1. Garden's Easy (1.33 stars, 106 notes)
2. Hard (2.84 stars, 240 notes)
3. Insane (3.92 stars, 311 notes)
4. Normal (1.76 stars, 173 notes)

Thanks for modding

Acme Deizd Void
Underdogs
eeezzzeee
Yamicchi
Len
Garden
Revialink
Cerulean Veyron
VenixPL
Lami
ProEzreal
Togetic
Hokichi
Mijii
LMT1996
_IxApplePie_
Yasaija 714
Lucyyyyyyy
1Computer
Regraz
Asaiga
Lasse
ShogunMoon
CelsiusLK

thai0109 wrote:

Hi! BPM & Offset check request

https://osu.ppy.sh/s/465669

thanks

1. 00:05:232 (3) - nothing in the music here lol, you can just delete this
2. 00:07:138 - hitsounds are way too loud here, seems like you forgot to change the volume xd
3. 00:07:566 (2,4) - fix stacking
4. 00:13:566 (1) - no NC
5. 00:27:709 (1,2) - why not just use the same shape
6. 00:29:423 (1,2) - i think it would be more effective to make some notes instead of just a long slider, as the piano melody that gets skipped is much more prominent than the guitar lol. http://puu.sh/qbPOq/194386de2f.jpg
7. 00:37:566 (5) - ctrl+g would flow much better imo, but then you'll have to move the next slider too
8. 00:39:066 (4) - move to 61,200 if you want it to be in the middle
9. 00:42:923 (1) - try changing this into just a circle because a. the music does not sound similar to the previous ones 00:41:423 (1) and 00:42:066 (1) - imo so 3/4 not so good b. for consistency with previous similar section 00:36:066 (1,2) -
10. 00:43:352 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - the emphasis of this pattern is pretty weird because the first part 00:43:352 (2,3,4) - ok but then 00:43:995 (5,6,7,8) - there is obviously much stronger drums starting here so you would think it gets harder but the jumps became smaller and less angular
11. 00:56:852 (1,3) - try to not let them touch
12. 01:01:995 (1) - more to the left would flow better imo. actually where 3 is right now would be a good spot for this lol
13. 01:02:423 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - this really feels like some random circles with no relation to the music... some sliders would really help make a more effective rhythm because this part has a lot of vocal and melody going on. but aside from that, the spacing of the jumps also feels very random to me because for example 01:02:423 (2,3,4) - this part has vocals and stuff but the spacing is very small, 01:03:066 (5,6,7) - this part which is nothing has much larger spacing? and there is litterally no sound on 01:03:495 (7) - but that is the largest jump lol
14. 01:05:852 (2,4) - more space between them
15. 01:16:995 (5) - shape doesn't look so good, you can just delete the red point and make a normal curve like 01:06:709 (4) -
16. 01:19:995 (3) - maybe somewhere above 2 would flow better http://puu.sh/qbQTX/d7a3bcc12f.jpg
17. 01:24:066 (3,4,1) - fix stacking
18. 01:25:352 (4,1) - i understand you are trying to put it in the middle but thats a little confusing to read due to how short the slider is and the fact that this slider is going the opposite direction from the previous ones 01:24:280 (1,3) - . maybe like this instead? http://puu.sh/qbR0Q/df42d97c87.jpg the highlighted notes are 01:24:709 (2,4) -
19. 01:31:138 (1) - missing a finish
20. 01:31:780 (2,4) - fix stack
21. 01:32:423 (1,2) - swap NC
22. 01:33:280 (1) - delete NC
23. 01:33:280 - not a very good place to put this slider imo, since 01:33:495 - has a much stronger melody sound i think you should try having a clickable object there at the red tick
24. 01:37:138 (3,1) - fix stacking ( are you intentionally not stacking them? try to make it more obvious by giving it a little more space because this looks more like you made a mistake lol )
25. 01:40:138 (3,4,5) - this is really sloppy, are you trying to make a triangle? http://puu.sh/qbRJr/9b4db1d187.jpg or http://puu.sh/qbRKB/9a2a63b36e.jpg

eeezzzeee wrote:

hi from my queue

[Insane]

1. 00:05:232 (3) - nothing in the music here lol, you can just delete this
2. 00:07:138 - hitsounds are way too loud here, seems like you forgot to change the volume xd
3. 00:07:566 (2,4) - fix stacking
4. 00:13:566 (1) - no NC
5. 00:27:709 (1,2) - why not just use the same shape
6. 00:29:423 (1,2) - i think it would be more effective to make some notes instead of just a long slider, as the piano melody that gets skipped is much more prominent than the guitar lol. http://puu.sh/qbPOq/194386de2f.jpg
7. 00:37:566 (5) - ctrl+g would flow much better imo, but then you'll have to move the next slider too
8. 00:39:066 (4) - move to 61,200 if you want it to be in the middle
9. 00:42:923 (1) - try changing this into just a circle because a. the music does not sound similar to the previous ones 00:41:423 (1) and 00:42:066 (1) - imo so 3/4 not so good b. for consistency with previous similar section 00:36:066 (1,2) -
10. 00:43:352 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - the emphasis of this pattern is pretty weird because the first part 00:43:352 (2,3,4) - ok but then 00:43:995 (5,6,7,8) - there is obviously much stronger drums starting here so you would think it gets harder but the jumps became smaller and less angular
11. 00:56:852 (1,3) - try to not let them touch
12. 01:01:995 (1) - more to the left would flow better imo. actually where 3 is right now would be a good spot for this lol
13. 01:02:423 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - this really feels like some random circles with no relation to the music... some sliders would really help make a more effective rhythm because this part has a lot of vocal and melody going on. but aside from that, the spacing of the jumps also feels very random to me because for example 01:02:423 (2,3,4) - this part has vocals and stuff but the spacing is very small, 01:03:066 (5,6,7) - this part which is nothing has much larger spacing? and there is litterally no sound on 01:03:495 (7) - but that is the largest jump lol
14. 01:05:852 (2,4) - more space between them
15. 01:16:995 (5) - shape doesn't look so good, you can just delete the red point and make a normal curve like 01:06:709 (4) -
16. 01:19:995 (3) - maybe somewhere above 2 would flow better http://puu.sh/qbQTX/d7a3bcc12f.jpg
17. 01:24:066 (3,4,1) - fix stacking
18. 01:25:352 (4,1) - i understand you are trying to put it in the middle but thats a little confusing to read due to how short the slider is and the fact that this slider is going the opposite direction from the previous ones 01:24:280 (1,3) - . maybe like this instead? http://puu.sh/qbR0Q/df42d97c87.jpg the highlighted notes are 01:24:709 (2,4) -
19. 01:31:138 (1) - missing a finish
20. 01:31:780 (2,4) - fix stack
21. 01:32:423 (1,2) - swap NC
22. 01:33:280 (1) - delete NC
23. 01:33:280 - not a very good place to put this slider imo, since 01:33:495 - has a much stronger melody sound i think you should try having a clickable object there at the red tick
24. 01:37:138 (3,1) - fix stacking ( are you intentionally not stacking them? try to make it more obvious by giving it a little more space because this looks more like you made a mistake lol )
25. 01:40:138 (3,4,5) - this is really sloppy, are you trying to make a triangle? http://puu.sh/qbRJr/9b4db1d187.jpg or http://puu.sh/qbRKB/9a2a63b36e.jpg

that's all from me, good luck! c:

Yamicchi wrote:

Friendship mod :v
[Normal]
Đầu tiên là bạn cần phải xem và cân bằng lại tất cả các Distance snap nhé .-. Ctrl + 1 cho dễ cân bằng hơn. Ví dụ như 00:08:852 - không có sự thay đổi ở SV cũng như bpm mà distance lại khác này, dù chỉ 1 chút cũng sẽ bị phát hiện đó <3
00:12:066 (1) - chấm trắng ở giữa dời nó đến vị trí X204 Y260, perfect blanket (Ctrl + 1) <3
00:44:852 (1) - bad blanket này <3
01:05:209 (3) - tớ hiểu cảm giác của newbie :'( chỗ này khó bấm đấy, dời nó ra chỗ khác thay vì stack đc kh? <3
01:44:638 (6) - thử đặt nó ở X460 Y252 đi <3
[Hard]
00:01:158 (2) - tớ thấy map chơi đc là đc, nhưng BN đòi phải blanket tốt hơn. Sửa được kh? <3
00:18:709 (3) - đoạn sau thì chỗ này đều là 1/2 slider, sao ở đây lại là 1 circle nhỉ? <3
00:24:923 (2) - well you know what to do <3

01:04:780 (2) - đây không hẳn là 1 beat mạnh nên có lẽ là giảm DS của nó xuống tí nhỉ? Cho bằng với DS của các objects tiếp theo đó <3
01:37:995 (1) - DS nên lớn hơn, tương tự với 01:39:495 - và 01:42:923 - <3
[Insane]
00:03:711 (1,2) - đã sẵn sàng cho 00:04:797 (1,2) - là 2 circles thì đừng ngại làm tương tự với 4 circles. Cảm giác 4 circles bấm thích hơn 2 sliders như vậy cảm giác ko hợp
00:07:140 (1) - đồng ý là beat mạnh nhưng cũng nên cho nó gần lại 1 tí thôi :v <3
00:10:138 (6) - có thể là 1/4 reverse slider hay là stream đc kh? overmapped
00:48:923 (2) - down beat, DS lớn, trong khi (3) là strong beat mà cảm giác bấm nó hụt hẫng quá, vì DS quá nhỏ. đoạn nhạc dịu, (3) nó chỉ là 1 cái chấm nhịp thôi mà, nói chung sẽ nghiên cứu thêm
01:28:995 (7) - đặt nó ở X164 Y156 hoặc X168 Y128 chứ nhỉ? <3 x172 y128 thì 1 3 5 7 sẽ ok
01:34:245 - add thêm 1 circle ở đây là đẹp :3 overmapped?
Good luck :d

thai0109 wrote:

Yamicchi wrote:

[Insane]
00:03:711 (1,2) - đã sẵn sàng cho 00:04:797 (1,2) - là 2 circles thì đừng ngại làm tương tự với 4 circles. Cảm giác 4 circles bấm thích hơn 2 sliders như vậy cảm giác ko hợp
00:07:140 (1) - đồng ý là beat mạnh nhưng cũng nên cho nó gần lại 1 tí thôi :v <3
00:10:138 (6) - có thể là 1/4 reverse slider hay là stream đc kh? overmapped Thật ra là follow sát nhạc ấy chứ :v vì dù gì tiếng piano cũng khá to mà
00:48:923 (2) - down beat, DS lớn, trong khi (3) là strong beat mà cảm giác bấm nó hụt hẫng quá, vì DS quá nhỏ. đoạn nhạc dịu, (3) nó chỉ là 1 cái chấm nhịp thôi mà, nói chung sẽ nghiên cứu thêm
01:28:995 (7) - đặt nó ở X164 Y156 hoặc X168 Y128 chứ nhỉ? <3 x172 y128 thì 1 3 5 7 sẽ ok
01:34:245 - add thêm 1 circle ở đây là đẹp :3 overmapped? Same như dòng thứ 3
Good luck :d

yeee

Len wrote:

from q

General:

Add sliderslide?


Normal:

00:06:295 (3,1) - as you can see,, distance is too big i think bpm changed
00:36:066 (1) - lazy blanket fixed
00:42:066 (1) - just remove nc here no need to add fixed
00:44:852 (1) - this slider is too curved timing changed to 0.75x so that curve is needed for a blanket?
01:05:209 (3,1) - swap nc fixed
01:08:852 (3) - nc here for consistency fixed
01:18:923 (5) - nc fixed
01:27:709 (1,2,3,4) - what do you think about this flow? http://puu.sh/qdXxD/3f3ec98784.jpg just try it xd i think its better than before ! fixed
01:39:495 (4) - nc fixed
01:43:352 (4) - nc fixed


Hard:

00:08:852 (5) - for now, combo is too long maybe u sud add nc here fixed
00:36:495 (5) - nc for reading fixed
00:39:495 (4) - nc fixed
00:57:495 (2,3,4,5,1) - this pattern is too hard for "HARD" users. avoid straight pattern is better fixed
01:08:852 (5) - nc fixed
01:16:995 (4,1) - well i dont know why u added 3/4 and note here. just change the slider to 1/1 and remove note ? fixed to 1/2 slider for nc
01:27:709 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - nah pattern changed
01:32:852 (5) - nc fixed
01:41:638 - and 01:41:852 - should be emphasized. dont stack pls fixed


Insane:

00:23:209 (1) - i dont know why u added nc here fixed
00:30:066 (2) - end on 00:30:495 - is good fixed
00:35:209 (1) - and 00:42:066 (1) - same as above consistency?
01:06:709 (4) - mhmm try to add 2 notes on 01:06:709 - and 01:06:923 - ? vocal mapping is not suitable here i think
01:11:209 (1,4) - swap nc and remove nc here 01:12:923 (1) - fixed
01:16:995 (5) - 1/2 slider is better hmm..
01:21:495 (1) - and 01:23:209 (1) - remove nc fixed
01:24:066 (3,4,1) - stack miss? it can't be fixed
01:34:245 - add note will make beautiful with piano sound hmm...
01:40:780 (1) - try ctrl g? no
01:42:066 - the volume is too low fixed
01:44:423 (5) - move to x292 y64 will make awesome ending ! im not sure since the music was going down but fixed



overall is good! goodluck

1. need sum cool custom combo colours
2. add silent sliderslide hitsound maybe? would sound good at calm parts
3. add eufonius to tag

• (object codes are copied from normal diff, so some points might not be correct if u hitsounded diff by diff)

1. 00:07:138 (1) - finish on slider head?
2. 00:14:638 (2) - ^
3. 00:17:423 (1) - ^
4. 00:58:352 (4) - need some whistle or finish hitsounds, the beat is worth emphasizing
5. 01:00:280 (1) - finish on head would sound good imo
6. 01:05:209 (1) -01:07:138 (1) - 01:10:566 (1,2) - 01:12:280 (1,2) - 01:13:995 (1) - 01:20:852 (1) - 01:24:280 (1) - 01:29:209 (4) - 01:37:995 (1,2) - 01:39:495 (1) - 01:42:923 (1) - same as above

1. 00:00:307 (1) - almost 1.30x ds
2. 00:52:566 (2,5) - can well stacked
3. 01:16:995 (1,2) - considering u r mostly following vocal, try this pattern? http://puu.sh/qeK4x/662b5d75d3.jpg

1. 00:37:566 (4) - 00:54:709 (6) - use 5% volume on slidertail maybe?
2. 00:56:852 (1) - touch with the hp bar
3. 01:29:209 (6) - can emphasize the beat with a jump
4. 01:41:638 (1,2) - there are finishes here in normal diff

1. 00:12:709 (3,4) - curving a bit would make the flow smoother http://puu.sh/qeLvQ/bd4b936d20.jpg
2. 00:23:209 (3) - 00:23:852 (5) - 01:16:995 (5) - use 5% volume on slidertail?

thai0109 wrote:

Garden wrote:

[General]

1. need sum cool custom combo colours
2. add silent sliderslide hitsound maybe? would sound good at calm parts i guess i did
3. add eufonius to tag

fixed
[hitsounding]

• (object codes are copied from normal diff, so some points might not be correct if u hitsounded diff by diff)

1. 00:07:138 (1) - finish on slider head?
2. 00:14:638 (2) - ^
3. 00:17:423 (1) - ^
4. 00:58:352 (4) - need some whistle or finish hitsounds, the beat is worth emphasizing
5. 01:00:280 (1) - finish on head would sound good imo
6. 01:05:209 (1) -01:07:138 (1) - 01:10:566 (1,2) - 01:12:280 (1,2) - 01:13:995 (1) - 01:20:852 (1) - 01:24:280 (1) - 01:29:209 (4) - 01:37:995 (1,2) - 01:39:495 (1) - 01:42:923 (1) - same as above

fixed some
[Normal]

1. 00:00:307 (1) - almost 1.30x ds fixed
2. 00:52:566 (2,5) - can well stacked fixed
3. 01:16:995 (1,2) - considering u r mostly following vocal, try this pattern? http://puu.sh/qeK4x/662b5d75d3.jpg fixed

[Hard]

1. 00:37:566 (4) - 00:54:709 (6) - use 5% volume on slidertail maybe? fixed
2. 00:56:852 (1) - touch with the hp bar fixed
3. 01:29:209 (6) - can emphasize the beat with a jump hmm...
4. 01:41:638 (1,2) - there are finishes here in normal diff fixed

[Insane]

1. 00:12:709 (3,4) - curving a bit would make the flow smoother http://puu.sh/qeLvQ/bd4b936d20.jpg fixed
2. 00:23:209 (3) - 00:23:852 (5) - 01:16:995 (5) - use 5% volume on slidertail?

fixed
u made me want to map this song as well the chorus sounds so beautiful <33

Revialink wrote:

Hi!~ NM from my queue!~

General

1. Delete "Widescreen Support"
2. Add combo colours in Normal/Hard/Insane

Normal

1. Changing SV's speed is unrankable in Normal
2. Check DS
3. 00:30:710 - 00:48:924 - use custom clap here (use if for Hard and Insane too)
4. 00:51:710 - 01:49:996 - ^ (use if for Hard and Insane too)

Good Luck!~ :-)

Cerulean Veyron wrote:

Hello! Requested from my queue.

[- - General - -]

• - There's a big difficulty gap between Hard and Insane by 1.36, which is quite a jump though. There are two ways to avoid the issue; Creating a diff that could balance in-between them, like another Insane but easier. Or just making the current Insane more easier.
  - The kiai's end 01:24:281 - is unsnapped by 1ms on every diff on the set. AiMod said that xD
  - Don't forget to add the Easy diff's custom colors throughout the rest of the diffs, alike the above mod mentioned.
  - Since this map is on the WIP section, I won't try to point out many things while some of it might still be working on. So yeah...

[- - Normal - -]

1. 00:06:282 (3) - This slider has some smaller distance spacing than the defaulting 1.2x spacing. I guess moving it somewhere down would fix this one, around x:262|y:52 or nearest.
2. 00:16:139 (4) - For aesthetics, at least curving this slider can help you improve the flowing here much better. Something like this can do the work of it.
3. 00:33:710 (1,3) - On the first slider, there wasn't anything representing a new track. So why an NC here? I recommend swapping it to slider (3) because it obviously lands on the longer white tick to indicate a new track of the music.
4. 00:44:424 (4,1) - Optional objective: I wouldn't say this blanket is probably not correct, but really. Maybe dragging the tail a little big up would make it perfect imo.
5. 01:05:853 (2) - I assume you forgot to add a clap here for the percussion, consist with the rest of the clap hitsounds.
6. 01:15:710 (3,4,1) - On the reverse arrow, circle (4), and slider (1)'s tail. Totally the same thing as above.
7. 01:28:139 (2) - As you usually do these kinds of pattern straightly, maybe here's the time you should change the aesthetics a bit. What about curving this slider [url=http://puu.sh/qi6fO/2eef30e22c.jpg]to the right? It'd smoothen the flow greatly for cursor guidance. Watch the spacing too.

[- - Hard - -]

1. 00:13:567 (5) - You've used the finish on the head for the cymbal pretty well with the song. But what I prefer here is the finish on the tail, since the tail that landed on the downbeat has a stronger cymbal ofc. So, maybe swapping it there should emphasize the song much better.
2. 00:44:424 (6) - Optional objective: The jump here is very fine, but I'm probably concerned about the imbalanced spacing on it's previous notes. So I guess moving it a little left, like somewhere x:338|y:93, around it idk. It should make the distance spacing a little more perfect.
3. 00:56:424 (3,1) - The blanket doesn't seem right though. You can try to correct it accurately curving over the approach circle, just by looking at it.
4. 00:58:353 (1,2,3) - Pretty sure you forgot some finish hitsounding here. Unlike you've added on the other diffs of course.
5. 01:16:996 (4) - A clap on slider's head, nearly the same reason as before.

Try to check your hitsounds on each diff more often, you might've missed more than what I mentioned here. But in the other hand, really good mapping techniques for a starter! Pretty nice to play as well.
Good luck!

VenixPL wrote:

Mod For My Queue!

Insane

00:44:639 (8) - do this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5723805 lol it feels so weird
01:06:710 (4) - flow broke, make this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5723832 fixed
01:24:067 (6,7,1) - stack it fixed
01:44:639 (1) - Remove this and make start of spinner for this moment nope

Lami wrote:

you may forgot to setting combo colors.

Hard


plz use same volume setting fixed

00:59:853 (3,1) - would be more cool, if use blanket fixed

Insane

00:13:996 (1) - i think slider is much better as looong sound.
like 00:15:496 (1) - hmm...
01:37:996 (1) - ^ ^
00:48:924 (2,3) - need jump as emphasis sound. not necessary
01:03:282 (6) - missing hitsound fixed
01:16:996 (5) - ^ fixed
01:21:496 (3) - ^ i think no
01:33:282 (3) - ^ fixed

In highest diff, you may need to check hitsound setting.

ProEzreal wrote:

Hello~ NM from my queue

Please add Garden to the tags. fixed

Normal

1. SV changes in normal difficulties are not allowed. Let's try to keep things simple. i guess i will do something like a small remap ...
2. 00:14:639 (2,3) - Huge blanket error here i don't think so
3. 01:00:924 - 01:01:782 - You should map these, especially because it's the kiai part of the song and the current kiai section feels nothing different from the non-kiai sections; both parts feel like they have the same intensity. it might be too hard with a normal diff
4. 01:10:567 - Doesn't have a sound to put a finish while 01:11:210 - this does. Listen to the music carefully. fixed
5. Just a suggestion but 01:43:996 (3) - maybe remove the repeat and add a circle to add some power to the end of the song this is fine enough i guess

Hard

1. 00:03:710 (1) - You should make this a repeat 1/2 slider to follow the instrumentals properly. fixed
2. 00:04:782 (3) - This shouldn't be a repeat, there's no separate sound on 00:05:210 - fixed
3. 00:09:282 (3) - Circle and a long slider follows the instrumentals better. http://puu.sh/qmXR2/bf1b785568.jpg not necessary
4. 00:13:996 - This is a hard difficulty, you should be able to map strong sounds like these with a circle or a new slider, not a slider end. it's true but not here I think, it feels kinda weird...
5. 00:21:496 (2,3) - Blanketing these two could be nice fixed
6. 00:52:996 (5,1) - I'm not sure about the big jump here, nothing to emphasize or anything fixed
7. 01:04:782 (2,1) - Since there isn't a note in between I think you could keep these two farther apart to emphasize and so that it's not really boring fixed
8. 01:28:353 (3,4) - I wonder why you choose to give this 2x DS and kept 1.5 distance 01:28:996 (5,6) - here, for all I know, 01:28:996 (5,6) - should be the one that should be emphasized due to the drums. Please fix this. fixed
9. 01:33:282 (3) - Same this as before not necessary
10. 01:42:710 (5,1) - These can be also emphasized fixed
11. 01:43:996 (3,1) - Same suggestion as before. not necessary

Insane

1. 00:00:282 (1,2,3,4) - Same rhythm from the hard difficulty, making this rhythm a bit more interesting would fit for an insane difficulty. Maybe add some circles at the piano. Suggestion fixed
2. 00:05:282 - 00:05:353 - You could add notes here im not sure
3. 00:06:710 (1) - Not sure why the sound here is reduced, the piano gets louder here fixed
4. 00:12:067 (1,2) - How about changing into a slider hmm...
5. 00:13:996 (1,2,3) - Okay, problem here is that the first two notes are 1/1 time distance but then 00:14:424 (2,3) - these two are 1/2 with the SAME DISTANCE. Does this make sense at all? No. You should make 00:14:424 (2,3) - closer together in comparison to 00:13:996 (1,2) - or players will have a hard time distinguishing time differences. will be considered, but 1,2 can't become closer together since the beat was quite prominent. Beside, clicked note would disappear immediately which can be read easily...
6. Now, about the blank spaces in between some objects. I was going to mention something for the hard difficulty but I let it be to find the insane difficulty to be exactly the same. For every difficulty, there is some sort of space in between objects when you can CLEARLY map it. 00:25:782 (4) - you choose to map this here, but not 00:27:496 - ? There are so many blanks that you can map. I understand that the part with the blanks are because this part is a bit calmer or not intense but if it's the same with all difficulties, I don't think that's okay. There's some other things you can do to make the calmer parts easy such as using smaller distance. Since I don't really like vocal mapping so I did leave some blanks at the calm part, but fixed some
7. 00:58:353 (1,2,3) - This is the same thing you've done on the hard difficulty, try something harder. it's fine
8. 01:37:996 (1,2,3) - Same thing mentioned above will be considered

Good luck.

thai0109 wrote:

---NM---
Title: Traveler's tale
Artist: riya
Link: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/465669
Drain: 1:44
Specified diffs: any diff
Extra: nope

Togetic wrote:

hey here's a mod

insane

00:02:853 (6,1,2) - try not to make sliders so diagonal because it doesn't look very good fixed
00:04:782 (1,1) - overlap the circle and the slider please fixed
00:07:139 (1,2) - diagonal sliders again, this doesn't really flow that well fixed
00:19:139 (1) - curve the slider a bit more or make it more vertical fixed
00:32:424 (7,1) - the note and the slider don't flow to well please make the slider more horizontal fixed
00:36:496 (2,3) - ^ fixed
00:44:853 (1) - more vertical please fixed
00:54:496 (6,7) - same reason as 00:36:496 (2,3) and 00:32:424 (7,1) i think it's fine here
01:05:210 (1,2) - too diagonal and doesn't flow too well fixed

hard

00:14:639 (2,3,4) - this doesn't flow that well, i recommend to not blanket the circle fixed
01:32:424 (4,3) - overlap the beginning of the slider with the slider end please fixed

i hope to see one of your maps ranked one day! You have good potential.

Hokichi wrote:

thai0109 wrote:

---NM---
Title: Traveler's tale
Artist: riya
Link: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/465669
Drain: 1:44
Specified diffs: any diff
Extra: nope

Let's start

[Normal]

00:11:424 (2,1) - Can you blanket these without overlapping?

00:14:639 (2,3) - ^ . There are more. Please fix them all cause they doesn't look very nice

00:44:424 (4,1) - Fix blanket

00:56:853 (1,3) - ^

all blanket fixed

[Hard]

00:10:139 (5,6,1) - Try this:
fixed but reduced the spacing

00:14:639 (2) - Improve blanket fixed as above recommended

00:20:853 (1,2) - ^ fixed

00:24:924 (2,4) - Stack these properly fixed

00:55:139 (1,2) - ^ fixed

00:56:424 (3,3) - Overlapped no problem here since 00:56:424 (3) - disappeared at the moment the other (3) appeared

00:58:353 (1,2,3) - Place these far away from each other fixed

01:00:710 (2,5) - Fix stack fixed

01:04:996 - Add something here fixed

01:06:924 - ^ hmm...

01:10:567 (1) - This should start at 01:10:353 - it's weird

01:13:460 (3,4) - Same as 00:10:139 (5,6,1) - fixed

01:24:924 (2,3) - Don't stack these ;;-;; fixed

01:32:424 (4,3) - Fix stack fixed

01:34:139 (5,6,1) - Same as 00:10:139 (5,6,1) - fixed

ProEzreal wrote:

Easy

1. 01:41:639 (1,2) - Okay, so this is the only time you use 1/2 time distance and the player can get easily confused by this. I think using 1/2 sliders on this part could make it easier to understand http://puu.sh/qmX9p/9724376172.jpg something like this

simplify the rhythm here in another way, 3/2 gap might be kinda confusing as well imo

Hokichi wrote:

[Garden's Easy]

01:31:139 (1,3) - I know it's a blanket, but... the overlap doesn't look good to me. Maybe move 01:31:139 (1) - to the middle of 01:32:853 (3) - ? hmm.. current pattern is neat to me so keep

01:41:639 (1,2) - Uhm... Idk, is 1/2 distance allowed in and Easy? yea i think it's allowed in some case, but i changed something easier here

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Mijii wrote:

Normal:

00:25:567 (3) try to move this circle a little

01:19:996 (6) NC

01:20:853 (1) Remove NC

everything will remain unchanged

This map is too hard to mod for me, it's a cool map. thanks

Sorry if I couldn't help you on anything with this mod. Don't say that, you spent your time on my map

LMT1996 wrote:

random mod.

Insane

00:12:496 (2,3,4) - nếu theo tiếng violin (hoặc là synth ughhh hơi khó phân biệt) thì đúng ra đầu slider phải là ở tick đỏ. Kiểu kiểu như thế này: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5764774 . đoạn này đang làm theo nhịp của bài, tự nhiên nhảy sang tiếng violin ở tick đỏ thì trông hơi kì...
00:16:567 (5) - nốt này yếu quá, thử 4 thành slider ra đây xem có hợp lí không. rhythm hơi sida, đoạn đó giảm ds rồi
01:05:853 (2,3) - không rõ là theo nhạc cụ nào. Thử như vầy xem : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5764807 . slider ở tick đỏ đoạn này nghe hơi lạ...
01:09:496 (1,2,3) - ở đây vocal đang mạnh hơn trống nên có lẽ theo vocal thì nổi bật hơn. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5764782 (trong ví dụ phải giảm AR xuống để thấy hết, cố xem cái nào trước cái nào sau nhé =)) ) lol , mà ko thích slider ở tick đỏ cho lắm @@
01:14:424 (4,5) - đầu slider ở tick đỏ thì cảm giác tốt hơn. Chọn cả 2, ctrl+g xong chỉnh lại cho flow tốt. như mấy cái trên, có vẻ 2 style khác nhau quá ))
01:16:139 (2,3) - ^ ^
01:19:567 (2,3,4) - đầu slider 2 3 không theo pattern của nhạc. Trống: nhấn 2 và 4 (3 không nhấn) ; Piano/Vocal: nhấn tick đỏ (đuôi slider 2) nên trượt hẳn rồi. Chung quy là tick đỏ rất mạnh nên cần phải nhấn ở đó. Ví dụ : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5764668 . ko cần thiết lắm
01:34:139 (6,7,8,1) - nếu theo piano thì map 5 nốt 1/4 , nếu map theo violin thì cái 7 8 9 phải là 1/6 . violin nó luyến xuống ở 3 mốc chính thôi, 1/6 lên thì lại chả ra gì @@

Hard

00:02:853 (4) - slider có nên dừng ở đây không 00:03:282 - ? ok
00:08:853 (1,2,3) - cái tick này 00:09:496 - rất mạnh nhưng để đuôi slider thì không nổi bật. Thử đặt như thế này xem https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5764746 . tiếng violin chỉ lên cao thôi mà, đoạn này map nhiều nhịp ổn hơn
00:44:424 (6) - không vấn đề gì, nhưng tại vì trống ở đây 00:44:639 - mạnh quá nên có lẽ cái này đổi thành 2 nốt có lẽ là nổi bật hơn. slider ở đó flow nó ổn hơn, trước đó có 3 nốt rồi
01:19:353 (2,3,4) - cũng được nhưng mà theo thế này thì vocal không được nổi bật lắm. Thử thế này xem? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5764708 ko thích map theo vocal lắm, với cả nhìn chung map ko theo vocal rồi
01:32:853 (1,2,3,4) - nốt violin mạnh nhất ở tick đỏ, nhưng đặt thế này thì nó lại ở đuôi slider -> yếu.Thử https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5764728 . ^x3
01:42:067 (3) - cái này ở đây hơi anti flow , để bên trái thì theo flow hơn :v , nhưng mà cũng không ảnh hưởng lắm. ok

Normal

00:13:139 (2) - dịch cái nốt này về tick đỏ ngay trước, nghe chuẩn hơn . Đừng quên chỉnh lại spacing cho 3. đoạn này map theo tiếng violin nghe ko hợp
00:33:710 (3,4) - không chắc là đặt thế này có ổn không. 3 là map theo tiếng guitar còn 4 là theo vocal (và tiếng guitar yếu hơn) . Không biết normal thì như thế này có khó quá không nhưng LMT đảm bảo là chuẩn hơn https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5764845 . fixed
01:06:282 (3,4) - dịch 2 cái này sang tick đỏ bên phải, đừng quên sửa spacing. dịch xong sẽ thấy lạ
01:07:996 (2) - dịch về tick đỏ trước đó , thêm 1 nốt ở tick trắng ngay sau cái slider này thì đúng pattern hơn. giữ consistency với 01:00:282 (1,2) -
01:19:996 (3) - errm tick trắng này rất yếu nên đặt vậy là sai. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5764860 fixed .

_IxApplePie_ wrote:

Hihi! NM req from my WQ~

Sorry for being like 6 days late @_@

[ General ]

1. Custom combo colours? ( missing in Insane and Hard) fixed

[ Insane ]

1. 00:00:924 (2,5) - I would stack on 00:01:139 (3,6) - as it plays better and it's the same piano note/key fixed
2. 00:00:282 (1,3) - would blanket this better for visual looks fixed
3. 00:03:710 (1,2) - distance these two like you're playing a 1/2 note hmm...
4. 00:04:996 (2) - why emphasis/distance so big here when the sound is not so impact-ish? fixed
5. 00:49:996 (1,2) - blanket better fixed
6. 00:58:353 (1,2,3) - more distance since you might want to emphasis on these 3 heavy beats fixed

[ Hard ]

1. 00:17:424 (1,2,3) - equal distance? or make them look that way fixed
2. 00:43:782 (4,5) - maybe have the same angle as 00:43:353 (2,3) - ? so it'll look parallel it looks weird
3. 00:49:567 (3) - no point of hiding it under slider tail since you didn't hid it previously fixed
4. 00:54:282 (4,5) - no point of stacking since you didn't stack any note tgt it's not a problem i think
5. 00:58:353 (1,2,3) - same as Insane i think Different between Hard and Insane is quite important, it's not a serious problem though
6. 00:59:853 (3,1) - no touching, I guess you could distance out 01:00:282 (1) - more fixed
7. 01:07:782 (2,3,4) - make them look equally spaced for visual and playability reasons fixed
8. 01:11:210 (2) - maybe you could emphasis on this note by adding some distance between (1) slider fixed
9. 01:19:353 (2) - stack on 01:19:567 (3) - that would be a big distance between 1 and 2
10. 01:23:639 (3) - stack on 01:23:853 (4) - ^
11. Either the two at the top or unstack 01:20:424 (5) - since you might want the consistency ^

Good luck!