00:13:651 (40) - the rhythm before here looks wonderful! i love it very much. but...its a good choice to add a blue note right here: 00:13:851 - to come up with the last sound.
00:15:651 (42,43,44,45,46,47,48,49,50,51,52,53,54,55,56,57,58,59,60,61,62,63,64,65,66) - the next three repeats look the same. why not changing some notes on the 2nd one? (its ok to keep the 1st and 3rd one) heres a plan, or you can use other plans:
changing the color of these notes: 00:20:451 (83,84,89) -
00:33:451 (165,166) - change the color into red: for creating an atmosphere of going up. after this, you may also and a red note here to make it ddd: 00:33:551 -
00:44:051 (211) - make it red: for not very suitable for going up.
01:12:451 (34,35,36,37,38,39) - you may ignored the rhythm here: 01:12:651 (36) - this one is not very suitable, delete it. and do some changes to make it different from the previous one, such as changing colors or add one of your choice here: 01:12:951 -
also do the same change on 01:15:651 (52,53,54,55,56,57) -
01:19:151 (73) - red is better for the same tone with 01:18:851 (72) -
01:19:651 (75,76,77,78,79,80,81,82,83,84,85,86,87,88,89,90,91) - change these to into red 01:19:751 (76,84) - for displaying the beat sound
well, the 2nd part of the lyrics is pretty good.
01:37:651 (210,211,212) - delete these and 01:38:251 (213,214) - make these red, to display the 2 crashes
02:23:651 (194,195,196,197,198,199,200,201,202,203,204,205,206,207,208,209,210,211,212,213,214,215,216,217,218,219,220,221,222,223,224,225,226,227,228,229,230,231,232,233,234,235,236,237,238,239,240,241,242,243,244,245,246,247,248,249,250,251,252,253,254,255,256,257,258,259,260,261,262,263,264,265,266,267,268,269,270,271,272,273,274,275,276,277,278,279,280,281,282,283,284,285,286,287,288,289,290,291,292,293,294,295,296,297,298,299,300,301,302,303,304,305,306,307,308,309,310,311,312,313,314,315,316,317,318) - feel not very suitable to make it so long. if you desire to, ignore this.
the speed-up part looks so good! nothing changes.