокал на белых тиках, поэтому я бы заменил эти слайдеры на два кружка, чтобы подчеркнуть сильную долю Фиксед
00:58:122 (1,2) - я не согласен с тем, что здесь нужно ТАК сильно менять скорость слайдеров. конечно, это припев, и всё такое, но это изменение очень радикальное: 1,2х для скорости слайдеров и 1,1х для спейсинга. выглядит это так, будто карта стала быстрее в полтора раза. а ведь песня не стала громче или быстрее в полтора раза, музыка такая же, как была в самом начале, только вокал добавился. я бы сделал попроще киаи (или посложнее начало песни). Поменяла скорость слайдеров на 1,1, мне кажется, что припев тут намного сильнее любой другой части
01:04:253 (4) - http://i.imgur.com/N0OQPAj.png очень большая разница в спейсинге до и после этого слайдера Фиксед
01:21:772 (9,10,1) - пускай спейсинг и соблюдён, но сами слайдеры расположены очень и очень близко друг к другу, получается некрасиво, клаустрофобия какая-то. хотя бы так было бы лучше http://i.imgur.com/riRwd6t.png Фиксед
01:23:304 (2) - снова слайдер заканчивается на сильной ноте. Фиксед
01:25:056 (1) - а здесь кружок начинается на слабой ноте после паузы необычной длины в 3/2. лучше было бы как-то так сделать http://i.imgur.com/QoRAdcy.png (курсор на 01:24:837 - ) Фиксед

grumd wrote:

идеальный бланкет всегда можно совместить с идеальным спейсингом
это на заметку Учту

удачи с мапой Спасибо, и тебе

Lilyanna wrote:

Hi nm from my queue

Easy

00:04:691 (5,1) - maybe would look nice if u blanket Fixed
00:56:370 (2,1) - this not appealing i see u trying to blanket but its not working from that side try this Fixed

picture

Normal

00:46:735 (3,1) - this feel uncomfortable i suggest u can just do this dont think so

picture

k good

Advanced

00:13:669 (4,7) - these kinda overlap There was bad rhythm, fixed
00:33:158 (7,1) - 00:36:662 (6,1) - if u stack these notes the pattern will play nicer imo meeeeh
01:01:626 (5) - nc fixed
01:20:896 (5) - nc fixed

i hope i helped little . Yea)
Good luck

Whirl wrote:

hit short nm from my que hi!

[Advanced]
00:04:472 (5,6,7,1) - 5 can overlap 1 a bit more It can, but... for what?
00:07:319 (5,6,7) - maybe don't overlap these meeh, this is comfortable
00:10:604 (4,5) - stack end of the slider with the start of 5 sure
00:13:669 (4) - this can be curved slightly more agree
00:15:640 (8) - finish or clap ok
00:44:107 (1) - this slider seems a little akward changed
01:02:939 (5) - nc ok

can't find anything in normal or easy


uhm, I would make more diffs or ask for GDs! I would make a 4* if you wan't! I did insane long time ago, but it was completely shitty, so I deleted it, and now I want to rank this map ASAP and do other maps

Katyusha wrote:

Hi! Hi!

Really short mod from my Q,


General

-Add Kuroba to the tags
-add A-1 Pictures to the tags Added both



Easy

00:05:567 (1,2) - You make really good looking patterns 0_o , but these 2 sliders feel really off mostly because the curve flow you've been following doesn't fit with this sharp flow the 2 sliders has, maybe curve them too? curved

SPOILER

00:15:202 - This should be a slider, it fits better with the constant song, if your idea is to "make new players take a small break" here 00:15:640 - , I believe this long slider 00:16:078 (1) - already makes it enough of a "rest". fixed

00:51:115 (1,2) - I like these sliders, but frankly, the flow feels really weird in the transition from 00:51:115 (1) - to 00:52:428 (2) - , is not that big deal, but I would try making it a big "curvier" shape. meh, i wil leave it as it is

00:58:998 (2) - Curve this slider, that way you can blanket it with 00:58:122 (1) - sliderend and you can lower 00:59:874 (3) - a bit from the corner, making it flow better. fixed

SPOILER

01:08:633 (1) - Unrankeable spinner remember the rules, there must be AT LEAST 3 or 4 beats after a spinner to recover in Easy, there's only one after the spinner. hmmmm, i will ask BN about this question, because bpm is low and i saw few maps with similar time for recover

01:15:640 (1) - not very important, but for variety, I would do 2 notes instead of this slider, after all, is flowing onto a reverse arrow so why not?, right now this entire pattern feels a bit boring. I like the flow in this variant

Very clean diff

Normal

-00:32:282 (4) - curve this, really, right now the drop down flow after the note feels really, REALLY bad, at least with a curve you can make it a bit less annoying to play (and make it look better if you blanket with 00:31:845 (3) - ) fixed

00:38:414 (3,4,5) - frankly, I would try to make this pattern a little bit more spread out in comparison to 00:35:786 (4,5,1) - , right now 00:38:414 (3) - feels really messy because is so close to 00:37:100 (1) - , I would try to make things not so "straight" line but more "triangle" like: fixed

SPOILER

00:55:275 (2) - This note feels wrong, this is the first red tick you use in the map, and is a note that leads to a spinner spam fest, not only that, but the voice start is on 00:55:056 - , it feels wrong to hit that note, if anything, is calling for unnecesary misses, I would just put a slider 00:55:056 - to 00:55:275 - (starting the slider spam here 00:55:056 - pretty much) fixed

01:24:837 - Missing a note. fixed


Advanced:

00:04:253 - Missing a note. I think map those 2 Strong tones in this way is better than in your way
00:07:319 (1) - also New combo fixed
00:07:319 (5,6,7) - Avoid these overlaps, while it doesn't affect gameplay, it looks "dirty", and like if you're putting enough effort in your map. they dont affect on comfort while playing
00:11:261 (5) - New combo here too, this entire pattern 00:10:604 (4,5,6,7) - feels really crowded here, but with a NC here, it could at least make a difference with the overlaps and would help reading this better.
00:41:480 - This should be a slider, it feels better if you keep the movement of the player going in this part. fixed
00:47:392 - Note? added
00:49:363 (6) - New combo. fixed
01:05:786 - This is the Kiai, the hardest and "fastest" part of your map, don't make the player stop randomly when the music is still going, put a note here and 01:06:662 - fixed


That's it from me

Good Luck!

MashaSG wrote:

Waiting for BN :^)

1. Title should be 恋の寿命(TV Ver.) with the romanised title being Koi no Jumyou (TV Ver.). Here is the source for this.
2. If possible, try to find a better quality video. Because for the size of the video is rather big for the quality that it is.

• Hitsounds:

1. 00:01:421 - This inherited timing point isn't really needed. Since from what it seems, it's only being used to change the sound that 00:01:635 - makes. Which you could easily do by selecting the tail, and going to Additions -> Drum so it just changes that one selected part to a drum clap.
   
   This

   
2. 00:01:207 - Consider changing the hitsound here to a finish instead of a clap. Since for the opening, it sounds rather monotonous to just have "clap, clap, clap" when the background music does change.
3. 00:15:202 - I'd suggest continuing your use of the soft whistle here. No hitsound doesn't really follow the drum all too well.
4. 00:16:078 - Could use a finish here instead if you don't want to overuse the soft whistle.
5. 00:45:421 - Clap here to follow the drums.
6. 00:48:487 - Soft whistle so it's not so empty, and emphasize the calmness of the vocals.
7. 00:50:239 - Same as above.
8. 00:50:677 - Some type of hitsound here, moreso up to you. It's just that the vocals are rather important here. (What you want to emphasize.)
9. 00:51:991 - and 00:53:085 - Soft whistle. Same reason as 00:48:487 -.
10. 00:52:428 - Clap for the drums.
    Patterns:
11. 00:09:071 - and 00:09:947 - are a bit clustered here, space them a bit, but you can still keep the parallel type of structure there.
12. 00:33:158 - and 00:33:596 - If you're going to have 00:33:596 - look like it's blanketing 00:33:158 - , I'd suggest cleaning up the blanket and making it neater. Also the tail of 00:33:596 - is uncomfortablely close to 00:32:282 - and it looks a bit weird. Fixing the blanket will make the straight part of 00:33:596 - look a bit weird, so consider changing it to how I have it in the picture so it looks a bit better.
    
    This

    

Ayyri wrote:

MashaSG wrote:

Waiting for BN :^)

hi Hi!

[General]

1. Title should be 恋の寿命(TV Ver.) with the romanised title being Koi no Jumyou (TV Ver.). Here is the source for this. fixed
2. If possible, try to find a better quality video. Because for the size of the video is rather big for the quality that it is. I will try to

[Easy]

• Hitsounds:

1. 00:01:421 - This inherited timing point isn't really needed. Since from what it seems, it's only being used to change the sound that 00:01:635 - makes. Which you could easily do by selecting the tail, and going to Additions -> Drum so it just changes that one selected part to a drum clap. fixed
   
   This

   
2. 00:01:207 - Consider changing the hitsound here to a finish instead of a clap. Since for the opening, it sounds rather monotonous to just have "clap, clap, clap" when the background music does change. fixed
3. 00:15:202 - I'd suggest continuing your use of the soft whistle here. No hitsound doesn't really follow the drum all too well. But there were one...
4. 00:16:078 - Could use a finish here instead if you don't want to overuse the soft whistle. fixed
5. 00:45:421 - Clap here to follow the drums. fixed
6. 00:48:487 - Soft whistle so it's not so empty, and emphasize the calmness of the vocals. fixed
7. 00:50:239 - Same as above. fixed
8. 00:50:677 - Some type of hitsound here, moreso up to you. It's just that the vocals are rather important here. (What you want to emphasize.) Whistle added
9. 00:51:991 - and 00:53:085 - Soft whistle. Same reason as 00:48:487 -. fixed
10. 00:52:428 - Clap for the drums. fixed
    Patterns:
11. 00:09:071 - and 00:09:947 - are a bit clustered here, space them a bit, but you can still keep the parallel type of structure there. fixed
12. 00:33:158 - and 00:33:596 - If you're going to have 00:33:596 - look like it's blanketing 00:33:158 - , I'd suggest cleaning up the blanket and making it neater. Also the tail of 00:33:596 - is uncomfortablely close to 00:32:282 - and it looks a bit weird. Fixing the blanket will make the straight part of 00:33:596 - look a bit weird, so consider changing it to how I have it in the picture so it looks a bit better. fixed
    
    This

    

Besides what I pointed out, all that I noticed was that you used a lot of blankets, which made the patterns become a bit boring and overused rather quickly. It also gave a feeling of cramped-ness since you can only distance things so much in an Easy. I always knew that my imagination is bad

Sorry for the extremely short mod. I still have things to do at the moment, but I don't want you to feel ignored. It's okay, I understand!

1. Did you try silcening the sliderslide? Imo the default one doesn't work too well for quiet parts, but sounds kind of disturbing instead.. >< (best example is the first slider in Easy 00:01:207 (3) - or longer sliders like 00:45:421 (2) - )
   Also, you might want to look for different hitsounds for the Kiai (or the non-Kiai) part, because using the same sampleset for the entire song while the parts are so different from each other gets boring. :c

1. 00:09:947 (2,3) - Fix DS please, it's just small but slip ups like this look messy. D:
2. 00:38:852 (1) - Remove NC, doesn't match with your NC pattern
3. 00:52:428 (2,3) - Rhythm here feels off, because (3) starts on an offbeat and ignores the stronger sound on the following white tick. You can try http://puu.sh/r5hNy.jpg instead?
4. 01:01:188 (4,1,2) - Just nitpicking here, but these blankets could look a tiny bit better :b
5. 01:08:633 (1,1) - You need at least 4 beats of recovery time after spinners in Easy diffs, so players aren't overwhelmed and have enough time to re-adjust their cursor after spinning. > Please end the spinner at 01:10:385 -
6. 01:26:151 (1) - And this spinner is pretty short, it might be hard for beginner players to clear, so I recommend mapping this with one or more longer sliders instead.

1. The diff itself looks okayish, but I think you should try to map more 1/2s here in order to balance out the spread. You barely have any mapped 1/2s in this diff, but Advanced is full of them, so this diff is much closer to Easy than to Adv. >:
2. AR4 is pretty low for a Normal with this bpm, imo AR5 works better. (You should also increase it to 6 or 6.5 in Advanced, broadens the spread a bit c: !)
3. The rhythm in the beginning could still be improved. You ignore most of the melody and a lot of strong sounds that should be emphasized, imo. In Easy it was okaaay to simplify the rhythm, but in Normal you should try to follow the melody a little more accurately..
   More detailed: There are very strong beats on the red ticks in the first pattern (00:02:282 - 00:02:720 - 00:03:158 - 00:03:596 - etc), and this melody is more dominant than the standard beat, so it would imo be better if you used a rhythm that has these beats clickable, example: http://puu.sh/r5iKh.jpg .
   It's similar for the second pattern, where you ignore strong sounds on the red ticks as well. You could try http://puu.sh/r5iN4.jpg .
4. 00:09:071 (1) - Here I think two 1/2 sliders instead of one reverse slider would work better, because there's another beat at 00:09:728 -
   Same for 00:10:824 (4) -
5. 00:41:918 (3) - How about replacing the reverse with a circle to put more emphasis on the strong downbeat?
6. 00:46:078 - and 00:46:516 - should be mapped, imo, they're pretty strong and there's no reason to keep them blank. It feels awkward if you'd put circles here, tho, because of the beat on the blue tick. I recommend using http://puu.sh/r5jdT.jpg , the last slider has a reverse because of the sound on the red tick, would've been the next suggestion. xD
7. 00:47:611 (1) - Here the reverse doesn't work well because of the strong sound at 00:48:268 - , but you could very well switch to mapping vocals here. Example: http://puu.sh/r5jl1.jpg
8. 00:52:866 (3,4,5) - (4) feels off because there are stronger sounds on the red tick before and after. Try http://puu.sh/r5jwT.jpg ?
9. 00:54:618 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I like what you're trying to do here, but it doesn't work perefctly yet, I think (1) should be a 1/1 slider instead because of the on-going vocals and there's a new syllabel on (4)'s end, which should be clickable. > http://puu.sh/r5jW0.jpg ?
   Also, the inceasing hitsounds are nice, but since the song doesn't have a repeating sound on all of these beats I highly recommend re-adjusting the hitsounds here to represent the music better instead of overlayering it with your own structure. :c

Squichu wrote:

Hey there! As requsted-- Hi!
Keep in mind that I'm just making suggestions, you're free to decline any. c:

General

1. Did you try silcening the sliderslide? Imo the default one doesn't work too well for quiet parts, but sounds kind of disturbing instead.. >< (best example is the first slider in Easy 00:01:207 (3) - or longer sliders like 00:45:421 (2) - ) Silenced
   Also, you might want to look for different hitsounds for the Kiai (or the non-Kiai) part, because using the same sampleset for the entire song while the parts are so different from each other gets boring. :c Found some, but not sure that they are fit

Easy

1. 00:09:947 (2,3) - Fix DS please, it's just small but slip ups like this look messy. D: fixed
2. 00:38:852 (1) - Remove NC, doesn't match with your NC pattern fixed
3. 00:52:428 (2,3) - Rhythm here feels off, because (3) starts on an offbeat and ignores the stronger sound on the following white tick. You can try http://puu.sh/r5hNy.jpg instead? fixed
4. 01:01:188 (4,1,2) - Just nitpicking here, but these blankets could look a tiny bit better :b fixed
5. 01:08:633 (1,1) - You need at least 4 beats of recovery time after spinners in Easy diffs, so players aren't overwhelmed and have enough time to re-adjust their cursor after spinning. > Please end the spinner at 01:10:385 - fixed
6. 01:26:151 (1) - And this spinner is pretty short, it might be hard for beginner players to clear, so I recommend mapping this with one or more longer sliders instead. fixed

Normal

1. The diff itself looks okayish, but I think you should try to map more 1/2s here in order to balance out the spread. You barely have any mapped 1/2s in this diff, but Advanced is full of them, so this diff is much closer to Easy than to Adv. >:
2. AR4 is pretty low for a Normal with this bpm, imo AR5 works better. (You should also increase it to 6 or 6.5 in Advanced, broadens the spread a bit c: !)
3. The rhythm in the beginning could still be improved. You ignore most of the melody and a lot of strong sounds that should be emphasized, imo. In Easy it was okaaay to simplify the rhythm, but in Normal you should try to follow the melody a little more accurately..
   More detailed: There are very strong beats on the red ticks in the first pattern (00:02:282 - 00:02:720 - 00:03:158 - 00:03:596 - etc), and this melody is more dominant than the standard beat, so it would imo be better if you used a rhythm that has these beats clickable, example: http://puu.sh/r5iKh.jpg .
   It's similar for the second pattern, where you ignore strong sounds on the red ticks as well. You could try http://puu.sh/r5iN4.jpg . fixed all ( maybe not )
4. 00:09:071 (1) - Here I think two 1/2 sliders instead of one reverse slider would work better, because there's another beat at 00:09:728 -
   Same for 00:10:824 (4) - fixed
5. 00:41:918 (3) - How about replacing the reverse with a circle to put more emphasis on the strong downbeat? fixed
6. 00:46:078 - and 00:46:516 - should be mapped, imo, they're pretty strong and there's no reason to keep them blank. It feels awkward if you'd put circles here, tho, because of the beat on the blue tick. I recommend using http://puu.sh/r5jdT.jpg , the last slider has a reverse because of the sound on the red tick, would've been the next suggestion. xD fixed
7. 00:47:611 (1) - Here the reverse doesn't work well because of the strong sound at 00:48:268 - , but you could very well switch to mapping vocals here. Example: http://puu.sh/r5jl1.jpg fixed
8. 00:52:866 (3,4,5) - (4) feels off because there are stronger sounds on the red tick before and after. Try http://puu.sh/r5jwT.jpg ? fixed
9. 00:54:618 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I like what you're trying to do here, but it doesn't work perefctly yet, I think (1) should be a 1/1 slider instead because of the on-going vocals and there's a new syllabel on (4)'s end, which should be clickable. > http://puu.sh/r5jW0.jpg ?
   Also, the inceasing hitsounds are nice, but since the song doesn't have a repeating sound on all of these beats I highly recommend re-adjusting the hitsounds here to represent the music better instead of overlayering it with your own structure. :c fixed, but I don't understand your idea about overlayering(

That's not all for this diff, there's more in the Kiai and I probably didn't catch all of them in non-Kiai either.. try to find them yourself and fix them n your own style, I don't want to force mine on your map. ><

And I think you can use a lot of this for Advanced as well, just try to improve the diffs further!
Ya.. so overall I don't think this is ready for rank yet, there's too many things that still could be improved. And if you have trouble with patterns (I've read the posts above), looking at already ranked maps might give you some inspiration! c;

Good luck for now! Thanks!
edited to fix spelling error

Log Off Now wrote:

galileo Yay!

nm from my queue

[Easy]
Lots of minor blanket issues, makes this difficulty look a bit untidy imo (try turning off grid snap for better blankets) fixed
00:33:596 (1) - Maybe try a repeat of this 00:30:093 (1,2,3) - ? It fit the song really nicely and I feel if you did it twice it would add some consistency into the map fixed
00:44:107 (1) - I would shorten this slider to the red tick (since the bpm is so slow, I think you'll be able to get away with it since it fits the music nicely ehm... dunno whats wrong with it, declined
00:47:173 - Maybe a note here? There is a vocal on this beat added
00:47:611 (1) - Maybe turn into a 1.5 repeat slider? Follows the drums and vocals a lot better imo since the submitting of the map nobody wrote anything about it, so i will leave it
00:56:370 (2) - This can be turned into 2 1/1 sliders imo, the build up is getting more intense and is hitting on the white ticks fixed
01:21:772 (4) - I think this downbeat should be clickable, there is a clear chord change and vocal change here, and you're starting this extended vocal on a slider end meaning nothing can be clicked and it makes the rhythm for this final part a little bit strange for me. I would just remove the slider repeat and copy what you did previous here 01:15:640 (1,2,3) - fixed all this part
01:25:275 (4,1) - I'm not sure about this, you miss the vocal switch and then jump onto the vocal for the ending and it doesn't play/sound right, I would prefer a spinner starting on the red tick after (4) has played instead of this slider. I don't think it would be too short since its only half a beat shorter than this spinner here 01:08:633 (1) - ^

[Normal]

00:04:472 (4,1) - Super tiny shadow overlap here and its bugging me XD, move 1 ever so slightly to the left please fixed
00:17:830 (6) - Maybe turn this into a 1/2 slider and have a circle where the current slider end is? It just gives better emphasis on the vocals whilst still following the drum pattern fixed
00:21:772 (7) - I would just have this as a 1/1 slider, it follows the vocals better and also helps reduce note density fixed
00:44:107 (1) - This section is a little confusing, you start off following the vocal then start mapping to the complex drum beat, I think sticking with one or the other would be a better option considering the difficulty level This section was given me by Squichi, so i think it is ok
00:46:735 (4) - If you choose to stick with the vocal, try a 1/1 slider here instead of the repeat slider ^
00:47:392 - If you choose to stick with the drum pattern, place a circle here to make the bass drum clickable ^
01:04:691 (6) - Rotate this slider end more towards the slider start of 01:05:129 (1) - for a better look/flow fixed
01:26:151 (1) - Move this spinner to the red tick since thats where the extended vocal starts and change 01:25:713 (6) - into a single circle fixed

[Advanced]
00:00:778 (2,3) - Fix this blanket please XD (slider end further out) (another tip for fixing blankets is to ctrl + g the object you're going to blanket to get a better indicator of the approach circle lul thx
00:51:772 - This snare should be mapped imo considering you follow the drums here 00:52:866 (3) -. Not mapping the snare feels inconsistent imo if this will be mentioned in future mods, i will fix it
00:55:932 (4,5) - Swap the placement of these notes on the timeline, doing so will give a better indication of the rhythm here and also make the downbeat clickable fixed
00:57:246 (3,4) - Same again here, this time to get a better emphasis on the final note before the kiai. fixedYour timeline would look like this
If you follow the above suggestion NC 00:56:370 (5) - and 00:57:684 (4) - and remove the NC on 00:56:589 (1) - fixed
01:25:494 (3,1) - Same comment as normal, remove repeat on this slider and move spinner to the red tick fixed

[]

Such a nice song, gl! thanks

Noffy wrote:

Hi! NM as requested from my Queue! Hi!
Hopefully helpful.

[Easy]
Overall, I'd say there's nothing wrong with this difficulty, just that it uses a lot of blankets. I feel like you should try to think of other patterns that may be interesting, to provide more variety ohhhh, i will try to
00:17:830 (3,1) - 3 and 1 are very close together, almost touching. This make this part look a bit crowded, and based off my experiments on poor inexperienced players, it is enough to make them panic. Please consider re-arranging to have them a bit further apart. omg there was such an awful slider , fixed!
00:19:582 (1,2,3,4) - It feels unfitting that 2 ends on the downbeat, especially when you had all downbeats clickable previously. A rhythm like this may be better, especially since it would also match the previous combo 00:16:078 (1,2,3,4) - fixed!
00:26:589 (1,2,3,4) - Again with skipping over the downbeat by having it as the end of the slider, I strongly feel it should be clickable. maybe? fixed!
00:33:158 (3,4) - These two notes are rather close, since the tail of 4 is closer to 3 than the head is. A possible change, where 4's tail isn't so close. fixed!
00:54:618 (1,2,3) - Maybe move 3 up and to the left a bit, as 2 is closer to 3 than it is to 1, and this uneven spacing makes these parallel sliders not look as neat as it could be. fixed!
01:20:896 (3,4) - Overall, 4's body is very close to 3. Consider moving it up. fixed!

[Normal]
00:06:005 (3,4,5,1) - AAA the stack of (4,5,1) results in these objects going under the end of 3 and misleads the player into thinking that 4 is a lot sooner than it is. Try turning stacking view on, and moving the stack to the right so that it will be appropriately spaced out. fixed...maybe
00:15:640 (8,1) - Why did the spacing turn from 1.2 to 1.1 here? From this point on, all of the objects in the map are awkwardly slightly touching for this reason, and it looks rather :/ (for this reason I won't comment on positioning from here on, as many of its looking a bit crowded is a direct result of this.) it is because the song here is more calm..or not.. ok, changed spacing and remapped another one time!
00:33:596 (1,2) - (and then it goes back to 1.2 for a blessed second)
00:32:282 (7,1) - While stacking is cool, the 1/2 sliders are so short in this difficulty that you can barely see (1) from doing this. Try rearranging the pattern for 00:33:158 (8,1,2) - to avoid this. fixed!
00:51:115 (1) - Try making this slider with only one anchor point instead of three, then it'll be easier to make it blanket 00:50:677 (5) - correctly. fixed!
00:52:866 (3,4,5) - It's kind of odd that 4 goes up but otherwise these objects are in a straight line. Something like this may play and look better, as it adds extra emphasis to the upward movement in (4) fixed!
00:54:618 (1,2,3,4,5) - Again, be considerate of how the spacing looks after osu adds in its automatic stacking. fixed!


[Advanced]
Looks really solid! Very nice, a lot cleaner and more fun to play compared to the other difficulties (magic!)
One question: why is it called advanced and not hard? Advanced is usually between hard and normal, so if this set is just easy-normal and then this, typically it would get called hard. thanks About difficulty: you are right, dunno why is it called like this


Nice song, and good luck! thx!

Cosmolade wrote:

Hello! from Utility Queue


Here's your banner

SPOILER

http://puu.sh/rmI2A/be4ac85e7d.gif

And for plus+:
* I can't see any weird stuff in your map, timing is perfect and all are well mapped, congratulations!
Good Luck!

kanor wrote:

Hi， from my modding Q Hi!
[Easy]
00:05:567 (1) - revoke the NC plz fixed
00:26:589 (5,6) - ds warning in the aimod aimod is shit
01:22:647 (1,2,3) - it a little dangerous that 1/2 in the easy diff deleted
[Normal]
00:46:078 (3,4) - DS warning fixed
[hard]
1.2DS maybe better (i dont know why you use 1.1but in fact it is just 1.0) emmm... wat

i LOVE THE SONG AND bg! Yay!
I am doing a insane diff! for you just for the bg
(just 50% but i will finish it without hitsound tomorrow wether it can take into your mapset is up to you !><) I will write you PM about it

Rose Melody wrote:

Hi .. Mod from Queue ..Hi!

Easy :

00:03:815 (3,4) - circle no. 3 move to x:178 y:106 , and circle no. 4 move it to x:264 y:82 .. to make it smooth .. what do you think ? ok
00:21:334 (3) - this slider is little be hard for the player .. so please change it .. don't think so, but i will keep this in mind
01:08:633 (1) - i think the spinner end here 01:11:699 - ? lolwat? there is no recover time for begginers in your way

Normal :

* cant find any issue good job ..

Hard :

00:04:253 - add note here i can hear a drum sound in the background I think separating this 2 very stron sounds is more important, than this not so loud drum sound
00:12:793 (2) - rotate this slider (ctrl+shift +R ) to = -28 .. to be like this i like it, thx
00:42:793 (6,7) - blanket ? will think about it

I hope my mod is helpful
Good luck with your map

1. 00:30:093 - finish will fit here.
2. 00:52:428 (2) - taking same whistle pattern with 00:45:421 (2) - is better i think.
   
   1. 00:53:085 - remove whistle
   2. 00:53:742 - add whistle
3. 00:57:684 - since drum stops here, it'll be better to remove clap.
4. 00:58:122 - add finish / remove whistle. you should use finishes when atmospher of the song changes.
5. 01:25:056 (1) - not about hitsounding though, you should start this spinner from 01:26:151 - . since the song changes clearly at 01:25:932 - , it's much unnatural to cross the spinner at 01:25:932 - .
   then don't forget to put 1/1 slider at 01:25:275 - .

1. 00:16:078 - add finish here. considering the song and Easy diff.
2. 00:30:093 - add finish, same as Easy.
3. 00:34:691 (4) - (not hitsound) fix ds
4. 00:46:078 (3,4) - I feel these are a bit too silent. try to add some sounds like this.
   
   1. 00:46:078 - add whistle
   2. 00:46:735 - / 00:46:954 - add clap
5. 00:53:085 (4,5) - same as above. try this.
   
   1. 00:53:523 - add clap
   2. 00:53:742 - add clap
   3. 00:54:180 - add whistle
6. 00:57:684 (8) - remove clap. same reason as Easy. also, it will work to decrease volume here around 30%.
7. 00:58:122 - add finish / remove whistle. same as Easy.

1. from 00:02:064 - to 00:16:078 - . too silent here. I strongly recommend to add many sounds.
   the way you can take is these 2 imo. either will be fine.
   
   1. adding many claps like from 00:16:078 -
   2. putting whistles much more frequently. 00:07:319 (1,2,3,4,5) - is great frequency of whistles.
2. 00:16:078 - add finish.
3. 00:19:582 - missing whistle
4. 00:30:093 - add finish
5. 00:46:078 (5,6) - add some sounds in same way as Normal.
6. 00:48:268 (2) - add clap
7. 00:48:925 - ^
8. 00:50:020 (2,4) - ^
9. 00:53:523 (1,2) - silent here I feel. try it.
   
   1. 00:53:523 - / 00:53:742 - add clap
   2. 00:54:180 - add whistle
10. 00:54:618 - add finish / remove clap, considering other diffs
11. 00:57:684 (1) - same as Normal
12. 00:58:122 - add finish / remove whistle

thzz wrote:

hi~ Hi!
from my Hitsound mod queue!
I came here just for checking hitsounding.

I feel it's a bit silent hitsouding overall without during Kiai.

[Easy]

1. 00:30:093 - finish will fit here.
2. 00:52:428 (2) - taking same whistle pattern with 00:45:421 (2) - is better i think.
   
   1. 00:53:085 - remove whistle
   2. 00:53:742 - add whistle
3. 00:57:684 - since drum stops here, it'll be better to remove clap.
4. 00:58:122 - add finish / remove whistle. you should use finishes when atmospher of the song changes.
5. 01:25:056 (1) - not about hitsounding though, you should start this spinner from 01:26:151 - . since the song changes clearly at 01:25:932 - , it's much unnatural to cross the spinner at 01:25:932 - . I will think about it
   then don't forget to put 1/1 slider at 01:25:275 - .^

[Normal]

1. 00:16:078 - add finish here. considering the song and Easy diff.
2. 00:30:093 - add finish, same as Easy.
3. 00:34:691 (4) - (not hitsound) fix ds
4. 00:46:078 (3,4) - I feel these are a bit too silent. try to add some sounds like this.
   
   1. 00:46:078 - add whistle
   2. 00:46:735 - / 00:46:954 - add clap
5. 00:53:085 (4,5) - same as above. try this.
   
   1. 00:53:523 - add clap
   2. 00:53:742 - add clap
   3. 00:54:180 - add whistle
6. 00:57:684 (8) - remove clap. same reason as Easy. also, it will work to decrease volume here around 30%.
7. 00:58:122 - add finish / remove whistle. same as Easy.

[Hard]

1. from 00:02:064 - to 00:16:078 - . too silent here. I strongly recommend to add many sounds.
   the way you can take is these 2 imo. either will be fine.
   
   1. adding many claps like from 00:16:078 -
   2. putting whistles much more frequently. 00:07:319 (1,2,3,4,5) - is great frequency of whistles.
2. 00:16:078 - add finish.
3. 00:19:582 - missing whistle
4. 00:30:093 - add finish
5. 00:46:078 (5,6) - add some sounds in same way as Normal.
6. 00:48:268 (2) - add clap
7. 00:48:925 - ^
8. 00:50:020 (2,4) - ^
9. 00:53:523 (1,2) - silent here I feel. try it.
   
   1. 00:53:523 - / 00:53:742 - add clap
   2. 00:54:180 - add whistle
10. 00:54:618 - add finish / remove clap, considering other diffs
11. 00:57:684 (1) - same as Normal
12. 00:58:122 - add finish / remove whistle

okay that's all. Woah!
good luck~

100bit wrote:

ремодю по просьбе
===
Hey, my name is Max 100bit, and this is my mod!
Well, opinion of modder is opinion of modder.
Do not judge strictly, I could be wrong.
If you change little things from my mod - do not give kudosu. My english is bad, so sorry for googletranslate.

Song and beatmaps

1. Как по мне, оффсет к обоим точкам +10. ну ок
2. Трек довольно тихий, поэтому сделай потише громкость сэмплов. ну ок

Easy

1. 00:00:350 (1,2) - моё личное, но я не очень люблю, когда изики начинаются с нот.
2. 00:09:071 (1,2) - тут бы подобротнее бланкет сделать чуть подправила
3. 00:10:823 (3,4) - такой паттерн тут неуместен, как по мне, и лучше сделать повторяющийся слайдер. Всё уместно
4. 00:12:136 (5,1) - что-то с бланкетом не то, поправь Всё с ним нормально, у Монстраты хуже в несколько раз видела
5. 00:17:392 (2,3) - ^ немного ^
6. 00:26:589 (5) - НК тру
7. 00:26:589 (5,6,7) - во-первых, такой треугольник, как по мне, не очень хорошо выглядит. Во-вторых, я бы не стал загинать слайдер в самом конце, при учёте, что это изи-диффа (да, я про 00:28:341 (7) ) заменила слайдер
8. 00:30:093 (1,4) - ммм, редко я вижу треки, где конец слайдера на даунбите вполне неплохо звучит У меня всё ебанутое
9. 00:36:662 (6,1) - свапни НК Лучше сохраню концепцию НК на каждом 2 большом тике
10. 00:33:596 (4,5) - бланкет поправь ок
11. 00:41:918 (3,4,5) - ...мои уши норм
12. 00:43:669 (5,1) - бланкет ок
13. 00:44:107 (1,2) - ^ ^
14. 00:48:925 - тут драм неплохой, можно ноту поставить так уж и быть
15. 00:54:618 (1,2) - оверлап какой-то не очень приятный, загни 00:54:618 (1) чуть побольше (чтобы угол был острее) и потом сделай паттерн, похожий на 00:51:115 (1,2) оверлап убрала, паттерн оставила
16. 00:58:122 (1,2,1,2) - сейчас бы паттерны копировать, лул лол что откуда это
17. 01:03:377 (3,4) - тоже самое, что на 0:10:823 тоже самое, что на 0:10:823
18. 01:21:772 (4,1) - бланкет прям немного поправить ок
19. 01:06:443 (3,4) - ^ ^

Normal

1. 00:00:350 (1,2) - какой-то сложный стак... либо сделай тоже самое, что просил на изике... А вообще - это же нормал! Можно сделать ритм как на %картинке% (курсор на 00:00:992 ) Нормально и так
2. 00:06:662 (4,5,1) - воу, забавный трипл.
3. 00:10:604 (4,5) - флоу что-то не очень. Видела хуже + по музыке подходит
4. 00:19:582 (1) - очень убого выглядит. Лучше уж как на 00:17:392 (5,6) ну ок
5. 00:21:115 (5,6) - я, конечно, понимаю, что ты тут пытаешься практически каждую 1/2 замапать, но всё-таки я бы предпочёл здесь обычный слайдер (ну, как 00:21:772 (7) примерно) из-за вокала тру
6. 00:23:085 (1,1,3) - не умеешь - лучше не пытаться (с) Конфуций. А вообще действительно, короткие 1/2 слайдеры с большими курвами (нет, не польскими курвами, а изгибами) с помощью красных точек выглядят очень плохо ок
7. 00:27:027 (2,3) - meh overlap, к тому же между 00:27:465 (3,4) спейсинг большой оверлап убрала, спейсинг там такой же, где и везде
8. 00:30:093 (1,2) - я бы не менял угол слайдера так нельзя (с) Pixel_Devil ок
9. 00:31:407 (5,6) - с одной стороны паттерн выглядит довольно неплохо, но если бы слайдеры были длиннее - он бы выглядел ещё лучше. увеличила угол слайдера
10. 00:34:034 (2,3,4,5) - и снова флоу ок
11. 00:34:910 (5,6) - тоже самое, что на 0:30:093 тут норм
12. 00:37:100 (1) - с этого момента ВНЕЗАПНО маппинг пошёл со спейсингом 1.1x, что, конечно же, очень не приветствуется. Нужно бы перемапить. перемапала
13. 00:44:107 (1) - тбх я бы подвинул красную слайдерточку на x=80 y=208 чтобы на слайдертике стояла ок
14. 00:46:078 (3) - мммм синий тик и?
15. 00:50:677 (5,1) - в конце прям немного фиксануть ладно
16. 00:52:866 (3,4) - я бы стакнул ок
17. 01:01:626 (1,2) - оооооккеееееееейййй...
18. 01:13:012 (2,5) - стак вполне импрувится ок
19. 01:25:275 (5,6,7) - и снова не очень понятный ритм, можно поменять примерно как на %картинке ок

Hard

1. кастомный диффнейм кастомный диффнейм кастомный диффнейм хз какой
2. 00:04:472 (5,1) - оверлап... ну, это флоу-оверлап, его можно не фиксить
3. 00:10:166 (2,3,4) - слишком много триплов, надо бы разнообразить паттерны нармально
4. 00:19:144 (8,1) - зачем спейсинг уменьшила? хз
5. 00:20:896 (5,6,7) - тоже самое по поводу вокала - ритм можно сделать как на %картинке% слайдер от 0108 готов
6. 00:34:910 (4,5) - бланкет да
7. 00:41:480 (3,4) - я бы забланкетил примерно как на %картинке% ок
8. 00:45:859 (4,5) - стак? да
9. 00:48:268 (2,3) - а это бы не стакал и сделал слайдер вместо этого бн писал сделать так
10. 00:50:020 (2,3) - ^ ^
11. 00:51:115 (1) - сделай вейв через красную точку, ибо выглядит он, мягко говоря, не очень исправила на бланкет
12. 00:54:618 (1,2) - подвинь дальше друг от друга чтобы не было оверлапа ок
13. 00:55:932 (4,1,2,3) - ееее сложночитающиеся стаки ме
14. 00:57:683 (1) - и снова - с этого момента маппинг ВНЕЗАПНО перманентно переходит на 1.1x спейсинг, что очень не приветствуется киаи+хард
15. 01:00:312 (2,4) - оверлааааап (нет)
16. 01:01:626 (1,4) - бланкет немноого поправить с лупой сидишь?
17. 01:13:669 (6,7) - ^ он нормальный
18. 01:25:494 (3) - поменяй на ноты что ли, хард же у новичков руки будут трястись от фк и они не прожмут 5 нот в хардике

Удачи! спасибо
{end of the mod}

Hi ;3 Hi!

Just a few things~

- - Image Easy - -
00:21:334 (3) - 00:28:341 (7) - For the sake of object visibility, I might suggest keeping these sliders' slide borders a little more clearer for cursor guidance on following the sliderball, especially when it comes to an easy diff. So yeah. first fixed, second leaved
00:26:589 (5) - I might think you missed adding a new combo here, you've been adding them in each two measures of the timeline. So this actually would provide more new combo consistency for sure~ yes, u r right
00:33:596 (4) - Optional objective: You could try polishing the curve a lot more on this slider. How about trying to move the curvier slider point more left for that? Or maybe something like this can give this track a shot! Both of them works though, so it's your pick~ But if you have another way to redo this part better, that might count too. Don't forget a new combo here too! fixed in some way
01:20:020 (2,4) - This kind of overlap seems pretty strange coming out of nowhere. It's a little awkward too, even if it's hardly noticeable in gameplay. You would've, at least, split them up, or blanket, or something that's aesthetically look great. fixed!



- - Image Normal - -
00:10:604 (4,5) - 00:15:640 (8,1) - Well, that's quite some sudden low-spaced notes appearing right up. I think you may probably need to stick with 1.2x on these two tracks for a little spacing consistency imo. fixed
00:14:326 (5,6,7,8) - For this linear straight structural flowing, you might need to start varying the patterning here in order to tweak aesthetics a little higher up. If you might not have the ability yet, you can at least curve one of the sliders or change a few placements and some curves. That works pretty often though. fixed in some way
00:19:144 (9,1) - Optional objective: How about making an aesthetic input for these two sliders here? Might work best on this part imo. Something like a flipped-and-pasted slider would be really great tbh. looks great, fixed!
00:20:896 (4,5,6) - The same thing for the linear structure and so. Didn't want to repeat myself a lot, so you may find it along the way. fixed!
00:35:786 (7) - In spite of the density before this one, it really looks a bit too sharp unless you're trying to make a follow-up with the previous straight sliders. I would probably suggest polishing up this sharp slider, by moving the red anchor somewhere else than the current. Or at least, curving it if you're not in a mood with a lot of linear sliders. fixed
00:37:100 - to 00:54:618 - You've started changing a lot of the distance spacing on this track. Which, to me, doesn't really suit best for the note density. I would literally understand a few that you'd probably want to make some spacing change, but it shouldn't be done very often on normal diffs. So I prefer sticking with the default distance spacing as you've used on the previous tracks. fixed
00:53:085 (4) - Nearly the same thing for polishing the slider red anchor and aesthetic changes. Its ok
01:08:195 (6,1,2) - Alike this kind of spacing, I could probably see this part's spacing is a little out of bound and random. How about making a little check on this? fixed



- - Image Hard - -
00:07:319 (1,2,3) - Optional objectives: Sorry if I'm a little nazi and minor, these tiny border overlaps seems very noticeable in gameplay though. Looks weird as well, so maybe splitting the slider tails a little might make it better imo. ok, fixed
00:10:166 (2,3,4) - I can tell that this part lacks structure and more movements, but you stacked here instead. So this is quite a huge delay, so I think redoing this part and vary the notes would clear things up tbh. It looks fine to me
00:19:144 (8,1) - 00:40:166 (3,1) - Are those 0.9x spacing on purpose? It doesn't seem like an anti jump or something that reduces the distance spacing for some low-profile reasons. I would prefer changing it back to the default 1x spacing on this part for keeping up the spacing consistency. fixed
00:52:866 (3,1,2) - This out-flowing pattern looks a bit confusing in my point of view. In spite of rhythm composition, this looks visually hard to understand the spacing and the snapping between slider (1) and slider (2) 00:53:523 (1,2) - which is quite an unsuitable jump alongside the emphasis though. I would recommend changing their placements for that. fixed!


That's all from here! Best of Luck~ Thx!

[C u r i] wrote:

[General]
Timing is not consistent. plz fix equalize red line all diffs yea yea i know
01:27:475 - Easy
01:27:475 - Normal
01:27:465 - Hard plz equalize end time

[Easy]
00:28:351 (3) - move (116 266) for 00:27:913 (2) - blanket this fixed
00:44:117 (1) - i think you forgot to ctrl + g this lol yes

[Normal]
plz equalize distance snap. why change ds on normal diff?
00:46:088 (3,4) - 3/4 snap is not good on normal diff plz use reverse 00:47:621 (1) - like this I think its okay
00:58:122 - timing line unsnapped fixed

GL thx

kjlfaklf wrote:

фиксим бланкеты

Easy

00:43:679 (5,1) da
00:44:117 (1,2) ^
01:01:636 (1,2) nyet
01:19:154 (1,2) da

Normal

00:26:599 (1,2) nyet
00:50:687 (5,1) nyet

The Greatest Thief

00:23:095 (1,2) da
00:24:847 (4,5) da
01:02:949 (5,1) nyet
01:04:044 (3,4) nyet
01:19:154 (1,2) nyet
01:20:030 (3,4) nyet
01:22:219 (6,1) nyet
01:23:971 (4,5) nyet

1. 00:07:329 (3,4,1) : Why didn't you do the samle slider shape than the 1st slider of the next combo ? I mean, like that ? > http://puu.sh/rOzHx/4aa2dffc05.jpg
2. 00:03:081 (1) : Blanket btw
3. 00:09:957 (2) : Oh god, that flow is horrible, could you try to do a better thing ? Up to you imo.
4. 00:33:497 (3) : put the curved point here, it will have a better curved shape > http://puu.sh/rOzTY/f66f81dcb3.jpg
5. Rest is good I think

1. 00:00:360 (1,2) : Evade those stacks in Normal diff, you can do Stacks, but not in the same combo...
2. 00:06:672 (4,5) : LOL dude, unstack this, it's really hard, and, it's in the same combo
3. 00:27:913 (4,5) : ^
4. 00:52:876 (3,4) : ^
5. 00:55:285 (2,3) : ^
6. 00:56:161 (4) : ^
7. 00:56:271 (5) : NC here
8. Rest is good I suppose

1. Pretty correct in general ! ^^

Imakuri wrote:

Hi, NM from my queue Hi!

Easy

1. 00:07:329 (3,4,1) : Why didn't you do the samle slider shape than the 1st slider of the next combo ? I mean, like that ? > http://puu.sh/rOzHx/4aa2dffc05.jpg Fixed
2. 00:03:081 (1) : Blanket btw ???
3. 00:09:957 (2) : Oh god, that flow is horrible, could you try to do a better thing ? Up to you imo. Fixed
4. 00:33:497 (3) : put the curved point here, it will have a better curved shape > http://puu.sh/rOzTY/f66f81dcb3.jpg ok
5. Rest is good I think

Normal

1. 00:00:360 (1,2) : Evade those stacks in Normal diff, you can do Stacks, but not in the same combo...
2. 00:06:672 (4,5) : LOL dude, unstack this, it's really hard, and, it's in the same combo
3. 00:27:913 (4,5) : ^
4. 00:52:876 (3,4) : ^
5. 00:55:285 (2,3) : ^
6. 00:56:161 (4) : ^
7. 00:56:271 (5) : NC here
8. Rest is good I suppose
   
   Fixed some stacks, but not all

Hard

1. Pretty correct in general ! ^^

Gl for rank thx!
Ima

raririn wrote:

Hello Hi!
from my lazy queue
For that I'm really lazy, it'd be a quite lazy and noob mod :] Also I don't expect to find many issues on a map with 50+ mods I know, so thanks for your time already!
ok let's start

Red = Unrankable Issues
Blue = Personal Suggestions
Normal = Nazi

[General]

1. The metadata is right since Ayyri has checked it already, so I guess it's clear now.

[Easy]
-Rhythm/Structure-

1. 00:30:103 (1,4) - I prefer not skipping the beat on 00:30:541 - and 00:34:044 - , changing these two into a 1/4+1/2 would sound better to me, but it does not have to anyway. I will keep it, as people had said nothing about it, and beat on 00:34:044 is followed by red slider point

-Hitsounding-

1. 00:50:687 (4) - Why whistle instead of clap here? If you mean to change from here, 00:52:438 (2) - should be whistle instead of clap too. fixed!
2. 00:54:628 - The volumn change you're using in N and H diff are fine. Consider also applying them in Easy? ooh i forgot about it, fixed

[Normal]
-Rhythm/Structure-

1. 00:00:360 (1,2) - I don't suggest stacking circles in Normal diff, but it's up to you since it's easy to read. fixed in previous mode
2. 00:06:672 (4,5) - I personally think the pattern from here to 00:15:650 - is a bit overmapped for a Normal diff. The rhythm is even much tighter than in the kiai part, and makes it the hardest part of the whole diff. For here removing 4 seems better to me. i will think about it
3. 00:10:176 (2) - I'd suggest removing this too for the same reason. ^
4. 01:06:891 (3) - The position around x:280, y:256 makes a better flow imofixed

In conclusion, the kiai part, which is supposed to be harder than the intro part, is actually the easiest. I seriously think it necessary to balance the difficulty between the intro and kiai part.[/list] ok, i will do it

-Hitsounding-

1. 00:48:497 (2) - Clap switched
2. 00:50:687 (5) - Clap, whistle does not make sense to me. switched

[The noble thief]
-Rhythm/Structure-

1. 00:05:577 (1,3) - It would look much better if you make the two sliders parallel. fixed
2. 00:44:117 - The distance become actual 0.75* due to SV change. It's a HARD diff and it's no need for you to follow the DS. Even if you would still like to follow, using 1.3* DS here otherwise it looks too crowded. fixed!
3. 00:57:693 (1) - Why NC here? dunno lol
4. 01:06:891 (5) - NC. This combo seems too long compared to the ones before. fixed!

In brief I feel playing a Normal with higher SV. AR6 makes it kinda easy to play with DTHR. It's a 140 BPM song and its highest diff is okay to play with 3 mods lol
I strongly suggest either increase the difficulty, or make another Hard or Insane diff. It's suitable for a Advanced diff, not Hard. meeeeeeeeeeh

-Hitsounding-

1. 00:50:249 (3) - Clap switched
2. 01:25:942 (4) - Clap switched

Anyway, the map itself along with every diff is quite solid. No important issues to pick. GL on rank! Hope it will bee done soon, thx!