[General]*The plate on fruit-ryuuta is a bit messy (and what's that random line by the guy's head?)
*I see pause menu buttons, but no pause-overlay?
*A section-fail is missing.
*The guy on the far left of section-pass is cropped strangely (his arm and foot).
*(Nazi) Default/Score 1 and 9 could be moved up a pixel or two (they look slightly lower than the other numbers).
*I see why TheVileOne's diff has a longer audio lead-in (since it starts two measures earlier), but the other four difficulties start at the same place. Thus, those four should have the same lead-in.
*Audio quality doesn't sound that terrific. Any chance of getting a better mp3?
*If not, the offset could use a -10.
[Ciel]*Argh @kiai not ending at the same spot as your other difficulty. *punches the spinner* You
could end the kiai halfway through @01:28:591, which would give the kiai stars a fading-out effect, but I guess it really doesn't matter...
00:04:091 (1) - expected a finish on the end of this
00:18:591 (1) - How about gradually decreasing the volume of this?
01:27:841 (1) - Finish is a lot louder than I expected
*I expected more sliders to end on the blue tick than just the first of the song and the first of the chorus. :c
[Alois]*Try to avoid so many random offbeat blue tick notes. They're too hard to predict in easier difficulties. Remember that many players will be sightreading this song for the first time, so you can't expect them to know the melody already. You should be utilizing sliders more than single notes for all of the offbeat blue tick notes.
00:18:591 (1) - Same silencing suggestion
00:30:466 (1,2,3) - These sound VERY awkward. It's probably because of the claps on the ends. x_x
00:34:466 (1,2,3) - spacing?
00:38:966 (1,2,3,4,5) - Again with the blue ticks. How about using sliders instead? :v
01:00:091 (4,5,6) - (nazi) spacing
*Not only are so many of the offbeats unpredictable, but then you start mapping sliders white tick to white tick towards the end. This is inconsistent and even more confusing. @-@
[Kid's Grell]*A harder difficulty, so I expected more use of the offbeats. But instead, I see mapping mainly to the white/red ticks or sliders for the offbeats. If this had been another Haneii difficulty, I'd REALLY be getting mixed messages here. x_x On that note, though, I see nothing unrankable.
[Vibty's Claude]01:04:216 (7) - uhhhhh shorten by 1/4th?
01:12:341 (3,1) - hmmm maybe add a spinner to this gap?
*The streams were a bit more spaced-out than I would've liked to seen, but overall the map wasn't bad.
[TheVileOne's Sebastian]00:03:716 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - 1/8th stream whatttttt
*Oh god the distance spacing for the streams (it just gets larger and larger) @_____@
*I don't want to say that this is overmapped, but it's pretty crazy...