Hi, mod as requested!
General
Are you sure the name is correct? I find a different song in this video: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LPb2noJJelY - If it's an arrangement by a different artist, you should keep the song as the "arranger" named it.
As I was writing this I asked you for a link to the song (thanks for the link ), and the artist is "Plexi." (dot included, I presume) - song should have "ε>" as the original name and "Plastic Memories Edit" OR a non-unicode heart - "<3" because it looks practically the same as a romanized title.
So the song name would be Plexi. - <3
In the tags you could add the names of the unremixed song - "今井麻美 朝焼けのスターマイン imai asami asayake no starmine" and things related to the anime where it came from
I recommend writing the source in latin characters - "Plastic Memories" as it's what プラスティック・メモリーズ is saying
Ito's Beginner
00:01:774 (1,2,3,4) - Move these items on the left edge to make better use of the screen space
00:01:774 (1,3) - Form a blanket with these two, for a neater appearance. A smaller grid could be useful
00:32:440 (3) - Find a better shape for this slider
00:37:329 (1,2) - Make a pattern with these two. Shapes can be improved
00:42:218 (4,5) - Curve (4) and move the start of (5) to the end of (4)
00:53:329 (3) - Rotate this slider to make it parallel with 00:54:218 (4)
01:09:329 (1,2) - Improve these shapes, form a pattern with the two
01:16:441 (1) - Curve or rotate for more variety in the map
01:25:329 (3) - Add dots inside of this slider to give it a less "rough" look
Generally speaking, most of the blankets could be reviewed
Tehron's Advanced
00:07:996 (2) - Move this note up so it's better spaced after 00:07:107 (1), then adjust spacing
00:14:218 (1,2,3) - This pattern could be improved
00:16:885 (4) - Drag the red dot to the middle of the slider for a better appearance
00:17:552 - You could add a note here so the map gets more predictable. Same with 00:17:774 (1,2) - 00:21:107 - 00:24:663 - 00:26:440 - and others that could be showing
00:26:663 (1,2,3,4) - Find a more varied pattern for the sliders, this looks a little repetitive
00:48:440 (3,4) - These sliders overlap, plz fix
00:49:774 (1,2) - Same for these two. It doesn't look too well imo
01:12:885 (1,1) - Same as earlier about the red dots
Review the DS as it is not uniform along the map. Try getting used to a smaller grid
Hard
I personally think the SV was set too low. 2.00 would flow better
00:09:774 (2,3,1,2,3,4) - Form some pattern with these circles
00:12:440 (1,2) - Improve the blankets or change the shapes to get more variety
00:14:218 (1) - Long slider that doesn't match the song and doesn't fit the map aesthetically
00:15:996 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Circles are too many. Why not placing a slicer in 00:16:440 -?
00:16:440 (3,1,3) - Curve these sliders, consider moving them to another part that's not the centre
00:21:107 (3) - Unpredictable slider move. Delete it and remap that part using more varied shapes
00:21:996 - Add a slider here. Try to fill the empty spaces
00:22:440 (1) - Make this spot able to be clicked
00:22:440 (1) - Remove NC and set it on 00:23:107 (2)
00:24:440 (1) - Long slider that is not consistent with the clicks on previous circles. Divide it in a shorter one and a circle
00:24:440 (1,2) - Fix the blanket
00:25:774 (1) - Undo NC
00:25:774 (1) - Same issue as above with the long slider
00:27:329 (2) - Make a blanket with the rest of the notes
00:29:329 (5) - Bad slider, it doesn't match the song and it's not predictable. Find a better way to map that part
00:37:552 (1) - Overuse of reverse arrows here, try remapping and forming a pattern
00:44:440 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Improve the patterns, place the circles using smaller angles as they play more fluently
00:53:107 (3,4,5,6) - Remap. Fill the empty spaces
00:54:663 (1) - Spinner should be avoided at this part of the map. There's no reason to add it
01:02:885 (2,3,1) - Fix blankets for a better appearance
01:18:218 (1,2) - Unpredictable set. Remap that part
01:23:552 (1,1) - Because of how monotonous the song is, I think that the spinner is not justified. Place circles and sliders instead
Review DS. It's a hard diff so the DS on it should be mostly uniform
I didn't mod the last diff, so that's all for now. Cya
General
Are you sure the name is correct? I find a different song in this video: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LPb2noJJelY - If it's an arrangement by a different artist, you should keep the song as the "arranger" named it.
As I was writing this I asked you for a link to the song (thanks for the link ), and the artist is "Plexi." (dot included, I presume) - song should have "ε>" as the original name and "Plastic Memories Edit" OR a non-unicode heart - "<3" because it looks practically the same as a romanized title.
So the song name would be Plexi. - <3
In the tags you could add the names of the unremixed song - "今井麻美 朝焼けのスターマイン imai asami asayake no starmine" and things related to the anime where it came from
I recommend writing the source in latin characters - "Plastic Memories" as it's what プラスティック・メモリーズ is saying
Ito's Beginner
00:01:774 (1,2,3,4) - Move these items on the left edge to make better use of the screen space
00:01:774 (1,3) - Form a blanket with these two, for a neater appearance. A smaller grid could be useful
00:32:440 (3) - Find a better shape for this slider
00:37:329 (1,2) - Make a pattern with these two. Shapes can be improved
00:42:218 (4,5) - Curve (4) and move the start of (5) to the end of (4)
00:53:329 (3) - Rotate this slider to make it parallel with 00:54:218 (4)
01:09:329 (1,2) - Improve these shapes, form a pattern with the two
01:16:441 (1) - Curve or rotate for more variety in the map
01:25:329 (3) - Add dots inside of this slider to give it a less "rough" look
Generally speaking, most of the blankets could be reviewed
Tehron's Advanced
00:07:996 (2) - Move this note up so it's better spaced after 00:07:107 (1), then adjust spacing
00:14:218 (1,2,3) - This pattern could be improved
00:16:885 (4) - Drag the red dot to the middle of the slider for a better appearance
00:17:552 - You could add a note here so the map gets more predictable. Same with 00:17:774 (1,2) - 00:21:107 - 00:24:663 - 00:26:440 - and others that could be showing
00:26:663 (1,2,3,4) - Find a more varied pattern for the sliders, this looks a little repetitive
00:48:440 (3,4) - These sliders overlap, plz fix
00:49:774 (1,2) - Same for these two. It doesn't look too well imo
01:12:885 (1,1) - Same as earlier about the red dots
Review the DS as it is not uniform along the map. Try getting used to a smaller grid
Hard
I personally think the SV was set too low. 2.00 would flow better
00:09:774 (2,3,1,2,3,4) - Form some pattern with these circles
00:12:440 (1,2) - Improve the blankets or change the shapes to get more variety
00:14:218 (1) - Long slider that doesn't match the song and doesn't fit the map aesthetically
00:15:996 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Circles are too many. Why not placing a slicer in 00:16:440 -?
00:16:440 (3,1,3) - Curve these sliders, consider moving them to another part that's not the centre
00:21:107 (3) - Unpredictable slider move. Delete it and remap that part using more varied shapes
00:21:996 - Add a slider here. Try to fill the empty spaces
00:22:440 (1) - Make this spot able to be clicked
00:22:440 (1) - Remove NC and set it on 00:23:107 (2)
00:24:440 (1) - Long slider that is not consistent with the clicks on previous circles. Divide it in a shorter one and a circle
00:24:440 (1,2) - Fix the blanket
00:25:774 (1) - Undo NC
00:25:774 (1) - Same issue as above with the long slider
00:27:329 (2) - Make a blanket with the rest of the notes
00:29:329 (5) - Bad slider, it doesn't match the song and it's not predictable. Find a better way to map that part
00:37:552 (1) - Overuse of reverse arrows here, try remapping and forming a pattern
00:44:440 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Improve the patterns, place the circles using smaller angles as they play more fluently
00:53:107 (3,4,5,6) - Remap. Fill the empty spaces
00:54:663 (1) - Spinner should be avoided at this part of the map. There's no reason to add it
01:02:885 (2,3,1) - Fix blankets for a better appearance
01:18:218 (1,2) - Unpredictable set. Remap that part
01:23:552 (1,1) - Because of how monotonous the song is, I think that the spinner is not justified. Place circles and sliders instead
Review DS. It's a hard diff so the DS on it should be mostly uniform
I didn't mod the last diff, so that's all for now. Cya