1. Forever (5 stars, 559 notes)
2. Hard (4.45 stars, 383 notes)
3. Normal (3.12 stars, 108 notes)

1. Normal

1. Hard

1. Forever

啊哈哈哈哈 wrote:

二人だけの世界に連れてってよ 愛する人と二人きり

NatsumeRin wrote:

[砸小人]

NatsumeRin wrote:

需要爱护眼睛……放心会给你找个好伴娘的


[Hard]
00:46:150 (4) - 略显扭曲，建议微调，左右不够平的感觉。
根据lks的重心论，下面一根从左往右上来的重心应该偏右，所以00:46:782 (1) 1 grid right
02:03:203 (5,6) - 都反置过来呢。。？ ok
02:27:519 (3) - nazi了。这个位置问题，即使不能完美重叠这个差距也大了 手滑，fixd
02:44:571 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 宁可绕两圈 试了下打起来太难了，我不要做难图

[Forever]
我讨厌逼逼逼 我也说了，不过偶尔让任性一回也没什么不好
00:43:624 (2) - 建议拖远一点，现在怎么看都觉得1/2 被窝削分减掉一个note，没注意space。fixed
01:46:150 (1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3) - 试下这样的排法（及new combo）？ 这么明显的地方就别吐嘈了D:，new的时候心中有个声音告诉我要刻意避开12341234，排法会改
01:56:256 (1) - slider自定速度出了于是这里不考虑做渐快么。。。0.5/0.75/1/1.5，比如？ok，之前用1.5什么的怕被说
另外如无特殊用意接下来的break把kiai消掉 。。。用意没有，只是歌曲高潮在持续。。
02:13:624 (4,5,1) - 5还是排到大概中间位置给我感觉好些。。。手滑fix
02:16:466 (1) - 这里开始的4个123排对称扩散状，然后最后的12打在第一个123的1和第四个123的3上（如果太远的话在两者中间找对称），我不知道自己表没表达清楚。。很清楚，因为一开始就那样排的，后来撤了改这样

NatsumeRin wrote:

需要爱护眼睛……请做眼保健操

[Normal]
00:15:203 (4,1) - 微小的一个间距。。。
01:09:203 (1,2) - 感觉大概是这样的角度更好（也考虑到折返后的角度）

all fixed

[Forever]
我讨厌逼逼逼stress 我已经减掉了20S的纯逼逼逼

Mafiamaster wrote:

Imo, the map could use more finish sounds.

[Normal]
00:08:729 (1) - Finish at beginning?
00:18:203 (5) - Finish at end?
00:32:571 (3) - Add a whistle?
00:51:203 (1) - Add finish at the end?
00:56:887 (2) - Finish at start?
01:01:308 (1) - Finish at very end?
01:28:308 (1) - Finish at beginning?
01:37:782 (1) - Spinner is too short for the easiest difficulty.

[Hard]
00:28:940 (1) - Finish?
00:30:992 (1) - Remove finish?
00:31:624 (1) - Add finish at beginning?
01:12:045 (3) - Add finish at end?
01:13:308 (5) - ^
01:15:835 (1) - Remove finish and add a whistle?
01:28:308 (1) - Add finish at start?

[Forever]
00:08:413 (2) - Add finish at end as well
00:13:782 (1) - Add finish at beginning
00:23:887 (1) - ^
00:31:624 (2) - Add finish
01:01:308 (2) - Add finish at the very end.
01:06:992 (1) - Add finish at beginning
01:12:045 (1) - ^
02:03:835 (1) - Why is this a new combo? Remove?
02:39:045 (1) - 0.5x sliders like this that look like the previous 1x slider is unrankable.

Add 100pa- to the tags in [Hard] and [Forever]

Mafiamaster wrote:

我的泡沫

Mafiamaster wrote:

我的泡沫

1. Set tick rate 2. You MUST do this because of all the confusing slider speed changes. Tick 2 makes them slightly more readable. If you do not do this, you must remove all slider speed changes.

1. Rename this Normal.
2. 00:48:992 (1) - Oddly timed rebound
3. 01:17:729 (1) - Finish on the end
4. Map to the end.

1. 02:33:361 (2) - This slider track is completely covered by other hit objects, which is unrankable.
2. Map the outro, or otherwise remove the outro from Insane.

1. 00:19:150 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - Confusing clusterfuck
2. 00:23:887 (1,2,3,4) - The 1/4 rest is unreadable. Please move the stack off the slider end.
3. 00:26:887 (4,5) - Spacing. Move further apart.
4. 00:29:413 (1) - Don't silence this.
5. 00:30:992 (1) - ^
6. 00:40:466 (1) - This looks identical to your other etnas. Please use 0.7 speed so it looks distinct.
7. 00:55:466 (4,1) - Spacing. Move further apart.
8. 01:19:466 (5,6) - Unrankable. Looks like one continuous slider with a circle in the middle.
9. 01:20:729 (1,2,1) - Spacing. These shouldn't be spaced equally.
10. 01:52:466 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,2,1,2,1,1,2,1,2,1,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,1,1) - Please don't use Portal combos. They mess with HP drain calculations.
11. 02:16:782 (3,1) - Spacing. Move further apart.
12. 02:17:729 (3,1) - ^
13. 02:57:203 (1,2,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - See 01:52:466.

• Nothing to say, actually.

• .Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
  rename to "100pa-'s Hard"?
  Also, about 02:33:361 (2): guys come on don't tell me you can't see this. It's true that it is quite covered by other sliders but i could see it perfectly while playing (and i have poor eyesight). Also the actual slidertick rate prevents from breaking the combo here.

• .Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
  02:11:413 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - omg cruel
  Do not change Approach Circles speed. If you do that, many spacing changes will become highly unreadable. I think right now is "barely" both fun and readable.
  .Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
  02:57:203 (1,2,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - don't you think you abused new combos too much here? xD

MetalMario201 wrote:

All difficulties:

1. Set tick rate 2. You MUST do this because of all the confusing slider speed changes. Tick 2 makes them slightly more readable. If you do not do this, you must remove all slider speed changes.

Easy:

1. Rename this Normal.
2. 00:48:992 (1) - Oddly timed rebound
3. 01:17:729 (1) - Finish on the end
4. Map to the end.

Hard:

1. 02:33:361 (2) - This slider track is completely covered by other hit objects, which is unrankable.
2. Map the outro, or otherwise remove the outro from Insane.

Forever:

1. 00:19:150 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - Confusing clusterfuck
2. 00:23:887 (1,2,3,4) - The 1/4 rest is unreadable. Please move the stack off the slider end.
3. 00:26:887 (4,5) - Spacing. Move further apart.
4. 00:29:413 (1) - Don't silence this.
5. 00:30:992 (1) - ^
6. 00:40:466 (1) - This looks identical to your other etnas. Please use 0.7 speed so it looks distinct.
7. 00:55:466 (4,1) - Spacing. Move further apart.
8. 01:19:466 (5,6) - Unrankable. Looks like one continuous slider with a circle in the middle.
9. 01:20:729 (1,2,1) - Spacing. These shouldn't be spaced equally.
10. 01:52:466 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,2,1,2,1,1,2,1,2,1,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,1,1) - Please don't use Portal combos. They mess with HP drain calculations.
11. 02:16:782 (3,1) - Spacing. Move further apart.
12. 02:17:729 (3,1) - ^
13. 02:57:203 (1,2,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - See 01:52:466.

Mafiamaster wrote:

Ok, since it's been said, remove most of the new combos around 01:52:466 and at the end of the song on Insane.

Everything else is good.

Mafiamaster wrote:

我泡
我希望它不会弹出