Matsumoto Fuminori - ZYPRESSEN wa Sakura ni Kawaru · forum

Gust

Joined December 2011

Topic Starter

Gust 2016-06-09T12:22:39+00:00

-NanoRIPE- wrote:
Hi ~ NM Request from PM
sorry for late ;w;

[General]
- Disable Widescreen support ok
- Disable Letter during breaks ok
- for the kiai time.i think the kiai time should started here 00:58:962 Normal fixed

[Normal]
00:18:535 (2,3) - blanket? no, needn't
00:35:736 (4) - move to x:408 y:44 why?
01:08:257 (1) - remove NC It's ok
01:15:765 (2,4) - stacked ok
01:45:501 (3) - remove finish I think it's good

[Hard]
Increase HP to 5,5 keep
Increase OD to 6 keep

00:07:274 (3,4) - unstack It's ok
00:07:453 (4) - NC and remove NC at 00:07:811 ok
00:12:994 (3,4) - unstack ^
00:13:173 (4) - NC and remove NC at 00:13:530 ^
01:20:457 (1) - remove NC ^
01:40:317 (3,4) - unstack ^
01:40:496 (5) - NC and remove NC at 01:40:854 ^
01:46:216 (5) - ^ and also unstack ^
01:51:936 (6) - ^ ^

GL ~

thank you~

Binguo

308 posts

Joined April 2015

Binguo 2016-06-09T15:27:24+00:00

riffy

osu! Alumni

8,060 posts

Joined December 2010

riffy 2016-06-12T11:50:04+00:00

Your userpage says you are not really good at English, so, have a simplified modpost.

[General]

Remove unused hitsounds:
1. soft-hitfinish3.wav
2. soft-sliderslide3.wav
3. soft-slidertick3.wav
Change the Creator to your new username.
You can't have both slidertick and sliderslide sounds silenced. Remove either sliderslide or slidertick sounds or make them loud.

[Normal]

Try Approach Rate 4. The song is slow, so it would look better.
00:13:888 (1) and 01:41:211 (1) - use two circles here? This would help to follow the beats better. Exmple
Note: click here to read more
00:27:161 (3) - there are two different beats, using one slider does not fit well. Try two circles here?
00:55:389 - finish the slider here and add a circle to 00:55:746? Example. It would fit better with the piano.
01:44:786 (2,3) - make them straight? Curved sliders are harder to read for beginners. Example

[Hard]

00:17:284 (1,2,3,4,5) - this is great, do something similar to 00:05:666 (1,2,3,1,2,3)? This will be more interesting to play.
00:18:893 (1,2) - try to move circle, so players will not expect (2) to have two repeats. example
00:27:161 (3) - same with Normal - there are two different beats, using one slider does not fit well. Try two circles here?
01:20:821 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - add a slider or two somewhere. Clicking so many circles so fast may trouble players.

[Light Insane]

00:07:811 (2,3) - there should be a jump, just like you did before. For example, 00:01:376 (3,4,2,3) - here.
01:08:972 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - music is really quiet here, so use small spacing, please.

Some of the jumps are a bit too hard, in my opinion. Test it and see if you agree or not.

[kiddly's Marchen]

00:06:023 (1,2,3,4) - according to the volume of the beats, I would rather use larger spacing for these, as they are louder. And lower spacing for 00:07:453 (1,2,3,4) - these. Same applies to all the similar patterns.
01:00:392 (1) - minor - why is it curved this way at the end? The song provides no grounds for this. It feels random.

I personally find calm part at 01:10:402 - overdone and disagree with your spacing usae there. The rest is quite okay.

The set overall is not bad, but I disagree with the highest difficulty in some points.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Best of luck!

Gust

516 posts

Joined December 2011

Topic Starter

Gust 2016-06-12T13:07:23+00:00

Bakari wrote:
Your userpage says you are not really good at English, so, have a simplified modpost.

[General]
Remove unused hitsounds:
soft-hitfinish3.wav
soft-sliderslide3.wav
soft-slidertick3.wav
fixed
Change the Creator to your new username. updated
You can't have both slidertick and sliderslide sounds silenced. Remove either sliderslide or slidertick sounds or make them loud. remove silenced slidertick
[Normal]
Try Approach Rate 4. The song is slow, so it would look better. ok~
00:13:888 (1) and 01:41:211 (1) - use two circles here? This would help to follow the beats better. Exmple
ok~
Note: click here to read more
00:27:161 (3) - there are two different beats, using one slider does not fit well. Try two circles here?
I think it's ok
00:55:389 - finish the slider here and add a circle to 00:55:746? Example. It would fit better with the piano. ok~
01:44:786 (2,3) - make them straight? Curved sliders are harder to read for beginners. Example
ok~

[Hard]
00:17:284 (1,2,3,4,5) - this is great, do something similar to 00:05:666 (1,2,3,1,2,3)? This will be more interesting to play. I want to keep these
00:18:893 (1,2) - try to move circle, so players will not expect (2) to have two repeats. example ok~
00:27:161 (3) - same with Normal - there are two different beats, using one slider does not fit well. Try two circles here? I think I should fixed it on this diff~ fixed
01:20:821 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - add a slider or two somewhere. Clicking so many circles so fast may trouble players.ok~
[Light Insane]
00:07:811 (2,3) - there should be a jump, just like you did before. For example, 00:01:376 (3,4,2,3) - here. ok~
01:08:972 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - music is really quiet here, so use small spacing, please. ok~

Some of the jumps are a bit too hard, in my opinion. Test it and see if you agree or not.

The set overall is not bad, but I disagree with the highest difficulty in some points.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Best of luck!

thanks for modding

kiddly

885 posts

Joined February 2009

kiddly 2016-06-14T14:10:20+00:00

Bakari wrote:
[kiddly's Marchen]
00:06:023 (1,2,3,4) - according to the volume of the beats, I would rather use larger spacing for these, as they are louder. And lower spacing for 00:07:453 (1,2,3,4) - these. Same applies to all the similar patterns.
I‘m not really agree with this.In gameplay view it's better moving lower spacing at first.
01:00:392 (1) - minor - why is it curved this way at the end? The song provides no grounds for this. It feels random.
fixed

I personally find calm part at 01:10:402 - overdone and disagree with your spacing usae there. The rest is quite okay.
fixed
The set overall is not bad, but I disagree with the highest difficulty in some points.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Best of luck!
Thx for modding!

SPOILER

osu file format v14

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Title:ZYPRESSEN wa Sakura ni Kawaru
TitleUnicode:ZYPRESSENは櫻に変わる
Artist:Matsumoto Fuminori
ArtistUnicode:松本文紀
Creator:Ultimate Madoka
Version:kiddly's Marchen
Source:サクラノ詩 -櫻の森の上を舞う-
Tags:Sakura no uta makura 松本文紀 galgame eroge visual novel piano kiddly
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368,76,30734,5,0,0:0:0:0:
352,168,31091,1,0,0:0:0:0:
264,200,31449,2,0,L|216:192,1,40
184,164,31806,2,0,P|196:208|176:248,1,80,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,316,32521,1,0,0:0:0:0:
27,279,32878,1,2,0:0:0:0:
28,280,33950,69,0,0:0:0:0:
96,216,34307,1,0,0:0:0:0:
165,153,34665,2,0,L|259:140,1,80,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
84,108,35379,1,0,0:0:0:0:
4,60,35736,1,2,0:0:0:0:
244,257,36808,6,0,L|252:349,1,80
298,130,37523,1,4,0:0:0:0:
172,229,37880,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,289,38238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
298,130,38595,1,2,0:0:0:0:
268,212,40024,69,0,0:0:0:0:
256,168,40203,1,0,0:0:0:0:
244,124,40382,2,0,P|280:144|332:132,1,80,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,88,41096,1,0,0:0:0:0:
440,12,41453,2,0,P|416:76|488:148,1,160,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,352,42525,6,0,P|328:316|320:276,1,80
272,232,43061,1,0,0:0:0:0:
204,220,43240,2,0,L|104:232,1,80,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
24,96,43955,2,0,L|124:108,1,80,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
439,81,45741,69,0,0:0:0:0:
439,81,46099,2,0,L|349:72,1,80,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
287,142,46813,1,0,0:0:0:0:
232,13,47170,2,0,P|209:39|226:106,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
287,142,47885,1,0,0:0:0:0:
370,102,48242,1,0,0:0:0:0:
490,219,48600,6,0,L|439:214,1,40
405,190,48957,2,0,P|428:216|392:311,2,120,4|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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186,340,51458,69,0,0:0:0:0:
94,310,51816,1,0,0:0:0:0:
186,184,52173,1,2,0:0:0:0:
242,262,52530,1,0,0:0:0:0:
94,214,52887,1,0,0:0:0:0:
94,214,54138,37,0,0:0:0:0:
84,176,54317,1,2,0:0:0:0:
73,139,54495,1,0,0:0:0:0:
46,102,54674,70,0,P|88:128|156:104,1,100,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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209,286,56103,2,0,L|285:279,1,64,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
439,171,56818,2,0,L|371:163,2,47.9999985351563,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
143,249,58604,5,2,0:0:0:0:
79,235,58783,1,0,0:0:0:0:
25,271,58962,2,0,P|13:250|16:222,1,50,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
121,89,59319,1,0,0:0:0:0:
63,119,59498,2,0,L|12:107,1,50,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
197,189,59855,1,2,0:0:0:0:
249,149,60034,2,0,P|257:122|240:86,1,50,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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300,298,60928,1,0,0:0:0:0:
253,350,61107,2,0,P|234:325|234:288,1,50,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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253,350,61822,1,6,0:0:0:0:
231,307,62000,1,0,0:0:0:0:
231,258,62179,1,0,0:0:0:0:
255,215,62358,2,0,P|276:205|302:204,1,50,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
421,249,62716,1,2,0:0:0:0:
477,280,62895,2,0,P|486:256|479:220,1,50,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,61,63252,2,0,P|354:110|359:152,1,100
426,120,63788,1,2,0:0:0:0:
495,108,63967,6,0,P|488:85|471:66,1,50,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
318,207,64324,2,0,P|349:221|375:217,1,50,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
426,120,64682,2,0,L|368:108,1,50,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,85,65039,1,0,0:0:0:0:
260,85,65218,2,0,B|216:55|216:55|188:80|159:152|230:186,1,200,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,259,66112,70,0,P|339:233|332:197,1,50,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
121,126,66470,2,0,P|120:150|130:173,1,50,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
357,131,66827,2,0,P|384:124|407:127,1,50,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
209,314,67185,2,0,P|181:305|154:305,1,50,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
52,341,67542,2,0,P|43:292|78:232,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
135,163,68078,1,0,0:0:0:0:
141,53,68257,2,0,P|129:29|108:12,1,50,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
19,155,68615,2,0,P|41:169|68:174,1,50,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
135,163,68972,5,0,0:0:0:0:
197,125,69151,1,0,0:0:0:0:
269,121,69330,1,0,0:0:0:0:
337,143,69509,1,2,0:0:0:0:
510,195,69687,69,0,0:0:0:0:
448,233,69866,1,0,0:0:0:0:
376,237,70045,1,2,0:0:0:0:
308,215,70224,1,0,0:0:0:0:
245,134,70402,6,0,L|254:81,1,50,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,191,70760,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,237,70939,2,0,P|196:269|178:301,1,50,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
40,193,71296,1,2,0:0:0:0:
125,80,71475,1,2,0:0:0:0:
47,109,71654,1,0,0:0:0:0:
194,128,71832,2,0,P|210:86|188:24,1,100
40,193,72369,69,0,0:0:0:0:
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261,212,72905,1,2,0:0:0:0:
238,291,73084,1,0,0:0:0:0:
294,351,73263,2,0,P|319:360|359:354,1,50,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
337,176,73620,1,0,0:0:0:0:
273,129,73799,2,0,P|248:128|224:137,1,50,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,191,74156,5,2,0:0:0:0:
152,59,74335,1,2,0:0:0:0:
278,21,74514,1,0,0:0:0:0:
365,119,74693,2,0,P|322:158|272:157,1,100
202,129,75229,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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6,274,76123,1,6,0:0:0:0:
6,274,76480,69,0,0:0:0:0:
100,345,76659,2,0,B|214:333,1,100
252,125,77374,1,0,0:0:0:0:
178,167,77553,2,0,P|155:158|128:161,1,50,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
266,353,77910,2,0,P|295:355|321:339,1,60.0000022888184,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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327,96,79003,6,0,L|320:176,1,80,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
138,273,79366,2,0,P|100:279|69:253,1,70.000000667572,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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342,328,80093,2,0,P|378:314|449:329,2,100
275,251,81003,2,0,P|272:217|283:194,1,50,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,92,81366,69,0,0:0:0:0:
347,149,81548,1,0,0:0:0:0:
255,122,81730,1,2,0:0:0:0:
261,275,81912,1,6,0:0:0:0:
351,243,82090,1,0,0:0:0:0:
202,201,82269,2,0,P|167:281|208:356,1,160
364,176,83162,2,0,P|357:119|308:74,1,120,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
74,133,84056,1,0,0:0:0:0:
81,203,84234,1,0,0:0:0:0:
89,274,84413,1,4,0:0:0:0:
254,337,85842,5,2,0:0:0:0:
390,191,86557,2,0,P|418:192|437:201,1,40,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
474,294,86914,2,0,P|457:322|444:328,1,40
396,266,87272,1,2,0:0:0:0:
361,180,87451,1,0,0:0:0:0:
398,94,87629,2,0,P|442:85|498:111,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
334,159,88344,1,0,0:0:0:0:
313,21,88701,2,0,P|234:73|263:119,1,160,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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419,131,90131,1,0,0:0:0:0:
388,302,90488,70,0,P|342:279|283:295,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,348,91203,1,0,0:0:0:0:
170,338,91917,1,2,0:0:0:0:
166,328,92632,1,0,0:0:0:0:
230,266,92990,1,2,0:0:0:0:
311,231,93347,53,4,0:0:0:0:
350,225,93704,1,0,0:0:0:0:
389,231,94061,1,2,0:0:0:0:
422,252,94419,1,0,0:0:0:0:
512,112,94776,5,0,0:0:0:0:
458,103,95133,1,0,0:0:0:0:
405,112,95490,1,2,0:0:0:0:
360,140,95848,1,0,0:0:0:0:
173,110,96206,70,0,P|205:95|257:103,1,80
309,173,96921,1,2,0:0:0:0:
279,262,97279,1,0,0:0:0:0:
108,230,97636,6,0,P|68:234|32:218,1,80
224,179,98351,2,0,L|211:275,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
258,315,98887,1,0,0:0:0:0:
287,250,99066,21,6,0:0:0:0:
309,242,99245,1,0,0:0:0:0:
332,240,99424,1,0,0:0:0:0:
355,244,99602,1,0,0:0:0:0:
415,281,99781,70,0,P|417:304|406:327,1,40,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
450,192,100139,2,0,P|430:196|414:208,1,40
355,244,100496,5,2,0:0:0:0:
324,207,100675,1,0,0:0:0:0:
312,160,100854,1,0,0:0:0:0:
322,113,101032,1,0,0:0:0:0:
376,55,101211,38,0,L|475:47,1,80
382,186,101926,2,0,P|341:183|311:159,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,252,102641,1,2,0:0:0:0:
295,150,102999,1,0,0:0:0:0:
129,187,103356,1,2,0:0:0:0:
289,138,103714,1,0,0:0:0:0:
69,59,104071,1,2,0:0:0:0:
282,127,104428,6,0,L|333:119,1,40
226,168,104786,5,6,0:0:0:0:
225,192,104965,1,0,0:0:0:0:
230,215,105143,1,0,0:0:0:0:
242,235,105322,1,0,0:0:0:0:
295,285,105501,6,0,P|322:284|347:265,1,40,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
273,213,105858,2,0,P|254:220|241:235,1,40
227,304,106216,69,2,0:0:0:0:
179,309,106395,1,0,0:0:0:0:
134,292,106573,1,0,0:0:0:0:
106,252,106752,1,0,0:0:0:0:
66,308,106931,54,0,P|49:345|61:395,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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260,304,108718,1,0,0:0:0:0:
116,260,109076,1,2,0:0:0:0:
228,376,109433,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,220,109791,1,2,0:0:0:0:
99,152,110148,21,0,0:0:0:0:
103,128,110327,1,0,0:0:0:0:
48,83,110506,5,6,0:0:0:0:
66,97,110684,1,0,0:0:0:0:
88,103,110863,1,0,0:0:0:0:
112,104,111042,1,0,0:0:0:0:
171,63,111221,70,0,P|190:57|217:59,1,40,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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202,129,111936,5,2,0:0:0:0:
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238,214,112293,1,0,0:0:0:0:
229,261,112472,1,0,0:0:0:0:
174,308,112651,38,0,P|138:290|74:300,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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Mafumafu

Beatmap Nominator

3,367 posts

Joined August 2013

Mafumafu 2016-07-01T15:43:55+00:00

As requested.
[Normal]
00:56:103 (1,1) - Not enough recovery time for this spinner
00:52:887 (4,5) - 00:54:674 (2,3) - 01:03:967 (1,2) - Blanket
01:17:553 (4,2) - This stack is too hard for Normal, considering replacing with other patterns.
01:22:984 (1,2) - No 1/4 taps for lower diff.
01:56:583 (1) - start 1/4 earlier

[Hard]
01:19:162 Unsnapped timing line
00:01:733 (4) - No reason for such multi-reverse
00:35:022 Add a note here
00:56:282 (1,1) - Not enough recovery time for the spinner
01:00:034 (4) - The reverse point plays awful. It sounds offbeat

[Light Insane]
00:11:743 (3,4) - This plays quite sudden. The piano sound here is even weaker than latter ones.

unsnapped timing lines:
01:01:099
01:19:162
01:46:391

01:07:542 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - The singletaps are too long for Light Insane.

[kiddly's Marchen]
00:21:774 You have to make the volume consistent.
01:46:391 Unsnapped timing lines.
Compare 00:06:023 (1,2,3,4) - with 00:07:453 (1,2,3,4) - , weaker sounds are applied larger distance. That's pretty weird.

Good luck!

polka

1,125 posts

Joined March 2014

polka 2016-07-01T16:18:08+00:00

Hi from my queue o/

mod

General:

kiai time starts earlier in hard and light insane modes than it does in normal.

No easy mode? It's such a slow song.

Normal:

00:09:598 (2) - Shift this up to y:260 for better flow.

00:11:028 (4) - Here too.

00:40:739 (2,3) - Due to its triangular formation, normal players may be confused about which comes first. Make the flow more apparent.

00:50:386 (2) - Shift this to x:340 for better flow.

00:52:887 (4,5) - Blanket these for some aesthetic points.

00:54:674 (2,3) - ^

00:56:103 (1) - This spinner may need to be a tad shorter to avoid that following slider appearing on top of it; something that can be confusing for normal players.

01:03:967 (1,2) - Blanketing need work.

01:18:625 (5,1,2,3,4) - VERY confusing for normal players. Make this pattern more readable for beginners.

01:22:984 (1,2) - Normal mode players won't know how to play this. Simplify this pattern.

Hard:

00:17:463 (2,3,4,5) - If you cheated and put a tad more space in between these, this pattern would look much better.

00:43:240 (1) - This shape isnt even and flat like all of your other ones. Fix it for the sake of consistency.

01:04:324 (2) - This slider tail lands on a beat in the song that should be clickable. Strongly consider you change this to up the quality of your map.

01:19:003 (4,5,6,7) - If you blanketed these with each other, that would look amazing.

01:20:457 (1,1) - Stationary pause might be confusing. Consider keeping the map moving and distance snap that.

Gust

516 posts

Joined December 2011

Topic Starter

Gust 2016-07-03T09:08:13+00:00

Regraz wrote:
As requested.
[Normal]
00:56:103 (1,1) - Not enough recovery time for this spinner fixed
00:52:887 (4,5) - 00:54:674 (2,3) - 01:03:967 (1,2) - Blanket fixed
01:17:553 (4,2) - This stack is too hard for Normal, considering replacing with other patterns. ok~
01:22:984 (1,2) - No 1/4 taps for lower diff. fixed
01:56:583 (1) - start 1/4 earlier ok~

[Hard]
01:19:162 Unsnapped timing line fixed
00:01:733 (4) - No reason for such multi-reverse I added a note after this slider
00:35:022 Add a note here I want to keep it
00:56:282 (1,1) - Not enough recovery time for the spinnerNot enough in hard?
01:00:034 (4) - The reverse point plays awful. It sounds offbeat mmm.. I think 01:00:034 (4) - here should be a 1 slider, But no more space to set a long slider, so I use a reverse slider. For better playing I lower the hitsound volume, I think it's ok~

[Light Insane]
00:11:743 (3,4) - This plays quite sudden. The piano sound here is even weaker than latter ones. fixed

unsnapped timing lines:
01:01:099
01:19:162
01:46:391
fixed

01:07:542 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - The singletaps are too long for Light Insane. This diff is main diff before, Now it's second diff, I set this diff name to followed RC. I think it's ok for second fidd

Good luck!

thanks a lot 瓜子大大

PolkaMocha wrote:
Hi from my queue o/
mod
General:

kiai time starts earlier in hard and light insane modes than it does in normal. I think normal's kiai time setting is more reasonable for parttern set

No easy mode? It's such a slow song. yea, normal diff is more like easy diff

Normal:

00:09:598 (2) - Shift this up to y:260 for better flow. I want to keep it. It's a straight set

00:11:028 (4) - Here too. ^

00:40:739 (2,3) - Due to its triangular formation, normal players may be confused about which comes first. Make the flow more apparent. I think it's ok~

00:50:386 (2) - Shift this to x:340 for better flow. also, It's a straight set

00:52:887 (4,5) - Blanket these for some aesthetic points. fixed

00:54:674 (2,3) - ^ fixed

00:56:103 (1) - This spinner may need to be a tad shorter to avoid that following slider appearing on top of it; something that can be confusing for normal players.
I replaced spinner for a note.

01:03:967 (1,2) - Blanketing need work. fixed

01:18:625 (5,1,2,3,4) - VERY confusing for normal players. Make this pattern more readable for beginners. fixed

01:22:984 (1,2) - Normal mode players won't know how to play this. Simplify this pattern. fixed

Hard:

00:17:463 (2,3,4,5) - If you cheated and put a tad more space in between these, this pattern would look much better. I think it's no problem~

00:43:240 (1) - This shape isnt even and flat like all of your other ones. Fix it for the sake of consistency.
I think it's ok~

01:04:324 (2) - This slider tail lands on a beat in the song that should be clickable. Strongly consider you change this to up the quality of your map.
I think it's ok~

01:19:003 (4,5,6,7) - If you blanketed these with each other, that would look amazing.
If i blanketed it, maybe it will broke the structure of 01:18:804 (3,4,5,6,7) - , so i want to keep it

01:20:457 (1,1) - Stationary pause might be confusing. Consider keeping the map moving and distance snap that.
I think it's no problem~

~~I almost forget this mod request~~
thanks a lot for modding!

kiddly

885 posts

Joined February 2009

kiddly 2016-07-04T04:03:22+00:00

Regraz wrote:
As requested.

[kiddly's Marchen]
00:21:774 You have to make the volume consistent. 50% is safety imo
01:46:391 Unsnapped timing lines. √
Compare 00:06:023 (1,2,3,4) - with 00:07:453 (1,2,3,4) - , weaker sounds are applied larger distance. That's pretty weird. √

Good luck!

Mafumafu

Beatmap Nominator

3,367 posts

Joined August 2013

Mafumafu 2016-07-05T12:08:50+00:00

[kiddly]
00:48:957 (2) - 这个折返并没有压到音，建议不要这样做。
00:56:818 (4) - 这个实在是overmap
01:01:822 (5) - NC
01:06:112 (1,2,3,4) - 01:08:972 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 整体间距过大建议缩小25%左右
01:17:553 (4,5,6,7) - 01:19:003 (1,2,3) - SV最好不要变化另外间距缩小一些
01:23:162 (7) - NC？
01:56:583 (3) - SV变了 NC

[Light Insane]
00:31:627 (3,4) - 没理由跳啊音很低
01:02:894 (4) - 尾巴去掉whistle
01:07:542 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这个还是得改一下，因为Hard甚至没有四个五个的单点这个太长了，最长不要超过8个。
01:50:327 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - 同上

[Hard]
00:56:282 (1,1) - 这个转盘后空的时间太短了并且接着的note距离屏幕中心很远最好空1/1
01:38:530 (5) - 这里没有钢琴，overmap需要删除
01:44:250 (5) - 同上

[Normal]
01:18:625 (5,2) - 别重叠
01:20:821 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 1/4滑条偶尔用一次可以这里太多了
01:44:786 (2,3) - 也不要连着用

改完了叫我吧

Last edited by Mafumafu 2016-07-08T16:35:11+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

kiddly

885 posts

Joined February 2009

kiddly 2016-07-08T10:14:44+00:00

Regraz wrote:
[kiddly]
00:48:957 (2) - 这个折返并没有压到音，建议不要这样做。 √
00:56:818 (4) - 这个实在是overmap √
01:01:822 (5) - NC √
01:06:112 (1,2,3,4) - 01:08:972 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 整体间距过大建议缩小25%左右 √
01:17:553 (4,5,6,7) - 01:19:003 (1,2,3) - SV最好不要变化另外间距缩小一些 √
01:23:162 (7) - NC？ √
01:56:583 (3) - SV变了 NC 变化并没那么大不会引起读图问题，并且这里NC很影响视觉效果，我希望保留

剩下的明后天继续

Gust

516 posts

Joined December 2011

Topic Starter

Gust 2016-07-09T01:58:39+00:00

Regraz wrote:
[Light Insane]
00:31:627 (3,4) - 没理由跳啊音很低嗯，这里和前面是左右对称的，而且有个小跳增加了读图困难会更好玩一些，希望保留
01:02:894 (4) - 尾巴去掉whistle fixed
01:07:542 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这个还是得改一下，因为Hard甚至没有四个五个的单点这个太长了，最长不要超过8个。嗯，把中间4个换成了2个slider
01:50:327 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - 同上最后两个换成了slider

[Hard]
00:56:282 (1,1) - 这个转盘后空的时间太短了并且接着的note距离屏幕中心很远最好空1/1 把转盘去了，后面补了2个note
01:38:530 (5) - 这里没有钢琴，overmap需要删除 ok~
01:44:250 (5) - 同上 ok~

[Normal]
01:18:625 (5,2) - 别重叠 fixed
01:20:821 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 1/4滑条偶尔用一次可以这里太多了 fixed
01:44:786 (2,3) - 也不要连着用 fixed

改完了叫我吧

再次感谢瓜子大大

Gust

516 posts

Joined December 2011

Topic Starter

Gust 2016-07-09T03:49:23+00:00

Thanks to IamKwaN for metadata confirm!

Artist/Title

Mafumafu

Beatmap Nominator

3,367 posts

Joined August 2013

Mafumafu 2016-07-09T04:53:00+00:00

Looks good to me!

Gust

516 posts

Joined December 2011

Topic Starter

Gust 2016-07-09T04:53:48+00:00

Regraz wrote:
Looks good to me!

thanks <333

Pata-Mon

1,489 posts

Joined March 2015

Pata-Mon 2016-07-09T05:01:01+00:00

扑通

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Sonnyc

7,753 posts

Joined June 2008

Sonnyc 2016-07-09T14:10:13+00:00

~General~

The kiai setting is inconsistent between your difficulties. Normal and kiddly's diff starts at 00:58:962 while other diffs start at 00:54:674. Starting at 00:58:962 feels much more natural personally.
01:56:225 - This has a 10% volume on your difficulties, and I think it is too low in volume. Consider increasing by a little.

~Normal~

00:44:312 (5) - I think a whistle will fit nicely here.
01:22:269 (4,1) - This is way too far to be placed in your easiest difficulty. I strongly recommend to place them closer.
01:56:404 (1,1) - The spinner recovery time is too short for your easiest difficulty. Removing the last three notes and ending the spinner at 02:00:087 will be more beginner friendly.

~Hard~

00:27:161 (2) - Consider using a same slider shape with 00:32:878 (2)? The shape doesn't feels nice.
01:12:190 (4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Consider making these spacings closer. They are currently the only objects with 1 follow point appearing in the kiai section, and it doesn't feels much natural for me.

~kiddly's Marchen~

01:59:551 (3,4) - Is it only me who thinks this jump is extremely large in this part of the music?

Popping over bold issues.

kiddly

885 posts

Joined February 2009

kiddly 2016-07-09T14:55:01+00:00

Sonnyc wrote:
~General~
~kiddly's Marchen~
01:59:551 (3,4) - Is it only me who thinks this jump is extremely large in this part of the music?
√

Gust

516 posts

Joined December 2011

Topic Starter

Gust 2016-07-09T15:02:18+00:00

Sonnyc wrote:
~General~
The kiai setting is inconsistent between your difficulties. Normal and kiddly's diff starts at 00:58:962 while other diffs start at 00:54:674. Starting at 00:58:962 feels much more natural personally. fixed~
01:56:225 - This has a 10% volume on your difficulties, and I think it is too low in volume. Consider increasing by a little.
yea~ Now I set it to 15%, keep the consistency to other piano hitsound~
~Normal~
00:44:312 (5) - I think a whistle will fit nicely here. fixed
01:22:269 (4,1) - This is way too far to be placed in your easiest difficulty. I strongly recommend to place them closer. fixed this ds problem now~
01:56:404 (1,1) - The spinner recovery time is too short for your easiest difficulty. Removing the last three notes and ending the spinner at 02:00:087 will be more beginner friendly. after consider, I decided to delete this spinner, It's no necessary
~Hard~
00:27:161 (2) - Consider using a same slider shape with 00:32:878 (2)? The shape doesn't feels nice. great!
01:12:190 (4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Consider making these spacings closer. They are currently the only objects with 1 follow point appearing in the kiai section, and it doesn't feels much natural for me. fixed~
Popping over bold issues.