ALI PROJECT - Kyoumu Densen (TV size) [Osu|CatchTheBeat] · forum

Lami

Joined June 2011

Lami 2016-08-25T09:24:55+00:00

if i download your map https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5930796
clear duplicate diff problem.

Novice

i think volume 100% is too noisy x_x,
same with highest diff.

00:06:706 (1,2) - blanket
00:38:546 (1,2) - swap NC
00:57:567 (1,1) - i don't think it's acceptable what next note appear before ended spinner.

Sin's Normal

01:25:272 (4,1) - hm.... bl..a..nk..et..?

Gero's Hard

00:08:773 (4) - use other hitsound? continue clap is feel little weird.

Shi

imo, little look like NC spam in overall.
consider 4/1 rhythm NC cycle (except special partten)

00:03:604 (1,2) - not have idae on this jump. it's little off-ed on your style.
00:22:832 (3,1) - + 00:36:065 (2,3) - make same NC cycle?
01:26:926 (1) - make silence in the end.
01:04:597 (2) - off-screen
00:06:292 (1) - unsnapped?

Pachiru

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Pachiru 2016-08-25T22:06:00+00:00

Lami

Lami wrote:
if i download your map https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5930796
clear duplicate diff problem. cleared

Novice

i think volume 100% is too noisy x_x, yes, i will change it after, i want to have some help for volume, so i will ask to friends, but thanks for poiting that !
same with highest diff.

00:06:706 (1,2) - blanket i can't do better than i did.
00:38:546 (1,2) - swap NC done
00:57:567 (1,1) - i don't think it's acceptable what next note appear before ended spinner. nope, it's okay, i changed something with the previous mod!

Shi

imo, little look like NC spam in overall.
consider 4/1 rhythm NC cycle (except special partten)

00:03:604 (1,2) - not have idae on this jump. it's little off-ed on your style. since i consider that as a difficult part, i think it's okay for me, if someone else point it to me, i will change it
00:22:832 (3,1) - + 00:36:065 (2,3) - make same NC cycle? corrected!
01:26:926 (1) - make silence in the end.corrected hitsounds volume on last spinner on each diffs, thanks !
01:04:597 (2) - off-screenyes, but seems to be okay for now.
00:06:292 (1) - unsnapped?????

Gloria Guard

[notice]

Gloria Guard wrote:
Hello From your modding queue

[General]

■ You should be to chagne the mapset image size 1366x768. this mapset image size 1228x768. Please the change image size. i will do it later!

■ The mapset difficulty name Novice is Easy? or not? I don't know :O, I recommend this difficulty name to Easy.done

[Novice]

This mapset is volume so big :O You need to adjust the sound. for example 00:19:111 this point the quiet atmosphere but you used this part volume is 100%. Please the decrease this mapset volume ;w;. as i said before, i will do it later !

■ 00:12:495 (5) Add new combo this.done
■ 00:56:327 (3,1) Remove to repeat and the move to spinner by 00:57:154. because the vocal start point 00:57:154, why need to add 00:57:567 this start point spinner rhythm it? yep babe, done!
■ 01:03:770 (5) Add new combo here. done!
■ 01:09:972 (5) So long new combo this parts. i didn't understand a lot this changes, but i do some changes on this part!
■ 01:19:483 (3) ^
■ 01:21:137 (5) Add finish this slider head point.done!
■ 01:22:791 (4) Add new combo this note. yeee
■ 01:28:580 (1) Please use this spinner end 5% ~ 20%. The big sound a little noisy. done too

[Shi]

■ 01:04:597 (2) The slider touch under screen. it seems okay o///

That's all I guess I hope to ranking this mapset Good luck ~!

Thanks for modding <3

Xayler

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Joined November 2013

Xayler 2016-08-28T23:47:46+00:00

Heya, NM from my queue! o/

General
Tone down the volume to 40% or so, 100% is just too high imo
Not really liking that the stack leniency is at 2, recommending to stack things, at least in lower difficulties

Easy
00:57:154 (1) - the spinner recovery time in Easy should be from 1 big white tick to another so I suggest to end it 00:58:808 - here instead

Sin's Normal
00:04:225 (3,4,5) - move (5) a bit left for symmetry?
00:07:533 (1,2) - blanket fix
00:10:841 (5,6,7) - make them as a triangle to avoid the overlap
00:51:364 - make this clickable
01:04:597 (3,4) - mirror the (4) slider's start like (3) is
01:11:833 - add a circle
01:25:272 (4,1) - blanket fix

Gero's Hard
00:16:837 - I feel like having a circle here plays better with the melody
00:18:491 - ^
00:21:178 (2,1) - maybe blanket them?
00:56:120 (2,3,4,5) - this place with the current stack leniency may be very disturbing to play imo

Shi
Maybe use 0,8x slider velocity instead of 0,75x, so it's smooth with 1x and 1,2x
00:00:503 (2,3) - move 2 a bit down with 3 so it's linear
01:05:424 (1) - 0,5x is a bit slow imo, better go for 0,8x slider velocity
01:12:040 (1) - end the spinner at 01:13:280 - here, as the vocal also ends here
01:25:272 (5) - end it 01:25:686 - here
01:25:892 - start a slider from here to 01:26:719 - here

This should be all, good luck!
As you mentioned about M4M, if you don't mind then I would really appreciate if you could check this map of mine: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/497852 !

Pachiru

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Pachiru 2016-08-29T09:02:58+00:00

Xayler wrote:
Heya, NM from my queue! o/

General
Tone down the volume to 40% or so, 100% is just too high imo I will do it yeah!
Not really liking that the stack leniency is at 2, recommending to stack things, at least in lower difficulties Thanks for pointing out that, I totally forgot to change it on all diffs! Now done!

Easy
00:57:154 (1) - the spinner recovery time in Easy should be from 1 big white tick to another so I suggest to end it 00:58:808 - here instead done

Shi
Maybe use 0,8x slider velocity instead of 0,75x, so it's smooth with 1x and 1,2x nope i think it's good like this, since it's not hard nor insane, but light insane
00:00:503 (2,3) - move 2 a bit down with 3 so it's linear I can't because of stacking leniancy :c
01:05:424 (1) - 0,5x is a bit slow imo, better go for 0,8x slider velocity no it's too fast in my opinion
01:12:040 (1) - end the spinner at 01:13:280 - here, as the vocal also ends here done
01:25:272 (5) - end it 01:25:686 - here done
01:25:892 - start a slider from here to 01:26:719 - here done

This should be all, good luck!
As you mentioned about M4M, if you don't mind then I would really appreciate if you could check this map of mine: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/497852 ! sure i will !

Thanks for modding bro !

Ovoui

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Ovoui 2016-08-31T02:16:53+00:00

cc

[Easy]

00:39:786 (2) - tu devrais plutôt le faire horizontale, ça fera un meilleur pour le pattern suivant
00:47:229 (3,1) - essaye de modifier un peu le placement de ces deux slider, ils sont à la limite de l'overlapîng
j01:25:686 (2) - j'ai l'impression que c'est overmappé, pour fix tout en suivant les vocal tu as juste a placer un cercle ou un slider ici 01:25:892 -

[Sin's Normal]

00:35:238 (6,1) - i think you should improve the blanket

[Gero's Hard]

00:08:773 (4) - there's too much claps, it sounds weird
00:14:976 (3) - it plays better if the slider ends on the previous white tick
00:56:120 (2,3,4,5) - maybe a bit too hard to read for an hard diff

[Le bon 10 balle de "shi"t]

00:43:508 (2,1) - mets les a la même hauteur owo

Really nice set, good luck!

Pachiru

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Pachiru 2016-08-31T10:14:18+00:00

Ovoui wrote:
cc

[Easy]

00:39:786 (2) - tu devrais plutôt le faire horizontale, ça fera un meilleur pour le pattern suivant changé starfoullah
00:47:229 (3,1) - essaye de modifier un peu le placement de ces deux slider, ils sont à la limite de l'overlapîng la même, j'ai un peu bougé le reste jusqu'au spinner, c'est censé donné un truc plus sympa a regarder
j01:25:686 (2) - j'ai l'impression que c'est overmappé, pour fix tout en suivant les vocal tu as juste a placer un cercle ou un slider ici 01:25:892 - done too

[Le bon 10 balle de "shi"t]

00:43:508 (2,1) - mets les a la même hauteur owo je crois qu'ils le sont déja, parce qu'avec Ctrl, j'arrive pas a le bouger, donc je suppose qu'il doit être droit :'(

Really nice set, good luck! merci bae jtm <3

Ovoui

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Ovoui 2016-08-31T13:55:02+00:00

regarde les coordonnés

00:43:508 (2) - y=207
00:43:921 (1) - y=208

^^ (dans l'insane)

Spork Lover

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Joined October 2013

Spork Lover 2016-09-01T01:36:46+00:00

M4M from your queue!
This anime is so creepy >.<

Color coding:

Color coding

Unrankable if unchanged
Normal Suggestion/Comment
Strong Suggestion

General

The metadata has "TV Size" as the original, and "TV size" as romanised (The s is lower case) Which one is it? xd (I don't know all that much about the metadata of this song, but I'm pretty sure that it's supposed to be the same.)

The downbeat changes at 00:09:187. Please set a timing point here for all diffs. (Make sure it's the same volume as the green point, if there is any.

Tags like "Horror", The japanese characters for Another (アナザー ), and "intro" would do wonders <3

Easy

00:00:090 - There's a timing point with a green point that uses a different volume than the timing point. Please adjust the green point to be the same volume (Or the timing point), as it's unrankable as it is now.
00:09:187 (1,2) - Correct emphasis would be reverse + singletap here since a strong beat goes on the reverse arrow the way you're doing it now. (two sliders is also an option)
00:25:313 (1,2) - The downbeat is on 2, so I'd advice to NC that instead of the first

00:34:411 (2) - Another case of emphasis probably, where the reverse arrow has the strongest beat of the slider xd
00:35:651 (3,1) - Switch NC
00:41:854 (1,2) - Same here
^ These are for downbeat reasons
00:52:191 (1) - The shape of this slider is a little too curved for the next two note transitions.
00:55:500 - Strong beat is on the slider end, I'd highly suggest making this clickable
01:10:386 - Same for this one, the strong beat isn't clickable
01:12:040 (1,1) - Recovery time is REALLY short for an easy, I'd highly advice making the break longer, a newbie can't recover that fast
01:20:310 - Another slider end thing lol xd

For this diff, I'd advice looking for issues with the emphasis. There are a lot of strong beats that are made insignificant in the map, and other beats that shouldn't be clickable, but are. There are most likely more than the ones I've mentioned so far, but yeah, look into this :3
(Also, there are some 1/2 breaks which I'd advice to avoid, like the one at 00:25:727 (2,3) You could talk to Gero about whether or not it's fine, 'cause I'm not really sure because the BPM is kinda low)

Sin's Normal

00:10:841 (5,6,7) - Feels a little odd to be overlapped like this (5,7), but then again, I feel it would be better to add a long slider from 5 to 6 ( 00:10:841 (5,6) - ), since 1: there's a lot of single taps in a row and 2: the rhythm would flow a lot better with the long slider + a 1/2 slider afterwards.
00:14:149 (4) - Nazi suggestion, but the turn on the tick could be more polished, so the red node is on the tick (https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5987276)
01:00:048 (1,2) - I'd NC the second slider too, since that's the downbeat (You do something similar at 01:22:791 (1,1) - )
01:16:175 (6,7,8) - Don't feel like this flows too well considering it's "technically" a 77,5 bpm triple lol xd newbies would most likely overdo this, so maybe 1/2 slider + single tap? (The single tap could stack with the next long slider)
01:25:272 (4) - I'd loosen up the turn in the middle a bit (https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5987306)

A few spots that could use a bit of polish, but this seems totally doable with just a few more mods

Gero's Hard

00:56:120 (2,3,4,5) - This is the only thing where I'm a little split, 'cause the 3,5 are two completely different sounds, so doing the back and forth like this doesn't seem like the best option (https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5987344) This could be an idea, but you could also just stack 5 with the slider end of the slider with/without the change of 4's position (https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5987351 or https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5987351)

Apart from that I like what you did, seems really nice :3

Shi

00:29:035 (2,3) - Seems too close to each other, I donno why I feel like that's the case >.<
00:51:778 (7) - Moving this to x140 y:136 would create a nice square pattern, and would also flow a lot better than the stack and be easier to read.
01:04:597 (2) - This object is off-screen by around 2-3 pixels in the reverse arrow end. Move it up a bit xd
01:22:791 (3,6) - Please NC those two so the 1/3 stream is easier to read

In the ending, the first spinner feels like it ends too early, and because of this, the 2nd spinner suffers. I'd advise doing it like this to emphasize the vocals a lot better. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5987389

Very safe mapping style, solid

Overall I'd advice to rework some sections in the easy diff to make the beats more "newbie" friendly, so it appeals more to them. A re-structure of the rhythm for the downbeats will definitely go a long way ^^ The rest of the diffs seem pretty much good to go with a few more mods

I wish you all good luck with the set!

Yamicchi

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Joined May 2015

Yamicchi 2016-09-01T05:38:32+00:00

Late M4M :3
[General]

• Video offset should be -274 instead.
• Have yourself some hitsound. Custom is not perfect for all the situations

[Easy]

• 00:06:706 (1) - since no one mentioned it inb4, fix the blanket
• 00:06:706 - 00:07:533 - 00:58:808 - 00:45:575 - I don't think you can change SV in Easy diff?
• 00:25:727 (2,3) - keep the 1/2 for Normal instead, you didn't use 1/2 inb4 so this might confuse players, especially those who are new to the game
• 00:38:959 (1) - ^
• 00:24:073 (5) - 1/4 slider here, but 00:37:305 (2) - is a circle instead which makes the map inconsistent. Please change
• 01:12:040 (1) - unrankable spinner. The gap between its end and the next object is too small for Easy diff. Consider changing this into a circle or a slider

[Sin's]

• 00:00:917 - you used a 1/1 slider so I think change 00:05:052 (5) - to a 1/1 slider too, also there are no beats at 00:05:258 - so you might wanna apply this
• 00:33:997 (3,4) - make them a 1/1 slider as you did in 00:20:765 - also there are no reason for you to stack 2 circles here, it looks ridiculous
• 00:34:824 (5,6) - okay now stack them as you did inb4
• 01:12:040 (4,6) - this is really a weird slider shape
• 01:16:175 (6,7,8) - too much for Normal. Change them to a 1/2 slider
• 01:22:791 (1) - again the gap between the spinner and this slider is too short. Delete this would solve the problem

[Shi]

But why Shi owo?
• 00:00:090 (1,2) - I would ctrl + g this so the slider would be consistent to 00:01:123 - 00:01:950 - 00:02:777 - ...
• 00:02:777 (1,2) - so why is the big spacing here? Can't find an answer for your choice
• 00:03:604 (1,2) - ^
• 00:14:149 - I'd add a circle here, then start the spinner on the blue tick
• 01:23:618 (1,2,3) - keep the DS balance?

Chalwa

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Joined August 2014

Chalwa 2016-09-01T16:56:10+00:00

Hello! M4M from your queue!
[General]

Ending time is not consistent:
1. 01:27:753 - Sin's Normal
2. In others - 01:28:580

[Easy]

00:06:706 (1,2) - Blanket improve
00:09:187 (1) - Fix DS
00:17:457 (3) - Copy 00:15:803 (1) and Ctrl + >
00:38:959 (1,2) - Please, it's only Easy. End 00:38:959 (1) at 00:39:373
00:41:854 (1,2) - Improve it
01:01:082 (2,3) - ^
01:12:040 (1) - Make slider here, cause it's hard to play for beginners

[Normal]

00:10:841 (5,7) - Stack this two?
Looks nice!

[Hard]

You have a Default skin set. Make it to "User preference" if it's only error
01:19:897 (1) - LUL??? XD

END!
If my mod is very, very bad, don't give me kds
GOOD LUCK!!!

Pachiru

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Pachiru 2016-09-01T17:22:03+00:00

Thanks all for modding, I will probably rework on the Easy, and then I will apply mods on "Shi" diffs, I gave you all kds :3

UnitedWeSin

889 posts

Joined July 2012

UnitedWeSin 2016-09-02T22:43:46+00:00

Sorry so late.

Left wrote:
[Sin's Normal]
I think you should talk with spotty about DS spread. normal's distance is lower than easy. My opinion is your's is a bit low.

I can't find problem else I guess it's ok since the circles and SV are slower in easy, along with more simple rhythms. I don't think I'll increase mine, .9 is kind of standard imo.

Maelstrrom wrote:
Sin's Normal[/b][/color]
00:23:659 (2,3) - this overlapping is not good for normal
Since there's an easy diff I think it's fine.
00:25:313 (4) - 00:28:622 (5) - NC Not necessary imo, it breaks the pattern.
00:44:335 (4) - slider have quite random beginning(according to vocal). Better unite this 00:43:921 (3,4) - into the long one
It feels better for me to follow the increase in motion in the song. The whole section was long sliders and held notes before this.

Gloria Guard wrote:
[Sin's Normal]

■ 01:00:462 (2) Add new combo here, because the other part of the music is started.
I don't really like the combo of one, I think it's nicer without.
■ 01:15:348 (4) You're missing this note finish sound.
added
■ 01:19:690 (6,1) Why the spinner start a one tempo slow? I think the spinner start point 01:19:897 is better. and the slider remove to repeat.
I'd prefer the spinner not to start on the accented note so that we can have the finish there.

[/b]

Xayler wrote:
Sin's Normal
00:04:225 (3,4,5) - move (5) a bit left for symmetry?
done deal
00:07:533 (1,2) - blanket fix
ok
00:10:841 (5,6,7) - make them as a triangle to avoid the overlap
naw it goes with the flow imo
00:51:364 - make this clickable
it's a good suggestion, the repeat works as well I think
01:04:597 (3,4) - mirror the (4) slider's start like (3) is
it's ment not to be parallel, seems more interesting here
01:11:833 - add a circle
too much imo, takes away from 4-5-6
01:25:272 (4,1) - blanket fix
sure

Spork Lover wrote:
The downbeat changes at 00:09:187. Please set a timing point here for all diffs. (Make sure it's the same volume as the green point, if there is any.
nice catch, added on mine

Sin's Normal
00:10:841 (5,6,7) - Feels a little odd to be overlapped like this (5,7), but then again, I feel it would be better to add a long slider from 5 to 6 ( 00:10:841 (5,6) - ), since 1: there's a lot of single taps in a row and 2: the rhythm would flow a lot better with the long slider + a 1/2 slider afterwards.
I don't think I agree there, it's just rhythm variation here. Maybe a long slider at 5-6 would work but that's the same rhythm at the beginning of the phrase. I think in normal it might be better to mix it up and keep it interesting. The overlap is pretty standard here, just keeping with flow from 6.
00:14:149 (4) - Nazi suggestion, but the turn on the tick could be more polished, so the red node is on the tick (https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5987276)
sure
01:00:048 (1,2) - I'd NC the second slider too, since that's the downbeat (You do something similar at 01:22:791 (1,1) - )
I don't really like the one combo inserted before the downbeat in a normal. I deleted the other one.
01:16:175 (6,7,8) - Don't feel like this flows too well considering it's "technically" a 77,5 bpm triple lol xd newbies would most likely overdo this, so maybe 1/2 slider + single tap? (The single tap could stack with the next long slider)
I think these kinds of things can work in Normal, they just need to be introduced. Consider the slider 01:14:521 (3) and how it introduces that idea. I think it can be nice since it is Normal, not Easy.
01:25:272 (4) - I'd loosen up the turn in the middle a bit (https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5987306)
definitely

Yamicchi wrote:
[Sin's]

• 00:00:917 - you used a 1/1 slider so I think change 00:05:052 (5) - to a 1/1 slider too, also there are no beats at 00:05:258 - so you might wanna apply this
Naw it's just building tension into 00:06:706. You can hear a 1/2 rhythm beginning at 00:05:052.
• 00:33:997 (3,4) - make them a 1/1 slider as you did in 00:20:765 - also there are no reason for you to stack 2 circles here, it looks ridiculous
Rhythm variation is much, much more interesting in these kinds of difficulties. Stacking the 2 circles is simply playing on the movement in the vocals. Again, more interesting.
• 00:34:824 (5,6) - okay now stack them as you did inb4
• 01:12:040 (4,6) - this is really a weird slider shape
It's a really weird sound too.
• 01:16:175 (6,7,8) - too much for Normal. Change them to a 1/2 slider
Can't really agree there, these are being built up to.
• 01:22:791 (1) - again the gap between the spinner and this slider is too short. Delete this would solve the problem
I can't imagine two entire beats is too short for Normal with an Easy in the set. But then again I have been wrong before. I'd need proof though.

Chalwa wrote:
01:27:753 - Sin's Normal
In others - 01:28:580
[/list]
It doesn't have to be the same, it's ok if they want to go all the way to the end.

[Normal]
00:10:841 (5,7) - Stack this two?
Naw way better this way. ;w;
Looks nice!

Thanks very much for the mods!!!

http://puu.sh/qXREU/646329aa40.zip

Pachiru

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Pachiru 2016-09-03T13:51:34+00:00

Spork Lover wrote:
M4M from your queue!
This anime is so creepy >.<

Apart from that I like what you did, seems really nice :3
Shi

00:29:035 (2,3) - Seems too close to each other, I donno why I feel like that's the case >.< I think it's okay, because I reduced the SV manually, so I think it's for this reason that you think it's pretty close :p
00:51:778 (7) - Moving this to x140 y:136 would create a nice square pattern, and would also flow a lot better than the stack and be easier to read. done!
01:04:597 (2) - This object is off-screen by around 2-3 pixels in the reverse arrow end. Move it up a bit xd done xD
01:22:791 (3,6) - Please NC those two so the 1/3 stream is easier to readyeah done too !

In the ending, the first spinner feels like it ends too early, and because of this, the 2nd spinner suffers. I'd advise doing it like this to emphasize the vocals a lot better. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5987389 yes! I totally agree, it's feels better like that

Very safe mapping style, solid

Overall I'd advice to rework some sections in the easy diff to make the beats more "newbie" friendly, so it appeals more to them. A re-structure of the rhythm for the downbeats will definitely go a long way ^^ The rest of the diffs seem pretty much good to go with a few more mods I wish you all good luck with the set! I will rework on the Easy diff completely because there is some lack of flow, and I don't like the easy :c

Yamicchi wrote:
Late M4M :3
[General]

• Video offset should be -274 instead.
• Have yourself some hitsound. Custom is not perfect for all the situations
[Shi]

But why Shi owo? I decided to call it "Shi" because it means 4 in Japanese, but it also means "the death" (if i'm not saying crap >.>) so I think it fits very well with the anime where this song came from :p
• 00:00:090 (1,2) - I would ctrl + g this so the slider would be consistent to 00:01:123 - 00:01:950 - 00:02:777 - ... I agree with that, but I got a mod that told me to do the other way (as it is on the diff.) so I will see with other mods if it also tell me to change it, then I will do it, thanks for poiting out that!
• 00:02:777 (1,2) - so why is the big spacing here? Can't find an answer for your choice To add some difficulties, and this isn't that hard, so I thought it was good.
• 00:03:604 (1,2) - ^^
• 00:14:149 - I'd add a circle here, then start the spinner on the blue tick Yes!
• 01:23:618 (1,2,3) - keep the DS balance? changed yes!

Thanks both of you for modding >w</ ♥

Spork Lover

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Joined October 2013

Spork Lover 2016-09-03T22:10:56+00:00

There are a lot of meanings for shi, two of these are 四, which is the kanji for 4, and 死 for death. It's a really nice wordplay tbh, since the diff is the 4th in the mapset and the anime is (unsurprisingly) surrounded around death xD So yeah, the diff name makes a lot of sense for the mapset ^^ I hope that clears things up

Modem

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Modem 2016-09-04T13:11:12+00:00

Hey, may I mod this as my thanks that you mod my orange map? :3

Pachiru

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Pachiru 2016-09-05T22:14:59+00:00

Modem wrote:
Hey, may I mod this as my thanks that you mod my orange map? :3

It's up to you babe, I will probably change my Easy, so you can give a mod once the Easy is done ? :3

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Modem 2016-09-07T13:19:18+00:00

Pachiru wrote:
It's up to you babe, I will probably change my Easy, so you can give a mod once the Easy is done ? :3

Sure XD Take your time~
Pm me when you're done owo/

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Pachiru 2016-09-08T14:40:01+00:00

[Changes]

Changed the tags.
Changed the source name into the Japanese name.
Added the new Easy.

Modem

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Modem 2016-09-08T15:31:17+00:00

M4M~ :3

General

* How about set the AudioLeadIn in the osu notepad across all the diff in this mapset into 2000? The map started immediately as the music starts, so it might make some beginner players got startled because the HP bar above would raise quickly in one second before the first object appear, and they might have ended up missed it. By set up the AudioLeadIn into 2000, the player would have some time to get prepared before start playing

* How about changing the background into the rankable resolution? Cropping it into 1024 x 768 would be safer to pass the ranking process owo/

* Please make the timing points across all the diff in this mapset consistent >w<. Since there's the uninherited timing points that got conflicted in the Easy diff

* The rest seems pretty fine~!

Easy

* Disable the Widescreen Support in this diff since there's no storyboard in this mapset

* I suggest you to change the Stack Leniency in this diff into 7, since this is the lowest diff in which the beginner players would be playing and using 7 Stack Leniency would be more suitable for their skill. Plus, using the Stack Leniency lower than 7 in the easiest diff might be unrankable owo

* Change OD into 3 please ;3

* Based on the AiMod, there were several objects and the kiai time that got unsnapped :

Please fix it to pass the ranking process

* 00:23:246 (1) - It would be better if you didn't stack these note under the tail of 00:22:419 (3) , since some beginner players might got confused because of this placement. Moving it somewhere around x:470 y:212 would be better

* 00:25:313 (1,2) - This blanket could be improved like this :

* 00:35:651 (3) - Um, change the shape a little like this?

So that the shape would be more symmetrical owo/

* 01:12:040 (4) - The shape of this slider could be improved a little bit like this :

So that the first rounded angle of this slider's shape would blanket the tail of 01:11:626 (3) nicely owo

* 01:13:694 (5) - Add NC to this slider for the consistency and emphasizing the downbeat ;3

* 01:13:694 (5) - I suggest you to unstack the head of this slider from the tail of 01:13:280 (4) since it was too confusing for the beginner players, since they might not comfortable to play a stacked pattern with 1/1 rhythm >.<

* 01:17:002 (9) - Add NC at this slider as well~

* 01:22:377 (6) - Add NC at this note

Sin's Normal

* Disable the Widescreen Support in this diff since there's no storyboard in this mapset

* Change the Stack Leniency in this diff into 7, since this is the lowest diff in which the beginner players would be playing and using 7 Stack Leniency would be more suitable for their skill. Plus, using the Stack Leniency lower than 7 in the easiest diff might be unrankable

* Fix your kiai time please~! It was unsnapped owo/

* There were few distance snap problems as well, which wasn't allowed and unrankable since this is the second easiest diff of this mapset, so please fix it >w<

* 00:32:343 (1,2) - This placement made half from the slider frame of 00:33:170 (2) got covered, and this overlap might confuse some beginner players because some of them still weren't used to this kind of pattern. And this might be unrankable as well, since this is the second easiest diff in this mapets. My suggestion is, how about changing it into the safer pattern like this instead?

* 00:42:267 (1,2) - Same as above, this pattern might be unrankable as well. Changing it into something like this would be safer for the ranking process owo :

* 01:01:288 (4) - Add NC at these note for the sake of consistency and emphasizing the downbeat ;3

* 01:16:175 (6,7,8) - Triple clicking those stacked notes with 1/2 rhythm might be too hard for some beginner players, and they might click them too fast due to the panic for seeing the sudden change of the rhythm used in this diff. I suggest you to change them into one 1/2 slider and one note instead. But, if you still don't want to change it, then unstacking them would be nice owo/

Or

* 01:25:272 (5) - Hm, how about changing the shape a little bit like this so that it would be neater?

Gero's Hard

* Hi Gero

* Disable the Widescreen Support in this diff since there's no storyboard in this mapset

* How about changing the Stack Leniency in this diff into 4 to make it safer? Since 3 was too low >.<

* 00:08:773 (4), 00:08:980 (4), 00:09:083 (4) - Remove the clap from those part that I mentioned please. It doesn't fit the music well >.<. In my opinion, using the normal sampleset was more than enough to emphasize the drum from the main music

* 00:13:735 (3) - Um, the reverse part of this slider was mostly covered by the slider frame of 00:13:322 (2) and made it unrankable. Please fix it >.<. How about changing the placement like this instead to avoid the overlap?

* 00:39:683 (2,3) - Their placement almost off from the screen during the play >.<

* Very awesome diff! But, too much triple click :'D

Shi

* How about changing the Stack Leniency in this diff into 4 to make it safer? Since 3 was too low >.<

* 00:25:727 (2) - The placement of this slider made its slider border touching the HP bar below.

It would be nice if you move it a bit upwards :3

* 01:03:770 (3) - Same here, please move this slider a bit upwards~

* 01:22:791 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Um, are you sure you would make them into some kind of the streams >.<? Since the snapping was 1/3, it might be a bit hard to follow, even for the pro players. How about change them into the repeated slider instead just like 01:21:964 (1) and 01:22:378 (2) ? It would make the rhythm easier to follow ;3

* Very neat diff owo/

That's all~! Good luck in rank Pachiru~ />w</

Pachiru

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Pachiru 2016-09-09T00:05:02+00:00

Fixed everything on the "Shi" modifications!

I also fixed everything except the OD since it's already 3 D:

I also didn't understand the thing ith AudioLeadIn, if you can explain it to me in PM or even in the thread, that could be great, there is an option in-game to do it? :c

Thanks a lot for the mod Modem ! <3

LigerZero

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LigerZero 2016-09-09T07:20:24+00:00

No Kudosu

I love it this anime..... favorite episode 7

tags added "misaki mei another opening"

Squichu

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Squichu 2016-09-09T12:25:01+00:00

Hey there!
As requested

General

try to find a background with 1366x768px resolution to avoid resizing?

Easy
Pretty neat diff, but could you explain your NC pattern to me? It's NC on each downbeat in the beginning, then you switch to each second downbeat after 00:09:187 - and then there appear some rather random NCs, examples 00:25:313 (1) - 00:28:208 (1) - 00:38:546 (1) - 01:04:597 (1) - , and there are also some missing NCs I think, example 00:35:651 (3) - ?
Otherwise-

are the SV changes necessary? Normal doesn't use any so it doesn't make sense spread-wise to use them in the lower diff. o.o
00:57:154 (4) - imo the reverse doesn't fit well because the vocals stop on the reverse and there are some pretty dominant sounds afterwards that are completely ignored. :c I mean, yes they're all covered by the slider, but beats like 00:59:221 - and 00:59:634 - work better if clickable, imo. D:
01:25:272 (4) - similar here, the last beat 01:26:926 - is too dominant to not have it clickable. :c
01:28:477 - useless green line?

Sin's Normal

00:25:727 (1,2) - and 00:29:035 (1,2) - play a bit weird, how about shortening the sliders by 1/2 and adding another circle to emphasize the strong sounds/vocals on the current sliderends better?
Same for 00:38:959 (1,2) -
00:32:343 (1,2) - and 00:42:267 (1,2) - I highly recommend avoiding this kind of overlap/movement in lower diffs as it can lead to confusion easily. >: And I'm pretty sure you can come up with something else
00:50:331 (3,4) - shouldn't be stacked, all previous stacks have been 1/1 before so this is too misleading for a Normal.
Same for 00:56:120 (2,3) - and 01:04:390 (2,3) - and 01:16:175 (6,7,8) - and 01:24:238 (3,4) -

Gero's Hard

Is preferred default skin intentional? o.o
00:00:296 - I miss emphasis on the sound here, you could try a 1/2 reverse? At least it should be different from 00:00:917 (4) - imo
00:12:908 (1,2,3) - can you re-arrange this so the reverse of (3) isn't covered by anything? :3 something similar to 01:10:799 (3,4,5) - maybe
00:52:191 (1,2) - Is this intentional? Shouldn't (1) blanket previous circles? o.o
01:05:424 (1) - Consider ending the slider earlier to emphasize the vocals starting at 01:06:664 - ? Feels a bit off while playing that there's something so dominant in the middle of an object, but there's nothing to emphasize it.
01:13:694 (1) - hmmh, the extended sliders (the folllowing ones as well) match the vocals nicely, but 1/2 slider + 2 circles would still play better, imo, because the circle feels more like it's disrupting the melody, if you have two circles it plays smoother tho and you'd still have everything emphasized. Alternatively, you could try using the same rhythm as in Shi > http://puu.sh/r5byb.jpg . It feels smoother to play as well, because it only uses sliders.

Shi

00:00:503 (2,3) - 00:22:832 (1,2) - 00:36:065 (1,2) - I recommend unstacking them, because players have to stay at one place for a long time while the pace of the song doesn't change.. it works for other parts very very well (like 00:30:689 (1,2) - , that's matching nicely with the vocals/pace), but the three I listed up could be changed.
00:29:035 (2,3) - how about shortening (2) by 1/2 and adding a circle between them? That would give a lot more emphasis to the vocals which should be focused on, imo.

Modem

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Modem 2016-09-10T03:20:57+00:00

How to change AudioLeadin :

1. Click File

2. Click osu!notepad

3. Change the AudioLeadIn into 2000

4. Save

Good Luck~ :3

UnitedWeSin

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UnitedWeSin 2016-09-10T08:26:40+00:00

Modem wrote:
Disable the Widescreen Support in this diff since there's no storyboard in this mapset
okie

* Change the Stack Leniency in this diff into 7, since this is the lowest diff in which the beginner players would be playing and using 7 Stack Leniency would be more suitable for their skill. Plus, using the Stack Leniency lower than 7 in the easiest diff might be unrankable
I don't even know really lol. Changed.

* Fix your kiai time please~! It was unsnapped owo/
I think Spotty might have fixed it.

* There were few distance snap problems as well, which wasn't allowed and unrankable since this is the second easiest diff of this mapset, so please fix it >w<
Fixed these I believe.

* 00:32:343 (1,2) - This placement made half from the slider frame of 00:33:170 (2) got covered, and this overlap might confuse some beginner players because some of them still weren't used to this kind of pattern. And this might be unrankable as well, since this is the second easiest diff in this mapets. My suggestion is, how about changing it into the safer pattern like this instead?
Ok I'll try this. It's a good suggestion.

* 00:42:267 (1,2) - Same as above, this pattern might be unrankable as well. Changing it into something like this would be safer for the ranking process owo :
This pattern is ok imo. It's just folding around the 00:41:854 (5). In my experience , new players get confused by rhythms more than slider shapes. Also, this is Normal, and there is an Easy diff in the set, it's not restrained to the most basic of placements, especially considering the music's character.

* 01:01:288 (4) - Add NC at these note for the sake of consistency and emphasizing the downbeat ;3
I prefer the current NC pattern to follow the vocal periods, adding a NC here simply makes the combos too short imo.

* 01:16:175 (6,7,8) - Triple clicking those stacked notes with 1/2 rhythm might be too hard for some beginner players, and they might click them too fast due to the panic for seeing the sudden change of the rhythm used in this diff. I suggest you to change them into one 1/2 slider and one note instead. But, if you still don't want to change it, then unstacking them would be nice owo/
;w; This is good though. ;w; I'm not sure if unstacking these is the right solution, I know I'd find them easier to play stacked if I were at that level. So I'll just make it boring.

* 01:25:272 (5) - Hm, how about changing the shape a little bit like this so that it would be neater?
I adjusted it, I'm a nub ;w;

Squichu wrote:
Sin's Normal
00:25:727 (1,2) - and 00:29:035 (1,2) - play a bit weird, how about shortening the sliders by 1/2 and adding another circle to emphasize the strong sounds/vocals on the current sliderends better?
Considering vocals, there is no change until 00:26:347, the 3/4 beat. The sliders make sense for Normal when following vocals as they hold here, it's too much to try and fit in sounds from the strings, etc.
Same for 00:38:959 (1,2) -
00:32:343 (1,2) - and 00:42:267 (1,2) - I highly recommend avoiding this kind of overlap/movement in lower diffs as it can lead to confusion easily. >: And I'm pretty sure you can come up with something else
The first was fixed since it was likely just bad flow. The second I can't see as confusing, consider this is Normal with an Easy in the set, and it's following it a rhythm pattern that has been repeated.
00:50:331 (3,4) - shouldn't be stacked, all previous stacks have been 1/1 before so this is too misleading for a Normal.
Same for 00:56:120 (2,3) - and 01:04:390 (2,3) - and 01:16:175 (6,7,8) - and 01:24:238 (3,4) -
Bah I just can't really agree there. There is one 1/1 stack preceding these, and plenty of 1/2 going on all over the place. I think it's pretty standard in Normal.

Thanks for the mods!!

If you want to change the audio leading please so in my diff. ;3

http://puu.sh/r6aHj/55cc5592eb.zip

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Pachiru 2016-09-10T14:52:35+00:00

Squichu wrote:
Hey there!
As requested

General
try to find a background with 1366x768px resolution to avoid resizing?
Easy
Pretty neat diff, but could you explain your NC pattern to me? It's NC on each downbeat in the beginning, then you switch to each second downbeat after 00:09:187 - and then there appear some rather random NCs, examples 00:25:313 (1) - 00:28:208 (1) - 00:38:546 (1) - 01:04:597 (1) - , and there are also some missing NCs I think, example 00:35:651 (3) - ? changed some yes
Otherwise-
are the SV changes necessary? Normal doesn't use any so it doesn't make sense spread-wise to use them in the lower diff. o.o since the normal diff and hard is not from me, i consider that this diff is made how i want, so i think it's not a problem for that, because there is not so much changes in speed, so i think it's okay ^^
00:57:154 (4) - imo the reverse doesn't fit well because the vocals stop on the reverse and there are some pretty dominant sounds afterwards that are completely ignored. :c I mean, yes they're all covered by the slider, but beats like 00:59:221 - and 00:59:634 - work better if clickable, imo. D: changed!
01:25:272 (4) - similar here, the last beat 01:26:926 - is too dominant to not have it clickable. :c changed
01:28:477 - useless green line?
deleted

Shi
00:00:503 (2,3) - 00:22:832 (1,2) - 00:36:065 (1,2) - I recommend unstacking them, because players have to stay at one place for a long time while the pace of the song doesn't change.. it works for other parts very very well (like 00:30:689 (1,2) - , that's matching nicely with the vocals/pace), but the three I listed up could be changed. reworked those parts yeah
00:29:035 (2,3) - how about shortening (2) by 1/2 and adding a circle between them? That would give a lot more emphasis to the vocals which should be focused on, imo.
absolutely, it feels great now !

I also changed the AudioLeadIn to 2000 as Modem told me :3

Thanks a lot Squichu for your help :33

Pachiru

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Pachiru 2016-09-11T14:25:58+00:00

Changed the background and resized.

Jasmine

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Jasmine 2016-09-13T16:06:27+00:00

Morsay's Rain

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 60048
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.4
Mode: 2
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.3
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 2.3

[Metadata]
Title:Kyoumu Densen (TV size)
TitleUnicode:凶夢伝染 (TV Size)
Artist:ALI PROJECT
ArtistUnicode:ALI PROJECT
Creator:Pachiru
Version:Morsay's Rain
Source:アナザー
Tags:anime gero unitedwesin intro horror
BeatmapID:0
BeatmapSetID:-1

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:8.5
ApproachRate:8.5
SliderMultiplier:1.4
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
Video,0,"Another OP.avi"
0,0,"bg osu.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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Gero

4,438 posts

Joined March 2012

Gero 2016-09-17T19:51:14+00:00

Gloria Guard

[Gero's Hard]

■ 00:13:322 (1,2,3) The sliders make sense a little awkward. I hope to change this sliders shape. Fixed.

SPOILER

Lami

Gero's Hard

00:08:773 (4) - use other hitsound? continue clap is feel little weird. Sure thing.

Xayler

Gero's Hard
00:16:837 - I feel like having a circle here plays better with the melody You're right.
00:18:491 - ^ Same as above.
00:21:178 (2,1) - maybe blanket them? I don't want to make a blanket at this part.
00:56:120 (2,3,4,5) - this place with the current stack leniency may be very disturbing to play imo It's not that difficult to notice that there are a loop, so no changes.

Ovoui

[Gero's Hard]

00:08:773 (4) - there's too much claps, it sounds weird Already changed.
00:14:976 (3) - it plays better if the slider ends on the previous white tick It's fine as is.
00:56:120 (2,3,4,5) - maybe a bit too hard to read for an hard diff Not at all.

Spork Lover

Gero's Hard

00:56:120 (2,3,4,5) - This is the only thing where I'm a little split, 'cause the 3,5 are two completely different sounds, so doing the back and forth like this doesn't seem like the best option (https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5987344) This could be an idea, but you could also just stack 5 with the slider end of the slider with/without the change of 4's position (https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5987351 or https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5987351) Changed.

Apart from that I like what you did, seems really nice :3

Chalwa

[Hard]

You have a Default skin set. Make it to "User preference" if it's only error It's intentional.
01:19:897 (1) - LUL??? XD o.o?

Modem

SPOILER

Gero's Hard
* Hi Gero

* Disable the Widescreen Support in this diff since there's no storyboard in this mapset

Fixed.

* How about changing the Stack Leniency in this diff into 4 to make it safer? Since 3 was too low >.< I like to use a low Stack Leniency in all of my maps.

* 00:08:773 (4), 00:08:980 (4), 00:09:083 (4) - Remove the clap from those part that I mentioned please. It doesn't fit the music well >.<. In my opinion, using the normal sampleset was more than enough to emphasize the drum from the main music Already changed.

* 00:13:735 (3) - Um, the reverse part of this slider was mostly covered by the slider frame of 00:13:322 (2) and made it unrankable. Please fix it >.<. How about changing the placement like this instead to avoid the overlap?

Same as above.

* 00:39:683 (2,3) - Their placement almost off from the screen during the play >.< ^

* Very awesome diff! But, too much triple click :'D

Squichu

Gero's Hard

Is preferred default skin intentional? o.o Yes it is.
00:00:296 - I miss emphasis on the sound here, you could try a 1/2 reverse? At least it should be different from 00:00:917 (4) - imo I don't want to break the symmetrycal pattern here, also I'm not the kind of mapper who use a lot of 1/2 in Hard difficulties.
00:12:908 (1,2,3) - can you re-arrange this so the reverse of (3) isn't covered by anything? :3 something similar to 01:10:799 (3,4,5) - maybe Sure, I've tried another thing, I hope is fine right now.
00:52:191 (1,2) - Is this intentional? Shouldn't (1) blanket previous circles? o.o It is.
01:05:424 (1) - Consider ending the slider earlier to emphasize the vocals starting at 01:06:664 - ? Feels a bit off while playing that there's something so dominant in the middle of an object, but there's nothing to emphasize it. Yeah, you're right, but I'm, not really feel well at destroy my slider just because vocals.
01:13:694 (1) - hmmh, the extended sliders (the folllowing ones as well) match the vocals nicely, but 1/2 slider + 2 circles would still play better, imo, because the circle feels more like it's disrupting the melody, if you have two circles it plays smoother tho and you'd still have everything emphasized. Alternatively, you could try using the same rhythm as in Shi > http://puu.sh/r5byb.jpg . It feels smoother to play as well, because it only uses sliders. Not at all, I think that two circles are perfectly playable and good enough for me.

Gero's Hard

osu file format v14

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Title:Kyoumu Densen (TV size)
TitleUnicode:凶夢伝染 (TV Size)
Artist:ALI PROJECT
ArtistUnicode:ALI PROJECT
Creator:Pachiru
Version:Gero's Hard
Source:アナザー
Tags:anime gero unitedwesin intro horror morsay
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Xinnoh

Elite Mapper

1,950 posts

Joined April 2014

Xinnoh 2016-09-18T05:21:31+00:00

Mod queue req for Moray's Rain.

And the usual no storyboard, no widescreen support needed thing.
00:00:090 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - "Combos should not exceed 12 objects including slider tails and repeats. Spinners are an exception." - CtB Ranking Criteria
You have 15 objects here and 15 the next combo too. Just go through the rest of your diff and add more NCs so none go over 12 to make it rankable.
00:02:364 (6,1) - 00:03:191 (2,3) - The second one is rising in tone, but is decreasing in distance. Swap the distance spacing between the two.
00:04:018 (4) - Distance snap should be slightly higher, disable grid snap and do it again
00:08:566 (5,6) - Too close, the back and forth before it makes it unnatural to have the next note so close
00:16:630 (5,1) - Wouldn't suggest having 1 directly on top of 5, maybe move the previous combo more left
00:25:520 (3) - Too far, there are no dash -> hyperdashes on this section. Keep the hyperdash if you want, but remove the dash before it.
00:29:138 (2) - There's no sound here to map.
00:44:128 (3) - Could bend the slider end up/down so it flows better
00:51:778 (4,5,1) - Make the distance constant for 4-5-1, or smaller from 4-5, and a bigger dash to 1
01:00:048 (7) - Same as 00:08:566 (5,6) -
01:14:521 (3,4) - 01:16:175 (3,4) - Having finishes on slider end -> slider finish doesn't really emphasis it, could change the slider rhythm to circles.
01:22:929 (3) - 01:24:858 (4) - Would suggest having these at the same angle. It's not for the same rhythm, but they're very close to each other and very similar, the player will expect to not need as much movement for the next slider
01:23:618 (1) - This might be too far from the previous slider

Kyuare

228 posts

Joined May 2013

Kyuare 2016-09-18T09:19:01+00:00

IRC mod for the CtB diff

Morsay's Rain

2016-09-18 10:57 Morsay: ( ya une diff + tv size :3 )
2016-09-18 10:57 Kyuare: par contre je peut la tester et te donner mon avis
2016-09-18 10:57 Morsay: je veux bien !
2016-09-18 10:59 Kyuare: c'est bien fait
2016-09-18 11:00 Morsay: merci ! :D
2016-09-18 11:01 Kyuare: y'a pas grand chose à dire, c'est propre, pas hyper répétitif
2016-09-18 11:01 Kyuare: juste pour les triplets comme 00:05:672 (2,3,4) - qui pourraient être plus espacés
2016-09-18 11:01 Morsay: Ouai j'ai beaucoup taffer :P
2016-09-18 11:02 Kyuare: ça sera plus fun à jouer et à regarder
2016-09-18 11:02 Morsay: okay okay je note :D
2016-09-18 11:02 Kyuare: c'est un peu facile pour une rain je trouve
2016-09-18 11:03 Morsay: enfaite
2016-09-18 11:03 Morsay: sur le gas a qui j'ai fait la Guest diff
2016-09-18 11:03 Morsay: il aurait pas tres chaud si j'aurais sortis une map a 4.50
2016-09-18 11:03 Kyuare: 4 pil poil pour une rain imo
2016-09-18 11:03 Kyuare: 4* ou 3.8
2016-09-18 11:03 Morsay: Du coup j'ai preferais m'adapter au SR de sont insane
2016-09-18 11:03 Morsay: ouai
2016-09-18 11:04 Morsay: aussi un autre truc
2016-09-18 11:04 Kyuare: là 3.3 c'est platter mdr
2016-09-18 11:04 Morsay: j'avais un mal fou a fair monter le Star diff
2016-09-18 11:04 Kyuare: j'vois
2016-09-18 11:04 Morsay: sans partir en "overmapping"
2016-09-18 11:04 Morsay: 70% de la musique ses un moment calme
2016-09-18 11:04 Morsay: donc je peut rien fair
2016-09-18 11:04 Kyuare: alors pour monter le star diff là
2016-09-18 11:04 Kyuare: tu peux ajouter des jumps là ou il pourrait en avoir
2016-09-18 11:04 Morsay: je serais obliger de spam sur le refrain et le debut
2016-09-18 11:04 Kyuare: je te file quelques exemple
2016-09-18 11:05 Kyuare: genre ici par exemple
2016-09-18 11:05 Kyuare: 00:16:423 (4,5) - 
2016-09-18 11:05 Kyuare: tu pourrais ajouter un jump, pas hyperdash mais juste un jump normal 
2016-09-18 11:05 Morsay: ouai bonne idée
2016-09-18 11:05 Kyuare: pareil pour 00:18:077 (4,5) - du coup
2016-09-18 11:06 Kyuare: 00:21:178 (2,3,4) - là par exemple tu pourrais mettre plus de spacing
2016-09-18 11:06 Morsay: okay okay
2016-09-18 11:06 Kyuare: 00:28:621 (1,2,3) - là fais gaffe le jump il est pas justifié
2016-09-18 11:07 Kyuare: y'a pas de son particulièrement fort mais on voit un gros hyper dash 1/4 x)
2016-09-18 11:07 Kyuare: fais juste un triplet normal
2016-09-18 11:07 Morsay: sa marche !
2016-09-18 11:08 Kyuare: 00:32:343 (1,2,3) - ce triplet il passe très bien pour une rain
2016-09-18 11:08 Kyuare: tu devrais faire comme ça pour les autres triplets qui sont pas assez gros
2016-09-18 11:08 Kyuare: celui là il est bien
2016-09-18 11:08 Morsay: ouai je le trouve bien aussi
2016-09-18 11:09 Morsay: et du coup je me demandais vue que je suis sur un mapset STD
2016-09-18 11:09 Morsay: Comment sa marche ? me faut aussi l'approve d'un BN ctb ?
2016-09-18 11:09 Kyuare: du coup je te laisse fix 01:01:082 (2,3,4) - 01:01:702 (5,6,7) - 
2016-09-18 11:09 Morsay: Ou alors seul les bubble de BN STD suffit ?
2016-09-18 11:09 Morsay: yep !

MMBan

135 posts

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MMBan 2016-09-18T17:21:19+00:00

Requested to

Ctb Diff
00:14:149 - Expand spinner to 00:15:596 - Idk if its good idea through
00:22:419 - New Combo
00:25:727 - New combo
00:36:546 - New combo here and remove on next slider on 00:38:959 -
01:09:972 - Remove middle square on slider and curve it ending to x132 y88

Rest looks ok. Didn't found a lot issues here

Pachiru

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Topic Starter

Pachiru 2016-09-18T17:32:08+00:00

Updated Gero's diff

xDarxen

313 posts

Joined July 2014

xDarxen 2016-09-18T19:10:12+00:00

Hey, M4M from your queue

[General]
One issue I have with most diffs is the emphasizing of sounds on downbeats and generally clickable sounds. I will explain what I mean below.

[Easy]

00:06:292 (4) - The problem with this, is that it ends where another sound starts. I mean, the loud sound ends on 00:06:602, but you end the slider at 00:06:706, which is inconsistent with what you mapped before. I suggest you cut the slider to the blue tick.
00:08:360 (2) - I'm pretty sure reverse sliders like these are too hard for easy diffs, especially since you didn't use it again in the map. You can replace it with a 1/1 slider like 00:07:533 (1).
00:14:149 (3) - This slider shape feels messy and doesn't look really good. Something like this would look better:

Referance
00:24:073 (2) - I don't know if it's intentional, but the right part is a bit longer than the left.
00:25:727 (2) - Shouldn't NC be here instead of 00:25:313 (1), since it's the downbeat and the vocal gets stronger?
00:28:622 (1,2) - ^^
00:38:546 (1,2) - ^^
00:41:854 (1,2) - ^^
00:55:086 (1,2) - ^^
01:00:048 - Why leave this empty? There are sounds here you shouldn't ignore. I suggest you add a circle at 01:00:048 and a 1/1 slider at 01:00:461 to fill the gap.
01:06:664 (1,2) - Here comes the downbeat thing I said in General. This 01:07:078 should be clickable, so it would be better if you switched their places.
01:19:896 (5) - The downbeat is not clickable again. What about cutting 01:19:896 (5) to 01:21:550. Then remove 01:22:377 (1,2) - and add 1/1 sliders at 01:22:377 and 01:23:204. Finally, add a 2/1 slider at 01:23:618. You will end up with something like this:

Referance
01:25:272 (4) - This ends nowhere. Sound ends at 01:25:892, so cut the slider.

[Shi]

This diff has mostly NC issues, I will note some below.

00:01:123 (1,1,1) - etc. I'm not a fan of passive sliders like these (red tick sliders), but if you keep them, you'll have to change some NCs. See below.
00:00:917 (5,1)
00:01:744 (4,1)
00:02:571 (4,1) etc.
You see, the strong sound is on the white ticks, not the red ticks, so adding NC on these sliders feels wierd.
00:08:773 (1,2) - Switch NCs, cause of downbeat.
Also these 00:09:807 (1,2,3). NCing 00:09:807 (1) does't make sense, so switch NC with 00:10:014 (3). Same with the others.
01:00:048 (1,2) - ^^
01:01:082 (1,2,3) - ^^
01:05:424 (1) - I understand you're mapping the vocals here, but what you do with this slider, is ignoring strong sounds like 01:05:424 - 01:05:837 - and 01:06:251 - which should be clickable. I suggest filling the part with 1/1 sliders, like this:

Reference
01:06:664 (1,2) - NCs ^^
01:07:698 (1,2,3) - ^^
That's it, I hope it wasn't so confusing Good luck!

Pachiru

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Topic Starter

Pachiru 2016-09-19T00:22:11+00:00

xDarxen wrote:
Hey, M4M from your queue

[General]
One issue I have with most diffs is the emphasizing of sounds on downbeats and generally clickable sounds. I will explain what I mean below.

[Easy]
00:06:292 (4) - The problem with this, is that it ends where another sound starts. I mean, the loud sound ends on 00:06:602, but you end the slider at 00:06:706, which is inconsistent with what you mapped before. I suggest you cut the slider to the blue tick. indeed, i changed it and replaced it by two circles.
00:08:360 (2) - I'm pretty sure reverse sliders like these are too hard for easy diffs, especially since you didn't use it again in the map. You can replace it with a 1/1 slider like 00:07:533 (1). nope, for me it's okay, since the BPM isn't high,I make it play to beginners, and apparently, this wasn't a problem, so I suppose that it's okay, but if someone told me to change that, then I will change it!
00:14:149 (3) - This slider shape feels messy and doesn't look really good. Something like this would look better: changed the shape, and make it looks like the slider you did! thanks for the screenshot!

Referance
00:24:073 (2) - I don't know if it's intentional, but the right part is a bit longer than the left.indeed, i don't know why, i tried to change it, but apparently it won't work, i did my best to change it !
00:25:727 (2) - Shouldn't NC be here instead of 00:25:313 (1), since it's the downbeat and the vocal gets stronger?changed all the next NC !
00:28:622 (1,2) - ^^
00:38:546 (1,2) - ^^
00:41:854 (1,2) - ^^
00:55:086 (1,2) - ^^
01:00:048 - Why leave this empty? There are sounds here you shouldn't ignore. I suggest you add a circle at 01:00:048 and a 1/1 slider at 01:00:461 to fill the gap. changed too, added circle + slider as you said thanks !
01:06:664 (1,2) - Here comes the downbeat thing I said in General. This 01:07:078 should be clickable, so it would be better if you switched their places.
01:19:896 (5) - The downbeat is not clickable again. What about cutting 01:19:896 (5) to 01:21:550. Then remove 01:22:377 (1,2) - and add 1/1 sliders at 01:22:377 and 01:23:204. Finally, add a 2/1 slider at 01:23:618. You will end up with something like this: erm... to be honest, it feels very well on this part as I did, I will contact BN for ask help, and I will change if it tell me to, thanks!

Referance
01:25:272 (4) - This ends nowhere. Sound ends at 01:25:892, so cut the slider. yep, i changed it and cut it on the red tick
[Shi]

This diff has mostly NC issues, I will note some below.
00:01:123 (1,1,1) - etc. I'm not a fan of passive sliders like these (red tick sliders), but if you keep them, you'll have to change some NCs. See below. I totally reworked this part, so I changed all the NC
00:00:917 (5,1)
00:01:744 (4,1)
00:02:571 (4,1) etc.
You see, the strong sound is on the white ticks, not the red ticks, so adding NC on these sliders feels wierd.
00:08:773 (1,2) - Switch NCs, cause of downbeat. changed too
Also these 00:09:807 (1,2,3). NCing 00:09:807 (1) does't make sense, so switch NC with 00:10:014 (3). Same with the others.changed all the following NCs !
01:00:048 (1,2) - ^^
01:01:082 (1,2,3) - ^^
01:05:424 (1) - I understand you're mapping the vocals here, but what you do with this slider, is ignoring strong sounds like 01:05:424 - 01:05:837 - and 01:06:251 - which should be clickable. I suggest filling the part with 1/1 sliders, like this: yeap, I added three 1/1 sliders!

Reference

01:06:664 (1,2) - NCs ^^
01:07:698 (1,2,3) - ^^
That's it, I hope it wasn't so confusing Good luck!
thanks a lot for your mod, it was a very interesting mod, you made me doubt about some things that I never noticed and I improved my diff with that, I appreciate it a lot, mamene. thanks !

Noffy

Nomination Assessment Team

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Joined April 2012

Noffy 2016-09-20T17:29:33+00:00

Hi, M4M from your queue
Hopefully helpful

[General]

Sin's Normal does not have video.

[Easy]

00:09:187 (1,2,3) - The current shapes for 1 and 3 seem a bit flat, how about adding some extra umph to the angle like this? http://puu.sh/rhO9B/d8f7fab162.jpg Blanket isn't perfect in screenshot but I hope you get the idea
00:16:630 (2,4) - These whistles seem a bit out of place, how about using soft whistles here instead?
00:24:073 (2) - The left side of the slider is visibly higher than the right and messes up the intended symmetry First try putting the red anchor right on the slider tick to ensure it's in the center of the slider, and then adjust the end to be at the same height as the start. Poof! Magic!
00:35:651 (1) - Try moving down and to the right a bit, so that the spacing of its ends to the ends of 00:34:411 (2) - are even? http://puu.sh/rhOGP/d3b5325c75.gif
00:38:959 (1,2,3) - The flow for these notes is pretty awkward since 1 is left to right before making a very harsh downward movement to reach 2. Consider revising, even if it may be difficult to do and preserve the symmetry in the pattern after.
00:47:229 (3,4) - Why not add a clap to the head of 4 to match how you hitsounded 00:45:575 (1,2) - ?
01:01:289 (1,2) - Flow here is a bit awkward since 2 is to the right of the curve that 1 was following, and then 3 throws the player back to the left. Could be fixed by changing 1's position.
01:05:424 (3) - Move the red point to overlap with the slider tick to ensure that the slider bounces in time with the song
01:19:896 (5) - The start of this slider is weirdly linear (especially with that right angle), maybe add some curves in? Idea
01:25:272 (4,5) - I don't think stacking on an easy is a good idea, especially when they're so far apart that osu doesn't auto stack. Could be very confusing to newer players "AW YEH MY FIRST FC- wait what I missed a note WHERE?"

[Sin's Normal]

Why is the stack leniency set to 3? It's causing things that should be stacked to not display as that like 00:21:592 (4,5) - or 00:25:313 (4,1) - or 00:33:997 (3,4) - etc
.9 spacing seems too small, especially considering that Easy used a higher DS of 1.0, and hard is far higher at 1.5
00:05:052 (5) - Feels unfitting as a reverse slider, consider making it a 1/1 slider instead, more similar to the previous combos.
00:11:254 (6) - Also feels unfitting as a reverse, but here that is mostly because the end of it is a very strong note that should preferably be clickabe
00:22:419 (1,2,3) - Try to revise it so that 3 cuts evenly in the middle of 1 and 2, rather than being more under 1 than it is under 2. Woah
00:42:267 (1,2) - The overlap in these two notes don't look too good. Maybe Ctrl+J 2 and move like so??
00:57:153 (1) - Maybe make a slider instead similar to the ones in Easy or Gero's hard, as this spinner feels a bit too short overall.
01:01:702 (5) - Consider making this a 1/2 slider like how you did at 01:03:356 (8) - , since these two bits in the song are incredibly similar.

[Gero's Hard]

I personally feel the two circle-slider stacks are overused, and look terrifying when this happens on shorter sliders like 00:03:191 (5,6,1) - or 00:11:461 (8,9,1) - since these sliders nearly get buried under the stack.
00:11:461 (8,9,1,2,3,4,5) - I reccomend using a rhythm like this instead, as the circles at the end of the slider does not fit right at all.
00:12:908 (1,2,3) - The finishes here are rather loud for how many there are, consider reducing the hitsound volume for these few notes.
00:29:035 (1,3) - These sliders are a bit weird, because they nearly look like they're just normal curved sliders. I suggest either -making them normal curved sliders -or exaggerating the straight vs curved parts to make it clearer that's the intended shape.
00:33:170 (3,4) - I think this would play better if these two were instead a slider like 00:33:583 (5) - so that they could match, especially because 00:33:377 (4) - does not feel like a note that should be clicked in the rhythms you have been using.
00:33:997 (1,2) - Maybe have two 1/2 sliders here instead, for the same reason that clicking on (2) feels awkward as it's a weaker note than the end of (1)
00:37:305 (5,6,7) - How about a rhythm like this instead, to follow the violin better?
00:47:953 (6,1) - I don't hear what these notes are mapped to? maybe this instead? I feel that suggested rhythm would work better with how the song goes really calm for a second there
00:51:261 (6,1) - This time around, these fit better as there is the more audible strings in the background. Nice~ (00:51:571 (2) - maybe get rid of this circle though, to better fit those same strings.)
01:05:424 (1) - OH MAN THAT'S A REALLY NICE SLIDER .. though it feels like it goes on for too long, since other vocals start up in the middle of it.
01:10:799 (3) - The reverse arrow is very heavily covered by the preceding 01:10:179 (5,6,1) - stack.

Ranking Criteria wrote:
All repeat arrows on sliders must be visible. Make sure that hitbursts (100s/300s/etc) from previous notes are not covering the repeat arrows or even the paths/ends of sliders (use the default skin to check if using hitbursts from another skin). This way, all sliders will be easily visible and playable. However, very short repeating sliders (e.g. 1/4 or 1/8 sliders, generally called "kick" sliders) only require the first repeat arrow to be visible (since it's nearly impossible to see any other repeats due to the short length and the cursor covering most of the visible space).

01:12:040 (1) - oh man, this slider is cool through and through.
01:19:896 (1) - Also very cool

[Shi]

Personal preference, but I think you overused the normal whistle hitsound in this difficulty. Look into maybe getting a similar but less annoying custom hitsound to take its place.
00:01:537 (1,2,3) - You have a lot of patterns like this, where the two circles and then the slider are positioned very linearly. In cases where the slider comes straight out of it (i.e. 00:05:672 (1,2,3) - ), it works. But when the slider is curved, especially when it's going perpendicular to the line of the hitcircles to the slider head, it feels a bit awkward and very angular. Why not consider making some of these throughout the map curved patterns like so instead? http://puu.sh/rhU80/3f956705cd.jpg Doing it this way can feel much more natural to play
00:10:634 (1) - Why is this NC'd? It happens several times throughout the diff. In these patterns, I suggest removing the nc from either the 00:10:634 (1) - first circle, or the 00:10:841 (1) - slider, so that groups of three 00:10:634 (1,2,1) - like these can be grouped by color too.
00:12:908 (1,2,3) - It sounds a bit loud to have so many finishes in a row, even when it fits. Maybe reduce the hitsound volume for this portion with an inherited timing point?
00:22:832 (1,4) - I dont think this stack works well, as this overall pattern ends up flowing awkwardly when the angles are so harsh. Consider revising to make it go around more smoothly.
00:45:575 (1,2,3,4,5) - Maybe ctrl+g 00:45:989 (2) - and 00:46:816 (4) - , so it goes more nicely back and forth? Quick comparison
00:48:883 (1,2,3,4,5) - Same suggestion as ^
01:04:597 (2,3) - Maybe make two 1/2 sliders instead, as I feel the end of 2 more deserves to be clickable than where 3 is, as it's a stronger sound in the vocals and the song overall.

Besides what I pointed out, I found this to be a really nice mapset, especially the Shi difficulty.
Good luck!

Pachiru

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Topic Starter

Pachiru 2016-09-20T22:37:55+00:00

Noffy wrote:
Hi, M4M from your queue
Hopefully helpful

[General]
Sin's Normal does not have video.
[Easy]
00:09:187 (1,2,3) - The current shapes for 1 and 3 seem a bit flat, how about adding some extra umph to the angle like this?http://puu.sh/rhO9B/d8f7fab162.jpg Blanket isn't perfect in screenshot but I hope you get the idea changed, and thanks for the idea, it's very noice!
00:16:630 (2,4) - These whistles seem a bit out of place, how about using soft whistles here instead?there is already soft samples
00:24:073 (2) - The left side of the slider is visibly higher than the right and messes up the intended symmetry First try putting the red anchor right on the slider tick to ensure it's in the center of the slider, and then adjust the end to be at the same height as the start. Poof! Magic!fixed
00:35:651 (1) - Try moving down and to the right a bit, so that the spacing of its ends to the ends of 00:34:411 (2) - are even? http://puu.sh/rhOGP/d3b5325c75.giffixed!
00:38:959 (1,2,3) - The flow for these notes is pretty awkward since 1 is left to right before making a very harsh downward movement to reach 2. Consider revising, even if it may be difficult to do and preserve the symmetry in the pattern after.changed too, there is more flow like that
00:47:229 (3,4) - Why not add a clap to the head of 4 to match how you hitsounded 00:45:575 (1,2) - ? added!
01:01:289 (1,2) - Flow here is a bit awkward since 2 is to the right of the curve that 1 was following, and then 3 throws the player back to the left. Could be fixed by changing 1's position.changed
01:05:424 (3) - Move the red point to overlap with the slider tick to ensure that the slider bounces in time with the song i agree, changed!
01:19:896 (5) - The start of this slider is weirdly linear (especially with that right angle), maybe add some curves in? Ideathat's the best idea i could ever see
01:25:272 (4,5) - I don't think stacking on an easy is a good idea, especially when they're so far apart that osu doesn't auto stack. Could be very confusing to newer players "AW YEH MY FIRST FC- wait what I missed a note WHERE?" haha i totally agree!
[Shi]
Personal preference, but I think you overused the normal whistle hitsound in this difficulty. Look into maybe getting a similar but less annoying custom hitsound to take its place.yup, i will see with a friend about new sample for this diff. thanks for pointing out that
00:01:537 (1,2,3) - You have a lot of patterns like this, where the two circles and then the slider are positioned very linearly. In cases where the slider comes straight out of it (i.e. 00:05:672 (1,2,3) - ), it works. But when the slider is curved, especially when it's going perpendicular to the line of the hitcircles to the slider head, it feels a bit awkward and very angular. Why not consider making some of these throughout the map curved patterns like so instead? http://puu.sh/rhU80/3f956705cd.jpg Doing it this way can feel much more natural to play it's the particularity of this map, so that's why i prefer to keep it like that, if it shows itself as a big problem, then I will change it
00:10:634 (1) - Why is this NC'd? It happens several times throughout the diff. In these patterns, I suggest removing the nc from either the 00:10:634 (1) - first circle, or the 00:10:841 (1) - slider, so that groups of three 00:10:634 (1,2,1) - like these can be grouped by color too.changed too!
00:12:908 (1,2,3) - It sounds a bit loud to have so many finishes in a row, even when it fits. Maybe reduce the hitsound volume for this portion with an inherited timing point?yep, reduced to 60 %
00:22:832 (1,4) - I dont think this stack works well, as this overall pattern ends up flowing awkwardly when the angles are so harsh. Consider revising to make it go around more smoothly. i added a small jump to keep some difficulty to this part
00:45:575 (1,2,3,4,5) - Maybe ctrl+g 00:45:989 (2) - and 00:46:816 (4) - , so it goes more nicely back and forth? Quick comparison changed, i accept that idea
00:48:883 (1,2,3,4,5) - Same suggestion as ^
01:04:597 (2,3) - Maybe make two 1/2 sliders instead, as I feel the end of 2 more deserves to be clickable than where 3 is, as it's a stronger sound in the vocals and the song overall.

Besides what I pointed out, I found this to be a really nice mapset, especially the Shi difficulty.
Good luck! Thank you a lot for giving such a complete mod, it's very useful, and you give a lot of changes in the Easy difficulty, I appreciate it a lot! I will mod your map ASAP !

Jasmine

103 posts

Joined April 2014

Jasmine 2016-09-21T09:08:08+00:00

Sinnoh wrote:
Mod queue req for Moray's Rain.
And the usual no storyboard, no widescreen support needed thing. Yes
00:00:090 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - "Combos should not exceed 12 objects including slider tails and repeats. Spinners are an exception." - CtB Ranking Criteria
You have 15 objects here and 15 the next combo too. Just go through the rest of your diff and add more NCs so none go over 12 to make it rankable. Fixed
00:02:364 (6,1) - 00:03:191 (2,3) - The second one is rising in tone, but is decreasing in distance. Swap the distance spacing between the two. True, changed
00:04:018 (4) - Distance snap should be slightly higher, disable grid snap and do it again Already changed by your previous mod.
00:08:566 (5,6) - Too close, the back and forth before it makes it unnatural to have the next note so close.I have try to made this less close
00:16:630 (5,1) - Wouldn't suggest having 1 directly on top of 5, maybe move the previous combo more left. Fixed
00:25:520 (3) - Too far, there are no dash -> hyperdashes on this section. Keep the hyperdash if you want, but remove the dash before it. Fixed
00:29:138 (2) - There's no sound here to map. Fixed
00:44:128 (3) - Could bend the slider end up/down so it flows better. No because i want keep the Hyperdash
00:51:778 (4,5,1) - Make the distance constant for 4-5-1, or smaller from 4-5, and a bigger dash to 1. Fixed
01:00:048 (7) - Same as 00:08:566 (5,6) - Fixed
01:14:521 (3,4) - 01:16:175 (3,4) - Having finishes on slider end -> slider finish doesn't really emphasis it, could change the slider rhythm to circles.I prefer to keep the slider in this section.
01:22:929 (3) - 01:24:858 (4) - Would suggest having these at the same angle. It's not for the same rhythm, but they're very close to each other and very similar, the player will expect to not need as much movement for the next slider. You can catch this two without movement, so i have only reduce a bit the angle of the first slider.
01:23:618 (1) - This might be too far from the previous slider.Fixed! you can catch this now without dash

MMBan wrote:
Requested to

Ctb Diff
00:14:149 - Expand spinner to 00:15:596 - Idk if its good idea through I prefer to keep the distance
00:22:419 - New Combo Fixed
00:25:727 - New combo Fixed
00:36:546 - New combo here and remove on next slider on 00:38:959 - Only combo fixed
01:09:972 - Remove middle square on slider and curve it ending to x132 y88 No i don't want made consecutive hyperdash

Rest looks ok. Didn't found a lot issues here

Thanks you all

Morsay's Rain

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 60048
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.4
Mode: 2
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.3
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 2.3

[Metadata]
Title:Kyoumu Densen (TV size)
TitleUnicode:凶夢伝染 (TV Size)
Artist:ALI PROJECT
ArtistUnicode:ALI PROJECT
Creator:Pachiru
Version:Morsay's Rain
Source:アナザー
Tags:anime gero unitedwesin intro horror morsay
BeatmapID:1081138
BeatmapSetID:480892

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:8.5
ApproachRate:8.5
SliderMultiplier:1.4
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
Video,0,"Another OP.avi"
0,0,"bg osu.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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CookieBite

1,483 posts

Joined August 2014

CookieBite 2016-09-21T13:36:52+00:00

Hi there, from your queue.

[Easy]

00:14:149 (3) - maybe move the first red nod onto one of the slider tick
00:35:651 (1) - it's just my though lol, add a curve?
00:35:651 (1,4) - maybe stack them?
00:41:440 (2) - move a bit right
01:12:040 (2) - same thing again, move that red nod

[Normal]

00:02:157 (5,6) - blanket?
00:02:984 (6,1) - ^
00:06:292 (7) - I don't like this, do this maybe
00:10:841 (5,7) - stack
00:35:237 (6,1) - blanket
00:35:651 (1,2) - since the slider is going to end at left hand side, I think it's better move the circle to that direction
00:37:305 (4,5) - blanket
00:43:094 (2) - ctrl+j?
01:12:867 (6) - weird slider for me

[Shi]

00:06:292 (1) - ctrl+g
00:42:267 (1,1) - stack onto the slider
01:06:251 (3,4) - it's weird that when 01:05:424 (1,2) - has a short distance between each other while these two just too far away

gl with your map!

Kowaii_ne

120 posts

Joined December 2012

Kowaii_ne 2016-09-21T15:07:31+00:00

From in-game mod request~
I hope you understand my English
[Rain]

00:02:777 (1) - I know you make this part regularly. But 00:01:950 (3) - this note is long distance. next pattern 00:02:777 (1) - too short distance.
So 00:02:777 (1) - Use Ctrl+G make long distance and make some anti-flow. it makes connect next pattern. notice hitsound
If you accept^ 00:04:431 (2,1) - slider tale move on left
Like this
00:16:630 (5) - I test with new pattern
pattern
If you like it 00:16:630 (5) - make slider with 1/6beat x:208, 00:16:836 (6) - make slider with 1/4beat x:80 and 00:17:457 (1,2,3,4,5,) - delete and copy this 00:15:803 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - and ctrl+v, ctrl+h in 00:17:457

I know it is Light Rain, so i suggest only pattern

. Please notice 00:02:777 suggestion

Pachiru

osu! Alumni

2,957 posts

Joined June 2013

Topic Starter

Pachiru 2016-09-21T22:16:28+00:00

CookieBite wrote:
Hi there, from your queue.

[Easy]
00:14:149 (3) - maybe move the first red nod onto one of the slider tick changed
00:35:651 (1) - it's just my though lol, add a curve? no it's okay like that
00:35:651 (1,4) - maybe stack them?no, because there is no reason to do it
00:41:440 (2) - move a bit right changed!
01:12:040 (2) - same thing again, move that red nodchanged too!

[Shi]
00:06:292 (1) - ctrl+g yep!
00:42:267 (1,1) - stack onto the slider no i can't due to distance snap.
01:06:251 (3,4) - it's weird that when 01:05:424 (1,2) - has a short distance between each other while these two just too far awaythe new vocals start here.

gl with your map!thanks <3

also added the last one thing on the Noffy's mod!

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