Hey
[General]
Pretty cool map so far, but the Easy is probably too hard for the easiest difficulty, while Normal is too easy for a normal diff.
GL
[General]
- compress the BG, it's 1MB lol
- Same with the mp3 file, you can reduce the quality a bit to lessen filesize
- Generally what I think the biggest problem is large amount of notes that falls at red tick after a note that falls at white tick, earliest example would be 00:11:660 (1,2), when I try to hit 2 I was thinking on hitting it at 00:12:972 because I followed the beat from 1, which will probably cause a miss. If possible change some of them.
- You might want to make some breaks on Easy, it's for beginner after all. I suggest 01:27:726 - 01:27:726 and 02:49:037 - 02:49:037
- 00:31:332 (2) - I personally prefer positioning this one a bit lower so it won't really overlap with 1's body, if you do this, you can also move the slider end so it'll heading toward 00:32:972 (1), like this for example http://imgur.com/a/z0Ntr
- 00:32:972 (1) - Did you forgot to put normal hitsound on the sliderend?
- 00:56:250 - 00:58:873 - You might want to make the increase a bit more extreme, for example from 20% to 80%. Personally, I couldn't hear any differences with current setting. If you do this, change other similar sections as well.
- 00:57:562 (2) - You could try making this less, squashed? you could try this http://imgur.com/uuIebck , you can also move 01:00:185 (2) so it'll stack with sliderend
- 01:06:742 - 01:06:742 - I think the pattern here is really difficult, I think a simpler one like this http://imgur.com/0wRrvCG can be used instead or copy 01:17:890 (1,2,1,2)
- 01:11:496 - unused inherited points
- 01:11:660 - 01:11:988 - Is this even still allowed? I forgot, but I prefer keeping the kiai turned on the whole time.
- 01:30:349 (3) - Is there a need for this to be NC'ed?
- 01:51:332 (1) and 03:53:136 (2) - Same thing with the squashed slider at 00:57:562 (2)
- 02:32:808 - unused inherited points
- 02:32:972 - same with 01:11:660
- This is pretty well made, I like it
- You might want to make some breaks, try to follow the suggestions on Easy
- 00:21:168 (4) - you might like to move the sliderend a bit so it wont cover half of 5
- 00:31:168 - might be a little bit nazi, but you might want to make a note here, so it wont be too boring on this section, you already add several 1/2s before so it's ok, same with 00:42:316, I also suggest 01:02:644 - 01:15:759, you have the idea, you could check the map and see if there's more you can add
- 01:27:070 - Did you forgot a note here? looks empty lol, for variety you can add 3 circles, here, 01:27:398 - and 01:27:726 - and start break at 01:28:054.
- 00:46:906 (3) - personally, I will move this a bit up so it wont be covered by 2, you can change the shape so it will head to 3, similar to what I suggest at Easy 00:31:332 (2), dont forget to check that it wont be covered by healthbar if you do use this.
- 00:47:562 (4) - this is a bit nazi, but you can move the slider and modify this so it'll be pointing at 5, it'll look cooler, I suppose. Dont worry about overlapping, it's hard to see at gameplay unless you use EZ
- 01:50:677 (4) - Offscreen, this is unrankable, move this
- 01:11:660 - 01:11:988 - Is this even still allowed? I forgot, but I prefer keeping the kiai turned on the whole time.
- 02:32:972 - same with 01:11:660
I add a bit of hitsounds at this map because I'm bored, you can use this as an example on hitsounding the mapSPOILERosu file format v14
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Title:Honjitsu wa Makoto ni Rarirurein
TitleUnicode:本日は誠にラリルレイン
Artist:Cocoa, Chino, Rize, Chiya, Syaro, Maya, Megu
ArtistUnicode:ココア・チノ・リゼ・千夜・シャロ・マヤ・メグ
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Source:ご注文はうさぎですか??
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56,311,134283,2,0,L|62:212,1,100
69,111,134939,6,0,P|51:76|69:10,2,100
152,167,135923,1,0,0:0:0:0:
226,100,136250,2,0,L|325:106,1,100
411,53,136906,2,0,L|510:47,1,100
468,138,137562,6,0,P|480:185|461:230,1,100
381,291,138218,2,0,P|368:338|387:383,2,100
371,191,139201,2,0,L|262:186,1,100
187,241,139857,2,0,L|87:245,1,100
256,192,140267,12,0,141824,0:0:0:0:
255,32,142808,5,0,0:0:0:0:
- you might want to reduce AR to 6, it's too fast
for me - 00:27:398 (4) - you might want to whistle the slider head instead of 3's sliderend
- 01:09:857 (2,3) - reverse this?
- 03:56:111 (1) - you might want to make this into a circles instead, makes the map more challenging, add jumps if possible.
- 01:11:660 - 01:11:988 - Is this even still allowed? I forgot, but I prefer keeping the kiai turned on the whole time.
- 02:32:972 - same with 01:11:660
This is pretty good!
- checked using Modding Assistant, I got this
03:37:711 - Slider end
03:37:964 - Slider end
03:38:128 - Slider end
03:38:947 - Slider repeat
03:39:022 - Slider repeat
03:39:275 - Slider repeat
03:39:350 - Slider repeat
02:33:300
Ranking Criteria - Timing
No two uninherited or two inherited timing sections should be placed at the same point. An inherited timing section may be placed on an uninherited timing section (but only to change the slider speed). Having two uninherited or two inherited sections on top of each other will cause problems within the beatmap.
I'm not very experienced with Expert so I dont know what should you fix here lol, it's cool map
01:01:005 (2,3) - this is triggering me tho - 01:11:660 - 01:11:988 - Is this even still allowed? I forgot, but I prefer keeping the kiai turned on the whole time.
Pretty cool map so far, but the Easy is probably too hard for the easiest difficulty, while Normal is too easy for a normal diff.
GL