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[my opinion]
I can't really help with this map because I can't sit through this...
You map visually which is nice and the patterns are well-structured, but the rhythm actually destroys the map. It's too predictable and repetitive, and the map gets boring REALLY fast. The patterns are just recycled when the song plays the same parts again...
It sort of picked up from the first kiai, but I was hoping for more variation in terms of visuals from the previous section. After the first break and the song just repeats itself and you follow the similar rhythm pattern again and that really did it for me. I've had a quick glance at the rest of the map and it's actually just the same thing
It's partly the song because it's very uninspiring, but you should definitely look into other rhythm techniques. eg there's more than one way to map a "triple", but you always have them stacked, and placed on the same beats of every bar too.. It's a shame because it's obvious you're technically skilled as a mapper
There's really no use in pointing out little things and giving a "traditional mod" when there's an obviously huge flaw in this map
I think you should learn rhythm variations and definitely employ them here and in future maps, and also maybe pick songs that offer more inspiration so you don't map with both bands tied behind your back, to let yourself shine better
[/my opinion]
uh
[my opinion]
I can't really help with this map because I can't sit through this...
You map visually which is nice and the patterns are well-structured, but the rhythm actually destroys the map. It's too predictable and repetitive, and the map gets boring REALLY fast. The patterns are just recycled when the song plays the same parts again...
It sort of picked up from the first kiai, but I was hoping for more variation in terms of visuals from the previous section. After the first break and the song just repeats itself and you follow the similar rhythm pattern again and that really did it for me. I've had a quick glance at the rest of the map and it's actually just the same thing
It's partly the song because it's very uninspiring, but you should definitely look into other rhythm techniques. eg there's more than one way to map a "triple", but you always have them stacked, and placed on the same beats of every bar too.. It's a shame because it's obvious you're technically skilled as a mapper
There's really no use in pointing out little things and giving a "traditional mod" when there's an obviously huge flaw in this map
I think you should learn rhythm variations and definitely employ them here and in future maps, and also maybe pick songs that offer more inspiration so you don't map with both bands tied behind your back, to let yourself shine better
[/my opinion]