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Sotarks
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Sotarks
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on lundi 21 novembre 2016 at 21:06:47

Artist: SCANDAL
Title: Image
Tags: pkhg akitoshi yuii- haruna ono tomomi ogawa mami sasazaki rina suzuki kawaguchi keita hello world
BPM: 185
Filesize: 4051kb
Play Time: 01:56
Difficulties Available:
  1. Akitoshi's Normal (1,9 stars, 153 notes)
  2. Expert (5,32 stars, 476 notes)
  3. Insane (4,44 stars, 401 notes)
  4. pkhg's Hard (3,36 stars, 322 notes)
  5. Yuii-'s Advanced (2,41 stars, 222 notes)
Download: SCANDAL - Image
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Banner by Janpai ♥

Normal - Akitoshi
Advanced - Yuii-
Hard - pkhg
Insane - Sotarks
Expert - Sotarks
Hitsounds - Sotarks
MP3 edited by Sotarks

#21


  • Checkout SCANDAL!
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  3. SCANDAL Official website http://www.scandal-4.com/
  4. DISCOGRAPHY http://www.scandal-4.com/disco/


  • Album "Hello World"
    1. "Image"
    2. "Your Song"
    3. "Love in Action"
    4. "Departure"
    5. "Graduation" (Haruna solo)
    6. "Yoake no Ryuuseigun"
    7. "Onegai Navigation" (お願いナビゲーション; Navigation Please)
    8. "Runners High"
    9. "Hon wo Yomu" (本を読む; Read a Book, Mami solo)
    10. "Kan Beer" (缶ビール; Canned Beer, Tomomi solo)
    11. "Winter Story"
    12. "Oyasumi" (おやすみ; Goodnight, Rina solo)
    13. "Place of Life" (feat. Tetsuya Komuro)


Lyrics
Nakidashi sou na machi wo se ni
TEREBI no NYUUSU de wa atarashii inochi no tanjou wo
Minna ga iwai waratteru
Konna fuu ni boku datte
Umare kawaretara to omotteru

Yarinaosu koto mo
Kurikaesu koto mo
Kantan ja nai kara
Sukoshi nayande iru keredo
Ashita wa umaku yareru tte
Kokoro no dokoka de omotteru

SUTOPPU dekinai kara shinchou ni
IMEEJI shite asa wo matsu

Me wo akereba atarashii boku ga iru
Ima kara nan datte egaite yukeru
Hakinareta kutsu de itsumo yori keikai ni
Fumidaseba nan demo tobikoerareru
IMEEJI shita risou wa genjitsu yori muzukashii ga
Itsu datte atarashii SUTAATO wa kireru

Naganen kienai nayami goto
Chiisai koro mi ni tsuita kuse
Butsuketa kioku mo nai no ni dekita aza mo
Kizukeba issho ni ikite kita'n da

Kyou ga subarashii to ienakatta
Ichinichi datta toshite mo

Mada minu ashita ni ARAAMU wo setto shite
Namida wo gutto kotaete yume wo miyou
Tsuki ya hoshi wa kumo ni oowarete ite mo
Kawarazu ni kono machi wo terashiteru kara
Mezashite ita mirai ga ima to chigatte ite mo
Daijoubu donna basho e mo mada jiyuu ni yukeru

Ima made no jibun mo subete shinjite
IMEEJI shita asa wo matsu

Me wo akereba atarashii boku ga iru
Ima kara nan datte egaite yukeru
Hakinareta kutsu de itsumo yori keikai ni
Fumidaseba nan demo tobikoerareru
IMEEJI shita risou ga genjitsu wo nurikaeteku
Itsu datte atarashii SUTAATO wa kireru

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UCVc36Ugs3w
Last edited by Sotarks , edited 55 times in total.
Janpai
1,288 posts
Joined March 2015
Janpai
Dank meme
Yuii-
2,503 posts
Joined July 2013
Yuii-
"I forgot about you again, sorry"
Sakary
867 posts
Joined July 2013
Sakary
:DDDD
Akitoshi
2,684 posts
Joined August 2014
Akitoshi

Sotarks wrote:

normal - do I even need to tell u who is doing it?
excuse me
Zallies
499 posts
Joined April 2015
Zallies
omg omg omg omg omg omg
can i hard on this? >.<
Sotarks
3,493 posts
Joined May 2014
Topic Starter
Sotarks

zeroallies wrote:

omg omg omg omg omg omg
can i hard on this? >.<
I've got a hard already thanks
[]
Ok we're ready for mods!
pkhg
2,507 posts
Joined May 2010
pkhg
just in time
DeRandom Otaku
2,136 posts
Joined November 2014
DeRandom Otaku
[general]
  1. sliderboard inconsistent in hard diff w
  2. turn off widescreen support in both GDs
[Normal]
  1. 00:38:404 (2,3) - why not copy paste these 2 since same sound and u did same for 01:39:388 (1,2) - 00:59:160 (2,3) - etc Also 00:39:052 (3,1) - try to not make them same tho cuz very different sound in bg
  2. 01:40:686 (3,4) - ctrl+g'ing this rhythm will make much more sense cuz that way the circle will be at 01:40:686 - which will perfectly represent drums and repeat slider at 01:41:010 - will be perfect for vocals
  3. btw wheres the kiai end point lo
[Hard]
  1. 00:00:620 (2) - should rather not stack this cuz sound here is stronger
  2. 00:56:242 (3) - Maybe change this one into 2 circles since vocals on both ticks unlike 00:57:539 (3) - which has vocal on head only
  3. 01:49:767 - idk if its unrankable or not but kiai unsnapped by 3ms
[Insane]
  1. 00:36:782 (3) - this should be 2 circles like 00:56:242 (3,4) - to represent vocals properly
  2. 01:27:539 (1,3) - hard to notice but mis-stack
  3. 01:33:875 (3) - same thing as 00:36:782 (3) -
[Expert]
  1. 00:19:593 (2) - You Nc'd this in insane and not here
gl
- Angelia
118 posts
Joined August 2013
- Angelia
pp图

nm
[Ex]

01:21:215 (1) - add clap
01:32:577 (3) - whistle + clap
01:47:190 (1) - delete kiai 这后面不是很需要kiai
01:51:000 (1) - end add finish

NC问题有很多 如果有时间推荐重新排一下NC 比如这个01:41:659 (1) - 本来是不需要NC的 大多数的拍子都是4拍 所以NC一般是4或者8的倍数 没这么急的

[hard]
00:18:458 (2) - maybe add new combo
01:09:701 (6) - 可以delete 这里不是很需要这个位置的hitsound
01:09:863 (1) - ↑可以尝试着加个hitsound 毕竟white line还是需要一点打击感的。
01:21:215 (1) - maybe add a whistle

[normal]

aimod

[insane]
01:11:971 (6,1) - ...............
感觉cs有点太小了
Sleep
Irohas
1,353 posts
Joined May 2014
Irohas
goodBG.jpg

general
sliderborder slidertrackoverride are missing on pkhg's diff

akitoshi
00:06:296 - finish ?
00:09:215 (2,3) - what about trying another rhythm for variety ? example: try to make the downbeat clickable https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6367453
00:56:566 (2,1) - finish is missing
01:35:496 (2) - ^
your last kiai time needs an end

pkhg
00:06:296 (2) - finish on its head
00:50:566 (2,3) - ^
00:18:458 (2) - NC because SV change

insane
00:06:296 (2) - finish
00:34:025 (5,1) - le spacing devrait être le même que 00:33:377 (2,3) - je crois un peu comme 00:54:133 (2,3) - et 00:54:782 (5,6) -
01:11:971 (6) - clap ?
01:22:836 (2,3,4,5) - unstack serait beaucoup plus judicieux je pense, je trouve que ça force le joueur à faire un mouvement qu'il ne s'attend pas
[]
good luck!
Syph
848 posts
Joined August 2014
Syph
hi from queue

[Expert]

00:07:431 (2) - this is spaced a bit too much from 1 imo, maybe try something like 207|161
00:25:755 (2,3,4,5) - why the inconsistent spacing xd
00:45:863 (5) - missed clap lol
00:47:161 (2) - you could consider extending to blue tick to follow vocal
01:16:025 (1) - curve this more so the shape looks more aligned with 01:15:701 (6) - ?

cant mod the rest lo gl
WORSTPOLACKEU
511 posts
Joined May 2013
WORSTPOLACKEU
m4m

Insane

00:04:836 (3) - Is it supposed to be higher up than the others?

00:37:917 (4) - This feels oddly weird here because the music doesn't really change and vocals follow same tone but the pattern changes, I'd go for something else that goes with the pattern you used 00:37:106 (1,2,3) - probably another one of those note + 1/2.

00:52:674 (1,3,5) - The nr 5 isn't as close to 3 as 1 is, I would just nudge it a bit for the perfect look.

01:11:809 (5,6,1) - The way players will play this will not be that comfortable for them since nobody is actually going to do the 01:11:971 (6,1) - swing here.
If the note nr 5 was under 01:11:971 (6,1) - both of these notes it could be considered as circular flow but right now I feel like the slider nr 6 has no real purpose other than sliderbreaking and the movement will be very uncomfortable. I am not sure how you fix this because I would rip one pattern apart so it's up to you.
It's similiar to those jumps in Haitai map in the Extra diff, the kicksliders that follow the same linear movement but the momentum is bad.
This is what I mean about this one, the flow is there as for the mapping structure but the momentum is off since you have to slow down when the note actually is a kickslider which is supposed to make you move faster. http://puu.sh/rPIOW/6736cc1761.jpg

01:19:106 (1,2,1,2,1) - I feel like this rhythm is the reverse of what it should be. It doesn't fit, I would do smth like http://puu.sh/rPJ29/5aaae55ccc.jpg
Maybe it's just me but this feels much better.

01:21:863 (4,1) - 01:27:539 (1,3) - Imperfect stack

pkhg's Hard

00:18:944 (3,1) - Imperfect stack

00:23:485 (2,1) - Blanket

00:26:728 (1,2) - Blanket

00:36:296 (2,3,1) - Would be nicer if they were equal range apart, right now nr 1 is further apart from 3 than nr 2.
Map follows same spacing almost everywhere except some downbeats so this might be good to fix :)

00:58:350 (2,3) - I think better rhythm choice would be CTRL-G on those two but placed accordingly. Could just CTRL-G and place 00:58:674 (3) - on top of 00:59:160 (1) -

01:03:052 (1,3,5) - Could look better the range is unequal like before in 00:36

01:19:106 (2,3,4,5) - Same as in diff before, I think the rhythm should be note - slider - note - slider here, it just doesn't fit in my head the way you both did it.

01:25:431 (2,3) - Blanket

Expert

00:07:431 (2) - This should have less spacing

00:12:296 (7) - This should have more spacing

00:12:782 (2,3,4,5) - I'd recommend switching placement on the triple and the note, it flows better with the previous slider and works better imo!

00:23:809 (5,1) - Can you move it a bit so the hitcircles don't nazi touch like that :< http://puu.sh/rPKvL/64f5630bd6.jpg

00:25:755 (2,3,4,5) - Inconsistent spacing for some reason?

00:28:350 (2,3) - Not perfect stack

00:30:620 (1,2) - Those are not perfectly symmetrical, dunno if it's important.

00:42:782 (2,5) - THose are not stacked but 00:42:944 (3,4) - are. any reason for that?

00:46:025 (6) - This is placed very uncomfortably, atleast for me. I don't know how you'd like to fix that but the angle is also too linear for me alteast, I'd change that somehow.

00:51:377 (1,2,3) - This should either be spaced more or have a slider somewhere in there, it feels like it doesn't belong in this map!

00:52:512 (2,1,2) - This plays awful imo, the linear flow and the weird spacing, I'd do something else with that, probably switch angle instead of going that linear, it's never really good.

01:08:566 (1,2,1) - This is also very linear, and your pattern doesn't do it anywhere alse later, I'd put nr 2 somewhere left and lower down so it's not the linear movement which is uncomfortable, something like http://puu.sh/rPL6b/cc737c65f9.jpg

01:11:809 (6,7,1) - Feels like you space 6-7 too little or 7-1 too much, don't know which one tbh but plays weird imo.

01:19:106 (1,2) - I'd CTRL-G for rhythm.

01:46:199 (2,1) - Stack
Janpai
1,288 posts
Joined March 2015
Janpai
M4M xD

General
  1. Idk but when I edit the banner, I find somehow the BG quality is not that high.
  2. What's with the -1812 offset? I know you are using SV change at 00:00:620 but wouldn't you think it be better if offset was -515 because making the offset 4 ticks earlier is kinda useless
  3. Disable widescreen support in Akitoshi and pkhg's diff
  4. The gap between hard and normal is pretty big imo, the hard uses short streams at the end part of the song while normal has balanced 1/2 rhythms which is a quite big challenge for beginners. Recommending to replace that short streams with 1/4 reverses.

Akitoshi's Normal
  1. There are so many unused greenline in the diff xD
  2. 00:03:215 (1) - Clap
  3. 00:05:323 (5) - ^
  4. 00:05:809 - Raise the volume here?
  5. 00:40:998 (3) - Change to 3/2 and start at 00:40:836 to hit all the vocal sound there?
  6. 00:43:593 (4) - ^^
  7. 00:45:863 (3) - Clap
  8. 00:48:782 (3) - Whistle
  9. 00:50:079 (1,2) - Fix blanket
  10. 01:47:190 - Why this kiai has no end point?

pkhg's Hard
  1. The first two greenlines is unused
  2. 00:02:079 (6) - NC ?
  3. My only complaint here is the short streams, the diff is really god

Insane
  1. 00:00:620 (2) - NC
  2. 00:01:106 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - NC spamming is a little bit unpolished to me. How about NCing at these 00:01:431 (2,3) - beats than 00:01:106 (1) - because it looks better to me. in short a personal preference xD
  3. 00:03:215 (2) - NC
  4. 00:03:701 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Same for the NCing suggestion
  5. 00:05:323 (2) - NC
  6. 00:08:242 (5,1) - Since CS 5 is pretty hard to aim even if patterns are recognizable. Stack 00:08:242 (5) - on 00:07:593 (2) - 's head?
  7. 00:28:998 (1) - Remove NC? it's pretty unnecessary because they just sound the same as 00:28:674 (3,4,5,6) -
  8. 00:42:296 (1) - Ctrl+J then Ctrl+H? justa personal preference
  9. 00:45:863 (3) - Clap
  10. 00:54:944 (6) - NC? you NCed one of the short streams before
  11. 01:10:187 (1) - Maybe a curve would work on this to emphasize the vocal "wo"

Extra
  1. 01:06:944 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - woah. that NC pattern xD
  2. I can't find more xD
01:03:539 (2) - Sotarks' Trademark Slider
goodluck senpai!
my map: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/515103
pkhg
2,507 posts
Joined May 2010
pkhg

Janpai wrote:

pkhg's Hard
  1. The first two greenlines is unused
  2. 00:02:079 (6) - NC ? my nc pattern is larger for the first 4 measures cuz songs nature
  3. My only complaint here is the short streams, the diff is really god n e r f e d
if u want more nerf just tell me xd

Me wo akereba atarashii boku ga iru
osu file format v14

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 69863
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: None
StackLeniency: 0.2
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LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
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DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 2

[Metadata]
Title:Image
TitleUnicode:Image
Artist:SCANDAL
ArtistUnicode:SCANDAL
Creator:Sotarks
Version:pkhg's Hard
Source:
Tags:pkhg akitoshi haruna ono tomomi ogawa mami sasazaki rina suzuki kawaguchi keita hello world
BeatmapID:1107545
BeatmapSetID:466737

[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:3.5
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.5
SliderTickRate:1

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//Break Periods
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//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
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Sotarks
3,493 posts
Joined May 2014
Topic Starter
Sotarks
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Janpai wrote:

M4M xD

General
  1. Idk but when I edit the banner, I find somehow the BG quality is not that high. Well I took the highest resolution I could find..
  2. What's with the -1812 offset? I know you are using SV change at 00:00:620 but wouldn't you think it be better if offset was -515 because making the offset 4 ticks earlier is kinda useless Yeha I'll see what I can do xd
  3. Disable widescreen support in Akitoshi and pkhg's diff
  4. The gap between hard and normal is pretty big imo, the hard uses short streams at the end part of the song while normal has balanced 1/2 rhythms which is a quite big challenge for beginners. Recommending to replace that short streams with 1/4 reverses. Yes I know blame pkhg using streams xd

Insane
  1. 01:10:187 (1) - Maybe a curve would work on this to emphasize the vocal "wo" Eh, i like my current curve here

Extra
  1. 01:06:944 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - woah. that NC pattern xD yeah changed it
  2. I can't find more xD
01:03:539 (2) - Sotarks' Trademark Slider
goodluck senpai!
my map: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/515103

WORSTPOLACKEU wrote:

m4m

Insane

00:37:917 (4) - This feels oddly weird here because the music doesn't really change and vocals follow same tone but the pattern changes, I'd go for something else that goes with the pattern you used 00:37:106 (1,2,3) - probably another one of those note + 1/2. Well I really wanted a reverse to follow those voice section here tbh.

01:19:106 (1,2,1,2,1) - I feel like this rhythm is the reverse of what it should be. It doesn't fit, I would do smth like http://puu.sh/rPJ29/5aaae55ccc.jpg
Maybe it's just me but this feels much better. Ah I want to follow the finish here


Expert

00:42:782 (2,5) - THose are not stacked but 00:42:944 (3,4) - are. any reason for that? Because I stacked for the 2 kicks.

00:46:025 (6) - This is placed very uncomfortably, atleast for me. I don't know how you'd like to fix that but the angle is also too linear for me alteast, I'd change that somehow. I think it's pretty fine tho.

01:08:566 (1,2,1) - This is also very linear, and your pattern doesn't do it anywhere alse later, I'd put nr 2 somewhere left and lower down so it's not the linear movement which is uncomfortable, something like http://puu.sh/rPL6b/cc737c65f9.jpg Well i like the linear flow here

01:19:106 (1,2) - I'd CTRL-G for rhythm. Following drums ;w;

Syph wrote:

hi from queue

[Expert]
all fixed
cant mod the rest lo gl

MugiwaraSekai wrote:

goodBG.jpg

general
sliderborder slidertrackoverride are missing on pkhg's diff

insane

01:22:836 (2,3,4,5) - unstack serait beaucoup plus judicieux je pense, je trouve que ça force le joueur à faire un mouvement qu'il ne s'attend pas Nah j'ai envi de follow les vocals en stack ça passe cre :ok_hand:
[]
good luck!

- Angelia wrote:

pp图

[Ex]

01:21:215 (1) - add clap no need
01:32:577 (3) - whistle + clap no need
01:47:190 (1) - delete kiai 这后面不是很需要kiai nah i want to emphasis this section is pretty intense
01:51:000 (1) - end add finish no need finishj is on previous

NC问题有很多 如果有时间推荐重新排一下NC 比如这个01:41:659 (1) - 本来是不需要NC的 大多数的拍子都是4拍 所以NC一般是4或者8的倍数 没这么急的 wut?


[insane]
01:11:971 (6,1) - ............... ???????????????
感觉cs有点太小了
Sleep
i don't japanese

DeRandom Otaku wrote:

[general]
  1. sliderboard inconsistent in hard diff w
  2. turn off widescreen support in both GDs
[Insane]
  1. 00:36:782 (3) - this should be 2 circles like 00:56:242 (3,4) - to represent vocals properly I don't want to make too many jumps in a CS 5 insane tbh
  2. 01:33:875 (3) - same thing as 00:36:782 (3) - same
gl

no reply = fixed
thanks guys!
Vespirit
350 posts
Joined December 2014
Vespirit
another map, another mod xD
[ Akitoshi's Normal]
  1. 00:05:323 (5) - the song is more dense here, so i think the map should reflect that with use of 1/2 notes
  2. 00:28:674 (3) - ^
  3. 00:34:350 - ^
  4. 01:30:944 (3) - ^
  5. 01:49:784 (1) - ^
  6. 00:40:998 (3) - have this start on 00:40:836? to better follow vocals
  7. 00:43:593 (4) - ^
  8. 01:08:404 (1) - minor suggestion, but consider ending this spinner on 01:09:701 because the pause in music start there
  9. 01:11:971 (3,4) - blanket?
  10. 01:15:377 (3) - have this as 2 circles, like at 01:25:755 (3,4)
  11. 01:50:919 - have the final kiai end as in all other diffs?
[ pkhg's Hard]
  1. 00:11:809 (3) - cant find a reason why you increased spacing here? :/
  2. 00:15:701 (3,4,5) - could have 4 circles before the reverse instead of just 2, like you did at 00:28:674 (3,4,5,6,7)
  3. 00:27:215 (2) - overlap with (1) looks a bit odd
  4. 00:56:242 (3) - change to 2 circles? for the vocals
  5. 01:50:271 (3,4,5) - imo better pattern is this
[ Insane]
  1. 00:44:809 (8,1) - stack? so that its in the same direction for flow
  2. 01:10:836 (1) - the overlap should be a bit bigger? as it is only the slider borders cross
  3. 01:29:323 (2) - a 1/1 gap, but there isnt a pause in music... imo it should be a 1/2 slider and not a circle
  4. 01:29:809 (2) - ^
[ Expert]
  1. 00:07:106 (1) - why have the slider end on the strong downbeat? should be clickable
seems basically fine to me xD

overall great mapset, gl ranking as always ;)
pkhg
2,507 posts
Joined May 2010
pkhg

DeRandom Otaku wrote:

[Hard]
  1. 00:00:620 (2) - should rather not stack this cuz sound here is stronger mayb
  2. 00:56:242 (3) - Maybe change this one into 2 circles since vocals on both ticks unlike 00:57:539 (3) - which has vocal on head only im not specifically following vocalsz
  3. 01:49:767 - idk if its unrankable or not but kiai unsnapped by 3ms idk why i have 2 greens

MugiwaraSekai wrote:

pkhg
00:06:296 (2) - finish on its head sure
00:50:566 (2,3) - ^ oops
00:18:458 (2) - NC because SV change

good luck!

WORSTPOLACKEU wrote:

m4m

pkhg's Hard

00:18:944 (3,1) - Imperfect stack thats peppys fault

00:23:485 (2,1) - Blanket

00:26:728 (1,2) - Blanket fixed both

00:36:296 (2,3,1) - Would be nicer if they were equal range apart, right now nr 1 is further apart from 3 than nr 2.
Map follows same spacing almost everywhere except some downbeats so this might be good to fix :) i love slider leniency

00:58:350 (2,3) - I think better rhythm choice would be CTRL-G on those two but placed accordingly. Could just CTRL-G and place 00:58:674 (3) - on top of 00:59:160 (1) - nice

01:03:052 (1,3,5) - Could look better the range is unequal like before in 00:36 slider leniency strikes back

01:19:106 (2,3,4,5) - Same as in diff before, I think the rhythm should be note - slider - note - slider here, it just doesn't fit in my head the way you both did it. drums

01:25:431 (2,3) - Blanket fixed

HydroCannon13 wrote:

[ pkhg's Hard]
  1. 00:11:809 (3) - cant find a reason why you increased spacing here? :/ me neither
  2. 00:15:701 (3,4,5) - could have 4 circles before the reverse instead of just 2, like you did at 00:28:674 (3,4,5,6,7) u want sotarks to kill me
  3. 00:27:215 (2) - overlap with (1) looks a bit odd not really
  4. 00:56:242 (3) - change to 2 circles? for the vocals drums > vocals here
  5. 01:50:271 (3,4,5) - imo better pattern is this i love pauses
im blind
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Grrum
886 posts
Joined November 2011
Grrum
Hi. Here from queue. Nice mapset. Hope this helps!


[Expert]

00:39:052 (1,2) – vs 00:40:350 (3,4) – If I look at either one of these individually, I see the intention and it makes sense. But these two patterns are using a ½ stack in two different ways, and I don't like it when a mapping technique is supposed to embody two different intentions in the same map (and so close together too). Consider not stacking 00:40:350 (3,4) – , 00:42:944 (3,4) - , etc

01:00:944 (3,4,5) – Kind of unfortunate the bass speeds up here. This is quite a slow section, so I don't like that the rhythm speeds up.

01:08:242 (3) – Try ½ slider?

[Insane]

00:08:242 (5,1) – Flow felt a bit awkward, try this? http://puu.sh/rYGAZ/97fae9f44f.jpg

01:08:242 (1,2) – I find that anti-jumps work better when there's a large contrast before it that makes the player want to take a break. Usually that's done with a large jump, but I think changing the flow will highlight this note enough to make the anti-jump more player friendly since this can really read like a ½ stack. Try: http://puu.sh/rYGQL/8664c81e90.jpg

01:11:971 (6,1) – This mapping technique feels kind of out place for the map. If you want to go with the drum, make this three circles. If not, just don't map the drum and make this a circle → slider. The slider end at 01:12:052 – doesn't feel like the drum since there's no click, and it doesn't feel like guitar/singer since there isn't a note here, so it doesn't feel like it's accomplishing very much.

01:43:767 (1) – I actually think this note is stronger than 01:43:118 (1) - , so I think the SV decrease is inappropriate and you should consider going back up to .92 here.

[pkhg's Hard]

01:39:388 (1) – This is overlapping the HP Bar on smaller screen sizes. It shouldn't be too hard to move this down to avoid this.

Good luck!
-Visceral-
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-Visceral-
Modding tomorrow <3
Venix
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Venix
M4M!
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Akitoshi's Normal

  1. I think you can change OD to 4, because this is normal and it should be bit harder than some easy diffs

Yuii-'s Advanced

  1. HP on Normal is 3, HP on Hard is 5. 3<4<5. You should put HP4.
  2. 01:50:595 - You should put note here, because this idea can make this more playable by increase clicking constintancy

pkhg's Hard

  1. Stack Zero is unrankable for Hard

Insane

  1. 01:38:577 (2) - I think this slider doesn't fit for others. For cleaner look i prefer this ↓
  2. Overall, nice diff!

Expert

  1. I can't find problems!
Fine mapset!
~GL!
Sotarks
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Sotarks
fixed all from pinataman and venix's mod!
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