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S3RL feat Krystal - R4V3 B0Y

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DeRandom Otaku
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DeRandom Otaku
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Monday, October 24, 2016 at 5:37:04 PM

Artist: S3RL feat Krystal
Title: R4V3 B0Y
Tags: happy hardcore EMFA music rave boy Shmiklak FCL ByBy ByBy13 ByBy_Chan Marvollo M_a_r_v_o_l_l_o
BPM: 175
Filesize: 3850kb
Play Time: 02:56
Difficulties Available:
  1. 1N54N3 (4.42 stars, 550 notes)
  2. 3XTR4 (5.28 stars, 587 notes)
  3. FCL's H4RD (3.34 stars, 468 notes)
  4. RenBy's N0RM4L (2.19 stars, 300 notes)
  5. Shmik's 34SY (1.5 stars, 182 notes)
Download: S3RL feat Krystal - R4V3 B0Y
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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#6

Meta , Mp3 , BG , Literally everything taken from Draftnell's cool mania set
Easy : Shmiklak
Collab normal : Me (First Half) and ByBy (Second Half)
Hard : FCL

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Last edited by DeRandom Otaku , edited 58 times in total.
Lully
1,270 posts
Joined September 2013
Lully
Call the diff "ultr4 m3g4 s0p3r r4v3 p4rty"
DeRandom Otaku
2,136 posts
Joined November 2014
Topic Starter
DeRandom Otaku
a bit too much tbh
Shmiklak
Elite Storyboarder
3,218 posts
Joined January 2015
Shmiklak
Nice
DeRandom Otaku
2,136 posts
Joined November 2014
Topic Starter
DeRandom Otaku
:3
Lully
1,270 posts
Joined September 2013
Lully
gd onegai
i luv u hubby
marry me
DeRandom Otaku
2,136 posts
Joined November 2014
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DeRandom Otaku
I lvoe u too , btu no moar GDs needed ;-;
FCL
1,478 posts
Joined July 2014
FCL

DeRandom Otaku wrote:

I lvoe u too , btu no moar GDs needed ;-;
so sad
DeRandom Otaku
2,136 posts
Joined November 2014
Topic Starter
DeRandom Otaku

FCL wrote:

so sad
inded
Garden
Nomination Assessment Team
1,343 posts
Joined June 2013
Garden
[3XTR4]
  1. 00:21:291 (3,1) - considering the gap on timeline and previous spacing u use, this distance seems too small. maybe ctrl-h 00:21:976 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - this part and have 00:21:976 (1) - stacked on 00:21:119 (2) - , ofc change the curve of 00:23:348 (1) - for the flow as well.
  2. 00:50:434 (4) - featuring a speedup here may have more impact
  3. 01:09:405 (4) - tho it might play more fluently with this overmapped note, it sounds kinda abrupt to me here. maybe delete the note and rearrange the pattern a bit
  4. 02:52:148 (2,3) - this might feel more natural while playing, just like ur insane
[1NS4N3]
  1. 00:21:291 (3,1) - same point mentioned in extra tho u follow distance snap here, move 1 to 470,70 might be more intuitive to read
  2. 01:13:405 (3,4) - not my aesthetic cuz 4 looks kinda too close to the sliderbody of 3 compared with 5, consider move 4 to 180,340 maybe, this makes the distance more balanced with 2 as well
  3. 02:10:319 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - this stream is literally harder than the one in extra lol
  4. 02:15:462 (5,6) - the only doublet with such pattern? maybe use more or simply make this a stacked one as well for consistency
clean style, nice
DeRandom Otaku
2,136 posts
Joined November 2014
Topic Starter
DeRandom Otaku

Garden wrote:

[3XTR4]
  1. 00:21:291 (3,1) - considering the gap on timeline and previous spacing u use, this distance seems too small. maybe ctrl-h 00:21:976 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - this part and have 00:21:976 (1) - stacked on 00:21:119 (2) - , ofc change the curve of 00:23:348 (1) - for the flow as well. i reduced the spacing between those two since the song is getting quiet here
  2. 00:50:434 (4) - featuring a speedup here may have more impact
  3. 01:09:405 (4) - tho it might play more fluently with this overmapped note, it sounds kinda abrupt to me here. maybe delete the note and rearrange the pattern a bit its not overmapped ... i can clearly hear 1/3's in background =w=
  4. 02:52:148 (2,3) - this might feel more natural while playing, just like ur insane
[1NS4N3]
  1. 00:21:291 (3,1) - same point mentioned in extra tho u follow distance snap here, move 1 to 470,70 might be more intuitive to read
  2. 01:13:405 (3,4) - not my aesthetic cuz 4 looks kinda too close to the sliderbody of 3 compared with 5, consider move 4 to 180,340 maybe, this makes the distance more balanced with 2 as well
  3. 02:10:319 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - this stream is literally harder than the one in extra lol it just looks harder , its easier to play tho ... since there is a hardcore 16 circles jump pattern in extra which makes the stream in extra more harder to play
  4. 02:15:462 (5,6) - the only doublet with such pattern? maybe use more or simply make this a stacked one as well for consistency
clean style, nice \o/
Thank you!~ C:
Yukiyo
425 posts
Joined June 2014
Yukiyo
I map
and I love ren
this makes no sense
bam




cu-mod
2016-07-25 16:41 DeRandom Otaku: can u mod my map? ;dddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddd
2016-07-25 16:41 Yukiyo: what map
2016-07-25 16:41 Yukiyo: gimme
2016-07-25 16:42 DeRandom Otaku: o
2016-07-25 16:42 DeRandom Otaku: ACTION is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/1032374 S3RL Feat Krystal - R4V3 B0Y]
2016-07-25 16:42 Yukiyo: S3RL \:D/
2016-07-25 16:42 DeRandom Otaku: c:
2016-07-25 16:42 Yukiyo: lemme play first
2016-07-25 16:42 Yukiyo: ACTION is playing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1027542 S3RL Feat Krystal - R4V3 B0Y [3XTR4]]
2016-07-25 16:43 DeRandom Otaku: let me watch u
2016-07-25 16:44 DeRandom Otaku: Easy pp
2016-07-25 16:44 DeRandom Otaku: Same
2016-07-25 16:46 Yukiyo: REN BE MY RAVE BOY
2016-07-25 16:46 Yukiyo: WE CAN HAVE SOME FUN
2016-07-25 16:46 Yukiyo: <3
2016-07-25 16:46 DeRandom Otaku: prepare for tonight
2016-07-25 16:47 Yukiyo: :3
2016-07-25 16:49 Yukiyo: you said you didn't have any DT maps
2016-07-25 16:49 DeRandom Otaku: omg
2016-07-25 16:49 DeRandom Otaku: !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
2016-07-25 16:49 Yukiyo: and then present me this
2016-07-25 16:49 Yukiyo: >:x
2016-07-25 16:49 DeRandom Otaku: Loooooooool
2016-07-25 16:49 DeRandom Otaku: xD
2016-07-25 16:49 Yukiyo: iirc?
2016-07-25 16:49 Yukiyo: ehh added to DT favos tbh
2016-07-25 16:49 DeRandom Otaku: Please <3
2016-07-25 16:49 DeRandom Otaku: LOL <3
2016-07-25 16:50 Yukiyo: so igcm?
2016-07-25 16:50 DeRandom Otaku: what igcm?
2016-07-25 16:50 Yukiyo: In game chat mod
2016-07-25 16:50 Yukiyo: xd
2016-07-25 16:51 DeRandom Otaku: Lol
2016-07-25 16:51 DeRandom Otaku: aka irc mod
2016-07-25 16:51 DeRandom Otaku: yea sure please
2016-07-25 16:51 Yukiyo: irc?
2016-07-25 16:51 DeRandom Otaku: Yes yes yes
2016-07-25 16:51 Yukiyo: 00:24:205 (3) - i'd make this bend inot the other direction
2016-07-25 16:51 Yukiyo: to have some contrast
2016-07-25 16:51 Yukiyo: or wave form
2016-07-25 16:51 Yukiyo: with the other slider tbh
2016-07-25 16:52 DeRandom Otaku: yea
2016-07-25 16:52 DeRandom Otaku: i tried that one also
2016-07-25 16:52 DeRandom Otaku: but i liek current one zzzzz
2016-07-25 16:52 Yukiyo: 00:26:262 - MAKE IT CLICKABLE
2016-07-25 16:52 Yukiyo: THIS SOUND WANTS TO BE CLIKCABLE
2016-07-25 16:53 DeRandom Otaku: That sound is unclickable in many parts , leave it
2016-07-25 16:53 DeRandom Otaku: like here 00:31:576 (1) -
2016-07-25 16:53 Yukiyo: 00:40:148 (2) - ctrl + g? ; _ ;
2016-07-25 16:53 Yukiyo: 00:31:576 (1) - here it is overwritten by the voclas
2016-07-25 16:53 Yukiyo: but00:26:091 (1) - here is pure music
2016-07-25 16:53 Yukiyo: melody
2016-07-25 16:53 Yukiyo: lol
2016-07-25 16:54 DeRandom Otaku: Yea
2016-07-25 16:54 DeRandom Otaku: in vocal part i m following music only
2016-07-25 16:54 Yukiyo: no you're not
2016-07-25 16:54 Yukiyo: lol
2016-07-25 16:54 Yukiyo: 00:37:062 (1,2) -
2016-07-25 16:54 Yukiyo: 00:38:434 (1,2) -
2016-07-25 16:54 Yukiyo: 00:39:805 (1,2) -
2016-07-25 16:54 DeRandom Otaku: yes i m
2016-07-25 16:54 Yukiyo: always emphasizing this through slider
2016-07-25 16:54 DeRandom Otaku: Pffffffffy
2016-07-25 16:54 Yukiyo: and that is the vocals
2016-07-25 16:55 DeRandom Otaku: no
2016-07-25 16:55 DeRandom Otaku: well
2016-07-25 16:55 Yukiyo: 00:50:776 - do something fancy
2016-07-25 16:55 Yukiyo: with the melody here
2016-07-25 16:55 Yukiyo: I was like /me is getting sleepy
2016-07-25 16:55 DeRandom Otaku: oki i m following vocals but i dont want to make it clikable bleh
2016-07-25 16:55 Yukiyo: while playing
2016-07-25 16:55 DeRandom Otaku: LOL
2016-07-25 16:55 DeRandom Otaku: nah
2016-07-25 16:55 DeRandom Otaku: music simple here , pattern should be simple too
2016-07-25 16:56 DeRandom Otaku: and thats my concept . dont ruin it :v
2016-07-25 16:56 Yukiyo: melody is going crazy "music simple"
2016-07-25 16:56 Yukiyo: what am I even modding for
2016-07-25 16:56 Yukiyo: lel
2016-07-25 16:56 Yukiyo: 01:01:405 - MELODY
2016-07-25 16:56 Yukiyo: PLS ;_;
2016-07-25 16:56 DeRandom Otaku: from 00:50:776 - to 00:53:348 - moosic simple
2016-07-25 16:57 DeRandom Otaku: 01:01:405 - what do u want me to do here? ;;
2016-07-25 16:57 Yukiyo: this has same sound 01:01:062 (1) -
2016-07-25 16:57 Yukiyo: as 01:01:405 -
2016-07-25 16:57 Yukiyo: but man
2016-07-25 16:57 Yukiyo: fuck the drum
2016-07-25 16:57 Yukiyo: or sanre
2016-07-25 16:57 DeRandom Otaku: 01:01:576 - but here is a snare
2016-07-25 16:57 DeRandom Otaku: XD
2016-07-25 16:57 Yukiyo: or w/e your emphasizing
2016-07-25 16:57 Yukiyo: LOL
2016-07-25 16:57 Yukiyo: sadipnaspodnaspid
2016-07-25 16:58 DeRandom Otaku: WOT
2016-07-25 16:58 DeRandom Otaku: 01:01:062 (1) - would copy paste this if there was no snare , that 3 supports
2016-07-25 16:58 Yukiyo: 01:09:291 (3,4,5) - damn risky music interpretatiomn
2016-07-25 16:58 DeRandom Otaku: i know
2016-07-25 16:58 Yukiyo: FUCK THAT SNARE LOL
2016-07-25 16:58 DeRandom Otaku: i want to make it different but i will do it later
2016-07-25 16:59 DeRandom Otaku: NO
2016-07-25 16:59 Yukiyo: 01:13:062 (2) - ctrl + g? ;-;
2016-07-25 16:59 DeRandom Otaku: maybe not ;;
2016-07-25 17:00 Yukiyo: 02:13:405 (2) - kreygams
2016-07-25 17:00 DeRandom Otaku: XD
2016-07-25 17:00 Yukiyo: 02:17:519 (2) - ctrl+ g?
2016-07-25 17:01 DeRandom Otaku: 02:16:491 (4,5,6) - do u agree that this is skystar mapping?
2016-07-25 17:01 Yukiyo: I DUN CARE ABOUT SKYSTAR
2016-07-25 17:01 Yukiyo: this is your map kek
2016-07-25 17:01 DeRandom Otaku: 02:17:519 (2) - i made it like that because i m sukinathan's fan :v
2016-07-25 17:01 DeRandom Otaku: Lo
2016-07-25 17:02 Yukiyo: >->
2016-07-25 17:02 Yukiyo: your map is so generic
2016-07-25 17:02 Yukiyo: 02:35:005 - suddenly mapping vocals ,-,
2016-07-25 17:02 DeRandom Otaku: Bleh , i testplay every single pattern over 10 times ... so asking me to ctrlg , h , j is pretty much useless
2016-07-25 17:03 Yukiyo: 02:35:005 - melody is standing out .... let's map VOCALS /o/
2016-07-25 17:03 DeRandom Otaku: yea , music is just 1/2 spam so i followed vocals instead
2016-07-25 17:03 Yukiyo: fuk this
2016-07-25 17:03 Yukiyo: INs4n3
2016-07-25 17:04 DeRandom Otaku: ay
2016-07-25 17:05 Yukiyo: 00:41:519 (2) - ctrl.... FUCK THIS SHIT I DUN CARE ANYMORE
2016-07-25 17:06 Yukiyo: 01:01:405 (2,3) - pls
2016-07-25 17:06 DeRandom Otaku: SukiNathan pattern lalala
2016-07-25 17:06 DeRandom Otaku: 01:01:405 (2,3) - WHAT
2016-07-25 17:06 Yukiyo: soooo confusing
2016-07-25 17:06 Yukiyo: the music isn't like
2016-07-25 17:06 Yukiyo: chill
2016-07-25 17:06 Yukiyo: it's like
2016-07-25 17:06 Yukiyo: KEEP GOING
2016-07-25 17:06 DeRandom Otaku: ok
2016-07-25 17:06 DeRandom Otaku: its less confosing now
2016-07-25 17:07 DeRandom Otaku: Ye
2016-07-25 17:07 DeRandom Otaku: i know
2016-07-25 17:07 DeRandom Otaku: 01:01:062 - chill 01:01:576 - porn
2016-07-25 17:07 Yukiyo: 01:20:776 - fuck your vocals and add a note here
2016-07-25 17:07 DeRandom Otaku: dood
2016-07-25 17:08 DeRandom Otaku: theres no circle there in extra also
2016-07-25 17:08 Yukiyo: like for an Insane your vocal parts look boring to most ppl probably
2016-07-25 17:08 DeRandom Otaku: dont wanna overmap insane more than extra lo
2016-07-25 17:08 DeRandom Otaku: eh
2016-07-25 17:08 Yukiyo: you not gonna get over extra sr anyways
2016-07-25 17:08 DeRandom Otaku: Vocals themself are boring ... fucking horny singers
2016-07-25 17:08 Yukiyo: bruhhh
2016-07-25 17:08 Yukiyo: 01:52:834 (2,4) - cmoadnasndpiasjßojmpaibn roanramnepmas +g
2016-07-25 17:09 DeRandom Otaku: ok
2016-07-25 17:09 DeRandom Otaku: u win
2016-07-25 17:09 Yukiyo: 02:15:976 - this sound
2016-07-25 17:09 Yukiyo: CLICK
2016-07-25 17:09 Yukiyo: A-
2016-07-25 17:09 Yukiyo: B.
2016-07-25 17:09 Yukiyo: L-
2016-07-25 17:09 Yukiyo: E-
2016-07-25 17:10 DeRandom Otaku: ;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;w;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;
2016-07-25 17:10 DeRandom Otaku: *cries oceans*
2016-07-25 17:10 Yukiyo: smae tbh
2016-07-25 17:10 DeRandom Otaku: me too
2016-07-25 17:10 Yukiyo: nice map though tbh
2016-07-25 17:10 Yukiyo: this conversation was awkward
2016-07-25 17:11 DeRandom Otaku: i know d;d;d;d;d;d :v
2016-07-25 17:11 DeRandom Otaku: not really
2016-07-25 17:11 DeRandom Otaku: hoy
2016-07-25 17:11 Yukiyo: me crying over OSNDAOINJCANOJAOJBCPAJNPRBNA?NDPIBNWDPIN CTRL + G
2016-07-25 17:11 Yukiyo: not awkward
2016-07-25 17:11 Yukiyo: cryzy
2016-07-25 17:11 Yukiyo: ima
2016-07-25 17:11 DeRandom Otaku: whats the SR of extra for u
2016-07-25 17:11 Yukiyo: vrazy
2016-07-25 17:11 Yukiyo: bitch
2016-07-25 17:11 DeRandom Otaku: hoy
2016-07-25 17:11 Yukiyo: SR Extra hmmm
2016-07-25 17:11 DeRandom Otaku: whats the SR of extra for u
2016-07-25 17:11 DeRandom Otaku: whats the SR of extra for u
2016-07-25 17:11 Yukiyo: 5.1 - 6.9
2016-07-25 17:11 Yukiyo: 5.9
2016-07-25 17:11 Yukiyo: lel
2016-07-25 17:12 DeRandom Otaku: Dood
2016-07-25 17:12 Yukiyo: your map seems so
2016-07-25 17:12 Yukiyo: overrated
2016-07-25 17:12 Yukiyo: it's just that one jump part
2016-07-25 17:12 DeRandom Otaku: Lo
2016-07-25 17:12 Yukiyo: that will fuck with everybody
2016-07-25 17:12 DeRandom Otaku: me like "why sr so low'
2016-07-25 17:12 Yukiyo: kek
2016-07-25 17:12 DeRandom Otaku: ik
2016-07-25 17:12 DeRandom Otaku: its pp mapping
2016-07-25 17:12 DeRandom Otaku: 200 easy pp outta nowhere
2016-07-25 17:12 Yukiyo: ima greedy bitch ok=
2016-07-25 17:12 Yukiyo: ?
2016-07-25 17:12 Yukiyo: asndpiasnd
2016-07-25 17:13 DeRandom Otaku: ok
2016-07-25 17:13 DeRandom Otaku: HDHR it when its ranked
2016-07-25 17:13 Yukiyo: nope
2016-07-25 17:13 Yukiyo: not activly playing anymore
2016-07-25 17:13 DeRandom Otaku: my hopes and dreams ruined
2016-07-25 17:13 DeRandom Otaku: u fok
2016-07-25 17:13 Yukiyo: take aways capital of "F" from "feat" LOLOLOL
2016-07-25 17:14 Yukiyo: "u fok"
2016-07-25 17:14 Yukiyo: wanna fite
2016-07-25 17:14 Yukiyo: fite me bby
2016-07-25 17:14 DeRandom Otaku: Come at me big boi
2016-07-25 17:14 DeRandom Otaku: NO
2016-07-25 17:14 DeRandom Otaku: post u log on forum first
2016-07-25 17:14 Yukiyo: ACTION uses Hyper Beam
2016-07-25 17:14 DeRandom Otaku: i wanna more sp on my map
2016-07-25 17:14 DeRandom Otaku: fuk
2016-07-25 17:14 Yukiyo: KEKEKEKEKEKE
2016-07-25 17:14 Yukiyo: NAD ADD HARD
2016-07-25 17:14 Yukiyo: LOL
Lama Poluna
796 posts
Joined June 2014
Lama Poluna
Hey, nm reqs

1NS4N3

  1. 00:26:434 (3) - It would be better if you move it down a bit - http://puu.sh/qeV3M.jpg .
  2. 00:41:519 (2) - Ctrl+G.
  3. 01:03:119 (1,2,3,4) - Better remap.
  4. 01:15:805 (2) - http://puu.sh/qeVci.jpg - make like this.
  5. 02:28:834 (4) - Form - http://puu.sh/qeVhI.jpg .
  6. 02:34:319 (4) - Form - http://puu.sh/qeViP.jpg .
  7. 02:54:205 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - 02:54:205 (1,2) - http://puu.sh/qeVp3.jpg , 02:54:890 (1,2) - http://puu.sh/qeVpK.jpg , 02:55:576 (1,2) - http://puu.sh/qeVqe.jpg .
    all - http://puu.sh/qeVr7.jpg . I think you get the idea.

3XTR4

  1. 00:31:919 (2) - Ctrl+G.
  2. 00:32:948 (1) - Put on x496 y316.
  3. 00:36:034 (2) - Stack with 00:35:519 (6) - http://puu.sh/qeVB0.jpg .
  4. 00:56:605 (2) - Ctrl+G.
  5. 02:17:519 (2) - ^ .
  6. 02:20:262 (2) - Ctrl+G and put on x133 y208 .
  7. 02:26:091 (5) - More jumps! Better on x368 y316 .


gl
DeRandom Otaku
2,136 posts
Joined November 2014
Topic Starter
DeRandom Otaku

Lama Poluna wrote:

Hey, nm reqs

1NS4N3

  1. 00:26:434 (3) - It would be better if you move it down a bit - http://puu.sh/qeV3M.jpg .
  2. 00:41:519 (2) - Ctrl+G.
  3. 01:03:119 (1,2,3,4) - Better remap.
  4. 01:15:805 (2) - http://puu.sh/qeVci.jpg - make like this.
  5. 02:28:834 (4) - Form - http://puu.sh/qeVhI.jpg . fixed
  6. 02:34:319 (4) - Form - http://puu.sh/qeViP.jpg . fixed
  7. 02:54:205 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - 02:54:205 (1,2) - http://puu.sh/qeVp3.jpg , 02:54:890 (1,2) - http://puu.sh/qeVpK.jpg , 02:55:576 (1,2) - http://puu.sh/qeVqe.jpg .
    all - http://puu.sh/qeVr7.jpg . I think you get the idea. changed it a bit differently

3XTR4

  1. 00:31:919 (2) - Ctrl+G.
  2. 00:32:948 (1) - Put on x496 y316.
  3. 00:36:034 (2) - Stack with 00:35:519 (6) - http://puu.sh/qeVB0.jpg .
  4. 00:56:605 (2) - Ctrl+G.
  5. 02:17:519 (2) - ^ .
  6. 02:20:262 (2) - Ctrl+G and put on x133 y208 .
  7. 02:26:091 (5) - More jumps! Better on x368 y316 . did something different here


gl
no reply = not fixed because they are all intentional

Thanks for the mod <3
1Computer
123 posts
Joined October 2014
1Computer
From my queue~

SPOILER

1NS4N3

  1. 01:02:776 (5,1) - Blanket.
  2. 00:27:462 (1) - Not the exact center of the slider. Move the red point to the left a bit.

3XTR4

  1. 00:19:748 (2,3) - You can improve this blanket.
  2. 01:19:576 (1,2,3,4,5) - I think you should continue the shape instead of going straight at 4 to 5.
  3. 01:24:376 (3,4) - Blanket.
  4. 01:25:062 (1,2) - ^
  5. 01:42:719 (3,1) - Is a bit awkward. I suggest moving 01:42:891 (1) to on top of 01:43:234 (2) and then moving 01:42:719 (3) in between.
  6. 02:16:662 (5,6) - Spacing is too high. The rest of the map has 1/4 gaps as fairly smaller spacing.
  7. 02:39:805 (5) - This slider is a little ugly imo.
  8. 02:51:462 (1,2,3,4) - Your blankets are off here.

Overall, nice map. I like the 1/3 sections.
DeRandom Otaku
2,136 posts
Joined November 2014
Topic Starter
DeRandom Otaku

1Computer wrote:

From my queue~

SPOILER

1NS4N3

  1. 01:02:776 (5,1) - Blanket.
  2. 00:27:462 (1) - Not the exact center of the slider. Move the red point to the left a bit.

3XTR4

  1. 00:19:748 (2,3) - You can improve this blanket.
  2. 01:19:576 (1,2,3,4,5) - I think you should continue the shape instead of going straight at 4 to 5. i liek current pattern
  3. 01:24:376 (3,4) - Blanket. isnt noticable
  4. 01:25:062 (1,2) - ^ isnt noticable
  5. 01:42:719 (3,1) - Is a bit awkward. I suggest moving 01:42:891 (1) to on top of 01:43:234 (2) and then moving 01:42:719 (3) in between. i liek the current pattern
  6. 02:16:662 (5,6) - Spacing is too high. The rest of the map has 1/4 gaps as fairly smaller spacing. its okay , its an extra diff afterall
  7. 02:39:805 (5) - This slider is a little ugly imo. its cute
  8. 02:51:462 (1,2,3,4) - Your blankets are off here. They seem good to me

Overall, nice map. I like the 1/3 sections.
no reply = fixed~

Thank you!~
Asaiga
848 posts
Joined July 2013
Asaiga
from queue :3

sad mod

General

Ending is not being consistent here.
02:45:976 - Shmik's 34SY
02:56:604 - 1NS4N3
02:56:604 - 3XTR4

For Easy, try to map the last few seconds, I don't think it's hard.

Insane and Extra needs a spinner, if it's really impossible then it can't be helped. Otherwise I suggest you to replace the last slider 02:56:262 (1) - here with a spinner.

Easy

01:22:319 (3,1) - It will be a small pain to fix this ''small overlap'' or rather, touching. You can choose either not to fix it or apply a small change there to keep these more apart.
02:07:576 (1) - Spinner ends here. Easy's rule, at least 4 beat of recovery.

Extra

00:40:662 (4) - You can make this 2 notes
02:50:091 (1,2,3,4) - You can make this back and forth if you want to

This set is kinda solid, I don't have many suggestions to add O_O
Good luck on ranking!
DeRandom Otaku
2,136 posts
Joined November 2014
Topic Starter
DeRandom Otaku

Asaiga wrote:

from queue :3

sad mod

General

Ending is not being consistent here.
02:45:976 - Shmik's 34SY
02:56:604 - 1NS4N3
02:56:604 - 3XTR4

For Easy, try to map the last few seconds, I don't think it's hard. The drain of GD can be different than the diffs of the actual mapper .. so i m fine with it , i will see what Shmik thinks

Insane and Extra needs a spinner, if it's really impossible then it can't be helped. Otherwise I suggest you to replace the last slider 02:56:262 (1) - here with a spinner. that would be way too short lol

Extra

00:40:662 (4) - You can make this 2 notes i prefer slider more D:
02:50:091 (1,2,3,4) - You can make this back and forth if you want to i love the kind of patterns i made there so nope ;w;

This set is kinda solid, I don't have many suggestions to add O_O
Good luck on ranking!
Thanks for the mod and star \o/
Draftnell
1,074 posts
Joined October 2013
Draftnell
Why the BG same x.x ? Please this BG i make it >< you should find another BG btw and then edit
DeRandom Otaku
2,136 posts
Joined November 2014
Topic Starter
DeRandom Otaku

Draftnell wrote:

Why the BG same x.x ? Please this BG i make it >< you should find another BG btw and then edit
but i love the bg so much ;w;
Macthir_TW
11 posts
Joined March 2013
Macthir_TW
I like this song :)

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Version:IZE 白勺 ㄧˋ舟殳
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Last edited by Macthir_TW , edited 3 times in total.
DeRandom Otaku
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Joined November 2014
Topic Starter
DeRandom Otaku

q8720123 wrote:

I like this song :)

SPOILER
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Artist:S3RL Feat Krystal
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Creator:DeRandom Otaku
Version:123's NORMAL
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Tags:happy hardcore EMFA music rave boy
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u should have asked me before making the GD ;w; ... i dont need any , sorry :c also the gd is not good enough to be ranked so keep paractising mapping c:

gl with future mapping
Macthir_TW
11 posts
Joined March 2013
Macthir_TW
It's ok

I just love this song :)

so~ thank you :)

I wish you could be rank this map :)
DeRandom Otaku
2,136 posts
Joined November 2014
Topic Starter
DeRandom Otaku
Dont worry ~ it will be ranked one day :>
Shmiklak
Elite Storyboarder
3,218 posts
Joined January 2015
Shmiklak

Asaiga wrote:

from queue :3

sad mod

Easy

[notice]01:22:319 (3,1) - It will be a small pain to fix this ''small overlap'' or rather, touching. You can choose either not to fix it or apply a small change there to keep these more apart. it's not really important but ok
02:07:576 (1) - Spinner ends here. Easy's rule, at least 4 beat of recovery. rule says not 4 beats of recovery. Rule says that recovery time should be fine for newbies. 1 1/1 beat for 175 bpm song is fine.
[box]
This set is kinda solid, I don't have many suggestions to add O_O
Good luck on ranking![box=fixed overlap xd]
osu file format v14

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436,332,133748,2,0,P|392:316|324:308,1,99.9999999999999,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
248,316,134434,2,0,P|180:316|144:308,2,99.9999999999999,0|0|0,1:0|1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
284,232,135462,1,0,1:0:0:0:
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152,236,137176,2,0,P|108:259|76:297,2,99.9999999999999,0|0|0,1:0|1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
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316,284,138548,6,0,L|432:288,1,99.9999999999999,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
444,204,139234,2,0,L|345:201,1,99.9999999999999,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
272,144,139919,2,0,P|192:132|168:120,1,99.9999999999999,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
152,36,140605,2,0,P|232:48|256:60,1,99.9999999999999,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
336,76,141291,6,0,B|412:104|412:104|428:128,1,99.9999999999999,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
432,208,141976,2,0,B|404:284|404:284|380:300,1,99.9999999999999,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
308,256,142662,2,0,P|232:228|144:316,1,200,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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388,244,146434,1,0,1:0:0:0:
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312,24,147462,2,0,P|264:17|212:20,1,99.9999999999999,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
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208,216,149519,6,0,P|254:185|304:176,1,99.9999999999999,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
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HitHitex
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HitHitex
Awesome Map :)
DeRandom Otaku
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wajinshu
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[General]
  1. Beatmap finishes on different times
  2. Inconsistent widescreen storyboard
  3. Break too long in Shmiklak diff
[ez]
  1. 00:53:519 - 01:40:148 - 02:45:976 - было бы замечательно если бы ты все это замапал
  2. 00:13:405 (2) - Здесь кончается слово, а тут начинается we 00:13:748 - так что лучше убери реверс и поставь там круг
  3. 01:22:319 (3,1) - Маленький оверлап который ты можешь пофиксить
  4. 01:57:291 (2,1) - Мог бы стакнуть их, это же легко
  5. 02:06:205 (3) - Очень странно выглядит на фоне реверсов, ты либо добавь где-то еще такой слайдер или же скороти и поставь реверс.
  6. 02:07:576 (1) - 170 бпм и только один бит для отдыха? ммм, классно же
  7. 02:35:691 (2) - Кнтрл H для лучшего флоу?
  8. 02:44:605 (3) - Убери нахуй этот реверс и поставь здесь круг 02:45:976 -
  9. 02:40:491 - сука
[nor]
  1. 00:28:834 (7) - How about these form? I just copied 00:27:462 (5) - and I think that looks good
    SPOILER
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