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[General]
[N/A's Normal]
[Final Words]
Great song, Solid Diff, like really i enjoyed playing all of these
Good Luck from me!!
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[General]
- Inconsistencies in Combo Colours -
- Idk why, but the AR for N/A's Normal is just too big imo, since its <2* i would recommend changing it to 4, or 4,2. Since almost AR 5 is kinda a killer imo, taking the fact it's the easiest diff in the set
- Not sure if I'm correct but +18 warning could go in the description since the word "fucked" appears in the second kiai. You'll probably laugh xd
- ~-20 feels more accurate to me, but that might just be me (64)
- (looking at Pishi's) - 00:06:781 (2) - you could put a whistle here to go with the nice pattern of whistles that went with 00:04:012 (2,2,2) -
[N/A's Normal]
- 00:03:089 (2,3) - this movemt feels kinda weird imo, it's really sharp, like everything goes in a sort of flowish pattern before this , everything is aranged so that it follows that like 00:00:089 (1,2) - .I would consider rotating some stuffs, since it's just before the break it woudn't really make a difference in terms of difficulty in re-arrangement, if you accept this then make the slider-end of 00:03:781 (1) - end at the beginning of 00:07:473 (1) - would be pretty cool i guess
- 00:11:165 (1) - comparing this to 00:03:781 (1) - is damn, the difference is so big :/ Consider making this some sort of slider art shape, unless you like it ofc, although leaving it like that ruins the visuals compared to the first slider imo
- 00:53:973 (2,3) - you could in actuall fact blanket these if you wished, would add some nice visuals
- 01:18:781 (2,1) - you could blanket this since the reverse arrow woudn't make a difference in terms of DS, either that or make the curve go the other way so that it sort of creates a somewhat circle with 01:17:627 (1) -
- 01:28:704 (1) - > hmm i don't understand why you decrease the DS in the more intense part
- 00:04:012 (2) - <3
- 00:17:627 (4,5) - please don't use double stacks on hards >_>, it's like something that i strugled with so much in insanes/even extras at some ranks back in the day, and holy it was so annoying, trust me here bonsai use a 1/4 slider here instead, it'll catch both of the same sounds and it will be soo much easier to play. All the beginners will thank you for this
- 00:19:012 - consider adding a break since there's no vocals only the guitar which could be ignored, also breaks are really good in easier diffs :^) and i understand the previous parts without breaks, but this is almost 4 measures of nothing :/
- 00:26:165 - here a break would be good too, here it would have been even better since there would have been a pause and a nice calm welcome into the pre-chorus part
- 00:29:627 (1,2,3) - > i strugle to understand why you would choose to map to the vocals here, since the guitar is 10x stronger, also the vocals fade away into the guitar. On sliders like these 00:34:935 (3) - it sounds sooo off, and weird to play, since there's a strong af guitar sound on the white tick. Ofc i understand that vocals don't appear later and you want to prioritize them here... please don't :^)
- 00:13:936 (2,1) - you could fix this blanket here
- 00:32:858 (2) - you could actually increase the SV of this one since the vocals are somewhat intensifying more, would fit really good imo, 0,4 works great
- 00:34:935 - you could in actuall fact add a note here (stacked) to follow the 'line' vocal
- 00:36:550 (2) - same here with increasing SV ^^
- 00:57:089 (2) - you could ctrl + g this and place it at (for example) x:176 y:200 since then it will follow a pattern with 00:55:012 (1,2) - since they are anti-flow and they follow the same sounds as 00:56:858 (1,2) - (guitar) so this could work really nicely imo
- 01:02:396 (3) - i would NC this since for readability, but that's just my thing lo
- 01:04:935 (2) - hmm a 1/2 slider and a note on the white tick instead would work better than this 1/1 slider, would follow the drums really nicelly here
- 01:42:781 (1,1,1) - i don't really think this deserves a NC spam as such since players will realise /and or expect slower sliders since they were used a lot in the chorus, so this NC spam is really unnecessary imo, also this wouldn't cause slider breaks as such since they aren't that slow of a difference only 0.25
- 00:25:012 (1,2) - this should get a lot more emphasis because of the vocals and the sounds are fairly similar to the previous patterns as well
- 00:26:165 (2,2) - you could blanket these rather than leaving a big slider like that without any point of being there, since imo everything should be placed with a reason and this right there doesn't have one imo, it looks to me as if it was randomly placed, although i know it wasn't that's just how i see it lo
- 00:44:396 (1,2) - ^
- 01:00:781 (5,6) - this weird 'drop' of notes plays horribly imo, try something like thisit's still a triangle pattern just plays much better, if you change this it will also follow a zig zag pattern with 01:00:550 (3,4,5,6) -
- 01:22:242 (1,2) - right so here you could ctrl +g both of these [url]to make them look like this[/url], this change will make a pattern with 01:21:781 (3,4,1,2) - since it'll be once flow 01:21:781 (3,4) - and one anti-flow 01:22:242 (1,2) - , and to finish it off 01:22:704 (1,2) - ctrl + g these as well so that they look like this this will finish the pattern off with another hitting flow (also adds a huge boost to emphasis on the vocals)
- 01:54:781 (1) - you could make this note blanket this 01:54:319 (4,5,6) - for a nicer cicular flow
damn the horrible joke genre reached a new highpoint thanks to me :^)
- 00:01:473 (5) - you could make this a ctrl +h copy of 00:01:012 (4) - aesthetics would be improved here in that way
- 00:29:627 (1) - > consider making these a little bit quieter since hearing the nice guitar/vocal sounds is much nicer than hearing annoying clicks imo
Good Luck from me!!