this is my first mod in 3 months
How about using slightly lower SV in the beginning and upping it to x1.0 at 00:47:816? Could be a neat effect.
00:33:592 and 00:41:351 - break these two strings of 1/2s up? It's the beginning of the song, good to have a bit lower density; also the drumming in the music has a very interesting syncopated rhythm that's lost with just a continuous 1/2 pattern. I'd suggest removing 00:34:756 (25) and 00:43:032 (51) since the hihat's almost inaudible anyways
01:02:299 - sounds a bit weird as of right now like nardo mentioned... maybe DD DK KD KK?
01:09:022 (25) - oh hey you could delete this and instead put a d at 01:11:092 so it'll be consistent with 01:04:885 and 01:06:954
01:14:066 - add d for vocals except you're probably gonna reject this anyways because you don't follow vocals fuck
01:22:471 (9,10,11,12) - you could do something different for the middle one because the same pattern repeated for 3 times might be a bit boring imo
01:32:428 (5) - k? rip vocals
01:45:360 (18) - k to follow 01:44:842 (15); also 03:06:437 follows a similar pattern and 03:08:118 (45) is a k, so it would be consistent to match that
01:52:989 - yeah how about this?
02:04:627 (129) - K to match 02:02:558 (117)
02:06:696 (143) - ^
02:08:765 (155) - ^
02:11:739 (5) - ???? no sound in music? I don't think an auxiliary note is required either, the rhythm's perfectly fine as is
02:20:920 - DDDDKKKKDDKKDDKK so the pattern grows in intensity
02:50:274 - like 01:02:299, DK KD would be my suggestion
02:55:833 - you could add something here, like make it d k d perhaps
03:09:670 (1) and 03:11:739 (12) - like 02:11:739 (5)
03:22:924 - add a k here for the flute, might want to delete 03:23:053 (73) too if you decide to add the note
03:30:748 (68) - k to give some oomph to the guitar (also to match k structure for 03:29:455 (55,57,60) but that's just me nitpicking)
03:35:791 (17) - k for the high pitched drum
03:50:145 (119) - wait, no finishers this time? see 02:04:627
03:59:326 (5) - eh
04:08:506 - ehh
04:33:333 - ehhh
04:29:584 (19) - k for vocals ._.
00:33:592 and 00:41:351 - break these two strings of 1/2s up? It's the beginning of the song, good to have a bit lower density; also the drumming in the music has a very interesting syncopated rhythm that's lost with just a continuous 1/2 pattern. I'd suggest removing 00:34:756 (25) and 00:43:032 (51) since the hihat's almost inaudible anyways
01:02:299 - sounds a bit weird as of right now like nardo mentioned... maybe DD DK KD KK?
01:09:022 (25) - oh hey you could delete this and instead put a d at 01:11:092 so it'll be consistent with 01:04:885 and 01:06:954
01:14:066 - add d for vocals except you're probably gonna reject this anyways because you don't follow vocals fuck
01:22:471 (9,10,11,12) - you could do something different for the middle one because the same pattern repeated for 3 times might be a bit boring imo
01:32:428 (5) - k? rip vocals
01:45:360 (18) - k to follow 01:44:842 (15); also 03:06:437 follows a similar pattern and 03:08:118 (45) is a k, so it would be consistent to match that
01:52:989 - yeah how about this?
02:04:627 (129) - K to match 02:02:558 (117)
02:06:696 (143) - ^
02:08:765 (155) - ^
02:11:739 (5) - ???? no sound in music? I don't think an auxiliary note is required either, the rhythm's perfectly fine as is
02:20:920 - DDDDKKKKDDKKDDKK so the pattern grows in intensity
02:50:274 - like 01:02:299, DK KD would be my suggestion
02:55:833 - you could add something here, like make it d k d perhaps
03:09:670 (1) and 03:11:739 (12) - like 02:11:739 (5)
03:22:924 - add a k here for the flute, might want to delete 03:23:053 (73) too if you decide to add the note
03:30:748 (68) - k to give some oomph to the guitar (also to match k structure for 03:29:455 (55,57,60) but that's just me nitpicking)
03:35:791 (17) - k for the high pitched drum
03:50:145 (119) - wait, no finishers this time? see 02:04:627
03:59:326 (5) - eh
04:08:506 - ehh
04:33:333 - ehhh
04:29:584 (19) - k for vocals ._.
I hope I didn't forget how to mod