would nerf all diffs a bit from kantan to oni
the spread is like not bad, but difficulties are all harder than they should imo
[Julie's Beginner]
OD3
* 00:12:837 (9) - would make more sens as k, same vocal sound at - 00:23:624 (4) - where you used k.
* 00:31:713 (8) - refer to - 00:10:140 (8) -.
* 00:49:242 (8) - i would remove that one to keep the repeated 3 notes structures you use for this part .
* 00:58:006 (3) - maybe move it to - 00:59:354 - instead so it is more similar to what you did at the beginning for - 00:04:747 (3,4,5) -. both part the musicaly the same. same for - 01:08:792 (11) -.
* 01:16:208 (17) - remove ? to get the same break we have at - 01:05:421 - and - 00:11:489 -.
* 01:17:556 (18) - this has no reason to be a finisher if others are all normal notes, some spot like - 01:20:253 (20) - or - 01:22:949 (22) - deserve it more but if you don't put finishers on them then i suggest using no finisher at all here.
[chaica's Kantan]
OD3,5
* 00:06:770 (9,10) - remove ? needs break, especially before finishers.
* 00:21:601 (30) - remove ? => ddk d kkd d kdk=> xxx x xxx x xxx is more consistent. Also - 00:23:624 (33) - add finisher ? like at - 00:12:837 (21) -.
* 00:32:388 (42) - remove ? refer to previous suggestion.
* 00:35:084 (45) - remove ? break before odd rhythm, like at - 00:40:477 -.
* 01:00:702 (81,82) - remove ? refer to first suggestion. same for - 01:11:489 (102,103) -.
* 01:43:174 (9,10,11,12) - maybe slider or spinner instead ? lots of notes in a row ;_;
[Futsuu]
* 00:02:303 (2) -/ 00:02:977 (4) -/ 00:04:999 (2) -/ 00:05:758 (4) - i would remove those 4, makes the part awkward to play, if not kinda hard for a futsuu. This way you have more break, so instead you can add d at - 00:06:601 - and move - 00:06:769 (7) - to - 00:06:938 - to properly follow the song. If you do also remove - 00:07:106 (8) - to separate the previous rhythm from the following part.
* 00:39:635 (101) - remove ? consistency with - 00:45:028 -. Maybe you did not do it there because there were too many notes coming after but even at the first spot i think so it really is not necessary.
* For the whole kiai i heavily suggest to apply what i suggested for the beginning. It makes the rhythm much more clear to read, right now it feels too messy for beginners.
* 01:28:343 - ^ same for this part.
* 01:40:140 (93) -/ 01:41:489 (98) - i would remove those 2 again, same purpose ^.
* 01:49:073 (122) - uh why is this not at - 01:49:242 - instead ?
In case you don't like at all what i suggested for the beginning/kiais, i still suggest you to find another way to map those part with more breaks to properly separate the different type of rhythms.
[Senritsu's Muzukashii]
well there is one big issue, there is literaly no break in the whole difficulty.. kinda feels like density is the same everywhere, and somewhat different at similar parts uh ? (beginning/kiais mapped differently while they are the same).
Also lack of big notes, kiais beginning etc deserve some.
* 00:09:635 (34,35) - i would remove at least those 2 to get the break and because they are really not needed.
* 00:15:028 (55,56) -/ 00:17:725 (66,67) -/ 00:20:421 (79,80) -/ 00:23:118 (91,92) - ^ remove to get consistent break over this whole part which is like really calm and shouldn't get that much notes looking at the whole difficulty. Same for the following part (which is the same but you somewhat decided to add 1/4? well i don't really mind it but at least get those breaks..).
* 00:51:601 (232) - what about moving this to - 00:51:433 - and remove - 00:51:770 (233) - ? fits more the melody and add another short break.
* Kiai : i heavily suggest you to map it as you did at the beginning which is already hard enough lol, 1/4 are supposed to not be abused in muzukashii. Adding to the fact that those are mainly duplet following an odd rhythm. There are some really weird things right now like - 00:55:983 (250,251,252) - being so different than - 01:06:601 (300,301,302,303) - while those are literaly the same musicaly.
at least remove - 01:03:735 (289) - and - 01:14:522 (337) - for break parts if you don't change anything.
* 01:33:062 (421,422,423) - hmm why would you follow that weird sudden sound while the other k around are on the piano x_x only keep the k at the middle ?
* 01:37:444 (443,444,445,446,447,448,449,450) - well same here all the rest is normaly on the piano and then we have those notes i have like no idea what they follow. I suggest something like kkdd k 1/2 instead, which clearly fit the piano sound (all the rest removed, and maybe a spinner would do instead of the last k at - 01:38:286 - to cover all the piano sounds).
* 01:39:382 (452,453) - remove those 2 and add k at - 01:39:466 - instead ? sounds much more like it.
[Oni]
More Inner than Oni at that point x_x even with the muzu being slightly harder than it should be, this difficulty is like way harder already lol..
* 00:02:640 (5) -/ 00:03:652 (12) - i would remove those ones for example, they are not even needed following the song, and by doing this you are creating some sort of repetitive structure (x x xx) that repeat itself and is easier to understand. Then remove - 00:05:168 (22) - and - 00:05:337 (24) - too for the same reason.
* 00:11:489 (63,64,65,66,67) - i would just use a slider instead of all that and make the following dkddk a d d k 1/2 instead, it fits like much more the song lol. Idk where those kd kd come from at this sounds like some monocolor full 1/4 stream here.
* 00:34:410 - well from here it's kinda messy again, i really dont get what those patterns are following lol.. example for - 00:34:410 - to - 00:35:758 - :
something like that instead at least fits the melody, right now i honestly have no idea what that ddkdd stands for. And then for the following notes from - 00:35:758 - to - 00:37:107 - i would do something like that :
d d dd _ k k kk _ k D, pretty simple to read and fits the song better imo. Well if you got my point there try to apply it for this whole section, big notes spam are fine. Like basically until - 00:50:590 - this really needs to get more breaks and simpler patterns. Right know honestly it feels like random patterns all the way while playing it.
* kiais : refer to my first suggestion as the beginning of the song is like kiais musicaly (you could probably even add a kiai section there btw uh?).
* 01:33:315 (122) - i would remove that one, really not needed.
* 01:40:393 (33) - welp move this to - 01:40:562 - instead ?
The issue in this Oni is that i think you tried to follow the piano melody while keeping not too long patterns, espcially noticeable in that last kiai section x_x. The result is just awkward imo, i would rather focus more on the normal rhythm or find some repetitive structure that still fit, and use sliders to cover some long piano note parts instead.
[TK'S Inner Oni]
good luck
the spread is like not bad, but difficulties are all harder than they should imo
[Julie's Beginner]
OD3
* 00:12:837 (9) - would make more sens as k, same vocal sound at - 00:23:624 (4) - where you used k.
* 00:31:713 (8) - refer to - 00:10:140 (8) -.
* 00:49:242 (8) - i would remove that one to keep the repeated 3 notes structures you use for this part .
* 00:58:006 (3) - maybe move it to - 00:59:354 - instead so it is more similar to what you did at the beginning for - 00:04:747 (3,4,5) -. both part the musicaly the same. same for - 01:08:792 (11) -.
* 01:16:208 (17) - remove ? to get the same break we have at - 01:05:421 - and - 00:11:489 -.
* 01:17:556 (18) - this has no reason to be a finisher if others are all normal notes, some spot like - 01:20:253 (20) - or - 01:22:949 (22) - deserve it more but if you don't put finishers on them then i suggest using no finisher at all here.
[chaica's Kantan]
OD3,5
* 00:06:770 (9,10) - remove ? needs break, especially before finishers.
* 00:21:601 (30) - remove ? => ddk d kkd d kdk=> xxx x xxx x xxx is more consistent. Also - 00:23:624 (33) - add finisher ? like at - 00:12:837 (21) -.
* 00:32:388 (42) - remove ? refer to previous suggestion.
* 00:35:084 (45) - remove ? break before odd rhythm, like at - 00:40:477 -.
* 01:00:702 (81,82) - remove ? refer to first suggestion. same for - 01:11:489 (102,103) -.
* 01:43:174 (9,10,11,12) - maybe slider or spinner instead ? lots of notes in a row ;_;
[Futsuu]
* 00:02:303 (2) -/ 00:02:977 (4) -/ 00:04:999 (2) -/ 00:05:758 (4) - i would remove those 4, makes the part awkward to play, if not kinda hard for a futsuu. This way you have more break, so instead you can add d at - 00:06:601 - and move - 00:06:769 (7) - to - 00:06:938 - to properly follow the song. If you do also remove - 00:07:106 (8) - to separate the previous rhythm from the following part.
* 00:39:635 (101) - remove ? consistency with - 00:45:028 -. Maybe you did not do it there because there were too many notes coming after but even at the first spot i think so it really is not necessary.
* For the whole kiai i heavily suggest to apply what i suggested for the beginning. It makes the rhythm much more clear to read, right now it feels too messy for beginners.
* 01:28:343 - ^ same for this part.
* 01:40:140 (93) -/ 01:41:489 (98) - i would remove those 2 again, same purpose ^.
* 01:49:073 (122) - uh why is this not at - 01:49:242 - instead ?
In case you don't like at all what i suggested for the beginning/kiais, i still suggest you to find another way to map those part with more breaks to properly separate the different type of rhythms.
[Senritsu's Muzukashii]
well there is one big issue, there is literaly no break in the whole difficulty.. kinda feels like density is the same everywhere, and somewhat different at similar parts uh ? (beginning/kiais mapped differently while they are the same).
Also lack of big notes, kiais beginning etc deserve some.
* 00:09:635 (34,35) - i would remove at least those 2 to get the break and because they are really not needed.
* 00:15:028 (55,56) -/ 00:17:725 (66,67) -/ 00:20:421 (79,80) -/ 00:23:118 (91,92) - ^ remove to get consistent break over this whole part which is like really calm and shouldn't get that much notes looking at the whole difficulty. Same for the following part (which is the same but you somewhat decided to add 1/4? well i don't really mind it but at least get those breaks..).
* 00:51:601 (232) - what about moving this to - 00:51:433 - and remove - 00:51:770 (233) - ? fits more the melody and add another short break.
* Kiai : i heavily suggest you to map it as you did at the beginning which is already hard enough lol, 1/4 are supposed to not be abused in muzukashii. Adding to the fact that those are mainly duplet following an odd rhythm. There are some really weird things right now like - 00:55:983 (250,251,252) - being so different than - 01:06:601 (300,301,302,303) - while those are literaly the same musicaly.
at least remove - 01:03:735 (289) - and - 01:14:522 (337) - for break parts if you don't change anything.
* 01:33:062 (421,422,423) - hmm why would you follow that weird sudden sound while the other k around are on the piano x_x only keep the k at the middle ?
* 01:37:444 (443,444,445,446,447,448,449,450) - well same here all the rest is normaly on the piano and then we have those notes i have like no idea what they follow. I suggest something like kkdd k 1/2 instead, which clearly fit the piano sound (all the rest removed, and maybe a spinner would do instead of the last k at - 01:38:286 - to cover all the piano sounds).
* 01:39:382 (452,453) - remove those 2 and add k at - 01:39:466 - instead ? sounds much more like it.
[Oni]
More Inner than Oni at that point x_x even with the muzu being slightly harder than it should be, this difficulty is like way harder already lol..
* 00:02:640 (5) -/ 00:03:652 (12) - i would remove those ones for example, they are not even needed following the song, and by doing this you are creating some sort of repetitive structure (x x xx) that repeat itself and is easier to understand. Then remove - 00:05:168 (22) - and - 00:05:337 (24) - too for the same reason.
* 00:11:489 (63,64,65,66,67) - i would just use a slider instead of all that and make the following dkddk a d d k 1/2 instead, it fits like much more the song lol. Idk where those kd kd come from at this sounds like some monocolor full 1/4 stream here.
* 00:34:410 - well from here it's kinda messy again, i really dont get what those patterns are following lol.. example for - 00:34:410 - to - 00:35:758 - :
something like that instead at least fits the melody, right now i honestly have no idea what that ddkdd stands for. And then for the following notes from - 00:35:758 - to - 00:37:107 - i would do something like that :
d d dd _ k k kk _ k D, pretty simple to read and fits the song better imo. Well if you got my point there try to apply it for this whole section, big notes spam are fine. Like basically until - 00:50:590 - this really needs to get more breaks and simpler patterns. Right know honestly it feels like random patterns all the way while playing it.
* kiais : refer to my first suggestion as the beginning of the song is like kiais musicaly (you could probably even add a kiai section there btw uh?).
* 01:33:315 (122) - i would remove that one, really not needed.
* 01:40:393 (33) - welp move this to - 01:40:562 - instead ?
The issue in this Oni is that i think you tried to follow the piano melody while keeping not too long patterns, espcially noticeable in that last kiai section x_x. The result is just awkward imo, i would rather focus more on the normal rhythm or find some repetitive structure that still fit, and use sliders to cover some long piano note parts instead.
[TK'S Inner Oni]
won't bother the TKS
_ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _im proud of the fc in fact lol.... hard patterns at the end wow
good luck