17VA wrote:

00:14:809 - how about this way? keep chord's regularity http://puu.sh/hG2tn/0139a1f27e.png

00:18:680 (18680|1,18744|0) - move 1,2 might be better

00:25:906 (25906|0,25970|1,26035|2,26035|3) - move some notes to right handed part.

00:31:357 (31357|3) - delete this longnote or 00:32:551 (32551|4,32551|2) - . looks awkward

00:35:712 - I recommend using 1st column when there's bass/cymbol hitsounds on it.

if you see bms / iidx maps, 1st column always playing bass or heavy drums. ----- case A

00:46:551 - I think this pattern is weird to play and see.. http://puu.sh/hG2TX/624e47b527.png it's my suggestion

00:47:518 - don't use longnotes here?

00:59:422 (59422|2,59615|2) - move to 1 or 3rd column is more comfortable to play

01:00:486 - A

01:05:131 (65131|2,65325|0,65518|2) - move 1,3,1

01:11:325 - A

01:34:164 - use symmetry patterns on 7K mapping. it's very fun and comfortable to play. : http://puu.sh/hG3gx/deb7bd6420.png

01:43:067 (103067|5) - move to 5th column for regularity

01:49:647 - pyramiddddd

02:14:809 - ~ 02:27:196 - (I want to add shield longnotes here xDD)

02:34:938 - A

02:36:357 (156357|1,156357|0,156486|0,156486|1) - different tone but same columns.. I suggest move chords to other columns

.. like this ? http://puu.sh/hG3Ad/73dce213b0.png

02:51:970 (171970|5,171970|1) - 3,5 column is looks comfortable

03:18:486 - ~ 03:20:615 - how about make this chords to symmetrically?

03:21:002 (201002|1) - move 1st column

03:23:067 (203067|6,203067|1,203067|3,203067|0,203325|3,203325|1,203325|6,203325|0) - ctrl + h for fun o/

03:23:583 - how about make it symmetric? http://puu.sh/hG3Qs/c43dd5eb35.png

04:02:809 (242809|4,242906|2) - move 1,5

04:08:228 (248228|6) - move 1st column . because , see this notes : 04:07:841 (247841|0,248615|0) -

04:11:325 (251325|6) - ^

04:21:970 (261970|3) - move 5th column. make it symmetrically

04:33:099 (273099|1,273099|5) - move 3,5, mid lane is feeling empty ww

04:46:744 (286744|3) - how about 5th column?

04:49:067 - how about this? 12121 trill is little uncomfortable to play http://puu.sh/hG4cO/a1cf439dee.png

04:51:970 - note missing, add at space bar

05:04:357 - ^

05:04:551 - just suggestion, http://puu.sh/hG4k3/9c2555565b.png

Takane6 wrote:

hi harby /o/
mod here :3
sorry if this mod is kinda poor ;w;

[Furious Marathon]

SPOILER

00:59:325 - add note maybe? i heard a kick there i don't think this is a kick
00:59:518 - ^ ^
--
01:10:551 - its a bit right weighted pattern
in here > 01:10:551 (70551|5,70647|6,70744|5,70841|6,70938|5) - ... i suggest to make it balance for both hand... (except youre purpose is actually to make it right-weighted hand :v ) xd
--
01:46:551 - add note? (same as 01:45:389 - ) mmm keep chord of three here
--
02:40:744 - a bit too much for vocal with 6 notes 5 notes?
02:43:712 - add note at 7? (there is a kick there if you compare with 02:43:583 - ) better not add here ,pretty hard with the incoming 1/12
--
03:53:906 - there is a "Finish" here, add note ok
04:16:551 - ^ ok
04:19:647 - there is a kick here, add 2 note?
04:20:035 - there is a sound in here, add note? ^ for the sake of pattern better don't add xD
--

Frim4503 wrote:

col:1,2,3,4,5,6,7

General

i suggest you to change dif name from furioso maratona to Furioso Maratona no change, title of the song is fuorioso melodia, so keep the small letters

furioso maratona

00:26:422 (26422|3) - why not make it double ? there aren't bell sound here
00:32:551 (32551|2,32551|4) - remove. i think it's not very audible IMO oky
00:58:744 (58744|2) - move to 5 oky
03:35:583 (215583|1) - ^4. feels empty in there on purpose
03:41:777 (221777|1) - ^4 same reason ^

sorry just if my mod is useless

*support with star

[-MrSergio-] wrote:

Noob mod dalla mia queue :3

1|2|3|4|5|6|7|8|9|10

[General]

1. Ho visto che c'e' una cartella SB nella cartella della beatmap. Se hai intenzione di fare una SB, abilita lo Widescreen Support, mentre se non hai intenzione di farla, togli quella cartella, siccome contiene file inutili alla beatmap yup
2. Nei tags non serve scrivere sia "Ver" che "Version" siccome una e' inclusa nell'altra :3 oky

[furioso maratona]

1. 01:15:712 (75712|2,75777|4,75841|5,75906|6) - Che ne diresti di fare un giochetto con le dita come se si utilizzasse il vero strumento musicale? Intendo una cosa del genere: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3172193 oppure: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3172244 trill in 1/6 e' fuori questione in questa sezione ,poi questo pattern e' ababstanza divertente da giocare :d
2. 01:24:486 (84486|0) - LN fino a 01:24:680 - magari? Il suono si sente parecchio bene... se noti da questo punto in poi 01:25:260 - e' quasi tutto uno stream , il pattern precedente e' stato fatto per una introduzione piu' adeguata per la sezione che ho linkato
3. 02:40:744 (160744|3) - So di essere rompi balle con le LN, ma in questo caso lo dico perche' hai usato una LN anche per 04:21:389 (261389|3) - e per 01:12:486 (72486|5,72486|1) - notare gli sv" , in ogni sezione c'e' un tipo di suono differente ,qui c'e' un suono che assommiglia ad uno jump quindi... xD ,pero' questa sezione di sv e' fatta un pochino male, quindi modifico un po' di cose xd
4. 03:23:325 (203325|3) - LN fino a 03:23:583 - ?

no ,03:22:938 - da qui fino a qui 03:23:583 - ho seguito i bassi ed i crash ,se noti ho ignorato la melodia principale in questo punto ,anche perche' se dovessi mettere una LN qui 03:23:325 - ne dovrei metterne un'altra qui 03:23:454 - e cio' rovinerebbe questo pattern che e' gia' abbastanza complicato xd

Ok, purtroppo non riesco a toccare in maniera efficiente le parti completamente streammose (cioe' quasi tutto) siccome non ho esempi o punti di riferimento su mania ancora =3= (almeno non per questi livelli. Io gioco al massimo le HD xD).
Spero che almeno le poche cose che t'ho scritto ti aiutino con qualcosa :3
Buona fortuna ~

Shinzo- wrote:

IRC

15:03 Harbyter: hey shinzo
15:03 Harbyter: wanna mod this?
15:03 *Harbyter is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/687730 gmtn. (witch's slave) - furioso melodia]
15:03 Shinzo-: marathon ? :v
15:03 Harbyter: yes
15:03 Shinzo-: hmmm ok, but irc if can :v
15:03 Shinzo-: *not now hehe xD
15:04 Shinzo-: since ill afk
15:04 Harbyter: mmm
15:04 Harbyter: ok
15:04 Shinzo-: ok ^^ i might mod it when im back ^^
15:05 Shinzo-: lol im back
15:06 Shinzo-: now ? :v
15:06 Harbyter: lol
15:06 Shinzo-: tell me if u ready then
15:07 Harbyter: i'm free now
15:07 Harbyter: xD
15:07 Shinzo-: ok then lets go
15:08 *Shinzo- is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/687730 gmtn. (witch's slave) - furioso melodia [furioso maratona]]
15:09 Shinzo-: 00:03:196 (3196|6,3389|4) -  Ctrl G ? for pitch :v
15:09 Shinzo-: 00:09:389 (9389|6,9583|4) -  here too if yes ^
15:09 Harbyter: keep like this
15:09 Shinzo-: hmmm ok
15:10 Shinzo-: 00:18:744 (18744|1,18809|6,18873|5,18873|2,18938|4,19002|3) -  make some thrill ? since the sound is like repeating lol
15:11 Harbyter: eh
15:11 Harbyter: 1/6 trill?xd
15:11 Shinzo-: lel nevermind then
15:12 Shinzo-: yeah it will be crazy lol
15:12 Shinzo-: 00:21:777 -  add note ? i hear 3 sound actually :v
15:13 Shinzo-: 00:20:228 - 
15:13 Harbyter: yes
15:13 Shinzo-: u can add by urself for the rest right  ? xD
15:13 Harbyter: mmm
15:13 Harbyter: ok
15:13 Shinzo-: 00:26:422 -  1 note only o.o
15:14 Harbyter: yes
15:14 Shinzo-: ok then
15:14 Harbyter: before i wanted to keep always two notes
15:14 Harbyter: with that third sound
15:15 Harbyter: but if i add the third sound then
15:15 Harbyter: will add there too
15:15 Harbyter: xd
15:15 Shinzo-: ahhh xD
15:15 Shinzo-: ok then up to ur desicion
15:15 Shinzo-: 00:46:164 (46164|5,46164|2,46164|0) -  i think delete 1 for consistency since 00:49:647 (49647|6,49647|5,49647|4,49841|5,49841|6,49841|4,50035|6,50035|4,50035|5,50228|6,50228|4,50228|5) -  these 3 note are with cymbal lol
15:15 Shinzo-: *one of it
15:16 Harbyter: oh
15:16 Harbyter: that one
15:16 Harbyter: wrong keysound
15:16 Harbyter: 00:46:164 (46164|0) -
15:16 Shinzo-: oh lol
15:16 Harbyter: rabbia°
15:16 Harbyter: is a kick
15:16 Shinzo-: ooh so keep ?
15:16 Harbyter: added the latest one
15:17 Harbyter: yep
15:17 Shinzo-: okay then
15:17 Shinzo-: 00:54:035 -  kinda missing a note :p
15:17 Harbyter: purpose u.u
15:18 Shinzo-: purpose ? :v
15:18 Harbyter: yep
15:19 Shinzo-: i dont understand but nevermind xD
15:19 Harbyter: is for the pattern
15:19 Shinzo-: ohhh okay
15:19 Harbyter: you don't have to follow always the same consistency
15:19 Shinzo-: 00:46:551 (46551|6) -  why didnt end 00:46:744 -  here ? no one can perfect that u,u
15:19 Harbyter: 00:46:793 -  distance for this
15:20 Shinzo-: 00:46:793 (46793|3,46793|6,46841|2,46841|5,46889|4,46889|1,46938|3,46938|0) -  also these should star00:46:744 -  lol
15:21 Harbyter: :v
15:21 Shinzo-: 00:47:035 (47035|2,47131|4,47228|6) -  make some jack ? since it just 1 note x_x
15:21 Harbyter: mmm
15:21 Harbyter: better no
15:21 Shinzo-: fine !
15:23 Shinzo-: 00:59:422 (59422|2) -  move to 5 ? so the bracket will more sync with the song 
15:23 Harbyter: oky
15:24 Shinzo-: 01:00:099 (60099|0,60164|1,60228|2,60293|3,60357|2,60357|4,60422|5,60422|1,60486|6,60486|0) -  Y
15:24 Shinzo-: lol
15:24 Harbyter: xD
15:24 Shinzo-: 01:01:067 (61067|1,61260|2) -  ctrl G ? for pitch
15:25 Harbyter: mmm
15:25 Harbyter: kinda weird like this
15:25 Harbyter: keep
15:25 Shinzo-: nvm then
15:25 Shinzo-: 01:03:583 -  mmmmmm i dont know, theres no bass but 5 note ? x_x
15:26 Harbyter: there is o,o
15:26 Shinzo-: i hear cymbal only
15:26 Shinzo-: but its up to u :v
15:26 Shinzo-: 01:04:551 (64551|3) -  move to 5 ?
15:27 Harbyter: bass in this section are all in 1/2
15:27 Harbyter: ok
15:27 Shinzo-: 01:09:099 (69099|1,69196|2) -  ctrl G ? for pitch
15:28 Shinzo-: 01:09:454 (69454|1,69518|2,69583|1,69583|4,69647|3,69712|4) -  nah i mean like this before ! 
15:28 Shinzo-: make something like that
15:28 Harbyter: wut
15:29 Shinzo-: that what i say about thrill lol
15:29 Shinzo-: its not thrill full at all lol
15:29 Harbyter: ahh
15:29 Harbyter: nah that part at the start keep lke that
15:29 Shinzo-: yes
15:29 Shinzo-: ohh okay
15:30 Shinzo-: 01:46:260 -  missing note ?
15:31 Harbyter: no o,o
15:31 Shinzo-: okay
15:32 Shinzo-: 01:49:647 (109647|6,109696|5,109744|4,109793|3,109841|6) -  oh my wow
15:33 Shinzo-: can u please ctrl H then move 3 column to right
15:33 Shinzo-: so it will be looks neat
15:33 Harbyter: mmmm
15:33 Harbyter: painfull to play
15:33 Harbyter: like this
15:33 Shinzo-: hmmm but 01:49:777 (109777|2,109793|3) -  lol
15:34 Shinzo-: eehhh then up to u
15:34 Harbyter: is pretty easy to hit
15:34 Harbyter: you should know
15:34 Harbyter: xD
15:34 Shinzo-: yeah just want it look neat :p
15:36 Shinzo-: 02:40:164 (160164|3) -  delete this or 02:39:777 -  add note here
15:37 Harbyter: sv°
15:37 Shinzo-: hmm yeah nevermind then
15:38 Shinzo-: 03:20:680 (200680|6) -  this should be same like 03:20:809 (200809|1,200809|4) -  but i dont know, since ur not is based on pattern
15:39 Shinzo-: 03:22:938 -  03:23:325 -  add note cymbal ?
15:39 Shinzo-: *note
15:40 Harbyter: keep chord of 4°
15:40 Harbyter: at the start there were 5 notes
15:40 Shinzo-: fine
15:40 Harbyter: but nerfed the whole song
15:40 Harbyter: before was 6.4
15:40 Harbyter: xD
15:41 Harbyter: mapped following the consistence and urh
15:41 Harbyter: lol
15:41 Shinzo-: okok
15:42 Shinzo-: seems like didnt helping so far x_x
15:42 Harbyter: nah
15:42 Harbyter: everything is good
15:44 Shinzo-: 04:28:260 (268260|2,268260|4) -  i can hear it clearly but why u add 2 note ?
15:45 Harbyter: raising up the difficulty°
15:45 Harbyter: xD
15:45 Shinzo-: 05:06:680 -  add note cymbal ?
15:46 Harbyter: better not
15:46 Harbyter: only slot left are 2 and 5
15:46 Harbyter: so there will be jacks
15:46 Shinzo-: to raise up the difficulty
15:46 Shinzo-: xd
15:46 Shinzo-: xD
15:47 Harbyter: eh
15:47 Harbyter: but unconfortable pattern
15:47 Harbyter: better avoid
15:47 Harbyter: lol
15:47 Shinzo-: yeah im kidding
15:47 Harbyter: the double 1/8 is already hard
15:47 Shinzo-: okay

[ C r a c k ] wrote:

Hi bro ^^/
Here as your request in chat.

Columns: 1|2|3|4|5|6|7

furioso Harbyterino

SPOILER

1. 00:49:260 (49260|4) - Replace this note with a slider up to 00:49:454 - ? oky
2. 00:52:357 (52357|1) - The same suggestion like up oky
3. 00:51:196 - What do you think you to add a note here ? Going on, you put 4 notes for the same sound mmm keep three notes here for this pattern xD
4. 00:56:422 - Are there some missing notes ? Here the sound is similar to 00:56:228 - where you have put three notes lel fixed
5. 00:58:551 (58551|3) - Replace with slider ? oky
6. 01:15:777 (75777|4,75841|5,75906|6) - Do ctrl+g ? oky
7. 01:46:260 - Add a note ? no keep here,no additional sound for three notes
8. 02:08:809 (128809|5) - Move to 7 ? (Similar drum sound at 02:08:615 - ) will ruin the pattern in this section if i move,so keep
9. 02:26:680 - Missing note on porpose xD
10. 03:27:067 - I think you should fix this part up to 03:27:583 - I have no suggestions at the moment lol wut

Really, really cool map! I wish you will rank it, your hard work deserves to be rewarded

( 　ﾉ・ω・)ノ

KawaEE wrote:

sorry, too late wwwww

fusioso maratong

00:25:647 - ~ 00:26:422 - about, just feedback xD



00:47:325 (47325|0,47422|3,47518|6,47615|3) -
^idk this is a little weird.
00:47:325 - ~ 00:47:518 - if u r represented here as long note, it seems more better. ▽
for example


00:59:325 (59325|3,59422|4,59518|3,59615|4) - about
if you skip this, 00:59:422 (59422|4,59615|4) -
what do you think about it is to emphasize? this 00:59:325 - 00:59:518 - ▽



01:09:454 (69454|1,69518|2,69583|4,69583|1,69647|3,69712|4) - for smooth play? ▽



01:15:777 (75777|6,75841|5,75906|4) - move to one left(654)


01:35:518 (95518|4,95615|3,95712|4) - col change.
^ 01:35:518 (95518|4,95712|4) - move to col 4 01:35:615 (95615|3) - move to col 5

01:36:680 (96680|2) - move to 2

01:37:067 - ~ 01:37:647 - feedback? ▽



01:46:938 - hmmm add at 5?


01:46:647 (106647|1) - move to 4 and 01:46:744 (106744|0,106793|1,106841|2,106889|3) - move to one right?

02:35:325 (155325|1) - move to 1 for relevance? with 02:35:712 (155712|6) -

02:43:841 - ~ 02:44:228 - better string expression? ▽



03:02:293 (182293|1,182293|3,182422|1,182422|3) - about this.
^ if you do not use a this hammer, i think the quality would be better. of course personally xD
for example ▽
03:02:164 (182164|2,182293|3,182293|1) - = 02:55:970 (175970|3,176099|4,176099|2) - idk same beat.

03:08:486 (188486|1,188486|5,188615|5,188615|1) - ^same mod(03:02:293 (182293|1,182293|3,182422|1,182422|3) - about this)
for example ▽
03:08:486 (188486|2,188486|1,188486|5,188615|6,188615|1,188615|0,188615|5) - =
03:11:583 (191583|3,191583|4,191583|2,191712|0,191712|5,191712|1,191712|6) - idk same beat


03:30:551 (210551|6) - move to 6 and 03:30:680 (210680|5) - move to 3


04:14:809 (254809|1) - move to 1


04:15:002 (255002|0,255002|3,255002|5,255067|2,255067|4,255131|1,255131|3) - about,
^if you reduce chord amount, it may be a better pattern.
when i viewed a around note, there is only 2 chord. in string
for example


04:27:777 (267777|1,267777|2,267841|3) - col change?
^04:27:777 (267777|2,267777|1) - move to 3,4 and 04:27:841 (267841|3) - move to 2


04:34:357 (274357|1) - move to 1?
^ like relevance? ▽



just suggestion, u can add for emphasize.
04:43:454 - add at 2 / 04:44:228 - add at 6 / 04:45:002 - add at 1


05:10:986 (310986|1,311002|2,311035|3,311067|4,311083|5) - it seems 6+8 snap 8drum 6string.
^ i think it is better to unify only 8 or 6
but personally idk it's not a problem. just I'm, When only considering the playing and for better obvious expression

good Luk xD

I hope ranked! <3

pporse wrote:

hello habi

IRC MOD

17:49 pporse: hi
17:49 Harbyter: yoyo
17:49 *pporse is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/687730 gmtn. (witch's slave) - furioso melodia]
17:49 pporse: nice map
17:49 Harbyter: oh
17:50 Harbyter: isn't it weird
17:50 Harbyter: ?
17:50 pporse: not weird :3 it's good
17:50 Harbyter: i think there are some pattern
17:50 Harbyter: that can be polished
17:51 *pporse is playing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/687730 gmtn. (witch's slave) - furioso melodia [furioso maratona]] <osu!mania> |7K|
17:57 pporse:
17:57 pporse: nice map
17:57 Harbyter: mmm
17:58 Harbyter: do you think some pattern need to be more confortable
17:58 pporse: i like this map's various pattern
17:58 Harbyter: ?
17:58 pporse: umm
17:58 pporse: wait
17:58 Harbyter: i saw some section
17:58 Harbyter: where you missed
17:59 pporse: 02:19:712 (139712|4,139712|0,139841|1,139841|0,139841|5,139841|4,140099|2,140099|6,140228|2,140228|1,140228|6,140228|5) - personal weakness lol
17:59 Harbyter: yes here
17:59 Harbyter: lol
17:59 Harbyter: 01:34:164 (94164|1,94164|4,94164|0,94228|2,94293|3,94357|1,94357|5,94422|3,94486|4,94551|0,94551|6,94551|2,94551|5) -
17:59 Harbyter: here too i think
18:00 pporse: ah that is okay
18:00 Harbyter: 02:19:712 (139712|4,139841|4) - move in 7?
18:00 Harbyter: 02:20:099 (140099|6,140228|6) - this in 5
18:00 Harbyter: 02:20:615 (140615|5) - this in 5 too
18:01 pporse: no no keep it. it's just my personal weakness
18:01 Harbyter: but is weird to play
18:01 Harbyter: i keep missing there too
18:01 Harbyter: lol
18:02 pporse: lol then change it xD
18:02 Harbyter: 01:40:357 -
18:02 Harbyter: here?
18:04 pporse: that pattern is fine
18:05 Harbyter: k
18:06 Harbyter: 03:16:744 -
18:06 Harbyter: here?
18:06 Harbyter: i think here is awkward
18:07 pporse: 03:17:002 (197002|1,197002|0,197131|1,197131|0,197131|2,197260|2,197389|1,197389|2,197518|0,197518|1) - hmm
18:08 pporse: keep it? that pattern is okay for me
18:09 Harbyter: ok
18:09 pporse: 03:17:518 (197518|3,197518|5,197647|4,197647|6) - 03:17:906 (197906|2,197906|4,198035|1,198035|3) - but this notes
18:09 pporse: how about changing to jack pattern?
18:10 Harbyter: jack?
18:10 Harbyter: better?
18:10 Harbyter: oh for pitch
18:11 pporse: yea
18:13 Harbyter: mmmm
18:13 Harbyter: i have to reduce some chord
18:15 pporse: 03:30:680 - end - actually this part is really good.
18:15 Harbyter: http://puu.sh/iANbF/a8cb2bd7ab.jpg
18:16 Harbyter: what do you think
18:17 pporse: oh nice
18:17 Harbyter: removed mostly the note with 'legnata'
18:17 Harbyter: lol
18:18 pporse: 03:30:680 - end - using LN is nice
18:19 Harbyter: yes
18:19 Harbyter: change of stile
18:20 Harbyter: 04:09:002 (249002|3,249099|1,249196|5,249293|3) -
18:20 pporse: nice attempt
18:20 Harbyter: better change in ln to?
18:21 pporse: umm
18:21 pporse: keep it?
18:21 Harbyter: ok
18:21 pporse: current pattern is good for me
18:22 pporse: 04:16:357 (256357|6,256454|6,256454|5,256454|4) - orz my personal weaknees 2
18:22 Harbyter: oh
18:22 Harbyter: that jack
18:23 Harbyter: 04:17:131 -
18:23 Harbyter: here
18:23 Harbyter: i saw you missed lot here
18:23 Harbyter: this pattern is hard
18:23 Harbyter: any suggestion?
18:23 pporse: no keep it :3 it's good
18:24 pporse: actually when i played this part, my hands are tired lol
18:24 Harbyter: ok
18:24 pporse: 04:52:164 (292164|6,292164|4,292164|0) -
18:25 pporse: umm i think it's 1 or 2 chord enough
18:25 Harbyter: k
18:25 Harbyter: removed note 1
18:25 Harbyter: 04:52:164 (292164|6) - move in 3
18:26 pporse: ok
18:26 Harbyter: 04:52:357 (292357|2) - this in 4
18:26 Harbyter: 04:51:970 (291970|3) - this better in 11?
18:27 pporse: 11 lol
18:27 Harbyter: 1°
18:27 Harbyter: xD
18:27 pporse: both nice it's up to you
18:28 pporse: 05:11:325 - nice idea
18:29 pporse: 1/4 snap -> 1/2 snap -> 1/1 snap -> end lol
18:29 Harbyter: ah
18:29 Harbyter: eh
18:29 Harbyter: the music is like this
18:29 Harbyter: xD
18:30 pporse: really suited with the music
18:30 pporse: nice map
18:30 Harbyter: oky
18:30 Harbyter: any other things? o,o
18:31 pporse: no that's it
18:31 pporse: gogo ranked
18:31 Harbyter: ok
18:31 Harbyter: post the irc?
18:31 Harbyter: xD
18:31 Harbyter: ty for modderino u,u

nice song nice pattern
nice map

stryver12 wrote:

furioso maratonia OwO

[4k]
00:31:067 - LN?
02:27:325 - I'm rather confused at this one... some are one notes, some are two... if you're following the melody, why not make it all doubles? It's Insane diff... anyway
04:18:680 - 04:20:099 triple note every 1/3s? for cymbal and kick
04:20:615 - repattern to jackhammers? (climax effect)
05:36:099 - 05:46:551 it's more silent compared to 05:23:712 - 05:35:906, it would be recommended to make 2 note per kick for 05:23:712 - 05:35:906 too
(I see only one mapped per kick....)

[7k]
00:31:067 - same as 4k
04:19:647 - you mapped the kick on 4k but not on 7k...
04:20:615 - same as 4k

ugh.... I suck at modding....

iJinjin wrote:

Hey Harby~ sorry for taking so long ;-;

[4K furioso maratona]
00:03:583 (3583|1,3777|2,3970|0,4164|1) - If I were you, I'd strictly follow the pitch of the bell in the intro because it's the only thing getting mapped. Maybe like this http://puu.sh/j4QDN/62a0b67385.jpg

00:07:067 (7067|0,7260|1) - ctrl + G for the reason above

00:09:777 (9777|1,9970|2,10164|0,10357|1) - Same as 00:03:583

and etc. for pitch up to 00:14:035 - after this you don't have to follow pitch cuz multiple instrumentation

01:31:938 (91938|1) - pretty sure this is a ghost note :p

tbh everything else seems fine, really fun to play i love the lns close to the end too

[7k furioso maratona]
00:03:196 - i guess you can follow the pitch strictly like i told you to on 4k but now that i think about it you don't have to change it if you don't want to xD

01:25:260 - I have a feeling that the QATs will think these 1/4 notes are ghost notes.. but I guess you can explain haha

02:03:583 (123583|3,123777|3) - I think you can avoid the minijack here

03:27:325 (207325|0,207325|4,207325|1) - You should emphasize with more notes here like 03:26:809 (206809|4,206809|6,206809|2,206809|0,207067|4,207067|6,207067|0,207067|2) -

03:29:389 (209389|0,209454|1,209518|2) - It might be slightly easier to hit if this was reversed (ctrl+G)

03:30:228 (210228|1,210357|1,210486|1) - That seems a bit hard.. idk xp i guess you can keep it haha

overall, i think the patterns are fine ~

good luck on rank :3/ take some stars

Niks wrote:

offset 1648 -> 1643

good luck
i love this map

MEGAtive wrote:

Hi Harby
Sorry for late mod
Mod req via PM in-game

gmtn. (witch's slave) - furioso melodia

Column
|1|2|3|4|

[General]
Hitsounds: Already good
Audio: 192kbps. Though there's some damaged bitrate because it's converted from 320kbps but it is fine.
Graphics: 1366x768
Metadata: Disable widescreen support on "4K furioso maratona"

[4K furioso maratona]

Mods

1. 00:26:481 - You can add a note here to emphasize the piano grace here. better no xD
   
2. I compared 00:35:707 - 00:38:804 - 00:41:901 - 00:44:997 - parts since they sounds similiar, but it seems that I can't understand the reasoning on the 1/4s. As an example, 00:35:997 - 00:39:094 - and 00:42:191 - they shares same ryhthm, but some parts are left empty. My thought right now is you're following the hats since that is the only instrument here that got 1/4s, but it's done inconsistently. Maybe you can refer the patterns on each part so it can be more consistent.I know it is incosistent but i've mapped here my own rhytm , cause a repetitive 1/4 pattern would be boring here
   
3. 00:48:030 - IDK maybe it's just me but I find that this shield aren't that comfortable since it only give a 64ms respond time between releasing the LNs and pressing the next notes. Maybe you can end the LNs at 00:47:997 so it gives more respond time.reducing the lenght of the LN is more unconfortable since you have to press and release it way faster
   
4. 01:03:578 - 01:09:772 - I suggests you to switch the anchoring column here to |4|, letting 01:00:481 - 01:06:675 - to handle |1| anchor. Current pattern are so left-handed. Doing this spreads the pattern more so it's not really one-handed based.actally i've made the column 1 heavy on purpose , watching the hitsounds you should understand
   
5. 01:21:772 - Try http://puu.sh/prbd8/49ed191f67.png ? It felt more comfortable to execute.ok
   
6. 01:25:449 (85449|2,85546|1) - You can Ctrl+H this so column |3| wouldn't cluttered with more anchor. Applies with 01:31:642 (91642|1,91739|2) and same reasoning.ok
   
7. 01:49:642 - Maybe you can try http://puu.sh/prKoh/759986d5bd.png since this pattern makes you to play 1/6 trill in left hand and 1/8 trill in right hand. But yeah you still can reject this if you don't want a 1/8 trill here.better no xD
   
8. 02:13:901 - Maybe it's better to make this double. It sounds similiar with 02:13:642 instead with 02:14:030 - no change, actually at this point starts the heavy kicks
   
9. 02:51:965 - You can try http://puu.sh/prKVX/4c7d9f8f50.png so the vocal sample there are covered too. adding that 1/4 will destroy the playability due to the SVs
   
10. 05:11:320 - Maybe you can map this song until 05:48:288 . Nice as a cooldown part.prefer to end the song at this point, cause the remaining part is really boring

This is already good. Can't say much about this. Please approve. Good Luck~

Fresh Chicken wrote:

Okay here I am.

7K furioso maratona

00:21:384 (21384|6,21481|5,21578|6,21772|6) - It's good for now but just for more playable a little a little bit. 00:21:772 (21772|6) - How about move it to 6? But it's fine to let be. So depend on you

00:23:707 (23707|4,23707|1,23901|6,23901|3) - This part will be great if you give some different without current pattern. Seems there has some different sounds. Let me example.

Example

00:26:417 (26417|2,26417|0) - Similar reason with above. Seems this part can be change for more different feeling. Give some difference. 00:25:642 - ~ 00:26:223 - These are kinda unnatural in my opinion.

00:50:933 (50933|3) - Move it to 1, for more good balance. also if you feel column 4 is kinda empty, suggest to move some notes which are on col 1.2.3

00:53:513 - I have some playable issue on here, the hammer is not be a problem but my pointing it this. 00:53:610 (53610|3) - If you're a left spacebar hander, it's 100% uncomfortable that interlock with 00:53:417 - this pattern, actually I'm so now so. So I think this pattern is more good to go

This

00:57:255 (57255|1) - Actually it's personal opinion but it would be more good at hand balance if you move it to 1

01:39:191 (99191|1) - Move it to 3, seems 01:38:804 (98804|1,98997|1,99191|1,99384|1) - they don't need to be hammer.

01:43:449 - If you add some LN in here, it would be great for feel this map but depend on you

02:26:288 - To be honest I really want to add SV on here. Here's some suggestion about SV. (They're 1/12)
02:26:288 - 1.5x
02:26:384 - 0.5x
02:26:546 - 1.5x
02:26:642 - 0.5x
02:26:804 - 1.5x
02:26:901 - 0.5x
02:27:062 - 1x
Hope you try it

02:51:191 - I think here's need some improving. Hmm how about this?

This

03:20:481 (200481|3) - It's better to remove. Seems you focused on amount of notes but playable it more important in my opinion.

Let me check 4K later. please reply for it.

Fresh Chicken wrote:

Okay we have some IRC in Discord.

Nuked!

Bubbled!

Congratulation

Feerum wrote:

Nomination Check #2


Column: | 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 | 5 | 6 | 7 |
======================================================
Red means Unrankable stuff
Big means Important stuff
Normal are Suggestions
// means comments
======================================================

Hello Harbyter.
Sorry for the delay. Here is my check for your Map for the 2nd Bubble

4K furioso maratona

01:25:739 (85739|1) - Pretty sure this one is a ghost note. You also haven't mapped this in the 7K. oky
01:28:836 (88836|1) - Same this one like above. oky
01:31:933 (91933|1) - Same here. oky
04:49:255 (289255|3,289449|2) - Shouldn't this be only 1 LN? if you listen carefuly there are two piano pitch in 1/2
I mean according to 04:49:642 (289642|0,290030|1,290417|0,290804|1) -
04:55:449 (295449|0,295642|1) - here too. Also in the 7K the same. same here

^This was more a snapping check through the whole diff, now to a balance and PR Part:

00:20:223 (20223|2,20223|0,20610|3,20610|1) - it would be cool to have them at the same column or at least one note at the same column since the melody has here the same PR. oky
00:22:933 (22933|0) - Maybe move this to 2 to have PR with 00:22:546 (22546|3,22739|2,23126|0) - (4-3-2-1) to the melody.
Since you also have here the PR up 00:23:513 (23513|0,23707|1,23901|2,24094|3) - with 1-2-3-4 oky

I can't find really more in the 4K. Well Mapped and absolute ready for Rank.

7K furioso maratona

00:53:417 - Pretty sure missing note, according to 00:52:836 - ok
02:08:707 (128707|1) - I am pretty sure this note should be better here: 02:08:513 - . The hihat is here pretty audible and i recommend to move it here because where the note is currently there is no real audible sound.ok
02:11:707 - Recommend to add here a note on 3. You have here a pretty high pitched cymbal like 02:13:255 - and 02:13:642 - and it could help to emphasize it. Also it seems me more consistent with the other 3-noted chords you have here c:ok

02:59:707 (179707|5,179707|1,179997|2,179997|4) - Notes and LN Endings are Wrong Snapped. They should be at a 1/3 beat here: 02:59:965 - . See as reference in the 4K Diff: not bad

Screen

03:16:481 - Are you absolute sure you want to keep this heavy drum empty? In the 4K you have mapped it. changed

That's also all for the 7K, very nice (:

Call me baaacku c:

Feerum wrote:

Alright!
Re-Checked everything. Looks very cool

Bubbled #2

gogogo one of my fav songs almost there.

Kawawa wrote:

Hello, long friend! It's my turn now.
SV, Metadata, All General Confirmed.

[General]
※Audio Volume
50% → 25 ~ 30%.
players can feel just noise from "w" spam. I think It needs to be reduced as possible.

※Remove Bookmark on 7K diff.
It's not mean unranked issue.
It's used to separate the music part or something else.
but It has been unsnapped on section. It kinda bother to me a bit.
and It does not need. because unsnapped. http://puu.sh/qbOeD/9ad1190640.jpg

[4K furioso maratona]
I recommend you that avoid to jack at here 01:11:997 (71997|0,72094|0) -
There's a intention for impact. but you can consider once again.
I feel It difference of structure on this section 01:12:094 - with under 01:11:707 (71707|3,71804|1,71901|2,71997|0) -
Can consider with these 04:20:901 (260901|0,260997|2,260997|3) -

01:43:352 (103352|1) - What do you think? remove this one.
01:43:255 - 01:43:642 (103642|1) - Just follow these open hihat than close hihat 01:43:352 (103352|1) -
Sample :: https://puu.sh/qbnQA/3d205d327e.jpg

02:08:997 (128997|0) - move to 2. Just a suggestion. There is 4 hammer. 02:08:610 (128610|0,128804|0,128997|0,129191|0) -

02:11:707 - ~ 02:14:804 - https://puu.sh/qbpoe/51f0199bc7.jpg
What do you think about this. It's better for drum expression. personally.

02:37:255 (157255|2,157384|2) - move to 4.
If you can make same col to them 02:37:255 (157255|2,157255|0,157255|1,157384|1,157384|0,157384|2,157513|3,157513|0,157513|1) -
then It will be better to play for feeling.
as a example, you can could feel that same instrument from this ▽
02:36:481 (156481|2,156481|0,156481|1,156610|1,156610|0,156610|2,156739|0,156739|1,156739|2) -
like 03:27:578 - 03:28:352 -

04:40:255 - remove a note. 1chord used only from another same section.
compare with this like 01:31:352 - 04:27:868 -

[7K furioso maratona]
00:38:223 (38223|3,38417|3,38610|3) - Personally, It needs to be spread for place

00:43:546 (43546|2) - remove this. I could see that you kept the hihat notes with 4K mapset.
but this one was not only. http://puu.sh/qbKym/afd81a8fc3.jpg

00:50:804 - ~ 00:51:191 - what do you think about? Sample :: http://puu.sh/qbKBD/dae3afdf42.jpg

01:18:288 - ~ 01:19:062 - It can be comflex when player reads the pattern. Sample :: http://puu.sh/qbKWe/15de571971.jpg

01:31:062 - ~ 01:31:449 - Same with above, because you mixed the expression that synth instrument with drum.
Sample :: http://puu.sh/qbL8R/f627dda8b0.jpg

01:35:126 (95126|4) - move to 3(column 1/2/3/4/5/6/7)

01:45:191 - I know you wanted the notes consitency with 4K. but you can add a note at 6. It will be better pattern shape.

02:08:707 - Add a note. I could see that you used hihat sounds as patterns in this section 02:08:610 - ~ 02:11:707 -

02:30:159 (150159|4,150159|5,150159|6,150288|6,150288|5,150288|4) - can be spread more easily. Sample :: http://puu.sh/qbLzN/8d9840345d.jpg
There's a LN on right hand. It will be tricky a bit. made something differente

02:43:707 - ~ 02:44:223 - I think It can be improved something. Sample :: http://puu.sh/qbLKR/f6a7f706eb.jpg

02:51:062 (171062|2) - move to 1. keep the pattern structure with 02:50:675 (170675|6) -

03:15:062 (195062|6,195062|4,195126|5,195191|6,195191|4) - I really don't think these bursket patterns as expression for these music structure.
Sample :: http://puu.sh/qbLX3/013c30b524.jpg

03:23:191 - remove a note. when I compared with around crash section 03:23:320 - It feels weak than them.
yeah, I feel same chord with 03:23:062 (203062|2,203062|3,203062|4) - And you also kept them on your 4K diffs.

03:28:094 (208094|4) - Just a suggetion. move to 6. You can make 3hammers for better shape.

03:52:352 - Add a note or two. for cymbal sound. and It is 7K. don't need to ignore that.
03:53:126 - Same with above.
03:53:901 - Same with above. up to you.

04:11:804 (251804|1,251804|5,251901|6,251901|2,251997|0,251997|3) -
04:12:191 (252191|2,252191|6,252288|0,252288|3,252384|1,252384|4) -
This two section is different feeling to me. It can make as some difference. Sample :: http://puu.sh/qbMp9/45bfdcd49b.jpg

04:12:481 (252481|6) - use the LN. like 04:12:481 (252481|2) -
because I could see the two LNs for that instrument from under part. like 04:10:933 (250933|3,250933|4,251320|4,251320|0) -

04:15:481 (255481|0) - remove. It does not need for pattern structure. and you did not it on these section. 04:17:030 - keep,if you listen there is a synth in 1/4 here,it's different from the second part where there aren't any synth

04:44:481 (284481|5,284546|4) - reverse the column. for readable easily. but you can keep If you want.

04:45:481 (285481|3) - move to 5. same reason with above.

04:56:804 (296804|2,296804|4) - I could not understand this two LN. I'm not sure about this If there is no intention. this one should be removed. keep, want to keep the consistence of those double LN in the red lines here

04:58:159 (298159|5,298159|6) - Same with above. I recommend you this Sample :: http://puu.sh/qbN04/dd808d7bd3.jpg keep, one is for the synt ,LN with 'hit' sample and one is for the bell sound in the BG , the LN with ''w'' sample

05:01:933 (301933|3) - move to 5.

05:02:030 - ~ 05:03:578 - About the this part.
I feel It's better. Sample :: http://puu.sh/qbN8C/81ec3aa4b6.jpg
because It is repeating structure 2times on each section. 05:02:030 - 05:02:417 - // 05:02:804 - 05:03:191 -
so you don't need to use the two stair pattern at here 05:02:707 - 05:03:481 -
because you used a 1 chords on them 05:02:320 (302320|3,303094|3) -

05:07:836 - ~ 05:08:223 - What do you think about? Sample :: http://puu.sh/qbNif/658119924e.jpg

when you applied these, call me anytime.
havi hovi!

ajeemaniz wrote:

furryoso melodia ayy

throwback 1 year ago, w00t p00t

Harbyter wrote:

it's happening AYYYYYYY

Harbyter wrote:

it's happening AYYYYYYY

sahuang wrote:

Now we have mania furioso
Gratz!

SpectorDG wrote:

huwa huwa harbaya congratz <3

erlinadewi- wrote:

wow... nice song!

Gratz Harby owo)b

Kyousuke- wrote:

Harbyter wrote:

it's happening AYYYYYYY

big grats to you!!
awesome map =w=)b

puxtu wrote:

https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5685948 harby the god snap