Ryu* feat.Mayumi Morinaga - Din Don Dan · forum

polka

Joined March 2014

polka 2016-07-03T17:41:52+00:00

Hard:

00:18:601 (3,4) - You could blanket (4)'s tail with (3).

00:20:744 (3,1) - Blanket could be further perfected.

00:21:172 (1,2) - ^

00:30:172 (1,2) - ^

00:33:601 (1,2) - You should make these parallel. (2) is slightly tilted further to the left.

00:40:030 (6,1) - Blanketing could use some touching up.

00:42:172 (1,2,3,4,5) - Consider simplifying this, as star patterns are a more advanced technique.

00:43:458 (1,2) - This spacing is unnecessary in my opinion.

00:49:030 (1,1) - NCs aren't doing anything for this part.

00:52:458 (1,1) - ^

00:55:458 (3) - You could ctrl + g this for some crazy good flow.

00:57:601 (1,1) - NCs are purposeless here.

01:01:030 (1,1,1) - For these parts, it would look better if you spaced them out using distance snap. It would also make the map more fun and not feel so cramped.

01:18:387 (2) - Why not that have same intensity of the curve like in (5)?

01:20:744 (3) - Move this one to the left to better follow the flow of the previous slider.

01:21:172 (5,1,2,3) - This part feels cramped. The prettiness feels forced. I suggest you redo this so it doesnt feel so snug around there.

01:26:744 (1) - kiai flash would be nice here.

01:39:601 (3,4,5,6,1) - Again with the intensity.

Ding Dong Ditch:

00:12:172 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Back and forth repeats sliders would be nice in place of these. This death stream seems highly unnecessary. It feels like overkill.

00:13:887 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^

00:23:101 (6,1) - Blanket these.

00:24:601 (5,2) - This overlap is unsightly, consider moving the circle pattern to fix this.

00:31:030 (3) - Slider tail lands on a noise in the song that I would rather see clickable.

00:34:458 (3) - ^

00:35:637 (2,3) - This should be a triplet. Its called for in the music.

01:22:458 (5,6) - The shape of this slider isn't doing anything special. Just use a flat slider.

01:23:315 (1,2) - Blanket the tail of (2) with (1).

01:26:315 (5,6,1) - Flow is very poor here. Consider moving (1) down so that way (5) and (6) dont point in a completely different direction of the next object.

01:32:208 (2,3) - A noise on the red tick. This would play much better as a triplet.

01:32:744 (5,6,7) - Split isn't necessary. This is a little overdone and isn't consistent with the rest of the song.

Nice storyboard. Good luck.

Yorita Yoshino

370 posts

Joined April 2014

Yorita Yoshino 2016-07-04T10:21:05+00:00

[ClariS's light insane]

00:27:172 (2) - ctrl+g，00:27:601 (3) - 另外摆可能会好一点我会改的但是ctrl+G难度太大了吧
00:45:601 (1) - 00:52:458 (1) - 去掉一个reverse换成圈恩

感觉 flow挺多地方都不太顺，不过还是算了吧不懂flow....
[/quote]

LeVe1N1Ne wrote:
[ClariS' insane]

~~这几个串好像不止3.86星（~~
00:26:208 - 这个音可以做跟vocal 还有 01:22:780 - 01:36:494 -和类似的一些地方不做的话节奏有点单调..^
00:37:887 (4) - ctrl+g试试？fix
01:29:744 (6,7) - ctrl+gfix

moonlightleaf

2,155 posts

Joined September 2011

Topic Starter

moonlightleaf 2016-07-04T11:01:57+00:00

PolkaMocha wrote:

mod
Hard:

00:18:601 (3,4) - You could blanket (4)'s tail with (3).

00:20:744 (3,1) - Blanket could be further perfected.

00:21:172 (1,2) - ^

00:30:172 (1,2) - ^

00:33:601 (1,2) - You should make these parallel. (2) is slightly tilted further to the left.

00:40:030 (6,1) - Blanketing could use some touching up. ---??

00:42:172 (1,2,3,4,5) - Consider simplifying this, as star patterns are a more advanced technique. ---i like this ,so keep

00:43:458 (1,2) - This spacing is unnecessary in my opinion. ---no problem here

00:49:030 (1,1) - NCs aren't doing anything for this part. --- if u back and look my reply , u can learn this ant-jump at Hard-diff , DS change to this is more fun than you use the same DS in whole map , u will know that

00:52:458 (1,1) - ^ --^

00:55:458 (3) - You could ctrl + g this for some crazy good flow. ---do something other

00:57:601 (1,1) - NCs are purposeless here. ---same as above

01:01:030 (1,1,1) - For these parts, it would look better if you spaced them out using distance snap. It would also make the map more fun and not feel so cramped. ---^

01:18:387 (2) - Why not that have same intensity of the curve like in (5)? ---???

01:20:744 (3) - Move this one to the left to better follow the flow of the previous slider.

01:21:172 (5,1,2,3) - This part feels cramped. The prettiness feels forced. I suggest you redo this so it doesnt feel so snug around there. ---do something other

01:26:744 (1) - kiai flash would be nice here. ---no , here is clam than before , so don't fit here to start the kiai flash

01:39:601 (3,4,5,6,1) - Again with the intensity. ---same as before

Ding Dong Ditch:

00:12:172 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Back and forth repeats sliders would be nice in place of these. This death stream seems highly unnecessary. It feels like overkill. ---it is no hard to play in 140BPM , and it fit in music

00:13:887 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^ ^

00:23:101 (6,1) - Blanket these. ---it is blanketed , but F5 will no blanket i don't know why

00:24:601 (5,2) - This overlap is unsightly, consider moving the circle pattern to fix this. ---nvm

00:31:030 (3) - Slider tail lands on a noise in the song that I would rather see clickable. --- on purpose

00:34:458 (3) - ^ ^

00:35:637 (2,3) - This should be a triplet. Its called for in the music. ^

01:22:458 (5,6) - The shape of this slider isn't doing anything special. Just use a flat slider. ---the music has ,like "a ~ a~" so it useful

01:23:315 (1,2) - Blanket the tail of (2) with (1).

01:26:315 (5,6,1) - Flow is very poor here. Consider moving (1) down so that way (5) and (6) dont point in a completely different direction of the next object. ---it playable, since no hard ,just keep first,

01:32:208 (2,3) - A noise on the red tick. This would play much better as a triplet. --- on purpose

01:32:744 (5,6,7) - Split isn't necessary. This is a little overdone and isn't consistent with the rest of the song. --- on purpose

Nice storyboard. Good luck.

no reply = fix

thank you

, also update GD-diff

Adol Christin

875 posts

Joined October 2012

Adol Christin 2016-07-04T14:40:49+00:00

本来歌就挺洗脑的。还弄个雨刮，注意力几下就被sb抽走啦 - -

二妹的叮咚蛋

00:31:030 (3) - 虽然现在这样也可以，但拆成俩单点的话感觉比滑条四连绕更有趣来着。00:34:458 (3) - 同理
00:40:030 (7,8) - 这两个我觉得把间距拉近要比拉远好，因为它们对应的部分比较弱，拉近会显得更合曲
00:35:530 - 感觉你大概是故意的，但我还是觉得改成三连的好。因为那个位置是有音的，强行二连感觉不好。00:35:637 (2,3) - 00:45:922 (2,3) - 等等等等也同理
00:23:101 (6,1) - 没包好
00:48:172 (3,4,5,6,1,2) - 为了美观，我觉得可以这样微调：让3-6都等间距组成个菱形，以及让2把4包起来

激光

00:09:601 (1,2,3) - 我个人非常不喜欢这种贴紧了的包裹，看着很挤，而且间距跟前后对比也不搭。如果不想重新放，简单点改的话，把上下两个滑条适当拉远，下面那根的头叠在1的头上，然后再重新包好。
00:45:172 (5,1) - 稍微微调下角度吧，像这样，看着舒服些
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01:27:601 (3,4,5) - 这个间距跟前后相同的部分相比显得不太协调。试试这个？
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人哥

哇好久不见cs5的图了。挺有意思。
00:21:172 (5) - 把这个放在滑条尾右侧，跟滑条尾构成一条直线吧。这样能适当拉开5与下一个三连的间距，会好判断一些。

Hard

01:21:601 (1,2,3) - 试试这个，这样的话1和前面的5一起看着会更舒服些。
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没了。二妹这个主难度感觉全程都在绕圈。也不能说有啥问题，不过如果开sb的话打着打着注意力就被sb夺走了，真的。

moonlightleaf

2,155 posts

Joined September 2011

Topic Starter

moonlightleaf 2016-07-06T05:54:04+00:00

Adol Christin wrote:
本来歌就挺洗脑的。还弄个雨刮，注意力几下就被sb抽走啦 - -

二妹的叮咚蛋
00:31:030 (3) - 虽然现在这样也可以，但拆成俩单点的话感觉比滑条四连绕更有趣来着。00:34:458 (3) - 同理 --k
00:40:030 (7,8) - 这两个我觉得把间距拉近要比拉远好，因为它们对应的部分比较弱，拉近会显得更合曲--k
00:35:530 - 感觉你大概是故意的，但我还是觉得改成三连的好。因为那个位置是有音的，强行二连感觉不好。00:35:637 (2,3) - 00:45:922 (2,3) - 等等等等也同理 ---我保留2连
00:23:101 (6,1) - 没包好 --k stack 的锅
00:48:172 (3,4,5,6,1,2) - 为了美观，我觉得可以这样微调：让3-6都等间距组成个菱形，以及让2把4包起来--k

Hard
01:21:601 (1,2,3) - 试试这个，这样的话1和前面的5一起看着会更舒服些。 ---我换直滑条
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没了。二妹这个主难度感觉全程都在绕圈。也不能说有啥问题，不过如果开sb的话打着打着注意力就被sb夺走了，真的。---原来在绕圈啊,绕圈挺好的,sb感觉有点那啥= =不是很中意

感谢

Karen

2,860 posts

Joined August 2013

Karen 2016-07-06T10:31:18+00:00

Wishkey

Wishkey wrote:
Karen
00:10:672 (5,6,7) - bit weird to stack these with such a change in the music on (7) imo it would still be weird if i space them
00:50:315 (6,7) - can make these stand more from the rest in this pattern since you hitsounded them aswell, maybe increase the spacing from 00:50:101 (5,6) - a bit i wanted to make 00:50:101 (5,6,7) - this a single pattern to fit with the music
01:26:744 (1,2,3,4,5) - bit weird this is all the same DS compared to all your other similar parts, would emphasize 01:27:601 (4) - here like in similar patterns dunno how to change here
01:34:458 (4) - ^
nice diff!

Sword

[Crz]Sword wrote:
[人格]
~~你们的cs一个比一个小~~
00:29:744 (10) - 可以NC，比较下hard这里的NC下法
00:55:030 (4,5,6,7) - 做一个4 7在下面 5 6 在上面的排列打起来大概会更顺手点，01:09:601 (1) - 大概就这种形状的，现在5 6 7一条直线有点难打这里567跟的音跟其他地方的不一样，所以排列也不一样，一条直线很容易让这个声音跟其他地方区分开

Adol Christin

Adol Christin wrote:
人哥
哇好久不见cs5的图了。挺有意思。
00:21:172 (5) - 把这个放在滑条尾右侧，跟滑条尾构成一条直线吧。这样能适当拉开5与下一个三连的间距，会好判断一些。感觉三连的地方没必要扩大间距

thank you!

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二妹的sb好棒，但是感觉歌词大小写有点奇怪，d是小写，但是I就变成大写了，感觉要统一一下

moonlightleaf

2,155 posts

Joined September 2011

Topic Starter

moonlightleaf 2016-07-07T09:04:14+00:00

Karen wrote:
二妹的sb好棒，但是感觉歌词大小写有点奇怪，d是小写，但是I就变成大写了，感觉要统一一下 ---应该说的是那个"do" 的"d"吧? 换成 "Do" 了

updated ,艾斯比怎么说呢,总感觉有些地方不是那么好,

Do :

Do+ :

Plus4j

Beatmap Nominator

1,070 posts

Joined March 2014

Plus4j 2016-07-08T06:15:40+00:00

來自我的mod req
din don dan
就mod你做的難度好了

[Hard]
00:04:030 (3) - 這件一擺成這樣會比較好看

00:40:458 (1) - 不好的blanket
00:49:030 (1,1) - 漏音，不應該只擺這兩個circle
00:52:458 (1,1) - ^
00:57:601 (1,1) - 像這邊我就比較接受只有兩個circle

[Din Don Dan]
00:06:387 (2,3,4) - 這三連每個物件間距都不一樣，而且方向很怪
00:11:315 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 這連打做原一點這樣很醜
00:16:243 (2) - 建議移到x468y224因為這裡要開始kiai time了強調一下放遠一點而且這樣也比之前好接
00:20:744 (3,4) - ctrl+G
00:43:029 (1,2,3,4,5) - 往左邊灣一點
00:47:315 (1,2) - 搭配在很不好的位置
00:49:030 (1,2) - ^
01:04:458 (1,2) - ^
01:11:208 (8,1) - 這地方是不是太開了?
01:11:744 (5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - 用的圓一點
01:12:601 (5) - NC

Amazing SB!

moonlightleaf

2,155 posts

Joined September 2011

Topic Starter

moonlightleaf 2016-07-08T15:49:33+00:00

Hey lululu wrote:
來自我的mod req
din don dan
就mod你做的難度好了

[Hard]
00:04:030 (3) - 這件一擺成這樣會比較好看 ---你看我后面几个就知道我都是这样摆
00:40:458 (1) - 不好的blanket
00:49:030 (1,1) - 漏音，不應該只擺這兩個circle ---这样摆比塞爆好玩
00:52:458 (1,1) - ^
00:57:601 (1,1) - 像這邊我就比較接受只有兩個circle

[Din Don Dan]
00:06:387 (2,3,4) - 這三連每個物件間距都不一樣，而且方向很怪 ---k
00:11:315 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 這連打做原一點這樣很醜
00:16:243 (2) - 建議移到x468y224因為這裡要開始kiai time了強調一下放遠一點而且這樣也比之前好接
//不知道有什么特殊含义要放这,倒是可以,顺带ctrl+g了下后面2个滑条
00:20:744 (3,4) - ctrl+G ---k
00:43:029 (1,2,3,4,5) - 往左邊灣一點
00:47:315 (1,2) - 搭配在很不好的位置 ---新风格的flow
00:49:030 (1,2) - ^
01:04:458 (1,2) - ^
01:11:208 (8,1) - 這地方是不是太開了?
01:11:744 (5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - 用的圓一點
01:12:601 (5) - NC ---k

Amazing SB!

no reply = keep

感谢mod, 其他都是还可以的,懒改

Rizia

3,114 posts

Joined January 2012

Rizia 2016-07-10T20:34:04+00:00

[Din Don Dan]

00:35:530 - 可以加個note做3連 2連相對上有點坑
00:45:922 (2,3) - same
01:03:387 - 在我看來人聲在這裡那01:03:494 (3) - 都應該開始在這裡
01:09:815 (2,3,4) - 不夠直
01:32:208 (2,3) - same

[ClariS' Insane]

00:23:744 (2) - 可以stack好頭有點難看
00:27:172 (2) - 個人意見這裡相對的扭得較誇張
01:37:458 (2) - 這裡可以擺對稱
SPOILER

[Hard]
hard 用 CS4.2 有點難啊

感覺SB加點閃光效果會更棒尤其副歌跟著拍子閃的那種

Yorita Yoshino

370 posts

Joined April 2014

Yorita Yoshino 2016-07-11T00:40:37+00:00

Adol Christin wrote:
激光
00:09:601 (1,2,3) - 我个人非常不喜欢这种贴紧了的包裹，看着很挤，而且间距跟前后对比也不搭。如果不想重新放，简单点改的话，把上下两个滑条适当拉远，下面那根的头叠在1的头上，然后再重新包好。我也想拉大点可是这是1/4= =
00:45:172 (5,1) - 稍微微调下角度吧，像这样，看着舒服些fix
SPOILER
01:27:601 (3,4,5) - 这个间距跟前后相同的部分相比显得不太协调。试试这个？说实话这里我想了挺久的，还是决定不改，因为歌的音调是从这里越来越高直到最后落下去，所以我是觉得小间距适合过渡开头小节的
SPOILER

Rizia wrote:
[ClariS' Insane]
00:23:744 (2) - 可以stack好頭有點難看fix
00:27:172 (2) - 個人意見這裡相對的扭得較誇張想不到更好的摆法了Orz
01:37:458 (2) - 這裡可以擺對稱fix
SPOILER

__Ag

597 posts

Joined July 2011

__Ag 2016-07-11T01:24:07+00:00

叮咚当，hue

moonlightleaf

2,155 posts

Joined September 2011

Topic Starter

moonlightleaf 2016-07-11T10:38:31+00:00

Rizia wrote:
[Din Don Dan]
00:35:530 - 可以加個note做3連 2連相對上有點坑 ---嘛,其实是可以的啊,辣么多人书 , 加加加
00:45:922 (2,3) - same ^
01:03:387 - 在我看來人聲在這裡那01:03:494 (3) - 都應該開始在這裡 ---k,稍微修了下和前面差不多那种,
01:09:815 (2,3,4) - 不夠直 --k, 稍微修了下后和面56781这些在一条直线了
01:32:208 (2,3) - same ^

[Hard]
hard 用 CS4.2 有點難啊 ---嘛,其实是为了避免有几个地方的overlap,不过好像不打紧, CS -> 4

感覺SB加點閃光效果會更棒尤其副歌跟著拍子閃的那種 ---k , 剩下还没用到的也补了一下

__Ag wrote:
叮咚当，hue ---鸽王琪琪出现

all updated , thank you all

Pata-Mon

1,489 posts

Joined March 2015

Pata-Mon 2016-07-13T12:28:17+00:00

主难度01:23:744 (2) - ctrl+G？

moonlightleaf

2,155 posts

Joined September 2011

Topic Starter

moonlightleaf 2016-07-14T14:11:56+00:00

Pata-Mon wrote:
主难度01:23:744 (2) - ctrl+G？---k 我记得就是ctrl+g后的样子的,可能补sb时哪里按错了一下

_Zenith

326 posts

Joined June 2015

_Zenith 2016-07-15T11:23:29+00:00

不太懂你们STD
感觉这图蛮神的

射个星

Rizia

3,114 posts

Joined January 2012

Rizia 2016-08-03T19:09:31+00:00

bub

sahuang

2,293 posts

Joined December 2014

sahuang 2016-08-03T22:04:42+00:00

moonlightleaf wrote:
__Ag wrote:
叮咚当，hue ---鸽王琪琪出现

moonlightleaf

2,155 posts

Joined September 2011

Topic Starter

moonlightleaf 2016-08-04T02:44:59+00:00

感谢柚纸

Chaoslitz

Elite Mapper / Elite Storyboarder

2,307 posts

Joined November 2013

Chaoslitz 2016-08-08T14:26:36+00:00

[General]

怎麼沒cb顏色...用粉色的不是挺好?

[sahuang's Normal]

這break... >_>
00:59:315 (4) - 最尾的anchor放下就行, 不用拉上去
01:02:744 (4) - ^

[Hard]

01:21:601 (1,3) - 這疊上不好看啊

我不行了連續摸四張圖

sahuang

2,293 posts

Joined December 2014

sahuang 2016-08-08T15:31:44+00:00

Chaoslitz wrote:
[sahuang's Normal]
這break... >_>
00:59:315 (4) - 最尾的anchor放下就行, 不用拉上去好
01:02:744 (4) - ^
我不行了連續摸四張圖超市无敌

break我挺喜欢的呀==前面貌似说过原因了，就不加了

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moonlightleaf

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moonlightleaf 2016-08-09T12:57:19+00:00

Chaoslitz wrote:
[General]
怎麼沒cb顏色...用粉色的不是挺好? --- √ 为何.osu里面却没有cb,我给所有难度统一加了cb代码进.osu
[Hard]
01:21:601 (1,3) - 這疊上不好看啊 ---之前hard为什么用CS4.2就是这个小小的overlap,我觉得不要紧的,就2处

我不行了連續摸四張圖 ---超市无敌